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Breaching the Otherworld
Southern_Witch_69850 Reviews | 6.89/10 (850 Ratings, 0 Likes, 412 Favorites )
Dreams and a magical book draw Hermione to seek the help of Lucius Malfoy, who has a secret of his own: Severus Snape can be brought back from the Otherworld. Will she help?
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I adore the world of HP.
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Reviews for Breaching the Otherworld
I liked the news clippings, and definatly think Rita got what was due to her.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
i agree... that skag! LOL
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
i agree... that skag! LOL
This story is spellbinding. Lol I am eager to see Snape's resurrection, but I'm scared too! I think that when Ron finds out what she's done, it will be hard for him to accept it. But of course, he probably wants to leave her anyway.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
You'll have lots to read about with Ron. Don't worry. Snape coming back is a good thing. hahaha
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
You'll have lots to read about with Ron. Don't worry. Snape coming back is a good thing. hahaha
Oh Awesome! I loved it! I am taking Jake to see the Mummy tomorrow, we both love the movies!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
cool. :) I'm watching the first one right now. How was it??
Response from cocoachristy (Reviewer)
For the most part, I really liked it. The main complain is that the woman who played Evie and Brenden Frazier didn't really have any chemestry together. But other than that? Awesome!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
cool. :) I'm watching the first one right now. How was it??
Response from cocoachristy (Reviewer)
For the most part, I really liked it. The main complain is that the woman who played Evie and Brenden Frazier didn't really have any chemestry together. But other than that? Awesome!
Ha! That put a grin on my face. Very cleverly done, and I like the way all of the plot points are twisting. I'm even more interested to see how it looks in narrative form now that some time has passed, especially if there are problems in the Snape abode.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Thanks. :) I shall cover the things we've missed. ~grin~
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Thanks. :) I shall cover the things we've missed. ~grin~
As a former newspaper editor, I really enjoyed your take on all the news that fits. It was a great way to catch up the story and move it along while casting some really good plot lines that could be used in the story in the future. Great job, as always, and I appreciate it!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Oh, awesome. :) Thank you for letting me know. Bwahahaha. I had fun with it.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Oh, awesome. :) Thank you for letting me know. Bwahahaha. I had fun with it.
As a former newspaper editor, I really enjoyed your take on all the news that fits. It was a great way to catch up the story and move it along while casting some really good plot lines that could be used in the story in the future. Great job, as always, and I appreciate it!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Cool! Thank you so much. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Cool! Thank you so much. :)
Ron is doing a big bad thing...
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Yep, he certainly is. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Yep, he certainly is. :)
Your consistency with character personalities is awesome. I have never seen a fic where Lucius is single because Cissy has left him and I think it's a really neat way to bring Lucius from evil 2nd tier character to reformed first tier.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
I shall remain silent on the matter for now. I do hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
I shall remain silent on the matter for now. I do hope you continue to enjoy the story.
I loved that chapter, especially the pustules and Luna's little additions.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Teehee. Thanks!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Teehee. Thanks!
I like the way you have Hermione and lucius interacting with each other. She knows what she has to do and he wants to help his friend, but they clearly dislike each other.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Definitely. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Definitely. :)
See, and I just thought 69 was the year you were born. LOL.Nice articles!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
LOL Nope. That was a few years before me. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
LOL Nope. That was a few years before me. :)
Too cute. Thanks for the update and good for you giving Rita the boot.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Thanks! Rita needed a good kick to her arse. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Thanks! Rita needed a good kick to her arse. :)
Very clever, and amusing chapter! I had to stop myself from laughing aloud, since I am at work though! I am looking forward to the next one, and I am hoping that Weasley leaving his wife, won't cause trouble for the Snapes!Grace
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
LOL Thanks for reading! :) More about the Weasleys in the next
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
LOL Thanks for reading! :) More about the Weasleys in the next
lmao how enjoyable quite humerous and enlightening thnak you for another wonderful chapter and welll worth the wait love you ending comments by the way hugs and chocolate
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Thank you! :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Thank you! :)
I enjoyed reading the newspaper articles. They were very fun!And my grandmother was born on August 13th as well!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Cool! Such a good day then. hehe
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Cool! Such a good day then. hehe
I love the format the chapter was presented in - what a great way to move a story forward! I also appreciated the notes at the end. I had smirked at the Friday the 13th. I had always wondered about the '69' - so now we all know you are not a naughty wench - just a sentimental one. Excellent chapter - excellent story!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Bwahahaha! Thank you
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Bwahahaha! Thank you
I am so glad to see that Hermione has not lost her touch when it comes to hexing documents. Let's just hope those pustules last for years and years.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
I'm thinking they will. bwaahahhaa
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
I'm thinking they will. bwaahahhaa
I do enjoy reading newspaper snippets as a way to move the plot along. It is a clever way of doing it without it seeming rushed. Still am very curious as to how Severus and Hermione are working out their relationship and where it's going.Livvy
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Cool Thanks! I'll have more ss/hg stuff soon
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Cool Thanks! I'll have more ss/hg stuff soon
It's a very good idea to use newspapers to move the plot forward. I enjoyed this very much.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
thanks!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
thanks!
The newspaper articles are a great idea! I would not want to read a story entirely based on these, but as an intermediate chapter, it adds a nice touch! And I love the bit about Rita Skeeter being fired!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
She deserved it! She'll be back though. That biatch!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
She deserved it! She'll be back though. That biatch!
Thank you so much for the great update. I liked how the articles described the progress of your story, very cleverly done!!!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Glad you enjoyed it. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Glad you enjoyed it. :)
The "news" reports were quite varied and entertaining.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
~grin~ Thanks
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
~grin~ Thanks
This was a fun chapter. It worked really well in moving things along. I love how Rita published the letter anyway and crossed out his request not to. And LMAO @ Hermione's spell. I'm so glad to see Rita get fired in a story!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Thank you. Hermione's not lost her touch yet. hehe Bad little Rita. YOu'd think she'd stop while she's ahead.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Thank you. Hermione's not lost her touch yet. hehe Bad little Rita. YOu'd think she'd stop while she's ahead.
Oh, my, gods ! I totally loved this. I think the articles were hilarious! I do think that Rita is in a bit of trouble not hat I min d that too much! Silly beetle, gets into mischief! Priceless!Really good chapter! I was thrilled to see an update!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Cool, doll. Thanks for reading. :) Glad you liked
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
Are you kidding I LOVE this story!!!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Cool, doll. Thanks for reading. :) Glad you liked
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
Are you kidding I LOVE this story!!!
Loved all the articles! Very cute and funny. Glad Skeeter got what's coming to her, and that Lucius is pleasantly sedated. Eager to see what's been going on behind the scenes. Can't wait to find out more about Draco...and if the Dearborn woman (or the Death Eater father of her child) have anything at all to do with the rest of the story.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Dearborn will play a minor role in a couple of things, but nothing major. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Dearborn will play a minor role in a couple of things, but nothing major. :)