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Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge Destiny's Secret
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Destiny's Secret

1: Chapter One

2: Chapter Two

3: Chapter Three

4: Chapter Four

5: Chapter Five

6: Chapter Six

7: Chapter Seven

8: Chapter Eight

9: Chapter Nine

10: Chapter Ten

11: Chapter Eleven

12: Chapter Twelve

13: Chapter Thirteen

14: Chapter Fourteen

15: Chapter Fifteen

16: Chapter Sixteen

17: Chapter Seventeen

18: Epilogue

Destiny's Secret

Fervesco

379 Reviews   |   379 Ratings, 0 Likes, 57 Favorites )

Drama Romance General compliant post-DH/DH Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge 57,184 Words 18 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lily (Evans) Potter Severus Snape

COMPLETE! Hermione knows his secrets, his destiny unfulfilled. Snape sees only desolate dark. But in the tale of love and longing, Lily remembers everything.

All is not as it seems. The world of wizards is full of lies and half-truths.

Over twenty years ago, Severus Snape fell in love with Lily Evans, and he never stopped loving her. His every move, his every thought, is purely for her. And he has only one place, a room, hidden deep under the lake, where he can relax, not worry about whom he is spying on, what he should be saying and doing, where his loyalties lie. Somewhere he can reminisce about his childhood days there with Lily, to allow himself space to grieve.

That though, as with everything else, is about to change.

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Chapters (18)

Chapter 1: Chapter One

Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Chapter 6: Chapter Six

Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve

Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen

Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen

Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen

Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen

Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen

Chapter 18: Epilogue


About Fervesco

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Fervesco

Member Since 2005  |  16 Stories  |  Favorited by 507  |  29 Reviews Written  |  544 Review Responses

Hmmm..a bio huh? Oh, blimey, let's just sum this up: I'm a crazy mid-twenties review whore with a totally unhealthy obsession with Snape.

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10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

You know it's sad that Dumbledore still has to give that speech in Harry's time.  No body listens.  As for Petunia well she gets her's.  She has to live with that whale of a man when she gets married.  Thats what she gets for being such a git.

Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)

Ah yes, some things never change.  I feel a little sorry for Petunia (only a little!) but she was obviously a fairly petty person given her reaction to Lily going off to school.  Thank you so much for the review, it's much appreciated :D

10/10

livvy6

Yes, I am very interested in how the whole"twin" thing is going to play out.

Livvy 

Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)

I hope it plays out well... I was leary about putting her in at first (far too many Mary Sue twins out there!) but Rose has her purpose, let's hope she manages it.

9/10

beaweasley2

It's nice how you weave canon with the real feelings of an eleven year old girl. I look forward to your next installment.

Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)

Thank you!  I was hoping I'd managed to capture her effectively as an eleven year old. 

Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)

You have. definitely

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Very interesting.  Especially the whole twin thing.

Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)

It should get more interesting yet, I hope!  Thanks for the review :D

8/10

Moreteadk

Interesting start. Looks like Lily and Severus are off to a rocky start already what with the falling of branches and his need for reassurance that they can still be friends at school. He must have had some foreshadowing knowledge of how it was likely to be there.

I also like that Petunia isn't made out to be the unpleasant character she becomes in canon, although the signs of why did turn out like that as an adult are clearly visible in her jealousy of the magic and trying to make certain that if she can't have it nobody else can either.

Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)

Ah yes, I suspect a young Severus probably never had any real friends before Lily, and he's understandably desperate to keep her.  And poor Petunia, it would be hard as a 12 year old to see your sisters off to learn magic and being left behind.  Thanks for the review!

10/10

beaweasley2

This story looks really promising. I really enjoyed the beginning. Only, I don’t think Lily had a twin? Did she?

Regardless, I’m looking forward to seeing where you take this and how you are going to weave your tale.

Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)

No, I don't think Rowling ever said she had a twin...but then again, she never said she didn't LOLI'm glad your enjoying it so far, hopefully another chapter up in the next few days :D

10/10

andyourbirdcansing

I like it =)... don't know what more to say... =P

Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)

Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

0/10

MollysSister

Amazing story! No wonder you received a nom !! I am so glad I found it! thank you

0/10

MollysSister

You turned Snape into Ron?? OMG! I love the crazy way your mind works!

0/10

MollysSister

Holy  jumped up jupiter! I never would have guessed that Lily was Hermione. WOW!

0/10

MollysSister

Holy shit that pregancy conversation took a turn for the worse quickly!!!))))))))))runs off to next chapter

0/10

MollysSister

I cannot figure out why AD hid Lily all this time. Was it just spite? That doesnt seem reasonable. hurpmf. Okay I'll shut up and read the next chapter.

0/10

MollysSister

10 points to your house for Hermione NOT being a virgin! I always thought the shrieking shack would be a great make out spot. Glad it was so used.

0/10

MollysSister

I felt actual pain in my chest when I read the words "substiute Lily" I hope Snape doesnt give up on Hermione.

0/10

MollysSister

Lily is ALIVE? She has been shadowing Harry & Snape all this time? good heavens!

0/10

MollysSister

What fresh hell is this? You put Lily, Rose and James together all in one house? How could Lily tolerate it. I hope she had anti depressants on hand. Being drugged would be the only answer. I'm not sorry Rose is dead she didnt turn out to be a very nice person. I find myself upset about Lily though. ))))sniffle.

0/10

MollysSister

1. He cheated on her2. He got HER SISTER pregnant3. He lies about being set up Dump him Lily! Dont you dare forgive him!!!!

0/10

MollysSister

Well I knew it had to end with Lily since this is a HG/SS story. Still it makes me sad. Did anyone practice birth control??

0/10

MollysSister

He’s just some nutter with a God complex. Well if that isnt the funniest damn explanation of Voldy I have ever read!!!!

0/10

MollysSister

At last the tattoo makes a formal appearence. I was rather hoping Lily would do a bit of investigating of Severus' person as long as she was in the area. Bummer about Mr. Evans' bad timing. Young love is fraught with difficulties isnt it? Whatever will happen to Rose when she tries to get Lily in trouble? I hope its disfiguring.

0/10

MollysSister

I loath canon Lily. I think that if she and Severus were close friends then she damn well should have forgiven him for the mudblood comment. I am glad you have given them another chance. It would really be something if your Lily could keep Severus from taking the dark mark.

0/10

MollysSister

Whew! At least he is talking to her again. Now maybe we can find out what the silent treatment was about?

0/10

MollysSister

Way to go Rose hexing your older sister was exactly the perfect thing NOT to do! This is not going to help Petunia accept magic...I am glad Mrs. Snape was able to help.

0/10

MollysSister

That Rose Evans is a trouble maker! I am trying to figure out if she will marry James or will it still be Lily? You have thrown a new character in and thrown me off!! Well done

0/10

MollysSister

Congrats on your nom at the sshg_awards!! I cannot beleive I didnt read they when you first posted. I am working on correcting that mistake now.

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