Destiny's Secret
Fervesco379 Reviews | 6.73/10 (379 Ratings, 0 Likes, 57 Favorites )
COMPLETE! Hermione knows his secrets, his destiny unfulfilled. Snape sees only desolate dark. But in the tale of love and longing, Lily remembers everything.
All is not as it seems. The world of wizards is full of lies and half-truths.
Over twenty years ago, Severus Snape fell in love with Lily Evans, and he never stopped loving her. His every move, his every thought, is purely for her. And he has only one place, a room, hidden deep under the lake, where he can relax, not worry about whom he is spying on, what he should be saying and doing, where his loyalties lie. Somewhere he can reminisce about his childhood days there with Lily, to allow himself space to grieve.
That though, as with everything else, is about to change.
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Fervesco
Member Since 2005 | 16 Stories | Favorited by 506 | 29 Reviews Written | 544 Review Responses
Hmmm..a bio huh? Oh, blimey, let's just sum this up: I'm a crazy mid-twenties review whore with a totally unhealthy obsession with Snape.
Reviews for Destiny's Secret
A bluebell flame? What interesting parallels lie in store? I suppose I'll have to bite my nails and wait!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Parallels...hmmm...I wonder ;) Thanks!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Parallels...hmmm...I wonder ;) Thanks!
That hex still freaks me out. But your story certainly does not!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Oh yes, that hex - I'd certainly not want to be on the end of one of Rose's tantrums! Thank you :)
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Oh yes, that hex - I'd certainly not want to be on the end of one of Rose's tantrums! Thank you :)
Yay! I'm lost in a good... web page? Haha, seriously, this is wonderful.
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Hee hee! Thank you :D
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Hee hee! Thank you :D
Interested to see where you are taking this! Great work!
And I loved your disclaimer :)
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
What a lovely surprise to find you'd reviewed every chapter, thank you so much! Gotta have a little fun with the disclaimer ;)
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
What a lovely surprise to find you'd reviewed every chapter, thank you so much! Gotta have a little fun with the disclaimer ;)
oh my goodness. this is going to get interesting, FAST! more please!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Thank you! I'm working on it as quick as I can, just doing a little re-writing of the next chapter, it should be up by the end of the weekend :D
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Thank you! I'm working on it as quick as I can, just doing a little re-writing of the next chapter, it should be up by the end of the weekend :D
Lilly is still alive!!!!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Yep! Thank you :)
No way! *is stunned* Lily knows something and is hiding!
That was an all-time low for Sev.
I liked the way Snape described it as watching someone splinching themselves.
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
LOL thanks for the comment about the 'splinching' - it took me a while to come up with something wizarding comparative to a trainwreak!I'm glad Lily being alive came as a surprise!Thank you so much for the review :)
Response from WriterMerrin (Reviewer)
Actually, I thought she might be alive, but I was surprised she was at Hogwarts.
Err... I hate to be right. Lily alive... oh man.Is this a threesome in the making? Brrr, I haven't decided if I can handle that.
What the... huh? Where is this going?!?Girl, you're a genius or I'm a moron, because I have absolutely no idea how you can make this work for Hermione.Okay, so Lily's been hiding in the shadows for 16-something years? Why?Update soon! I'm completely addicted in spite of the fact that the whole thing puts a sour taste in my mouth (but that might be the chain-smoking too) 
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Well done, you were right, Lily is alive :)As for a threesome...well...no, it's not that.What's Lily been doing for sixteen years? You'll have to wait and see ;) Thank you so much for the reviews, and bear with me, it will all sort itself out :D
OMG! This story is AMAZING!! I can't wait to read more!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Thank you so much, what a wonderful review! Got a nice big grin on my face now :D
Lily's alive? What did I miss?
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Ah, explaination to that to come, for now, yes, Lily is alive :D
I love this chapter! But, oh man, it's gonna get messy, I think.I have a feeling that there will be more angst to come.Yay!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
LOL, yes, there will be more angst! And messy...well, possibly ;) Thanks for the review!
wow this was someting. but is Lily alive in your story? the ending part confuesed me... I must have missed something?
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Yes, Lily is alive, she's spying on Severus at the end. Sorry if it confused you! Thanks so much for the review.
Man, this just gets better and better!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Thank you!
Hey, Hermione.......wow, sir. 
You snog like Willy the wizarding wildman. Corrr!
He's MY pumpkin fizz-box lover, little girl. NEVER forget it! Muhahahahahaa!'Oh, what a tangled web we weave when first we Nano to deceive.'
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Wartcap, you are one strange lady!Thank you :)
Response from wartcap (Reviewer)
I get that a lot. *Sigh*
I so freaking knew it. The end of the last chapter was a very nice hint. This whole thing, though, it makes my stomach twisty. I mean, how can Herms have Sev if Lily's still there? Still really there?
*sighs*
Well, I'm glad you have this whole mess figured out, because I certainly wouldn't know how to fix things.
Carry on, then.
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Well done, you figured it out :) And yes, it is messy and confusing and I think I've drunk enough coffee to keep the entire world awake for a year or two figuring out the plot, but it's all there and it will all work out.Buckle up, sit back and enjoy the ride.And keep leaving these lovely reviews, they're fantastic!
Oh. My. God.
WOW.
Dude, what a flippin' twist! Like seriously, omg. (Wow, that just gave away that I am from California, didn't it?)
That was positively AMAZING! Poor Severus, feeling pulled between Lily and Hermione, but Lily is ALIVE! Wow. WOW.
Gah... I am dying for this to continue!!!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
:DI am so glad that caught you off guard, dude!Thank you so much for such an ethusiastic review, much appreciated :)
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
:DI am so glad that caught you off guard, dude!Thank you so much for such an ethusiastic review, much appreciated :)
Very interesting. I like the explanation of why he joined Voldemort. Very believable! Lily spying on Severus? hmm.... Can't wait for more!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Thank you! And I'm so glad you liked the explaination of why he joined Voldemort, I thought it fitted with his character.
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Thank you! And I'm so glad you liked the explaination of why he joined Voldemort, I thought it fitted with his character.
Meep! You have come up with some of the most frightening twists. I'm unsure how James thought he could convince Lily her sister's child was hers, but I guess with memory charms, anything is possible.
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Memory charms is would be my guess! Thank you so much for the review :D
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Memory charms is would be my guess! Thank you so much for the review :D
Oh, I just want to cry. It's one thing to know that it cannot be between them, but to witness their finally coming together knowing what's beneath that bandage was heartbreakingly beautiful. Lily's reaction was the only one she could have, but it's still so horribly sad.
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
'heartbreakingly beautiful' Wow! Thank you!!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
'heartbreakingly beautiful' Wow! Thank you!!
Wow. This is definitely one of the best Snape/Lily fics I've read. (Frankly, I don't enjoy the pairing so much... sometimes it gets a bit sugary.) But I love this fic! And I ADORE the angst.
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Wow, thank you! I must admit, before writing this, I'd never even read a Snape/Lily fic.
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Wow, thank you! I must admit, before writing this, I'd never even read a Snape/Lily fic.
So both Rose and James are (were) scum bags. Bad boy Severus is definitely the better man.
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Snape's got to be the better man some time, I felt like he needed it :D Thank you!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Snape's got to be the better man some time, I felt like he needed it :D Thank you!
Hmm. Very interesting. I have to say, I really hate James Potter in this fic. Good job. Can't wait for more!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
I think I might start a 'We Hate James Potter' group - everyone seems really angry at him, and understandably so! I'm so glad you're enjoying it, and thank you for all the reviews :D
Response from cocoachristy (Reviewer)
Oh, and one quick question! ;-) I've been telling people when I recommend this that it will be an HG/SS... Er... I don't truly think Lily is dead, so... I don't want to be misleading in my recommendations. With Lily still being alive, even if there is SOME HG/SS, SS and LE will end together I think...?
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
That is a terribly hard question to answer without giving it all away - if you really want to know and don't mind me ruining the plot for you, let me know and I'll contact you in private. Otherwise, all I can say is it is HG/SS and I don't think anyone would hunt you down over the ending.
Response from cocoachristy (Reviewer)
Okay, I was just making sure, because I have been saying in my recommedations that this would be SS/HG... And I don't want to be telling something that is not so! Ya know?
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
LOL I do know! And thanks so much for the recs, I really appreciate them hun!
Response from cocoachristy (Reviewer)
Oh, No problem recommending. I never mind recommending something I really like, and so far I have really enjoyed this fic!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
I think I might start a 'We Hate James Potter' group - everyone seems really angry at him, and understandably so! I'm so glad you're enjoying it, and thank you for all the reviews :D
Response from cocoachristy (Reviewer)
Oh, and one quick question! ;-) I've been telling people when I recommend this that it will be an HG/SS... Er... I don't truly think Lily is dead, so... I don't want to be misleading in my recommendations. With Lily still being alive, even if there is SOME HG/SS, SS and LE will end together I think...?
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
That is a terribly hard question to answer without giving it all away - if you really want to know and don't mind me ruining the plot for you, let me know and I'll contact you in private. Otherwise, all I can say is it is HG/SS and I don't think anyone would hunt you down over the ending.
Response from cocoachristy (Reviewer)
Okay, I was just making sure, because I have been saying in my recommedations that this would be SS/HG... And I don't want to be telling something that is not so! Ya know?
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
LOL I do know! And thanks so much for the recs, I really appreciate them hun!
Response from cocoachristy (Reviewer)
Oh, No problem recommending. I never mind recommending something I really like, and so far I have really enjoyed this fic!
I have a feeling Lily isn't dead... Rose's sacrifice protected her, didn't it? Oh you clever thing, now I understand the need for twins in your story. So, this is going to be snily forever now. I don't know how I feel about that, your listing HG in characters was a bit misleading! Still, I am in awe of your talent at creating such a believable way for Lily and Snape to be together, if that is indeed where this is leading ;-)I'm a die-hard fan of HG/SS so this might be goodbye. But I really liked your story, it's the angst I like about Lily, but in truth I'm not crazy about the pairing.The suspense in your story was perfect. I bit my nails, gasped and nearly had a heart attack when I learned Rose was with James. You get a 5!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Now those are some very interesting thoughts! I'm not dismissing anything yet, I don't want to give away what happens - but I will say, there will be some HG/SS, so don't leave me just yet!Thank you so much for the lovely comments, they've put a big grin on my face :D
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Now those are some very interesting thoughts! I'm not dismissing anything yet, I don't want to give away what happens - but I will say, there will be some HG/SS, so don't leave me just yet!Thank you so much for the lovely comments, they've put a big grin on my face :D
Oh brilliant! I can't wait to see how you have Dumbledore explain Rose!
Great job!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Oh yes...dear Dumbledore...and that missing 24 hours between Godric's Hollow being destroyed and Harry arriving on the Dursely's doorstep... ;) Thank you!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Oh yes...dear Dumbledore...and that missing 24 hours between Godric's Hollow being destroyed and Harry arriving on the Dursely's doorstep... ;) Thank you!
Fascinating -- I can't wait to see what's up next! I really hate James Potter in this fic, but I have to say -- it's believable from him, given how he treated Snape.
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Hating James Potter seems to be a real theme of the reviews I'm getting! I'm quite glad, actually, that it's stirred up so much emotion in everyone! Thank you so much for the review, it's much appreciated :)
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Hating James Potter seems to be a real theme of the reviews I'm getting! I'm quite glad, actually, that it's stirred up so much emotion in everyone! Thank you so much for the review, it's much appreciated :)