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Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge Destiny's Secret
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Destiny's Secret

1: Chapter One

2: Chapter Two

3: Chapter Three

4: Chapter Four

5: Chapter Five

6: Chapter Six

7: Chapter Seven

8: Chapter Eight

9: Chapter Nine

10: Chapter Ten

11: Chapter Eleven

12: Chapter Twelve

13: Chapter Thirteen

14: Chapter Fourteen

15: Chapter Fifteen

16: Chapter Sixteen

17: Chapter Seventeen

18: Epilogue

Destiny's Secret

Fervesco

379 Reviews   |   379 Ratings, 0 Likes, 57 Favorites )

Drama Romance General compliant post-DH/DH Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge 57,184 Words 18 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lily (Evans) Potter Severus Snape

COMPLETE! Hermione knows his secrets, his destiny unfulfilled. Snape sees only desolate dark. But in the tale of love and longing, Lily remembers everything.

All is not as it seems. The world of wizards is full of lies and half-truths.

Over twenty years ago, Severus Snape fell in love with Lily Evans, and he never stopped loving her. His every move, his every thought, is purely for her. And he has only one place, a room, hidden deep under the lake, where he can relax, not worry about whom he is spying on, what he should be saying and doing, where his loyalties lie. Somewhere he can reminisce about his childhood days there with Lily, to allow himself space to grieve.

That though, as with everything else, is about to change.

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Chapters (18)

Chapter 1: Chapter One

Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Chapter 6: Chapter Six

Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve

Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen

Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen

Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen

Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen

Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen

Chapter 18: Epilogue


About Fervesco

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Fervesco

Member Since 2005  |  16 Stories  |  Favorited by 507  |  29 Reviews Written  |  544 Review Responses

Hmmm..a bio huh? Oh, blimey, let's just sum this up: I'm a crazy mid-twenties review whore with a totally unhealthy obsession with Snape.

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katielady08

I really enjoyed the twist of Sev and Lily with Ron and Hermione.  Well done and very creative!

10/10

Morsmordre

The thought crossed my mind too about the 'Weasley-Granger' baby oming out in black robes scowling at Grandma Molly! 2nd I have to agree with one reviewer who now understands how 'Hermione' could put up with Won-won for nineteen years! Here's to fixing Sh*%ty epilogues and chucking major characters!

10/10

Morsmordre

Wait, how did Lily/Hermione leave a long red hair in the cave a few chapters ago? Albus used dark magic to make Lily inhabit Hermione's body, she isn't polyjuiced.

10/10

Morsmordre

Um, I peeked into the next chapter and while of course Snape would be totally overwhelmed at the treachery Lily and Dumbledore pulled (honestly I almost think I'd rather work for Voldy except he's just a reptilian Hitler with a wand) Snape doesn't seem really troubled that Hermione never existed and that his love for HER was non-existent as well.

10/10

Morsmordre

Nooooooooooooo! you are evil!!!

This is exceptional but I am NOT a, pardon the expression-no pun intended, happy camper! I think I'm getting dizzy. That was a whopper of a twist. Ok I'm going back to watch the rest of the cars derail now. ;)

10/10

Morsmordre

Ohhhh, Lily is such a B*%ch!!!!!!! Its HER!!

10/10

Morsmordre

Heh. THATS one hell of a thing to get into after sex! Wooo! "Oh yea, btw, I'm going to chuck Dumbledore off the astronomy tower." heheee

Response from Morsmordre (Reviewer)

Oh ye, I forgot to say thank you for being the first author (that I have read) who had Severus actually tell his womn what he is going to do. Wtfg!(I think Lily has been stealing Snape's key, because Hermione doesn't leave anything that important just lying around.)

10/10

deniedangel

Superb and refreashing to finally see a new twist!

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Prof M McGonagall

Well, that was certainly the most non-SSHG SSHG story I've ever read.  My mind is reeling with the shock of a SSHG story that's also HGRW and SSLE all within the same pairing.  Really, a completely unexpected twist!  Thanks for sharing this.  Congratulations on your SSHG Award nomination!

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DaContaminator

And to add, I'm not really sure she really qualifies as a major character anymore.

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DaContaminator

um... to be honest, i can't say i agree with the MAJOR plot 'switch'. I sincerly and deeply loved everything up to that point, but afterward... I'm sorry I don't feel the same :-( Just too much of a hole left behind.                                                                                

0/10

magritte

That was incredibly weird and awesomely original. The end of the teenage Severus/Lily romance was heartbreaking. Now I want to go back and read it again, looking for clues to all the twists!

10/10

sbrande

Fantastic take on DH. Well done! Loved every second of it and your writing style is to die for. So easy to consume chapter after chapter.Cheers, Sonia :)

0/10

Angel Prince

OMG! I'm speechless!That was ruddy brilliant!

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snuggleslut

that is the wierdest most twisted harry potter fanfiction that still fit the epilogue at the end of DH, i liked it. at first i was like lily has a twin... wtf, harry isn't lily's son... wtf. lily's still alive... wtf. lily's really hermione... wtf, severus turns into ron... oh well now it all makes sense... sort of.

0/10

phoenix

Rose is every bit as obnoxious as James and Sirius, isn't she? Poor Petunia. That would really make you hate magical folk.

Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)

Tee hee!  No, Rose wouldn't have helped Petunia's opnion!  Thanks!

0/10

phoenix

Poor, Lily. I really can see her feeling a lot out of place. I always got the impression that she and Petunia had been close before heading to Hogwarts.

Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)

Thank you!  I must admit I even felt a little sorry for Petunia, being left behind while her sister is off at Hogwarts must have been hard.

0/10

phoenix

Interesting start. I do like how Lily wanted Petunia to be included and I look forward to seeing what happens to her twin Rose.

Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)

Thank you!  I'm glad you're enjoying it so far :)

10/10

Evangeline Potter

Such an amazing story!  I cried, then laughed, then cried some more!  Very original, and one of the best I've ever read! 

Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)

I'm so happy you enjoyed it and it brought out all those emotions!  Thank you!

10/10

Evangeline Potter

Amazing twist!=)

Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)

Thanks!!

9/10

Shadow

I love you epilouge! Especially the final line:  Her heart had not pained Lily for nineteen years. All was well. A funny take on the last line of DH.

Thank you for an amazing story.

Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)

Awww, thanks!  Credit for that final line though must go to my beta - she is wonderful! 

9/10

Shadow

What a fantastic twist. This would be the only way I could picture Ron and Hermione together. I am glad Severus gets a do over again, and a loving family to surround him. And this way the Weasleys dont lose another son.

Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)

I thought it was a nice ending, something he well deserved!  Thank you :)

10/10

wartcap

300 reviews!Yeah, baby!

Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)

8/10

Anonymous

Fascinated by Lily's continued survival. Poor her!

10/10

Anonymous

Oooh. So many great things in this chapter!

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