Destiny's Secret
Fervesco379 Reviews | 6.73/10 (379 Ratings, 0 Likes, 57 Favorites )
COMPLETE! Hermione knows his secrets, his destiny unfulfilled. Snape sees only desolate dark. But in the tale of love and longing, Lily remembers everything.
All is not as it seems. The world of wizards is full of lies and half-truths.
Over twenty years ago, Severus Snape fell in love with Lily Evans, and he never stopped loving her. His every move, his every thought, is purely for her. And he has only one place, a room, hidden deep under the lake, where he can relax, not worry about whom he is spying on, what he should be saying and doing, where his loyalties lie. Somewhere he can reminisce about his childhood days there with Lily, to allow himself space to grieve.
That though, as with everything else, is about to change.
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Fervesco
Member Since 2005 | 16 Stories | Favorited by 506 | 29 Reviews Written | 544 Review Responses
Hmmm..a bio huh? Oh, blimey, let's just sum this up: I'm a crazy mid-twenties review whore with a totally unhealthy obsession with Snape.
Reviews for Destiny's Secret
Anonymous
Nice spin on canon!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Anonymous
*sigh* So sad, but it seems that Sev was always a little bit on the good side, which is a comfort.
Author's Response: I think he was always a little bit good, just a little confused and not always making the best of choices.
Anonymous
Very hot. Very sad too. A little like that Buffy/Angel moment!
Author's Response: I've never watched Buffy/Angel, but it sounds like you enjoyed it so that's all good :D
Anonymous
This Mrs. Snape is certainly interesting and different from canon (at least what I remember of canon! LOL). Great character progression with Snape in this story.
Anonymous
Oh, heart-wrenching. Poor Sev. Poor Lily!
Author's Response: They do get a hard time. Thanks!
Anonymous
That Rose is such a b**ch! And that was so hot, and then so tragic when it had to be broken off and you just know things aren't going to change. *sob* Great story!
Author's Response: I'm so glad it brought such a great reaction! Thank you!
Anonymous
Nice chapter. I'm a little curious to find out about the pacing of the story, as we're still in Sev's first year, right? I'm about to find out, though!
Author's Response: Yes, this was still in Sev's first year. Thank you!
Anonymous
Great first kiss, and a great portrayal of young Sev!
Author's Response: Thanks!
wow what a ride and what a creative way to make it dh compatable! thanks so much
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Thank you, I'm so happy you enjoyed it :D
Thank you! Thank you! For the clever story. I almost cried all over again when you worked in the scene where Severus died. Then when you did the ol' switcheroo with him and Ron... I wasn't expecting that! Now...what would have happened if one of the children were born with dark eyes, straight black hair and a prominent nose? 
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Oh dear, that would take some explaining, wouldn't it!Thank you for the wonderful review :D I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!
Anonymous
Oooh. Rose in Slytherin. She seems an interesting character...
Author's Response: I was a little doubtful Rose would work at first, but then I really started to like writing her, and she came into her own. Thanks!
Oh oh.....wicked.....but I am still not shure I like Snape looking like Ron..*grin*But I would have loved to see Mrs Weasleys face when Snape looking like Ron did more than just good in his exams. I like the storie with all its twists, also I have to admit I normally dislike Lilly, this storie just fascinated me. Thank you very much for this storie.(sorry for spelling and grammar errors but I`m no native english reader or writer)
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Don't apologise for the spelling and grammar errors - I'm totally in awe of anyone who can speak more than one language, I've tried learning several others and just can't get my head around them! Thanks so much for the review, I'm really glad you enjoyed the story!
How the heck do I keep missing updates??Interesting twist.Now, in a twisted sort of way, Severus and Lily can actually start over. They are both 16 again and have their whole lives ahead of them. Very original and well written! Off to the epilogue now!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
I never actually thought of it like that - that Lily and Severus are now sort of 18 again :) Thanks very much for all the wonderful reviews, I've really enjoyed them :D
Bravo! ~Claps and whistles~ Well done, well written and a great plot.
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Thank you :D
Hehehe... what a wonderful ending, and a brilliant story. It is obvious you spent a lot of time working out the small details. Well done!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Thank you so much!
I will pretend that is what actually happened in DH. It makes me feel much better about the ending. :) Amazing story...it kept me captivated the entire time. I'm just sorry it's finished!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
I'm going to pretend that too :) Thank you so much for all your reviews, I really appreciate them!
Anonymous
Interesting addition to the cast there! I'm eager to see how that will play out. This sounds like a great prompt, too!
Author's Response: Rose was a lot of fun to play with :D Thank you!
Interesting chapter - creative thinking have Severus become Ron and Lily become Hermione - I have never read it this way before so this is a original concept. Cannot wait to see what happens next.
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
Thank you so much :D I'm really glad I've created something original.
Wow - I have to admit that you lost me for awhile in the middle but the ending more than made up for it. Over all, a great story! I now need to find out about the voting and I eagerly look forward to finding out who you are! Good luck!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
I'm glad it drew you back in :) I'm not sure about voting - I think SW is going to announce the details soon. As to who I am.... ;)
Nice ending. I like that Sverus/Ron still kept his snarkyness. I've enjoyed this story very much.
Response from Fervesco (Author of Destiny's Secret)
I'm so glad you've enjoyed it too :) Thank you!