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The Plight-Trothed Bride

1: The Moon-Song Rhythm

2: Burgeoning Consequence

3: Persistent Enchantment

4: Now and Forever

5: Rough Beginnings

6: Relentless Persistence

7: Troublesome Misconceptions

8: Troubles and Traitors

9: Prisoner of Azkaban

10: The Ministry of Magic

11: The Second Visit

12: Announcements and Tidings

13: Question of Freedom

14: Troubled Decisions

15: Mistaken Intent

16: Friendly Intervention

17: The First Date

18: The Big Birthday Adventure

19: Duncansby Head

20: Squabbles and Shopping

21: Regulations and Requests

22: Return to Spinner’s End

23: Good Intents and Interventions

24: Tea, Books, and Answers

25: Her Knight Errant

26: Burgeoning Intimacies

27: The Snakes in the Grass

28: House of Rose and Thorns

29: Unwillingly Trapped

30: Facing Friends

31: On Heather Moor

32: Revived and Wedded

33: First Days

34: Enlightening Visitations

35: The Headmaster Returns

36: The Prince Family Tree

37: The Osgood Family Secret

38: Into the Flames

39: Interrogation and Inquiries

40: Trying Romantic On

41: Trying Assertive Romance

42: A Magical Pact

43: Potions and Consequences

44: Breaking the Curse

45: Phoenix Tears

46: Nesting Invasions

47: The End of Term

48: Débuted and Eluded

49: Christmas Eve

50: Intervention and Surprises

51: Christmas Surprises

52: Malfoys Christmas Ball

53: Boxing Day

54: A Magical New Year’s

55: Assaults and Misunderstandings

56: Comeuppance and Surprises

57: Achievements and Failures

58: The Colubridae Snake

59: Jealousy and Flowers

60: Validation and Rediscovery/Congratulations

61: Preparations and Projects

62: The Great Retrieval Quest

63: School Is Over

The Plight-Trothed Bride

beaweasley2

1,194 Reviews   |   1,194 Ratings, 0 Likes, 339 Favorites )

Romance General Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge 470,308 Words 71 Chapters Complete
Ginevra Weasley Hermione Granger Luna Lovegood Lucius Malfoy Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Harry Potter Original Character Rita Skeeter Neville Longbottom Kingsley Shacklebolt Kreacher Angelina Johnson Arthur Weasley Bill Weasley Fleur Delacour George Weasley Molly Weasley Percy Weasley Remus Lupin Teddy Remus Lupin Minerva McGonagall Narcissa Malfoy Draco Malfoy Travers (Death Eater) Augusta (Gran) Longbottom Albus Dumbledore Charlie Weasley Poppy Pomfrey Astoria Greengrass Dean Thomas Antonin Dolohov Mulciber (Death Eater) Mr. Ollivander Cho Chang Filius Flitwick Rubeus Hagrid

Hermione, Ginny and Luna, sharing a girl moment, decide to cast a Pairing-Plight Troth Charm on themselves for fun. Each placed in the cauldron one yesterday-today-and-tomorrow flower with sugar and spice and everything nice, and a snip, a snail and puppy-dog tail as they each said the rhyme. For Ginny, the results are exactly what she expected, and for Luna, she was only mildly surprised. However, for Hermione, the results were disastrous! She thought she’d be paired to Ron and live happily ever after. So what happened and why is she seeing Professor Snape in her dreams? He’s dead – isn’t he?

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Chapters (63)

Chapter 1: The Moon-Song Rhythm

Chapter 2: Burgeoning Consequence

Chapter 3: Persistent Enchantment

Chapter 4: Now and Forever

Chapter 5: Rough Beginnings

Chapter 6: Relentless Persistence

Chapter 7: Troublesome Misconceptions

Chapter 8: Troubles and Traitors

Chapter 9: Prisoner of Azkaban

Chapter 10: The Ministry of Magic

Chapter 11: The Second Visit

Chapter 12: Announcements and Tidings

Chapter 13: Question of Freedom

Chapter 14: Troubled Decisions

Chapter 15: Mistaken Intent

Chapter 16: Friendly Intervention

Chapter 17: The First Date

Chapter 18: The Big Birthday Adventure

Chapter 19: Duncansby Head

Chapter 20: Squabbles and Shopping

Chapter 21: Regulations and Requests

Chapter 22: Return to Spinner’s End

Chapter 23: Good Intents and Interventions

Chapter 24: Tea, Books, and Answers

Chapter 25: Her Knight Errant

Chapter 26: Burgeoning Intimacies

Chapter 27: The Snakes in the Grass

Chapter 28: House of Rose and Thorns

Chapter 29: Unwillingly Trapped

Chapter 30: Facing Friends

Chapter 31: On Heather Moor

Chapter 32: Revived and Wedded

Chapter 33: First Days

Chapter 34: Enlightening Visitations

Chapter 35: The Headmaster Returns

Chapter 36: The Prince Family Tree

Chapter 37: The Osgood Family Secret

Chapter 38: Into the Flames

Chapter 39: Interrogation and Inquiries

Chapter 40: Trying Romantic On

Chapter 41: Trying Assertive Romance

Chapter 42: A Magical Pact

Chapter 43: Potions and Consequences

Chapter 44: Breaking the Curse

Chapter 45: Phoenix Tears

Chapter 46: Nesting Invasions

Chapter 47: The End of Term

Chapter 48: Débuted and Eluded

Chapter 49: Christmas Eve

Chapter 50: Intervention and Surprises

Chapter 51: Christmas Surprises

Chapter 52: Malfoys Christmas Ball

Chapter 53: Boxing Day

Chapter 54: A Magical New Year’s

Chapter 55: Assaults and Misunderstandings

Chapter 56: Comeuppance and Surprises

Chapter 57: Achievements and Failures

Chapter 58: The Colubridae Snake

Chapter 59: Jealousy and Flowers

Chapter 60: Validation and Rediscovery/Congratulations

Chapter 61: Preparations and Projects

Chapter 62: The Great Retrieval Quest

Chapter 63: School Is Over


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beaweasley2

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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company. 

“Imagination does not become great until human beings, given the courage and the strength, use it to create.”― Maria Montessori
 “Our imagination flies -- we are its shadow on the earth.”― Vladimir Nabokov 
“Imagination is everything. It is the preview of life's coming attractions.”― Albert Einstein

“Imagination will often carry us to worlds that never were, but without it we go nowhere.” ― Carl Sagan

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9/10

phoenix

Well, Lucius is being surprisingly candid and open-minded. Of course he would be in the know about Severus' parentage, but very big of him to not be a biggot. And poor Hermione. Listen to everyone's advice and find a way to get Severus to have a real conversation.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Of course he knows Severus' parentage, but he knows about the Prince family as well. Severus has some good families in his family tree, after all.  Yes, she does need to sit down and talk to him - but until he's ready to do some talking, it may take a bit to get them there. Thank you for reading and for the review.

9/10

phoenix

Poor Hermione and the emptiness. Of course both of them are filled with confusion and doubt. What they really need to is to have an actual conversation. Decisions like this cannot be made in a vaccum. 

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

You are absolutely right. Thank you for reading and for the review.

9/10

phoenix

Closer and closer. Everyone other than Ron seems to be willing to try to accept Hermione and Severus - of course I can understand Ron being bitter, but come on, man, you can't be that thick to see that you and Hermione are not a good couple.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

It took JKR years to finally see it woudn't work between them, although in her latest she has them still married. Really you'd think he'd move one, but he knew he had it good and it was yanked out right under his feet. poor sod.  Thank you for reading and for the review.

9/10

phoenix

Hermione is starting to get through to Severus. She has found the right button to push, she just needs to push it a little harder. As for Rita, can I just hope, hope beyond all hope that she has finally pissed off the wrong wizard and will get her comeuppance?

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yes, she's learning how to talk to him and get him to listen. But pushing a little harder - he's still that scary teacher, snarky git, in the past, but she's coming to terms with it all too. Push - in time.  Rita will get hers in time, and yes, she's angered one too many wizards. Thank you for reading and for the review.

0/10

Phyllidia

He said I love you without prompting.  <sigh>

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

He did. It's a huge step for him and he didn't even realize how big that was. Thank you for reading and for the review.

9/10

phoenix

One step closer. Hopefully others will come forward and let the truth be heard, but kind of hard to argue against memories since even when Slughorn tried to change his, it was obvious and who would expect even this group to be able to pull something like that off.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

You're right - it's hard to modify memories. The truth will be heard, it will be all right. have faith. Thank you for reading and for the review. 

9/10

phoenix

Seems like Severus may have underestimated Hermione a bit. So now he has to decide whether to speak for himself or be indebted to Potter. Great choice, isn't it?

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

He usually does, but he'll come to know her very well. She's a pistol, that witch. Yep, speak up and be indebted... no choice, it's what it is. Hope you like the trial. Thankyou for reading and for the review.

0/10

phoenix

Just when things were turning around in the Snape/Hermione front, the Ministry had to get involved. Something tells me Hermione won't be too pleased about this.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

No, it looks bad. At least she got to see the softer side of him before he was arrested. Thank you for reading and for the review.

0/10

Phyllidia

Yay for engagements!Aww for KreacherRon *shakes head* Beyond time to move on buddyGreat chapter!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yep, engagements - Maggie will be beside herself! More forms!Yes, poor Kreacher, decisions, decisions, decisions...Ron, he will. He just hasn't met the right witch yet. Thank you for reading and for the review.

10/10

Phyllidia

Aw you made me cry happy tears.  Christmas with Talfryn was great.  Though Severus seriosly needs to find out who and what happened to his childhood memories.Great chapter!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

I'm so glad that you liked Christmas. Yep, Talfryn is a favorite character of mine in this story, but old people can be fun to write. <br><br>It wasn't anything that happened to them, he was very very little at the time, possibly 1 or 2, maybe 3, but too young to remember. However, his mum used to read the same stories to him on their picnics - she had written them down in a journal for him from memory so Severus would have them and know the stroies she'd loved as a child.<br><br>Thank you for reading and for the review.  

Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)

Oh okay.  Thanks for taking the time to tell me about the memories.  I thought I had remembered something earlier in the story where he was having problems recalling something, like the memories were hidden and then in the Christmas morning chapter the fact that Hermione hid her parents memories came up.  I thought this was a side story (perhaps his Uncle hid certain memories to keep Severus away from Talfryn, etc) where he was going to research Hermione's problem and end up solving his own.  Thanks for setting me straight! :)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

chap 38: Severus had been to the Graven's home. Draken and Ludwick Graven, Rowle, Gibbon, Thortenson, Rosier, Mulciber and Klossen had all been friends until the fall of the Dark Lord. Something had happened at the Graven's home, something that had been Obliviated from Severus' mind... that and the house is under the Fidelius. Is that what you're remembering? 

Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)

Yep that's it.  I was just reading more into.

10/10

magalena

I love this story and was so happy to see an update today.  I am really glad that Severus was cleared but am now feeling sorry for Hermione, she is so confused.Like someone else mentioned I wonder if her not following him to the Burrow will be interpreted by SS as a rejection?I hope Skeeter gets her come-uppance!!!!! The B*tch.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you very much.Yep, I couldn't just leave him in there - that would be an awful story! Yep, Hermione is confused, and hurt.Following him? not until he  - you'll see.the bug - you bet!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you very much.Yep, I couldn't just leave him in there - that would be an awful story! Yep, Hermione is confused, and hurt.Following him? not until he  - you'll see.the bug - you bet!

10/10

aura

This is such a great fic!  The story is so complex and there's so much rich detail, almost makes me feel like I'm there experiencing it with the characters rather than just reading about it.  It amazes me to think that you have multiple fics going that are all of the same quality.  Glad Severus is finally free.    Hope Hermione gives him time to process everything before she actually says/does anything about the 'sham of a marriage'.  He's never been the kind to wear his heart on his sleeve, and he did notice her and  look for her after the verdict and in Kingley's office even though she didn't realize it.  Can't wait to see the bug get squashed Skeeter get her due!  Love this fic!!!  Already wishing there was more. 

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you so very much. wow I really appreciate the compliment. I couldn't leave him in - that would be a terrible story. He's more fun free. and yes, they both need to talk things out. Don't worry - I'm not done yet.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you so very much. wow I really appreciate the compliment. I couldn't leave him in - that would be a terrible story. He's more fun free. and yes, they both need to talk things out. Don't worry - I'm not done yet.

9/10

sinbad

Finally Severus is free!  Hopefully they will work things out and we will have a firework display.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thankyou. Yep, he's free. and I'm working on the rest...

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thankyou. Yep, he's free. and I'm working on the rest...

0/10

Terab

Great chapter!  I'm a little broken hearted for Hermione.  You'd think Snape would be a little more thankful to her for all she did.  Looking foward to seeing what happens next.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you very much. Yes, things look bad for now.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you very much. Yes, things look bad for now.

0/10

kimjo2

poor severus...poor hermione.  both of them need time.  love this update thanks so much

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you very much. Yes, they need to talk, time and patience. I'm working on that.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you very much. Yes, they need to talk, time and patience. I'm working on that.

0/10

smurfgirlz

I'm happy for him, but so sad for her.  I hope they talk, or someone *cough harry or ginny cough* goes to tell him off for making her cry and ends up talking to him...lol

Great story, amazing chapter, can't wait for more! :)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

I know aren't I terrible! But I'm not done with them yet... working on the 'get things together again' part. Thank you for the compliment.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

I know aren't I terrible! But I'm not done with them yet... working on the 'get things together again' part. Thank you for the compliment.

10/10

kittylefish

i was just thinking about this story last night, so was very happy to find the update this morning.  and what a great update it is!  what with severus finally (finally!) being acquitted and all the aftermatch.  i liked how you handled the verdict - very well done.  so hermione is giving up for now.  and severus doesn't know what to do, but if she doesn't show up at the burrow, i'm thinking that will push him into a decision because he'll figure she's rejected him, so what to do - i'm guessing, reject back even harder.  i'll happily ride on whatever roller coaster you have planned for them, because i have faith that you'll get them to a happy ending eventually.  : )

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you so very much. I really appreciate your compliments. wow. Yes, I needed to switch wands on them in order to get them right where I wanted them to be. Thank you for the faith in me!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you so very much. I really appreciate your compliments. wow. Yes, I needed to switch wands on them in order to get them right where I wanted them to be. Thank you for the faith in me!

9/10

CharmedForce

Poor Hermione! She really shouldn't take anything to heart right now. Severus has been in Azkaban and expected to stay there. He is confused and a bit overwhelmed. Hopefully she will realize that and give him the chance to process everything.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Don't worry, things are bleak, but not unsalavagable. They both need to talk. talk would be good I thnk...

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Don't worry, things are bleak, but not unsalavagable. They both need to talk. talk would be good I thnk...

10/10

gabi1791

Aww, I feel so happy for him and so sad for her!!! Please update soon, they NEED to get this thing right!!!gab

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. I'm working at the need to get this right part - but I have to switch the tables!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. I'm working at the need to get this right part - but I have to switch the tables!

0/10

septentrion

Another example of why people should talk together before jumping to conclusions.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

You are absolutely right! Thank you for the reveiw.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

You are absolutely right! Thank you for the reveiw.

10/10

kimbee73

Oh I feel sorry for Hermione, she doesn't know what to do. I am so glad you updated this story and I look forward to more updates to see how you take this story.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. Your right and she will be seeking some help... as he will be getting some as well. But I have to turn the tables on them a bit.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. Your right and she will be seeking some help... as he will be getting some as well. But I have to turn the tables on them a bit.

10/10

Muggline

Oh dear, this makes me just go there and hug the poor girl...

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you for that. She needs it right now.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you for that. She needs it right now.

10/10

mia madwyn

I was so thrilled to find this update this morning, and in time for me to read it before going to the hospital to sit with a family member.  The hospital has wifi but won't allow me into TPP because it's registered as an adult site.  (sigh)Oh, this was a wonderful chapter.  The way you had the final court decision read was perfect, and I'm so happy Hermione flew into Severus's arms and wept on his shoulder--And now I'm just aching for her.  Oh my, this hurts.I hope you update soon.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. I sincerely hope your family member is all right? I'm glad I didn'thave to write a trial, this worked so well. I'm glad you liked it. Don't worry - I'm nt done yet. besides I had to switch he wand on them, didn't I?

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. I sincerely hope your family member is all right? I'm glad I didn'thave to write a trial, this worked so well. I'm glad you liked it. Don't worry - I'm nt done yet. besides I had to switch he wand on them, didn't I?

10/10

helshez

Yay Snape!!!!!! Three cheers for our hero! And a pat on the head for the Wizangamot for doing the right thing. I do hope Hermione doesn't do anything rash. Fab chappy as always. Look forward to the next one! :D

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you! Yep, there was no way I was gonna leave him in Azkaban! Unfortunatelly - they might both do something rash... or at least think about it.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you! Yep, there was no way I was gonna leave him in Azkaban! Unfortunatelly - they might both do something rash... or at least think about it.

0/10

Phyllidia

Ah nothing like decluttering to dredge up old memories.  Poor Sev.  And flowers on his bed to boot.  And throw pillows.  (I'm with Severus on what a bed needs)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yes, well, he knew that this was goign to happen eventually. He took it very well. course, there is a ulteriour reason - if she makes it her home too, she'll live there. With him. and maybe sleep in the bed. For that, he'll tollerate a few flowers and extra pillows, as long as no one knows they are there. Ginny may have to make an Unbreakable Vow.  Thank you for reading and for the review.

Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)

That made me laugh.

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