Enlightening Visitations
Chapter 34 of 63
beaweasley2Hermione visits Severus in St. Mungo’s, and Severus makes two visits of his own.
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Enlightening Visitations
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When Hermione entered the Auror security wing on the fourth floor, she was pleased to see David coming out of a patient's room into the main corridor. He looked up and smiled at her. "Hermione! I'm surprised to see you here," he said, closing the chart in his hands as she approached him.
"I'm here to see Severus," she said, coming to a stop in front of him. "How is he really? It's been days, and I thought he was doing well, but he's not back at school yet. Did the spell fail somehow?"
David cupped her elbow and gently ushered her over to a sitting area. "There's no problem with the spell you created it's just that there is a complication."
Hermione gasped and leaned away in shock. "He's not but your letter?!"
"Hermione, there is a complication due to Severus' previous neurological condition from a snake bite," he said, tucking the chart under his arm.
She'd not considered that.
"The venom was apparently a very rare type that acted as both a neurotoxin, affecting his peripheral and central nervous systems, and hemotoxin, affecting his heart and pulmonary functions as well. Fortunately, his cardiovascular and pulmonary scans are fine, and his central nervous system is not currently affected, but his peripheral nerves were. So it's his sensory and motor functions that have been affected. He can move, but his agility and dexterity are sluggish, and he's weak. Also, his magical abilities are diminished."
The information he presented whirled around in her mind as she struggled to make sense of what he was saying. "How badly?" This information was contradictory to his letter, and she should have been told the truth.
"Rudimentary level only but he's showing signs that as his neurological condition improves, his magical abilities should, too," he said and then quickly added. "I'm really hopeful."
Hermione nodded in understanding. Well, she understood what he was saying, but not how an injury that had happened almost four moths ago could be having such a profound effect now. She tried to recall the information she'd read recently about neuro-regeneration and pulmonary regeneration potions that Professor Reynolds had assigned for his essay. Because of Severus' near lethal encounter with Nagini, it had become a topic of great interest to her.
She thanked the Healer and walked to Severus' room. He was sitting up in bed, reading. "Hi," she said, closing the door behind her.
"What are you doing here? I thought I said you were to stay at the castle," he said, his tone even and low but he was apparently unhappy to see her, and she was a bit taken back by his demeanor.
"I had Auror escort," she said as she sat down. His eyes narrowed so she quickly amended her statement. "Harry, Ron, Loraine, and Kingsley met me at the school, and we took a Portkey to the alley beside the hospital. Harry and Kingsley are in the visitor's lounge, waiting to take me back."
"That tells me who, Hermione. Not why," he said, letting the book drop onto his lap.
"I-I wanted to see you," she stammered slightly. Articulated like a nervous first-year. She took a calming breath. This was not the way this was supposed to be going. She was worried, and he was being so cold. "How are you doing?"
His lips pursed momentarily as he stared at her. "Better."
"David said you're having difficulty moving," she said, hoping to draw him out into talking about it.
He closed his eyes and exhaled, then looked at the wall.
"If you won't tell me, I can go ask your Healers and..."
His head snapped in her direction. "No. You'll return to school where you belong."
"So much for building a relationship based on trust," she said, rising to go. "If you won't talk to me, there's no point..."
"I feel... numbness occasionally," he admitted, and she sat back down.
She tilted her head to try and get him to look at her. "David indicated that your motor functions are impaired. Something about there being an interruption in conduction of the impulse in your nervous..."
"Did he? Did he tell you he thinks it's a complication with my nervous system because of the snake bite?"
"Yes," Hermione said, folding her hands in her lap. He looked pale, the light green of the hospital robe not helping his complexion. "You should get outside more often; the body produces vitamin D from sunshine," she suggested and flinched at his scowl. "Are you being given Remyelination Potion? It can generate new neurons, glia, axions, and myelin sheaths, as well as help the synapses..."
"I'm taking neuro-regeneration potions," he stated.
He had no reason to be so dismissive of her. She was here because she cared about his well being. He could be a bit nicer to her, after all. "Aristolochia rugosa and Aristolochia trilobata, or Dutchman's Pipe, are very beneficial for treatment against snakebites and scorpion stings because the aristolochic acid inhibits inflammation induced by the immune complexes in the body, and nonimmunological agents..."
"Stop quoting the book at me," he snapped and closed his book.
"You read Medicinal and Ethnoveterinary Remedies of the Healers of Trinidad, by George K. Bridgewater?" she asked, since he'd recognized the quote.
"Naturally. I have my own copy, as well as Bioprospecting the Phylogenetic Piscine of Magical Venoms, by Jared J. Herd. Whom do you think made the potions to cure Arthur Weasley?" he asked, closing his eyes and shaking his head. When he looked at her, she saw the old look he used to give her in class. "Healers Javidan, Lansing, and Cadwallader have been reviewing my journals from 1995 and '96 on the subject as well as my annotations in my journal in regards to my previous treatment."
"Oh," she said. That makes sense. Mr. Weasley's condition took a dramatic turn for the better just about the time of Severus' visit...
"Yes. Oh." He laced his fingers and rested his hands on the book.
"How did he get them?" It had just slipped out. That wasn't really what she wanted to ask him, but the way he smirked told her he'd expected the question.
"Draco Malfoy, of course."
She was shocked; that was not the person she was expecting him to say. "He's been here to see you?'"
"As was Narcissa," he said smoothly. "I've told you, they are my friends. Narcissa came here to answer Healers Lansing's and Cadwallader's questions regarding my snake bite and recovery. Now my turn."
Hermione smiled and crossed her ankles. "All right," she said.
"How are things in school? How do you like Professor Reynolds?"
She almost smirked at his change of subject, taking the focus off himself and onto her. He really hated talking about himself. "Things are much quieter this year, considering there isn't any huge mystery to solve, and I can concentrate on my studies," she said, and for a second it looked like he was about to smile. "I like Professor Reynolds well enough. He's competent. His directions are clear, and so far his essays haven't been too bad. I really enjoyed researching the last one. And I'm really enjoying Professor Avoian's lectures. He really loves history, and his lectures are truly engaging."
He nodded slightly in approval, encouraging her to continue. She relaxed and began telling him about her lessons and how far behind she was. "I have five essays to finish by tomorrow," she admitted.
He glanced at his bedside table and then back to her face. "Which essay were you working on last night?" he asked, and Hermione wondered if maybe he was thirsty.
She stood up and poured a glass half-full with water as she answered, "Neuro-regeneration and pulmonary regeneration potions for Professor Reynolds." She handed him the glass but he shook his head. "I'm sorry I thought... Why don't you want it?"
"Hermione," he said in warning.
It dawned on her he was embarrassed to be seen as weak. "Is it because of your weakened motor functions?" She move closer and brushed his hair back from his face. "Try; I don't mind, and I don't see you as weak, only healing. There's a huge difference."
"I'm not thirsty," he said, but his gaze was locked on the hand holding the cup.
"Severus, you keep indicating that you want this to be a marriage," she said, and his gaze snapped to her face. "Wives do this for husbands; if they're ill or injured, a wife takes care of her husband. It's not a weakness to let me help you. Besides, if the tables were turned, you'd do the same for me, wouldn't you?"
He frowned, his eyes hardening as he regarded her, possibly angry... He was behaving so typically male, as if needing to prove his masculinity, having to always appear strong and virile, but right now she was seeing behind the mask, and she knew he didn't like it at all. "Being injured doesn't mean you're weak. It only means you have to heal."
Maybe she was pushing too far. "I'll go." She turned to place the cup on his bedside table.
"Yes, please."
She turned to look at him. "The water..." he said, leaving the actual request unsaid.
She held the cup up for him, and his hand covered hers, guiding the cup to his lips.
"Thank you," he said after only a sip.
"More?" she asked, hoping he wasn't stopping because of her. He accepted, finishing the water. She refilled the cup but he shook his head. She attempted to put the cup in his hand, and his eyes narrowed as he watched her. "You don't have to worry about my opinion regarding your masculinity. There is no doubt in my mind so this gruffness and unwillingness to show me that you are temporality weakened from your condition has made no impression on me."
He crossed his arms at his wrists, but didn't answer her, so she set the glass down on the table.
Feeling at a loss, she looked at the book on his lap, surprised when she realized he was reading A Farewell To Arms by Earnest Hemmingway. "I've read that one. Actually, I've read all of Hemmingway's books. A Farewell To Arms is practically an autobiography of his time in the war," she said.
He smirked. "I'm aware of that."
"That I've read it or that it's a personal account of his experiences?" she asked with a smirk.
"The latter," he stated. "When did you read it?"
She smiled at his question. "I started reading them... the summer before I got my Hogwart's letter. You see, my father loves his works, and I wanted to... What?"
He shook his head and smiled. "Which did you prefer?"
They spent almost an hour discussing Hemmingway and various other Muggle authors. Hermione was delighted, realizing that they shared, at least in part, a similar taste in fiction. So that when Harry knocked on the door and poked his head in, Hermione felt like she'd found another connection to Severus.
"Hermione, we have to go," he said, quickly adding, "Hello again, Professor."
"Potter," Severus replied without the bitterness Hermione was used to hearing whenever he said her friend's name.
"Sure, Harry, one moment." She placed her hand on Severus'. "I have to go. I don't know when I'll be able to come and see you again."
He squeezed her hand. "Don't. I don't want you to."
She sighed in disappointment, dropping her gaze to their hands.
"Hermione, no matter what precautions you take, if word reaches Dragen or any of his associates that you came to see me, they will stake out the street and alley by the hospital. I'm surprised they haven't already. It's not that I don't trust Potter and Kingsley to defend you if there is an attack; it's a huge risk that I don't want you making. I want you at the castle," he annunciated his last five words firmly, and she nodded. "You have your studies to concentrate on. Write me if you wish, and I'll respond."
She let his words sink in before looking up at him. "All right, if you insist. But if you're not better in two weeks, I'm coming back." She stood up and leaned forward, intending on kissing his cheek, but he turned his head and captured her mouth in a kiss.
"I... er... I'll wait outside," Harry stammered as Severus buried his fingers in Hermione's hair so he could deepen the kiss.
Hermione had to brace herself, one hand on the bed and the other on the headboard, so she didn't fall on him and hurt him. Severus turned slightly, and she sat down, trying to be careful where her bum landed. His other hand found her hip, urging her to shift closer, and she complied, finding herself in his embrace. For someone who was weak and having diminished motor control, his embrace was oddly strong.
His hand at the nape of her neck moved slowly down as he angled his head to trail kisses to her neck, and she felt him stroke her breast through her jumper. She still tried to keep some distance between them so she wouldn't crush him, but that only left room for him to fondle her.
She moaned, and pulled back. "I feel like I'm molesting you," she said breathlessly, mentally shaking her head to dispel the headiness he was eliciting.
His hand stroked her leg up toward her groin and rested there. "I would think it is I who is taking advantage of you," he said smoothly.
His words sent a shiver through her. "I..." She was interrupted by a knock on the door and Harry poked his head back in. "Have to go." She eased from the bed and backed up. "Please get better."
"I will," he said, smirking as she turned to leave.
~S~
Severus crossed his arms over his chest as he watched her leave. The encounter went very well in his opinion. He'd been surprised to see her, and he'd have to have a stern word with Kingsley and Potter about it, but over all it was very illuminating. She cared very deeply for him and still wanted him to open up to her, which meant she did want the relationship. Their physical attraction to each other was as strong as ever, considering her responsiveness. Winning her was going to be much easier than he'd thought.
He turned and reached for the glass, picking it up and lifted it to drink. His hand still had a barely perceivable quiver, but nothing like she was led to believe. He tapped the rim of the glass against the pitcher. "Fill half way," he said and smiled as the pitcher rose and refilled his cup.
He leaned back against his pillows and concentrated, making the water glass rise from his hand and float in the air before him with two consecutive wandless nonverbal spells. He made the glass float to the windowsill and set down. He smiled smugly. Holding out his hand, he summoned the glass to him. The glass lilted once and he frowned. He repeated the exercise two more times before filling the glass with more water and trying again. The third time the glass tipped lightly, making a small amount of water spill out.
Frustrated he drank the water and levitated the glass back to his bedside table as Healer Cadwallader entered the room. "Awesome, how did it go?"
"Well enough," Severus stated.
"Ready to do it with a wand?" the Healer asked, taking Severus' wand from the drawer.
"Wandless takes more concentration," Severus said as Cadwallader refilled the glass. He repeated the exercise four more times, making the glass move in a wide zigzag instead.
Cadwallader held the wand out to him. "But you and your wand need to be reconnected, and that will take practice."
Severus held his wand in his hand, and for some reason, it wasn't responding as well as it should. His wandless abilities were growing stronger, but he was not up to par with his own wand.
~H~
When they'd returned to the school gates, Hermione wanted to linger in Hogsmeade with Harry for a while before returning to the castle, however Kingsley and Harry wouldn't even consider it. "With everything going on, it's much better if we hang out on the school grounds," Harry insisted, indicating the gate that was opening up to admit them.
"Fine, if you insist," she grumbled and slipped inside.
John Dawlish greeted them as they passed him. Hermione said, "Hello," spotting Professor Reynolds standing only a few feet away, talking to Hagrid.
"Minister, a word," John said, drawing Kingsley's attention.
"Hey, let's go up. I want to see the castle and maybe find Ginny," Harry suggested, making Hermione laugh.
"In that order," she teased him.
"Well, only in order of occurrence, not necessarily my order of preference," he replied with a wiggle of his eyebrows and a huge grin.
Professor Reynolds and Hagrid both waved at them as she and Harry walked by. "Do you want to stop and see Hagrid?" she asked, waving back.
"Ron and I stopped by to talk to him before Kingsley and Loraine arrived," he said, and then added, "I'll stop by later on my way out."
The two men started to follow them up the path to the castle, and she sighed. "Over doing the security, don't you think?" she grumbled.
"John was obviously sent to open the gates, Hermione; I'm not sure what business Professor Reynolds has with Hagrid," he replied. "I assume they are going up to the castle the same as we are, nothing more." He asked her about school as they made their way up to the castle.
She told him about her new celebrity status, and he chuckled. "They'll get over it quickly enough," he stated, pushing open the huge oak doors to let her enter first. "Or you'll simply learn to ignore it."
"It's still annoying," she admitted. Several students stopped in their tracks, pointing at them as they crossed the Entrance Hall and ascended the stairs. "I suppose I never really understood what your first year must've been like, not really. The recognition, everyone watching you all the time..."
"Welcome to fame, Hermione. It sucks."
She laughed, ignoring the cluster of students they passed on the first landing.
She was glad that Harry had chosen to stay for a brief visit, but his appearance in the common room caused a huge stir the moment he entered. Many of the first- and second-years who'd never met him before wanted autographs and to ask him questions, to which Harry obliged. He'd spent a full ten minutes signing his Chocolate Frog cards for them before waving off the rest and walking over to sit with Hermione.
"Oh, my gosh! Harry!" Ginny squealed from the common room entrance. He stood up, turned, took a few steps toward her as she ran over to him and nearly crashed into him as they embraced.
"I've missed you," he said as they clung to each other.
Her arms tightened around him. "Me too." They kissed briefly, then they broke apart and joined Hermione on the sofa by the fire. The girls told him everything about what had been going on since school started, and he did the same about the Auror program and his part in the Death Eater search. "You never write to me," Ginny pouted, playfully hitting his arm.
Harry leaned back, rubbing his arm in shock. "I write once a week! To both of you! You made my owl attack me until I did, remember?" he said in his defense.
"And I had to in order to hear from you," Ginny insisted.
As Hermione had anticipated happening, Harry turned to Hermione. "Do you mind if I..." he stammered, pointing to Ginny.
"Want to be alone with Gin I figured you might. Go on," she said, smiling at them. She went up to her room as Harry and Ginny left the common room for somewhere more private.
Harry and Ginny had disappeared for several hours, so she'd spent the time working on her essays until dinner. Harry reappeared with Ginny and sat in his old spot between Hermione and Ginny at the Gryffindor table, which caused quite a stir throughout the Great Hall, even at the Slytherin table.
Following dinner, Professor McGonagall invited them to have pudding with her in her office. She was so delighted to see Harry, she actually hugged him. Harry gave her a much abbreviated version of his Auror training and activities. When the bell tolled the hour of the younger students' curfew, Professor McGonagall exclaimed, "Oh, my where did the time go!"
"Harry, I'll walk you to the Entrance Hall," Ginny suggested, hoping that Professor McGonagall wouldn't object.
After saying good-bye to Harry, Professor McGonagall asked Hermione about Severus.
*
The rest of the week flew by with very little incident. Hermione wrote to Severus on Monday, sending her letter right after breakfast. His response arrived on Tuesday without any speculation as to when he'd be discharged. She wrote him back that night, and asked Ginny at breakfast if she could use her owl to send it to him.
On Hermione's prefect rounds, she encountered nine third-years splashing in the prefect bath and deducted five points each, then caught four couples engaged in trysts in various spots around the castle, one, a Hufflepuff and a Slytherin actually engaged in the act.
True to her word, or threats depending on how she looked at it, Ginny had dragged Hermione to both Quidditch practices, and even managed to get her out on a broom for a little while. On Saturday, Hermione, Ginny, and Luna spent time together out by the lake, enjoying the sun and watching the squid as they talked.
However, Hermione spent all her available time in the library or sequestered on her bed trying to catch up on her school work, forever feeling like she was dragging behind. That dreaded feeling she hated, which always made her feel anxious.
Whenever Luna was in the library the same time Hermione was, she always came and sat at Hermione's table. It surprised Hermione how nice it was to have the girl's company, working quietly and companionably on their school work. More than once, they offered reading suggestions to each other, and Hermione was amazed at just how smart Luna really was, in her own dreamily-spoken, unassuming way. Even Luna's undaunted serenity seemed to rub off on Hermione during those times, creating a deeper friendship and understanding of the girl.
As much as Hermione wanted to look up the collation between neurologic conditions and magical ability, her class assignments left her little time to do so. She did manage to catch up on her essays by late Sunday night, and by Tuesday, she was finally current on her reading assignments and Arithmancy equations.
By Thursday, knowing she was well ahead of her reading, and far along on her new essay assignments, she felt relaxed enough to spend some time talking to her dorm mates. Alestra and Veronica were the first to relax around her, but they were both still fascinated by the hunt for the founder's artifacts, the Gringotts break in, and Hermione's memories of the war. Wendlynne, Hermione assumed after watching the girl, was painfully shy until she got to know someone, so she knew that it would take some time to befriend the girl, but Sunita still stared at Hermione as if she were larger than life, regardless of how often Hermione tried to draw her out.
In regards to Nadine and Deborah, they reminded Hermione very much of Lavender Brown, only really interested in boys, clothes, makeup, and boys not necessarily in that order and frequently wanted gossip about her and Severus. So Hermione figured that of her dorm mates, Alestra, Wendlynne, and Veronica were likely to become friends with her, which suited her just fine.
Friday, at breakfast Hermione received letters, one from Neville telling her about the Untwert plumoria he'd found and his enjoyment in camping in the mountains, and a friendly hello from Hannah, asking her how things in her life were going and telling Hermione about her job working in the Crock n' Carafe pub. Hermione wrote letters back to her friends, as well as one to Ron and Harry. She was about to write to Severus, but hesitated. She hadn't had word back from David regarding his recovery, and she was becoming concerned again. Deciding that she needed to find out in person, she went to Professor McGonagall's classroom before lunch to ask permission to go see Severus again.
"Mrs. Snape, as much as I'd like to allow the privilege, I'm afraid that the decision must be up to the Auror office. The Death Eaters have made two attacks, as you are aware if you've followed current events in the Daily Prophet, and I'm not sure that an Auror would be available to escort you."
"I'm sure Harry and Ron would after their shifts." It wasn't the answer she'd hoped for. Hermione sighed, her shoulders involuntarily slumping, then she looked up, remembering something. "Isn't there a direct connection between the hospital and the school?"
"Yes there is," the stern matron stated. "However, only Madam Pomfrey is authorized to open it, and only if there is an extreme emergency. When that connection is activated, an announcement is made at the Urgent Care Healer station to alert the staff."
"I see," she looked up and forced a smile on her face to hide her disappointment. "Thank you."
Professor McGonagall laced her fingers together on her desk and smiled indulgently. "If it will make you feel any better, I received a message the other day from Elaine Prevatt, Clerk to the Administrative Offices of the Hogwarts School Governors, that the Healers assured her that Severus will be returning to Hogwarts soon."
"How soon?" she asked, hoping she didn't sound petulant.
"I'm sorry, dear, I really don't know; it's up to his Healers to decide when exactly he is fit to return, but the news I have is that he is recovering his strength nicely," she said, and Hermione knew that she'd just have to write to Kingsley and ask him if she could have an escort to St. Mungo's.
Kingsley's response came with the post the following morning.
Dear Mrs. Snape,
I'm sorry to inform you that I cannot grant you your request at this time. Our resources are stretched too thin at present, and I haven't anyone to spare. I'm sure that Headmaster Snape will be released as soon as the Healers deem him fit to return to his duties.
If you have any other requests, please do not hesitate to contact my office.
Sincerely,
Kingsley Shacklebolt
Minister of Magic for the United Kingdom
Hermione crumpled up the letter and set it afire in her goblet, then left the table to write to Harry. She was going to find a way to see Severus again or, at least, get some proper answers.
~S~
Severus was released from the hospital, against Healer advice, two and a half weeks after Hermione's visit. He'd recovered physically, at least to the level he'd been before the curse, only his magical strength seemed off. His personal assessment associated his lack of ability to his wand and its unresponsiveness to his hand. Severus leapt into the air from the dark alley beside the hospital, relishing in the freedom of flight, pleased that this ability was undiminished. He returned to his home at Spinner's End to seek answers in his personal library, and then flew to Malfoy Manor to search through the books there. The only conclusion he could come up with was that somehow he'd been disarmed and his wand acknowledged another owner, but that didn't fit with what he knew about wand lore.
His first order of business, after forcing his way out of St. Mungo's, was to seek out Ollivander in his shop the next morning and inquire about a new wand. Diagon Alley was fairly quiet, with only a few shoppers scurrying about, quickly attending to their business. It was the same as during the war, and until the last resistance of the Death Eaters was caught, it would likely remain so.
Ollivander's shop was the same as when he was a child of eleven, seeking to buy his first wand with his mother. He'd been granted monies from a school scholarship, so his first cauldron and his wand were the only items that he'd bought that day that were new. For that reason, the small shop, dim except for the single ceiling lamp and the light from the large window, always held a fond memory for Severus. Ollivander seemed to materialize from the floor-to-ceiling shelf as he stepped into view.
"Headmaster, how good to see you up and around," Mr. Ollivander said as he stepped up to the counter. "How may I be of service?" The man was still thin from the imprisonment during the war, and his face deeply lined, but his silver eyes, that seemed to glow from within, were as penetrating as ever.
"I have come to ask you about my wand," Severus replied, laying it on the counter.
"Ah, yes, birch with dragon heartstring, twelve and a half inches, strong yet supple... It's served you well all these years, has it not?" Ollivander examined the wand carefully. "Interesting... I heard that you'd been hit with the Inferi Curse," he said without taking his gaze off the wand.
"Yes," Severus replied, waiting for the wandmaker's impression.
"And that you were near death," the wizard asked, finally looking up at him.
"So I was told," Severus admitted calmly.
"And this one why do you wish to destroy it?"
The question for some reason shocked Severus. "No, I will keep it, but I need one that responds to me." The silent, questioning expression of the wandmaker made Severus realize he'd have to admit why. "It feels... intrusively unfamiliar to me now as if it were another's."
Ollivander nodded as if finally understanding. "It feels clumsy, and your spells are less powerful..."
"Yes," Severus admitted, thinking that he was possibly making a mistake. His lack of control may simply be from his previous injuries and nothing more.
"The wand chooses the wizard, but alliance can be changed, it's rare, but happens when someone conquers someone else's wand. Any powerful wizard can channel magic through any instrument he desires, but the strongest magic is when the initial attraction creates an affinity bond between a wizard and a wand. And this connection strengthens even more as wand and master share experiences. Break this bond, and the wand will bend its will to the new master."
This was not the answer Severus had expected. He'd heard about this, but the facts of changing wand loyalties were seeped in myths. "I thought one had to kill to master another's wand," he asked, wondering if the old stories were false.
"Not always so," the wandmaker replied.
"I'd still like to replace it, then," Severus said sadly.
Ollivander gently placed the wand on the counter and moved through the shelves, pulling out one wand after another. None actually felt right in Severus' hand.
"I wonder..." the wandmaker murmured, walking to the back of his shop. When he returned, he handed Severus a black wand. The wand emitted a soft glow, and when he attempted to change a box lid into a glove, the feeling was intrinsically friendly and supple admittedly even stronger feeing than his original wand.
"Black birch, twelve and three quarters, strong yet supple... the phoenix feather core is from Dumbledore's own familiar, given to me just before he died," Ollivander said with a mysterious smile.
Severus studied the wand, refusing to think about the implications of the wandmaker's statement. He paid the seven Galleons and seven Sickles and left the shop.
His second order of business was to find out which Death Eater had disarmed him.
"I want to be alone with him," Severus stated emphatically as he peered into the window of the interrogation room.
"All right," Kingsley replied, backing up. "But I'll be watching you just in case."
MacTavish's eyes widened in recognition and his mouth opened slightly when Severus entered the interrogation room. "You but you're..."
"Dead? An Inferi? No, sorry to disappoint you," Severus said smoothly setting his old wand on the table, scrutinizing the other wizard. "So where to begin. Where is Dragen?"
"I'm not telling you that," MacTavish snarled. "And you stay out of my head."
"Not a chance; he attacked my wife, and I will find him to pay him my thanks," Severus said coolly, watching every miniscule move the wizard made.
MacTavish's eyes narrowed, but Severus caught the quick glance at his wand. "Thanks? Yeah right. You're helping them hunt us down," he sneered angrily at the betrayal.
"And what did you expect? We were on the losing side," Severus sneered at him. "There are consequences for the decisions we make in life, and this is yours."
"There isn't a we, traitor," MacTavish snarled as he snatched up the wand.
Severus reacted before the wizard had time to raise it to strike, hitting MacTavish with a wandless Body-Bind and pinning him roughly against the wall as Kingsley and the guard burst though the door behind him. "Thank you very much. I'll just take that back, if you don't mind," Severus said, snatching the wand from MacTavish's grip. The wand responded in his hand, the familiarity returning.
"Now about Dragen, where is he hiding out?" Severus snarled as he aimed his wand in MacTavish's face. "Legilimens." Severus took his time sorting out the various memories, searching for locations and houses. He saw a few places that MacTavish didn't want to show him, some of the memories of the places were clouded, some completely distorted, but two places were clearly homes the wizard had resided in the past. Severus tried to force his concentration on the house that was distorted. "Dragen Dolohov," he repeated, trying to bring a memory of Dragen and Lestrange into focus, but the image changed, and Severus thought he recognized the place. "The Lestrange home?"
MacTavish tried fruitlessly to push Severus from his mind, but he persisted, increasing the exertion of his mental attack. The house was clearly too distorted for Severus to make anything out. "Where is it?" he snarled, and tried to focus on the Apparation location. He was successful, even getting clear images of Torrington and Rosier in the small village, which lay down the road... a bakery, and a green grocer, Gene Bulstrode harassing a cobbler in his shop a magical cobbler whose house-elf was sweeping up... The image changed, and Severus forced the new memory to return. A huge pepper tree and... a bridge, Torrington and Lestrange crossing the bridge... Dragen looking at a map of London on an old wood table. "Where is the house?" he snarled, but MacTavish was starting to lose crack.
Severus released him, and turned to face Kingsley as MacTavish fell on his face. "I have two locations to consider, the Lestrange house, which I don't think is a likely prospect as it's too obvious, and a house near a village with a bakery, a greengrocer, and a wizard cobbler. The cobbler has a house-elf. There is a large old pepper tree next to a bridge over a gulley... But this would be more clear if I used a Pensieve again."
"Good thing I have one, isn't it?" Kingsley said as the guard shackled MacTavish's arms and ankles and released the Body-Bind.
Severus didn't look back as he followed Kingsley from the room. "So, when shall we organize the raid?"
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Author's notes:
I want to thank my betas, EverMystique and DuchessOfArcadia, for giving this a read and helping me clean up all my mistakes. I really appreciate it very much.
Thank you also to Jay for my beautiful banner. I really love it!
In bouncing around the internet I found:
According to Celtic wood lore, Severus' wood would be birch, so I chose Black Birch: Born under this wood sign, you have unwavering inner strength and gladly lend support to those who rely on you. Purity of thought and a knack for realistic evaluation and quiet determination are also associated with this tree sign.
The bird associated with the Month of the Birch is the pheasant, so I made Severus' new wand core phoenix. Birch's color is white, its day is Sunday, and its gemstone is red chard. The Celtic symbol of Birch is the White Stag with a rack with seven tines, especially interesting to me since Severus' Patronus is a hawk. Birch is associated with the element of water, is a tree of the sun, and the planet Venus, and its Herbal Gender is feminine. The Birch tree is sacred to the God Thor and the Goddesses Diana and Cerridwen.
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Hi! Loved this chapter. But it occured it me that the Longbottom's wedding date has apparently been changed again and this time with no real reason. It was originally in Sept. but thenbylu changed it to August to allow them a honeymoon but as they're quite close to the start of term the early August date has passed in your timeline and you mention again in this chapter the wedding happening in September. Why the back and forth? The dinner party was great, the actions totally believable for the characters as you've made them.
Response from Mellbell (Reviewer)
Okay, I shouldn't have posted this before reading the response to my previous review. I appologize for taking up your time/space on minor details. Sometimes I just need to hold my quill and let the unanswered questions go. I truly love your story!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
No don't think that you've taken up my time at all with your question. It's totally fine, and I appreciate the comments, especially that you took the time to contact me. I tend to have a thousand little 'extras' in my stories, loads of little facts, historical tidbits, I look up the plants and make up a lot of them, same as the creatures and insects... but there are those little frizzies, as areabella called them, not actual threads that I intend to wrap up at the end. RL has those unanswered questions - and I admit, I'm doing this as entertainment because I love the Potterverse and I love to write. I had a team of three review every chapter and even they miss things now and again. I have another reader that also points out things much like your review - and I now have them email me rather than point it out onsite. You could do the same, it's totally fine. Have a great week and happy reading.
So I read this originally on GE, but after a while got tired of waiting. Came across it now complete here on TPP and decided to give it a go. Because its completed I doubt you'll make changes, but I thought Lucius asked Severus in obe of the early chapters to help him make a Pensive and in this chapter there is mention of a "family" Pensive. So did Severus help him make this one or was Lucius wanting a second Pensive? Or plot hole? Or my mistaken memory? Brilliant story thus far! Can't wait to keep reading!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you for reading, and i'm glad you were able to find it here. No, I'm not at all concerned about this minor thing on the pensive. Gad, even JKR had plot holes! I'd have to go back and read it, but it's not a big thing in the overall story actually a very minor blip. So no, not something that I'd go back and 'fix'. It's no big deal. However, one can assume that maybe Voldemort had the 'family pensive' or possibly one of the others... who knows. We don't even know if Lucius was an only child. However, in a long story like this there are things that get over looked and my betas do catch the important things for me as does my alpha reader - they knew where I was going. I hope you like it nonetheless.
Response from Mellbell (Reviewer)
Okay 😊 I am really loving this story. Thanks for answering.
So glad to see this. The Ending/Epiloque was rather rushed, but enjoyable. You had a few minor errors. like Weeding/Wedding.So Hermione and her sister are named the same.. Even after their memories are restored?I would laugh if she ended up at Hogwarts too. or the Aussie version.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Sorry, but epi's are short and summary aren't they? It was the happy every after because you know they will bething. I didn't want to dredge on and on after all... lol so sorry if I disappointed. Once you've named a child do you go and change it? Besides, they will live in AU and Hermione and Severus will visit on occasion - if not her parents come back to visit her. Thank you for reading and for the review.
It was such a joy to read this story! Everything worked out perfectly in the end.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
I'm so glad that you liked the ending. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Poor Hermione is definitely getting overwhelmed, but at least she doesn't seem to feel too uncomfortable. And the hunt for the Death Eaters continues. Hopefully that will be over sooner rather than later. At least with Hermione at school for the most part she is safe, but once school ends, I don't see her taking kindly to having her movements restricted.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
You're so right
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
, she's dafe for now, but unless they are all caught, she won't like the restrictions. Thank you for reading and for the review.
At least publicly Severus did somewhat better. Looks like they need to better communicate what their roles at these events should be. And he really does need to get better at asking questions over jumping to conclusions. And an interesting aside, Bulgarian has a lot in common with Russian. While I was never fluent, I still remember many of the common phrases. Of course traveling all over, I know the common phrases for many countries, though never went anywhere they spoke Russian.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
You are soo right, he does. And they do need to learn to communiate in a healthy maner. It' will come. (I cheated using a online site, so I hope I got the words right.) I envy you traveling, but someday, when I win $$ - I'm going ! Thank you for reading and for the review.
So nice to have a chapter full of happiness and good news. And Molly and Arthur have more than earned a decent place to live.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
I'm delighted that you enjoyed this one. Yep, A and M did, and H and G didn't need the house... Thank you for reading and for the review.
Well, that all went surprisingly well. Severus only had one moment of being irrational and seems to be learning some respect for the students who made his life hell. And Hermione didn't have anyone trying to kill her, nice change of pace for her.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Didn't it? He's trying and she's safe, for now. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Ah, nothing like having more than one holiday dinner is there? Makes me kind of glad I don't live closer to family and have to deal with that sort of thing. LOL At least Severus is trying. And poor Hermione, she still doesn't understand what she's gotten herself into and that there is more to Severus' family than she thinks.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, over stuff! lol but it was fun planning the menu. Yes, he is trying, and yep, Hermione is finding out he has family - let alone the extent. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Wow, so much happened here. If I was poor Hermione I'd be on the verge of a breakdown wondering if I would ever be safe. And what a wake up call for poor Maggie, not that she doesn't deserve it. Not to mention how overwhelming society has to be for Hermione. Hopefully a sit down with Narcissa will help her feel less uncomfortable.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, maggie - I thought that a bit of her history would be a nice touch, not that she isn't a pill. Yep, the social elite, and when I type them, I look at the social elite of the 1800's, the polished outward manners of magical society when compared to its inward machinationsthe and the assumptions and morals, fastidious rules of magical society lol She will have mments with Narcissa. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Thank you so much for this completely wonderful update, I loved it!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
You are more than welcome. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Quite a bit of time passage here but NEWTs are finally done. Liked the 'surprise potion'. Sounds like things I accidently do in the kitchen.Only two more chapters? Well I hope we have quite a bit of Severus/Talfryn time. Love and acceptance all around, happy house elves and Ron with a new love.Enjoying myself (obviously)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, I did skip a bit, sorry, but there wasn't much on the calender going on, just normal day to day boring... I'm glad that you like the 'discovery' potion. Troll warts cure. Well, there are 62 and a Epilogue in total, so we are getting there. I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Yay! Talfryn's back. I've missed the old codger.Enjoyed the work on the potions and the dinner party.Great chapter. Thanks for sharing.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yep, you get to see him again. I love the wizard. I'm so glad that you did. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Wow so much going on in this chapter. A lot was covered. I'd say Severus needs to get over his jealousy but I suspect with his personality it will never happen.I chuckled about the flower heads as I just recently havested some and was amazed at how many tiny seeds were in one little flower stem.Enjoying the little details you add.Thanks for sharing.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
He is a possissive type and it will come out. I'm gld that you liked the flowerhead bit - I've harvested once and you're right. I'm so glad you enjoy the little bits. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Good to see Severus more accepting of the Bulgarian buddies. Lots of action.Good chapter.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Well, he had to, but once he realized they were not after Hermione in a sexual way, he calmed down. Yep, lots of action. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Ooh Valentine's Day and a battle and where oh where is Hermione. Good thing I let you get ahead of me!Great chapter!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
I'm so glad you enjoyed this, and you're right, you get to go to the next chapter and find out! Happy reading. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Hermione, you just need to embrace that your life has changed. We all know you saw your future a certain way, but that's not what's happened. Get over it. It was nice to see that she seemed to enjoy the party, especially since she has several more to attend. And Severus is being such a good sport and not being too much of a grouch about being drug out of his comfort zone.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Good advice. Yep, it was a lovely party and Severus held up well. Part of being Head of Slytherin and Headmaster - being in the social elite. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Oh I hope there is more than one chapter to go. Still seems to have a lot yet to do.Great chapter. You conveyed the tenseness of the situation well.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
62 and a Epilogue, then, yep, it's done! I'm hoping I tie things up satisfactorily. I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for reading and for the review.
He took the intrusion relatively well. You really can teach an old dog new tricks, can't you? Nice look for Hermione into his youth, even though it wasn't happy.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
He did, although it was expected - he knew it would happen someday. Not a happy past, but a brighter tomorrow. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Very cool that Hermione solved the mystery, mostly anyway. She almost had Reginald impressed. Given that Hermione kept Neville from blowing up cauldrons and kept Trevor alive, I think she knows more about ingredients than he thinks she does. And I like the idea of it being a new
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
and not Faweks.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yep, she solved a big part of Severus' puzzle, and worked out his family tree. Yes, of curse she does, and she has an amazing memory. I'm glad you like the new baby
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
. She will be good for Severus. Thank you for reading and for the review.
So many new events here. Once again Hermione is learning there is practice involved with magic and not just what you learn out of a book. Hopefully Severus will overcome his protective side to help her learn better control of her magic. And nice with them each getting a chance to nurse the other back to health.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, she does have to, and in time she will. Severus may never overcome his protective side, it's one of the things we love about him, but he will have to teach her control her magic. Thankyou for reading and for the review.
Oh, Hermione, nice try trying to trick Reginald, but he's too smart for that. LOL Though this chapter does answer quite nicely why Severus never published any of his findings. I like how he tried to dance around his other obligations before finally admitting the level of trust others had for him was pretty low
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, he is and she should have known better. Cheating never works. Yes, I think it was a bit of an embarrassing sore point, and something he really wanted to change, but to be a fully proficient spy, you have to keep a lot of seccets and play roles well and he did it too well. Most people read others at 'face value' and don't look beyond that. Now that part of his past is over, hopefully he can get the recognition and respect he's wanted. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Poor Severus. He's fighting against her small bit of prudery. He's going to slowly go insane at this rate. Though Hermione should just lighten up and embrace the fact her life has taken a rather odd turn.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
She's young and becoming more aware and comfortable, but he is an intense man, it takes time getting use to the type/amount of passion he has. I agree, she should and she will. Thank you for reading and for the review.
His hard work has finally paid off. The magic in those three simple words is pretty impressive. Now he just needs to keep it up so she doesn't think he was just acting that way to have sex with her.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, those three little words was all she needed to hear - but she needs to be able to see that Severus shows her everyday that he loves her as well. I love you is hard for some men to articulate. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Eeeeeep! I'm pretty sure the people who did this will regret it when Severus begins to tear the world apart to get Hermione back. He's going to make Liam Neeson's character in Taken look like a helpless Muggle puppy. And that's if she's alive and well.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
LOL Well, they wanted his attention. Thank you for reading and for the review.