Persistent Enchantment
Chapter 3 of 63
beaweasley2Our actions have consequences. As the night of the new moon approaches, Hermione is becoming very much aware of exactly what is about to happen – for real! The allure of the enchanted dreams is ensnaring Severus, and his growing attraction toward Hermione strengthens; however, he, not she, is now controlling the dreams. Moreover, as the strength of the spell increases, Severus finally makes his decision. Meanwhile, the Ministry announces the newest couple on the Marriage Registration ledger.
Reviewed*Warning this is explicit with graphic sexual situations.*
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Persistent Enchantment
~H~
It had taken a week for Harry, driven by his own lust from the mutual connection in the dreams to begin to slip into Ginny's room and seek out her out, although Ginny later confessed that he was shy and reluctant, nevertheless, things were progressing between them and she was thrilled. For five nights, Ginny had placed wards and silencing spells on her door and walls in anticipation of his visits, and Hermione had brewed a sleeping draught of Deep-Sleep Potion, placing a vial of it under her pillow in anticipation of the visits as well. The fifth night was like any night in which Harry slipped into the room. The magic of the wards immediately activated, and Hermione had quickly, and slyly, taken her potion. Harry had never been the wiser, and Hermione had, thankfully, slept through most of the embarrassing moments of Harry's conjugal visit.
~MoM~
Maggie Whitmire entered her office that morning, in the Magical Marriage and Birth Registration Office and noticed a glow coming from the Marriage Registration ledger. She walked over to peer at the large tome and saw immediately that the entry: Ginevra Molly Weasley and Harry James Potter had changed. The entry now read: Bonded. She smiled warmly and sat down at her desk, pulling out the required Magically Bonded Certificate, and quickly filled in the details as given by the ledger. She enclosed the form letter, instructing the newly magically Bonded couple to sign and wand verify the certificate and return it to her office to be filed. A gilded and embossed certificate would be owled to them upon her receipt, and the union would be official. As if a magical Bonding Charm can ever be unofficial, she laughed to herself, still delighted over the union of the new couple. Oh, how I wish I could deliver this in person. Imagine, Harry Potter Bonded to Miss Weasley oops, no, it's Mrs. Potter now, isn't it? She giggled like a schoolgirl.
She quickly drafted another note.
I am very pleased to announce that Mr. Harry James Potter and Ginevra Molly Weasley have officially been magically Bonded, the sixteenth of June, at approximately 11:59 P.M. Signatures and certification are still pending upon registration of the signed and wand verified Magically Bonded Certificate.
Maggie Whitmire,
Magical Marriage and Birth Registration Office
Magical Licenses and Certificates Department
Mrs. Whitmire checked her facts against the ledger carefully, then magically duplicated it several times before sealing it, and carried the notices to the owlery. I think I'll deliver this one in person, she said, holding up the original. I can't wait to see the look on Agethia's face!
~H~
Harry and Ginny's Bonding was announced in the morning edition of the Daily Prophet. Harry's reaction to the article was utter disbelief; however, his reaction to the owl sent from the Magical Licenses and Certificates Department and to the owls that carried congratulatory letters from Shacklebolt, McGonagall and Hagrid caused an uproar in the house. At first, Ginny was rather giddy at having received the papers from the Ministry, but she'd broken down into tears when Harry began yelling at her, accusing her of performing Dark Magic to trap him. He was furious at her for what he perceived as a deception, angered at being magically ensnared when he'd had full intention of marrying her anyway after she finished school. Moreover, he couldn't believe he was suddenly Bonded with Ginny simply because they'd shagged.
Oddly enough, it was Ron who was able to calm Harry down enough to talk to his parents and sat with his parents as they tried to explain what the Bonding Charm was and what being Bonded meant while Hermione consoled a distraught Ginny in her room. After finally calming Ginny down, reassuring her that Harry was simply overreacting, as he tended to do, and assuring her that Harry loved her, Ron knocked on the door telling them that Ginny needed to go down and talk to Mr. and Mrs. Weasley, too.
When Hermione followed Ginny back downstairs, the look on Mr. and Mrs. Weasleys' expressions told her that she and Ron should dismiss themselves and let them talk privately to Ginny and Harry, so she pulled on Ron's arm to get him to go outside with her. Besides this gives me the perfect opportunity to have Ron alone for a while and possibly, just possibly see if things can work out between us...
Deep in thought, Hermione led Ron into the apple orchard and far enough from the house so that they wouldn't be disturbed. As soon as they sat down, Ron pulled her into his arms and started kissing her. His kisses were firm but wet. Instead of gentle caresses or like the sensual kisses Snape gave her, Ron's were hard and crushing. In addition, Ron had somehow gotten the impression that Hermione had him out here for other reasons and immediately began groping her, squeezing and kneading her breasts roughly.
After a few minutes of groping, slobbering and struggling, Hermione realized that she'd simply had enough. "Ron, I can't! I don't know why but I can't," Hermione said, sitting up, pushing Ron away. It feels wrong. This he us, feels wrong... like I'm cheating on Severus!
"Why? I know you love me. Ginny and Harry are doing it," he whined.
Yeah, whine about it. That will help! Augh. I can't, that's why. "This has nothing to do with Harry and Ginny and you know that!" she exclaimed, now completely annoyed. "They are engaged now! Everyone knew that they would be someday even you. This we it's different." But he's right; Harry can hardly keep away from Ginny. At least I have the sleeping potions so I don't have to hear them shagging tonight!
Ron twirled a finger in her hair, pulling the strand slightly. "But I thought that you wanted me, too? Isn't that why we came out here?"
Hermione looked forward, deeper into the orchard. "No, we came out here to have some time together, alone, just you and me. I thought we'd talk..."
"Talk? You came out here to talk?" Ron looked at her in disbelief. "We could have done that in the house!" He ran his fingers in her hair, snagging them on a knot.
"Ouch!" she exclaimed, grabbing her head.
"Mione, I'm sorry," he said, trying to put his arm around her again. He leaned in and tried to kiss her.
Augh, this just isn't working! Hermione turned her head slightly, and his lips landed on her cheek.
He cupped her face, his fingers pressing into her jaw, and turned her, his mouth landing on hers. She let him, trying to caress his lips softly with hers in a seductive kiss the way Severus did in her dreams, and Ron pressed his mouth roughly to hers, their teeth coming into contact painfully.
"Ouch, Ron, you bit me!" she exclaimed, pushing him away again. Oh, for crying out loud! Doesn't he know how to kiss? When Severus kisses me, it's fantastic! The dream in the dream when I kiss him, it's... Oh bugger! This is real! Ron's not a fantasy he's real. She looked at Ron, reconsidering.
He looked back at her, confused.
Okay, try again. You love Ron. That's all there is to it so just kiss him. She placed a hand on his shoulder, gently pulling his shirt as she leaned toward him and cupped his face with her other hand as he met her halfway. Gently, she brushed her lips across his, kissing his lower lip and sensually caressing them with hers. Ron grabbed her, pulling her roughly to him as his mouth crushed hers again. His kiss was wet, sloppy, and hurting her.
"Stop! Stop... Ron, please... No, you're hurting me," she uttered, finally breaking his grip. "No, this is all wrong. I'm sorry, I just can't."
"Mione, tell me what's wrong?" Ron pleaded. "Tell me, and I'll do better."
"Please, leave it alone," she said, curling her knees up and crossing her arms around them. Why does this feel so wrong? I liked his kisses before. Didn't I? There was the kiss at Hogwarts... No, I kissed him... A crushing kiss... in the heat of the moment, like he's doing this time. He kissed Lavender, and she liked his kisses except it looked like he was devouring her face, stuck to her like a leech. It's not the same...
"So, you were only leading me on, is that it?" he asked angrily. "Why did you kiss me in the first place? Eh?"
"Ron, I wanted to be sure. I had to know if what I feel for you is the same," she pleaded for him to understand. One look at his face told her he didn't. "I wanted it to I needed to know, all right? I'm sorry. I like you, really... but I'm not in love with you." She rubbed her face with her hands, exasperated. "It's not you. It's something to do with me. I'm confused. I'm tired. I'm not sleeping well." I want you to kiss me like Severus does.
"Ginny said that you've been dreaming nearly every night?" he said accusingly.
Would Ginny betray my confidences? "No, she didn't," she scoffed. "Ginny wouldn't have said that." Harry might have, but not Ginny.
"So it's true then! You are having the same kind of dreams Ginny and Harry are having?" he asked confrontationally.
Hermione looked at him angrily. "I don't know what kind of dreams Harry is having he hasn't said anything to me about them!" She pulled away as Ron reached for her again. "No, Ron, no. Look, yes, I dream at night. Loads of people dream at night. It's nothing to get your wand in a knot over." She stood up, brushing off her bum. "I'm going back to the house. If it amuses you, ask Ginny to describe her dreams to you, and then we'll compare mine to hers. However, considering that Ginny and Harry are now officially magically Bonded and engaged she probably dreams about him. I can assure you, Ron, I do not dream about Harry!"
Hermione stomped off frustrated and angry. I just don't get it! Why can't he be gentle with me? Ginny said Harry was klutzy and awkward at first, but he was eager to make her happy and slowed down, started kissing her how she wanted, and now he's apparently the best kisser she's had. Why can't I get Ron to kiss me the way Snape does? Well, like dream Snape does. Although, it's not fair to want Ron to be like Snape, is it? Merlin, this is so messed up! Harry's in there angry because Ginny did the Match-Matching Spell and they're now Bonded, and I've just angered Ron by trying to make him act like Snape! And Ginny keeps reassuring me that this will all work out.
She looked up at the Burrow, seeing the soft lights in the windows and billowy smoke from the Floos that used to give her such a welcoming feeling, the magic of this house, built with love, that made this house such an inviting retreat to her and now seemed to mock her. I should've read up on this Moon-Song Spell before casting it; then I would've known what we were in for. Instead, I simply went along, and now look at what's happened! She looked up at the clouds in the afternoon sky. If you're listening, if you're there, I'd really appreciate it if you could help me, help us... I could really use some guidance right about now. I just don't know what to do.
~S~
He was reading in bed before dinner, and a deep, drowsy headiness overcame him. He closed his eyes, laying the book on his lap and pinched the bridge of his nose, unsure why he suddenly felt so sleepy. His body relaxed against the pillows that propped him upright, and he breathed heavily. Gentle fingers touched his shoulder, gliding down his arm. 'She's back. Reaching out to me again, Hermione? Surely you're not sleeping now, are you?' He slid down on the bed and waited. 'Okay, witch, come.' Severus could feel her as her body seemed to materialize over him, closer than an arm's length, and he grasped her arms, pulling her toward him, feeling her body land on his, but without the crushing weight he'd expect. Her hands landed on his chest as his mouth met hers in a crushing kiss while her arms wrapped around him and he embraced her. 'This is madness!'
His penis came to life, jabbing into her stomach painfully. He rolled her over onto her back, straddling one of her legs as he propped himself up above her. She was completely nude, her body lit as if surrounded by candles. Her soft brown eyes met his with uncertainty, but were desirous for him all the same. Her lip quivered as she looked up at him in anticipation, and he leaned down and kissed her. 'It's a dream, only a dream. I might as well enjoy this.' His tongue parted her mouth, and he slipped it inside hers. She pushed at his tongue with hers as if to taste him. She tried rolling her tongue against his and used the tip to feel his in her mouth. He allowed her this tongue game as he fondled her breast. 'Why not, my dear, you want to play let's play...'
He placed one hand down to her groin, his fingers pulling gently at her pubic hair as he fingered his way to her core, and he felt the vibration of her moan against his mouth. She was wet with a few strokes of his fingers. A few more minutes and she squirmed beneath him. He could feel her muscles tighten, and he removed his fingers from her nub long enough for her body to relax and to feel her moan in frustration. Again he fondled her, careful to move his hand away as soon as she began to climax. He bit on her nipple gently, but hard enough to make her gasp.
'Yes, Hermione, I'm going to mark you tonight mark you as mine.' He clasped his mouth on her throat, then the tender skin under her ear, and then on her shoulder, each time leaving a love bite to mar her skin. 'Mine.'
He made small flicks with his tongue as he licked and kissed his way down her body, from her breast to her navel. She writhed under him. He sat back on his knees, separated her legs, lifting her calves to rest on his shoulders and began to kiss one leg, then the other, as he worked his way down to her juncture. She squirmed as if uncomfortable with what he was about to do, and he knew that he would be the first to lick her there. His penis stiffened and jerked, but he ignored it. His mouth clasped down on her moist lips, and he could feel her buck against him. He used her useless struggles to tease her nub and grasped her hips more firmly.
'Yes, I'm going to make you howl tonight, Hermione. Wherever you are, they are going to hear you. Hear you pleading, crying out my name and screaming for me.' His testicles retracted slightly in reaction to her movements as his tongue licked her nub. He hummed as he sucked on her, rolling his tongue against her until she undulated. He held firm, feeling her squirm and trying to twist. He laughed as she began to buck against him wildly. 'Yes, scream, Hermione. Cry out. Beg me to stop. I can't hear you but I can feel you.' She was so wet. He licked her, disgruntled that he couldn't taste her sweet juices. 'Soon, I will know what you taste like.' Her hands fisted as she arched her back, her shoulders digging into the mattress, her mouth wide open. Her body jerked, fell and arched again and again. He continued until she fell onto the mattress, reaching for him as if pleading for him to stop, her mouth open in a silent cry. He hated the silence. 'There. Now she's ready.'
He was so tight in anticipation, he thought he'd burst. The pressure in his testicles was nearly painful, so tight, it made it hard for him to control himself. Her body tensed with each plunge. 'Yes, she's still sensitive, still hot.' He felt spasms begin to at the base of his cock with each thrust, his testicles relaxing, then retracting again, pulling up, tightening. 'She isn't there yet, and I'm about to burst.' He flicked her nub a few times, stroking her as he pulled out slowly, and she bucked her hips, her head thrashing from side to side, and he began to pound into her, riding her hard. He could feel her clench down on him, and his movements became urgent, driven by his own need. She arched her back as he felt his release, the hot, jetting spasms shooting down his penis shaft and into her.
His release eased into euphoria, followed by a sense of completion as he braced himself above her. He loomed over her, his arms extended with his elbows locked straight, his hands on either side of her head as their eyes locked onto each others, and he smiled, knowing he'd just blew her mind.
Severus woke up again, sweating and panting in post ejaculate bliss. He hadn't moved much; he was still sitting, propped up in his bed, the forgotten book having been shoved aside. This is some kind of curse! More than just Lustful Dreams Spell or a Dream Fantasies Spell. There is Dark magic to this curse. Irritably, he called for a house-elf to change his sheets and give him a change of pajamas. I'm going to find out what you did, witch... or who did this to us. But I will find out trust me.
~H~
Hermione woke up on her cot, gasping, her heart pounding and head swimming. She had been having recurrences of the lovemaking dream practically each night. It had started out the same the first few nights, floating in water as if she were a water nymph, then changed with her hovering over Snape like a ghostly apparition. Lately, the dreams took place in other places, most recently a four-poster bed with the dark blue, silky sheets, which was obviously his bed or her mind's creation of his bed. Only I've never given his bed any thought before. I'd assumed that he slept in a regular bed, not one so lavishly appointed with thick, plush pillows and silk sheets.
The bed, or what she could remember of it, was large, with gossamer hangings and dark blue drapes that matched the dark blue silk sheets and white down comforter. He'd even had multiple pillows, two in dark blue pillowcases, two in white and two in a soft gold fabric. It isn't the kind of bed I'd have imagined for him... Even if I would've tried to imagine him in a bed at all, it certainly wouldn't have been that bed! Something all shrouded in black possibly with green accents or all green for Slytherin no, all black, like he dresses. The room beyond the bed seemed airy and light. As if I'd imagined only the bed and had it up in the clouds somewhere!
Another night they'd been outside under the covered walkway of a garden. I would never have agreed to having sex outside in the open where just anyone could walk up on us! Tonight she'd been floating with him again as if in a cloud, then settled down onto soft grass. She could still feel the texture of the grass on her skin, could still feel the throbbing inside her as if he were still making love to her. Her nipples were still hard and standing out erect from his suckling, and she could still feel where his hands had grasped her hips as he plunged into her. This is maddening! It's so real, yet so surreal. Ginny still slept soundly in her bed, oblivious, thankfully, that Hermione had been dreaming of Severus again. Again!
His hands on her body were artful, and he was quickly learning her every sensitive spot and took pleasure in driving her mad with desire either before or while he was plunging into her. Still, it was incomplete. I can feel him, touch him, but not hear him. I can feel the vibration of his low, growling laugh on my skin when he's pleased or feel him laugh against my mouth when he kisses me. But it's silent, like in a silent movie show, or like actually being underwater and being able to breathe. She wasn't growing gills or fins, so she knew that was just part of the dream. Snape liked having her straddle him, either lying down beneath her or sitting up, looking up at her as he watched her move, sliding and grinding on his stiff penis, grasping her hips as he helped her movements by thrusting up into her. His rhythm was usually in perfect sync with hers.
She was amazed at how often he varied their position and astounded that she was completely unable to resist him. He controlled their lovemaking, he positioned her, and he took charge. It's like he's really here, or I'm there and we're really together. I fall asleep, and my mind seems to reach out to him, finding him, and without any words as if it's simply understood, I shag him. Oh, gods! What if it's like Ginny and Harry's dreams? What if he feels everything I do senses me, sees me! She covered her mouth to keep from screaming. Ginny said that she and Harry had the same dreams every detail as if they were actually together. Does he? Could Severus be having the same dreams? Are we truly connecting in these dreams?
She began to panic. He'll murder me! If he's alive he'll kill me! If he's alive... but I saw him. He was dead when we left the Shrieking Shack.
She pulled out her vial of Sleeping Potion and took a large sip, just enough to quiet her nerves and allow her to fall asleep and not dream about him. She waited to feel the effects of the potion before she closed her eyes. I'm going to have to talk to Luna. She'll be able to....
~S~
Severus strolled out into the garden again just about the time he knew that Hermione would be falling asleep. The garden was dark tonight, the moon barely a sliver in the starry sky. The manicured hedges looked ominous tonight, and the gravel walkway crunched under his boots. He wore only a warm cloak to cover his body, knowing that she would be coming to him again soon. He found three stone benches in a ring of hedges, surrounding a small fountain and smiled. Perfect. Dark, secluded and eerie, with only the trickle of the water and the sound of crickets filling the still night around us. And Lucius won't walk in on us me. Sitting down to wait, he slid his hips forward and reclined a slightly on the bench, his boots firmly planted on the gravel.
Twelve nights she'd come to him. The first night of the visits was on the full moon, he remembered with perfect clarity. It was the night he'd woken up from his coma after that terrible bite to his neck. Narcissa had their family Healer attending to me, using the potions that I'd brewed in case I or any of the Malfoys were bitten by Nagini. He smiled remembering Narcissa's face looking over him when he'd opened his eyes, the moonlight making her look like an angel. Only she wasn't his angel that night. It was Hermione Granger who'd awakened me that night my sexual apparition, my ethereal wraith. He could still feel the disappointment from the three nights that she hadn't come to him. Although, one of those was the night of the Malfoys' party when I'd drunk too much and passed out in my room she'd not visited me then I think. Or had she and found me passed out on my bed? Would she have used my body anyway? The thought that she would aroused him.
In the dream three nights ago, she'd pushed his hair from his face, her soft, brown eyes locked onto his as he held her straddled on his lap, thrusting into her. She looked at him hungrily, the pleasure of his cock inside her evident on her face, and he loved that. I'll have her do it again. She didn't cringe or recoil when he embraced her in these dreams, always reaching out to him, eager for him. Still, why in all Hades is it Hermione Granger who comes to me in these dreams? Of all the witches I know, why her?
These dreams were becoming constant. He could control them, to a point, varying the technique of his sexual assault on Hermione's body, but he couldn't change her face. It is always her. And now he actually wanted her. He wanted to have her, possess her, to take her willing body and hear her moaning beneath him, to hear her gasping out as he used her, and hear her screaming his name. In the dreams he could feel her, touch her, but he couldn't taste her or actually hear her.
He closed his eyes, his head resting on the stone behind him, listening to the soft night sounds. Within minutes he could feel her presence, and he welcomed her, holding his hand out to grasp hers, pulling her to him. She was dressed in a nightshirt tonight that fell just to her thighs. He smiled. 'So like a child, yet so like a woman.' He opened his cloak exposing himself, and her eyes scanned down his lean frame, unembarrassed until her eyes fell on his stiff penis. He pulled her closer, turning her around and having her sit on his lap. She nestled against his chest, comfortably, allowing him to caress her. With one hand he parted her legs, his fingers caressing her moist lips, fingering her as the other slid up under her shirt to cup a breast. It didn't take long to have her squirming in his lap. He kissed her shoulder as he pushed her off him and turned her around, coaxing her to straddle his hips on the bench. She took the hint easily, climbing onto the bench, her knees tight against his hips. He tugged at her nightshirt, gliding his fingers teasingly on her skin as he raised the fabric up her body. He his penis rubbed against her moist lips, coating himself with her wetness as she held onto his shoulders, and he pushed his tip into her. 'Okay, take me in.' Slowly, she lowered herself onto him, the look of ecstasy on her face as she slid down his penis quite enjoyable to watch. 'Yes, Hermione, I will let you control tonight's union. Ride me. I want to watch you pleasure yourself on me...'
He placed both of his hands on her waist, easing the nightshirt up, and he got her to remove it as he watched her with an appreciative smirk on his face. 'Beautiful. Nice breasts, pert nipples, small waist, round hips, her body is so well formed...' He tossed the garment away. 'You won't need this anyway. I want to see you, watch your breasts bounce when I take control...' His hands stroked her body as she lifted and lowered on him in a maddeningly slow pace. He pulled her body forward so that he could lick and suckle on her nipples and tried to refrain from thrusting into her. 'Yet.'
Hermione's eyes closed, and her head rolled languorously as she moved over him. He grasped her hip, making her tilt forward so that her nub would rub against his pubic hair, deepening his penetration in the process, feeling himself inside her. Her eyes opened, looking down at him, and she smiled. When she began to tighten on him, her breathing becoming hard and erratic, he cupped her hips with his hands and guided her. She began to rock, swaying, and she grasped the stone behind his head, and he smiled as he watched her. 'She's beautiful in the throes of passion, uninhibited and expressive.' Her expressions excited him, and his testicles tightened, the spasms starting to ripple at the base of his penis while he watched her. 'Oh, yeah, witch, that's it...'
He could feel her tighten on him, and he watched her expressions as her pleasure built as she rode him, making his testicles retract and loosen again with each of her small spasms. 'Yes, witch, come on me...' He increased the force of his thrusts, and she gasped, her mouth open as if moaning. 'That's it... come, Hermione, come...' His balls were so taut, he knew that he'd release too soon. He wasn't going to wait. He urged her to move faster, to ride him harder, meeting each downward movement of her body with a hard push. She tried to match him, her rhythm increasing as he pounded into her. His tightness in testicles restricted like a rubber band and then snapped suddenly, just letting go. 'Yes, gods oh, good... so good...' He grasped her hips, thrusting into her forcefully as the rushing release, the warm, jetting pulses shot down his penis shaft into her. 'Hermione! Oh, gods, Hermione!' He was only vaguely aware of her shuddering and tightening on him as he climaxed.
She collapsed on him in post coital bliss, and he wrapped his cloak around her, holding her possessively, still firmly inside of her, waiting until she moved or shifted so he could start all over again. Her hair tickled his nose, so he moved her hair from the side of her face and kissed her. 'Tomorrow. I'm going to find you tomorrow. You're going to be mine. No more dreams, Hermione tomorrow I will have you feel you hear you and taste you. Tomorrow, it will be for real.' He cupped her cheek as she turned her head to return his kiss, and he allowed her to shift over him and kiss him. 'Sweet, Hermione, so tender and sweet.' She sat up, her fingers pushing the hair from his face to look at him closely. She smiled as he reached down and fondled her breasts. She tried to adjust herself or to rise off him, and he clasped her to him tightly, and he pushed his penis up into her. Her eyes widened, and she bit her lip, rolling her hips along his stiffening penis. 'Yes, that's it, witch, ride me again.' He smiled encouragingly, letting her rub herself against him, obviously pleasuring herself. 'Yes, tomorrow, Hermione no more dreams tomorrow I will find you.'
~ T B C ~>
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Author's notes:
A huge thank you and hugs to my beta Southern_Witch_69 for all her help, suggestions and clean-up work. I appreciate it so very much, who without her help this story would never get validated on this site!
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Hi! Loved this chapter. But it occured it me that the Longbottom's wedding date has apparently been changed again and this time with no real reason. It was originally in Sept. but thenbylu changed it to August to allow them a honeymoon but as they're quite close to the start of term the early August date has passed in your timeline and you mention again in this chapter the wedding happening in September. Why the back and forth? The dinner party was great, the actions totally believable for the characters as you've made them.
Response from Mellbell (Reviewer)
Okay, I shouldn't have posted this before reading the response to my previous review. I appologize for taking up your time/space on minor details. Sometimes I just need to hold my quill and let the unanswered questions go. I truly love your story!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
No don't think that you've taken up my time at all with your question. It's totally fine, and I appreciate the comments, especially that you took the time to contact me. I tend to have a thousand little 'extras' in my stories, loads of little facts, historical tidbits, I look up the plants and make up a lot of them, same as the creatures and insects... but there are those little frizzies, as areabella called them, not actual threads that I intend to wrap up at the end. RL has those unanswered questions - and I admit, I'm doing this as entertainment because I love the Potterverse and I love to write. I had a team of three review every chapter and even they miss things now and again. I have another reader that also points out things much like your review - and I now have them email me rather than point it out onsite. You could do the same, it's totally fine. Have a great week and happy reading.
So I read this originally on GE, but after a while got tired of waiting. Came across it now complete here on TPP and decided to give it a go. Because its completed I doubt you'll make changes, but I thought Lucius asked Severus in obe of the early chapters to help him make a Pensive and in this chapter there is mention of a "family" Pensive. So did Severus help him make this one or was Lucius wanting a second Pensive? Or plot hole? Or my mistaken memory? Brilliant story thus far! Can't wait to keep reading!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you for reading, and i'm glad you were able to find it here. No, I'm not at all concerned about this minor thing on the pensive. Gad, even JKR had plot holes! I'd have to go back and read it, but it's not a big thing in the overall story actually a very minor blip. So no, not something that I'd go back and 'fix'. It's no big deal. However, one can assume that maybe Voldemort had the 'family pensive' or possibly one of the others... who knows. We don't even know if Lucius was an only child. However, in a long story like this there are things that get over looked and my betas do catch the important things for me as does my alpha reader - they knew where I was going. I hope you like it nonetheless.
Response from Mellbell (Reviewer)
Okay 😊 I am really loving this story. Thanks for answering.
So glad to see this. The Ending/Epiloque was rather rushed, but enjoyable. You had a few minor errors. like Weeding/Wedding.So Hermione and her sister are named the same.. Even after their memories are restored?I would laugh if she ended up at Hogwarts too. or the Aussie version.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Sorry, but epi's are short and summary aren't they? It was the happy every after because you know they will bething. I didn't want to dredge on and on after all... lol so sorry if I disappointed. Once you've named a child do you go and change it? Besides, they will live in AU and Hermione and Severus will visit on occasion - if not her parents come back to visit her. Thank you for reading and for the review.
It was such a joy to read this story! Everything worked out perfectly in the end.
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I'm so glad that you liked the ending. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Poor Hermione is definitely getting overwhelmed, but at least she doesn't seem to feel too uncomfortable. And the hunt for the Death Eaters continues. Hopefully that will be over sooner rather than later. At least with Hermione at school for the most part she is safe, but once school ends, I don't see her taking kindly to having her movements restricted.
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You're so right
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
, she's dafe for now, but unless they are all caught, she won't like the restrictions. Thank you for reading and for the review.
At least publicly Severus did somewhat better. Looks like they need to better communicate what their roles at these events should be. And he really does need to get better at asking questions over jumping to conclusions. And an interesting aside, Bulgarian has a lot in common with Russian. While I was never fluent, I still remember many of the common phrases. Of course traveling all over, I know the common phrases for many countries, though never went anywhere they spoke Russian.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
You are soo right, he does. And they do need to learn to communiate in a healthy maner. It' will come. (I cheated using a online site, so I hope I got the words right.) I envy you traveling, but someday, when I win $$ - I'm going ! Thank you for reading and for the review.
So nice to have a chapter full of happiness and good news. And Molly and Arthur have more than earned a decent place to live.
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I'm delighted that you enjoyed this one. Yep, A and M did, and H and G didn't need the house... Thank you for reading and for the review.
Well, that all went surprisingly well. Severus only had one moment of being irrational and seems to be learning some respect for the students who made his life hell. And Hermione didn't have anyone trying to kill her, nice change of pace for her.
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Didn't it? He's trying and she's safe, for now. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Ah, nothing like having more than one holiday dinner is there? Makes me kind of glad I don't live closer to family and have to deal with that sort of thing. LOL At least Severus is trying. And poor Hermione, she still doesn't understand what she's gotten herself into and that there is more to Severus' family than she thinks.
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Yes, over stuff! lol but it was fun planning the menu. Yes, he is trying, and yep, Hermione is finding out he has family - let alone the extent. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Wow, so much happened here. If I was poor Hermione I'd be on the verge of a breakdown wondering if I would ever be safe. And what a wake up call for poor Maggie, not that she doesn't deserve it. Not to mention how overwhelming society has to be for Hermione. Hopefully a sit down with Narcissa will help her feel less uncomfortable.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, maggie - I thought that a bit of her history would be a nice touch, not that she isn't a pill. Yep, the social elite, and when I type them, I look at the social elite of the 1800's, the polished outward manners of magical society when compared to its inward machinationsthe and the assumptions and morals, fastidious rules of magical society lol She will have mments with Narcissa. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Thank you so much for this completely wonderful update, I loved it!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
You are more than welcome. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Quite a bit of time passage here but NEWTs are finally done. Liked the 'surprise potion'. Sounds like things I accidently do in the kitchen.Only two more chapters? Well I hope we have quite a bit of Severus/Talfryn time. Love and acceptance all around, happy house elves and Ron with a new love.Enjoying myself (obviously)
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Yes, I did skip a bit, sorry, but there wasn't much on the calender going on, just normal day to day boring... I'm glad that you like the 'discovery' potion. Troll warts cure. Well, there are 62 and a Epilogue in total, so we are getting there. I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Yay! Talfryn's back. I've missed the old codger.Enjoyed the work on the potions and the dinner party.Great chapter. Thanks for sharing.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yep, you get to see him again. I love the wizard. I'm so glad that you did. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Wow so much going on in this chapter. A lot was covered. I'd say Severus needs to get over his jealousy but I suspect with his personality it will never happen.I chuckled about the flower heads as I just recently havested some and was amazed at how many tiny seeds were in one little flower stem.Enjoying the little details you add.Thanks for sharing.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
He is a possissive type and it will come out. I'm gld that you liked the flowerhead bit - I've harvested once and you're right. I'm so glad you enjoy the little bits. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Good to see Severus more accepting of the Bulgarian buddies. Lots of action.Good chapter.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Well, he had to, but once he realized they were not after Hermione in a sexual way, he calmed down. Yep, lots of action. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Ooh Valentine's Day and a battle and where oh where is Hermione. Good thing I let you get ahead of me!Great chapter!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
I'm so glad you enjoyed this, and you're right, you get to go to the next chapter and find out! Happy reading. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Hermione, you just need to embrace that your life has changed. We all know you saw your future a certain way, but that's not what's happened. Get over it. It was nice to see that she seemed to enjoy the party, especially since she has several more to attend. And Severus is being such a good sport and not being too much of a grouch about being drug out of his comfort zone.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Good advice. Yep, it was a lovely party and Severus held up well. Part of being Head of Slytherin and Headmaster - being in the social elite. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Oh I hope there is more than one chapter to go. Still seems to have a lot yet to do.Great chapter. You conveyed the tenseness of the situation well.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
62 and a Epilogue, then, yep, it's done! I'm hoping I tie things up satisfactorily. I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for reading and for the review.
He took the intrusion relatively well. You really can teach an old dog new tricks, can't you? Nice look for Hermione into his youth, even though it wasn't happy.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
He did, although it was expected - he knew it would happen someday. Not a happy past, but a brighter tomorrow. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Very cool that Hermione solved the mystery, mostly anyway. She almost had Reginald impressed. Given that Hermione kept Neville from blowing up cauldrons and kept Trevor alive, I think she knows more about ingredients than he thinks she does. And I like the idea of it being a new
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and not Faweks.
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Yep, she solved a big part of Severus' puzzle, and worked out his family tree. Yes, of curse she does, and she has an amazing memory. I'm glad you like the new baby
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
. She will be good for Severus. Thank you for reading and for the review.
So many new events here. Once again Hermione is learning there is practice involved with magic and not just what you learn out of a book. Hopefully Severus will overcome his protective side to help her learn better control of her magic. And nice with them each getting a chance to nurse the other back to health.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, she does have to, and in time she will. Severus may never overcome his protective side, it's one of the things we love about him, but he will have to teach her control her magic. Thankyou for reading and for the review.
Oh, Hermione, nice try trying to trick Reginald, but he's too smart for that. LOL Though this chapter does answer quite nicely why Severus never published any of his findings. I like how he tried to dance around his other obligations before finally admitting the level of trust others had for him was pretty low
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, he is and she should have known better. Cheating never works. Yes, I think it was a bit of an embarrassing sore point, and something he really wanted to change, but to be a fully proficient spy, you have to keep a lot of seccets and play roles well and he did it too well. Most people read others at 'face value' and don't look beyond that. Now that part of his past is over, hopefully he can get the recognition and respect he's wanted. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Poor Severus. He's fighting against her small bit of prudery. He's going to slowly go insane at this rate. Though Hermione should just lighten up and embrace the fact her life has taken a rather odd turn.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
She's young and becoming more aware and comfortable, but he is an intense man, it takes time getting use to the type/amount of passion he has. I agree, she should and she will. Thank you for reading and for the review.
His hard work has finally paid off. The magic in those three simple words is pretty impressive. Now he just needs to keep it up so she doesn't think he was just acting that way to have sex with her.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, those three little words was all she needed to hear - but she needs to be able to see that Severus shows her everyday that he loves her as well. I love you is hard for some men to articulate. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Eeeeeep! I'm pretty sure the people who did this will regret it when Severus begins to tear the world apart to get Hermione back. He's going to make Liam Neeson's character in Taken look like a helpless Muggle puppy. And that's if she's alive and well.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
LOL Well, they wanted his attention. Thank you for reading and for the review.