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The Plight-Trothed Bride

1: The Moon-Song Rhythm

2: Burgeoning Consequence

3: Persistent Enchantment

4: Now and Forever

5: Rough Beginnings

6: Relentless Persistence

7: Troublesome Misconceptions

8: Troubles and Traitors

9: Prisoner of Azkaban

10: The Ministry of Magic

11: The Second Visit

12: Announcements and Tidings

13: Question of Freedom

14: Troubled Decisions

15: Mistaken Intent

16: Friendly Intervention

17: The First Date

18: The Big Birthday Adventure

19: Duncansby Head

20: Squabbles and Shopping

21: Regulations and Requests

22: Return to Spinner’s End

23: Good Intents and Interventions

24: Tea, Books, and Answers

25: Her Knight Errant

26: Burgeoning Intimacies

27: The Snakes in the Grass

28: House of Rose and Thorns

29: Unwillingly Trapped

30: Facing Friends

31: On Heather Moor

32: Revived and Wedded

33: First Days

34: Enlightening Visitations

35: The Headmaster Returns

36: The Prince Family Tree

37: The Osgood Family Secret

38: Into the Flames

39: Interrogation and Inquiries

40: Trying Romantic On

41: Trying Assertive Romance

42: A Magical Pact

43: Potions and Consequences

44: Breaking the Curse

45: Phoenix Tears

46: Nesting Invasions

47: The End of Term

48: Débuted and Eluded

49: Christmas Eve

50: Intervention and Surprises

51: Christmas Surprises

52: Malfoys Christmas Ball

53: Boxing Day

54: A Magical New Year’s

55: Assaults and Misunderstandings

56: Comeuppance and Surprises

57: Achievements and Failures

58: The Colubridae Snake

59: Jealousy and Flowers

60: Validation and Rediscovery/Congratulations

61: Preparations and Projects

62: The Great Retrieval Quest

63: School Is Over

The Plight-Trothed Bride

beaweasley2

1,194 Reviews   |   1,194 Ratings, 0 Likes, 339 Favorites )

Romance General Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge 470,308 Words 71 Chapters Complete
Ginevra Weasley Hermione Granger Luna Lovegood Lucius Malfoy Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Harry Potter Original Character Rita Skeeter Neville Longbottom Kingsley Shacklebolt Kreacher Angelina Johnson Arthur Weasley Bill Weasley Fleur Delacour George Weasley Molly Weasley Percy Weasley Remus Lupin Teddy Remus Lupin Minerva McGonagall Narcissa Malfoy Draco Malfoy Travers (Death Eater) Augusta (Gran) Longbottom Albus Dumbledore Charlie Weasley Poppy Pomfrey Astoria Greengrass Dean Thomas Antonin Dolohov Mulciber (Death Eater) Mr. Ollivander Cho Chang Filius Flitwick Rubeus Hagrid

Hermione, Ginny and Luna, sharing a girl moment, decide to cast a Pairing-Plight Troth Charm on themselves for fun. Each placed in the cauldron one yesterday-today-and-tomorrow flower with sugar and spice and everything nice, and a snip, a snail and puppy-dog tail as they each said the rhyme. For Ginny, the results are exactly what she expected, and for Luna, she was only mildly surprised. However, for Hermione, the results were disastrous! She thought she’d be paired to Ron and live happily ever after. So what happened and why is she seeing Professor Snape in her dreams? He’s dead – isn’t he?

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Chapters (63)

Chapter 1: The Moon-Song Rhythm

Chapter 2: Burgeoning Consequence

Chapter 3: Persistent Enchantment

Chapter 4: Now and Forever

Chapter 5: Rough Beginnings

Chapter 6: Relentless Persistence

Chapter 7: Troublesome Misconceptions

Chapter 8: Troubles and Traitors

Chapter 9: Prisoner of Azkaban

Chapter 10: The Ministry of Magic

Chapter 11: The Second Visit

Chapter 12: Announcements and Tidings

Chapter 13: Question of Freedom

Chapter 14: Troubled Decisions

Chapter 15: Mistaken Intent

Chapter 16: Friendly Intervention

Chapter 17: The First Date

Chapter 18: The Big Birthday Adventure

Chapter 19: Duncansby Head

Chapter 20: Squabbles and Shopping

Chapter 21: Regulations and Requests

Chapter 22: Return to Spinner’s End

Chapter 23: Good Intents and Interventions

Chapter 24: Tea, Books, and Answers

Chapter 25: Her Knight Errant

Chapter 26: Burgeoning Intimacies

Chapter 27: The Snakes in the Grass

Chapter 28: House of Rose and Thorns

Chapter 29: Unwillingly Trapped

Chapter 30: Facing Friends

Chapter 31: On Heather Moor

Chapter 32: Revived and Wedded

Chapter 33: First Days

Chapter 34: Enlightening Visitations

Chapter 35: The Headmaster Returns

Chapter 36: The Prince Family Tree

Chapter 37: The Osgood Family Secret

Chapter 38: Into the Flames

Chapter 39: Interrogation and Inquiries

Chapter 40: Trying Romantic On

Chapter 41: Trying Assertive Romance

Chapter 42: A Magical Pact

Chapter 43: Potions and Consequences

Chapter 44: Breaking the Curse

Chapter 45: Phoenix Tears

Chapter 46: Nesting Invasions

Chapter 47: The End of Term

Chapter 48: Débuted and Eluded

Chapter 49: Christmas Eve

Chapter 50: Intervention and Surprises

Chapter 51: Christmas Surprises

Chapter 52: Malfoys Christmas Ball

Chapter 53: Boxing Day

Chapter 54: A Magical New Year’s

Chapter 55: Assaults and Misunderstandings

Chapter 56: Comeuppance and Surprises

Chapter 57: Achievements and Failures

Chapter 58: The Colubridae Snake

Chapter 59: Jealousy and Flowers

Chapter 60: Validation and Rediscovery/Congratulations

Chapter 61: Preparations and Projects

Chapter 62: The Great Retrieval Quest

Chapter 63: School Is Over


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beaweasley2

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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company. 

“Imagination does not become great until human beings, given the courage and the strength, use it to create.”― Maria Montessori
 “Our imagination flies -- we are its shadow on the earth.”― Vladimir Nabokov 
“Imagination is everything. It is the preview of life's coming attractions.”― Albert Einstein

“Imagination will often carry us to worlds that never were, but without it we go nowhere.” ― Carl Sagan

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10/10

pookah

I like Kingsley using Legillimency to give Hermione a message.  Good Ole Kingsley!   And it only  makes sense that Severus would not be thrilled to be bound for life to someone without his consent! Excellent tale, looking forward to more.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you so much for your supportive review. I hope to have another chapter ready to post soon.

10/10

Charmaine

It is good, please continue

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. I plan to... I have several more chapters written out already!

10/10

Maddie

A very entertaining story. I cringe at the thought of Hermione being intimate with an angry Severus Snape. I know she brought this all on herself, but I feel sorry for her. I did note that Severus utilized the term "used" for intimacy. That guy has a long way to go.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you for the comments. When I was typing this, with my boyfriend hanging over my shoulder, he was telling me how he’d have reacted to be ensnared like this… Therefore, I went with it. (And as a consequence it changed my plot and my outline, but what the heck, it’s for fun right?) I’ve also been using terms my boyfriend used when I pinned him down and made him describe what a man’s orgasm feels like. (Try that sometime – make your guy describe what it feels like, in detail, and watch them squirm. It was hilarious!) So, this story grew – and since I intend this to be a romance, I had to throw in a few problems, things to work through together and a couple of obstacles. In the end – he’ll come around when he realizes Hermione will stand by him and still try to make things work. That and Lucius… well, you’ll see.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you for the comments. When I was typing this, with my boyfriend hanging over my shoulder, he was telling me how he’d have reacted to be ensnared like this… Therefore, I went with it. (And as a consequence it changed my plot and my outline, but what the heck, it’s for fun right?) I’ve also been using terms my boyfriend used when I pinned him down and made him describe what a man’s orgasm feels like. (Try that sometime – make your guy describe what it feels like, in detail, and watch them squirm. It was hilarious!) So, this story grew – and since I intend this to be a romance, I had to throw in a few problems, things to work through together and a couple of obstacles. In the end – he’ll come around when he realizes Hermione will stand by him and still try to make things work. That and Lucius… well, you’ll see.

10/10

barbied011

Great chapter.  Sev has every right to be angry...besides an angry Snape is a sexy Snape.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you very much. I have to agree with you.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you very much. I have to agree with you.

9/10

Shadow

I really like the interation between the Malfoys and Severus, especially Severus' guest list. I wonder how they will react when they find out who his "bride" is?


Severus needs to calm down and realise they are meant to be together, or the charm would not have bonded them to each other, so buck up and get happy, Sev!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. I wanted Severus to have a friend he could relax and be himself with. The banter regarding the guest list was a bit of humor to lighten what was otherwise a depressing chapter. So far the Malfoys don’t know it’s Hermione… and yes, it will be interesting when they find out. Don’t worry about Severus, he has a few personal hurtles to get through, but he’ll come around.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. I wanted Severus to have a friend he could relax and be himself with. The banter regarding the guest list was a bit of humor to lighten what was otherwise a depressing chapter. So far the Malfoys don’t know it’s Hermione… and yes, it will be interesting when they find out. Don’t worry about Severus, he has a few personal hurtles to get through, but he’ll come around.

10/10

Linwe Numenesse

Well, rought beginnings it is.  Poor Hermoine.  She really didn't realize how much of a pissed off bastard he can be. I understand but it is still hard to deal with. Like Lucius said, he'll come around and make up sex is soooo much better. This really would have been a hard chapter to write for me too. I'm a happy ending kinda girl. I think you did a very good job of it.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. You completely grasp the situation and you are absolutely correct. Don’t worry, it will take a while to get there, but this is a happy ending story. I promise.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. You completely grasp the situation and you are absolutely correct. Don’t worry, it will take a while to get there, but this is a happy ending story. I promise.

10/10

Linwe Numenesse

Nosey arsed witch and ministry! Leave them alone. Glad to see they have finally gotten togather. Poor Severus, I smell trouble a brewing for him and Hermoine too.


Off to read the next one.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Unfortunately, Maggie Whitmire isn’t the only nosey arsed witch, and yes, there is trouble brewing ahead for Severus, on several fronts…
Happy reading!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Unfortunately, Maggie Whitmire isn’t the only nosey arsed witch, and yes, there is trouble brewing ahead for Severus, on several fronts…
Happy reading!

10/10

Linwe Numenesse

*phew* (fans self) that was really good! aaahhhh Lucius *sigh* whoops, not reading about lucius this time, must stay focused.


This is really coming along...geez sorry, pun not really intended but....


Anywho, keep up the good work.. :)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. I’ll try. ice - ice helps...

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. I’ll try. ice - ice helps...

10/10

Linwe Numenesse

Oh boy, what happens next? Will he find her and if other people see him what will happen, they think he's dead!  aaaahhh I cant' wait...must read more! Love it!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. All your questions will be answered - eventually.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. All your questions will be answered - eventually.

10/10

Linwe Numenesse

Very good chapter. Very good fic. Sorry this is so short but its after midnight and I have to get up in the early morning.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thak you. I appreciate the support. Best of luck tomorrow.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thak you. I appreciate the support. Best of luck tomorrow.

0/10

MollysSister

Well at least Hermione and Severus have Kingsley on their side. That makes me worry far less. You wont torture your tender readers for too much longer will you??

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yes, there is much more going on than Hermione or Severus knows at this point. Severus has a few people on his side… you’ll see. As for torture – sorry, but things will take a downfall before getting better… sorry.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yes, there is much more going on than Hermione or Severus knows at this point. Severus has a few people on his side… you’ll see. As for torture – sorry, but things will take a downfall before getting better… sorry.

0/10

MollysSister

I completely understand why Severus is upset at being tricked into this bonding. Not everyone can be as accepting as Neville was. Maybe if Lucius shares his story Snape can start getting over it?

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you for the review. Yep, he’s pissed at being trapped. Harry didn't take it too well either and he loves Ginny! Severus does know a bit about Lucius and Narcissa’s bonding, although Lucius is going to talk to Severus about it…

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you for the review. Yep, he’s pissed at being trapped. Harry didn't take it too well either and he loves Ginny! Severus does know a bit about Lucius and Narcissa’s bonding, although Lucius is going to talk to Severus about it…

10/10

barbied011

I love possessive Sev...Can't wait to read the next chapter.  Unfortunately, I have to work in the morning so I have to wait until tomorrow.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. Have a good day at work!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. Have a good day at work!

0/10

MollysSister

Rut Row! I hope the aurors dont try to take him to prision. That would be bad if Hermione has to come too. Sex every night for the rest of their lives. Thats a lot of sex. HEY is anyone using birthcontrol? oh my!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yep, oh oh. If the Aurors get him first… and you’ll see about the rest. Don’t want to give away too much here, but good questions!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yep, oh oh. If the Aurors get him first… and you’ll see about the rest. Don’t want to give away too much here, but good questions!

10/10

barbied011

I can't wait for Sev to find Hermione!  :)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

He will and soon.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

He will and soon.

10/10

Linwe Numenesse

Yes, indeed! All smuty goodness and a very cute, plot to wrap it all up in! I really like this first chappie and I am positive the rest will match.  Very good. I am so hooked.


Snape with Narcissa....hhhhmmm. lets see how this works out. 


Love it!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. I’m glad you are enjoying this. I’m afraid it’s Lucius and Narcissa. She was simply there taking care of him – my way of alluding to how Severus survived Nagini’s bite – the Malfoys saved him, but it was Hermione’s spell that pulled him out of his coma!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. I’m glad you are enjoying this. I’m afraid it’s Lucius and Narcissa. She was simply there taking care of him – my way of alluding to how Severus survived Nagini’s bite – the Malfoys saved him, but it was Hermione’s spell that pulled him out of his coma!

10/10

MollysSister

OU la la! I hope he does find her! Although stalking the halls of Hogwarts might be a bit much! Oh I am so glad there is anoher chapter for me to read!

have I mentioned how much I enjoy your sex scenes? I cant wait to find out who you are after the reveal and read all your stuff!!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. Wow, what a compliment. I'm glad you like my steamy scenes. Oh, he finds her... don't worry, he finds her.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. Wow, what a compliment. I'm glad you like my steamy scenes. Oh, he finds her... don't worry, he finds her.

0/10

bellasol67

First, let me say that I'm enjoying your story very much. Second, just to get it off my mind, the word 'nads', for whatever reason I found that particular term distracting...however, it's not stopping me from reading and it's your story, I'm only a humble reader.


Now, the meat and potatoes part of my review. Yes, Snape was wronged, oh boo hoo! Hermione  f---d up, but what makes him think this is enjoyable for her. I don't expect him to be all lovey dovey, but I would hope that he would be a bit more respectful...what I'm really hoping is that Hermione herself gets a pair of 'nads' and she can stand up a bit more to him.


Lastly, I'm rather enjoying the Malfoy's right now. I would love to see an engagement party take place, of course w/ certain restrictions as to avoid needless hexing.


Looking forward to your next update, and as for hotness, this chapter had it, but even if your scenes were more warm than hot, the story would still rock.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

I don’t normally use the word ‘nads,’ except my boyfriend does, so I’ve been using it in his POV. I also made him describe what an orgasm feels like… Ever try to get a guy to describe his orgasm? Thy it sometime – it’s hilarious!
In regards to Snape being more respectful and such, chap 7, and Yes, Hermione does begin to stand up to him. For now she’s a bit intimidated and unsure of things. I’m glad you are enjoying the exchange between the Malfoys and Snape. I always assumed that they would be friends, personable and that Lucius would have an ease around Snape, similar to the ease Draco had with him. So I added in a friendly banter and familiarity. However, I would think with the idea of having to invite Hagrid to their house as well as the Weasleys and Harry Potter, let alone the idea of inviting Grawp, would turn Narcissa off the idea of the engagement party! But I’ll consider it. But can you imagine Grawp in the Malfoy manor, poking his finger into the portraits, flicking the chandelier with is finger and drinking from the punch bowl?
Thank you for your compliment and your comments. I appreciate it very much. I hope to have my next chapter up soon. My beta his it and I just need to clean up my mistakes first.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

I don’t normally use the word ‘nads,’ except my boyfriend does, so I’ve been using it in his POV. I also made him describe what an orgasm feels like… Ever try to get a guy to describe his orgasm? Thy it sometime – it’s hilarious!
In regards to Snape being more respectful and such, chap 7, and Yes, Hermione does begin to stand up to him. For now she’s a bit intimidated and unsure of things. I’m glad you are enjoying the exchange between the Malfoys and Snape. I always assumed that they would be friends, personable and that Lucius would have an ease around Snape, similar to the ease Draco had with him. So I added in a friendly banter and familiarity. However, I would think with the idea of having to invite Hagrid to their house as well as the Weasleys and Harry Potter, let alone the idea of inviting Grawp, would turn Narcissa off the idea of the engagement party! But I’ll consider it. But can you imagine Grawp in the Malfoy manor, poking his finger into the portraits, flicking the chandelier with is finger and drinking from the punch bowl?
Thank you for your compliment and your comments. I appreciate it very much. I hope to have my next chapter up soon. My beta his it and I just need to clean up my mistakes first.

0/10

DanaPAH

This is an incredible story.  I really look forward to more.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. More is coming...

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. More is coming...

0/10

Brisinggammen

Now Severus would not be Severus, if he was all lovey-dovey right away. He has good reason to be angry.


And thank you for introducing Rita. Her and Umbridge are my favorite baddies..

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you for the supportive reveiw. Yes,he does have reasons to be angry and he's taking it out on Hermione, unfortunately, the one who put him in the situation.
I'm having fun using Rita. Yep, she's a bit a nuisance, who will drum up a bit of trouble... Oh, well.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you for the supportive reveiw. Yes,he does have reasons to be angry and he's taking it out on Hermione, unfortunately, the one who put him in the situation.
I'm having fun using Rita. Yep, she's a bit a nuisance, who will drum up a bit of trouble... Oh, well.

10/10

Charmaine

I loved it

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you.

10/10

June W

bug!!! :=(   should've Obliviated her.  I hope Harry and Mr Weasley get Severus exonerated ASAP so S&H can get on with just being happily married.  glad Arthur was able to get Kingsley there so quickly.  thanks for the new chapter!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. Yep, Rita is snooping around and creating a bit of mischief. There are a few people on Severus’ side, although he doesn’t know it yet. You’re very welcome for the update. I hope to give you the next one soon.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you. Yep, Rita is snooping around and creating a bit of mischief. There are a few people on Severus’ side, although he doesn’t know it yet. You’re very welcome for the update. I hope to give you the next one soon.

0/10

septentrion

Well, Severus has better come to terms with the situation quickly, or he'll soon see the tip of Hermione's wand.


The idea of a reception at the Malfoys, and the guest list, made me laugh. Narcissa will be able to show off her abilities in the matter!


I'm glad Hermione has support from her friends. I think she'll need it.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yes, well, Hermione is still trying to figure out how to make things work with Severus and isn’t too sure how to react to him. Severus is still pissed off about being ensnared by her, of all witches. It’s not ideal and they are both trying to cope, only she is trying to make it work, he’s simply using her. It’s not ideal. But, as their problems grow and situation changes, she will stand by him, which will…. Well, you’ll find out. Yes, Hermione has her friends to lean on, especially Ginny. It will work out in the end.
I threw in the ‘party plans’ as a touch of humor to enlighten a rather disturbing chapter. I’m glad it gave you a laugh. Thank you for the review, I appreciated the comments.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Yes, well, Hermione is still trying to figure out how to make things work with Severus and isn’t too sure how to react to him. Severus is still pissed off about being ensnared by her, of all witches. It’s not ideal and they are both trying to cope, only she is trying to make it work, he’s simply using her. It’s not ideal. But, as their problems grow and situation changes, she will stand by him, which will…. Well, you’ll find out. Yes, Hermione has her friends to lean on, especially Ginny. It will work out in the end.
I threw in the ‘party plans’ as a touch of humor to enlighten a rather disturbing chapter. I’m glad it gave you a laugh. Thank you for the review, I appreciated the comments.

8/10

zyra

Well, at least he did go slow with her until he was sure she's ready... that is quite considerable of him even though he was well, sort of... using her.


I sure hope he'll come around quick enough. For both of their's sake.


Narcissa's idea of reception party was funny. Imagine all of the guest on Hermione's list and those of Severus' list aiming their wands at each other... Narcissa is going to have one hard time being a host...


Can't wait for more...

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you for the review. Yes, Snape was at least being gentle and slow until Hermione was ready or into it. He’s not really a total jerk. Yes, things will work out in the end, I promise.
I thought Snape’s comments regarding the ‘guest list’ would be a nice touch of humor in what was actually a rather depressing chapter. But the idea of Snape’s, Lucius’ friends mixing with Hermione’s would be hilarious, especially if Grawp shows up!
I hope to have my next chapter ready to post really soon. Again, thank you for the comments.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you for the review. Yes, Snape was at least being gentle and slow until Hermione was ready or into it. He’s not really a total jerk. Yes, things will work out in the end, I promise.
I thought Snape’s comments regarding the ‘guest list’ would be a nice touch of humor in what was actually a rather depressing chapter. But the idea of Snape’s, Lucius’ friends mixing with Hermione’s would be hilarious, especially if Grawp shows up!
I hope to have my next chapter ready to post really soon. Again, thank you for the comments.

10/10

ladyluv

Interesting chapter - Severus wanted complicates there "happy marriage" but he is also complicating things because he is bitter and not wanting to be married - some much trouble for the couple - what road you will take them on should be interesting

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you very much for the review. Yep, you’ve pretty much nailed the problem. Well, one problem for the couple… I hope I don’t disappoint you with the road I’ve given them. Thank you again.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)

Thank you very much for the review. Yep, you’ve pretty much nailed the problem. Well, one problem for the couple… I hope I don’t disappoint you with the road I’ve given them. Thank you again.

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