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The Plight-Trothed Bride
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Hermione, Ginny and Luna, sharing a girl moment, decide to cast a Pairing-Plight Troth Charm on themselves for fun. Each placed in the cauldron one yesterday-today-and-tomorrow flower with sugar and spice and everything nice, and a snip, a snail and puppy-dog tail as they each said the rhyme. For Ginny, the results are exactly what she expected, and for Luna, she was only mildly surprised. However, for Hermione, the results were disastrous! She thought she’d be paired to Ron and live happily ever after. So what happened and why is she seeing Professor Snape in her dreams? He’s dead – isn’t he?
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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company.
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Reviews for The Plight-Trothed Bride
I like Kingsley using Legillimency to give Hermione a message. Good Ole Kingsley! And it only makes sense that Severus would not be thrilled to be bound for life to someone without his consent! Excellent tale, looking forward to more.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you so much for your supportive review. I hope to have another chapter ready to post soon.
It is good, please continue
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. I plan to... I have several more chapters written out already!
A very entertaining story. I cringe at the thought of Hermione being intimate with an angry Severus Snape. I know she brought this all on herself, but I feel sorry for her. I did note that Severus utilized the term "used" for intimacy. That guy has a long way to go.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you for the comments. When I was typing this, with my boyfriend hanging over my shoulder, he was telling me how hed have reacted to be ensnared like this Therefore, I went with it. (And as a consequence it changed my plot and my outline, but what the heck, its for fun right?) Ive also been using terms my boyfriend used when I pinned him down and made him describe what a mans orgasm feels like. (Try that sometime make your guy describe what it feels like, in detail, and watch them squirm. It was hilarious!) So, this story grew and since I intend this to be a romance, I had to throw in a few problems, things to work through together and a couple of obstacles. In the end hell come around when he realizes Hermione will stand by him and still try to make things work. That and Lucius well, youll see.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you for the comments. When I was typing this, with my boyfriend hanging over my shoulder, he was telling me how hed have reacted to be ensnared like this Therefore, I went with it. (And as a consequence it changed my plot and my outline, but what the heck, its for fun right?) Ive also been using terms my boyfriend used when I pinned him down and made him describe what a mans orgasm feels like. (Try that sometime make your guy describe what it feels like, in detail, and watch them squirm. It was hilarious!) So, this story grew and since I intend this to be a romance, I had to throw in a few problems, things to work through together and a couple of obstacles. In the end hell come around when he realizes Hermione will stand by him and still try to make things work. That and Lucius well, youll see.
Great chapter. Sev has every right to be angry...besides an angry Snape is a sexy Snape.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you very much. I have to agree with you.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you very much. I have to agree with you.
I really like the interation between the Malfoys and Severus, especially Severus' guest list. I wonder how they will react when they find out who his "bride" is?
Severus needs to calm down and realise they are meant to be together, or the charm would not have bonded them to each other, so buck up and get happy, Sev!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. I wanted Severus to have a friend he could relax and be himself with. The banter regarding the guest list was a bit of humor to lighten what was otherwise a depressing chapter. So far the Malfoys dont know its Hermione and yes, it will be interesting when they find out. Dont worry about Severus, he has a few personal hurtles to get through, but hell come around.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. I wanted Severus to have a friend he could relax and be himself with. The banter regarding the guest list was a bit of humor to lighten what was otherwise a depressing chapter. So far the Malfoys dont know its Hermione and yes, it will be interesting when they find out. Dont worry about Severus, he has a few personal hurtles to get through, but hell come around.
Well, rought beginnings it is. Poor Hermoine. She really didn't realize how much of a pissed off bastard he can be. I understand but it is still hard to deal with. Like Lucius said, he'll come around and make up sex is soooo much better. This really would have been a hard chapter to write for me too. I'm a happy ending kinda girl. I think you did a very good job of it.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. You completely grasp the situation and you are absolutely correct. Dont worry, it will take a while to get there, but this is a happy ending story. I promise.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. You completely grasp the situation and you are absolutely correct. Dont worry, it will take a while to get there, but this is a happy ending story. I promise.
Nosey arsed witch and ministry! Leave them alone. Glad to see they have finally gotten togather. Poor Severus, I smell trouble a brewing for him and Hermoine too.
Off to read the next one.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Unfortunately, Maggie Whitmire isnt the only nosey arsed witch, and yes, there is trouble brewing ahead for Severus, on several fronts
Happy reading!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Unfortunately, Maggie Whitmire isnt the only nosey arsed witch, and yes, there is trouble brewing ahead for Severus, on several fronts
Happy reading!
*phew* (fans self) that was really good! aaahhhh Lucius *sigh* whoops, not reading about lucius this time, must stay focused.
This is really coming along...geez sorry, pun not really intended but....
Anywho, keep up the good work.. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. Ill try. ice - ice helps...
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. Ill try. ice - ice helps...
Oh boy, what happens next? Will he find her and if other people see him what will happen, they think he's dead! aaaahhh I cant' wait...must read more! Love it!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. All your questions will be answered - eventually.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. All your questions will be answered - eventually.
Very good chapter. Very good fic. Sorry this is so short but its after midnight and I have to get up in the early morning.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thak you. I appreciate the support. Best of luck tomorrow.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thak you. I appreciate the support. Best of luck tomorrow.
Well at least Hermione and Severus have Kingsley on their side. That makes me worry far less. You wont torture your tender readers for too much longer will you??
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, there is much more going on than Hermione or Severus knows at this point. Severus has a few people on his side youll see. As for torture sorry, but things will take a downfall before getting better sorry.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, there is much more going on than Hermione or Severus knows at this point. Severus has a few people on his side youll see. As for torture sorry, but things will take a downfall before getting better sorry.
I completely understand why Severus is upset at being tricked into this bonding. Not everyone can be as accepting as Neville was. Maybe if Lucius shares his story Snape can start getting over it?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you for the review. Yep, hes pissed at being trapped. Harry didn't take it too well either and he loves Ginny! Severus does know a bit about Lucius and Narcissas bonding, although Lucius is going to talk to Severus about it
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you for the review. Yep, hes pissed at being trapped. Harry didn't take it too well either and he loves Ginny! Severus does know a bit about Lucius and Narcissas bonding, although Lucius is going to talk to Severus about it
I love possessive Sev...Can't wait to read the next chapter. Unfortunately, I have to work in the morning so I have to wait until tomorrow.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. Have a good day at work!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. Have a good day at work!
Rut Row! I hope the aurors dont try to take him to prision. That would be bad if Hermione has to come too. Sex every night for the rest of their lives. Thats a lot of sex. HEY is anyone using birthcontrol? oh my!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yep, oh oh. If the Aurors get him first and youll see about the rest. Dont want to give away too much here, but good questions!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yep, oh oh. If the Aurors get him first and youll see about the rest. Dont want to give away too much here, but good questions!
I can't wait for Sev to find Hermione! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
He will and soon.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
He will and soon.
Yes, indeed! All smuty goodness and a very cute, plot to wrap it all up in! I really like this first chappie and I am positive the rest will match. Very good. I am so hooked.
Snape with Narcissa....hhhhmmm. lets see how this works out.
Love it!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. Im glad you are enjoying this. Im afraid its Lucius and Narcissa. She was simply there taking care of him my way of alluding to how Severus survived Naginis bite the Malfoys saved him, but it was Hermiones spell that pulled him out of his coma!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. Im glad you are enjoying this. Im afraid its Lucius and Narcissa. She was simply there taking care of him my way of alluding to how Severus survived Naginis bite the Malfoys saved him, but it was Hermiones spell that pulled him out of his coma!
OU la la! I hope he does find her! Although stalking the halls of Hogwarts might be a bit much! Oh I am so glad there is anoher chapter for me to read!
have I mentioned how much I enjoy your sex scenes? I cant wait to find out who you are after the reveal and read all your stuff!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. Wow, what a compliment. I'm glad you like my steamy scenes. Oh, he finds her... don't worry, he finds her.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. Wow, what a compliment. I'm glad you like my steamy scenes. Oh, he finds her... don't worry, he finds her.
First, let me say that I'm enjoying your story very much. Second, just to get it off my mind, the word 'nads', for whatever reason I found that particular term distracting...however, it's not stopping me from reading and it's your story, I'm only a humble reader.
Now, the meat and potatoes part of my review. Yes, Snape was wronged, oh boo hoo! Hermione f---d up, but what makes him think this is enjoyable for her. I don't expect him to be all lovey dovey, but I would hope that he would be a bit more respectful...what I'm really hoping is that Hermione herself gets a pair of 'nads' and she can stand up a bit more to him.
Lastly, I'm rather enjoying the Malfoy's right now. I would love to see an engagement party take place, of course w/ certain restrictions as to avoid needless hexing.
Looking forward to your next update, and as for hotness, this chapter had it, but even if your scenes were more warm than hot, the story would still rock.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
I dont normally use the word nads, except my boyfriend does, so Ive been using it in his POV. I also made him describe what an orgasm feels like
Ever try to get a guy to describe his orgasm? Thy it sometime its hilarious!
In regards to Snape being more respectful and such, chap 7, and Yes, Hermione does begin to stand up to him. For now shes a bit intimidated and unsure of things. Im glad you are enjoying the exchange between the Malfoys and Snape. I always assumed that they would be friends, personable and that Lucius would have an ease around Snape, similar to the ease Draco had with him. So I added in a friendly banter and familiarity. However, I would think with the idea of having to invite Hagrid to their house as well as the Weasleys and Harry Potter, let alone the idea of inviting Grawp, would turn Narcissa off the idea of the engagement party! But Ill consider it. But can you imagine Grawp in the Malfoy manor, poking his finger into the portraits, flicking the chandelier with is finger and drinking from the punch bowl?
Thank you for your compliment and your comments. I appreciate it very much. I hope to have my next chapter up soon. My beta his it and I just need to clean up my mistakes first.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
I dont normally use the word nads, except my boyfriend does, so Ive been using it in his POV. I also made him describe what an orgasm feels like
Ever try to get a guy to describe his orgasm? Thy it sometime its hilarious!
In regards to Snape being more respectful and such, chap 7, and Yes, Hermione does begin to stand up to him. For now shes a bit intimidated and unsure of things. Im glad you are enjoying the exchange between the Malfoys and Snape. I always assumed that they would be friends, personable and that Lucius would have an ease around Snape, similar to the ease Draco had with him. So I added in a friendly banter and familiarity. However, I would think with the idea of having to invite Hagrid to their house as well as the Weasleys and Harry Potter, let alone the idea of inviting Grawp, would turn Narcissa off the idea of the engagement party! But Ill consider it. But can you imagine Grawp in the Malfoy manor, poking his finger into the portraits, flicking the chandelier with is finger and drinking from the punch bowl?
Thank you for your compliment and your comments. I appreciate it very much. I hope to have my next chapter up soon. My beta his it and I just need to clean up my mistakes first.
This is an incredible story. I really look forward to more.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. More is coming...
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. More is coming...
Now Severus would not be Severus, if he was all lovey-dovey right away. He has good reason to be angry.
And thank you for introducing Rita. Her and Umbridge are my favorite baddies..
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you for the supportive reveiw. Yes,he does have reasons to be angry and he's taking it out on Hermione, unfortunately, the one who put him in the situation.
I'm having fun using Rita. Yep, she's a bit a nuisance, who will drum up a bit of trouble... Oh, well.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you for the supportive reveiw. Yes,he does have reasons to be angry and he's taking it out on Hermione, unfortunately, the one who put him in the situation.
I'm having fun using Rita. Yep, she's a bit a nuisance, who will drum up a bit of trouble... Oh, well.
I loved it
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you.
bug!!! :=( should've Obliviated her. I hope Harry and Mr Weasley get Severus exonerated ASAP so S&H can get on with just being happily married. glad Arthur was able to get Kingsley there so quickly. thanks for the new chapter!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. Yep, Rita is snooping around and creating a bit of mischief. There are a few people on Severus side, although he doesnt know it yet. Youre very welcome for the update. I hope to give you the next one soon.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. Yep, Rita is snooping around and creating a bit of mischief. There are a few people on Severus side, although he doesnt know it yet. Youre very welcome for the update. I hope to give you the next one soon.
Well, Severus has better come to terms with the situation quickly, or he'll soon see the tip of Hermione's wand.
The idea of a reception at the Malfoys, and the guest list, made me laugh. Narcissa will be able to show off her abilities in the matter!
I'm glad Hermione has support from her friends. I think she'll need it.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, well, Hermione is still trying to figure out how to make things work with Severus and isnt too sure how to react to him. Severus is still pissed off about being ensnared by her, of all witches. Its not ideal and they are both trying to cope, only she is trying to make it work, hes simply using her. Its not ideal. But, as their problems grow and situation changes, she will stand by him, which will
. Well, youll find out. Yes, Hermione has her friends to lean on, especially Ginny. It will work out in the end.
I threw in the party plans as a touch of humor to enlighten a rather disturbing chapter. Im glad it gave you a laugh. Thank you for the review, I appreciated the comments.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, well, Hermione is still trying to figure out how to make things work with Severus and isnt too sure how to react to him. Severus is still pissed off about being ensnared by her, of all witches. Its not ideal and they are both trying to cope, only she is trying to make it work, hes simply using her. Its not ideal. But, as their problems grow and situation changes, she will stand by him, which will
. Well, youll find out. Yes, Hermione has her friends to lean on, especially Ginny. It will work out in the end.
I threw in the party plans as a touch of humor to enlighten a rather disturbing chapter. Im glad it gave you a laugh. Thank you for the review, I appreciated the comments.
Well, at least he did go slow with her until he was sure she's ready... that is quite considerable of him even though he was well, sort of... using her.
I sure hope he'll come around quick enough. For both of their's sake.
Narcissa's idea of reception party was funny. Imagine all of the guest on Hermione's list and those of Severus' list aiming their wands at each other... Narcissa is going to have one hard time being a host...
Can't wait for more...
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you for the review. Yes, Snape was at least being gentle and slow until Hermione was ready or into it. Hes not really a total jerk. Yes, things will work out in the end, I promise.
I thought Snapes comments regarding the guest list would be a nice touch of humor in what was actually a rather depressing chapter. But the idea of Snapes, Lucius friends mixing with Hermiones would be hilarious, especially if Grawp shows up!
I hope to have my next chapter ready to post really soon. Again, thank you for the comments.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you for the review. Yes, Snape was at least being gentle and slow until Hermione was ready or into it. Hes not really a total jerk. Yes, things will work out in the end, I promise.
I thought Snapes comments regarding the guest list would be a nice touch of humor in what was actually a rather depressing chapter. But the idea of Snapes, Lucius friends mixing with Hermiones would be hilarious, especially if Grawp shows up!
I hope to have my next chapter ready to post really soon. Again, thank you for the comments.
Interesting chapter - Severus wanted complicates there "happy marriage" but he is also complicating things because he is bitter and not wanting to be married - some much trouble for the couple - what road you will take them on should be interesting
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you very much for the review. Yep, youve pretty much nailed the problem. Well, one problem for the couple I hope I dont disappoint you with the road Ive given them. Thank you again.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you very much for the review. Yep, youve pretty much nailed the problem. Well, one problem for the couple I hope I dont disappoint you with the road Ive given them. Thank you again.