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The Plight-Trothed Bride
beaweasley21,194 Reviews | 7.14/10 (1,194 Ratings, 0 Likes, 339 Favorites )
Hermione, Ginny and Luna, sharing a girl moment, decide to cast a Pairing-Plight Troth Charm on themselves for fun. Each placed in the cauldron one yesterday-today-and-tomorrow flower with sugar and spice and everything nice, and a snip, a snail and puppy-dog tail as they each said the rhyme. For Ginny, the results are exactly what she expected, and for Luna, she was only mildly surprised. However, for Hermione, the results were disastrous! She thought she’d be paired to Ron and live happily ever after. So what happened and why is she seeing Professor Snape in her dreams? He’s dead – isn’t he?
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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company.
“Imagination does not become great until human beings, given the courage and the strength, use it to create.”― Maria Montessori
“Our imagination flies -- we are its shadow on the earth.”― Vladimir Nabokov
“Imagination is everything. It is the preview of life's coming attractions.”― Albert Einstein
“Imagination will often carry us to worlds that never were, but without it we go nowhere.” ― Carl Sagan
Reviews for The Plight-Trothed Bride
damn that was steamy awesome
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you - I type to please... sometimes!
Ooohhh so he's going to go looking for her eh? That should be very interesting. Especially since everyone assumes him DEAD! I can't wait to see the meeting, or for that matter, how exactly Snape will get to her without being seen by anyone else. Great suspense of what's to come.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, the pull of the Moon-Song Spell is reaching it's peak, the allure will draw him to her... and the next time they come 'together' it will be real.
Excellent story.. I have to agree with another reviewer. I have been "stalking" the site for an update. This is a very good story. Cannot wait for the next chapter.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. I've two stalkers! Wow! Have a bit of patience, my next chapter is with my beta, and I've several more written already. After much clean up of chap 3, I'll post. I promice!
What can I say. Fantastic lemons!!! And a caring Lucius? I'm ussualy not a fan of Nice!Lucius, but for some reason I really liked him as an old caring friend here... Poor Ron he really does not stand a chance. I will be waiting for your next up-date!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you, glad you like lemons! Yes, I have a differient twist on Lucius in this story - as a friend. He wouldn't be as well connected in the first books if he's always a jerk - would he? Still, he doesn't know who's behind the door now. And no, in my book - Ron never really had/stood a chance. he he he he But I will play with him a bit more later on.... you'll see.
What a delightful and sensual interpretation of the prompt! I really like the surprise on both sides--I'm all about destiny, and this really seems like one of those 'well, I guess we'll get to watch them figure this out' kinds of stories! Well written and very sexy--though I have to admit, the word 'crotch' kind of pulled me out of the moment.
I assume you won't be able to respond until March 20, but know that I really enjoyed this and am looking forward to reading more!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
I’m pleased that you like my story. I’m sorry about the wording pulling you out of the moment, but I wanted Severus’s POV to be written like guys think, not how a woman thinks a guy thinks – if that makes any sense. I don’t use it often, hardly ever actually.
We can answer our reviews but I’m not allowed to reveal who I am until after the voting. So don’t worry, appreciation for review can be expressed.
I wasn't sure about this chapter at first, but once I got past the raid details, I really enjoyed the chapter. I like how Severus and Hermione's relationship is progressing...nice job! Keep up the wonderful work! ~Jen
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Hmmm You didn't? I'm glad you got past whatever bothered you. Yes, it's taking a positive step. Thank you for the review, Jen. I hope you like the rest.
this is a seriously hot read! i love it!!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. I'm very glad you do.
How enchanting I like this very much
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thanks. That's waht I was going for.
Oh, I like this quite a bit. It is hot, but I wonder what will happen when Severus realizes she did this herself.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you very much. My boyfriend actually told me what his reaction would be and for a chapter or two (not that I want to spoil anything) but that's what I wrote... then, well... you'll see.
Very hot. I loved the dreams. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you very much. I hope to have it ready for posting soon.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you very much. I hope to have it ready for posting soon.
Love this story im stalking the site waiting for the up date's ( So Sad )Started to wonder as I wandered were do's you title come from Plight Troth Bride? I'm not familiar with this term did you invent it ? Or is it old? It's sound's old. Also i love your Snape both waking and sleeping but i have to say his waking self is irritated with life just enuff nothing ruine's a fan fic faster than a Snape who isn't Snape and i like your's. Write quickly PLEASE this story is so fun to read .
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Wowers! I’ve only two chapters up and you like it this much! Thank you. I’ve pretty much have my next chapter ready to send to my beta, but give me a few days… It’ll post soon I hope.
I invented the title actually. Plight and trothed hyphenated, but they mean pretty much the same thing.
This was a very complex chapter and you handled well. The fight scene has just enough detail to make it realistic and "visual" for the reader, and is fast-paced. I enjoyed the discussion in the Auror's office and the relaxed attitude the others had toward Severus as their comrade. Hermione's court testimony is right in character.I'm anxious to see what more Severus has to tell Harry about Lily, and what happens when they all go to Malfoy Manor.The remark about you being "back" is because it's been a few months since this update. It's a great story, and the wait seemed so long!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
LOL yes, *blushes* I was errant in my posting. It' sgood to be playin gin this sandbox agian. I'm pleased by your comments about the fighting - that was exactly what I was hoping for. As I've hinted in past chapters, since Kingsley is heading up the Aurors, Severus (and Lucius) have been helping them, (Severus more actively) and he has earned their respect. The other Aurors now see how capable he really is and how valuable an asset. Yes, I thought that she would be bluntly honest, having sworn to tell the truth, and so would her friends. Not something Draco and Narcissa are used to considering who their 'friends' (Severus included - dunno if he'd been as openly honestly blunt as Hermione) I hope to have the dinner scene up soon, but it's not in the next chapter... and Severus' reminiscing was really just a added bit. Hermione gave him a comfort zone by asking for things that weren't too personal. So it's basically the rosey-tone bits of her personality and such. There will be more, but much later in the story. Thank you for the review. I really appreciate the support.
Awesome. That was definate citrus overload there. Plus there are a few nice touches, likethe sleeping beauty curse... I'm assuming it puts the victim into a deep sleep (like the tale) and sends wet dreams to the prince to make him seek her out. Or something to that effect.
Very good, can't wait for more!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. Citrus? oh, um... ok.
Luck Luck that's what they are. To have such intents dreams; I can just imagine what it is going to be like for real. Hot!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. It'll happen soon enough.
I feel like my insides have melted.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Oh, No! Hope you solidified okay!
Response from septentrion (Reviewer)
Don't worry about it ;)
This continues to be fabulous.
When Luna and Ginny did the spell, did their lovers experience the sex with them as Sev did with Hermione the first time?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thanks. Yes, when all three girls did the spell, each was 'connected' with their guy. Luna with Neville and Ginny with Harry. I just didn't give you the details.Luna said Neville liked her ears and her toes. Ginny said Harry was akward, but she'll tell Hermione a few more details later....
So it's the Malfoy's that saved Sev - I always knew they had at least one or two redeeming qualities (hidden very deep down) LOL.Looking forward to seeing Sev. well enough to make his appearance - and find out what exactly happened to him (if that's even part of the story that is).
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
I thought that the Malfoy’s owed Severus a life debt for saving Draco’s life, twice, before (doing Voldemort’s assignment for him and the time Harry slashed him with the curse.) Also, I didn’t have to go into HOW Severus lives, just showed that he had and the dream wakes him from his comma… opps, that’s told later.
You’ll see plenty more of Severus and you’ll see more of the Malfoys.
Poor Severus! and naughty Lucius, for inviting himself in for a listen. I wonder if Severus will figure out that it's the Magical Pairing-Plight Charm, or if the Ministry Magical Marriage and Birth Registration Office will notify him of the pending engagement. How soon will you have the next chapter up?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Well, Lucius hasn’t really ever been a good boy has he? He he he
You answer you, yes, but a bit …. Do you really want a spoiler?
I’m sending my chapter to my beta, and after a check over and a bounce back to make sure I got all her corrections – I’ll post!
Much racier than the stories I usually read, but engaging nonetheless. Thank you for writing a porn-with-plot (if this fic may be regarded so). I look forward to your next update.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, it’s rather racy for the first few chapters and then gets more realistic. Also, I get more into the plot as the story progresses. I’m glad you’re enjoying this – porn-with-plot. Thanks for the review.
I. Love. This. Story. Where do I vote? Please update soon!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
I think we vote in March when the due date is. But thanks for the support. My beta has just received the next chapter – so I'll update soon I hope!
Better and better! Looking forward to him seeking her out.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. I’m pleased you think so. One more dream chapter (with a little fuss from Ron) and things will happen for real.
I love, love, love this story!!! Wish his middle name wasn't Sean though... hehe.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you very much. I just chose a name at random cuz I needed one. Sorry you didn’t like the choice, but I wanted a rather Muggle sounding one. Ah, well, I doubt Severus likes it either.
Can the story get any hotter? I don't know, but I am willing to wade through it and see. If you can't tell I am really enjoying this erotic jaunt. I look forward to their first face to face meeting -- should be blazing! Thanks for posting, JoAnne
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
You can expect it to get hot, but there will be a twist that was inspired by my boyfriend when he read it… so you’ll see. I took his advice… it will get real.
Haven't read this chapter yet--but thanks for coming back!!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Oh, I'm still here. I hope you like the chapter.
Love this! Please update soon!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
It's in queue, #24 or so I think. As soon as it clears queue, I have another chapter to go in... and I have to update CoMWT too.
Response from ader_snape (Reviewer)
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