XXXV: After Midnight
Chapter 35 of 37
sevs_starsisters*COMPLETED* The Star Sisters have left Hogwarts and are now facing a new world with new opportunities and new kinds of danger. And also for the Half-Blood Prince, times are changing. (This story is the sequel to Star Sisters.)
Chapter XXXV: After Midnight
As the strains of "Auld Lang Syne" echoed from the revellers outside, Snape kept staring out of the window long after the girls had returned to the pub and vanished from his sight. Yet in front of his inner eye, the image lingered: a shy kiss, a loving embrace, caresses and kisses that grew ever bolder.
He tilted his head, and a faint smile lit up his otherwise so stern features. He should have known. He should have known that his girls didn't need any help to find their way to each other. Once they had been rid of their demons, their eyes had opened, and they had seen what he should have seen a long time ago: they belonged with each other. They always had, probably since the first time they laid eyes on each other on the Hogwarts Express. And to think he had actually tried to come between them. What a fool he had been.
Shaking his head at himself, Snape detached himself from the window. He was planning to go downstairs and reclaim his spot at the bar. If he was lucky, the girls had gone back inside to share another dance. He would enjoy watching them whilst sipping on another glass of Ogden's. And maybe, just maybe, they would have a smile to spare for their former Potions master.
He was just about to leave the room when he heard footsteps on the stairs. Footsteps, rustling robes and a giggle that was far too familiar to be ignored. He'd heard it before, exactly a year ago. That time, it had come from the very room he was standing in now. That time, he had lost his temper, deducted fifty points from his own House and given Charis a good telling-off, which had revealed more of his own jealousy than he had meant to. And the same display of jealousy had driven Morgana into the arms of Lucius Malfoy, who had shattered her heart into thousands of pieces only a short time after.
Snape sighed. Things could have been very different. If only he had kept his prominent nose out of their business, maybe the girls would have discovered their feelings for each other much earlier. Charis wouldn't have fallen for him, nor Morgana for Lucius. They wouldn't have been hurt, their hearts not broken. Oh, the heartache he could have saved them from.
'Morgana, what if we are caught?'
There was nervous excitement in Charis' hushed voice which startled Snape out of his reverie. What on earth were the two of them doing up here?
'We won't be caught. No one's coming up here tonight. I've made sure of that.'
Morgana's murmur was soothing, but as the door knob turned, Snape realised with alarm that he was trapped!
Before the door had even opened, Snape sank deep into the shadows, inwardly cursing himself for wasting time and being caught in a compromising position. The alcohol must have clouded his mind, for it was surely too late to Apparate now.
He flinched as a candle on the nightstand sprung to life, but relaxed as he realised that the tiny flame would not illuminate the room enough for the girls to see him. He, however, could see just enough of them to make him gasp.
They looked breathtaking, both of them, Charis with her glittering green eyes and Morgana with her flaming red locks. Yet for once, those combined features didn't remind Snape of Lily. In fact, his childhood friend, the only woman he had ever loved, was further from his mind than ever. And so were Dumbledore, the Dark Lord, Harry Potter... This night was all about his girls, the two young witches who were slowly approaching the bed, Charis walking backwards and Morgana guiding her with a firm grip around her waist. They held their own magic, those two, a magic which made Snape forget everything else which he otherwise deemed central in his life.
'Did you know my Amortensia smells of roses?' Morgana asked as she traced the line of Charis' neck with her nose, inhaling the delicate scent that Charis bore so well.
'You never told me,' Charis whispered in reply.
'Until quite recently, I didn't know what it meant.'
Gently yet purposefully, Morgana pushed Charis backwards, and the blonde witch gasped as she fell onto the bed. But Morgana didn't give her any time to utter her surprise further. She had already straddled her friend and was now kissing her passionately, expertly exploring her mouth with her tongue, all the while pinning down Charis with her own weight.
Charis moaned and thrust her hips upwards. Morgana's kiss had set her on fire, and now her whole body was tingling. She was aching to be touched, aching to feel Morgana's hands and lips on her body. But the Slytherin seemed to be in no rush whatsoever.
'I should have understood a long time ago. Your scent has always been so comforting,' Morgana whispered into Charis' ear, making her friend shiver before she planted a string on small kisses all the way from her earlobe to her collarbone. And Charis lay breathless, unable to form a coherent sentence, wishing that her friend was not going to cease her caresses.
But Morgana had no intention of stopping. She nibbled gently at Charis' collarbone, every now and then flicking out her tongue to taste the soft flesh of Charis' neck, enjoying seeing the soft blush that was creeping up from her chest. Yet every time Charis tried to move beneath her, every time she as much as tried to lift her hands to return some of her caresses, Morgana shifted her weight, either moving out of Charis' immediate reach or pinning her down even harder. Charis deserved to be treated as a queen. She deserved to be caressed and indulged. She deserved to shudder from pleasure. She herself shouldn't have to do anything.
Slowly, Morgana undid the lace at the front of Charis' blue dress, placing a tender kiss on every inch of skin she uncovered. She gifted both breasts with an equal amount of attention, alternating kissing and gently biting them both, yet still carefully avoiding the hard nipples that were so clearly visible through the sheer fabric of Charis' bra. She would give them her undivided attention later. For now, all she wanted was to get Charis out of her dress.
Snape stood in the shadows as if he'd been Petrified, trying to control his breathing as his heartbeat accelerated at the sight before him. Charis' pale skin bathing in the candlelight as Morgana teased her tender breasts was possibly the most sensual thing he'd ever seen. But as he felt the first stirrings of his own arousal pushing urgently at the buttons of his robes, he knew that what he was witnessing was beyond the realms of his own personal fantasies. Morgana was unmistakably making love to Charis, and it was as beautiful to behold as it was intensely erotic.
Charis had now shifted so her hips were raised, and Morgana carefully pushed the blue satin down her body, laying a trail of kisses down her torso and stomach as she did so. When she paused, flicking her tongue inside the soft dimple of Charis' navel, causing her to giggle, a delighted smile passed briefly over her features before she continued her ministrations ever southward. Slowly and carefully, as if she was unwrapping some priceless gift, she slid the satin over Charis' hips and to her thighs, hovering over her lace-covered core mere millimetres away, feeling the searing heat begging to be unleashed. Soon, but not yet, Morgana decided, slipping the gown yet further and kissing and nibbling Charis' thighs and legs all the way to her toes until the dress lay crumpled and discarded at the end of the bed.
Snape looked on, almost unable to breathe. Charis was now spread out, clad in only sumptuous lace underwear. Morgana gazed deeply into her eyes as she began her journey back up Charis' body, this time using only her fingertips to swirl patterns over her soft skin, making Charis tingle and shudder with pleasure.
Soon, Morgana had once more covered her friend's body with her own, and they were eye to eye, Morgana dotting the gentlest of kisses over Charis' face before claiming her lips. It was yet another deep, passionate kiss, and Charis' hips bucked involuntarily, her body craving more of Morgana's skilful ministrations. But Morgana shook her head, almost imperceptibly. Soon, but not yet.
Moving her mouth once more to the succulent flesh of Charis' neck, she began to gently nibble as one hand peeled the strap of the blue bra down over Charis' shoulder. The Ravenclaw was trembling by now, her little moans encouraging her friend and, unbeknown to them both, driving their former Potions master half-wild with desire. Yet he stood perfectly still in the shadows, not moving even an inch. He laying hands on himself now seemed wrong, filthy and obscene. And he feared it would destroy the special kind of magic that was hanging in the air.
Agonisingly slowly, Morgana slipped her nimble fingers inside the loosened cup of Charis' lacy bra, drawing from her a gasp as her soft, dexterous fingertips met the awakened nerve ends of her nipples. She brushed them gently before shifting her hands so they came to cup Charis' heavy breasts. When and how she had Vanished the bra, Charis couldn't tell. She didn't care either. She was too preoccupied by watching her friend massage her breasts with the most expert touch. And as Morgana gazed at the star pendant that hung at her friend's throat, twinkling slightly in the dim candlelight, another gentle smile pulled at her lips.
'Mo... Morgana, please, I... oh!'
Charis' whispered words turned into a shaky whimper as Morgana's lips closed around her right nipple, and as she suckled it, deftly and purposefully, alternately teasing it with her tongue and her teeth, Charis felt waves of pleasure rippling through her body, converging at her very core and making her wriggle under her friend's weight. How she wished Morgana would touch her down there. How she longed to feel her friend's lips at her core, her hands, her fingers. But she did not dare utter her wishes. Morgana seemed to know what she was doing. She was the one in charge, and Charis trusted her without reservation.
Yet Morgana, too, was longing to take things to the next level, and as she kissed her way across Charis' chest in order to reach her left breast, she felt her lips shaking with excitement and shifted her weight, rubbing her thighs together as to give some relief to the fire that was burning between her own legs. She felt the blood pulsate in her core, knew that she was wet with desire and also yearned to be touched. But at this point, she was not yet ready to give up control.
Straddling Charis' left thigh, she continued her ministrations of her breasts, kissing, suckling, licking, and while Charis' eyes fluttered shut and small moans escaped her lips, Morgana let her left hand trail down Charis' side, over her hip and thigh, eventually taking a firm hold of her butt. Then she let her lips wander down over her stomach, grinding herself against Charis' leg as she moved further south.
As she placed small kisses along the waistband of Charis' knickers, the fingers of her right hand found their way under the soft lace, meeting even softer skin and a scorching heat that made Morgana forget her plans of peeling off Charis' knickers at the same slow speed she had peeled off her bra. Neither was she any longer interested in kissing the inside of Charis' thighs, teasing her until she begged to be tasted. She needed this now as much as Charis needed it, and with a forceful pull, Morgana tore down the blue knickers and closed her lips around Charis' clitoris without warning, making her lover climax with an outcry that surely could be heard all the way down to the pub below. But neither of the girls cared, and while Charis was thrashing her head around, shaking with the most intense orgasm she had ever experienced, Morgana kept her hips firmly pinned to the bed and her lips still closed around the pulsating nub, suckling it softly as she eased her friend down from her peak. Her own breathing was laboured, and finally, she allowed her free hand to trail down her own body, under the hem of her dress and in between her thighs. As she had anticipated, she was scorching hot, and as she touched herself though her damp knickers, the sensation was almost too much to bear. And so she moved her fingers under the fabric, teasing herself while she lapped up Charis' juices, already inflaming her once again.
Snape stood with his mouth open. He couldn't see Charis' core from where he was standing, but the movements of Morgana's head between Charis' thighs left little to the imagination. And the way Morgana's nimble fingers worked at her own core made him want to sink onto his knees behind her, rip the fabric away and lap her the way she was lapping Charis, bringing her to an orgasm at the same time she made Charis peak, just to pin her down on her friend moments later, thrusting his cock alternately into them. Yet he made no move, none whatsoever, but stood silently, watching intently. He was no part of what was going on between the girls, and as much as his body was aching for release, he knew it was not right to intrude on this most precious of moments.
Morgana could sense that Charis was yet again close to her peak as she probed her entrance with the tip of her tongue. She could both taste it and feel it in the way Charis' body tensed and her fingers clawed at the bedsheets. And she herself was closing in on her orgasm, too, knowing exactly how and where to touch herself to make her body shudder with pleasure. She could make herself come undone right now. All it would take was one more expert flick of a finger against her throbbing nub. But she waited, caressing the soft skin on the inside of her thigh instead. She wanted to wait for Charis, share the moment with her and then curl up against her, holding her as they both came down from their peak.
Snape stiffened as he saw Morgana cease her ministrations. No, this couldn't be. It mustn't. Morgana was supposed to be able to enjoy this. Had she not achieved a sexual as well as an emotional breakthrough when she had come undone in his arms a week ago? Had it all been for nothing? Had he misread her when they had parted? But then he heard Charis' soft moans turn into a mewing, desperate whimper, saw her body convulsing with pleasure, and with a sigh of relief, he saw Morgana's nimble fingers once more working under her dress.
The sensation was breathtaking. Morgana felt her knees go weak as her orgasm took hold of her entire body, making her toes curl and her back arch. She didn't moan or scream, but sank silently onto the bed between Charis' legs, letting her head rest on the inside of her lover's thigh as she recovered from her dual ministrations. Her hot breath tickled Charis' flushed skin, and she let her eyes flutter shut, deeply inhaling Charis' scent and enjoying her warmth against her cheek. Her limbs grew heavier, and she couldn't remember if she had ever felt so relaxed. If she didn't move soon, she would fall asleep. But then she felt Charis' hand on her hair, and as Charis touched her shoulder, Morgana let herself willingly be pulled up, coming to rest in her lover's arms.
She looked beautiful, Charis thought, letting her green eyes trail over Morgana's face. The angry line that far too often appeared between her eyebrows was gone, and the dim candle light was just enough for Charis to make out the soft blush on Morgana's otherwise so pale cheeks. She looked relaxed, at peace. And when Charis hugged her closer and murmured, 'I love you,' the expression on Morgana's face could only be described as complete and utter bliss.
A few minutes later, the girls were both fast asleep, and in the shadows, Snape swallowed drily, once more unable to take his eyes of them, yet for different reasons now. There was a warmth blossoming inside his chest which he was unable to put into words. His girls had found each other at last. And nothing, not even the Dark Lord himself, could surely tear their love apart. They belonged to each other; they were two sides of the same coin, two parts of a whole. But as he watched them sleep now, curled up against each other under the sheet which Charis had pulled over them, Snape suddenly felt like he had no right to be there anymore. He'd witnessed something beautiful tonight, but as the post-orgasmic glow settled around the two witches, his mere presence started to feel like an abomination. He needed to leave and let the girls bask in their new-found love. A love he had no part of, a love he would never be able to share with anyone.
Noiselessly, he drew his wand and cast a well-practised Silencing Charm before moving through the shadows with the grace of a black panther. He would be gone in less than a minute, and the girls would never know that he had been there.
At the door, however, he paused and once more looked back towards the bed. He loved those two girls dearly in his own special way. They would never know, of course, but he hoped that every now and then, they would remember him with fondness.
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Great start. Albums would really sacrifice anyone to win the war. I hope both of a star sisters find their happy ending and the war doesn't destroy their souls.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Now you reminded us of that we should wirte a Part 3. :)
well, what can I say? This was a blast from beginning to end. Loved your new characters and how the Malfoys once again play a big part in Morganna's love life. Severus what a naughty man coming up with the three mirrors and him being a bit of a peeping Tom lol. Least he kept his word and did ensure the star sisters safety and nice to see him hinting at them to both wear their star necklaces once more.
The scene where the girls on Christmas Eve made that special spell and vow was beautifully written. Also the Scenes on new years eve and after were tenderly done and not in a harsh way but in a loving one. Even Snapes watching was done with a special feel and not pervy at all. Shall look forward to read more in this series and see if Snape can loose his dark thoughts and become a man who can accept love in the end and be rid of the Lily Ghost.
Thanks for writing and creating this lovely series. Really enjoyed reading it and sorry I did not get time to review every chapter. Consider this worth a hundred reviews.
Congrats.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
The relationship between Charis and Morgana has become a beautiful thing, and I'm very happy for them and glad that Severus will continue to watch over his girls. One day I hope his heart will be healed and that he will remember how to love. And allow himself to be loved.I'm sad this story has come to an end (for now), but I'm so happy to know that you aren't done with these characters—I've grown quite fond of them. For now we will let them sleep. I want to let you know how much I've enjoyed Star Sisters and now Shooting Stars. You are very gifted writers, and I thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. I wish you both good days and much happiness. May real life calm down for you, and allow you the opportunity to once again weave this magic you do so well.I give you my thanks with much gratitude and lots of hugs,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Mmmm... I think I'd like a cup of tea and a biscuit after reading this chapter! Or perhaps a cigarette? Smoking hot writing, ladies. Thank you from the bottom of my... err... heart!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Gorgeous chapter, and I appreciated Snape leaving them be and also not taking himself in hand. As he realises the feeling blossoming in his chest, my heart ached for him a little bit. Then followed "A love he had no part of, a love he would never be able to share with anyone" which summed it all up and put a lump in my throat. Ah, Snape. Forever the tragic anti-hero. Lovely writing.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
I enjoyed your creation of Dumbledore's vow and its execution - gentle and manipulative - much like the man himself. I love that Dumbledore also set up their New Year's celebration with Snape, even though, so far at least, Snape hasn't got in on the action! The tenderness between Morgana and Charis is lovely. Reading on...
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
"The way Ravenclaws seemed to be fascinated by the stars was simply adorable" bahaha! Pity that I didn't realise the significance of the constellation Leo; I've let down team Ravenclaw! At least I'd managed to suss out the connection to Slytherin's locket via the house-elf, thus tracing it back to Black. This is a lovely chapter brimming with charm and intimacy between the Star Sisters, and their spell-casting was beautiful and poignant. I also enjoyed Morgana's metaphor for moving on at the end of the chapter. I must say, though, that you've plotted your story meticulously and have been wonderfully crafty with the prophecy; not just with its puzzle, but also making your story fit seamlessly into canon... After all, we were never told how Dumbledore came to discover the locket. I take my hat off to you, ladies!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Now it's time to turn fantasy into reality for Severus and his girls--can the teasing giggling be leading up to them beckoning him over to their side *hopeful look*--great menage-a-trois dynamics; I really like Morgana's sexuality being released and expressed, reinforcing her healing from the past and embracing the present and future; Charis' divine sub positions--yum! and as I said last chapter, Severus is one lucky wizard... *sighing* Lovely, dynamic, lemony chapter as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
As I began reading this chapter I was so surprised that I had to go back and read the end of the previous chapter to be sure I understood what had happened... which, of course, I didn't, but I didn't know that until Severus woke up that I realized it was his dream. You two ladies are masters of the twisty plot. Well done!
Dreaming as he had been, I was glad he allowed himself to carry his dream to fruition in the shower. Perhaps this "Sweet Release" will help him get through the coming storm. Soon he will have to kill Dumbledore and then endure his tenure as Headmaster until the entire house of cards comes falling down.
I was very happy for him when heard Charis and Morgana talking and giggling in their activated mirrors. It would be very sweet if his dream became a reality after all is said and done. But I'm not kidding myself one tiny bit that I can predict just what you two have in mind for these three dear people. The only thing I'm sure of right now is that I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update.
Thank you for a very nice chapter!!!
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
It's a relief for Morgana and Charis that they have finally and truly shared their love for each other. And not only a relief for the two of them, but for Severus as well, I think. He has such strong feelings for both of them, and I think knowing that they have declared their love and cemented their relationship has given him peace of mind that they will be all right no matter what happens.
He loved those two girls dearly in his own special way. They would never know, of course, but he hoped that every now and then, they would remember him with fondness.
This chapter has really touched my heart. I don't know what will happen to Severus, and it makes me sad to think of him being alone. I hope he can find something or someone to "hang onto" as future events unfold. Be kind to him, ladies. Be kind.Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Mmmn... beautiful! Love their love-making, giving and sharing to each other the way each one needs, and Severus witnessing it--some wizards have all the luck! What a lovely way to bring in the New Year!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
I love this story even more than the last one.
I have no idea how the two of you do it but I am grateful that you do.
Sorry for not leaving reviews before now, but it is often difficult to find words for my appreciation! Rest assured that I always eagerly await the next instalment.
Such a beautiful and unusual story... the pair of you need to create a universe of your own! I'm sure we could expect great things from such imaginations! Perhaps just as great as the universe that brought your two formidable minds together!
Thank you.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
‘When the rope dissolves and we let go of each other, neither of you will be able to convey what you have learnt here today,’ Dumbledore explained. ‘You will have a faint memory of our conversation with Kreacher, but trying to remember the details will be like trying to remember a dream. The harder you try, the further will it drift away. And unless we three stand here once more, with our hands entwined, you will never be able to remember.’Damn. I wish the girls had not had to agree to take that vow. But if they hadn't, then he would have Obliviated them. I hope they really will be safer not remembering the prophecy.I can't help but wish Severus didn't have to spend New Year's Eve with only a bottle of Ogden's to keep him company while he watches his girls coming to understand the depth of their feelings for each other. With Severus already upstairs and the girls on their way up the stairs, I wonder if they'll run into each other? I'm off to the next chapter to find out. :^)Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
With Grindling moving to Greece for good, I guess there's no way he will be a regular part of either of the girls' lives. Sometimes I think it's better just to move on and cut your losses, but I know Charis and Morgana will be sad when they realize he has left his position at the Ministry and packed up lock, stock, and barrel.
That was a lovely spell that Charis created to permanently join the girls' star necklaces together. It was pretty cool the way Morgana's star glowed Ravenclaw blue and Charis' glowed Slytherin green. I was tickled when Charis solved the riddle of the prophecy- all that time studying Astronomy really paid off! Now Dumbledore wants them to wait a week. Perhaps he does want to do some research of his own.
I'm glad Morgana has a new Patronus- a majestic black feline is much better than her old Peacock. It's very telling that they have such similar Patronuses, isn't it? It seems like their world is settling into something solid and stable, but with Grindling out of the picture (for now, anyway) I'm wondering what Severus will do? Poor man is damned if he does and damned if he doesn't. Speaking of Severus... what is he doing right now?
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
It seems that it has taken tonight's events and their outcomes to bring Severus to the point where he can relax enough to realize that Charis and Morgana love each other. But I'm not sure if they can be happy with only each other. Grindling loves Charis, and I think he has very strong feelings for Morgana as well. Charis loves Severus, and Morgana feels very safe with him. Severus loves Charis and Morgana. And I have absolutely no idea how this is going to work out. There are a number of permutations that come to mind, and one of them is that Severus, Charis, and Morgana become a threesome family. Or Grindling could make for a foursome family. Or Grindling could find himself with Narcissa when all hell breaks loose and Lucius ends up dead or in prison for the rest of his life. Or if Severus dies, then Grindling, Charis and Morgana could make a life together.This emotional awakening Severus has undergone, leaves me feeling very afraid for him. I fear he will go willingly to meet death so long as he thinks "his girls" are safe and happy. Is he falling into well of dark resignation?Thank you for this thought provoking chapter, ladies. I still don't have any idea how this will all turn out, and now I have an even longer list of possible outcomes. You are masters of mystery!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
The place where Ravenclaws always took comfort and solitude: the library.' This had e tearing up! And the delicious lemony, Snapey goodness-sene has me saying, Merlin's balls, sevs_starsisters, yes, yes, yes! and more, more, more! *taking a deep satisfied sigh* Thank you! (and Miss Charis needs to heed Sev's advice for her and Morgana--speaking of which, can't wait for Sev's jetsetting over to Malfoy manor, maybe Ms Morgana needs some *special* attention too from the Potions master--he is suppose to take care of both his girls *decadent cackle* Lovely, yummy chapter, as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Poor, dear Grindling--lovely moments and chemistry and trust between these two, only to be breathtakingly blown away with the scene between Morgana and Severus--yes, yes, yes! Could feel Morgana breaking through and liberating herself with Severus *perfect, bloody f------ perfect* Thank you!! xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Now I see what you meant when you told me that Severus would feel pretty guilty... but I have to wonder just how guilty he really felt. Still and all, Morgana is free from the weight of a millstone named Lucius Malfoy, and Severus has promised that Narcissa will not bother her again. Even crazy Bellatrix served a useful purpose. Thanks to her, Grindling has heard Narcissa say the words that set him free... at least I hope he is free from Narcissa's machinations. In the study, Severus told Morgana to ‘Enjoy a Malfoy-free life. Spend time with the ones who love you the most.’ He left before she could ask who he meant, and then I remembered that Grindling had told her that he wished things could have been different. Soooo... could it be that Grindling has a bit of a crush on Morgana, or is he still in love with the memory of Narcissa... or will he return to Charis? They will see each other because they're trying to solve the Prophesy, but what will they think about the things that have happened in the last few hours? Charis will be thinking about "her boss" and her former teacher. Morgana will be thinking about her former teacher. Narcissa will be thinking about wringing her sister's neck, and mourning the loss of perhaps the only opportunity to regain her husband's freedom and their lost stature in the ranks of the purebloods. Severus will be thinking about both Charis and Morgana... I wish I knew what was going through Severus' mind in regard to both of "his girls." I still can't shake the feeling that he really holds romantic thoughts about Charis, but I have to say you ladies really do keep the waters muddied up enough that I can't ever be sure. Maybe Morgana and Grindling will be attracted to each other, and... *sigh*What is going to go on at Malfoy Manor will all those Death Eaters still there? Oh what a tangled web we weave....Great chapter. As always!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Hot dayum! Hot DAYUM! I am so damned happy that Severus and Charis had their "alone time" in the library... and he was so tender and made sure she had the orgasm of her life before he had his.‘The stars,’ he said and pointed at his throat as if to indicate a necklace he was wearing. ‘Renew the charm. Wear them. The both of you.’He still cares for Charis. His kiss on her cheek and urgging her and Morganna to wear their star necklaces proves it beyond all doubt.Thanks, I needed that! *grinning*Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Of all the rooms for Narcissa to choose from... I wonder just what Narcissa knows and what she doesn't know about Morgana and Lucius? Could Narcissa have some other motive we don't yet know about? I don't think so, but I have learned not to underestimate you ladies, either.In the meantime, what are Snape and Charis doing in thier search for the meaning of the prophesy? Sooner or later one of them is bound to say or do something that comfirms for the other that there are still real and deep emotions involved between. I can't wait to see what you have in store for our lovely characters next? Hope to see the next chapter soon!!!Berh
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
I hope she opens up. It would be good for her to get it out. Grindling is a complex character; not quite sure what to make of him yet. I'm glad you're still writing this story, I love following it. 5 stars.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Well, Charis got the info she needed. She just needs to remember her astronomy now.I've known this pair of stories have been out there for some time but avoided reading them because they were not about canon-centric characters. But I took a chance and I've really enjoyed them. I look forward to finding out what happens. Keep up the good work!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for taking a chance on our stories, we're really thrilled you've enjoyed them and we hope you'll stick with the sequel. Thanks again for your support, it means a lot!
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
May I say I never expected you two to answer ALL my reviews since I left a ton of them at one time. But thank you. If I've put you behind on your writing, feel free to blame me.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We try to answer all our reviews. It's so nice to get feedback, and we like to show that we appreciate your thoughts. And no worries, you haven't slowed us down. Next chapter is being beta-read at the moment and we have done plenty of plotting. Lemons ahead ;-)
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
Ah lemon....one of my favorite flavors!
I think Charis is far too forgiving (maybe I just don't like Grindling).TeeHee, Severus is SOOOOO BAD. I love him.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He's a naughty boy! and that's why we love him, right?
Oooh the plot thickens. I think I've figured out most of the prophecy, now to watch as the characters figure it out.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Let's see if you're right :)
I am glad it was cleared up that Morgana is NOT the one Grindling was talking about. She has enough worries. And go her for standing up for her friend.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Yes, Morgana kicked ass :)