II: An Unexpected Gift
Chapter 2 of 37
sevs_starsisters*COMPLETED* The Star Sisters have left Hogwarts and are now facing a new world with new opportunities and new kinds of danger. And also for the Half-Blood Prince, times are changing. (This story is the sequel to Star Sisters.)
Chapter II: An Unexpected Gift
The door of the owlery was flung open so vehemently that even the most serene of the school owls took flight with a terrified screech. The poor birds weren't used to somebody almost blasting the door off its hinges, especially not in the middle of the summer. And although they were used to noisy students who would come storming in like a horde of centaurs during the school year, they certainly expected more from the Hogwarts staff. One of the oldest owls, a majestic Great Grey, gave the intruder an indignant look, but even she soon averted her big yellow eyes. Had she met Snape's furious gaze any longer, she might just have fallen from her perch as if hit by the Killing Curse.
And the owl had acted wisely. Cursing someone or something wasn't beyond Severus Snape at the moment. Avada Kedavra especially wasn't far from his mind. But even in his foulest of moods, he knew that innocent owls were the wrong target. If anyone in the Hogwarts grounds deserved to be blasted away, then it was Albus Dumbledore.
He extended his left arm to call for an owl and waited. He was very well aware that he had startled the birds and would not have been surprised if none of them had come flying. But after only a couple of moments, there was the sound of wings beating the air, and on his outstretched arm landed a tiny, barely six-inch tall, red-tinged Eurasian Pygmy. Snape couldn't keep the corners of his mouth from twitching. What a coincidence that the only red owl at Hogwarts would answer his call to deliver a letter to a red-haired witch.
He placed the owl carefully on the bird bar and started to tie the letter around the bird's disproportionately large leg. He deliberately took his time. He didn't want to send this letter away. He didn't want Dumbledore to turn Morgana into a spy. She had been through enough. And being sent to Malfoy Manor was certainly not what the girl needed now.
The girl? Dumbledore was right, of course. Morgana was no child anymore. During her last school year, she had been forced to grow up faster than anyone would have expected. She had been thrown into a gigantic game of wizard chess and had been used like a pawn by Dumbledore as well as Lucius Malfoy. And he, Snape, her Head of House and mentor, had let it happen. Because, for some reason that was beyond his understanding, he still had wanted to believe that Dumbledore knew what he was doing.
He picked up the owl to carry it outside. Morgana lived in London now, and for a moment, Snape considered whether the journey would be too long for the tiny bird. But the animal had been so eager, and Snape didn't have the heart to untie the letter and give it to another owl. The little one would manage, he told himself. With any luck, it would get to London before nightfall.
He looked after the owl as it took off into the cloudy summer sky. It was a stubborn little bird, just as stubborn as the young woman it was delivering its letter to. And Snape secretly hoped Morgana would keep the owl for a while and then use it to send a letter a bit further south still to Somerset. Because there was another girl who had also been on Snape's mind this morning: Morgana's best friend, Charis Byrne.
Charis, too, had been through a rough time in her final year, some of which Snape himself had been the cause of. He supposed Charis was resting with her Muggle family before starting her own career at the Ministry of Magic, and he almost wished she would stay with the Muggles and not come back to the Wizarding world at all. Not that Muggles were in any less danger than wizards and witches in these dark times, but staying away from the Wizarding world would at least keep her out of the direct line of fire. But as he knew Charis Byrne, she would not hide away in the Muggle world. She had been hurt badly due to her so called impure blood status, and now she would certainly want to prove that she could do anything a pureblood could. And, by Merlin, she would surely succeed. But still.
He would never admit it to anyone, of course, but Snape was worried about his two girls. They had come to mean more to him than any other students, and he felt highly protective of them. The thought of them being thrown head first into danger, into a war, didn't appeal to him at all. And while Charis and Morgana had been at Hogwarts, they had at least had each other. Now, Snape wasn't sure if they had each other's support anymore.
He had seen a distance grow between the girls during their final year at Hogwarts. They had both been wrapped up in their own personal problems, and jealousy and misunderstandings had driven them even further apart. But in the end, after they had both been hurt in ways no teenage girl should ever be hurt, they had for some weeks seemed inseparable again. But then, once more, something had happened. Morgana had withdrawn, and Charis had appeared not to have either the strength or energy to make her friend come to her, or had for some reason chosen not to. What that reason might have been, however, Snape did not know.
The girls had embraced each other when they had left the castle on their last day of school and walked to Hogsmeade together. Most probably, they had shared a compartment on the train back to London, but as much as Snape knew, they had not been in contact since. Silvy would certainly have informed him of any activities, just as she had informed him about the fact that Morgana was not spending her nights in her room. The little elf was incredibly fond of her new mistress, and for some reason, she saw Snape as some sort of ally. Snape thought that this either had to do with the fact that the elf had seen him protect Morgana at Malfoy Manor or that the elf presumed he'd been somehow instrumental in setting her free. He had used the ally to his advantage and had made the elf smuggle a pair of enchanted mirrors into the girls' trunks. This only seemed to reinforce to the little elf that Snape was someone to be trusted.
He had seen the girls admire the two-way mirrors in the display window of Dervish & Banges when he had escorted them to London. He had also heard them talking about how useful those mirrors could be once they had left Hogwarts and were unable to see each other every day. But the set had been too costly, and the girls had not bought the mirrors. Little did they know that their Potions master had returned to Dervish & Banges the next day.
But the mirrors had not yet been activated; Snape knew that. He checked the third mirror regularly, the one that was safely tucked away among his private possessions and which he'd charmed to work with the pair from Dervish & Banges. But he'd never caught as much as a glimpse of either a pair of green or a pair of blue eyes. So, for the time being, all he could do was hope that Silvy would remember his order to mention to her mistress that there was a birthday present hidden in her trunk.
* * *
'Mistress. Mistress.'
Morgana shot off from her pillow. She had not meant to fall asleep. She had just meant to lie down for a while after Madam Nutkins' far too heavy dinner. But obviously, she had fallen asleep, and now somebody had woken her with a start. Her heart was pounding in her chest, her wand was clutched in her hand, and she was ready to throw a hex at her attacker. But there was none, of course. It was just her little house-elf, who had been tugging persistently at her sleeve.
'Sorry, Silvy,' Morgana muttered and put down her wand. With her now free hand, she affectionately patted the elf on her head. The poor thing looked terrified.
'Silvy made something for Mistress,' the little creature piped, her bottom lip wobbling slightly.
'Don't call me Mistress, Silvy,' Morgana pointed out for what seemed the millionth time. She had never seen Silvy as a servant, but the elf didn't understand that. And once more, the little creature cowered as she was chided.
'What have you made for me, Silvy?' Morgana asked, smiling and trying to sound as kind as possible. The elf had been through enough at her former master's house. She deserved better than to cower and be afraid that she would be punished for any kind of mistake.
'Silvy has made a cake for Mistr... for Miss Morgana.'
Out of thin air appeared what looked like an over-sized chocolate muffin, with pink topping and colourful sprinkles. It looked so sweet that Morgana's teeth ached just from looking at it.
She was just about to ask Silvy why she had baked a cake when the elf produced a candle and made it float onto the very top.
'Silvy wishes Miss Morgana a very happy birthday,' the elf squeaked and started to sing loudly and very falsely, but with a passion that made Morgana smile broadly.
She had never been one to make a big deal out of her birthday. At the orphanage, birthdays had been acknowledged with an extra piece of toast for breakfast and a shiny apple, which she had always given away due to her dislike of said fruit.
The first birthday that had been worth remembering had been her eleventh. She had received her Hogwarts letter, along with a letter that had carried the Malfoy crest. Mr Malfoy Lucius had let her know then that he had opened an account at Gringotts for her the day her parents had disappeared and that he would finance her education at Hogwarts. Back then, she had believed that he was doing this out of the goodness of his heart. Old pureblood families always looked out for one another, he had told her.
'Miss Morgana must blow out the candle and make a wish.'
Silvy's voice ripped Morgana out of her memories, and she did as the elf asked and blew out the candle. As for the wish, she had none. Not one that could be put in a simple sentence, anyway. There were so many things she wished for. Love and happiness, and a cure for her broken heart. But most of all she wished that she could re-live the last year of her life with the knowledge she had now. She would not fall for Lucius, she would not trust Dumbledore, and she would never break ties with her best friend.
'Now, Miss Morgana must open her present,' Silvy announced, her voice even more high-pitched than usual from excitement. 'It's in Miss Morgana's trunk.'
Frowning slightly, Morgana once more did as she was told, expecting to find a homemade token of admiration from the little elf. To her surprise, she found a parcel between her socks.
'Did you put this here, Silvy?' Morgana asked, picking up the parcel. She was wary of beautifully wrapped gifts nowadays, having received one too many that had meant trouble.
But the elf nodded vigorously. 'Yes, Miss. Silvy put it there. Silvy thinks Miss Morgana will like it.'
With slightly trembling fingers, Morgana unwrapped the parcel, one eye still on the elf. The little creature seemed on the edge of bursting with pride and excitement.
'A mirror?' Morgana asked. Why on earth would Silvy give her a mirror?
'Not just any mirror, Miss.'
Morgana turned the mirror in her hand. It looked familiar, but she couldn't place it somehow. It looked expensive and old. Silvy wouldn't have stolen it from Malfoy Manor, now would she?
'Silvy hopes Miss Morgana will like the mirror,' the elf repeated. 'Silvy knows how much Miss Morgana misses her best friend.'
Morgana's eyes widened as she recognised the mirror she was holding in her hand. It had been part of a pair, and she and Charis had admired them in the window of Dervish & Banges the day Snape had taken them to London. They would have loved to buy them, but twenty-five Galleons had been too high a price for either of them to afford. And now Silvy had...
Morgana's head snapped up, but she did not get a chance to ask the elf how on earth she had been able to buy the mirrors. The spot where Silvy had been standing only seconds ago was empty; the cake was perched on the writing desk and the mirror lay still in Morgana's hand. Now all she had to do was to call for her best friend.
* * *
It was almost midnight, and Charis lay fast asleep in her cramped little bedroom at her parents' house. She slept soundly and dreamlessly. The house was quiet, as her parents were also sleeping. Nothing was stirring, not even a mouse. Nor, indeed, her little white cat, who was curled up at the bottom of Charis' bed.
But then, a small shuddering noise broke the silence. It started as a slight rattling in the depths of Charis' still not yet unpacked trunk. Charis didn't stir. Then the rattling became louder, increasing in volume and strength until it turned into a rumbling. Something big seemed to want to break out of the depths of the trunk, which was now bouncing on the floor.
Charis woke with a start, clambered for the light switch of the lamp beside her bed without finding it, her eyes struggling to get used to the dark and her heart hammering in her chest. Terrified, she watched her trunk juddering in the faint moonlight. It was an eerie sight.
'Boggart,' Charis whispered in a fearful voice and started fishing for her wand in the top drawer of her bedside cabinet, all the while never taking her eyes off her trunk.
What would her Boggart turn into if it managed to break out of her trunk, Charis wondered. She hated spiders with a passion, and some months ago, her Boggart would certainly have turned into a huge tarantula. But now? Would it turn into a Death Eater? Would it turn into Bellatrix Lestrange? Or would she see herself, hunched and elderly, her eyes haunted from a life of loneliness and isolation?
Bracing herself, Charis crept towards the rattling trunk. She desperately hoped the noise wouldn't wake her parents. Her dad was a shift worker, and he would go mad if his sleep was interrupted. She needed to get rid of the Boggart quickly before it had a chance to wake up the whole house.
It had been a while since she had cast the Riddikulus charm, however. Would she still be able to? What happened to a person who failed to turn their Boggart into something funny?
Gripping her wand in one hand tightly, Charis bravely took the last steps towards the trunk, reminding herself that she had achieved some of the highest DADA marks of the year. She knew how to cast Riddikkulus. She would vanquish that Boggart. The spell already forming on her lips, she opened the trunk.
'Riddik...'
But there was no Boggart rising from the depths. Instead, there was a beautifully wrapped parcel bouncing up and down among old robes and textbooks.
Puzzled, Charis Levitated the parcel onto her pillow where it now lay quite still, waiting to be unwrapped. Charis, however, was wary. She wouldn't put it past some people to have planted something nasty in her trunk. The little weasel Draco Malfoy, for example, was high up on her list of suspects. But how would he have been able to access her trunk? Boys could not access the girls' dormitories.
Charis finally turned on the light and eyed the parcel suspiciously. It looked harmless enough now. Maybe it was alright to open it.
A well-placed spell made the blue wrapping paper dissolve into thin air and the box open up. Gingerly, Charis peered inside and caught sight of a beautiful silver mirror. And peering out at her from the mirror was the reflection of her best friend, Morgana Belakane.
'Morgana,' Charis whispered in astonishment.
The Slytherin in the mirror grinned, and a mischievous twinkle appeared in her blue eyes. 'Do you always open your birthday presents in the nude?'
With a whimper, Charis realised that she wasn't wearing any clothes. Despite it being a rainy summer with temperatures far below average, she was still sleeping in the nude. Quickly, she pulled the bed covers over her. Morgana had seen her naked before, but still Charis felt uncomfortable. She had never been a skinny girl, and since she had returned to her parents' house, she had eaten far too much greasy food and exercised far too little.
Once covered, she picked up the mirror and eyed it in admiration.
'It's even more beautiful than I remember it,' she breathed. Then her brow furrowed. 'Did you buy this?' she asked Morgana. 'How the hell did you afford it?'
'I can't afford something like that,' Morgana stated. 'I wasn't the one who bought it.'
'Then who?' Charis asked, once again feeling uneasy. Maybe she shouldn't have unwrapped the parcel after all.
But Morgana didn't seem worried. In fact, she was smiling.
'Someone who's about two-and-a-half feet tall with bat-like ears, huge eyes and an annoyingly squeaky voice,' she declared.
Charis' jaw dropped. 'Silvy? No way!'
'Yes, way,' Morgana replied. 'Turns out she hid my birthday present in a pair of socks.'
'And she got one for me, too?' Charis was already welling up. 'How adorable.'
Morgana, however, who had never been one to be easily moved or show her emotions, rolled her eyes. 'There wouldn't be a point in owning a two-way mirror if there weren't a sister piece somewhere, right?' she stated drily.
Charis quickly blinked away her tears. 'I have your present here, you know,' she declared. 'I just didn't...'
I just didn't know where to send it, she thought. She didn't own an owl, and could hence not just tell the bird to go find Morgana in London somewhere. And since Morgana hadn't contacted her, Charis hadn't known where to send the present. But she didn't want to tell Morgana. She didn't want to accuse her of not getting in touch.
'Did you have a good birthday?' Charis asked instead. 'How's London? Tell me everything!'
Morgana squirmed a little. She did feel slightly guilty about not having contacted her best friend. But she tried to convince herself that her reasons had been more than valid.
'Never mind about the present. You know I don't like to celebrate my birthday,' she replied. 'And London is... well, wet. It's been raining every day since I got here. And when it's not raining, then there is fog as thick as the fumes in the Potions classroom.'
'And how's the Ministry?' Charis wanted to know.
'I haven't started yet,' Morgana informed her. 'I'm to go there on Monday for some tests. Looks like the good grades and a letter of recommendation aren't going to guarantee anyone a spot among the Auror trainees. We're going to have practical tests, a physical and oh, joy a psychological evaluation. I'm so screwed.'
Charis giggled. 'Silly you. You'd do just fine. My start date has been moved forwards, you know. They want me to start as soon as possible. I'm really nervous!'
'You'll do just fine, too,' Morgana pointed out. 'With your grades... piece of cake. You'll make Head of Department in a couple of years.'
Charis blushed. 'We'll have to do lunch all the time,' she suggested. 'It will be so good to see you. I've missed you.'
Quickly, she lowered her gaze. She knew how much Morgana hated to talk about feelings. And to be honest, she felt a little embarrassed having admitted that she had missed her best friend. But to Charis' utter surprise, Morgana admitted that she had missed her, too.
Silence settled over the two rooms, the brightly illuminated one in Somerset and the dark one in London. Both girls were lost in their own thoughts, both contemplating just how much they missed each other. But neither breached the topic again.
'How are your parents?' Morgana asked after a while, the sound of her voice making it quite clear that she didn't really care. But Charis, too, was glad for a change of topics. She didn't want to talk about her feelings right now, not through a pair of mirrors. She wanted to tell Morgana in person when they met.
'Oh, same old,' she said. 'Mum's letting me sleep as much as I want, and Dad and I have watched loads of crap TV together. It's been nice just resting, though, to be honest. But what about you? Where are you living?'
'I'm renting a room at the corner of Diagon Alley and Knockturn Alley. It smells of bat droppings and cat pee, but the roof is tight and the bed is warm. And my landlady knows how to make a decent stew.'
'Do you feel safe there?' Charis asked, a knot forming in the pit of her stomach. She didn't like the idea of Morgana staying so close to Knockturn Alley.
But the Slytherin seemed oblivious. 'What do you mean, safe?'
'Well, you know,' Charis started tentatively. 'Knockturn Alley can be pretty dodgy.'
'It's not like I am camping down there,' Morgana replied, her voice just a bit more aggressive than she had intended. She didn't want Charis to worry. And worry she would if she knew that Morgana had spent more nights wandering about in Knockturn Alley than sleeping in her own bed.
But Charis seemed to sense something. 'Do be careful, alright?' she begged. 'Don't go looking for trouble.'
To that, Morgana said nothing, and once more, their conversation fell dead, as neither of them knew what to say.
This time, it was Charis who broke the silence.
'I met up with Jack last week,' she told Morgana. 'You'll never guess! He's only been accepted on an apprenticeship to be a Curse Breaker in Egypt! He'll get a Portkey at the end of August. He said we should come and visit!'
'Egypt?' Morgana asked. 'Wasn't one of the Weasley brothers working there?'
'Yeah, I think so,' Charis answered. 'It sounds so exciting, all those old tombs and treasures. You know how much Jack loves History of Magic. He can't wait to start.'
'I bet he'll have a good time,' Morgana said. 'Surely, even mummy-infested pyramids are calmer than the Ministry will be.'
Charis nodded. 'I know. That's why I'm so nervous. Part of me is dreading working there. There is so much damage done to the Department of Mysteries. It's going to be a huge clean-up operation. That's why my start date has been pulled forwards.'
'So you'll be playing maid?' Morgana grinned. 'Want me to send Silvy along with you?'
'As long as she brings her chocolate croissants. You will thank her for me, won't you? For the present?'
Morgana nodded. 'I will. Guess I'll have to buy her a pair of socks now. She'll explode with happiness.'
Both girls giggled, and for some moments, everything just seemed like old times.
'It's been really good to speak to you, you know,' Charis said later. 'I've been worried about you.'
'Why would you be worried about me?' Morgana asked.
'Because you're my best friend,' Charis replied. 'And you live near Knockturn Alley in a house that smells like bat droppings.'
And I feel like you're slipping away from me, Charis added in her mind. But she didn't say it out loud.
'Well, you didn't know that, did you?' Morgana asked.
Charis bravely put out her chin. 'Had I known, I would have worried even more.'
'Silly little thing.' Morgana snorted. 'Just as cute as ever. When are you arriving in London, you think?'
'Soon. I have robes to buy, flats to look at.'
'Are you planning to rent something on your own, or will you be staying in one of the Ministry flats?'
'I'm thinking the easiest thing is to stay at the Ministry flats for now, then look properly for something when I have time. They don't look too bad, according to the brochure.'
Morgana shrugged. 'Yeah, guess they're alright. I received a welcome letter from the Auror department the other day, saying that I could stay in one of their flats, too. But I don't know.'
'We could live together!' Charis exclaimed, looking all excited. 'How awesome would that be?'
'Awesome?' Morgana cocked an eyebrow. 'You sleep in the nude. Besides, you'll be bringing your cat, won't you?'
As on cue, the little white cat that had been sound asleep at the foot end of Charis' bed mewed.
Morgana grinned. 'Hi, snake bait.'
Lily walked forward and sniffed the mirror, mewing.
'She missed you,' Charis pointed out. And Morgana couldn't help but smile.
They talked for a while longer, making plans for lunch and flats and promising each other that they would catch up soon. And they surely would have talked until the early hours of the morning had not a tiny, reddish owl landed on Morgana's windowsill, carrying a roll of parchment addressed to Morgana Belakane, the smallest and darkest room at the corner of Diagon Alley and Knockturn Alley, London.
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Great start. Albums would really sacrifice anyone to win the war. I hope both of a star sisters find their happy ending and the war doesn't destroy their souls.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Now you reminded us of that we should wirte a Part 3. :)
well, what can I say? This was a blast from beginning to end. Loved your new characters and how the Malfoys once again play a big part in Morganna's love life. Severus what a naughty man coming up with the three mirrors and him being a bit of a peeping Tom lol. Least he kept his word and did ensure the star sisters safety and nice to see him hinting at them to both wear their star necklaces once more.
The scene where the girls on Christmas Eve made that special spell and vow was beautifully written. Also the Scenes on new years eve and after were tenderly done and not in a harsh way but in a loving one. Even Snapes watching was done with a special feel and not pervy at all. Shall look forward to read more in this series and see if Snape can loose his dark thoughts and become a man who can accept love in the end and be rid of the Lily Ghost.
Thanks for writing and creating this lovely series. Really enjoyed reading it and sorry I did not get time to review every chapter. Consider this worth a hundred reviews.
Congrats.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
The relationship between Charis and Morgana has become a beautiful thing, and I'm very happy for them and glad that Severus will continue to watch over his girls. One day I hope his heart will be healed and that he will remember how to love. And allow himself to be loved.I'm sad this story has come to an end (for now), but I'm so happy to know that you aren't done with these characters—I've grown quite fond of them. For now we will let them sleep. I want to let you know how much I've enjoyed Star Sisters and now Shooting Stars. You are very gifted writers, and I thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. I wish you both good days and much happiness. May real life calm down for you, and allow you the opportunity to once again weave this magic you do so well.I give you my thanks with much gratitude and lots of hugs,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Mmmm... I think I'd like a cup of tea and a biscuit after reading this chapter! Or perhaps a cigarette? Smoking hot writing, ladies. Thank you from the bottom of my... err... heart!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Gorgeous chapter, and I appreciated Snape leaving them be and also not taking himself in hand. As he realises the feeling blossoming in his chest, my heart ached for him a little bit. Then followed "A love he had no part of, a love he would never be able to share with anyone" which summed it all up and put a lump in my throat. Ah, Snape. Forever the tragic anti-hero. Lovely writing.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
I enjoyed your creation of Dumbledore's vow and its execution - gentle and manipulative - much like the man himself. I love that Dumbledore also set up their New Year's celebration with Snape, even though, so far at least, Snape hasn't got in on the action! The tenderness between Morgana and Charis is lovely. Reading on...
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
"The way Ravenclaws seemed to be fascinated by the stars was simply adorable" bahaha! Pity that I didn't realise the significance of the constellation Leo; I've let down team Ravenclaw! At least I'd managed to suss out the connection to Slytherin's locket via the house-elf, thus tracing it back to Black. This is a lovely chapter brimming with charm and intimacy between the Star Sisters, and their spell-casting was beautiful and poignant. I also enjoyed Morgana's metaphor for moving on at the end of the chapter. I must say, though, that you've plotted your story meticulously and have been wonderfully crafty with the prophecy; not just with its puzzle, but also making your story fit seamlessly into canon... After all, we were never told how Dumbledore came to discover the locket. I take my hat off to you, ladies!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Now it's time to turn fantasy into reality for Severus and his girls--can the teasing giggling be leading up to them beckoning him over to their side *hopeful look*--great menage-a-trois dynamics; I really like Morgana's sexuality being released and expressed, reinforcing her healing from the past and embracing the present and future; Charis' divine sub positions--yum! and as I said last chapter, Severus is one lucky wizard... *sighing* Lovely, dynamic, lemony chapter as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
As I began reading this chapter I was so surprised that I had to go back and read the end of the previous chapter to be sure I understood what had happened... which, of course, I didn't, but I didn't know that until Severus woke up that I realized it was his dream. You two ladies are masters of the twisty plot. Well done!
Dreaming as he had been, I was glad he allowed himself to carry his dream to fruition in the shower. Perhaps this "Sweet Release" will help him get through the coming storm. Soon he will have to kill Dumbledore and then endure his tenure as Headmaster until the entire house of cards comes falling down.
I was very happy for him when heard Charis and Morgana talking and giggling in their activated mirrors. It would be very sweet if his dream became a reality after all is said and done. But I'm not kidding myself one tiny bit that I can predict just what you two have in mind for these three dear people. The only thing I'm sure of right now is that I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update.
Thank you for a very nice chapter!!!
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
It's a relief for Morgana and Charis that they have finally and truly shared their love for each other. And not only a relief for the two of them, but for Severus as well, I think. He has such strong feelings for both of them, and I think knowing that they have declared their love and cemented their relationship has given him peace of mind that they will be all right no matter what happens.
He loved those two girls dearly in his own special way. They would never know, of course, but he hoped that every now and then, they would remember him with fondness.
This chapter has really touched my heart. I don't know what will happen to Severus, and it makes me sad to think of him being alone. I hope he can find something or someone to "hang onto" as future events unfold. Be kind to him, ladies. Be kind.Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Mmmn... beautiful! Love their love-making, giving and sharing to each other the way each one needs, and Severus witnessing it--some wizards have all the luck! What a lovely way to bring in the New Year!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
I love this story even more than the last one.
I have no idea how the two of you do it but I am grateful that you do.
Sorry for not leaving reviews before now, but it is often difficult to find words for my appreciation! Rest assured that I always eagerly await the next instalment.
Such a beautiful and unusual story... the pair of you need to create a universe of your own! I'm sure we could expect great things from such imaginations! Perhaps just as great as the universe that brought your two formidable minds together!
Thank you.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
‘When the rope dissolves and we let go of each other, neither of you will be able to convey what you have learnt here today,’ Dumbledore explained. ‘You will have a faint memory of our conversation with Kreacher, but trying to remember the details will be like trying to remember a dream. The harder you try, the further will it drift away. And unless we three stand here once more, with our hands entwined, you will never be able to remember.’Damn. I wish the girls had not had to agree to take that vow. But if they hadn't, then he would have Obliviated them. I hope they really will be safer not remembering the prophecy.I can't help but wish Severus didn't have to spend New Year's Eve with only a bottle of Ogden's to keep him company while he watches his girls coming to understand the depth of their feelings for each other. With Severus already upstairs and the girls on their way up the stairs, I wonder if they'll run into each other? I'm off to the next chapter to find out. :^)Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
With Grindling moving to Greece for good, I guess there's no way he will be a regular part of either of the girls' lives. Sometimes I think it's better just to move on and cut your losses, but I know Charis and Morgana will be sad when they realize he has left his position at the Ministry and packed up lock, stock, and barrel.
That was a lovely spell that Charis created to permanently join the girls' star necklaces together. It was pretty cool the way Morgana's star glowed Ravenclaw blue and Charis' glowed Slytherin green. I was tickled when Charis solved the riddle of the prophecy- all that time studying Astronomy really paid off! Now Dumbledore wants them to wait a week. Perhaps he does want to do some research of his own.
I'm glad Morgana has a new Patronus- a majestic black feline is much better than her old Peacock. It's very telling that they have such similar Patronuses, isn't it? It seems like their world is settling into something solid and stable, but with Grindling out of the picture (for now, anyway) I'm wondering what Severus will do? Poor man is damned if he does and damned if he doesn't. Speaking of Severus... what is he doing right now?
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
It seems that it has taken tonight's events and their outcomes to bring Severus to the point where he can relax enough to realize that Charis and Morgana love each other. But I'm not sure if they can be happy with only each other. Grindling loves Charis, and I think he has very strong feelings for Morgana as well. Charis loves Severus, and Morgana feels very safe with him. Severus loves Charis and Morgana. And I have absolutely no idea how this is going to work out. There are a number of permutations that come to mind, and one of them is that Severus, Charis, and Morgana become a threesome family. Or Grindling could make for a foursome family. Or Grindling could find himself with Narcissa when all hell breaks loose and Lucius ends up dead or in prison for the rest of his life. Or if Severus dies, then Grindling, Charis and Morgana could make a life together.This emotional awakening Severus has undergone, leaves me feeling very afraid for him. I fear he will go willingly to meet death so long as he thinks "his girls" are safe and happy. Is he falling into well of dark resignation?Thank you for this thought provoking chapter, ladies. I still don't have any idea how this will all turn out, and now I have an even longer list of possible outcomes. You are masters of mystery!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
The place where Ravenclaws always took comfort and solitude: the library.' This had e tearing up! And the delicious lemony, Snapey goodness-sene has me saying, Merlin's balls, sevs_starsisters, yes, yes, yes! and more, more, more! *taking a deep satisfied sigh* Thank you! (and Miss Charis needs to heed Sev's advice for her and Morgana--speaking of which, can't wait for Sev's jetsetting over to Malfoy manor, maybe Ms Morgana needs some *special* attention too from the Potions master--he is suppose to take care of both his girls *decadent cackle* Lovely, yummy chapter, as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Poor, dear Grindling--lovely moments and chemistry and trust between these two, only to be breathtakingly blown away with the scene between Morgana and Severus--yes, yes, yes! Could feel Morgana breaking through and liberating herself with Severus *perfect, bloody f------ perfect* Thank you!! xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Now I see what you meant when you told me that Severus would feel pretty guilty... but I have to wonder just how guilty he really felt. Still and all, Morgana is free from the weight of a millstone named Lucius Malfoy, and Severus has promised that Narcissa will not bother her again. Even crazy Bellatrix served a useful purpose. Thanks to her, Grindling has heard Narcissa say the words that set him free... at least I hope he is free from Narcissa's machinations. In the study, Severus told Morgana to ‘Enjoy a Malfoy-free life. Spend time with the ones who love you the most.’ He left before she could ask who he meant, and then I remembered that Grindling had told her that he wished things could have been different. Soooo... could it be that Grindling has a bit of a crush on Morgana, or is he still in love with the memory of Narcissa... or will he return to Charis? They will see each other because they're trying to solve the Prophesy, but what will they think about the things that have happened in the last few hours? Charis will be thinking about "her boss" and her former teacher. Morgana will be thinking about her former teacher. Narcissa will be thinking about wringing her sister's neck, and mourning the loss of perhaps the only opportunity to regain her husband's freedom and their lost stature in the ranks of the purebloods. Severus will be thinking about both Charis and Morgana... I wish I knew what was going through Severus' mind in regard to both of "his girls." I still can't shake the feeling that he really holds romantic thoughts about Charis, but I have to say you ladies really do keep the waters muddied up enough that I can't ever be sure. Maybe Morgana and Grindling will be attracted to each other, and... *sigh*What is going to go on at Malfoy Manor will all those Death Eaters still there? Oh what a tangled web we weave....Great chapter. As always!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Hot dayum! Hot DAYUM! I am so damned happy that Severus and Charis had their "alone time" in the library... and he was so tender and made sure she had the orgasm of her life before he had his.‘The stars,’ he said and pointed at his throat as if to indicate a necklace he was wearing. ‘Renew the charm. Wear them. The both of you.’He still cares for Charis. His kiss on her cheek and urgging her and Morganna to wear their star necklaces proves it beyond all doubt.Thanks, I needed that! *grinning*Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Of all the rooms for Narcissa to choose from... I wonder just what Narcissa knows and what she doesn't know about Morgana and Lucius? Could Narcissa have some other motive we don't yet know about? I don't think so, but I have learned not to underestimate you ladies, either.In the meantime, what are Snape and Charis doing in thier search for the meaning of the prophesy? Sooner or later one of them is bound to say or do something that comfirms for the other that there are still real and deep emotions involved between. I can't wait to see what you have in store for our lovely characters next? Hope to see the next chapter soon!!!Berh
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
I hope she opens up. It would be good for her to get it out. Grindling is a complex character; not quite sure what to make of him yet. I'm glad you're still writing this story, I love following it. 5 stars.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Well, Charis got the info she needed. She just needs to remember her astronomy now.I've known this pair of stories have been out there for some time but avoided reading them because they were not about canon-centric characters. But I took a chance and I've really enjoyed them. I look forward to finding out what happens. Keep up the good work!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for taking a chance on our stories, we're really thrilled you've enjoyed them and we hope you'll stick with the sequel. Thanks again for your support, it means a lot!
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
May I say I never expected you two to answer ALL my reviews since I left a ton of them at one time. But thank you. If I've put you behind on your writing, feel free to blame me.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We try to answer all our reviews. It's so nice to get feedback, and we like to show that we appreciate your thoughts. And no worries, you haven't slowed us down. Next chapter is being beta-read at the moment and we have done plenty of plotting. Lemons ahead ;-)
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
Ah lemon....one of my favorite flavors!
I think Charis is far too forgiving (maybe I just don't like Grindling).TeeHee, Severus is SOOOOO BAD. I love him.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He's a naughty boy! and that's why we love him, right?
Oooh the plot thickens. I think I've figured out most of the prophecy, now to watch as the characters figure it out.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Let's see if you're right :)
I am glad it was cleared up that Morgana is NOT the one Grindling was talking about. She has enough worries. And go her for standing up for her friend.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Yes, Morgana kicked ass :)