XII: An Orderly Tea – Part Two
Chapter 12 of 37
sevs_starsisters*COMPLETED* The Star Sisters have left Hogwarts and are now facing a new world with new opportunities and new kinds of danger. And also for the Half-Blood Prince, times are changing. (This story is the sequel to Star Sisters.)
Chapter XII: An Orderly Tea Part Two
Charis sneaked out of the lounge clutching a plate with a fat slab of carrot cake on it, her mind still buzzing with so far unanswered questions. It didn't seem right that she and Morgana had both been invited to join the Order of the Phoenix but hadn't shared this exciting news with each other. Of course, Charis well understood the need to keep the Order a secret, and like herself, Morgana had certainly promised Dumbledore not to speak of it to anyone, not even her best friend.
She crept along the gloomy hallway and then carefully made her way up the stairs, noticing the grotesque, shrivelled heads of deceased house-elves on plaques lining the wall. She had seen them before during her first visit to Grimmauld Place, and at the time Sirius had explained to her that every house-elf that had ever served the House of Black had had their head chopped off and mounted on a plaque. Charis had found the whole idea more than grisly, and now, in the dim light, when the shadows made the heads appear even more ugly and monstrous, Charis couldn't help but grimace in revulsion. The idea of beheading house-elves was horrid enough, but mounting their heads on the wall? Disgusting! Absolutely disgusting! Yet she couldn't make herself look away.
Suddenly, the sound of footsteps behind her made her spin around, and she nearly dropped her plate with shock. She was now facing an elf that was, if possible, even more repulsive than those on the wall, with bloodshot eyes, a bulbous nose and white hair growing out of his ears. But even though he was standing right in front of her, he didn't seem to notice her. Instead, he was gazing almost fondly up at the dried heads.
After a moment, Charis found her voice. 'Excuse me... D-do you live here?' she asked politely.
'Kreacher has served the most noble house of Black since the day Kreacher was born,' the elf replied in a croaky, bullfrog-like voice, still avoiding Charis' eyes. 'So had Kreacher's mother.'
'Kreacher?' Charis repeated. 'I... my name is Charis... It's nice to meet you,' she added unsurely.
'The Mudblood talks to Kreacher as if she thinks he'd want to speak to her,' Kreacher muttered miserably whilst beginning to polish a plaque with the dirty, ragged towel he was wearing as clothes. Or at least, Charis thought it was a towel. The piece of fabric was in such a bad state that it was hard to tell.
'If my poor mistress knew what kind of filth is walking around in her house... Mudbloods, bloodtraitors and freaks.'
Charis was so shocked by the elf's open display of hostility that she decided she had to get away from the foul being as quickly as possible. 'Um, I'm trying to find my friend. I'll just be going, then...,' she said hurriedly, scrambling up the stairs.
'The Mudblood is calling a pureblood her friend,' the elf continued muttering, rubbing the plaque with such force that it began to rattle on the wall.
Charis, in her haste to get away from the wretched elf, turned sharply at the top of the stairs, but to her utter surprise, Kreacher called out after her.
'Not that way, Miss...' He made a strange choking sound, almost as if he really didn't want to address her, but then bustled up the remaining stairs and gave Charis the tiniest of bows. 'Kreacher will show the way.'
Charis was now even more stunned by the elf's change of attitude. 'Oh! Thank you, Kreacher. That's very kind of you,' she replied, hoping to stay on the elf's good side.
'Kreacher is bound to serve the house of Black,' he grumbled quietly, shuddering, before making his way down the corridor.
Charis followed him, frowning at first, but then suddenly realising what his words meant. As she was a descendent of the Blacks, Kreacher was bound to serve her, too! Although he clearly wasn't very happy about it, as he seemed to share his previous owner's view on blood status. But still, he had no choice.
The elf extended his hand to a door, giving a funny sort of half-bow. 'Your friend is in here,' he rasped.
'Thank you, Kreacher,' Charis answered sincerely. Having to serve such vile witches and wizards for so long must have been difficult for the elf, and his hostility was understandable. If she was nice to him now...
But Kreacher was already shuffling off back down the corridor, murmuring once more to himself. 'Mudbloods and bloodtraitors all messing about in Mistress' house, and Kreacher has to serve. The shame, the shame...'
Watching the elf disappear from sight and pondering on his plight, Charis eyed the door in front of her. It had seen better days, like so much else in the house: the doorknob seemed to be slightly loose and the paint was peeling off the dark wood. In all, the shabby state of the door stood in contrast to the highly polished, little sign that read:
Do Not Enter
Without the Express Permission of
Regulus Arcturus Black
Charis narrowed her eyes. The name rang a bell, and she was sure that Sirius must have told her about Regulus when he had shown her his their family tree, but for the time being, Charis couldn't place the name. Making a mental note to check the tapestry in the drawing room later, she knocked lightly on the door. She could hear hurried footsteps and a slight thud, which sounded like someone obviously making their way to the bed.
'I am lying down, Molly!' came Morgana's exasperated voice.
'It's not Molly,' Charis called back. 'Can I come in?'
She heard more steps before the door opened a tiny bit. One blue eye peered out in surprise.
'Charis?!'
Morgana opened the door fully now, and Charis couldn't tell if her friend was pleased to see her or not. She hadn't exactly expected Morgana to wrap her arms around her, as the Slytherin was not the type who hugged and showed emotions on a whim. But a smile wouldn't have been too much to ask for, would it?
'What are you doing here?' Morgana asked, clearly perplexed.
'I could ask the same,' Charis grinned and stepped into the bedroom. It was shabby and dark. Once, it had probably been a very opulent room. But these days, the emerald and silver pelmet was tattered, the wallpaper faded, and the carpet looked as if it had seen better days. Still, the room was clean, and the bed looked comfy.
'I asked first,' Morgana demanded, closing the door and then crossing her arms in front of her chest. Charis noticed that her left hand was heavily bandaged.
'Albus invited me to join the Order. And by the looks of it, he asked you, too.' She looked down at Morgana's hand. 'Are you alright? What happened to your hand?'
'Nothing. Molly likes to mother me, that's all,' Morgana replied dismissively. 'Anyway, what do you mean, Albus invited you to join the Order? When?'
'He sent me a letter on Monday asking to meet with him. Imagine my surprise! At first, I thought he was going to tell me that there had been a mix-up with my grades, or something, but he enquired about my job, and we talked about Sirius and You-Know-Who. And then he asked if I wanted to join the Order of the Phoenix and invited me for tea today to give my decision.' Charis paused. 'I assume you have experienced something similar?'
Morgana nodded quickly. 'I joined the day after you stayed the night, after the attack on Fortescue's,' she explained, carefully omitting the fact that she had been invited to join already on the night of their shared birthday.
'It's been a week ago since we spoke to Dumbledore then,' Charis idly realised. 'And we haven't spoken to each other since. Time's surely racing away! Remember when we had the time to spend the whole afternoon playing Gobbstones? And now look at us! Both busy having jobs and both of us in the Order. Well, this is fun!' Charis smiled. 'I brought you some cake.'
Morgana accepted the cake but placed it carefully down on the nightstand without a second glance. She wasn't entirely convinced that the word fun was the best word to describe their current situation.
'Have you accepted Dumbledore's offer yet?' she asked.
'Not yet... it's why I came here today.'
Morgana opened her mouth to speak, but Charis beat her too it. She might have barely seen her friend since they left Hogwarts, but she knew Morgana well enough to sense when the Slytherin was about to make an objection. And when it came to joining the Order, Charis was not going to let anyone talk her out of it. Hence, she changed subjects.
'Have you seen that house-elf, Kreacher?'
Morgana nodded.
'He's foul!' Charis continued, confident that she had distracted her friend. 'He called me a Mudblood earlier, but I think he's bound to serve me because I'm related to the Blacks!'
Morgana's eyebrows creased faintly at the word Mudblood. She had once given Vincent Crabbe a black eye for using that word. A house-elf should be even easier to punish.
'Make sure he doesn't poison your food,' she replied dryly, following Charis' anxious look towards the cake before grinning. 'Anything Molly makes should be fine, though.'
'The cake is great! You should try it,' Charis enthused, but Morgana only gave a half-shrug in response.
'Anyway, how are you? How's work?' Charis continued, still determined to not let Morgana come back to the subject of the Order.
Morgana sat down on the bed, which gave a worrying creak. 'Work's good. Moody is a nutter, though. Two more trainees have quit, and one was brought to St. Mungo's the other day. At that rate, there won't be any of us left by Christmas.'
At this news, Charis could only look worriedly at her friend's hand.
'Burnt,' Morgana said matter-of-factly, answering Charis' unasked question. 'Wasn't fast enough to block a Scorching Hex.'
'Ouch.' Charis was sincerely sympathetic. Her work may not be exciting, but at least she wasn't risking injury in the Department of Mysteries. She supposed a falling prophecy might hurt, but it was nothing compared to the very real danger Morgana was facing as a trainee Auror.
Morgana, however, merely shrugged. 'It stung. But I was told off, big time!'
Moody had told her off for quite a few things that day, some trivial, some more serious. Their first argument had arisen over the fact that Morgana still refused to move into one of the Ministry-owned flats. Moody liked his trainees to stay in close proximity to the Ministry and each other, but Morgana claimed that she couldn't leave Madam Nutkins. The old lady had grown accustomed to company, Morgana claimed, and she told Moody that she was responsible for buying breakfast while Madam Nutkins was in charge of dinner every day. Just why she was out buying croissants at the crack of dawn, however, Morgana omitted and with it her true reason for not giving up her room at Madam Nutkins: nightly excursions to Knockturn Alley would be virtually impossible if she lived in a Ministry flat, and Morgana was not ready to give them up. In fact, she had spent every night in the shadowy alley that week, slinking in and out of seedy bars and shifty shops, and now the lack of sleep was beginning to take out its toll, and she had a hard time focusing on her training. Moody had noticed, of course, and decided to teach her a lesson. Had he expected Morgana to be able to block his Scorching Hex, he would have aimed for a body part more vital than her left hand. But he had known that she would be too slow and made his move accordingly, scorching her left hand and bruising her ego and thus making sure Morgana would be focused the next day.
'What about you?' Morgana asked, shifting the topic on to her friend. 'How was your first week?'
'It's been okay,' Charis began, wary that she couldn't speak too much of her line of work. 'I'm not exactly solving the mysteries of the universe yet, but there is a lot of work to do. My boss is really nice.' At this, she blushed slightly, and Morgana, sensing gossip as keenly as a snake sensed its prey, patted the space on the bed beside her, a mischievous twinkle in her eyes. 'Oh, do tell.'
Charis grinned and took a seat beside her friend. 'Well, he's very handsome. Sandy hair. Kind twinkling eyes. Has a way of making you feel at home, do you know what I mean?'
Morgana couldn't deny that the man sounded very nice indeed. 'Single?' she enquired.
'I don't know, actually,' Charis admitted.
'Shouldn't be hard to find out.'
'Bet he isn't,' Charis murmured, fiddling with the bed sheets nervously. She hadn't thought of Grindling in that way before. But now Morgana mentioned it...
'What about you?' she asked. 'Any hotties on Auror training?'
Morgana raised a sardonic eyebrow. 'Apart from Moody?'
Charis couldn't help but giggle. 'Yeah, a real catch that one! I've heard he can do things with that eye... that would make you scream like a banshee!'
She burst into laughter again as Morgana made groans of disgust at the very thought.
'You're sick and twisted,' she stated, her pretty little nose screwed up in revulsion.
'I thought that was your job?' Charis bit back immediately, and she didn't even mind when Morgana playfully swatted her arm in retaliation. This was just like the good old times.
'It's good to see you again,' Charis smiled. She missed this: the cosy camaraderie, the messing about.
'It's good to see you, too,' Morgana agreed. 'But, Charis... Think carefully about joining the Order, I implore you. Dumbledore can be very persuasive. Don't let him talk you into something you don't want to do.'
Charis felt a warm glow at the concern from her friend. But as far as she was concerned, Morgana's fears were unfounded. 'You don't have to worry, Morgana. I've thought it through.'
'Have you? Do you know what he wants you to do for the Order?'
'Not exactly,' Charis confessed. 'It'll be something to do with where I work, I presume.'
Morgana narrowed her eyes suspiciously. 'And that doesn't sound fishy to you?'
'Not really, no,' Charis replied. 'The Order needs eyes and ears everywhere,' she reasoned.
'Be careful,' Morgana said quietly.
Once more, Charis felt a rush of affection for her friend. 'Again, I could say the same to you,' she smiled, looking down at Morgana's bandaged hand.
Morgana shrugged and was trying to make up her mind whether to tell Charis about the task Dumbledore had set her when the creak of a floorboard out on the landing made her draw her wand. But she quickly stowed it away again, as she noticed Charis' slightly shocked expression.
'Sorry,' she said. 'Occupational habit. Constance vigilance, you know. Bet it's just Kreacher, polishing his mother's plaque.'
Charis screwed up her face, and the girls talked for some moments about the abomination of mounting chopped-off heads on plaques. Neither of them even suspected that the person who much to his chagrin had made the floorboard creak was none other than their former Potions master, Severus Snape.
'Seriously, though, don't worry Morgana,' Charis soothed, picking up the thread again. 'We've both made the right decision. Don't you think?'
Out on the landing, Snape scowled. In his opinion, the girls had made the worst decision possible, and he would do everything in his power to make them change their minds, even if it meant hurting them. Better him hurting their feelings than some Death Eater harming them physically. Mindful of not making another sound, he continued to listen at the door.
'I thought you hadn't made yours yet?' Morgana asked. She knew it was useless to try and talk Charis out of something once her mind was made up. Still, it didn't mean she had to like the idea. And just like Snape, she would do her best to make Charis change her mind and thus keep her out of harm's way.
'I've made it,' Charis informed her. 'I just haven't told Albus yet.'
Morgana sighed heavily. It was too late then. Charis had made up her mind. 'He must be desperate if he wants the likes of us to join,' she said instead, trying to hide the fact that she was upset.
Charis raised her eyebrows. 'The likes of us? Two hot Hogwarts graduates with great grades?'
'Hot? Speak for yourself.' Morgana felt the word hot would be the last way to describe herself at the moment. Neurotic, damaged, plain. But definitely not hot.
Snape, on the other hand, agreed with Charis. He had always appreciated Morgana's curves, and from the little he had seen of her when he had observed her through his mirror a little over a week ago, he concluded that she didn't have to be ashamed of her body either.
'Come on, sexy Slytherin,' Charis grinned, elbowing her friend gently in the ribs. 'Even I've noticed how toned you've become. Wish there was a spell to get rid of my excess fat, though.' Now it was her turn to sigh.
'That's not excess fat,' Morgana declared. 'Those are very feminine curves which you can be proud of.'
Charis giggled.
'Surely, your boss has noticed.'
'He's very sweet to me,' Charis confided. 'But he's lovely to everyone. He's such a decent man.'
'There aren't many of those out there,' Morgana replied, just a little bit more gloomy than she intended. 'Maybe I should consider my options and turn gay.'
Oh, for crying out loud! Snape decided that he had heard enough now, and with a curt knock on the door, he made the girls aware of his presence. Getting friendly with Grindling Gibbons and becoming a lesbian! What on earth had Molly put in the girls' cake?
'Quick, lie down,' Charis hissed, immediately thinking it was Molly knocking on the door, wanting to check up on her newest patient. And Morgana, not too keen on being told off by Mrs Weasley, did as she was told, amidst much creaking of the bed.
Once Morgana looked suitably settled, Charis crossed the room and opened the door. But instead of Molly, she was greeted with the stern, imposing figure of Snape, who was now looking at her like something he'd just scraped off his shoe. Charis could not help but gasp; Snape was the last person she'd expected to show up.
'I hate to break up this giggle party,' he sneered imperiously, fixing Charis with one of his blackest stares, 'but Dumbledore wants to see everyone in the kitchen now.'
'Uh, thanks, um, sir,' Charis muttered. She didn't know how to address him; Severus still seemed too informal, despite their shared intimacy and the fact that everyone else in the Order was on a first name basis. He was no longer her professor, but she was sure he would not offer an alternative.
Sure enough, she wasn't wrong. 'You'd be advised to come straight away,' Snape carried on. 'Some of us have better things to do than hang around this hovel all day.'
And with no further ado, he turned on his heel and billowed off down the corridor.
'Charming as ever, that one,' Morgana noted, hiding the disappointment she felt from Snape's lack of acknowledgement. One would have expected that he would at least have said hello. After all, they had not seen each other since their last day at Hogwarts.
'Did you know he was here?' she asked.
'I saw him earlier,' Charis responded. 'I didn't think he'd be staying for tea, though. He already turned down Molly's first cake. I hope he won't have a face like a bulldog chewing a wasp when he tries the second one.'
'Would it really surprise you if he does?' Morgana asked in a sour tone. So Charis had already spoken to Snape? Wasn't that just typical?
'Not really,' Charis answered with a sigh. 'But I don't want it to put me off my cake.'
Both girls laughed at this, even Morgana, realising that it didn't really matter whether Charis had already met Snape. Judging from the mood he seemed to be in, not having met him didn't seem like that bad an option.
* * *
Charis followed Morgana through into the kitchen, and the pair were faced with various Order members looking up at them expectantly. Lupin was sitting next to Tonks, who had Moody on her left. Dumbledore, meanwhile, was at the head of the table whilst Molly busied herself with pouring tea for the assembled mob.
'Come in, come in, girls! Sit yourselves down, that's right,' she fussed. 'Another slice of cake, I think! Girls your age need to eat.'
'Looks lovely, Mrs Weasley,' Charis grinned as the Weasley matriarch pushed a slice of chocolate cake towards each of them. Morgana, however, merely smiled weakly.
'Molly, dearest, call me Molly,' Molly trilled, clearly enjoying the praise about her culinary abilities. 'I'm sorry I cannot offer any dinner tonight, but I need to get going soon. Lots of hungry mouths to feed at the Burrow.'
Everyone was now sitting around the table, happily sipping tea and munching on cake. Everyone, that was, apart from Snape. There was a space laid for him, complete with a steaming teacup, but he seemed to have vanished. Strange, he'd had almost half a minute's head start. He should have arrived in the kitchen before the girls.
'Now, where is he moping about?' Molly asked, wiping her hands on her apron.
She did not seem to notice that Snape had appeared in doorway soundlessly, with the stealth of a panther.
'I do not mope, Molly,' he said in a low voice.
Molly blushed furiously. 'I didn't mean that, Severus,' she replied 'I... I just didn't want your tea to go cold.'
Dumbledore's blue eyes twinkled over his half-moon glasses as he extended his hand in welcome. 'Have a seat, Severus.'
Snape hovered for a moment, then swept across to the free seat and sat down. He lifted the proffered cup of tea, but when Molly pushed a piece of cake towards him, he said, 'I will have to decline the cake, I'm afraid.'
'Now, Severus, I implore you once more to have some cake,' Dumbledore admonished jovially. 'It's a special occasion, after all.'
Snape cocked an eyebrow. 'That special occasion,' he said mockingly, 'is still no reason for me to be eating cake.' In his opinion, this was most definitely no reason to eat cake.
'Ah, Severus. Good food is a joy to share with good friends.' Once more, Dumbledore's eyes twinkled benevolently at the stern man before him.
Snape, however, sneered at the word friends. 'So, we are now about to have two giggling youngsters in the order, then?' he hissed.
Giggling youngsters? Charis looked hurt at this comment, and Morgana clenched her jaw, wondering just what had gotten Snape's wand in a knot. He had never been cordial, but today, he seemed straight-out foul.
'Tactful as usual, Severus,' Remus said lightly, before turning to the girls. 'Ignore him.'
The twinkle in Dumbledore's eyes had all but gone now. 'That was particularly uncalled for, Severus,' he said carefully. 'As you know, Morgana is a trainee Auror, and Charis is now working as an Unspeakable in the Department of Mysteries. Quite responsible jobs for giggling youngsters, wouldn't you say?' he asked mildly, fixing Snape with a penetrating stare over the top of his spectacles.
'My concern is for the safety of these rookie Order members, Dumbledore,' Snape replied, his nostrils flaring.
At first, Morgana felt a wave of gratitude towards her former Head of House. He was worried about her and Charis and didn't want to see them hurt. But as he continued glaring at Dumbledore, not once even casting a glance in either her or Charis' direction, Morgana grew annoyed. Did Snape think that they weren't up for the task? What was it that kept him from believing that she and Charis could fight against Dark witches and wizards in general and Voldemort in particular? Was it the same reason he'd had when he had tried to persuade her to not become an Auror but pursue her original idea of becoming a potioneer? And why could he not just tell them why he thought they were so useless?
Dumbledore, however, answered Snape's protest quite calmly.
'Yes, I know, Severus. And even though your advice against their admission came with the most noble of intentions, the fact is that the Order needs these girls. But the decision to join or not remains, of course, entirely their own.'
He raised his teacup and toasted towards Morgana, as to acknowledge her decision, and turned then to Charis, smiling kindly. 'And you are, by all means, entitled to decline.'
Charis felt the weight of all eyes on her as she spoke. And one pair in particular she could feel boring into her, but she would not look at Snape. He was not going to talk her out of this, just as little as Morgana had been able to. Her decision was final. And if Snape thought that she didn't have what it took to be of any use for the Order, she would prove him wrong.
'Well, sir Albus,' she said, weighing every syllable. 'It would be an honour to join the Order of the Phoenix.'
'Are you quite sure you know what you are letting yourself in for?' Dumbledore asked, as if to prove a point to Snape. 'There will be a time when we may ask you to do things at the Ministry that could go against the vows you have taken. We may ask you to spy, even to lie. But it will always be for the sake of reaching our goal: the defeat of Voldemort.'
Charis nodded. 'I understand, sir.'
'Well then, Charis, I ask you once more: Have you reached a decision?'
Again, everyone's gaze was fixed on Charis as she replied, 'It would be a great honour to join the Order of the Phoenix in the fight against... You-Know-Who.'
Dumbledore smiled serenely. 'In that case, welcome to the Order, Charis Byrne! And now, let us raise our teacups for a toast! To friends!'
'To friends,' everyone repeated, raising their cups aloft. Everyone except Snape, that was, who looked like he'd just lost a Galleon and found a Knut.
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112 Reviews | 6.64/10 Average
Great start. Albums would really sacrifice anyone to win the war. I hope both of a star sisters find their happy ending and the war doesn't destroy their souls.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Now you reminded us of that we should wirte a Part 3. :)
well, what can I say? This was a blast from beginning to end. Loved your new characters and how the Malfoys once again play a big part in Morganna's love life. Severus what a naughty man coming up with the three mirrors and him being a bit of a peeping Tom lol. Least he kept his word and did ensure the star sisters safety and nice to see him hinting at them to both wear their star necklaces once more.
The scene where the girls on Christmas Eve made that special spell and vow was beautifully written. Also the Scenes on new years eve and after were tenderly done and not in a harsh way but in a loving one. Even Snapes watching was done with a special feel and not pervy at all. Shall look forward to read more in this series and see if Snape can loose his dark thoughts and become a man who can accept love in the end and be rid of the Lily Ghost.
Thanks for writing and creating this lovely series. Really enjoyed reading it and sorry I did not get time to review every chapter. Consider this worth a hundred reviews.
Congrats.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
The relationship between Charis and Morgana has become a beautiful thing, and I'm very happy for them and glad that Severus will continue to watch over his girls. One day I hope his heart will be healed and that he will remember how to love. And allow himself to be loved.I'm sad this story has come to an end (for now), but I'm so happy to know that you aren't done with these characters—I've grown quite fond of them. For now we will let them sleep. I want to let you know how much I've enjoyed Star Sisters and now Shooting Stars. You are very gifted writers, and I thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. I wish you both good days and much happiness. May real life calm down for you, and allow you the opportunity to once again weave this magic you do so well.I give you my thanks with much gratitude and lots of hugs,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Mmmm... I think I'd like a cup of tea and a biscuit after reading this chapter! Or perhaps a cigarette? Smoking hot writing, ladies. Thank you from the bottom of my... err... heart!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Gorgeous chapter, and I appreciated Snape leaving them be and also not taking himself in hand. As he realises the feeling blossoming in his chest, my heart ached for him a little bit. Then followed "A love he had no part of, a love he would never be able to share with anyone" which summed it all up and put a lump in my throat. Ah, Snape. Forever the tragic anti-hero. Lovely writing.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
I enjoyed your creation of Dumbledore's vow and its execution - gentle and manipulative - much like the man himself. I love that Dumbledore also set up their New Year's celebration with Snape, even though, so far at least, Snape hasn't got in on the action! The tenderness between Morgana and Charis is lovely. Reading on...
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
"The way Ravenclaws seemed to be fascinated by the stars was simply adorable" bahaha! Pity that I didn't realise the significance of the constellation Leo; I've let down team Ravenclaw! At least I'd managed to suss out the connection to Slytherin's locket via the house-elf, thus tracing it back to Black. This is a lovely chapter brimming with charm and intimacy between the Star Sisters, and their spell-casting was beautiful and poignant. I also enjoyed Morgana's metaphor for moving on at the end of the chapter. I must say, though, that you've plotted your story meticulously and have been wonderfully crafty with the prophecy; not just with its puzzle, but also making your story fit seamlessly into canon... After all, we were never told how Dumbledore came to discover the locket. I take my hat off to you, ladies!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Now it's time to turn fantasy into reality for Severus and his girls--can the teasing giggling be leading up to them beckoning him over to their side *hopeful look*--great menage-a-trois dynamics; I really like Morgana's sexuality being released and expressed, reinforcing her healing from the past and embracing the present and future; Charis' divine sub positions--yum! and as I said last chapter, Severus is one lucky wizard... *sighing* Lovely, dynamic, lemony chapter as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
As I began reading this chapter I was so surprised that I had to go back and read the end of the previous chapter to be sure I understood what had happened... which, of course, I didn't, but I didn't know that until Severus woke up that I realized it was his dream. You two ladies are masters of the twisty plot. Well done!
Dreaming as he had been, I was glad he allowed himself to carry his dream to fruition in the shower. Perhaps this "Sweet Release" will help him get through the coming storm. Soon he will have to kill Dumbledore and then endure his tenure as Headmaster until the entire house of cards comes falling down.
I was very happy for him when heard Charis and Morgana talking and giggling in their activated mirrors. It would be very sweet if his dream became a reality after all is said and done. But I'm not kidding myself one tiny bit that I can predict just what you two have in mind for these three dear people. The only thing I'm sure of right now is that I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update.
Thank you for a very nice chapter!!!
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
It's a relief for Morgana and Charis that they have finally and truly shared their love for each other. And not only a relief for the two of them, but for Severus as well, I think. He has such strong feelings for both of them, and I think knowing that they have declared their love and cemented their relationship has given him peace of mind that they will be all right no matter what happens.
He loved those two girls dearly in his own special way. They would never know, of course, but he hoped that every now and then, they would remember him with fondness.
This chapter has really touched my heart. I don't know what will happen to Severus, and it makes me sad to think of him being alone. I hope he can find something or someone to "hang onto" as future events unfold. Be kind to him, ladies. Be kind.Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Mmmn... beautiful! Love their love-making, giving and sharing to each other the way each one needs, and Severus witnessing it--some wizards have all the luck! What a lovely way to bring in the New Year!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
I love this story even more than the last one.
I have no idea how the two of you do it but I am grateful that you do.
Sorry for not leaving reviews before now, but it is often difficult to find words for my appreciation! Rest assured that I always eagerly await the next instalment.
Such a beautiful and unusual story... the pair of you need to create a universe of your own! I'm sure we could expect great things from such imaginations! Perhaps just as great as the universe that brought your two formidable minds together!
Thank you.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
‘When the rope dissolves and we let go of each other, neither of you will be able to convey what you have learnt here today,’ Dumbledore explained. ‘You will have a faint memory of our conversation with Kreacher, but trying to remember the details will be like trying to remember a dream. The harder you try, the further will it drift away. And unless we three stand here once more, with our hands entwined, you will never be able to remember.’Damn. I wish the girls had not had to agree to take that vow. But if they hadn't, then he would have Obliviated them. I hope they really will be safer not remembering the prophecy.I can't help but wish Severus didn't have to spend New Year's Eve with only a bottle of Ogden's to keep him company while he watches his girls coming to understand the depth of their feelings for each other. With Severus already upstairs and the girls on their way up the stairs, I wonder if they'll run into each other? I'm off to the next chapter to find out. :^)Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
With Grindling moving to Greece for good, I guess there's no way he will be a regular part of either of the girls' lives. Sometimes I think it's better just to move on and cut your losses, but I know Charis and Morgana will be sad when they realize he has left his position at the Ministry and packed up lock, stock, and barrel.
That was a lovely spell that Charis created to permanently join the girls' star necklaces together. It was pretty cool the way Morgana's star glowed Ravenclaw blue and Charis' glowed Slytherin green. I was tickled when Charis solved the riddle of the prophecy- all that time studying Astronomy really paid off! Now Dumbledore wants them to wait a week. Perhaps he does want to do some research of his own.
I'm glad Morgana has a new Patronus- a majestic black feline is much better than her old Peacock. It's very telling that they have such similar Patronuses, isn't it? It seems like their world is settling into something solid and stable, but with Grindling out of the picture (for now, anyway) I'm wondering what Severus will do? Poor man is damned if he does and damned if he doesn't. Speaking of Severus... what is he doing right now?
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
It seems that it has taken tonight's events and their outcomes to bring Severus to the point where he can relax enough to realize that Charis and Morgana love each other. But I'm not sure if they can be happy with only each other. Grindling loves Charis, and I think he has very strong feelings for Morgana as well. Charis loves Severus, and Morgana feels very safe with him. Severus loves Charis and Morgana. And I have absolutely no idea how this is going to work out. There are a number of permutations that come to mind, and one of them is that Severus, Charis, and Morgana become a threesome family. Or Grindling could make for a foursome family. Or Grindling could find himself with Narcissa when all hell breaks loose and Lucius ends up dead or in prison for the rest of his life. Or if Severus dies, then Grindling, Charis and Morgana could make a life together.This emotional awakening Severus has undergone, leaves me feeling very afraid for him. I fear he will go willingly to meet death so long as he thinks "his girls" are safe and happy. Is he falling into well of dark resignation?Thank you for this thought provoking chapter, ladies. I still don't have any idea how this will all turn out, and now I have an even longer list of possible outcomes. You are masters of mystery!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
The place where Ravenclaws always took comfort and solitude: the library.' This had e tearing up! And the delicious lemony, Snapey goodness-sene has me saying, Merlin's balls, sevs_starsisters, yes, yes, yes! and more, more, more! *taking a deep satisfied sigh* Thank you! (and Miss Charis needs to heed Sev's advice for her and Morgana--speaking of which, can't wait for Sev's jetsetting over to Malfoy manor, maybe Ms Morgana needs some *special* attention too from the Potions master--he is suppose to take care of both his girls *decadent cackle* Lovely, yummy chapter, as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Poor, dear Grindling--lovely moments and chemistry and trust between these two, only to be breathtakingly blown away with the scene between Morgana and Severus--yes, yes, yes! Could feel Morgana breaking through and liberating herself with Severus *perfect, bloody f------ perfect* Thank you!! xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Now I see what you meant when you told me that Severus would feel pretty guilty... but I have to wonder just how guilty he really felt. Still and all, Morgana is free from the weight of a millstone named Lucius Malfoy, and Severus has promised that Narcissa will not bother her again. Even crazy Bellatrix served a useful purpose. Thanks to her, Grindling has heard Narcissa say the words that set him free... at least I hope he is free from Narcissa's machinations. In the study, Severus told Morgana to ‘Enjoy a Malfoy-free life. Spend time with the ones who love you the most.’ He left before she could ask who he meant, and then I remembered that Grindling had told her that he wished things could have been different. Soooo... could it be that Grindling has a bit of a crush on Morgana, or is he still in love with the memory of Narcissa... or will he return to Charis? They will see each other because they're trying to solve the Prophesy, but what will they think about the things that have happened in the last few hours? Charis will be thinking about "her boss" and her former teacher. Morgana will be thinking about her former teacher. Narcissa will be thinking about wringing her sister's neck, and mourning the loss of perhaps the only opportunity to regain her husband's freedom and their lost stature in the ranks of the purebloods. Severus will be thinking about both Charis and Morgana... I wish I knew what was going through Severus' mind in regard to both of "his girls." I still can't shake the feeling that he really holds romantic thoughts about Charis, but I have to say you ladies really do keep the waters muddied up enough that I can't ever be sure. Maybe Morgana and Grindling will be attracted to each other, and... *sigh*What is going to go on at Malfoy Manor will all those Death Eaters still there? Oh what a tangled web we weave....Great chapter. As always!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Hot dayum! Hot DAYUM! I am so damned happy that Severus and Charis had their "alone time" in the library... and he was so tender and made sure she had the orgasm of her life before he had his.‘The stars,’ he said and pointed at his throat as if to indicate a necklace he was wearing. ‘Renew the charm. Wear them. The both of you.’He still cares for Charis. His kiss on her cheek and urgging her and Morganna to wear their star necklaces proves it beyond all doubt.Thanks, I needed that! *grinning*Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Of all the rooms for Narcissa to choose from... I wonder just what Narcissa knows and what she doesn't know about Morgana and Lucius? Could Narcissa have some other motive we don't yet know about? I don't think so, but I have learned not to underestimate you ladies, either.In the meantime, what are Snape and Charis doing in thier search for the meaning of the prophesy? Sooner or later one of them is bound to say or do something that comfirms for the other that there are still real and deep emotions involved between. I can't wait to see what you have in store for our lovely characters next? Hope to see the next chapter soon!!!Berh
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
I hope she opens up. It would be good for her to get it out. Grindling is a complex character; not quite sure what to make of him yet. I'm glad you're still writing this story, I love following it. 5 stars.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Well, Charis got the info she needed. She just needs to remember her astronomy now.I've known this pair of stories have been out there for some time but avoided reading them because they were not about canon-centric characters. But I took a chance and I've really enjoyed them. I look forward to finding out what happens. Keep up the good work!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for taking a chance on our stories, we're really thrilled you've enjoyed them and we hope you'll stick with the sequel. Thanks again for your support, it means a lot!
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
May I say I never expected you two to answer ALL my reviews since I left a ton of them at one time. But thank you. If I've put you behind on your writing, feel free to blame me.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We try to answer all our reviews. It's so nice to get feedback, and we like to show that we appreciate your thoughts. And no worries, you haven't slowed us down. Next chapter is being beta-read at the moment and we have done plenty of plotting. Lemons ahead ;-)
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
Ah lemon....one of my favorite flavors!
I think Charis is far too forgiving (maybe I just don't like Grindling).TeeHee, Severus is SOOOOO BAD. I love him.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He's a naughty boy! and that's why we love him, right?
Oooh the plot thickens. I think I've figured out most of the prophecy, now to watch as the characters figure it out.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Let's see if you're right :)
I am glad it was cleared up that Morgana is NOT the one Grindling was talking about. She has enough worries. And go her for standing up for her friend.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Yes, Morgana kicked ass :)