IX: Mysteries Manifold
Chapter 9 of 37
sevs_starsisters*COMPLETED* The Star Sisters have left Hogwarts and are now facing a new world with new opportunities and new kinds of danger. And also for the Half-Blood Prince, times are changing. (This story is the sequel to Star Sisters.)
Chapter IX: Mysteries Manifold
Charis stepped out of the large fireplace into the Atrium of the Ministry of Magic. Her heart was pounding, and as she felt a little dizzy from the journey by Floo, Charis kept close to the wall, willing her breathing to slow down and taking in her surroundings.
There had only been a few witches and wizards hurrying about their business the last time she had been here, but today, the Atrium was as busy as a nest full of Billywigs; there were dozens of witches and wizards jostling past her, all rushing to their respective workplaces with the frown of Monday morning deeply etched on their faces.
Charis craned her neck, desperate to catch a glimpse of a familiar face. It certainly would have felt reassuring. But alas, none of the witches bustling by had short, flaming red hair.
Oh, well, Charis thought, steeling herself. Morgana sent me Silvy this morning. That must mean she's thinking of me.
Furtively, she touched her star necklace and then pushed herself away from the wall to make her way to one of the lifts at the back of the Atrium.
It was quite a squeeze in the lift, and after having pressed the button for Level Nine, Charis' nose was unfortunately lodged in a very tall wizard's armpit for most of the duration. How uncomfortable and utterly humiliating! Charis could feel herself blushing, but there was little that could be done. She was standing with her back to the wall and the tall wizard right in front of her, and he didn't seem to be interested in moving an inch, not even after most of the other passengers had gotten off at their respective levels. Agonisingly, he himself didn't leave the lift until Level Eight, by which time there was just Charis and a little old witch with frizzy white hair and bejewelled spectacles left, who gave Charis a sympathetic sort of look before departing towards the steps that led to Wizengamot on Level Ten, below.
At the dark and gloomy Entrance of the Department of Mysteries, Grindling Gibbons was waiting to meet Charis. He was once again wearing smart, grey robes, and his hair was again tied back in a ponytail. And his eyes shone just as kindly as they had during their first meeting.
'Good morning! Welcome, Charis. How are you feeling today?'
'I'm a little nervous, to be honest,' Charis admitted, and Grindling smiled.
'Understandable,' he said. 'But there's no need. I promise I'll take good care of you today. Did you have breakfast?'
Charis nodded.
'Good, good!' Grindling beamed. 'We can get started right away then. Now, there are three ways to reach the Hall of Prophecy; last time, we walked through the Time Chamber, remember?'
Once again, Charis nodded. The Time Chamber had been largely covered with sheets and was filled with Unspeakables casting repairing charms on the broken timepieces.
'Today,' Grindling went on, 'I am going to take you through the Space Chamber, a personal favourite of mine. But first, I need to show you the charms needed to access the Hall in each of the three ways. Now, the funny thing about these charms is that once you've mastered them, you will feel like you have forgotten them.'
'Excuse me?' Charis frowned, and Grindling smiled.
'It seems strange, doesn't it? Let me explain: unless you are heading for the Hall of Prophecy and are at the verge of casting one of the access spells, you will not be able to remember them. You won't be able to convey them to anyone. You cannot talk about them, and you cannot write them down. They are like dreams, you see. You know you have them in your mind, but the harder you try to remember them, the more distant they seem. Do you understand?'
Still frowning, Charis started to nod slowly. 'It's a security measure then?' she asked. 'So no one can make me tell them about the spells?'
'Exactly!' Grindling seemed pleased. 'And what's even better: as you are unable to remember the spells outside these premises, the information cannot be made accessible by any means. Not by Veritaserum, not by Legilimency... We're all covered. Now, let me show you how to access the Space Chamber.'
Charis watched attentively, taking mental notes of Grindling's every move, gesture and word. And after he had shown her thrice, she got to try it herself and managed to enter the Space Chamber on her second attempt. And funnily enough, she had not the faintest memory of how she had done it once she stepped into the room. Actually, at first, Charis feared that she had messed up. She couldn't see anything, and there was a strange sensation, familiar to the feeling of Apparating but not quite as intense, and Charis thought that it must be some kind of security measure that transported trespassers away. But after some moments, Charis realised that she was floating, and that the chamber around her was actually filled with tiny pinpricks of light.
'Those are stars,' Grindling explained, floating up beside her. 'And we're weightless, just as we would be in outer space.'
He took Charis by the hand and swirled her around so she came to face the solar system that was suspended in the middle of the room, with the light from the sun the brightest object. Charis could not help but gaze on in wonder; Astronomy had, after all, been one of her favourite lessons at Hogwarts, and the room was very beautiful.
'Now, Charis, could you try and make out the constellation of Ursa Major, otherwise known as The Plough, for me, please?'
'I can try,' Charis replied, her voice a little shaky. She was feeling a bit overwhelmed, but despite the odd feeling in the bit of her stomach, her Ravenclaw brain rose to the challenge.
'There it is,' she said after a few moments and pointed. 'Ursa Major looks almost like a big frying pan. Once you've found Ursa Major, it is very easy to spot Ursa Minor nearby, which looks very much like a mini-frying pan. Polaris, the North Star, is part of the constellation Ursa Minor. It's on the very tip of the "handle" of Ursa Minor.'
Abruptly, Charis stopped and blushed. She had just realised that she had given her boss a lecture on constellations. Grindling, however, smiled.
'This is why I like having trainees from Ravenclaw House. You can think for yourself. Of course, you finding the North Star would have been your next task because that's where the exit door is. Now, after you.'
Blushing even more but at the same time pleased with herself, Charis led the way towards the North Star, finding it surprisingly easy to move in weightlessness. It was almost like swimming, an activity which Charis had always loved. Now, she had a feeling that the Space Chamber would most probably be her favourite way of entering the Hall of Prophecy.
'Welcome to work,' Grindling said cheerfully once they had exited the Space Chamber and entered the Hall of Prophecy. It was illuminated by dim blue fire, which emitted from candle brackets lining the walls but didn't seem to lend any warmth to the room. In the excitement of her induction, Charis had never noticed how chilly the place actually was, and after only a few moments, she felt her hands grow cold and stuffed them into her pockets, at this moment extremely grateful for her temperature-adjusting robes! Still, she felt herself shuddering, but knew it had little to do with the temperature.
'You'll get used to it,' Grindling said in a friendly and encouraging tone, almost as if he had been reading her mind. 'When I started working here, I found the darkness and gloom rather depressing. But after some weeks, I realised that it wasn't all that bad. In fact, I find the glow of the orbs is quite soothing nowadays.'
They walked past rows and rows of shelves, many of them damaged or even empty of any orbs, and Charis realised just how much damage had been done here and how much work lay ahead of her.
'Now, before you can start repairing and logging prophecies, Charis, you will have to consent to taking the Unspeakable Vow,' Grindling explained. 'Unspeakables, as you know, are so named because they are forbidden to reveal any of the secrets they have learned to anyone who has not been privy to them. Therefore, each worker has to take the Unspeakable Vow. It's quite similar to the Mimblewimble Jinx. Do you happen to be familiar with that?'
Charis couldn't help but giggle. Mimblewimble rendered a person inarticulate, and she and Morgana had quite some fun with that particular jinx during the last weeks of their sixth year. Especially when they had realised that certain Slytherin students no names mentioned were just as inarticulate once the jinx was lifted as they were while still under its influence. Oh, the grunting!
She read her Vow from an ancient looking piece of parchment, as certain of all the runes as if the text had been written in the Latin alphabet. And she could tell that Grindling was impressed. Had he been a Hogwarts teacher, he would certainly have awarded her House points.
Then, he took an orb from a nearby shelf and handed it to her.
'Now, Charis, once I am out of earshot, I want you to peer into the globe and carefully listen to the prophecy stored inside it. Take your time, and once you know it by heart, I want you to come to me and tell me all about it. I do love a bit of nice gossip in the morning.'
He smiled, and once Charis had taken the orb from him, he started to walk away. 'I'll be in aisle sixteen,' he called over his shoulder. 'Come find me once you are done.'
Charis looked after him for some moments. He was such a nice man, and his kind eyes and smile made Charis feel so at ease. And now that he was walking away from her, she felt almost a little forlorn. But that was silly, of course. He'd just be some aisles away from her.
Shaking her head at herself, Charis concentrated on the orb in her hands, peering at the figure inside it. It was an old woman, wrapped in shawls that were decorated with strange signs and symbols. Her eyes had rolled back into her head, and her voice was drawling and distorted. She spoke of a man born from the loins of a dragon who would rise to power under the shadow of the cross and the crescent moon and be slain by the same sword that had helped him win his throne.
Charis listened to the prophecy four times, desperately trying not only to learn it by heart but also to understand it, but on her fifth attempt, she realised that there was no point in trying. She was not meant to understand the prophecy. It was not her task. So she carefully put the orb back onto the shelf where Grindling had taken it from and headed for aisle sixteen.
'Well, then,' Grindling greeted her, smiling. 'Do tell.'
'The prophecy was made by an old woman,' Charis started.
'And?' Grindling pressed on.
'She spoke about...'
What followed was a trail of grunts and noises which would even have made Crabbe and Goyle look like a couple of geniuses, and Grindling's smile turned into an amused grin.
'Looks like the Vow is working,' he said, and handed Charis a glass of water which she accepted gratefully. Her mouth suddenly was very dry, and there was a distinct taste of old dishrag on her tongue.
'Congratulations,' Grindling went on. 'You have now taken your Vow and are officially a trainee Unspeakable. On the downside, we're now running out of excuses not to work.'
He gestured for Charis to follow him, and they made their way to the back of the hall. There stood a huge, table-sized leather-bound ledger.
'Every prophecy that has ever been here,' Grindling explained, 'is documented in this ledger along with its location in the hall, such as the shelf number and row number. Only I, the Keeper, and the Unspeakables working with me in this case, you have access to this ledger. Now, many of the memories which were stored within the shattered prophecy orbs are lost forever. But as they were all duly noted in the ledger, the prophecies can be written out on a slip of parchment, sealed inside a glass orb and placed back to where they used to be on the repaired shelf. That way, the prophecies can still be retrieved by those they are made about and all is not lost.'
He looked at Charis apologetically. 'I know this is not the most exciting of tasks, but it requires a high level of concentration and a methodical mind. I think you'll do just great with it.'
Indeed, Charis found that she soon got into a routine of doing the work, and as the day went on, she got quicker and quicker. Grindling, who himself was concentrating on storing the new prophecies that were coming in and clearing the backlog, was pleased with her progress and was confident that with her help, the Hall of Prophecies would be back to normal in the space of a few months. And when they left the hall for the day, he told Charis that he was very much looking forward to working with her again the next day. Charis, in her turn, blushed and wished her boss and mentor a quiet and relaxing evening. Merlin knew that she was very much hoping to have one herself.
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Charis returned to her little flat feeling tired yet confident that she'd achieved a lot. She hadn't made any serious mistakes, had not broken anything or said anything stupid, and Grindling had even praised her a fair amount of times. And she, too, was very much looking forward to working with him again the next day. He had promised to show her around the department a bit more and introduce her to some of its secrets.
As she stepped out of the grate, Charis was immediately greeted by frantic mewing. She hurriedly petted and fed her hungry cat before fixing herself a leftover breakfast sandwich. Then she kicked off her boots and took off her robes, making herself comfortable in the sofa wearing nothing but her knickers and bra. Living on her own certainly had its advantages, she thought and sunk her teeth into her sandwich, intending not to leave the sofa until it was time to go to bed. Halfway through the snack, however, both her meal and her quiet evening were disturbed by a frantic tapping on the round window in the lounge. Puzzled, Charis left the half-eaten sandwich and went to investigate.
A large grey owl sat hooting urgently on the windowsill, a letter tied carefully to its leg. Charis frowned. Who would send her a letter, she wondered.
Carefully, she removed the letter and let the owl nibble on her sandwich while she herself opened the thick, yellow parchment and began to read.
Dear Charis,
I hope this letter find you well and would like to offer my sincerest apologies for disturbing you on what must be the end of an exhausting first day at work. However, there is something very important I wish to speak to you about this evening, and I hope you could spare ten minutes of your time for an old man. If you could Floo to my office at Hogwarts as soon as possible, I would be immensely grateful.
Yours fondly,
Albus Dumbledore
Charis stared at the letter, her heart racing. Why was the Headmaster of Hogwarts writing to her? And what could be so urgent that he needed to speak to her as soon as possible, face to face, in his office?
Charis immediately started to imagine the worst. Could there have been a mix-up with her NEWT grades? Maybe she hadn't achieved the high results after all and there had been a terrible mistake? Could it affect her job at the Ministry? Was that why Dumbledore was so insistent on seeing her tonight?
Forgetting all about the owl that had now demolished the rest of her sandwich, Charis started buzzing around her little flat, picking up her robes from the floor and getting her boots back on while her heart was racing in her chest and a million of thoughts racing through her mind. And when she stood in the grate, ready to throw the Floo Powder and call out her destination, she actually had to look down to check if she was indeed wearing her robes and that her boots were on the right feet. She was feeling so confused that forgetting to get dressed didn't seem so far-fetched.
As she stepped out of the fireplace, brushing soot from her robes, Dumbledore hurried to meet her, his hand stretched out in salutation. He looked very calm.
'Charis! Welcome! Welcome back to Hogwarts!'
Charis walked forwards, a frown of concern on her face. 'Sir!' she blurted out. 'Is everything alright? Your letter sounded extremely urgent!'
'Dear Charis, forgive me,' the old wizard began, secretly pleased that the girl had responded as quickly as he had hoped she would. 'I did not mean to startle you. What I have to discuss with you is indeed urgent, but everything is alright.'
He smiled benignly as he gestured for her to sit.
'Have you had dinner?' he asked conversationally as Charis made herself comfortable on an armchair.
'Yes, I've just grabbed a sandwich,' Charis replied, just now becoming aware that more than half of her dinner had ended up in the owl's tummy. But it didn't matter.
'A sandwich?' Dumbledore exclaimed. 'Now that won't do. Let me send for something from the kitchen. A salad, maybe?'
'Thank you, sir, but I'm fine,' Charis replied, politely but firmly. Yes, she was hungry but doubted that she would be able to eat anything now. And in truth, she very much wanted to know what she had been summoned here for. But she was not rude enough to interrupt the old wizard's display of hospitality.
'A nice toffee then?' Dumbledore picked up a box of Honeydukes finest from his desk. He had obviously been having some himself, judging by the amount of empty wrappers that littered his desk.
Charis eyed the box. She knew she should start eating more healthily. But Honeydukes toffees were really very good.
'Well, maybe one won't hurt,' she decided after a moment and smiled as she took a fat toffee from the proffered box.
'Sugar is like balm for the soul, I always say.' Her former headmaster smiled broadly in response. 'Now, something to drink maybe? Tea?'
'Just water would be good, if that's okay?' Charis was rather thirsty from all the rushing around that evening. Also, holding onto a glass would give her shaking hands something to do.
'Water it is.'
Dumbledore conjured a jug with ice cold water and two glasses.
'How was your first day?' he asked whilst busying himself with pouring the water.
Charis was a bit confused about why the old wizard was asking such seemingly superfluous questions after having pointed out the urgency of this meeting in his letter, but she answered them with good grace anyway.
'It was good, thank you. There is a certainly much to do... I can't really say much more than that, I'm afraid.' She remembered her Unspeakable Vow from earlier and looked up apologetically. 'I'm not allowed to.'
Dumbledore looked at Charis over his half-moon spectacles whilst sending the glass of water over to her with a wave of his hand.
'I understand, of course. I hope the whole situation didn't seem too overwhelming.'
'I'd be lying if I said things weren't a little hectic at the moment, sir,' Charis replied, catching the cold glass carefully. It was slippery with condensation.
'The amount of damage at the Ministry must be tremendous.'
'It was a bit of a shock seeing the damage for myself,' Charis agreed. 'Just thinking that You-Know-Who himself was the cause of it is awful.'
Dumbledore nodded slowly. 'It must be especially hard for you to work at the Department of Mysteries after all that has happened there.'
He gazed at Charis knowingly, and she got the feeling his blue eyes were X-raying her. Unable to hold the old wizard's gaze, she looked down at the desk.
'I did consider whether working at the Ministry might be the wrong thing to do,' she confessed. 'But then I decided that Sirius wouldn't have wanted me to put my life or my job on hold. But yes, I think about him every day...'
She trailed off sadly, not knowing what else to say, and took a sip of the cold water to alleviate the hot lump that had now formed in her throat.
'Your feelings are natural, Charis, and nothing to be ashamed of,' Dumbledore said. 'Sirius was a great man, and it saddens me, too, that we have lost him so early.'
He paused, lacing his fingers together in front of him. 'However, as you said, he wouldn't want any of us to put our work on hold. He would want us to keep on fighting the Dark. And this, Charis, is why I asked you to come here tonight, on such short notice.'
Charis carefully placed her water on desk and looked up at her former headmaster expectantly. She knew that what was coming next was at the heart of the matter and in all likelihood would take her by surprise.
Dumbledore took another sip of his ice cold water and seemed in no hurry whatsoever to continue, even though Charis was now waiting with baited breath.
'Charis, when you visited Grimmauld Place, you met a couple of people there, remember?' he said eventually.
'Yes, sir,' she confirmed.
'They, like Sirius, have dedicated their lives to fighting Voldemort and to setting the Wizarding world free once more,' he continued, seeing Charis flinch at the use of the Dark Lord's name. But he went on regardless. 'They are good men and women, the best I could get, but still, we are in need of new blood; we need people with connections. Every witch or wizard who decides to join our cause is yet another blow to Voldemort. And every piece of information we can gain yet another weapon against him. So I ask you now, outright: Do you want to help us bring Voldemort down, Charis?'
Charis' mouth suddenly went very dry. 'Are you asking me to join the Order of the Phoenix, sir?'
'Indeed I am.' Again, his bright blue eyes seemed to be searching hers like an X-ray, and it was hard to maintain eye contact.
Charis inhaled, a little shocked at the proposition.
'I am asking you, first and foremost, because you are an intelligent, brave young witch, Charis,' Dumbledore explained. 'And you know first-hand what Dark witches and wizards are capable of. You know how important it is to stop them.'
But Charis was still struggling to see just why Dumbledore wanted her to join. 'But, sir, what could I possibly do to help the Order?'
'Ah, there are many things,' Dumbledore explained. 'Every Order member has unique, useful abilities or connections. Every member can provide us with certain information. You, Charis, would be our link to a part of the Ministry no other of us has access to,' he pointed out.
'But... as a trainee Unspeakable...' Charis interjected. 'I am bound by oath not to reveal information. In fact it is impossible for me to.'
Dumbledore, however, was well aware of the charms that Unspeakables were bound by.
'Of course, I am not asking you to spy on your employer, Charis. Far from it,' he clarified. 'I am just hoping that you, having insight in both the Order's business and your own work, could make certain, ah, helpful connections on the information you are privy to.'
'Well, I... I could try, sir,' Charis replied doubtfully. She was by now highly uncomfortable.
'I am not asking you to make your decision tonight, Charis,' Dumbledore went on. 'In fact, I do not want you to make your decision tonight. Sleep on it, think about it.'
Again, the old wizard peered over his spectacles at the young witch in front of him. Just like with Morgana, he was certain that this Star Sister wouldn't turn his offer down either.
'I am honoured you asked me, sir,' Charis replied, plucking up the courage to speak her mind. 'But I'm still not sure if I would be useful to you in any way.'
Dumbledore smiled serenely at this. 'Let me be the judge of that, Charis. If nothing else, I am sure certain people in the Order will appreciate your company.'
Certain people in the Order? Charis couldn't help but blush. She had met some of the Order members, yes, but the only one she really knew the only one she knew intimately was Snape. Would he appreciate her company? And just how much did Dumbledore know? Highly embarrassed, Charis once more lowered her gaze.
'I would like to invite you to tea on Sunday,' Dumbledore proposed, 'Just to meet everyone. I do not, however, expect you to have made your decision by then.'
'That would be nice, sir.' Charis said quietly. The thought of seeing Snape again both terrified and excited her in equal measure, and her stomach gave a little flip of anxiety.
'I hope Molly will bake a cake,' Dumbledore went on. 'And Charis, please don't call me sir. It makes me feel so old. My name is Albus.'
Charis smiled. 'That will take some getting used to.'
'Many people say that. It's an unusual name, I am aware of that. You may use Percival or Wulfric or Brian, if you prefer.'
Charis could not help but giggle at this, and temporarily, the feeling of anxiety evaporated. 'No, it's not your name,' she explained. 'Just having to get used to not calling you sir will be strange.'
Now it was Dumbledore's turn to smile. 'And here I was, believing all these years that it was the name Albus people had problems with.'
He studied the young witch for a few moments before continuing. 'You must be tired. The first day in any new job is always draining.'
'It's been a long day,' Charis admitted, fighting the urge to yawn.
'It certainly has. Forgive an old man for making it even more tiresome. I won't keep you any longer. But do come to tea on Sunday. No strings attached, just tea. And cake, I hope.'
Once more, he smiled, and this time his blue eyes twinkled over his half-moon glasses.
'I will, Albus,' Charis promised. 'I'll look forward to meeting everyone.'
And with that, she got up to leave and crossed over to the huge fireplace in order to Floo home. But just before she went to take a handful of Floo Powder, she remembered something.
'Oh, should I presume this invitation is to remain confidential?'
Charis was bursting to tell her best friend Morgana and was hoping that Albus would be able to read between the lines with this question. But the old wizard turned her down.
'Yes, confidential, if you please,' he instructed, knowing perfectly well what Charis meant. But he didn't want her to know that Morgana had already joined the Order. Not yet, anyway.
'The Order runs in secret,' he explained, 'and no matter how tempting it is to share with one's best friend, I am afraid you cannot.'
Charis nodded her understanding, even though it seemed as though this was yet another secret she had to bear. 'Very well, sir... I mean, Albus. I will see you Sunday.'
'Sunday it is.' Dumbledore beamed broadly. 'I will send you an escort.'
Before she broke out into yet another blush, Charis bade her ex-headmaster goodbye and Floo'd home to the sanctuary of her flat, and once she stepped out of her fireplace, her dizziness had little to do with the means of transportation. Instead, it was due to the thrill of expectation running through her.
Certainly, Dumbledore wouldn't send a stranger to escort her. He would send someone he could trust and someone she could trust. It had to be Snape. It just had to be!
With her head still spinning from excitement, Charis made her way to the bedroom, her Ravenclaw mind already calculating the minutes until she would see her dark, brooding Potions master again.
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112 Reviews | 6.64/10 Average
Great start. Albums would really sacrifice anyone to win the war. I hope both of a star sisters find their happy ending and the war doesn't destroy their souls.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Now you reminded us of that we should wirte a Part 3. :)
well, what can I say? This was a blast from beginning to end. Loved your new characters and how the Malfoys once again play a big part in Morganna's love life. Severus what a naughty man coming up with the three mirrors and him being a bit of a peeping Tom lol. Least he kept his word and did ensure the star sisters safety and nice to see him hinting at them to both wear their star necklaces once more.
The scene where the girls on Christmas Eve made that special spell and vow was beautifully written. Also the Scenes on new years eve and after were tenderly done and not in a harsh way but in a loving one. Even Snapes watching was done with a special feel and not pervy at all. Shall look forward to read more in this series and see if Snape can loose his dark thoughts and become a man who can accept love in the end and be rid of the Lily Ghost.
Thanks for writing and creating this lovely series. Really enjoyed reading it and sorry I did not get time to review every chapter. Consider this worth a hundred reviews.
Congrats.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
The relationship between Charis and Morgana has become a beautiful thing, and I'm very happy for them and glad that Severus will continue to watch over his girls. One day I hope his heart will be healed and that he will remember how to love. And allow himself to be loved.I'm sad this story has come to an end (for now), but I'm so happy to know that you aren't done with these characters—I've grown quite fond of them. For now we will let them sleep. I want to let you know how much I've enjoyed Star Sisters and now Shooting Stars. You are very gifted writers, and I thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. I wish you both good days and much happiness. May real life calm down for you, and allow you the opportunity to once again weave this magic you do so well.I give you my thanks with much gratitude and lots of hugs,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Mmmm... I think I'd like a cup of tea and a biscuit after reading this chapter! Or perhaps a cigarette? Smoking hot writing, ladies. Thank you from the bottom of my... err... heart!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Gorgeous chapter, and I appreciated Snape leaving them be and also not taking himself in hand. As he realises the feeling blossoming in his chest, my heart ached for him a little bit. Then followed "A love he had no part of, a love he would never be able to share with anyone" which summed it all up and put a lump in my throat. Ah, Snape. Forever the tragic anti-hero. Lovely writing.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
I enjoyed your creation of Dumbledore's vow and its execution - gentle and manipulative - much like the man himself. I love that Dumbledore also set up their New Year's celebration with Snape, even though, so far at least, Snape hasn't got in on the action! The tenderness between Morgana and Charis is lovely. Reading on...
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
"The way Ravenclaws seemed to be fascinated by the stars was simply adorable" bahaha! Pity that I didn't realise the significance of the constellation Leo; I've let down team Ravenclaw! At least I'd managed to suss out the connection to Slytherin's locket via the house-elf, thus tracing it back to Black. This is a lovely chapter brimming with charm and intimacy between the Star Sisters, and their spell-casting was beautiful and poignant. I also enjoyed Morgana's metaphor for moving on at the end of the chapter. I must say, though, that you've plotted your story meticulously and have been wonderfully crafty with the prophecy; not just with its puzzle, but also making your story fit seamlessly into canon... After all, we were never told how Dumbledore came to discover the locket. I take my hat off to you, ladies!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Now it's time to turn fantasy into reality for Severus and his girls--can the teasing giggling be leading up to them beckoning him over to their side *hopeful look*--great menage-a-trois dynamics; I really like Morgana's sexuality being released and expressed, reinforcing her healing from the past and embracing the present and future; Charis' divine sub positions--yum! and as I said last chapter, Severus is one lucky wizard... *sighing* Lovely, dynamic, lemony chapter as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
As I began reading this chapter I was so surprised that I had to go back and read the end of the previous chapter to be sure I understood what had happened... which, of course, I didn't, but I didn't know that until Severus woke up that I realized it was his dream. You two ladies are masters of the twisty plot. Well done!
Dreaming as he had been, I was glad he allowed himself to carry his dream to fruition in the shower. Perhaps this "Sweet Release" will help him get through the coming storm. Soon he will have to kill Dumbledore and then endure his tenure as Headmaster until the entire house of cards comes falling down.
I was very happy for him when heard Charis and Morgana talking and giggling in their activated mirrors. It would be very sweet if his dream became a reality after all is said and done. But I'm not kidding myself one tiny bit that I can predict just what you two have in mind for these three dear people. The only thing I'm sure of right now is that I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update.
Thank you for a very nice chapter!!!
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
It's a relief for Morgana and Charis that they have finally and truly shared their love for each other. And not only a relief for the two of them, but for Severus as well, I think. He has such strong feelings for both of them, and I think knowing that they have declared their love and cemented their relationship has given him peace of mind that they will be all right no matter what happens.
He loved those two girls dearly in his own special way. They would never know, of course, but he hoped that every now and then, they would remember him with fondness.
This chapter has really touched my heart. I don't know what will happen to Severus, and it makes me sad to think of him being alone. I hope he can find something or someone to "hang onto" as future events unfold. Be kind to him, ladies. Be kind.Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Mmmn... beautiful! Love their love-making, giving and sharing to each other the way each one needs, and Severus witnessing it--some wizards have all the luck! What a lovely way to bring in the New Year!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
I love this story even more than the last one.
I have no idea how the two of you do it but I am grateful that you do.
Sorry for not leaving reviews before now, but it is often difficult to find words for my appreciation! Rest assured that I always eagerly await the next instalment.
Such a beautiful and unusual story... the pair of you need to create a universe of your own! I'm sure we could expect great things from such imaginations! Perhaps just as great as the universe that brought your two formidable minds together!
Thank you.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
‘When the rope dissolves and we let go of each other, neither of you will be able to convey what you have learnt here today,’ Dumbledore explained. ‘You will have a faint memory of our conversation with Kreacher, but trying to remember the details will be like trying to remember a dream. The harder you try, the further will it drift away. And unless we three stand here once more, with our hands entwined, you will never be able to remember.’Damn. I wish the girls had not had to agree to take that vow. But if they hadn't, then he would have Obliviated them. I hope they really will be safer not remembering the prophecy.I can't help but wish Severus didn't have to spend New Year's Eve with only a bottle of Ogden's to keep him company while he watches his girls coming to understand the depth of their feelings for each other. With Severus already upstairs and the girls on their way up the stairs, I wonder if they'll run into each other? I'm off to the next chapter to find out. :^)Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
With Grindling moving to Greece for good, I guess there's no way he will be a regular part of either of the girls' lives. Sometimes I think it's better just to move on and cut your losses, but I know Charis and Morgana will be sad when they realize he has left his position at the Ministry and packed up lock, stock, and barrel.
That was a lovely spell that Charis created to permanently join the girls' star necklaces together. It was pretty cool the way Morgana's star glowed Ravenclaw blue and Charis' glowed Slytherin green. I was tickled when Charis solved the riddle of the prophecy- all that time studying Astronomy really paid off! Now Dumbledore wants them to wait a week. Perhaps he does want to do some research of his own.
I'm glad Morgana has a new Patronus- a majestic black feline is much better than her old Peacock. It's very telling that they have such similar Patronuses, isn't it? It seems like their world is settling into something solid and stable, but with Grindling out of the picture (for now, anyway) I'm wondering what Severus will do? Poor man is damned if he does and damned if he doesn't. Speaking of Severus... what is he doing right now?
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
It seems that it has taken tonight's events and their outcomes to bring Severus to the point where he can relax enough to realize that Charis and Morgana love each other. But I'm not sure if they can be happy with only each other. Grindling loves Charis, and I think he has very strong feelings for Morgana as well. Charis loves Severus, and Morgana feels very safe with him. Severus loves Charis and Morgana. And I have absolutely no idea how this is going to work out. There are a number of permutations that come to mind, and one of them is that Severus, Charis, and Morgana become a threesome family. Or Grindling could make for a foursome family. Or Grindling could find himself with Narcissa when all hell breaks loose and Lucius ends up dead or in prison for the rest of his life. Or if Severus dies, then Grindling, Charis and Morgana could make a life together.This emotional awakening Severus has undergone, leaves me feeling very afraid for him. I fear he will go willingly to meet death so long as he thinks "his girls" are safe and happy. Is he falling into well of dark resignation?Thank you for this thought provoking chapter, ladies. I still don't have any idea how this will all turn out, and now I have an even longer list of possible outcomes. You are masters of mystery!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
The place where Ravenclaws always took comfort and solitude: the library.' This had e tearing up! And the delicious lemony, Snapey goodness-sene has me saying, Merlin's balls, sevs_starsisters, yes, yes, yes! and more, more, more! *taking a deep satisfied sigh* Thank you! (and Miss Charis needs to heed Sev's advice for her and Morgana--speaking of which, can't wait for Sev's jetsetting over to Malfoy manor, maybe Ms Morgana needs some *special* attention too from the Potions master--he is suppose to take care of both his girls *decadent cackle* Lovely, yummy chapter, as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Poor, dear Grindling--lovely moments and chemistry and trust between these two, only to be breathtakingly blown away with the scene between Morgana and Severus--yes, yes, yes! Could feel Morgana breaking through and liberating herself with Severus *perfect, bloody f------ perfect* Thank you!! xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Now I see what you meant when you told me that Severus would feel pretty guilty... but I have to wonder just how guilty he really felt. Still and all, Morgana is free from the weight of a millstone named Lucius Malfoy, and Severus has promised that Narcissa will not bother her again. Even crazy Bellatrix served a useful purpose. Thanks to her, Grindling has heard Narcissa say the words that set him free... at least I hope he is free from Narcissa's machinations. In the study, Severus told Morgana to ‘Enjoy a Malfoy-free life. Spend time with the ones who love you the most.’ He left before she could ask who he meant, and then I remembered that Grindling had told her that he wished things could have been different. Soooo... could it be that Grindling has a bit of a crush on Morgana, or is he still in love with the memory of Narcissa... or will he return to Charis? They will see each other because they're trying to solve the Prophesy, but what will they think about the things that have happened in the last few hours? Charis will be thinking about "her boss" and her former teacher. Morgana will be thinking about her former teacher. Narcissa will be thinking about wringing her sister's neck, and mourning the loss of perhaps the only opportunity to regain her husband's freedom and their lost stature in the ranks of the purebloods. Severus will be thinking about both Charis and Morgana... I wish I knew what was going through Severus' mind in regard to both of "his girls." I still can't shake the feeling that he really holds romantic thoughts about Charis, but I have to say you ladies really do keep the waters muddied up enough that I can't ever be sure. Maybe Morgana and Grindling will be attracted to each other, and... *sigh*What is going to go on at Malfoy Manor will all those Death Eaters still there? Oh what a tangled web we weave....Great chapter. As always!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Hot dayum! Hot DAYUM! I am so damned happy that Severus and Charis had their "alone time" in the library... and he was so tender and made sure she had the orgasm of her life before he had his.‘The stars,’ he said and pointed at his throat as if to indicate a necklace he was wearing. ‘Renew the charm. Wear them. The both of you.’He still cares for Charis. His kiss on her cheek and urgging her and Morganna to wear their star necklaces proves it beyond all doubt.Thanks, I needed that! *grinning*Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Of all the rooms for Narcissa to choose from... I wonder just what Narcissa knows and what she doesn't know about Morgana and Lucius? Could Narcissa have some other motive we don't yet know about? I don't think so, but I have learned not to underestimate you ladies, either.In the meantime, what are Snape and Charis doing in thier search for the meaning of the prophesy? Sooner or later one of them is bound to say or do something that comfirms for the other that there are still real and deep emotions involved between. I can't wait to see what you have in store for our lovely characters next? Hope to see the next chapter soon!!!Berh
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
I hope she opens up. It would be good for her to get it out. Grindling is a complex character; not quite sure what to make of him yet. I'm glad you're still writing this story, I love following it. 5 stars.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Well, Charis got the info she needed. She just needs to remember her astronomy now.I've known this pair of stories have been out there for some time but avoided reading them because they were not about canon-centric characters. But I took a chance and I've really enjoyed them. I look forward to finding out what happens. Keep up the good work!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for taking a chance on our stories, we're really thrilled you've enjoyed them and we hope you'll stick with the sequel. Thanks again for your support, it means a lot!
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
May I say I never expected you two to answer ALL my reviews since I left a ton of them at one time. But thank you. If I've put you behind on your writing, feel free to blame me.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We try to answer all our reviews. It's so nice to get feedback, and we like to show that we appreciate your thoughts. And no worries, you haven't slowed us down. Next chapter is being beta-read at the moment and we have done plenty of plotting. Lemons ahead ;-)
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
Ah lemon....one of my favorite flavors!
I think Charis is far too forgiving (maybe I just don't like Grindling).TeeHee, Severus is SOOOOO BAD. I love him.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He's a naughty boy! and that's why we love him, right?
Oooh the plot thickens. I think I've figured out most of the prophecy, now to watch as the characters figure it out.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Let's see if you're right :)
I am glad it was cleared up that Morgana is NOT the one Grindling was talking about. She has enough worries. And go her for standing up for her friend.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Yes, Morgana kicked ass :)