XXVI: The Unknowing Seer
Chapter 26 of 37
sevs_starsisters*COMPLETED* The Star Sisters have left Hogwarts and are now facing a new world with new opportunities and new kinds of danger. And also for the Half-Blood Prince, times are changing. (This story is the sequel to Star Sisters.)
Chapter XXVI: The Unknowing Seer
Next Saturday evening, shortly after dinner, Grindling Gibbons stepped out of the fireplace in Albus Dumbledore's office. He was wearing light blue robes and was sporting a very nice tan after his break in Greece. Certainly, he looked healthier and more relaxed than he had done in weeks. But looks are often deceiving, and Grindling couldn't justly claim that he was feeling relaxed. He was a bit nervous, to be honest, and immensely curious. He could not for the life of him guess why the Headmaster of Hogwarts had asked to see him. In fact, when he had received the invitation five days ago, he had been convinced that the owl had got lost and delivered the letter to the wrong person. But the letter had been clearly addressed to him, and Dumbledore had ever so kindly asked the Keeper of the Hall of Prophecies to contact him upon his return to England. And so, Grindling had sent an owl to Hogwarts first thing when he had returned to his flat, and Dumbledore had asked him to present himself at Hogwarts at seven-thirty the same night.
And there Grindling was now, looking around the rounded office. He had been a good boy in school and had only been called to the Headmaster's office on a handful of occasions. Yet still, he remembered the curious objects and artefacts that cluttered the room, and his Ravenclaw heart leaped at the sight of all the heavy books on the shelves.
On seeing his former pupil exit the flames, Dumbledore got up from his chair at once in order to greet the fair wizard.
'Grindling! You're looking well. Please, take a seat.' He shook hands with his former pupil briefly before Grindling took the proffered chair.
'Thank you for coming this evening.'
'I must admit I was surprised by your message, Headmaster,' Grindling confessed.
'It did come rather out of the blue,' Dumbledore agreed genially. 'I hope it didn't interrupt your holiday.'
Grindling flushed slightly at this. 'No. No, it didn't. It was time for me to return.'
In fact, Dumbledore's owl had arrived at a very good moment, Grindling had to admit. He had been sitting on the top steps of the ancient theatre in Delphi, overlooking the remains of a world long gone in the valley below. His only company had been a bottle of wine and thoughts about never returning to England at all. He had seriously played with the idea of cutting all his ties with the country where he had been born and starting over in Greece. But Dumbledore's letter had reminded him that he could not just walk away from the life he had led so far. Sooner or later, it would catch up with him, just as Dumbledore's owl had caught up with him.
'Can I offer you something to drink?' Dumbledore offered. 'Tea? Wine? Maybe something a little stronger?'
'Tea would do just nicely, Headmaster,' Grindling replied. 'After three weeks in Greece, I have wine running out of my ears.'
Dumbledore chuckled at this. 'Of course.'
With a brief flick of his wand, the old man conjured some tea for them both.
'Now, I won't take up too much of your precious time, Grindling. I contacted you as I need some advice. I am in the unusual situation of having overheard what seems to be a prophecy. I was wondering if you would be able to assist me in decoding what it means.'
Grindling's handsome forehead creased with intrigue. 'A prophecy? Has it been recorded?'
'It has,' Dumbledore confirmed and passed over a yellowing piece of parchment. 'I've got it right here.'
As Grindling read, Dumbledore watched the blond wizard closely. He didn't seem to recognise his own words, which assured Dumbledore that the prophecy was genuine. Not that he'd had any doubts about that.
'There's a lot of information there, Headmaster,' Grindling pointed out after he'd read the prophecy a couple of times.
The older wizard nodded in agreement. 'Are there any parts that stand out to you at all?'
The Keeper sighed.
'Well, the animals are a good starting point. For instance, the lion can mean a series of things. It could point to a person born under the sign of Leo. It could be someone who carries the name of a lion, like Leonard or Richard. It could be a very brave person...'
He broke off and looked at Dumbledore seriously.
'It could be a Gryffindor.'
Dumbledore nodded again, steepling his fingers in a characteristic gesture.
'Yes, I too was wondering whether the symbolism was linked to Hogwarts. It doesn't seem a coincidence that the lion, the snake and the raven are all mentioned.'
Grindling thought for a moment. 'Do you think there is a badger hidden somewhere?' he jested.
'Well, there is the reference to a fourth creature. But I couldn't see any clear reference to Hufflepuff myself.'
Once more, Grindling read the prophecy, trying to see if he or Dumbledore for that matter had overlooked something.
'The person who made the prophecy...,' he began after a moment. 'I don't mean you have to tell me who it was, but the Seer's attitude towards things always reflects in the phrasing. For example, a woman could refer to another woman as a sister, while a man would probably not call her that. I need to know more about the Seer, in order to give a better interpretation.'
Dumbledore took a deep breath and fixed the younger wizard with his piercing blue eyes.
'Well, this is the thing, Grindling. I don't mean to startle you, but the person who made this prophecy was in fact... you.'
Grindling nearly choked on his tea. 'Excuse me?'
'I believe you recently gifted your colleague, Charis Byrne, with a Draumar. Charis and I were conversing a couple of days ago when she accidentally activated the Draumar. Which means...'
'Which means Charis is part of the prophecy,' Grindling finished, staring at the paper, his complexion suddenly pale.
'Quite so.'
Had Grindling been standing, he would have needed to sit down, as his knees had suddenly become weak. He wasn't sure how many more surprises he would be able to handle. First, Dumbledore told him he'd made a prophecy, and then he learned that Charis was part of said divination. Charis, whom he had hurt so deeply and whom he had not been able to banish from his mind for as much as a second over the last three weeks. Charis, whom he still didn't know how to address on Monday morning at work.
He cleared his throat. 'I think I'd like to get back to your offer for something stronger now,' he said and put his cup down onto Dumbledore's desk.
'Of course, dear boy. That's quite understandable.'
Dumbledore vanished the tea cups, and with another wave of his wand, a bottle of Ogden's and a little tumbler appeared, which Grindling accepted thankfully. For quite some time, however, he did nothing more than hold on to his glass and continue staring at the parchment in front of him.
'Forgive me for asking,' Dumbledore broke the silence at last, 'but have you made other prophecies? I understand there is Seer blood in the family.'
'I didn't even know that I made this one!' Grindling exclaimed, and Dumbledore could see in the fair wizard's face that he was trying very hard to remember when he had made it.
'Do not fret, Grindling,' he said consolingly. 'The fact that you cannot remember making the prophecy proves to me that it is real.'
These words, however, did not seem to soothe the Keeper's nerves in the slightest, and as he lifted the tumbler to his mouth, his hand was shaking so violently that he judged it wiser to not have any Firewhisky at all.
'Do you consider Charis to be the raven?' he asked in the end, desperately trying to make sense of something at least.
Dumbledore nodded.
'"Hatched on the lowest branch of the ancient tree"?' Grindling pressed on. 'What tree?'
'Ah, well, that is for Charis to tell you, I'm afraid,' Dumbledore replied somewhat mysteriously.
Grindling's shoulders slumped.
'This might prove to be problematic,' he said very quietly.
The Headmaster looked puzzled. From what he had gathered, Charis thought very highly of her boss and they seemed to work rather well together.
'We, um... Charis and I...'
Grindling ran a hand through his ponytail in agitation, wishing he hadn't said anything. What had happened between him and Charis was none of Dumbledore's business. And he was a professional, for Merlin's sake. Surely, he should be able to put his personal feelings aside and handle this prophecy like any other.
He closed eyes for a moment in order to compose himself and then straightened in his seat.
'Do you consider this prophecy of importance to anyone apart from Charis and me, Headmaster?' he asked.
Dumbledore looked over his glasses and gave Grindling a penetrating stare.
'I believe this prophecy is of utmost importance, Grindling. Not only because it involves Charis but because it appears to refer to yet another pupil, former or otherwise, of Hogwarts. And, in the current climate, the reference to the Dark cannot be ignored.'
Grindling nodded slowly.
'In that case, I assume you'd like to be present when Charis and I decipher the message. Maybe you should ask her to come here?'
'I think that is a good idea. Will you excuse me a moment?'
As the Headmaster headed for the door, Grindling stared after him, and for a moment, he feared that Charis would already be standing outside, just waiting for Dumbledore to ask her to enter. But thankfully, the older wizard exited and closed the door behind him.
Grindling buried his face in his hands. This was not how he had imagined his reunion with Charis. Frankly, he had so far been unable to make up his mind on how to approach her. 'Hi, I'm back,' seemed like a very lousy line after three weeks, and 'Good morning, Miss Byrne. How are you?' seemed far too formal. At one point, Grindling had even considered showing up at Charis' doorstep with a bouquet of flowers and asking her if she had missed him. But for that, he lacked the courage. And now it seemed as if fate had decided for him.
Once more, Grindling reached out his hand for the prophecy, trying hard to remember when he had made it. The Draumar had been in his possession for a bit over ten years now, and he could have made the prophecy at any time during this period. It seemed odd, however, to think that he would have made a prophecy about Charis before he had even known that she existed.
And only the Raven
That was hatched on the lowest branch of the ancient tree
Possesses the means to ask the questions
That will bring the answers to conquer the Dark.
Grindling shuddered. Dumbledore had said that the reference to the Dark could not be ignored. Surely the reference couldn't mean You-Know-Who... Could it?
* * *
'I am so sorry for this, Albus,' Charis apologised for the second time. She had meant to be ready when Dumbledore knocked at her door, but the book she had been reading had been so fascinating that she had lost track of the time.
'There is no need to worry, dear Charis,' Dumbledore assured her yet again while he continued his tour of the lounge, Lily following closely at his heels. It seemed as if the little cat had taken a shine to the old man.
'Can I get you anything while you wait? A cup of tea, maybe?' Charis offered.
'I just had a cup, thank you,' the older wizard declined. 'Don't worry about me. I will find something to occupy myself with while you make yourself pretty. Not that you need it.'
Charis blushed and disappeared into the bathroom once more, where she examined her reflection in the mirror somewhat desperately. Dumbledore needs to have the prescription for his glasses checked, she thought because in her opinion, she very much needed to make herself pretty. After three weeks, she didn't want to meet Grindling with pale cheeks and puffy eyes. And that zit on her nose! Charis sighed. She really should have applied that facial mask she had bought at Madam Primpernelle's the other day. But, alas, she didn't have time for that now.
'Breathtaking!' Dumbledore commented as Charis re-emerged from the bathroom ten minutes later. 'That blue eyeliner certainly brings out your eyes.'
For a moment, Charis was slightly taken aback. She had not expected Dumbledore to comment on her make-up, but her surprise and slight embarrassment wore off when she saw Dumbledore admiring the little silver mirror on the coffee table.
'Morgana has one, too,' she explained. 'We use it to communicate with each other. It's much smoother that using the Floo, I think.'
'A little mirror is certainly easier to carry around than the fireplace,' Dumbledore commented with a smile and handed the mirror to Charis, who quickly stowed it in her bag.
They Disapparated directly from Charis' flat and landed at the boundary of the Hogwarts grounds. They could have used the Floo, of course, but Charis was glad that they hadn't. She didn't want to be covered in ashes when she met Grindling again. Also, she was glad for the short walk through the grounds because her heart was racing in her chest like a herd of Hippogriffs and she hoped that the cold evening air would calm her nerves.
How would it be to see Grindling again, she wondered for the umpteenth time that day. What should she say? What would he say? Was it even prudent to say anything else than, 'How do you do?' with Dumbledore in the same room?
Charis looked at the Headmaster of Hogwarts, who was walking a few steps ahead of her. When he had contacted her earlier that day and asked her if she could join him and Grindling that evening in order to decipher the prophecy, she had immediately agreed. She had thought that it might be good to have Dumbledore there as a kind of chaperon when she and Grindling met for the first time. But now she very much wished that she could speak to Grindling in private. She really wanted to tell him that she had missed him.
The walk through the Hogwarts grounds was far too short, and so was the climb up the stairs to the Headmaster's office, and when Charis caught sight of Grindling, her heart was still racing. But then again, if it had been beating slowly, it would certainly have picked up its pace anyway. For Grindling looked to-die-for.
'How was your holiday?' Charis asked nervously after Dumbledore had offered her a seat.
'Relaxing. Thank you,' Grindling answered somewhat stiffly, and Charis couldn't help but think that he didn't look very relaxed now. But she couldn't blame him. Her hands were quite sweaty as well, and she was at a loss about what to say. Thankfully, Dumbledore was there to break the tension and remind both her and Grindling about why they were all there anyway.
'Charis, Grindling has read the prophecy, and he has some questions about your family tree. I thought it prudent for you to tell him,' he said, looking seriously over the rim of his glasses at the blonde witch.
Charis bit her lip. So far, being a Black had brought her nothing but trouble, and she didn't know how Grindling would take this news at all.
'The prophecy appears to be about me,' she started slowly, 'because it seems to be about a Ravenclaw who is related to the House of Black.'
'The House of Black? You?' Grindling retorted in disbelief. 'I thought you were Muggle-born.'
'Yes, I am. But my great-grandfather was Marius Black. He was blasted from the family tree when he married a Muggle.'
'Oh.'
Grindling's heart skipped a beat, and he swallowed drily. There was a slightly uncomfortable pause as he reflected on unknowingly getting himself involved with yet another Black woman. Especially now, when he was trying so hard get over the first one.
Grindling's silence caused Charis to lower her gaze and stare at the tip of her shoes. The Blacks were notorious supporters of You-Know-Who, after all, and weren't known to have the sweetest of dispositions in general. Hopefully, Grindling wouldn't think less of her now.
Mostly in order to occupy himself, Grindling picked up the prophecy.
'If "the ancient tree" refers to the Blacks, then the lion must refer to a member of that family. I'd say that rules out the possibility of "lion" referring to Gryffindor House. The Blacks were all in Slytherin, weren't they?' he asked after a moment. 'Present company excluded, of course.'
'Not all, actually,' Dumbledore corrected him. 'Sirius Black was Sorted into Gryffindor. But we're not convinced this prophecy is about Sirius.'
'Then there might have been someone else from the Black family who had also been Sorted into Gryffindor,' Grindling reasoned. 'Hogwarts keeps yearbooks, I assume?'
'Yes, in the library,' Dumbledore confirmed.
'With your permission, Headmaster, may I be allowed to look through these to try to find a link?'
'Why, Grindling, of course, but you are going above and beyond the kind of help I was requiring from you,' the old man replied, barely able to hide his smile. Actually, Grindling offering his help had been exactly what he had hoped for.
'Until we know whom the prophecy relates to, I'm afraid I am not much use at all.' Grindling stated and stood up. 'This might take a while, though. Potentially, we'll have to go back several generations. I will need assistance.'
He looked tentatively at Charis, who glanced up and met his gaze. Grey eyes locked onto green ones, and they both missed Dumbledore's triumphant smile.
'I'll help,' Charis whispered.
'Splendid,' Dumbledore exclaimed, stroking his beard benevolently. 'Do let me know if you find something of interest.'
Some minutes later, Charis was leading Grindling through the old, hallowed corridors of Hogwarts. As it was a rather blustery Saturday evening, the majority of pupils were in their own common rooms, gossiping with friends or playing games. Thus, the two Ravenclaws met no one on their way and slipped into the library undetected.
'I'd almost forgotten how amazing this place is,' Grindling whispered in a hushed tone as he craned his neck to look up at the criss-cross of buttresses on the ceiling. The library was an impressive sight to those who'd never seen it before. Books upon books were stacked from floor to ceiling, with nooks here and there which were perfect to study in. The arched windows were reminiscent of a church, and it had a calm, respectful air.
'Mind you, it's been a while since I've been here,' Grindling added. 'I'm getting old.'
'No, you're not!' Charis retorted. 'Now you're all tanned and relaxed, you look about twenty-five!'
Grindling snorted. 'Too kind, dear lady. Too kind.'
They looked at each other for some moments, both at a loss about what to say once more. There was so much they both wanted to say, but neither of them knew where to start.
'The yearbooks are over there,' Charis finally broke the silence. 'Opposite the Restricted Section.'
'We better go there, then,' Grindling stated quite unnecessarily, his eyes still locked on Charis'. He could have looked at her for hours. Days even. Or a lifetime. And when she turned to lead the way, he still was unable to take his eyes off her.
Charis selected a couple of yearbooks at random and handed them to Grindling.
'What is it?' she asked, as she realised the he was looking intensely at her.
'If your great-grandfather was blasted off the family tree, how do you know you're a Black?'
'I looked up birth certificates and wedding certificates,' Charis replied. 'A friend of mine and I had this project, you see. He was quite convinced that I come from a magical line. It took some effort, but that's how I found out.'
'You wouldn't have found those certificates here, would you?' Grindling wondered. 'I mean, if you're a Black, there might have been other Hogwarts students from the House of Black with different last names,' he suggested.
'Oh! That's a good idea,' Charis agreed. 'But... if we start looking up family history, we'll be here all night.'
'I don't mind,' Grindling whispered, taking the books from Charis and then brushing a stray strand of hair from her face.
Charis blushed. 'I've missed you,' she admitted quietly.
Grindling took a deep breath before replying.
'I've missed you, too.'
His fingertips lingered for a moment on Charis' cheek, and as he withdrew his hand, Charis thought that her cheek felt rather cold.
'I... I didn't expect to meet you before Monday,' Grindling said. 'I... I have a present for you.'
'No, Grindling, you shouldn't have!' Charis protested. 'You've already spoiled me.'
'There have been many "shouldn't haves" in my life, Charis. Spoiling you isn't one of them.'
They gazed at each other and smiled, a tender feeling swelling in each of their hearts, when all of a sudden a rustling sound could be heard behind them. And then, from absolutely nowhere, the imposing figure of Severus Snape swooped around the corner, his lip curled with distaste.
'My, my, Miss Byrne. Loitering around the library after nightfall again, are we?' he asked smoothly, his black eyes glinting in the candlelight. 'One would think you had filled your quota when you were a student here.'
'Professor Snape!' Charis' heart skipped a beat. Of all the people to bang into, and here!
Grindling, however, didn't know Snape too well. He'd met him a couple of times together with Lucius when they all had been students, and Snape hadn't made much of an impression back then. He'd just been there, in Lucius' shadow. Nowadays, however, Snape had the reputation of being quite strict, a reputation which was known beyond the walls of Hogwarts. Also, he struck Grindling as a man who didn't take kindly to rule-breaking of any kind. Thus, Grindling thought it wise to explain what he and Charis were doing in the library.
'Ah, Professor Snape. You might remember me from school? Grindling Gibbons, Keeper of the Hall of Prophecies.' He went to hold out his hand for the dark wizard to shake but decided against it at the last moment as Snape was fixing him with a look that was less than welcoming. 'Charis and I are just doing a little research. The Headmaster has given us permission.'
For the duration of a second, Snape looked down his nose at Grindling with a look that suggested that Grindling wasn't worth his time. Then he directed his black eyes towards Charis again.
'Didn't we have a chat about bringing boys here to play, Miss Byrne?'
His drawl was so low that Grindling couldn't really hear what he was saying. Charis, meanwhile, heard every single word and flushed at the implication. Only a few feet from where they were standing now, Snape had made her moan and quiver. In fact, she could see down that very aisle without even having to turn her head. If it weren't that dark in the Restricted Section, she could probably see the desk he had bent her over.
'Is there a problem, Professor?' Grindling asked, utterly confused at the strangeness of the situation.
Reluctantly, Snape shifted his gaze to Grindling and glared at him.
'No, no problem at all, Mr Gibbons,' he replied silkily. 'Just make sure that Miss Byrne keeps her voice down and doesn't wrinkle any book pages. Madam Pince does not appreciate that.'
And with that, he gave Charis a meaningful, knowing look and billowed out.
'What was that all about?' Grindling still looked rather bemused while Charis was rather pale.
She closed her eyes and took a deep breath. 'Professor Snape... let's just say he's not the easiest person to get along with.'
Grindling feigned overenthusiastic surprise. 'Really? He seemed ever so charming!'
Charis couldn't help but giggle at this. But now that she had seen Snape here, she did not want to stay in the library for a second longer. Their brief meeting had brought back too many memories, memories she didn't want to be reminded of. Not now. Not when she was with Grindling.
'Look, I really think we'll be looking for a needle in a haystack if we just start blindly looking for names,' she opined. 'I like your suggestion of searching for other members of the family who have been blasted off and looking at those to see if there are leads there. Why don't I find those out first, and then we can research from there?' she suggested. 'I know where to look.'
'Good idea,' Grindling agreed. 'Then we will cross check those names against any kind of reference towards a lion: Gryffindors, Leos, you name it.'
'Great!'
Once more, their eyes met, and a feeling of mutual understanding passed between them.
'It is a pleasure working alongside with you again, Miss Byrne,' Grindling said softly, his grey eyes glittering.
Charis smiled. 'You too, Mr Gibbons.'
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Great start. Albums would really sacrifice anyone to win the war. I hope both of a star sisters find their happy ending and the war doesn't destroy their souls.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Now you reminded us of that we should wirte a Part 3. :)
well, what can I say? This was a blast from beginning to end. Loved your new characters and how the Malfoys once again play a big part in Morganna's love life. Severus what a naughty man coming up with the three mirrors and him being a bit of a peeping Tom lol. Least he kept his word and did ensure the star sisters safety and nice to see him hinting at them to both wear their star necklaces once more.
The scene where the girls on Christmas Eve made that special spell and vow was beautifully written. Also the Scenes on new years eve and after were tenderly done and not in a harsh way but in a loving one. Even Snapes watching was done with a special feel and not pervy at all. Shall look forward to read more in this series and see if Snape can loose his dark thoughts and become a man who can accept love in the end and be rid of the Lily Ghost.
Thanks for writing and creating this lovely series. Really enjoyed reading it and sorry I did not get time to review every chapter. Consider this worth a hundred reviews.
Congrats.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
The relationship between Charis and Morgana has become a beautiful thing, and I'm very happy for them and glad that Severus will continue to watch over his girls. One day I hope his heart will be healed and that he will remember how to love. And allow himself to be loved.I'm sad this story has come to an end (for now), but I'm so happy to know that you aren't done with these characters—I've grown quite fond of them. For now we will let them sleep. I want to let you know how much I've enjoyed Star Sisters and now Shooting Stars. You are very gifted writers, and I thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. I wish you both good days and much happiness. May real life calm down for you, and allow you the opportunity to once again weave this magic you do so well.I give you my thanks with much gratitude and lots of hugs,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Mmmm... I think I'd like a cup of tea and a biscuit after reading this chapter! Or perhaps a cigarette? Smoking hot writing, ladies. Thank you from the bottom of my... err... heart!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Gorgeous chapter, and I appreciated Snape leaving them be and also not taking himself in hand. As he realises the feeling blossoming in his chest, my heart ached for him a little bit. Then followed "A love he had no part of, a love he would never be able to share with anyone" which summed it all up and put a lump in my throat. Ah, Snape. Forever the tragic anti-hero. Lovely writing.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
I enjoyed your creation of Dumbledore's vow and its execution - gentle and manipulative - much like the man himself. I love that Dumbledore also set up their New Year's celebration with Snape, even though, so far at least, Snape hasn't got in on the action! The tenderness between Morgana and Charis is lovely. Reading on...
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
"The way Ravenclaws seemed to be fascinated by the stars was simply adorable" bahaha! Pity that I didn't realise the significance of the constellation Leo; I've let down team Ravenclaw! At least I'd managed to suss out the connection to Slytherin's locket via the house-elf, thus tracing it back to Black. This is a lovely chapter brimming with charm and intimacy between the Star Sisters, and their spell-casting was beautiful and poignant. I also enjoyed Morgana's metaphor for moving on at the end of the chapter. I must say, though, that you've plotted your story meticulously and have been wonderfully crafty with the prophecy; not just with its puzzle, but also making your story fit seamlessly into canon... After all, we were never told how Dumbledore came to discover the locket. I take my hat off to you, ladies!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Now it's time to turn fantasy into reality for Severus and his girls--can the teasing giggling be leading up to them beckoning him over to their side *hopeful look*--great menage-a-trois dynamics; I really like Morgana's sexuality being released and expressed, reinforcing her healing from the past and embracing the present and future; Charis' divine sub positions--yum! and as I said last chapter, Severus is one lucky wizard... *sighing* Lovely, dynamic, lemony chapter as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
As I began reading this chapter I was so surprised that I had to go back and read the end of the previous chapter to be sure I understood what had happened... which, of course, I didn't, but I didn't know that until Severus woke up that I realized it was his dream. You two ladies are masters of the twisty plot. Well done!
Dreaming as he had been, I was glad he allowed himself to carry his dream to fruition in the shower. Perhaps this "Sweet Release" will help him get through the coming storm. Soon he will have to kill Dumbledore and then endure his tenure as Headmaster until the entire house of cards comes falling down.
I was very happy for him when heard Charis and Morgana talking and giggling in their activated mirrors. It would be very sweet if his dream became a reality after all is said and done. But I'm not kidding myself one tiny bit that I can predict just what you two have in mind for these three dear people. The only thing I'm sure of right now is that I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update.
Thank you for a very nice chapter!!!
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
It's a relief for Morgana and Charis that they have finally and truly shared their love for each other. And not only a relief for the two of them, but for Severus as well, I think. He has such strong feelings for both of them, and I think knowing that they have declared their love and cemented their relationship has given him peace of mind that they will be all right no matter what happens.
He loved those two girls dearly in his own special way. They would never know, of course, but he hoped that every now and then, they would remember him with fondness.
This chapter has really touched my heart. I don't know what will happen to Severus, and it makes me sad to think of him being alone. I hope he can find something or someone to "hang onto" as future events unfold. Be kind to him, ladies. Be kind.Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Mmmn... beautiful! Love their love-making, giving and sharing to each other the way each one needs, and Severus witnessing it--some wizards have all the luck! What a lovely way to bring in the New Year!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
I love this story even more than the last one.
I have no idea how the two of you do it but I am grateful that you do.
Sorry for not leaving reviews before now, but it is often difficult to find words for my appreciation! Rest assured that I always eagerly await the next instalment.
Such a beautiful and unusual story... the pair of you need to create a universe of your own! I'm sure we could expect great things from such imaginations! Perhaps just as great as the universe that brought your two formidable minds together!
Thank you.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
‘When the rope dissolves and we let go of each other, neither of you will be able to convey what you have learnt here today,’ Dumbledore explained. ‘You will have a faint memory of our conversation with Kreacher, but trying to remember the details will be like trying to remember a dream. The harder you try, the further will it drift away. And unless we three stand here once more, with our hands entwined, you will never be able to remember.’Damn. I wish the girls had not had to agree to take that vow. But if they hadn't, then he would have Obliviated them. I hope they really will be safer not remembering the prophecy.I can't help but wish Severus didn't have to spend New Year's Eve with only a bottle of Ogden's to keep him company while he watches his girls coming to understand the depth of their feelings for each other. With Severus already upstairs and the girls on their way up the stairs, I wonder if they'll run into each other? I'm off to the next chapter to find out. :^)Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
With Grindling moving to Greece for good, I guess there's no way he will be a regular part of either of the girls' lives. Sometimes I think it's better just to move on and cut your losses, but I know Charis and Morgana will be sad when they realize he has left his position at the Ministry and packed up lock, stock, and barrel.
That was a lovely spell that Charis created to permanently join the girls' star necklaces together. It was pretty cool the way Morgana's star glowed Ravenclaw blue and Charis' glowed Slytherin green. I was tickled when Charis solved the riddle of the prophecy- all that time studying Astronomy really paid off! Now Dumbledore wants them to wait a week. Perhaps he does want to do some research of his own.
I'm glad Morgana has a new Patronus- a majestic black feline is much better than her old Peacock. It's very telling that they have such similar Patronuses, isn't it? It seems like their world is settling into something solid and stable, but with Grindling out of the picture (for now, anyway) I'm wondering what Severus will do? Poor man is damned if he does and damned if he doesn't. Speaking of Severus... what is he doing right now?
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
It seems that it has taken tonight's events and their outcomes to bring Severus to the point where he can relax enough to realize that Charis and Morgana love each other. But I'm not sure if they can be happy with only each other. Grindling loves Charis, and I think he has very strong feelings for Morgana as well. Charis loves Severus, and Morgana feels very safe with him. Severus loves Charis and Morgana. And I have absolutely no idea how this is going to work out. There are a number of permutations that come to mind, and one of them is that Severus, Charis, and Morgana become a threesome family. Or Grindling could make for a foursome family. Or Grindling could find himself with Narcissa when all hell breaks loose and Lucius ends up dead or in prison for the rest of his life. Or if Severus dies, then Grindling, Charis and Morgana could make a life together.This emotional awakening Severus has undergone, leaves me feeling very afraid for him. I fear he will go willingly to meet death so long as he thinks "his girls" are safe and happy. Is he falling into well of dark resignation?Thank you for this thought provoking chapter, ladies. I still don't have any idea how this will all turn out, and now I have an even longer list of possible outcomes. You are masters of mystery!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
The place where Ravenclaws always took comfort and solitude: the library.' This had e tearing up! And the delicious lemony, Snapey goodness-sene has me saying, Merlin's balls, sevs_starsisters, yes, yes, yes! and more, more, more! *taking a deep satisfied sigh* Thank you! (and Miss Charis needs to heed Sev's advice for her and Morgana--speaking of which, can't wait for Sev's jetsetting over to Malfoy manor, maybe Ms Morgana needs some *special* attention too from the Potions master--he is suppose to take care of both his girls *decadent cackle* Lovely, yummy chapter, as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Poor, dear Grindling--lovely moments and chemistry and trust between these two, only to be breathtakingly blown away with the scene between Morgana and Severus--yes, yes, yes! Could feel Morgana breaking through and liberating herself with Severus *perfect, bloody f------ perfect* Thank you!! xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Now I see what you meant when you told me that Severus would feel pretty guilty... but I have to wonder just how guilty he really felt. Still and all, Morgana is free from the weight of a millstone named Lucius Malfoy, and Severus has promised that Narcissa will not bother her again. Even crazy Bellatrix served a useful purpose. Thanks to her, Grindling has heard Narcissa say the words that set him free... at least I hope he is free from Narcissa's machinations. In the study, Severus told Morgana to ‘Enjoy a Malfoy-free life. Spend time with the ones who love you the most.’ He left before she could ask who he meant, and then I remembered that Grindling had told her that he wished things could have been different. Soooo... could it be that Grindling has a bit of a crush on Morgana, or is he still in love with the memory of Narcissa... or will he return to Charis? They will see each other because they're trying to solve the Prophesy, but what will they think about the things that have happened in the last few hours? Charis will be thinking about "her boss" and her former teacher. Morgana will be thinking about her former teacher. Narcissa will be thinking about wringing her sister's neck, and mourning the loss of perhaps the only opportunity to regain her husband's freedom and their lost stature in the ranks of the purebloods. Severus will be thinking about both Charis and Morgana... I wish I knew what was going through Severus' mind in regard to both of "his girls." I still can't shake the feeling that he really holds romantic thoughts about Charis, but I have to say you ladies really do keep the waters muddied up enough that I can't ever be sure. Maybe Morgana and Grindling will be attracted to each other, and... *sigh*What is going to go on at Malfoy Manor will all those Death Eaters still there? Oh what a tangled web we weave....Great chapter. As always!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Hot dayum! Hot DAYUM! I am so damned happy that Severus and Charis had their "alone time" in the library... and he was so tender and made sure she had the orgasm of her life before he had his.‘The stars,’ he said and pointed at his throat as if to indicate a necklace he was wearing. ‘Renew the charm. Wear them. The both of you.’He still cares for Charis. His kiss on her cheek and urgging her and Morganna to wear their star necklaces proves it beyond all doubt.Thanks, I needed that! *grinning*Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Of all the rooms for Narcissa to choose from... I wonder just what Narcissa knows and what she doesn't know about Morgana and Lucius? Could Narcissa have some other motive we don't yet know about? I don't think so, but I have learned not to underestimate you ladies, either.In the meantime, what are Snape and Charis doing in thier search for the meaning of the prophesy? Sooner or later one of them is bound to say or do something that comfirms for the other that there are still real and deep emotions involved between. I can't wait to see what you have in store for our lovely characters next? Hope to see the next chapter soon!!!Berh
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
I hope she opens up. It would be good for her to get it out. Grindling is a complex character; not quite sure what to make of him yet. I'm glad you're still writing this story, I love following it. 5 stars.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Well, Charis got the info she needed. She just needs to remember her astronomy now.I've known this pair of stories have been out there for some time but avoided reading them because they were not about canon-centric characters. But I took a chance and I've really enjoyed them. I look forward to finding out what happens. Keep up the good work!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for taking a chance on our stories, we're really thrilled you've enjoyed them and we hope you'll stick with the sequel. Thanks again for your support, it means a lot!
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
May I say I never expected you two to answer ALL my reviews since I left a ton of them at one time. But thank you. If I've put you behind on your writing, feel free to blame me.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We try to answer all our reviews. It's so nice to get feedback, and we like to show that we appreciate your thoughts. And no worries, you haven't slowed us down. Next chapter is being beta-read at the moment and we have done plenty of plotting. Lemons ahead ;-)
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
Ah lemon....one of my favorite flavors!
I think Charis is far too forgiving (maybe I just don't like Grindling).TeeHee, Severus is SOOOOO BAD. I love him.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He's a naughty boy! and that's why we love him, right?
Oooh the plot thickens. I think I've figured out most of the prophecy, now to watch as the characters figure it out.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Let's see if you're right :)
I am glad it was cleared up that Morgana is NOT the one Grindling was talking about. She has enough worries. And go her for standing up for her friend.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Yes, Morgana kicked ass :)