X: To the Manor Drawn
Chapter 10 of 37
sevs_starsisters*COMPLETED* The Star Sisters have left Hogwarts and are now facing a new world with new opportunities and new kinds of danger. And also for the Half-Blood Prince, times are changing. (This story is the sequel to Star Sisters.)
Chapter X: To the Manor Drawn
It was Sunday morning. Sitting in the elegant drawing room of Malfoy Manor, Severus Snape couldn't help but muse over the different activities he had filled his Sunday mornings with during the course of the years.
When he had been little, his father had always insisted on dragging him to church. 'To make a good impression on the neighbours,' he had always said. How heading straight for the pub after the service had made a good impression on the neighbours, however, young Severus had never really understood. But he had always enjoyed being sent home after church because whilst his father had been at the pub, spending the dole money, his mother had taught him magic.
Then at Hogwarts, he had spent most of his Sunday mornings in the library, at first studying with Lily during the first couple of years and then all alone, reading up on the Dark Arts, after the unfortunate incident by the lake. And once he had turned seventeen and had received the Dark Mark, he would spend his Sunday mornings in the Forbidden Forest, showing hexes and curses to aspiring Death Eaters and enjoying their admiration.
As an adult then, he had spent most of his Sunday mornings alone. While other men his age slept off their hangovers or shagged their sweethearts senseless, he, Severus Snape, was hiding in the darkness, either in the dungeons of Hogwarts or behind drawn curtains at Spinner's End, wishing that the day would pass quickly.
And this Sunday morning, his task was to lie to one of his oldest friends and at the same time to lay the first brick for a road that would very likely lead a young woman straight to hell. And there were people who claimed that Sunday mornings were the best time of the week. Snape almost snorted and doubted that he would ever have what people referred to as a nice Sunday.
Sighing, he looked around the drawing room. He had sat there countless times before, patiently waiting for an elf to inform him that he was now granted the honour of meeting the lord of the manor. And as always, everything in the room was immaculate and sumptuous: the thick Persian rug, the opulent Fabergé-style ornaments; even the velvet drapes that adorned the large French windows were pristine and certainly worth more than most wizards' yearly salary. But Snape knew that although the grandeur remained the same, life was very different for the Malfoys these days: Lucius was locked up in Azkaban and his wife and son were left to fend for themselves. And as glad as Snape was to see Lucius behind bars, he felt bad for Narcissa and Draco. He knew all too well that Lucius' failures reflected upon his family and that they weren't worth a Knut in the eyes of many Death Eaters nowadays, even for all their wealth and privilege. And the Dark Lord took pleasure in humiliating them as his latest project du jour. Not even Bellatrix, once the Dark Lord's favourite, was spared. She, too, was suffering his displeasure now. After all, her sister had made the mistake of marrying a man who was unable to live up to the Dark Lord's expectations.
But the one who was suffering the most was Narcissa. Not only was her husband in Azkaban but now her son was in danger as well. And as any loving mother, she was ready to commit the most desperate acts to protect her child. That had been more than evident when she had come to Spinner's End and begged Snape on her knees to protect her Draco. How much must her pride have suffered that day? And how could Snape have refused? He had known Narcissa for many years, and in all that time he had never once seen her lose her poise. The fact that she had wept and clung to him as though pleading for her life had shown how much pain she was in and how great her love for Draco was. And her tears had shaken Snape's very core and awoken an anger in him he had not felt for quite some time. Was Lucius even aware of how much suffering he had caused? Could Lucius rotting away in Azkaban really make up for it?
The sound of the door opening shook Snape from his thoughts, and as he rose, he came face to face with the lady of the manor herself. Snape was surprised; he had expected an elf.
Narcissa was dressed in a fine silver robe, her platinum blonde hair falling like a sheet down her back. She looked, if possible, paler and more delicate than ever. She, too, seemed surprised, but nonetheless happy to see her visitor.
'Severus! How lovely to see you.' She stepped forwards, concern etched on her pretty face. 'Is everything alright?'
Snape was taken aback by Narcissa's question. If anything, he should be asking her if she was alright.
'Is it not custom for friends to come by every now and then?' he asked instead, deflecting her question.
Narcissa gave a small smile, and it seemed to Snape that it had been a long time since she had smiled properly. It was almost as if she had forgotten how.
'Of course, Severus. It is good to see you. It's just that I rarely get company these days, since...' Narcissa trailed off sadly.
Since Lucius has fallen from grace, Snape finished the sentence in his mind. He could imagine that not many people wanted to associate with the Malfoys nowadays. Followers of the Dark Lord were afraid to displease their master, and members of other highly regarded Wizarding families did not, of course, want to mix with the family of a man who was carrying the Dark Mark and sitting in Azkaban.
Uncomfortably, Snape cleared his throat. He had not come here to make Narcissa feel bad.
'You look well,' he offered, merely for something to say. He supposed Narcissa hadn't received a compliment in quite some time, even though she deserved to be showered with praise on a daily basis. She was undoubtedly a beautiful witch, and even with the strain her family was under, she always looked like a lady.
Narcissa inclined her head and accepted Snape's compliment gracefully.
'I admit I do not feel that well. I find myself walking from room to room at nights, looking for Lucius but not finding him. And during the day, I can sit for hours in his office, waiting for him to come home...'
She broke off and shook her head as if to rid herself of her ghosts, and Snape shifted his weight from one foot to the other, genuinely at a loss of what to say. He severely doubted that Narcissa had revealed this to anyone before, not even her own sister. Thankfully, he was spared having to say anything by Narcissa regaining her composure.
'Forgive me,' she said, straightening up. 'Where are my manners? Can I get you a drink?'
'Are you having anything?' Snape answered, hoping that she would. Maybe a drink would be good for her and put her at her ease.
Narcissa smiled. 'Well, I know how fond you are of elf-made wine. We have... I have,' she corrected herself quickly, 'an Amarone which I have been saving for some pleasant company. Would you care to join me?'
'I would love to, Narcissa,' Snape replied. It was not often that he was referred to as being pleasant company, especially by a beautiful witch. He wouldn't have turned her down even if she had offered him vinegar.
Once more, Narcissa smiled briefly before summoning an elf. 'Tomassi Amarone 1989 and two glasses,' she instructed. 'The French-cut crystal.'
And the elf bowed deeply and Disapparated immediately with a crack.
Snape had been around the Malfoys long enough to no longer be impressed by the luxury with which they surrounded themselves as everyday normality, but he knew that today Narcissa was making an extra special effort for him. The French-cut crystal glasses had been a wedding gift from Lucius. Narcissa didn't bring them out for just anyone.
The elf swiftly returned with the wine and made a show of pouring, letting Narcissa check if it was corked or not and then, at her approval, poured a glass for each of them and then stepped aside to await further instructions.
'You can leave the bottle,' Narcissa told the elf, her voice cold and matter-of-fact as was expected of a witch of her background. And the little elf once more bowed deeply and then left the witch and wizard alone.
With the elf leaving, Narcissa's shoulders once more slumped ever so slightly, barely noticeable for anyone who didn't know her. But Snape noticed, and hence, he was not surprised as there was once more the tiniest of trembles in her voice as she spoke again.
'I suppose we should make a toast. This is, after all, a very fine wine.'
'And what shall we toast to?' Snape asked, watching his hostess carefully. If she started crying now, like she had done at Spinner's End, he would not know what to do. But to his surprise, Narcissa smiled.
'To pleasant company,' she proposed. 'May it always be there when we need it the most.'
Snape charged his glass and smiled back at Narcissa before taking a sip. Black cherries and velvet rolled across his tongue, followed by a sweet vanilla finish. He didn't want to estimate how much the wine was worth, but it was certainly up there with some of the best vintages he had ever sampled at Malfoy Manor.
Narcissa took a subtle sip and settled on the sofa, clutching the stem of her glass tightly.
'Severus,' she started, 'about the Vow...'
Snape shook his head. 'Narcissa, don't.' For him, there was no point going over it. It was done, they couldn't change it; the die was cast.
'I have been torn up with guilt ever since that night,' Narcissa whispered, her blue eyes full of anguish as she was looking up at him. 'I had no right to ask that of you.'
'You asked me for help, and I offered it gladly,' Snape replied. 'The Vow was just... an unfortunate side effect.'
This was partly true, and it had worked in Dumbledore's favour in the end. Narcissa, of course, was not to know this.
'Oh, Severus, I had no one else to turn to,' Narcissa carried on, the words tumbling from her lips like water burst from a broken dam. 'I am indebted to you. We are indebted to you.'
'As I said at Spinner's End,' Snape interrupted her, sitting down beside her, 'I am sure that the Dark Lord intends me to do the deed in the end. If me doing it means Draco will be saved... Narcissa, you know I care for the boy. And I care as much for you.'
Black eyes looked deeply into blue, and Narcissa put her hand on Snape's. The depth of his honour would have been astonishing to those who did not know him as well as she did.
'You are a true friend, Severus. I will never forget what you have done for me and my family.'
Snape had to resist the reflex to pull back. He was not used to being touched, especially not in an intimate, emotional way. But he resisted. The warmth of Narcissa's slender fingers felt pleasant against his skin.
'I would like to do more for you, Narcissa,' he announced. 'For you and Draco,' he added, realising that his words could be misinterpreted.
'I am touched beyond words,' Narcissa whispered, not able to stop the tears of gratitude and emotion welling in her eyes. And Snape graciously feigned enormous interest in the tapestry at the wall to give her a moment to compose herself.
'Forgive me,' she added. 'You have already done so much.'
'All I have to offer is a suggestion,' Snape clarified. 'The rest will be up to you.'
'And what is your suggestion, Severus?' Narcissa asked quizzically.
'The Dark Lord is angry, Narcissa,' Snape started, well aware that he was stating the obvious. But he needed some moments to gather his thoughts. 'Lucius lost him the Prophecy, and you and Draco are now suffering his anger. I think, however, that there is a way to please him.'
'There is?'
Once more, Snape looked away. The glimmer of hope shining in Narcissa's blue eyes made his heart ache.
'New followers are needed in the ranks of the Death Eaters,' he elaborated. 'And the most prized additions would have old, pure blood. You, Narcissa, have the chance to introduce a new follower to the Dark Lord. A follower he will be only too glad to welcome into the fold.'
Narcissa could not see where Snape was going with this. Her son already bore the Mark; surely Snape didn't mean that she should take it also?
'Can you think of no one?' Snape pressed.
Narcissa frowned, her pretty face screwed up in concentration but in vain. Everyone she knew socially was already a supporter or follower of the Dark Lord in some form or other. Eventually, she shook her head.
'Have you and Lucius not sponsored an orphan for the last sixteen years?' Snape probed carefully. He didn't want to be the one to utter Morgana's name. If Narcissa said it first, maybe, hopefully, he could somehow block the feeling of guilt that was gnawing at his intestines.
Thankfully, Narcissa caught on. She gasped and looked at Snape as if a Lumos charm had been cast in her mind.
'Morgana Belakane! Yes, we supplemented her education! But we have not been in touch since last summer.'
'She has left Hogwarts with some of the best grades in Slytherin House,' Snape explained, feeling more than a little proud. 'Now she is out in the big and scary world for the very first time and might be in need of some guidance. Female guidance, to be precise. The girl turned out to be somewhat of a tomboy. I am sure, however, that can be remedied.'
Like Snape had hoped, Narcissa's mothering instinct immediately came to the fore. He knew how much she had always longed for a baby girl. For some time, he had even brewed fertility potions for her, but to no avail.
'Oh, the poor thing,' Narcissa lamented. 'I should have had more of an input whilst she was growing up. But Lucius was insistent that I keep her at arm's length.'
Snape fought hard not to sneer. One had to hand it to Lucius; he had laid out his plan well and made sure that Morgana never grew too close to Narcissa, even at an early age. Of course, he couldn't have his wife and his mistress-to-be become best friends.
'Maybe I can make up for lost time,' Narcissa mused and then paused, looking back at Snape, her eyes once more shining with hope. 'Do you really think this will please the Dark Lord?'
'The Belakanes are one of the oldest Wizarding families in Britain. There is not much left of the family fortune, but the name still means something. And besides, if you help to win over the girl to our side, if you help the prodigal daughter to find her way back home, it will mean that the other side loses a valuable member,' Snape pointed out. Then he screwed up his face. 'Do not ask me where I went wrong as her Head of House, but rumour has it that the girl is playing with the idea of becoming an Auror.'
'An Auror?' Narcissa repeated with astonishment. 'A girl from such stock should be looking to marry an equal and carry on the bloodline, not running around with the likes of that lunatic Mad Eye-Moody!'
The very notion of a pureblood witch from one of the oldest wizarding families having to take a job instead of looking to marry into society filled Narcissa with horror. The reason for Snape almost choking on his wine was another, however. Narcissa had no idea of how close the girl had come to carrying on the bloodline. And of course, she did not know that the one who had fathered the child had been no other than Lucius himself.
'I see you are catching on,' he then pointed out. It was all going according to plan; Narcissa believed that he was offering her a lifeline and was holding onto it for dear life. Whether he liked it, however, Snape was not sure.
'Invite the girl,' he suggested. 'Befriend her, and make a lady out of her. When she is ready, present her to the Dark Lord. He, I am sure, will find someone for her to marry. And you, as her fairy godmother, will receive all the praise.'
Once again, Narcissa was nearly moved to tears. 'Severus, how can I ever repay you?'
Snape cocked an eyebrow. He certainly could come up with a reward or two if he put his mind to it, but for now, he held his peace.
'Another glass of that wine would be nice,' he replied with a smirk.
Narcissa smiled and willingly obliged. 'If there is ever anything I can do for you, anything at all...'
Once again, she rested her dainty, porcelain hand on Snape's.
'I know, and I appreciate it, truly,' Snape replied, not sure whether it was the wine or Narcissa's touch that made his heart beat faster. 'But I must warn you, Narcissa,' he added to distract himself, 'there is a slight problem.'
'There is?' Narcissa withdrew her hand, and her face fell.
'Morgana and Draco... Let us say that for both being members of Slytherin House, they have been quite hostile towards one another.'
To put it mildly, Snape added in his mind. Morgana had punched Draco right in the face at the breakfast table, and had he not intervened, she would probably have torn him limb from limb.
'Ah, yes,' Narcissa said. 'I seem to remember there was a disagreement between the two last year. Do you happen to know why?'
'The girl has quite a temper. And young Draco does not always know when it is better to keep his thoughts to himself. I believe there was some name calling involved.' Not to mention Draco calling the girl who had carried Lucius' child a Bloodtraitor, Snape thought privately. But Narcissa, of course, had no idea.
'I am sure it is nothing that can't be rectified. You know how teenagers can be.' She smiled at Snape, who nodded sagely. 'I must see to it that she comes for dinner with Draco and me soon, see if we can't put those disagreements to bed.'
'I suggest you talk to Draco first. Under no circumstances must he say or do anything to alienate her,' Snape warned.
'Of course,' Narcissa agreed. 'She is too valuable for that. She could be the key to getting us back on the Dark Lord's good side. Draco has enough to be going on with. I am sure a spat with a housemate is the least of his worries, and he'll be able to put it behind him.'
'You can find Morgana in Diagon Alley,' Snape advised. 'She is staying at Madam Nutkins'. I assume you remember the old bat?'
Narcissa wrinkled her pretty nose. 'What on earth is the girl doing staying at that godforsaken place? We will have to rectify that!'
'She will be ever so grateful. I am certain of that, Narcissa.' Snape raised his glass. 'Another toast, I think. To the future.'
'To the future!' Narcissa repeated, the clink of glasses sealing their oath.
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Great start. Albums would really sacrifice anyone to win the war. I hope both of a star sisters find their happy ending and the war doesn't destroy their souls.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Now you reminded us of that we should wirte a Part 3. :)
well, what can I say? This was a blast from beginning to end. Loved your new characters and how the Malfoys once again play a big part in Morganna's love life. Severus what a naughty man coming up with the three mirrors and him being a bit of a peeping Tom lol. Least he kept his word and did ensure the star sisters safety and nice to see him hinting at them to both wear their star necklaces once more.
The scene where the girls on Christmas Eve made that special spell and vow was beautifully written. Also the Scenes on new years eve and after were tenderly done and not in a harsh way but in a loving one. Even Snapes watching was done with a special feel and not pervy at all. Shall look forward to read more in this series and see if Snape can loose his dark thoughts and become a man who can accept love in the end and be rid of the Lily Ghost.
Thanks for writing and creating this lovely series. Really enjoyed reading it and sorry I did not get time to review every chapter. Consider this worth a hundred reviews.
Congrats.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
The relationship between Charis and Morgana has become a beautiful thing, and I'm very happy for them and glad that Severus will continue to watch over his girls. One day I hope his heart will be healed and that he will remember how to love. And allow himself to be loved.I'm sad this story has come to an end (for now), but I'm so happy to know that you aren't done with these characters—I've grown quite fond of them. For now we will let them sleep. I want to let you know how much I've enjoyed Star Sisters and now Shooting Stars. You are very gifted writers, and I thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. I wish you both good days and much happiness. May real life calm down for you, and allow you the opportunity to once again weave this magic you do so well.I give you my thanks with much gratitude and lots of hugs,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Mmmm... I think I'd like a cup of tea and a biscuit after reading this chapter! Or perhaps a cigarette? Smoking hot writing, ladies. Thank you from the bottom of my... err... heart!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Gorgeous chapter, and I appreciated Snape leaving them be and also not taking himself in hand. As he realises the feeling blossoming in his chest, my heart ached for him a little bit. Then followed "A love he had no part of, a love he would never be able to share with anyone" which summed it all up and put a lump in my throat. Ah, Snape. Forever the tragic anti-hero. Lovely writing.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
I enjoyed your creation of Dumbledore's vow and its execution - gentle and manipulative - much like the man himself. I love that Dumbledore also set up their New Year's celebration with Snape, even though, so far at least, Snape hasn't got in on the action! The tenderness between Morgana and Charis is lovely. Reading on...
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
"The way Ravenclaws seemed to be fascinated by the stars was simply adorable" bahaha! Pity that I didn't realise the significance of the constellation Leo; I've let down team Ravenclaw! At least I'd managed to suss out the connection to Slytherin's locket via the house-elf, thus tracing it back to Black. This is a lovely chapter brimming with charm and intimacy between the Star Sisters, and their spell-casting was beautiful and poignant. I also enjoyed Morgana's metaphor for moving on at the end of the chapter. I must say, though, that you've plotted your story meticulously and have been wonderfully crafty with the prophecy; not just with its puzzle, but also making your story fit seamlessly into canon... After all, we were never told how Dumbledore came to discover the locket. I take my hat off to you, ladies!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Now it's time to turn fantasy into reality for Severus and his girls--can the teasing giggling be leading up to them beckoning him over to their side *hopeful look*--great menage-a-trois dynamics; I really like Morgana's sexuality being released and expressed, reinforcing her healing from the past and embracing the present and future; Charis' divine sub positions--yum! and as I said last chapter, Severus is one lucky wizard... *sighing* Lovely, dynamic, lemony chapter as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
As I began reading this chapter I was so surprised that I had to go back and read the end of the previous chapter to be sure I understood what had happened... which, of course, I didn't, but I didn't know that until Severus woke up that I realized it was his dream. You two ladies are masters of the twisty plot. Well done!
Dreaming as he had been, I was glad he allowed himself to carry his dream to fruition in the shower. Perhaps this "Sweet Release" will help him get through the coming storm. Soon he will have to kill Dumbledore and then endure his tenure as Headmaster until the entire house of cards comes falling down.
I was very happy for him when heard Charis and Morgana talking and giggling in their activated mirrors. It would be very sweet if his dream became a reality after all is said and done. But I'm not kidding myself one tiny bit that I can predict just what you two have in mind for these three dear people. The only thing I'm sure of right now is that I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update.
Thank you for a very nice chapter!!!
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
It's a relief for Morgana and Charis that they have finally and truly shared their love for each other. And not only a relief for the two of them, but for Severus as well, I think. He has such strong feelings for both of them, and I think knowing that they have declared their love and cemented their relationship has given him peace of mind that they will be all right no matter what happens.
He loved those two girls dearly in his own special way. They would never know, of course, but he hoped that every now and then, they would remember him with fondness.
This chapter has really touched my heart. I don't know what will happen to Severus, and it makes me sad to think of him being alone. I hope he can find something or someone to "hang onto" as future events unfold. Be kind to him, ladies. Be kind.Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Mmmn... beautiful! Love their love-making, giving and sharing to each other the way each one needs, and Severus witnessing it--some wizards have all the luck! What a lovely way to bring in the New Year!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
I love this story even more than the last one.
I have no idea how the two of you do it but I am grateful that you do.
Sorry for not leaving reviews before now, but it is often difficult to find words for my appreciation! Rest assured that I always eagerly await the next instalment.
Such a beautiful and unusual story... the pair of you need to create a universe of your own! I'm sure we could expect great things from such imaginations! Perhaps just as great as the universe that brought your two formidable minds together!
Thank you.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
‘When the rope dissolves and we let go of each other, neither of you will be able to convey what you have learnt here today,’ Dumbledore explained. ‘You will have a faint memory of our conversation with Kreacher, but trying to remember the details will be like trying to remember a dream. The harder you try, the further will it drift away. And unless we three stand here once more, with our hands entwined, you will never be able to remember.’Damn. I wish the girls had not had to agree to take that vow. But if they hadn't, then he would have Obliviated them. I hope they really will be safer not remembering the prophecy.I can't help but wish Severus didn't have to spend New Year's Eve with only a bottle of Ogden's to keep him company while he watches his girls coming to understand the depth of their feelings for each other. With Severus already upstairs and the girls on their way up the stairs, I wonder if they'll run into each other? I'm off to the next chapter to find out. :^)Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
With Grindling moving to Greece for good, I guess there's no way he will be a regular part of either of the girls' lives. Sometimes I think it's better just to move on and cut your losses, but I know Charis and Morgana will be sad when they realize he has left his position at the Ministry and packed up lock, stock, and barrel.
That was a lovely spell that Charis created to permanently join the girls' star necklaces together. It was pretty cool the way Morgana's star glowed Ravenclaw blue and Charis' glowed Slytherin green. I was tickled when Charis solved the riddle of the prophecy- all that time studying Astronomy really paid off! Now Dumbledore wants them to wait a week. Perhaps he does want to do some research of his own.
I'm glad Morgana has a new Patronus- a majestic black feline is much better than her old Peacock. It's very telling that they have such similar Patronuses, isn't it? It seems like their world is settling into something solid and stable, but with Grindling out of the picture (for now, anyway) I'm wondering what Severus will do? Poor man is damned if he does and damned if he doesn't. Speaking of Severus... what is he doing right now?
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
It seems that it has taken tonight's events and their outcomes to bring Severus to the point where he can relax enough to realize that Charis and Morgana love each other. But I'm not sure if they can be happy with only each other. Grindling loves Charis, and I think he has very strong feelings for Morgana as well. Charis loves Severus, and Morgana feels very safe with him. Severus loves Charis and Morgana. And I have absolutely no idea how this is going to work out. There are a number of permutations that come to mind, and one of them is that Severus, Charis, and Morgana become a threesome family. Or Grindling could make for a foursome family. Or Grindling could find himself with Narcissa when all hell breaks loose and Lucius ends up dead or in prison for the rest of his life. Or if Severus dies, then Grindling, Charis and Morgana could make a life together.This emotional awakening Severus has undergone, leaves me feeling very afraid for him. I fear he will go willingly to meet death so long as he thinks "his girls" are safe and happy. Is he falling into well of dark resignation?Thank you for this thought provoking chapter, ladies. I still don't have any idea how this will all turn out, and now I have an even longer list of possible outcomes. You are masters of mystery!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
The place where Ravenclaws always took comfort and solitude: the library.' This had e tearing up! And the delicious lemony, Snapey goodness-sene has me saying, Merlin's balls, sevs_starsisters, yes, yes, yes! and more, more, more! *taking a deep satisfied sigh* Thank you! (and Miss Charis needs to heed Sev's advice for her and Morgana--speaking of which, can't wait for Sev's jetsetting over to Malfoy manor, maybe Ms Morgana needs some *special* attention too from the Potions master--he is suppose to take care of both his girls *decadent cackle* Lovely, yummy chapter, as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Poor, dear Grindling--lovely moments and chemistry and trust between these two, only to be breathtakingly blown away with the scene between Morgana and Severus--yes, yes, yes! Could feel Morgana breaking through and liberating herself with Severus *perfect, bloody f------ perfect* Thank you!! xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Now I see what you meant when you told me that Severus would feel pretty guilty... but I have to wonder just how guilty he really felt. Still and all, Morgana is free from the weight of a millstone named Lucius Malfoy, and Severus has promised that Narcissa will not bother her again. Even crazy Bellatrix served a useful purpose. Thanks to her, Grindling has heard Narcissa say the words that set him free... at least I hope he is free from Narcissa's machinations. In the study, Severus told Morgana to ‘Enjoy a Malfoy-free life. Spend time with the ones who love you the most.’ He left before she could ask who he meant, and then I remembered that Grindling had told her that he wished things could have been different. Soooo... could it be that Grindling has a bit of a crush on Morgana, or is he still in love with the memory of Narcissa... or will he return to Charis? They will see each other because they're trying to solve the Prophesy, but what will they think about the things that have happened in the last few hours? Charis will be thinking about "her boss" and her former teacher. Morgana will be thinking about her former teacher. Narcissa will be thinking about wringing her sister's neck, and mourning the loss of perhaps the only opportunity to regain her husband's freedom and their lost stature in the ranks of the purebloods. Severus will be thinking about both Charis and Morgana... I wish I knew what was going through Severus' mind in regard to both of "his girls." I still can't shake the feeling that he really holds romantic thoughts about Charis, but I have to say you ladies really do keep the waters muddied up enough that I can't ever be sure. Maybe Morgana and Grindling will be attracted to each other, and... *sigh*What is going to go on at Malfoy Manor will all those Death Eaters still there? Oh what a tangled web we weave....Great chapter. As always!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Hot dayum! Hot DAYUM! I am so damned happy that Severus and Charis had their "alone time" in the library... and he was so tender and made sure she had the orgasm of her life before he had his.‘The stars,’ he said and pointed at his throat as if to indicate a necklace he was wearing. ‘Renew the charm. Wear them. The both of you.’He still cares for Charis. His kiss on her cheek and urgging her and Morganna to wear their star necklaces proves it beyond all doubt.Thanks, I needed that! *grinning*Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Of all the rooms for Narcissa to choose from... I wonder just what Narcissa knows and what she doesn't know about Morgana and Lucius? Could Narcissa have some other motive we don't yet know about? I don't think so, but I have learned not to underestimate you ladies, either.In the meantime, what are Snape and Charis doing in thier search for the meaning of the prophesy? Sooner or later one of them is bound to say or do something that comfirms for the other that there are still real and deep emotions involved between. I can't wait to see what you have in store for our lovely characters next? Hope to see the next chapter soon!!!Berh
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
I hope she opens up. It would be good for her to get it out. Grindling is a complex character; not quite sure what to make of him yet. I'm glad you're still writing this story, I love following it. 5 stars.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Well, Charis got the info she needed. She just needs to remember her astronomy now.I've known this pair of stories have been out there for some time but avoided reading them because they were not about canon-centric characters. But I took a chance and I've really enjoyed them. I look forward to finding out what happens. Keep up the good work!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for taking a chance on our stories, we're really thrilled you've enjoyed them and we hope you'll stick with the sequel. Thanks again for your support, it means a lot!
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
May I say I never expected you two to answer ALL my reviews since I left a ton of them at one time. But thank you. If I've put you behind on your writing, feel free to blame me.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We try to answer all our reviews. It's so nice to get feedback, and we like to show that we appreciate your thoughts. And no worries, you haven't slowed us down. Next chapter is being beta-read at the moment and we have done plenty of plotting. Lemons ahead ;-)
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
Ah lemon....one of my favorite flavors!
I think Charis is far too forgiving (maybe I just don't like Grindling).TeeHee, Severus is SOOOOO BAD. I love him.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He's a naughty boy! and that's why we love him, right?
Oooh the plot thickens. I think I've figured out most of the prophecy, now to watch as the characters figure it out.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Let's see if you're right :)
I am glad it was cleared up that Morgana is NOT the one Grindling was talking about. She has enough worries. And go her for standing up for her friend.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Yes, Morgana kicked ass :)