XXV: The Draumar’s Secret
Chapter 25 of 37
sevs_starsisters*COMPLETED* The Star Sisters have left Hogwarts and are now facing a new world with new opportunities and new kinds of danger. And also for the Half-Blood Prince, times are changing. (This story is the sequel to Star Sisters.)
Chapter XXV: The Draumar's Secret
'Come here, Lily-sweetie. We have time for a cuddle.'
The little white cat jumped gracefully onto the sofa and settled in Charis' lap obediently. Within moments, the affectionate feline started to purr contentedly, and Charis enjoyed the rhythmic sound of the cat's purring thoroughly. It helped her to relax, and relaxation was exactly what she needed that Monday evening.
It had been a stressful day. There was still so much to do in the Hall of Prophecies, and the seemingly never-ending task was starting to take its toll on the Unspeakables. Many were stressed out, tired and snappy, and they all very much missed the encouraging words and pats on the shoulders the Keeper of the Hall used to give them whenever they needed it. They all missed their boss, and not knowing when he would return to work or even why he was absent made the staff uneasy. And when her colleagues talked about Grindling, Charis could not help but miss him immensely. The combination of Grindling's absence and tetchy colleagues had made an already taxing Monday even worse, and when Charis had left the Ministry that night, she had hoped to crawl up on the sofa with a good book and maybe a glass of wine. But when she had come home, she'd but had the time to kick off her sleet-covered boots when a phoenix Patronus had materialised right in front of her.
At first, Charis had been startled, but upon hearing the Patronus speak in the familiar voice of Albus Dumbledore, she had calmed down and dutifully accepted the order to present herself at Headquarters at eleven thirty that night. That meant no wine, of course, since Charis didn't trust herself to stop after just one glass. Because judging by the bottle, the wine that Grindling had sent her was nothing else but delicious, and Charis had never been one to put away an open bottle.
Once more, Charis eyed the postcard that had arrived together with the wine on Sunday morning. It depicted a wonderful sandy beach, and the white houses that were clinging to the mountains in the background told Charis that Grindling must be in Greece. Most probably, he was visiting his family's summer house.
Charis turned the card around and read the short note for the umpteenth time. Grindling hadn't written much, just that he was doing his best to relax and that he was hoping to be able to return to work soon. And Charis certainly hoped he would. He had been gone for almost three weeks now.
He had never arrived in the Hall of Prophecies on the Tuesday after he had ended their relationship. Instead, he had spoken to his superior about taking some time off. And the old wizard had granted Grindling's wish. After all, the Keeper of the Hall had looked anything but healthy that morning. And so, Grindling Gibbons had disappeared from sight, not informing any of his staff about where he had gone off to. All the Unspeakables had been told was that their boss was taking some time off for "personal reasons".
When Charis had returned from work the next day, her stomach had been in a knot, of course. Surely, Grindling was keeping away from work because of her. He didn't want to see her, that much was clear. And in her desperation, Charis had almost tossed away the Draumar, which he had gifted her with the day before. How could he give her such a beautiful gift and then avoid her twenty-four hours later? It didn't make sense. But before she had been able to act on her impulse, a large brown owl had arrived at her window, carrying a letter from Grindling.
Dearest Charis,
I hope this letter finds you well and that you have gotten over the cold that kept you home yesterday. Hopefully, you had some of your chicken soup left.
I am aware that you expect this letter to contain an explanation and an apology. And by the Gods, you deserve both. But only cowards apologise in letters. The brave ones do it in person. I am not, however, feeling brave at the moment, and I need to gather some strength before kneeling down in front of you and asking you for your forgiveness. And my dearest wish is that you will find it in your heart to absolve me.
I will not be coming to work for a couple of weeks. I haven't taken a holiday since I took on my assignment at the Hall of Prophecies, and I think now is as good a time as any to make use of the weeks I have at my disposal. I feel I have to be by myself for some time to gather my thoughts and figure out where I am heading.
I hope you accept my apologies for not having said goodbye and that you will allow me to write to you.
Yours, devotedly,
Grindling
He had written to her two or three times a week since then, sending colourful postcards from all around Europe and his best wishes, and Charis had always sent back a little thank you note, talking about the grey London weather or what she'd had for lunch. Neither of them spoke any more of their feelings, and Charis thought it was better that way. Whenever they met again, they would both have had the time to think, and hopefully, they would be able to talk properly to each other then.
Shortly after nine o'clock, the flames in Charis' fireplace turned green, and moments later, Morgana stepped out onto the rug, carrying two white carton boxes.
'Silvy sends her love. And dinner!' the trainee Auror announced, ruffling her hair to get the last of the ash off. She was still wearing her red curls shoulder length, and Charis thought it suited her friend very well. As did the dark green robes she was wearing. They were neither tight nor low cut, but still they showed more of Morgana's well-shaped figure than any of her robes had done in months. And Charis could not help but wonder what or who was the reason for Morgana abandoning her black, shapeless robes and her boyish haircut. But she didn't ask. When Morgana was ready, she would certainly tell her.
Charis watched Morgana putting dinner onto two plates. Her friend had been around a couple of times over the last three weeks, and when she had been working late or otherwise engaged, she had sent Silvy over, both to cook dinner and to keep Charis company. And Charis had been immensely grateful. So grateful that she would have loved to hug her friend senseless every time they saw each other. But she knew the gesture wouldn't go down well with the prickly Slytherin.
'I guess you've been summoned as well?' Morgana wondered as she handed Charis her plate filled with rice and Szechuan beef.
'Yes, I had Albus' Patronus come through when I came home from work,' Charis confirmed. 'It sounded pretty serious. I wonder what's happened.'
'Guess it won't be about cake,' Morgana answered drily, scooping up a forkful of the beef. She had been given her order to present herself at Grimmauld Place by Mad-Eye Moody, but he had refused to tell her why she had been called. Instead, he had muttered something about her needing to start following orders without questioning them.
'Would you like some wine with dinner?' Charis asked, furtively glancing towards the bottle she'd been gifted. Certainly, with Morgana around, she could venture opening it. There were only three large glasses in a bottle anyway, and if Morgana had one... Surely, two glasses before the meeting would be acceptable.
'Since when do I drink wine with dinner?' Morgana asked, eyeing up the bottle that Charis had placed on the table and upon that changing her mind. Even she could tell that it wasn't a cheap one. 'Have you robbed Gringotts?' she asked jokingly.
'Ah, no,' Charis replied, at once feeling rather sheepish. 'It's from Grindling.'
'He has sent you wine?' her friend asked, slightly surprised. She knew Grindling had been in touch with Charis and sent her postcards, and she had given him credit for that. But sending expensive wine?
Charis blushed, realising it looked suspicious. A mere friend wouldn't send such an expensive gift, and a boss definitely wouldn't.
Morgana, however, looked pleased at the fact that Grindling was spoiling Charis. It was clear he cared for her friend, even if his heart still belonged to another witch. With some luck, he'd be free soon, she hoped, and Charis would get her Prince Charming.
'Do you miss him?' she asked.
At this, Charis nodded and swallowed, looking down. Morgana was her best friend, but she still didn't feel comfortable sharing her emotions about Grindling with her. Not now, when she herself wasn't sure what exactly she was feeling.
Morgana eyed the bottle again. 'I'd say he misses you, too.'
Charis said nothing to this, instead pulling out the Draumar from under her robes. She'd managed to attach it magically to a silver chain, where it hung around her neck alongside the star she wore habitually at her throat.
'I can't believe he gave me this,' she said after a moment. 'They're very rare. And this one is a family heirloom. It's beautiful, isn't it?'
Morgana studied the little object. She'd held it in her hand when Grindling had given it to her, but her thoughts had been anywhere but on the Draumar that day, and thus, she didn't remember much more about it than that it was engraved with stars and moons. It was a pretty little item, and even though it might not originally have been meant to be worn as a necklace, its flat form and the small size made the perfect jewellery out of it. In fact, it looked a bit as if Charis were wearing an ornamental Galleon.
'Figured out how it works yet?' Morgana asked.
'No,' Charis admitted, and the frustration was evident in her voice. 'I've tried prising it and using spells, but nothing seems to work. And before you say it, I'm not asking Grindling! My Ravenclaw pride is at stake.'
Charis looked indignant at the very thought, and Morgana couldn't help but snort.
'I guess I'll figure it out,' Charis continued. 'Otherwise, I might need to have a chat with Professor Trelawney.'
'You can't be that desperate!' Morgana exclaimed. She'd always done her very best to avoid the Hogwarts Divination teacher. The woman had given her the creeps. Surely, no one would want to talk to that hag voluntarily!
Charis merely smiled in response.
'I think you should ask Grindling... once he's back,' Morgana said and looked questioningly at her friend. 'Have you thought about how that will be?' she asked carefully. 'When he gets back, I mean?'
Charis gave a deep sigh. 'It's all I've been thinking about. I know he didn't mean to hurt me. And him being away has given us both time to think.'
'But?' Morgana prompted.
'I think we'll have to take things day by day.'
'Hm, guess so.' Morgana paused, playing with a bit of beef. 'Will you give him a second chance?' she asked hopefully. 'If he manages to rid himself of, you know, the other one?'
'I don't know, Morgana,' Charis replied earnestly. 'If she's held on to his heart for twenty years, I don't know if he can ever be free of her.'
'But if?' Morgana pushed. She really wanted this to work out for her friend and for Grindling. There weren't many decent men around these days, but from what she'd seen, Grindling was one of the best. Charis deserved a man like Grindling, one who would treat her like a princess and worship the ground she walked on.
'Time will tell,' Charis said. 'I can't risk being hurt again.'
'No, you can't,' Morgana agreed, looking at the postcards which Charis had placed neatly on the counter. She knew how it was to be hurt, and she certainly intended to do anything it took to never be hurt again.
'You can't deny that he's sweet, though.'
Charis smiled once more. 'Yes, he is a darling.'
'Maybe he can be a dear friend to you, if nothing else?' Morgana suggested.
'I'd hope so,' Charis admitted, taking one last scoop of rice. She'd given it a lot of thought, but so far, she had not figured out what would be worse: to have Grindling as a friend, knowing that there would never be anything more, or to not have him in her life at all.
* * *
Number twelve, Grimmauld Place looked slightly eerie at the best of times, but at night, it looked positively creepy. Charis had never been at the headquarters at such a late hour and kept her wand in a tight grip, prepared to hex anyone or anything that should pounce at them from the shadows. And Morgana wouldn't have been surprised to suddenly hear Snape's drawling voice and once more be chided like a little child. Thus, neither of the girls spoke as they crept down the dimly lit hallway to the door that reached the lounge.
'Trust Dumbledore to summon us in the middle of the night and not be here. Some of us actually have to get up early.'
Alastor Moody's unmistakable grumbling could clearly be heard through the door, and while Charis still found the man a bit intimidating, Morgana had grown used to his grumpiness and actually grinned.
'Guess I shouldn't suggest that he give us the morning off tomorrow,' she whispered. 'He'd have my head for it.'
The two friends entered the lounge to find Moody pacing the room impatiently with Tonks sitting on the sofa and looking miserable; Remus Lupin was sitting to her left, and the man to her right was most certainly a Weasley, judging by his ginger hair.
Tonks' face brightened slightly when she saw the girls. 'Wotcher!'
Morgana nodded a greeting and slunk off into the shadows of the room whilst Charis was a bit more social and said hello to the room at large, which was met by nothing more than a non-committal grunt from Moody. Lupin, however, beamed and the ginger-haired man introduced himself.
'Arthur Weasley. I don't believe we've had the pleasure?' He smiled kindly. 'Molly sends her apologies. One of our chickens has escaped, and she's been tearing around The Burrow for hours on the hunt for it. She sent a cake, though.'
Lupin, of course, looked happy at the prospect of cake. Moody, however, did not.
'How many of you are only here for the cake, I wonder,' he asked sourly, glaring at Lupin, who jokingly raised his hand.
Tonks giggled, earning herself a reproachful glare from the magical eye. It was clear that Moody wasn't at all pleased with the young Auror that night.
The sound of the front door closing made everyone look up, and only a few moments later,
Dumbledore entered the room. He looked tired but still managed to smile at the assembled group.
'Welcome, everyone. Thank you for coming at such a late hour. I will be quick so you can all go to bed soon.'
He looked around before continuing, and his blue eyes rested on Moody for a moment. It almost seemed as if he had heard Mad-Eye's comment about him letting everyone wait.
'Severus will arrive shortly, but seeing that he is already informed of what has happened, I don't think he will mind if I start.'
He paused to push his half-moon spectacles up the bridge of his Roman nose.
'I summoned you tonight to inform you that there has been an attack on a Hogwarts student.'
Everyone gasped in horror, except Moody, who looked impassive, and Tonks, who made a whimpering noise.
'Nymphodora, this was not your fault,' Dumbledore went on, looking straight at the young Auror. 'Even though you were patrolling Hogsmeade last weekend, there was nothing you could have done.'
Tonks didn't seem to be reassured by this, and Lupin laid a comforting arm around her shoulder as Dumbledore continued.
'One of our students was given a package at the Three Broomsticks, a package which was to be delivered to me. It contained a rather beautiful necklace. Beautiful, but cursed. The pupil in question unfortunately opened the parcel and is now in St. Mungo's as a result. She's lucky to be alive.'
The assembled Order members gave each other shocked looks. An assassination attempt on the Headmaster of Hogwarts was unheard of, and that a student had come to harm was a downright tragedy.
Arthur Weasley was the first to speak.
'Do you have any suspicion who might have done this?'
'There are suspicions, yes,' the headmaster confirmed. 'However, they don't come from me.'
'And the student?' Lupin asked. 'Is she alright?'
'I am afraid Miss Bell will have to stay at St. Mungo's for quite some time,' Dumbledore replied gravely.
'Bell? Katie Bell? The Gryffindor chaser?' Charis asked fearfully.
Dumbledore nodded in the affirmative, and Charis gazed at the floor in shock. She and Katie had not socialized too much at Hogwarts, but the girl had always seemed very nice.
'What can we do about it, Albus?' Moody asked gruffly. 'Who's the culprit here?'
'As I have said, Alastor, there is at least one suspect whom I am already keeping an eye on,' the old wizard replied calmly. 'However, I will need to ask for the assistance of the Order to tighten security around the castle. I fear the Ministry will not be interested in helping.'
Once more, the creaking of the front door made everyone turn their head, and it was to no one's surprise that Snape entered the lounge shortly afterwards with a scowl so black that it matched his robes, which were as impeccable as ever.
'Fashionably late, as usual,' Moody muttered darkly.
'Some of us are actually concerned with matters of life and death, Moody, not just standing around, waiting for cake to be served,' Snape sneered in response, folding his arms across his chest in a manner which could only be described as hostile.
'Severus, thank you for being here,' Dumbledore cut in smoothly in order to avoid further confrontation. Snape and Moody had never liked each other, for several reasons, but since their fall-out during dinner in October, Dumbledore found it wise to not let the two get too agitated.
'I have just explained about the incident with Miss Bell,' he informed his Defence teacher.
'The jewellery was cursed with very dark magic,' Snape confirmed. 'Whoever wanted you to have it, certainly wanted to see you dead.'
Arthur shook his head in disbelief. 'And there are still those who refuse to believe that You-Know-Who is back!'
'Are you implying that a Death Eater managed to smuggle a cursed necklace into Hogsmeade? Right under my Aurors' noses?' Moody enquired.
'I'm afraid so, Alastor,' Dumbledore replied. 'Quite how they did it is anyone's guess.'
'We'll be undertaking a full investigation in Hogsmeade, of course,' the craggy Auror said gruffly.
Dumbledore nodded.
'I saw Katie at the Three Broomsticks,' Tonks admitted. 'I saw her leave. But I didn't see her talk to anyone.'
'Rosmerta knows everybody's business. We'll be speaking to her first thing,' Moody confirmed.
Whilst Moody started to devise a plan with Dumbledore about how to instigate the investigation, Charis began to play idly with the Draumar. Moody was speaking about what the Aurors would do, and while Morgana and Tonks listened carefully and Lupin and Arthur chipped in with ideas, Charis felt a bit left out, knowing very little of Auror business. She would have liked to at least stand with the others and maybe come up with a good idea or two herself, but she didn't dare move. She could feel the weight of Snape's black eyes on her, and they kept her petrified.
And indeed, the dark wizard was observing her intently as she fiddled with her necklace. He knew very well that the only jewellery she normally wore was the star necklace, the twin of the one Morgana owned. But now Charis was wearing a second one, which appeared to be a locket of some sort. It was silver and didn't look like something cheap bought at Tarnish & Sully. And the way Charis looked at it suggested that she was quite fond of the piece. Surely, it must have been a gift.
Snape's glare grew darker. That kind of trinket looked exactly like something a wizard like Grindling Gibbons would use to charm a witch.
Snape just considered making a snide remark when he saw Charis flinch and her eyes widen in surprise. And indeed, the blonde Ravenclaw did feel slightly puzzled. She had been stroking one of the star shapes carved on the Draumar, quite absent-mindedly, when she'd felt the object getting warmer in her hand. As she looked down, she noticed the star was glowing faintly. Then, after a few moments, there was a little click, and the Draumar sprung open, releasing a wisp of ethereal, smoky substance that formed the shape of... Grindling Gibbons!
Charis gazed in awe at the apparition. It certainly looked like Grindling, but his voice sounded strange and other-worldly as he began to speak. It boomed around the lounge, making everyone fall silent and take notice.
'The glowing Lion born into the House of Snakes
Has repented for the error of his ways.
The creature that knows his secrets
Still lives in shadows,
And only the Raven
That was hatched on the lowest branch of the ancient tree
Possesses the means to ask the questions
That will bring the answers to conquer the Dark.'
Everyone stared, mesmerised as the wispy smoke was sucked back into the Draumar and the item clicked shut again. And Charis looked at the silver object in her hand like it might explode at any second.
'That is a very unusual object, Charis. May I ask where you got it?' Dumbledore asked, not unkindly, breaking the rather awkward silence that had descended.
Charis looked up. She had almost forgotten that there were other people in the room. And she had certainly not been prepared for everyone looking at her. She blushed.
'Grindling...,' she started. 'He's my boss in the Hall of Prophecies. He gave it to me. He was the one who appeared. But he never told me he'd made a prophecy.'
Dumbledore nodded carefully.
'Arthur, would you mind taking everyone to the kitchen and letting them taste Molly's cake? I'd like to have a private word with Charis.'
'It's lemon drizzle cake,' Arthur told the room at large, a bit louder than he normally would, in order to get everyone's attention away from Charis. Certainly, the girl didn't need everyone staring at her. 'Remus, would you be so kind as to pop the kettle on?'
He led the way to the kitchen, closely followed by Lupin, Tonks and Moody. The two Slytherins, however, exited the lounge more slowly, Snape giving Charis a suspicious look, Morgana looking worried for her friend. She also felt slightly guilty. After all, it had been she who had agreed to deliver that Draumar.
Once the door had closed and she and Dumbledore were alone in the room, Charis started apologising for having disturbed the meeting.
'I'm so sorry, Albus. I didn't know how to work it; I was just fiddling with it. I didn't mean to interrupt the meeting.'
'Don't worry yourself, child,' the old wizard said kindly, looking at the little silver object in Charis' hand. 'It is a Draumar, is it not?'
Charis nodded.
'May I have a look at it?'
Charis handed it over, unsure of what might happen next. Would it open again? And if so, would they hear the same prophecy once more? But as Dumbledore stroked the Draumar with his thumb, nothing happened.
'Curious object, Draumars,' he said slowly. 'In many ways, they resemble the spheres you work with at the Hall of Prophecy. Those can only be retrieved by the ones who made the prophecies and by those whom they are about. And Draumars... they only reveal their secrets to the person who made the prophecy and those the prophecy involves.'
He looked at Charis over the rim of his glasses meaningfully, and she, in turn, looked bewildered.
'Grindling made the prophecy... about me?'
'Not necessarily about you, dear Charis. But yes, I think the prophecy has something to do with you.' He handed back the Draumar. 'Would you mind opening it once more?'
With shaking hands, Charis fiddled with the silver object until she found the star she'd been rubbing before. Again, it glowed and the Draumar sprang open, and once again, the booming prophecy filled the room.
'Does any of it make sense to you?' Dumbledore asked after they'd heard the prophecy for the second time.
'House of Snakes... must be Slytherin?' Charis reasoned, her analytical Ravenclaw brain kicking into action at once.
Dumbledore nodded, impressed.
'And the Lion... is that a Gryffindor? A Gryffindor who was sorted into Slytherin?'
To that, Dumbledore smiled.
'How many Gryffindors do we know that have been sorted into Slytherin?'
Charis could not help but giggle at this. 'None!'
'"Born into the House of Snakes...",' Dumbledore recited the prophecy. 'Could it be the other way around?'
'You mean, a Slytherin who became a Gryffindor?' Charis asked, looking puzzled.
'Precisely!' the old wizard replied, his blue eyes twinkling characteristically. He already seemed to know more than he let on but seemed not yet prepared to tell.
'Charis, I understand that this is a very private matter, and you are entitled to say no, but I'd like to consult our very own Slytherins on this.'
Charis agreed, but as Dumbledore went to the kitchen to fetch Morgana and Snape, she almost wished she hadn't. She didn't mind having Morgana by her side, but Snape... He had been staring at her ever since he'd arrived, and the look he'd given her when leaving the room had not exactly been a kind one. She was, therefore, more than grateful when Morgana sat down right beside her and Dumbledore handed her a cup of tea to which she could hold on to. She didn't dare look at Snape, who'd remained standing by the fireplace, his arms once more crossed.
'As you have already overheard the prophecy, I'll ask you straight out. "A lion born into the house of snakes..." Does that mean anything to either of you?' he asked the two Slytherins in front of him.
Morgana looked at Snape, shrugging. Snape, however, seemed more than a little irritated by the question.
'Are you questioning the Sorting Hat's competency?' he hissed. 'There are no Gryffindors in my house,' he answered flatly.
'Is there anyone in Gryffindor who was expected to be in Slytherin, then?' Albus asked pointedly, and the look on Snape's face went from dark to murderous.
'Sirius Black,' he breathed slowly, acid pouring from every single syllable.
Dumbledore nodded.
'The Blacks have always been in Slytherin...,' he agreed.
'But Sirius was absolved. He was innocent.' Morgana pointed out.
'The prophecy said he "Has repented for the error of his ways",' she clarified as the others, slightly puzzled, looked at her. 'Sirius never was a follower of the Da... of You-Know-Who. So, that part can't refer to him. Unless he did something bad that we don't know about, of course.'
Like bullying me every day for seven years? Snape thought to himself bitterly, fighting hard not to huff. Then again, to the day of his death, Black had seen nothing wrong with this. He certainly never repented for it. So, maybe Morgana was right.
Dumbledore stroked his beard thoughtfully.
'Hm, well, the prophecy also mentions an ancient tree... and the Blacks are one of the most ancient families in the Wizarding world. "The raven that was hatched on the lowest branch..." Now who could that be, Charis?'
Once more, Dumbledore had asked a question to which he already knew the answer, and Charis looked up at him, wide eyed.
'M-me?'
'I think so, Charis,' Dumbledore replied. 'You are Muggle-born and yet a Black. Had your name ever been on the tapestry in the drawing room, it would certainly have been blasted off.'
'But there's still the part about the creature,' Charis blurted out, so overwhelmed by the fact that she'd been mentioned in Grindling's prophecy that she wasn't thinking straight. 'And if the prophecy is not about Sirius, then it could be about anyone! The Blacks go back centuries!'
'I think, I'd like to consult an expert on prophecies,' Dumbledore said slowly.
'Not Trelawney, I hope,' said Snape cuttingly.
Morgana snorted at this, and Dumbledore's mouth twitched.
'No, I think we need someone with more specific expertise than our Professors Trelawney and Firenze.'
He stroked his beard for a moment and then turned towards Charis once more.
'Tell me, Charis, where do you think I might get hold of Grindling Gibbons at this late hour?'
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Great start. Albums would really sacrifice anyone to win the war. I hope both of a star sisters find their happy ending and the war doesn't destroy their souls.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Now you reminded us of that we should wirte a Part 3. :)
well, what can I say? This was a blast from beginning to end. Loved your new characters and how the Malfoys once again play a big part in Morganna's love life. Severus what a naughty man coming up with the three mirrors and him being a bit of a peeping Tom lol. Least he kept his word and did ensure the star sisters safety and nice to see him hinting at them to both wear their star necklaces once more.
The scene where the girls on Christmas Eve made that special spell and vow was beautifully written. Also the Scenes on new years eve and after were tenderly done and not in a harsh way but in a loving one. Even Snapes watching was done with a special feel and not pervy at all. Shall look forward to read more in this series and see if Snape can loose his dark thoughts and become a man who can accept love in the end and be rid of the Lily Ghost.
Thanks for writing and creating this lovely series. Really enjoyed reading it and sorry I did not get time to review every chapter. Consider this worth a hundred reviews.
Congrats.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
The relationship between Charis and Morgana has become a beautiful thing, and I'm very happy for them and glad that Severus will continue to watch over his girls. One day I hope his heart will be healed and that he will remember how to love. And allow himself to be loved.I'm sad this story has come to an end (for now), but I'm so happy to know that you aren't done with these characters—I've grown quite fond of them. For now we will let them sleep. I want to let you know how much I've enjoyed Star Sisters and now Shooting Stars. You are very gifted writers, and I thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. I wish you both good days and much happiness. May real life calm down for you, and allow you the opportunity to once again weave this magic you do so well.I give you my thanks with much gratitude and lots of hugs,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Mmmm... I think I'd like a cup of tea and a biscuit after reading this chapter! Or perhaps a cigarette? Smoking hot writing, ladies. Thank you from the bottom of my... err... heart!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Gorgeous chapter, and I appreciated Snape leaving them be and also not taking himself in hand. As he realises the feeling blossoming in his chest, my heart ached for him a little bit. Then followed "A love he had no part of, a love he would never be able to share with anyone" which summed it all up and put a lump in my throat. Ah, Snape. Forever the tragic anti-hero. Lovely writing.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
I enjoyed your creation of Dumbledore's vow and its execution - gentle and manipulative - much like the man himself. I love that Dumbledore also set up their New Year's celebration with Snape, even though, so far at least, Snape hasn't got in on the action! The tenderness between Morgana and Charis is lovely. Reading on...
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
"The way Ravenclaws seemed to be fascinated by the stars was simply adorable" bahaha! Pity that I didn't realise the significance of the constellation Leo; I've let down team Ravenclaw! At least I'd managed to suss out the connection to Slytherin's locket via the house-elf, thus tracing it back to Black. This is a lovely chapter brimming with charm and intimacy between the Star Sisters, and their spell-casting was beautiful and poignant. I also enjoyed Morgana's metaphor for moving on at the end of the chapter. I must say, though, that you've plotted your story meticulously and have been wonderfully crafty with the prophecy; not just with its puzzle, but also making your story fit seamlessly into canon... After all, we were never told how Dumbledore came to discover the locket. I take my hat off to you, ladies!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Now it's time to turn fantasy into reality for Severus and his girls--can the teasing giggling be leading up to them beckoning him over to their side *hopeful look*--great menage-a-trois dynamics; I really like Morgana's sexuality being released and expressed, reinforcing her healing from the past and embracing the present and future; Charis' divine sub positions--yum! and as I said last chapter, Severus is one lucky wizard... *sighing* Lovely, dynamic, lemony chapter as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
As I began reading this chapter I was so surprised that I had to go back and read the end of the previous chapter to be sure I understood what had happened... which, of course, I didn't, but I didn't know that until Severus woke up that I realized it was his dream. You two ladies are masters of the twisty plot. Well done!
Dreaming as he had been, I was glad he allowed himself to carry his dream to fruition in the shower. Perhaps this "Sweet Release" will help him get through the coming storm. Soon he will have to kill Dumbledore and then endure his tenure as Headmaster until the entire house of cards comes falling down.
I was very happy for him when heard Charis and Morgana talking and giggling in their activated mirrors. It would be very sweet if his dream became a reality after all is said and done. But I'm not kidding myself one tiny bit that I can predict just what you two have in mind for these three dear people. The only thing I'm sure of right now is that I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update.
Thank you for a very nice chapter!!!
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
It's a relief for Morgana and Charis that they have finally and truly shared their love for each other. And not only a relief for the two of them, but for Severus as well, I think. He has such strong feelings for both of them, and I think knowing that they have declared their love and cemented their relationship has given him peace of mind that they will be all right no matter what happens.
He loved those two girls dearly in his own special way. They would never know, of course, but he hoped that every now and then, they would remember him with fondness.
This chapter has really touched my heart. I don't know what will happen to Severus, and it makes me sad to think of him being alone. I hope he can find something or someone to "hang onto" as future events unfold. Be kind to him, ladies. Be kind.Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Mmmn... beautiful! Love their love-making, giving and sharing to each other the way each one needs, and Severus witnessing it--some wizards have all the luck! What a lovely way to bring in the New Year!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
I love this story even more than the last one.
I have no idea how the two of you do it but I am grateful that you do.
Sorry for not leaving reviews before now, but it is often difficult to find words for my appreciation! Rest assured that I always eagerly await the next instalment.
Such a beautiful and unusual story... the pair of you need to create a universe of your own! I'm sure we could expect great things from such imaginations! Perhaps just as great as the universe that brought your two formidable minds together!
Thank you.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
‘When the rope dissolves and we let go of each other, neither of you will be able to convey what you have learnt here today,’ Dumbledore explained. ‘You will have a faint memory of our conversation with Kreacher, but trying to remember the details will be like trying to remember a dream. The harder you try, the further will it drift away. And unless we three stand here once more, with our hands entwined, you will never be able to remember.’Damn. I wish the girls had not had to agree to take that vow. But if they hadn't, then he would have Obliviated them. I hope they really will be safer not remembering the prophecy.I can't help but wish Severus didn't have to spend New Year's Eve with only a bottle of Ogden's to keep him company while he watches his girls coming to understand the depth of their feelings for each other. With Severus already upstairs and the girls on their way up the stairs, I wonder if they'll run into each other? I'm off to the next chapter to find out. :^)Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
With Grindling moving to Greece for good, I guess there's no way he will be a regular part of either of the girls' lives. Sometimes I think it's better just to move on and cut your losses, but I know Charis and Morgana will be sad when they realize he has left his position at the Ministry and packed up lock, stock, and barrel.
That was a lovely spell that Charis created to permanently join the girls' star necklaces together. It was pretty cool the way Morgana's star glowed Ravenclaw blue and Charis' glowed Slytherin green. I was tickled when Charis solved the riddle of the prophecy- all that time studying Astronomy really paid off! Now Dumbledore wants them to wait a week. Perhaps he does want to do some research of his own.
I'm glad Morgana has a new Patronus- a majestic black feline is much better than her old Peacock. It's very telling that they have such similar Patronuses, isn't it? It seems like their world is settling into something solid and stable, but with Grindling out of the picture (for now, anyway) I'm wondering what Severus will do? Poor man is damned if he does and damned if he doesn't. Speaking of Severus... what is he doing right now?
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
It seems that it has taken tonight's events and their outcomes to bring Severus to the point where he can relax enough to realize that Charis and Morgana love each other. But I'm not sure if they can be happy with only each other. Grindling loves Charis, and I think he has very strong feelings for Morgana as well. Charis loves Severus, and Morgana feels very safe with him. Severus loves Charis and Morgana. And I have absolutely no idea how this is going to work out. There are a number of permutations that come to mind, and one of them is that Severus, Charis, and Morgana become a threesome family. Or Grindling could make for a foursome family. Or Grindling could find himself with Narcissa when all hell breaks loose and Lucius ends up dead or in prison for the rest of his life. Or if Severus dies, then Grindling, Charis and Morgana could make a life together.This emotional awakening Severus has undergone, leaves me feeling very afraid for him. I fear he will go willingly to meet death so long as he thinks "his girls" are safe and happy. Is he falling into well of dark resignation?Thank you for this thought provoking chapter, ladies. I still don't have any idea how this will all turn out, and now I have an even longer list of possible outcomes. You are masters of mystery!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
The place where Ravenclaws always took comfort and solitude: the library.' This had e tearing up! And the delicious lemony, Snapey goodness-sene has me saying, Merlin's balls, sevs_starsisters, yes, yes, yes! and more, more, more! *taking a deep satisfied sigh* Thank you! (and Miss Charis needs to heed Sev's advice for her and Morgana--speaking of which, can't wait for Sev's jetsetting over to Malfoy manor, maybe Ms Morgana needs some *special* attention too from the Potions master--he is suppose to take care of both his girls *decadent cackle* Lovely, yummy chapter, as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Poor, dear Grindling--lovely moments and chemistry and trust between these two, only to be breathtakingly blown away with the scene between Morgana and Severus--yes, yes, yes! Could feel Morgana breaking through and liberating herself with Severus *perfect, bloody f------ perfect* Thank you!! xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Now I see what you meant when you told me that Severus would feel pretty guilty... but I have to wonder just how guilty he really felt. Still and all, Morgana is free from the weight of a millstone named Lucius Malfoy, and Severus has promised that Narcissa will not bother her again. Even crazy Bellatrix served a useful purpose. Thanks to her, Grindling has heard Narcissa say the words that set him free... at least I hope he is free from Narcissa's machinations. In the study, Severus told Morgana to ‘Enjoy a Malfoy-free life. Spend time with the ones who love you the most.’ He left before she could ask who he meant, and then I remembered that Grindling had told her that he wished things could have been different. Soooo... could it be that Grindling has a bit of a crush on Morgana, or is he still in love with the memory of Narcissa... or will he return to Charis? They will see each other because they're trying to solve the Prophesy, but what will they think about the things that have happened in the last few hours? Charis will be thinking about "her boss" and her former teacher. Morgana will be thinking about her former teacher. Narcissa will be thinking about wringing her sister's neck, and mourning the loss of perhaps the only opportunity to regain her husband's freedom and their lost stature in the ranks of the purebloods. Severus will be thinking about both Charis and Morgana... I wish I knew what was going through Severus' mind in regard to both of "his girls." I still can't shake the feeling that he really holds romantic thoughts about Charis, but I have to say you ladies really do keep the waters muddied up enough that I can't ever be sure. Maybe Morgana and Grindling will be attracted to each other, and... *sigh*What is going to go on at Malfoy Manor will all those Death Eaters still there? Oh what a tangled web we weave....Great chapter. As always!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Hot dayum! Hot DAYUM! I am so damned happy that Severus and Charis had their "alone time" in the library... and he was so tender and made sure she had the orgasm of her life before he had his.‘The stars,’ he said and pointed at his throat as if to indicate a necklace he was wearing. ‘Renew the charm. Wear them. The both of you.’He still cares for Charis. His kiss on her cheek and urgging her and Morganna to wear their star necklaces proves it beyond all doubt.Thanks, I needed that! *grinning*Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Of all the rooms for Narcissa to choose from... I wonder just what Narcissa knows and what she doesn't know about Morgana and Lucius? Could Narcissa have some other motive we don't yet know about? I don't think so, but I have learned not to underestimate you ladies, either.In the meantime, what are Snape and Charis doing in thier search for the meaning of the prophesy? Sooner or later one of them is bound to say or do something that comfirms for the other that there are still real and deep emotions involved between. I can't wait to see what you have in store for our lovely characters next? Hope to see the next chapter soon!!!Berh
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
I hope she opens up. It would be good for her to get it out. Grindling is a complex character; not quite sure what to make of him yet. I'm glad you're still writing this story, I love following it. 5 stars.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Well, Charis got the info she needed. She just needs to remember her astronomy now.I've known this pair of stories have been out there for some time but avoided reading them because they were not about canon-centric characters. But I took a chance and I've really enjoyed them. I look forward to finding out what happens. Keep up the good work!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for taking a chance on our stories, we're really thrilled you've enjoyed them and we hope you'll stick with the sequel. Thanks again for your support, it means a lot!
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
May I say I never expected you two to answer ALL my reviews since I left a ton of them at one time. But thank you. If I've put you behind on your writing, feel free to blame me.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We try to answer all our reviews. It's so nice to get feedback, and we like to show that we appreciate your thoughts. And no worries, you haven't slowed us down. Next chapter is being beta-read at the moment and we have done plenty of plotting. Lemons ahead ;-)
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
Ah lemon....one of my favorite flavors!
I think Charis is far too forgiving (maybe I just don't like Grindling).TeeHee, Severus is SOOOOO BAD. I love him.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He's a naughty boy! and that's why we love him, right?
Oooh the plot thickens. I think I've figured out most of the prophecy, now to watch as the characters figure it out.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Let's see if you're right :)
I am glad it was cleared up that Morgana is NOT the one Grindling was talking about. She has enough worries. And go her for standing up for her friend.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Yes, Morgana kicked ass :)