XVIII: Tea and Wine
Chapter 18 of 37
sevs_starsisters*COMPLETED* The Star Sisters have left Hogwarts and are now facing a new world with new opportunities and new kinds of danger. And also for the Half-Blood Prince, times are changing. (This story is the sequel to Star Sisters.)
A/N: Dedicated to The Mugglechief, a dear friend who is sorely missed. We know he'd love the wine in this chapter.
Chapter XVIII: Tea and Wine
The first of September arrived in a flurry of activity as Narcissa Malfoy helped her son Draco to prepare for his return to Hogwarts. As he had refused to be fitted by Madam Malkin and then thrown quite a tantrum on their way to Twilfitt and Tattings, they had returned from Diagon Alley without new robes, and Narcissa had been forced to arrange for a private tailor to visit the manor; a task which had turned out to be more difficult than she had expected. Whereas she only had needed to clap her hands a few months ago to get all she wanted, she now almost had to beg people to be of service to her. Simply saying 'Lady Malfoy wishes' didn't do the trick anymore, and instead she had to ask people if they would be so kind as to assist her. It was a humiliating experience, to say the least, but Narcissa suffered through it. For her son, she would do just about anything. He was all she had left. And now he was back at Hogwarts, the manor seemed so empty, and Narcissa felt as if she was rattling around the old place like an aged spinster without either of the two Malfoy males around to keep her company.
On the Wednesday after Draco's departure, she didn't even get up in the morning. She simply couldn't muster the strength to face the empty house yet again. She had no one to talk to, no one to look at. She felt as if she were going mad. The night before, she had imagined hearing the clicking of Lucius' boots against the polished oak floors and the swishing of his robes when she had wandered through the empty rooms. And she had imagined his touch when she had finally drifted off to sleep. She had even dreamt of him, and when she had awoken in the morning, she had felt so lonely and desolate that she had been unable to make herself leave their matrimonial bed. She would lie there until he returned to her, she thought, and pulled the fine silk sheets over her head. But in the late afternoon, when she had no more tears left to cry, Narcissa decided that waiting and hoping wouldn't do. She would have to take matters into her own hands. If she did as Severus had advised her, maybe the Dark Lord would be merciful. And so she sent off an owl to a tiny room at the corner of Diagon Alley and Knockturn Alley.
Three days later, Narcissa was waiting impatiently. There were still ten minutes left to the appointed time, but she couldn't deny that she was looking forward to company after a week alone, even if her primary reason for inviting Morgana Belakane for tea had a much more manipulative motive. It would be delightful to have someone to talk to.
Narcissa had made sure the elves had set the drawing room just so: an intimate table and chairs were laid out, the table adorned with little plates and bone china, awaiting her guest's arrival. There was also an empty cake stand, ready to be filled with petit fours and cakes at the snap of a finger. She had asked the elves what the girl had preferred to eat when she had visited the manor last summer, but had been informed that Master Lucius had only allowed one elf to take care of the girl, and that elf wasn't at the manor anymore. Where the elf had gone and what had happened to the creature, Narcissa did not know. Frankly, she had not even noticed its absence. And at the moment, she was too annoyed by the fact that she was unable to present the girl with her favourite dishes to care about the elf's whereabouts. It had probably died, broken its neck after having tripped over Lucius' cane.
Now, Narcissa was sitting in the drawing room, looking as immaculate and ladylike as ever, waiting for the knock at the door that would announce Morgana's arrival. Five minutes left. She wondered if the girl would be on time.
Frowning slightly, Narcissa tried to remember as many details as possible about the girl. Somewhat of a tomboy, Severus had said. And yes, Narcissa did remember that Morgana had worn her hair awfully short, no nail varnish and barely any make-up. But she also remembered fine features, inquisitive blue eyes and a posture that spoke of pride and self-confidence. She could work with that, for sure. She had given it a good try during a few days the last summer. But Lucius had insisted on teaching the girl about bloodlines and the teachings of the Dark Lord. Beautification charms, dresses and high heels could wait until later, he had said. And Narcissa, the obedient wife, had stepped back and let her husband do what he deemed best.
Once more, her eyes flitted towards the clock on the mantel piece. Three minutes left. Well, as a member of one of the oldest pure-blood families in Britain, the girl could afford to be fashionably late. But then again, it was good manners to be punctual.
And Morgana was more than punctual. She had been standing on the doorstep of the main entrance for a few minutes now and had reached out her hand to knock several times. But she couldn't. And her inability to perform that simple task annoyed her no end.
It had seemed so easy to come to the manor, and Dumbledore's instructions had been so clear: Befriend Narcissa. She needs the company. It won't be difficult to gain her trust. But once Morgana had made her way through the Malfoy garden, her stomach had clenched and her hands had become sweaty. She had not imagined returning to the manor would be so difficult. She had not expected to be so nervous, so afraid. And she had very much hoped not to encounter any ghosts. But she had been wrong on all three points.
Finally, after what felt like an eternity, she brought herself to knock, and after only a few moments, an elf that Morgana hadn't seen before opened the door with a deep bow.
'If Miss Belakane would follow Dinky to the drawing room, Mistress Narcissa is waiting for her there.'
Morgana stepped inside, steeling herself. I can do this, she told herself firmly, following the elf through the magnificent hallway. But she wished that Narcissa had chosen another room to serve tea. Far too often had Lucius welcomed her in this particular room. Far too often had they made love on the sofa. No, not made love, Morgana corrected herself, scowling. We had sex. That was all. Period.
Narcissa stood up, expectantly, as the elf opened the door and announced Morgana's arrival, and Morgana entered the room, trying to look confident. She hadn't seen Narcissa since the previous summer when she had stayed for a few weeks at the manor. It was then that Lucius had seduced her. It was then that she had still believed that she could handle the situation. How wrong she had been.
She swallowed as Narcissa greeted her with a warm smile.
'Morgana, I am so pleased you decided to come!'
She clasped the younger witch's hand in her own, and Morgana had to resist the urge to curtsey as she felt Narcissa's delicate handshake.
'Madam Malfoy,' Morgana responded awkwardly.
'Call me Cissy, please!' Narcissa insisted, picking up on the girl's discomfort. She had to make sure the girl felt at home and had to gain her trust. 'Come, take a seat. We've plenty to catch up on.'
She smiled again, and Morgana tried to smile back, but it came out as just a little twitch of her lips. Oh, if Cissy knew just how much catching up they had to do. If Cissy knew what had happened on the sofa on which they were now sitting opposite.
Narcissa politely offered tea, and Morgana accepted, but declined the sugar. Her boss had said she needed to watch her weight, she claimed, and Narcissa wrinkled her pretty little nose. Surely, the girl wasn't carrying a single ounce of excess fat. Not that it would show under those dreadful robes. Narcissa resisted the urge to tut. This girl needed to be properly attired if she were to be presented to the high society of wizardkind. Those black, shapeless robes wouldn't do. And neither would that boyish hairstyle of hers.
'I hope your boss does not object to petit fours,' she said, pouring the tea by hand and nodding towards the still empty cake stand. 'One of my elves is an excellent baker.'
'The Malfoy elves have a good reputation. I assume your husband took in only the best,' Morgana replied in what she meant to be a compliment.
However, at the mention of her husband, Narcissa's smile tightened a little, and Morgana saw some sadness in her eyes fleetingly. And she, too, regretted her words. She had sworn to herself not to mention Lucius. Now she had failed within the first five minutes of her visit.
But then Narcissa clicked her fingers determinedly, ripping them both out of their thoughts, and the cake rack filled up with delicious-looking cakes and slices.
'Help yourself, please,' she instructed, after choosing a delicious-looking cream slice.
Morgana chose a cute little green cupcake, and once more she was unable to keep her mind from wandering. In this very room, Lucius had served Tiffin on another fateful Saturday afternoon a little less than a year ago, and it had affected some people more than others. And with a jolt, Morgana realised that Bellatrix Lestrange was Narcissa's sister and wondered if Narcissa knew nothing of that affair either.
'I can hardly believe it's been over a year since I last saw you!' Narcissa exclaimed, taking the tiniest nibble of her cream slice.
'Time flies,' Morgana admitted. 'And I've been busy, what with exams and everything.'
And having an affair with your husband, she added silently in her mind, guilt creeping into the pit of her stomach. Not once over the last year had she thought of Cissy and how she would feel if she found out that her husband was having an affair, and not just with anyone, but the girl who she had bought dresses for last summer, the girl she had taught etiquette and how to walk in high heels.
'To think that you're now of age and have left Hogwarts...' Narcissa shook her head, as if in disbelief. 'Professor Snape told me you left with good grades.'
Morgana's eyebrows shot up. Snape had been talking to Cissy about her? Sure, she knew that he had been the one to suggest that Cissy invite her to tea, but somehow she had not thought that he and Cissy would have discussed her. And she had definitely not expected that Snape would have given any sort of praise.
'Professor Snape would not have allowed anything but good grades,' she said quietly.
At this, Narcissa laughed. 'Very true, very true. Severus is a demanding man.'
'Um, how's Draco doing?' Morgana asked uncomfortably. 'In school, I mean?' she clarified hastily. She knew full well the little ferret was a Death Eater in training, and she had no intention of going down that particular avenue with her hostess. Not now, anyway. Once she knew Narcissa better, once she had gained her trust, then she could mention the topic. Maybe.
'He is doing well, thank you,' Narcissa replied graciously. 'Draco's always been the same though: in the subjects he finds easy, he'll excel. It's the ones he has to work at that he dislikes.'
'I was asked to tutor him once, but that never happened,' Morgana admitted. 'Guess he didn't like the idea.'
'As I recall, when we spoke to Professor Snape about it, he quite rightly said that as you were in your NEWT year, it would have been too much work for you to take on. A shame, as I am sure he could have learned much from you.'
Or maybe not. Morgana suppressed a snort. 'I think Draco never really liked me,' she said instead, looking up at Narcissa with a slightly regretful look in her face.
'I'd heard there had been an... altercation between the two of you last year,' Narcissa offered tactfully.
Morgana bit her lip, managing to look really guilty in the process. 'Yes, I, um... we had a disagreement about my choice of friends.'
Narcissa nodded slowly.
'And he picked the wrong morning to start an argument. Ladies' problems, you know...' Morgana finished with embarrassment. Merlin, if Cissy knew what who exactly had caused her hormonal imbalance that day.
'Well, it's all water under the bridge now,' Narcissa responded briskly. 'I am sure you have moved on from it.'
Morgana nodded, casting down her eyes. If she were honest, she would tell Cissy that she'd love to tear Draco apart with her bare hands. But of course, she would keep quiet about that.
'So, how is life after Hogwarts?' Narcissa asked, eager to steer the conversation into less awkward territory.
'Even busier,' replied Morgana truthfully. 'Some days I wish I were back at school. Sleep until seven, have breakfast and start classes at eight-thirty. That was nice. Now I have to be at the Ministry at six or seven most of the days to exercise.'
'You're a trainee Auror, is that correct?' Narcissa enquired lightly.
'Yes, ma'am... Cissy, I mean,' Morgana corrected herself quickly. She couldn't help but feel like she was having tea with royalty, being around Narcissa Malfoy. Every inch of her screamed good breeding, good manners and exemplary taste. And she was also beautiful, which Morgana found very intimidating. It was hard to believe that Lucius chose to cheat on Narcissa with her, of all people. Once again, guilt squirmed in her stomach like a Flobberworm.
'That does seem to be a somewhat risky job for a witch such as yourself,' Narcissa said carefully.
'A witch such as myself?' Morgana scoffed. 'I'm nothing special.'
'Au contraire, Morgana Belakane!' Narcissa answered firmly. 'You come from a long line of pure-bloods. And as such, there are many ways you could make your mark in the world that would involve less personal risk on your account.'
Morgana put down her cupcake on which she had barely nibbled and looked at Cissy. 'Well, I could always get married and have babies,' she joked, but there was a sarcastic tone to her voice that betrayed her true feelings about this course of action.
Narcissa inclined her head. Clearly, the girl was on edge. 'There is nothing shameful in starting a family,' she replied softly.
'I doubt someone would have me,' Morgana replied darkly. 'There isn't much left of the Belakane fortune.'
'Now you are talking nonsense, my dear,' said Narcissa, not unkindly. 'There is the potential for a... well-connected pure-blood witch such as yourself to climb higher, both professionally and personally...'
Morgana looked at the blonde witch with a disbelieving look on her face. 'I'm afraid I do not quite understand.'
Narcissa put down her teacup daintily, considering her words carefully before continuing. 'You have been quite isolated at Hogwarts, with limited opportunities to mix within wizarding society,' she started. 'But that is about to change, Morgana. I can open those doors up for you. I can give you opportunities to seek power and influence, and to mingle with the upper echelons of wizarding society.'
Morgana frowned slightly. She knew the Malfoys had fallen from grace, so she couldn't see exactly what Cissy was getting at.
'I am not sure power and influence is what I seek,' she replied with a smile. 'I might have been sorted in the wrong house.'
'Morgana, dear,' Narcissa replied with infinite patience. 'People automatically think of ruthlessness when they think of the noble House of Slytherin. But that does little to describe our nature. What we truly want, is to be acknowledged for our full worth. And that is what makes us ambitious and, more often than not, seek power.' She paused, and looked at the young witch before her carefully. 'I fear that following a career as an Auror is not fulfilling your true potential.'
Morgana looked like she had been slapped in the face at this, but she managed to hide her outrage. She had heard those words before, but that time they had been wrapped carefully into sweet declarations of love, and she had not heard their true meaning. She had been too enchanted by the blond wizard who had spoken them.
'Then what, exactly, is fulfilling my full potential?' she asked, keeping her voice even.
'Well, that is for us to discover, is it not?' answered Narcissa pleasantly. 'And the best way to do that is to discuss options with some contacts in the higher corners of the wizarding world, who, I am sure, will be able to offer some very good advice.'
At this, Morgana looked down at the table. It appeared that, once more, she was getting in way out of her depth.
* * *
On the same day, but a few hours later, Charis and Grindling were sitting at a table by the window of an intimate little restaurant, nestled in the Scottish highlands and overlooking a loch. The sun was setting and casting a red-golden light over the dark water. There weren't many people in the restaurant, and those who were there all looked like lovers or newlyweds. But it wasn't the lovebirds that made Charis uncomfortable; this couldn't have been more different from the cosy pint they'd had in the Leaky Cauldron last week. This place looked expensive, high class, and she felt underdressed in her dark blue robes. She was not even wearing any jewellery, besides of course from the little silver necklace that she always wore.
'Would you stop fidgeting, Charis? You look lovely!' Grindling said with a smile.
Charis returned his smile nervously. 'I've never been anywhere as nice as this,' she confessed. 'I feel a little out of place.' She blushed at the admission. She was a Muggle-born, brought up on a council estate in Somerset. She felt as out of place here as a Horklump at a gnome convention.
Grindling, sensing his young belle's discomfort, leaned in and whispered, 'Would it make you feel better if I told you that my socks don't match?'
At this, Charis could not help but giggle. He had such a warm sense of humour.
'Honestly, you fit right in,' he continued with a grin. 'No need to be nervous.'
Charis grinned back gratefully, before glancing up and admiring the high ceiling, which was decorated ornately. Golden filigree swirls adorned the many bosses, which were interconnected by criss-crossed buttresses. 'It's really beautiful here.'
'Yes, it is,' Grindling agreed. 'It's not often I have the opportunity to come here. It's not a place one likes to visit on one's own.'
At this, Charis thought she detected a note of melancholy and, not for the first time, wondered why Grindling hadn't been snapped up already by a lucky witch.
Grindling also looked around at the marvellous décor, and there was an almost sad smile on his lips. But when he looked back at Charis, it was a happy smile again.
'Now, I know you'd like to go to a wine tasting, but to be honest, I have never really seen the point in sniffing, gurgling and then spitting the good stuff out again,' he confided. 'So, I thought we'd actually drink some wine and have a bite to eat. I hope that is alright with you.'
Charis smiled broadly. 'That sounds lovely. It does seem like a waste of good wine, to spit it out, after all.'
Grindling nodded. 'Indeed. I took the liberty of creating a little menu for us. I didn't know what you like, and if there's something you don't like, please do let me know. I wouldn't want you to eat something horrid just to please me.'
Charis raised her eyebrows in surprise. 'Oh, you've gone to so much effort!'
'It was a pleasure,' he replied, inclining his head slightly. 'Now, would you like to start?'
Charis replied eagerly in the affirmative, and Grindling imperiously waved for the waiter and whispered into the man's ear. The waiter nodded, gave Charis a meaningful look and then headed for the kitchen.
'I hope you like mushrooms.'
'I love mushrooms! How could anyone not love them? They are earthy little bundles of tasty fungus.' Charis cringed inwardly and blushed at her babbling. She was still feeling quite nervous.
Grindling smiled. 'My grandmother used to take me to the forest to pick mushrooms when I was a boy. I haven't done that for years. I miss it.'
Charis was interested to know more. 'Which forest did you live near?'
'Sherwood Forest.'
Charis had to suppress the thought of Grindling dressed as Robin Hood, complete with green tights. But before she could ruminate on this any further, the waiter returned with two plates. He was followed by a second waiter, who carried a bottle and two glasses.
'Chorizo stuffed mushrooms, madam,' the first waiter said, putting a plate in front of the blonde witch.
'Ooh, this looks delicious!' she replied, and Grindling gave her a quick smile.
'I'll take care of the bottle,' he instructed the second waiter and filled Charis' glass with bubbly goodness as the waiters retreated.
'Now, these little devilish mushrooms should be served with either beer or a dry sherry. But I don't care much for sherry, and we had beer the last time we were out. So, I thought we'd start with a nice glass of champagne.'
Charis picked up her champagne flute gingerly. She'd never had champagne before. At Christmas, her mum might get a bottle of Cava in, but as for real, proper champagne... She glanced at the label, not even able to guess how many Galleons it cost.
'Should we have a toast?' she asked, unsure of the etiquette.
'Be my guest,' Grindling replied, holding his glass aloft.
Charis thought for a moment and then said, 'To good food, good drink, and good company.'
Grindling grinned broadly at this. 'Hear, hear.'
Their glasses joined with a satisfying clink, and Charis found the champagne to be dry, fruity with a fresh taste of yellow apples and blood oranges.
'Oh, now that is rather nice!' Charis exclaimed after a sip.
'Should be,' Grindling replied, nonchalantly swirling his glass. 'It's elf made.'
Charis tried hard not to choke thinking about how much it cost. Elf-made wine was expensive. But elf-made champagne? Charis thought it would probably cost more than her monthly salary.
'Have a mushroom,' said Grindling, once more smoothing over Charis' feelings of awkwardness.
Charis dutifully cut one up, and the juices ran out tantalizingly on the plate.
'Mmm, that's a really good combination,' she said after a nibble. 'Meaty and earthy and a little spicy.' She paused. 'Nicey!' And immediately, she blushed again.
Why am I being an idiot? she chastised herself. Just be normal!
But Grindling smiled. He found her ever so adorable. 'I'm pleased to hear that.'
'Oh my, I'm feeling light-headed already!' Charis giggled after a few more sips of champagne.
Grindling faked a wolfish grin. 'It seems my plan is working, then.'
Charis looked mock-shocked at this. 'Mr Gibbons! Are you trying to get me drunk?'
Grindling leaned in. 'Would you mind?'
They gazed into each other's eyes for a moment before the waiter's polite cough disturbed them both. He swiftly removed the empty plates.
'They charge by the minute for a table here,' Grindling whispered conspiratorially. 'I guess they don't think we can afford to chatter too much.' He grinned boyishly.
Charis, already conscious of how much the meal was costing, replied with a worried, 'I hope you are joking!'
'Of course, I am,' he replied, amused at the young witch's manner.
'Good,' countered Charis, 'otherwise I'd take you for fish and chips instead.'
'Talking of fish, there's our next course.'
Charis looked up to see the waiter effortlessly placing her plate in front of her.
'Lemon marinated salmon with sesame dip,' he said with a flourish.
'And with it, a fruity Sauvignon Blanc,' Grindling added. The waiter had quickly learned and left the bottle on the table for Grindling to take care of it.
Charis looked almost disappointed as the champagne was taken away.
'I think you'll like this one. It's very fruity,' Grindling reassured her. 'Mangoes, pineapples, nectarines.' He put his nose in the glass and inhaled deeply. 'Pear, too. Add the grapes and you have your five a day.'
Charis giggled before taking a sip. The only white wine she'd tasted before was the disgusting Liebfraumilch that her mother insisted on serving for special occasions, believing it, in folly, to be the height of sophistication.
'Oh, it's very light,' she exclaimed. 'Very cleansing on the palate.' She was acutely aware that she had no idea what she was saying, but hoped she was sounding correct and not like an idiot.
Grindling smiled fondly. 'And you thought you didn't fit in here.'
Charis bit her lip, but Grindling admonished her.
'Don't do that.'
Charis looked down, suitably chastised, and started her salmon.
Grindling leaned forward, really low, and tried to catch her eyes. 'Did I say something wrong?'
'No, it's okay,' Charis murmured.
What could she say? That she felt guilty for part of her wishing that it was Severus sitting opposite her, treating her to this meal and being so attentive? That she felt that she didn't deserve such treatment? That she was unworthy, an ignorant pauper?
'The salmon looks great,' she said after some moments. 'I don't usually like salmon... sometimes the flavour can be overpowering. But the sesame dip takes the fishiness out of it, if that makes sense?'
Grindling nodded. 'Yes, it does.' He was still trying to catch her eyes and reached out to softly brush her hand with his. 'Are you still feeling uncomfortable?' he asked quietly.
Charis put down her knife and fork with a sigh. 'I hope I don't seem ungrateful...'
'Heavens, no!' Grindling replied forcefully. 'I might have gone a bit over the top. I tend to do that when I'm nervous. I really want you to enjoy this. We can go and have fish and chips if you'd prefer...' It appeared it was now Grindling's turn to babble, and Charis looked up at him earnestly.
'I am enjoying it, honestly. I'm just not used to such wonderful food and everything.' She didn't know how to begin to describe her torn feelings: of how she loved the luxury but felt like an imposter and how she appreciated Grindling's generosity and yet felt out of sorts at the same time.
'You should be used to it,' Grindling insisted. 'A lovely witch like you.'
Charis took a deep breath. 'I hope you know that you don't have to spend your money on me for us to have a nice time. I hope you know what I mean by that.'
She looked at Grindling meaningfully when she said this, and he blushed. She squeezed his hand gently, hoping he understood that she was not a gold digger and not merely attracted to him merely for what he could buy.
'I'd be happy eating chips by the seaside with you,' she murmured.
Grindling blushed even more. What a sweet, pure little Ravenclaw she was!
'I... I... I have a confession to make,' he began.
'Go on?' she answered curiously, removing her hand.
'My cousin owns this place. I promised to babysit his kids next weekend so I'm getting a good price here.' He smiled mischievously.
Charis could not help but laugh, and Grindling laughed too, relieved that the awkwardness seemed to have passed.
'So I'll have to do the washing up, is that it?' Charis asked playfully.
Grindling nodded. 'I'm afraid so.'
'Good job I know a good Scourgification spell then!'
The pair laughed again, and Charis could not help but notice that Grindling looked lovely when he laughed. The lines around his eyes were just too cute.
But then her attention was caught by a wonderful sight from the window: the sun was glowing deep red now, a huge scarlet orb just hovering over the loch.
'Ooh, look at the sun,' she breathed.
'It's beautiful,' Grindling agreed. 'Would you like to go outside to see?'
'If that's okay with you?'
'Dessert can wait.'
And with that, he took Charis on his arm and they left the restaurant and strolled slowly around the loch together. The trees and mountains were silhouetted by the fiery sky, the crimson sun turning the loch into molten lava.
'Charis,' Grindling started after a while. 'I... I hope... I mean...' He stopped, sighing. 'Oh, let me be frank: you did not just agree to accompany me because I am your boss, right?'
Charis looked up at him, surprised by his question. He always seemed so self-assured. 'You did not ask me out as your employee, did you?' she replied, hoping she had not misread the intent of the evening.
'No! Merlin, NO!' he answered urgently. 'I... I like you. As I said, I think you are a lovely young witch.' He blushed slightly at this.
'I... like you too.' Now it was Charis' turn to blush.
Grindling smiled and tenderly brushed her cheek with the back of his hand, and Charis felt a lot of things all at once: she enjoyed his touch, yet part of her was afraid. She'd been hurt before, and so part of her was holding back, even though it would have been the most natural thing in the world to lean into his hand.
'It's lovely watching the stars coming out,' she said instead, taking a small step away from him and staring at the deepening sky. 'Venus is always first at this time of year.'
Grindling nodded, hiding his disappointment quickly as his hand fell to his side, and he looked up, following her gaze. The stars were a lovely sight, but he would have preferred to see them reflected in Charis' green eyes.
'Oh, look! Shooting stars!' Charis said excitedly. 'Make a wish!'
Grindling squeezed his eyes shut and seemed to concentrate very hard before opening them again. 'Look,' he said with a smile. 'It worked.'
Charis looked at him, a puzzled smile on her face.
'I wished for a lovely witch to smile at me tonight,' Grindling clarified. 'And here you are.'
Charis could not help but blush yet again, but her smile lingered on her lips. 'You're so sweet.'
'Good thing I am sweet, because there will be cheese for dessert.'
Charis laughed again. 'I wonder if it will give me strange dreams.'
Her stomach clenched as she thought back to a particular dream she'd had only a few weeks ago. That had felt so real, and Severus' touch had awakened the passion in her so easily and had melted any pretence she'd had of forgetting him. Guilt began to nag at her, as she realised she should not be dwelling on her former teacher when on a date with someone else.
'Do you often have strange dreams?' Grindling asked, shaking her from her reverie.
'From time to time,' Charis admitted. 'I've been told I talk in my sleep sometimes too!'
Grindling looked at her carefully. 'You should meet a Seer. You might have the Gift.'
'Well, I always enjoyed Divination,' Charis explained.
'I can arrange for you to meet with a Seer,' Grindling offered. 'If you'd like to, that is.'
'That would be very interesting. Thank you!' Charis beamed at him.
'It's no big deal,' he replied. He paused, and then continued, 'You like stars a lot, don't you? I noticed your necklace. You wear it every day.'
Charis felt a warmth at his attentiveness. 'Yes, I do love Astronomy. It's such a treat to enter the Space Chamber at work! But there is something about the shape of the five pointed star that I find aesthetically pleasing.'
'Magic of old,' he mumbled in response, taking her by the hand and leading her slowly back to the restaurant.
After they had returned, they found that a second bottle of wine had already been uncorked and was breathing, waiting for them on the table. It was the darkest of red, almost purple. Its aroma was spicy, and there were hints of raisins, rosemary and dark chocolate. The cheese platter looked delicious, with all different types of cheeses and crackers, as well as chutneys, pickles and fruit.
Charis took a sip of the wine, before exclaiming, 'Wow!'
'Can you taste the prunes and the nutmeg?' Grindling asked eagerly.
Charis nodded. 'It's very deep... there's cherry in there, too?'
'It's one of my favourites,' Grindling said, clearly thrilled at Charis' response. 'I hope to drown in a barrel of it one day.'
'Make room for me!' Charis smiled, holding her glass aloft.
The rest of the meal passed in cosy chattering, Charis all but forgetting her nerves. And once they had finished, Grindling discreetly paid the bill whilst Charis powdered her nose.
'May I escort the lady to her door?' he asked, offering his arm to Charis for Side-Along Apparition.
'That would be very kind of you,' she replied and took hold of his arm. And he pulled her close to her chest, wrapping his other arm around her as to hold her tight.
Charis could not help but sink into his chest and wrap her arms around him, too. He smelled glorious; she wasn't sure what was in his aftershave, but it was undeniably manly and delicious.
As they Apparated in front of her door, neither one of them was in a hurry to let go of the other. Charis gave Grindling a little squeeze and in return, he gingerly stroked her hair.
'I had a very good time tonight, Charis. Thank you,' he said, at last releasing her and taking a reluctant half-step backwards.
'No, thank you! You went to all that effort, just for me. It was wonderful.'
'It was no effort, it was a pleasure.'
Charis looked at his eyes and his mouth, unsure of what to do or say. 'Thank you for seeing me home safely,' she said eventually.
Grindling gave an uncertain nod and inhaled several times as if he were about to say something. Finally, he leaned forward and placed the softest of kisses on Charis' cheek.
'I... I'll see you on Monday.'
Charis reached her hand to her cheek, stunned by the tenderness of the gesture and merely nodded in response as Grindling turned on his heel and Disapparated, wishing that the evening had not yet ended and that Monday would come around quickly.
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Great start. Albums would really sacrifice anyone to win the war. I hope both of a star sisters find their happy ending and the war doesn't destroy their souls.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Now you reminded us of that we should wirte a Part 3. :)
well, what can I say? This was a blast from beginning to end. Loved your new characters and how the Malfoys once again play a big part in Morganna's love life. Severus what a naughty man coming up with the three mirrors and him being a bit of a peeping Tom lol. Least he kept his word and did ensure the star sisters safety and nice to see him hinting at them to both wear their star necklaces once more.
The scene where the girls on Christmas Eve made that special spell and vow was beautifully written. Also the Scenes on new years eve and after were tenderly done and not in a harsh way but in a loving one. Even Snapes watching was done with a special feel and not pervy at all. Shall look forward to read more in this series and see if Snape can loose his dark thoughts and become a man who can accept love in the end and be rid of the Lily Ghost.
Thanks for writing and creating this lovely series. Really enjoyed reading it and sorry I did not get time to review every chapter. Consider this worth a hundred reviews.
Congrats.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
The relationship between Charis and Morgana has become a beautiful thing, and I'm very happy for them and glad that Severus will continue to watch over his girls. One day I hope his heart will be healed and that he will remember how to love. And allow himself to be loved.I'm sad this story has come to an end (for now), but I'm so happy to know that you aren't done with these characters—I've grown quite fond of them. For now we will let them sleep. I want to let you know how much I've enjoyed Star Sisters and now Shooting Stars. You are very gifted writers, and I thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. I wish you both good days and much happiness. May real life calm down for you, and allow you the opportunity to once again weave this magic you do so well.I give you my thanks with much gratitude and lots of hugs,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Mmmm... I think I'd like a cup of tea and a biscuit after reading this chapter! Or perhaps a cigarette? Smoking hot writing, ladies. Thank you from the bottom of my... err... heart!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Gorgeous chapter, and I appreciated Snape leaving them be and also not taking himself in hand. As he realises the feeling blossoming in his chest, my heart ached for him a little bit. Then followed "A love he had no part of, a love he would never be able to share with anyone" which summed it all up and put a lump in my throat. Ah, Snape. Forever the tragic anti-hero. Lovely writing.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
I enjoyed your creation of Dumbledore's vow and its execution - gentle and manipulative - much like the man himself. I love that Dumbledore also set up their New Year's celebration with Snape, even though, so far at least, Snape hasn't got in on the action! The tenderness between Morgana and Charis is lovely. Reading on...
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
"The way Ravenclaws seemed to be fascinated by the stars was simply adorable" bahaha! Pity that I didn't realise the significance of the constellation Leo; I've let down team Ravenclaw! At least I'd managed to suss out the connection to Slytherin's locket via the house-elf, thus tracing it back to Black. This is a lovely chapter brimming with charm and intimacy between the Star Sisters, and their spell-casting was beautiful and poignant. I also enjoyed Morgana's metaphor for moving on at the end of the chapter. I must say, though, that you've plotted your story meticulously and have been wonderfully crafty with the prophecy; not just with its puzzle, but also making your story fit seamlessly into canon... After all, we were never told how Dumbledore came to discover the locket. I take my hat off to you, ladies!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Now it's time to turn fantasy into reality for Severus and his girls--can the teasing giggling be leading up to them beckoning him over to their side *hopeful look*--great menage-a-trois dynamics; I really like Morgana's sexuality being released and expressed, reinforcing her healing from the past and embracing the present and future; Charis' divine sub positions--yum! and as I said last chapter, Severus is one lucky wizard... *sighing* Lovely, dynamic, lemony chapter as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
As I began reading this chapter I was so surprised that I had to go back and read the end of the previous chapter to be sure I understood what had happened... which, of course, I didn't, but I didn't know that until Severus woke up that I realized it was his dream. You two ladies are masters of the twisty plot. Well done!
Dreaming as he had been, I was glad he allowed himself to carry his dream to fruition in the shower. Perhaps this "Sweet Release" will help him get through the coming storm. Soon he will have to kill Dumbledore and then endure his tenure as Headmaster until the entire house of cards comes falling down.
I was very happy for him when heard Charis and Morgana talking and giggling in their activated mirrors. It would be very sweet if his dream became a reality after all is said and done. But I'm not kidding myself one tiny bit that I can predict just what you two have in mind for these three dear people. The only thing I'm sure of right now is that I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update.
Thank you for a very nice chapter!!!
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
It's a relief for Morgana and Charis that they have finally and truly shared their love for each other. And not only a relief for the two of them, but for Severus as well, I think. He has such strong feelings for both of them, and I think knowing that they have declared their love and cemented their relationship has given him peace of mind that they will be all right no matter what happens.
He loved those two girls dearly in his own special way. They would never know, of course, but he hoped that every now and then, they would remember him with fondness.
This chapter has really touched my heart. I don't know what will happen to Severus, and it makes me sad to think of him being alone. I hope he can find something or someone to "hang onto" as future events unfold. Be kind to him, ladies. Be kind.Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Mmmn... beautiful! Love their love-making, giving and sharing to each other the way each one needs, and Severus witnessing it--some wizards have all the luck! What a lovely way to bring in the New Year!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
I love this story even more than the last one.
I have no idea how the two of you do it but I am grateful that you do.
Sorry for not leaving reviews before now, but it is often difficult to find words for my appreciation! Rest assured that I always eagerly await the next instalment.
Such a beautiful and unusual story... the pair of you need to create a universe of your own! I'm sure we could expect great things from such imaginations! Perhaps just as great as the universe that brought your two formidable minds together!
Thank you.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
‘When the rope dissolves and we let go of each other, neither of you will be able to convey what you have learnt here today,’ Dumbledore explained. ‘You will have a faint memory of our conversation with Kreacher, but trying to remember the details will be like trying to remember a dream. The harder you try, the further will it drift away. And unless we three stand here once more, with our hands entwined, you will never be able to remember.’Damn. I wish the girls had not had to agree to take that vow. But if they hadn't, then he would have Obliviated them. I hope they really will be safer not remembering the prophecy.I can't help but wish Severus didn't have to spend New Year's Eve with only a bottle of Ogden's to keep him company while he watches his girls coming to understand the depth of their feelings for each other. With Severus already upstairs and the girls on their way up the stairs, I wonder if they'll run into each other? I'm off to the next chapter to find out. :^)Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
With Grindling moving to Greece for good, I guess there's no way he will be a regular part of either of the girls' lives. Sometimes I think it's better just to move on and cut your losses, but I know Charis and Morgana will be sad when they realize he has left his position at the Ministry and packed up lock, stock, and barrel.
That was a lovely spell that Charis created to permanently join the girls' star necklaces together. It was pretty cool the way Morgana's star glowed Ravenclaw blue and Charis' glowed Slytherin green. I was tickled when Charis solved the riddle of the prophecy- all that time studying Astronomy really paid off! Now Dumbledore wants them to wait a week. Perhaps he does want to do some research of his own.
I'm glad Morgana has a new Patronus- a majestic black feline is much better than her old Peacock. It's very telling that they have such similar Patronuses, isn't it? It seems like their world is settling into something solid and stable, but with Grindling out of the picture (for now, anyway) I'm wondering what Severus will do? Poor man is damned if he does and damned if he doesn't. Speaking of Severus... what is he doing right now?
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
It seems that it has taken tonight's events and their outcomes to bring Severus to the point where he can relax enough to realize that Charis and Morgana love each other. But I'm not sure if they can be happy with only each other. Grindling loves Charis, and I think he has very strong feelings for Morgana as well. Charis loves Severus, and Morgana feels very safe with him. Severus loves Charis and Morgana. And I have absolutely no idea how this is going to work out. There are a number of permutations that come to mind, and one of them is that Severus, Charis, and Morgana become a threesome family. Or Grindling could make for a foursome family. Or Grindling could find himself with Narcissa when all hell breaks loose and Lucius ends up dead or in prison for the rest of his life. Or if Severus dies, then Grindling, Charis and Morgana could make a life together.This emotional awakening Severus has undergone, leaves me feeling very afraid for him. I fear he will go willingly to meet death so long as he thinks "his girls" are safe and happy. Is he falling into well of dark resignation?Thank you for this thought provoking chapter, ladies. I still don't have any idea how this will all turn out, and now I have an even longer list of possible outcomes. You are masters of mystery!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
The place where Ravenclaws always took comfort and solitude: the library.' This had e tearing up! And the delicious lemony, Snapey goodness-sene has me saying, Merlin's balls, sevs_starsisters, yes, yes, yes! and more, more, more! *taking a deep satisfied sigh* Thank you! (and Miss Charis needs to heed Sev's advice for her and Morgana--speaking of which, can't wait for Sev's jetsetting over to Malfoy manor, maybe Ms Morgana needs some *special* attention too from the Potions master--he is suppose to take care of both his girls *decadent cackle* Lovely, yummy chapter, as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Poor, dear Grindling--lovely moments and chemistry and trust between these two, only to be breathtakingly blown away with the scene between Morgana and Severus--yes, yes, yes! Could feel Morgana breaking through and liberating herself with Severus *perfect, bloody f------ perfect* Thank you!! xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Now I see what you meant when you told me that Severus would feel pretty guilty... but I have to wonder just how guilty he really felt. Still and all, Morgana is free from the weight of a millstone named Lucius Malfoy, and Severus has promised that Narcissa will not bother her again. Even crazy Bellatrix served a useful purpose. Thanks to her, Grindling has heard Narcissa say the words that set him free... at least I hope he is free from Narcissa's machinations. In the study, Severus told Morgana to ‘Enjoy a Malfoy-free life. Spend time with the ones who love you the most.’ He left before she could ask who he meant, and then I remembered that Grindling had told her that he wished things could have been different. Soooo... could it be that Grindling has a bit of a crush on Morgana, or is he still in love with the memory of Narcissa... or will he return to Charis? They will see each other because they're trying to solve the Prophesy, but what will they think about the things that have happened in the last few hours? Charis will be thinking about "her boss" and her former teacher. Morgana will be thinking about her former teacher. Narcissa will be thinking about wringing her sister's neck, and mourning the loss of perhaps the only opportunity to regain her husband's freedom and their lost stature in the ranks of the purebloods. Severus will be thinking about both Charis and Morgana... I wish I knew what was going through Severus' mind in regard to both of "his girls." I still can't shake the feeling that he really holds romantic thoughts about Charis, but I have to say you ladies really do keep the waters muddied up enough that I can't ever be sure. Maybe Morgana and Grindling will be attracted to each other, and... *sigh*What is going to go on at Malfoy Manor will all those Death Eaters still there? Oh what a tangled web we weave....Great chapter. As always!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Hot dayum! Hot DAYUM! I am so damned happy that Severus and Charis had their "alone time" in the library... and he was so tender and made sure she had the orgasm of her life before he had his.‘The stars,’ he said and pointed at his throat as if to indicate a necklace he was wearing. ‘Renew the charm. Wear them. The both of you.’He still cares for Charis. His kiss on her cheek and urgging her and Morganna to wear their star necklaces proves it beyond all doubt.Thanks, I needed that! *grinning*Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Of all the rooms for Narcissa to choose from... I wonder just what Narcissa knows and what she doesn't know about Morgana and Lucius? Could Narcissa have some other motive we don't yet know about? I don't think so, but I have learned not to underestimate you ladies, either.In the meantime, what are Snape and Charis doing in thier search for the meaning of the prophesy? Sooner or later one of them is bound to say or do something that comfirms for the other that there are still real and deep emotions involved between. I can't wait to see what you have in store for our lovely characters next? Hope to see the next chapter soon!!!Berh
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
I hope she opens up. It would be good for her to get it out. Grindling is a complex character; not quite sure what to make of him yet. I'm glad you're still writing this story, I love following it. 5 stars.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Well, Charis got the info she needed. She just needs to remember her astronomy now.I've known this pair of stories have been out there for some time but avoided reading them because they were not about canon-centric characters. But I took a chance and I've really enjoyed them. I look forward to finding out what happens. Keep up the good work!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for taking a chance on our stories, we're really thrilled you've enjoyed them and we hope you'll stick with the sequel. Thanks again for your support, it means a lot!
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
May I say I never expected you two to answer ALL my reviews since I left a ton of them at one time. But thank you. If I've put you behind on your writing, feel free to blame me.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We try to answer all our reviews. It's so nice to get feedback, and we like to show that we appreciate your thoughts. And no worries, you haven't slowed us down. Next chapter is being beta-read at the moment and we have done plenty of plotting. Lemons ahead ;-)
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
Ah lemon....one of my favorite flavors!
I think Charis is far too forgiving (maybe I just don't like Grindling).TeeHee, Severus is SOOOOO BAD. I love him.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He's a naughty boy! and that's why we love him, right?
Oooh the plot thickens. I think I've figured out most of the prophecy, now to watch as the characters figure it out.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Let's see if you're right :)
I am glad it was cleared up that Morgana is NOT the one Grindling was talking about. She has enough worries. And go her for standing up for her friend.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Yes, Morgana kicked ass :)