XXI: Three’s A Crowd
Chapter 21 of 37
sevs_starsisters*COMPLETED* The Star Sisters have left Hogwarts and are now facing a new world with new opportunities and new kinds of danger. And also for the Half-Blood Prince, times are changing. (This story is the sequel to Star Sisters.)
Chapter XXI: Three's A Crowd
And Charis is now strolling down a sunny beach, having fish and chips, Morgana thought bitterly, timidly looking around in the exclusive London boutique Narcissa had brought her to. She didn't feel comfortable at all and feared that she sooner or later would manage to somehow damage one of the haute couture gowns that hung so neatly on silvery racks all around her. They were all beautiful, even Morgana had to admit that, and surely splutteringly expensive.
Narcissa, however, didn't bat an eyelid at the price tags. She was used to shopping in boutiques like this, used to spending more money on one gown than an average witch spent on clothes in a year. But unfortunately, she had been forced to dispense with this sort of pleasure since Lucius had been arrested. She still had gold to spend, that was not the problem, but shopping for expensive gowns seemed somewhat tasteless with one's husband in Azkaban. Today, however, Narcissa wasn't buying anything for herself.
'If we are to present you to society, Morgana, we need you to dress like a lady as well as act like one,' she had told the girl earlier that week when they'd had tea. And by Merlin, the girl needed proper attire. However, she looked as if she were about to Disapparate at any moment.
'Don't worry, Morgana,' Narcissa said, laying a comforting hand on the girl's shoulder. 'Once you try one of these on, you'll look and feel like a million Galleons. Trust me.'
'I bet some of those gowns cost a million Galleons as well,' Morgana brought forth between gritted teeth.
Narcissa gave a pearly laugh. 'Not quite that much, dear.'
She swept towards the closest rack and picked up a light blue gown. 'Now, this would look lovely on you,' she pointed out. 'It would really bring out your eyes and that lovely pale skin of yours.'
Morgana wrinkled her pretty little nose. Light blue? Wasn't it bad enough that Narcissa insisted on buying her a dress? Did she have to pick a colour so close to white as well? And, by Merlin, there were frills!
Narcissa looked highly disappointed. 'No? What don't you like about it?'
Morgana fought hard not to blurt out "everything". Narcissa meant well, Morgana well aware of that. Over the last couple of weeks, Narcissa had invited her to tea several times, even to dinner or lunch once or twice. She had been nothing but nice and adorable, and Morgana understood that the woman relished taking care of her, buying her little trinkets and spoiling her rotten. Now, she did not want to come across as ungrateful.
'It's a bit... girly,' she said diplomatically.
Once more, Narcissa laughed. 'That is the general idea, my dear. We need your gown to bring out your best feminine features. But alright, let us try and find something a little less dainty. Have a look around.'
Morgana, of course, made a bee line for the rack by the window, where she'd spotted a black satin gown.
'No black,' Narcissa said in a warning tone. 'Colour can really lift your complexion, Morgana. You wait and see. Now, is it satin you like?'
She picked up a deep purple one and held it up towards Morgana. 'Oh, now that is lovely.'
Morgana sighed in defeat. There was just no hope. Narcissa was determined to buy her a dress, whether she liked it or not. Best to smile and nod to at least get out of this boutique as soon as possible. And sure enough, Narcissa was already examining the next rack, scrutinising gown after gown, every now and then holding one up against Morgana.
'Now, this one...'
She picked up a midnight blue dress with long, wide sleeves and a bodice-style top that laced up all the way down the back.
'... is simply gorgeous!'
Even Morgana had to admit that it was a lovely dress. The colour was dark enough for her to feel comfortable with it, and she had always had a thing for laces.
'I will not take no for an answer this time, Morgana,' Narcissa pointed out firmly. 'I want you to try this on.'
She directed Morgana towards the fitting room.
'Let me know if you need a hand with the laces. Merlin knows they can be tricky.'
Morgana changed without even once looking into the mirror. She didn't want to wear a dress. She hadn't worn one since... well, since one of her trysts with Lucius and only because he had insisted on her wearing one. And now his wife had the same wish. Oh, if Cissy knew...
'How are you doing with those laces?' she heard Narcissa ask, and a moment later, the curtains were pulled back.
'Heavens, Morgana!' she exclaimed. 'You look truly lovely.'
Morgana ventured a glance into the mirror while Narcissa busied herself with lacing up the dress at the back. It was a magnificent piece of clothing, no doubt.
'Give me a twirl,' Narcissa suggested, taking a step backwards.
'A twirl?' Morgana inquired. 'Really?'
'Don't be shy.' Narcissa smiled and gave Morgana a soft push as to set her in motion.
And Morgana twirled, grudgingly. When a Malfoy says "jump", ask how high...
'Yes, I think we've found ourselves a dress,' Narcissa confirmed. 'Can you see how much the blue brings out your eyes? And the lovely red of your hair?'
Unconsciously, Morgana let her hand run over her short hair. She had let Tonks perform a Cutting Charm, and her hair was now just over half an inch long. She liked it that way. It saved her time in the morning, didn't get into her eyes...
'We'll take care of that when we get home,' Narcissa interrupted Morgana's musings. 'I know a great hair charm. And I am thinking a lovely pink shade for your cheeks and lips.'
Morgana spluttered. 'Dress, hair and make-up today? Excuse me, Narcissa, but did I miss something? I thought we'd have dinner at the Manor tonight.'
Narcissa smiled mysteriously. 'But we are, dear one. I just want you to feel like a lady. Trust me, by the time I've finished with you, you won't recognise yourself. You will be so beautiful, the wizarding elite will be unable to resist you. Now, chop, chop. Get changed. We have a lot to do.'
'Narcissa, please,' Morgana insisted. 'I hate surprises. Please, tell me you are not planning on presenting me to the Minister of Magic or something tonight.'
Narcissa smiled. 'Well, I was going to save it as a surprise, but yes, I have a guest coming for dinner that I would like you to meet.'
Morgana's eyes widened in shock. Narcissa had to be joking!
'Don't worry, dear. There is nothing to be nervous about,' Narcissa assured her.
Finally, Morgana found her tongue. 'Narcissa, sorry, but... Have you arranged a blind date?'
To that, Narcissa laughed out loud. 'Don't be silly, it's not a date. I will be dining with you.'
'You mean you will be chaperoning?' Morgana asked in a sour tone.
'Assisting with social niceties, making sure the conversation flows,' Narcissa clarified. 'It will be fun. Now, come on. We need to get going.'
Half an hour later, back at Malfoy Manor, Narcissa wasted no time in leading Morgana to her dressing room, where she instructed the girl to sit with her back towards the big gilded mirror. And dutifully, Morgana followed the older woman's order, yet secretly hoping a band of Death Eaters would invade the room or even the Dark Lord himself. Heck, she would even be happy to see Draco and his goonies. Anything to keep Narcissa from dolling her up.
'Curls, I think,' Narcissa murmured, running her slender fingers lightly through Morgana's hair. 'About shoulder-length.'
Morgana gave a tiny jerk with her head.
'You have to trust me, Morgana,' Narcissa said in a motherly tone. 'I know what I am doing.'
She drew her wand and spoke an incantation, and Morgana's hair started to grow, from messy, choppy shortness into shoulder-length, lustrous loose red curls.
Narcissa smiled like she was looking at her firstborn baby. 'Oh, yes. Exquisite.'
Morgana squirmed around for a mirror, but Narcissa had other plans.
'Ah, ah, ah! Not yet! Not until we're all done!'
Morgana sighed and plucked carefully at one of her new-grown locks. 'I haven't had hair that long since...' She grinned. 'Since the first Transfiguration lesson in my sixth year. McGonagall almost had a heart attack when I turned my hair short.'
'And with every right!' Narcissa pointed out. 'There should be a law against lovely girls like you mutilating their looks by having a haircut like a boy. Now, let's get you back into this dress.'
Once again, Narcissa assisted Morgana lacing up the back and then sat her back onto the chair, still with her back against the mirror.
'And now, a little make-up. Quite subtle, I think. Just enough to accentuate your eyes and your lovely cheekbones. And a soft pink for your lips.'
Once more, she waved her wand, and when she was done, Narcissa Malfoy, who always behaved like a lady, actually welled up.
'Oh my,' she breathed and put her hand on Morgana's shoulder to turn the girl towards the mirror. 'Look at yourself.'
Morgana scrutinised her reflection from top to toe. She didn't dislike what she saw, but she couldn't keep herself from squirming and fidgeting.
'I don't know...,' she started in a small voice.
'You are beautiful, Morgana Belakane,' Narcissa assured her. 'Don't you think?'
'It's just not... not me...'
'But it is you, dear,' Narcissa exclaimed, taking Morgana firmly by the shoulders and walking her closer to the mirror. 'This is the you that has been hiding under shapeless black robes and a boy's haircut. You saw how little I had to do to transform you into the true lady you are.'
Morgana fingered her hair, surprised at the softness of the curls.
'Are you glad you trusted me now?' Narcissa asked.
Morgana nodded and gave Narcissa a tiny smile. And the older woman smiled broadly, looking like a proud parent whose child had just taken its first step.
'Take time to admire yourself whilst I get dressed for dinner,' she said. 'And don't be nervous. The way you look, no one will care if you use the wrong fork for the main course.'
She swept out of the room, and Morgana lingered in front of the mirror, unable to take her eyes off her reflection. So that was what she looked like, she thought. That was the Morgana she had been trying to hide so desperately. She'd almost not recognised her.
She tucked a stray lock behind her ear and tilted her head, looking deep into her own eyes.
You're young, Morgana. Your whole life lies ahead of you and the world at your feet.
She frowned. Where that thought had come from, she did not really know. But the words rang clearly in her ears as if someone had given her a lecture about them. And they were true. She was young. And as much as she hated to admit it, she was a fetching witch who possessed all the attributes needed to charm a wizard. She had the looks; she had the brains. But first and foremost, she had an old family name. And that was what Narcissa was counting on.
'Are you ready, my dear?'
Narcissa re-entered the room, wearing a pale blue gown, her long blonde hair ornately braided with jewels. She looked like royalty.
'As ready as I'll ever be,' Morgana answered with a tiny smile. She still didn't feel comfortable, neither with her dress, her hair or the situation. But she'd give it a try. After all, this was not a date, and Narcissa would be there all the time.
'There is still something missing,' Narcissa said, but as Morgana cast a somewhat fearful look towards her reflection, she smiled. 'Don't worry, dearest. It's nothing you can see.'
She pulled a tiny crystal phial from the folds of her robes, which contained something that looked like molten gold.
'Felix Felicis?' Morgana asked with a frown.
Narcissa laughed. 'No, silly. I doubt you'll need liquid luck. But this perfume has almost the same qualities. I wore it during some of the happiest nights of my life.'
As Narcissa uncorked the tiny phial, Morgana's sensitive nose filled at once with the scent of May roses and jasmine, and as the scent settled, she also detected vanilla and sandalwood. It was a heavy scent, but it made her feel like a queen. And when she followed Narcissa out of the room and down the stairs, she was quite convinced that she'd be able to achieve anything she wanted that night.
* * *
The table in the dining room was set for three people. The wine was open and breathing, and there were candles lit all around the room, casting a warm, soft light.
'Now, I don't want you to be nervous,' Narcissa said in a kind tone as she took her seat at the head of the table, gesturing for Morgana to sit to her left. 'The wizard you are to meet is a very old friend of mine. And I have heard that you have already met him at least once.'
Morgana frowned, pondering who of all the wizards she knew would be an old friend of Narcissa Malfoy. She had never thought about what kind of people Narcissa associated with. Lucius had rubbed elbows with the richest of the rich, the most influential and important witches and wizards in the country. And Death Eaters, of course. Who did Narcissa count as friends? But before Morgana could ask, the door opened, and a wizened elf showed in a dashing tall man with long fair hair, dove grey robes, a dazzling smile and kind blue eyes.
'Grindling, darling!'
Darling? Morgana was so surprised by Narcissa using such an intimate address that she momentarily forgot her shock about Grindling Gibbons being the mystery guest. He was about the last wizard she had expected.
Narcissa stood and swept across the room where she kissed Grindling on both cheeks.
'Oh, I am so glad you could make it!'
'I hope I am not late,' Grindling replied, bowing low and kissing the hand of his hostess, holding on to it far longer than it was either necessary or polite. 'I... something came up.'
Morgana's eyes narrowed. Something came up, eh? Of course, it had! Grindling was supposed to be on a date with Charis! What the heck was he doing at Malfoy Manor, looking like a million Galleons?
'You look stunning,' Grindling complimented Narcissa in a slightly hoarse voice, and the lady of the manor smiled broadly, hiding her blushing cheeks from her male guest by turning towards Morgana.
'Now, I know that you two have met briefly, but having been introduced to each other by a mutual workmate in a café in Diagon Alley will not do for two purebloods like yourselves. So, let me do this properly: Grindling, darling, this is Morgana Belakane. My husband and I have sponsored her throughout Hogwarts. Morgana, this is Grindling Gibbons, Keeper of the Hall of Prophecies and an old and very dear friend of mine.'
Reluctantly, Grindling let go of Narcissa's hand and gentlemanly stepped forwards to take Morgana's instead.
'It is a pleasure to make your acquaintance, Miss Belakane,' he said before he bowed, kissing her hand as well.
'The pleasure is all mine, Mr Gibbons,' Morgana replied, and she was not even lying. The man looked breathtaking! In many ways, he resembled Lucius, but he seemed much kinder, more honest...
'Who is for wine?' Narcissa asked and guided Grindling to his chair opposite Morgana. 'Grindling? It's a nice Châteauneuf-du-Pape.'
Grindling inclined his head as to accept Narcissa's offer, and the old elf shuffled forward at once to fill his glass.
'Miss Belakane?' Grindling enquired. He was well aware that it was not his task to offer wine. After all, it was Narcissa who was hosting this dinner, not him. But talking to Morgana gave him a legitimate reason to not look at Narcissa. Maybe, if he averted his eyes long enough, he would forget how stunning Narcissa looked or that she was wearing the perfume he had gifted her with all those years ago.
Morgana shook her head at Grindling's offer and replied with a 'No, thank you. I do not drink,' to which Narcissa smiled benignly.
'It is considered somewhat refined to have wine with one's meal, Morgana,' she explained.
She sounded ever so kind, but Morgana felt like a five year old who'd just been told to use a fork instead of eating with her fingers.
'You should not see wine as an alcoholic beverage,' Grindling added. 'See it as a supplement to the food. Which, I am sure, will be delicious.'
He chanced a smile at Cissy and then quickly brought his glass to his nose, inhaling deeply.
'Raspberries and plums,' he mumbled. 'Chocolate and lavender... You would enjoy this, Miss Belakane, I am most certain of it.' And taking the bottle from the surprised elf, he filled Morgana's glass before she could protest.
'I'd like to make a toast,' Narcissa announced once Grindling had filled her glass as well. 'As you both know, my family and I are going through some troubles at present. It is true to say that one certainly knows who their friends are in times of need.' She gave a hollow laugh. 'However, the Malfoys are nothing if not resilient. And so I would like to drink to new beginnings.'
'To new beginnings,' Grindling repeated and raised his glass, smiling encouragingly at Morgana, who had no other choice than to follow suit.
The starter was made up of dried figs, cheese and a nice creme di balsamico, and after Grindling had explained to Morgana how the sweetness of the figs, the saltiness of the cheese and the acidity of the vinegar were being accentuated by the wine, Narcissa took over the lead, asking questions and feeding the conversation, making sure that her two guests always had something to say to each other. And by the time the main course was served, Morgana had emptied almost two glasses of wine and the conversation had been steered towards Grindling's private life, much to his chagrin.
'Tell me, Grindling,' Narcissa started, 'Rumour has it that you are still the wizarding world's most eligible bachelor. Can you believe it, Morgana? That this handsome wizard has not found a mate yet?'
Grindling nearly choked on his wine, and Morgana gave him a cold look. She had given him the benefit of the doubt so far, but depending on how valid his answer was, she would hex him into the next week. She knew he was dating Charis. She knew they'd been out three times now, including today's date. If he denied it now... But Grindling didn't seem to be willing to give Narcissa an answer. Instead, he busied himself with refilling their glasses.
'I heard differently,' Morgana said instead of him, in a tone that made even the hair on her own neck stand up. 'There are rumours at the Ministry that you are currently dating, Mr Gibbons.'
'Is this true, Grindling?' Narcissa exclaimed, obviously shocked.
Grindling blushed and cast Morgana an imploring look. Narcissa mustn't know!
'I... um... I have taken a lady to dinner recently, yes. But... um... we are not... It's nothing serious.'
Morgana's look darkened. How dare he? How dare he say that what he and Charis had going was nothing serious?
Narcissa, on the other hand, beamed like the sun. 'Nothing serious? Well, that is good to hear. Grindling, darling, you are in luck. Morgana here, who, as you know, is descended from one of the oldest wizarding families in Britain, also happens to be single.'
Now it was Morgana's turn to almost spit her wine all over the table. Was Narcissa playing matchmaker?
'I am convinced Miss Belakane has many suitors,' Grindling tried to smooth over the situation. 'A young witch of her standards...'
And a lovely witch she was. The last time he had seen her, he had not noticed as she had looked pale and tired; her hair had been chopped short, and her robes had revealed nothing of her well-shaped body. But now her hair looked like molten lava in the candle light; her eyes were glittering like two precious gems, and her curves...
'You agree then that Morgana would be an excellent catch for any wizard?' Narcissa interrupted Grindling's thoughts.
'By all means.' Grindling shifted uncomfortably in his seat. What a predicament he was in! 'I am sure any wizard would be glad to...'
Once more, Narcissa talked over him. 'The alliance of the last of the Belakanes and the ancient and noble house of Gibbons would be a powerful union, don't you think, Grindling?'
Grindling gave an uncomfortable laugh. 'Cissy, dear, we have just met. I think it is a bit hasty to be talking about alliances and unions.'
'Darling Grindling, you were always such a romantic.' Narcissa smiled sweetly and patted Grindling's hand. 'A marriage can be more than hearts and flowers.'
'Cissy, I am begging you,' Grindling implored his hostess, resisting the urge to pull away his hand. 'Miss Belakane is... How old are you?' he asked, turning away from Narcissa's blue eyes and looking into Morgana's instead. 'Eighteen?'
Morgana nodded, too befuddled by the wine and too shocked by Narcissa's matchmaking plans to utter a single word.
'Cissy, I could be her father,' Grindling exclaimed, turning back towards his hostess.
'Morgana is of age.' Narcissa laughed. 'I know what you are thinking, Grindling. You want to be swept away by an orchestra with the wind through your hair on the top of a mountain. But that is not the way love works! I myself was betrothed to Lucius since before I started at Hogwarts. And we grew together, he and I. And now I love him with all my soul.'
Lucius. The name made Morgana snap out of her trance. What the hell was this? What was Narcissa playing at? Why was she trying so hard? What could she gain?
'You are both intelligent, single people from old bloodlines,' Narcissa carried on, looking first at Grindling, then at Morgana and then back at Grindling. 'It is your duty to ensure that purity of wizardkind continues. Love will follow, mark my words.'
'Would you like us to get started on that right away?' Morgana asked, her voice heavy with sarcasm. 'The continuation of the blood line, I mean. I'm sure the moon is in the right phase. We could have a baby by the end of June.'
'My dear Morgana!' Narcissa was beaming. She had obviously missed Morgana's sour tone. 'Nothing would make me happier than to see Grindling as your consort. But we don't want to rush things. Now, why don't you two get more acquainted before dessert while I just go and powder my nose...'
'I am truly sorry, Morgana,' Grindling burst out the moment Narcissa had closed the door behind her. 'I had no idea...'
'No idea the woman Narcissa was going to set you up with would turn out to be Charis' best friend?' Morgana hissed. 'What did you do to her anyway? Did you ditch her so you could come here? Muggle-style date not good enough for you, is it, Mr Gibbons?'
'Don't be ridiculous! Charis and I had a lunch date. And I'd already accepted Cissy's dinner invitation weeks ago.' He closed his hand tightly around his napkin, looking deeply offended. 'I would never do anything to hurt Charis,' he added firmly. 'Never. She means a lot to me.'
'Then you better tell your dear Cissy that you are already involved with someone,' Morgana suggested. Her voice was considerably softer now. She had been angry with Grindling at first and thought that he had known about Narcissa's schemes. But then she had seen his eyes when she had accused him of having deceived Charis. He had looked crestfallen, truly hurt, and her heart had gone out to him.
'I can't tell Cissy I'm dating Charis. You understand that, don't you?' Grindling swallowed hard. 'You've seen how obsessive she is about blood status,' he added quickly. 'If I mention Charis, it might put her at risk. And I am not prepared to do that.'
He looked pleadingly at Morgana, who inhaled sharply. Charis' blood status had already caused the Ravenclaw enough trouble. It had almost cost her life. And the one who had almost killed her had been no other than Narcissa's own sister.
'You have to tell Narcissa something,' Morgana insisted. 'Tell her you prefer blondes.'
Grindling flinched. 'This isn't going to be easy, Morgana,' he pointed out. 'You have seen how persuasive Cissy can be. She won't take no for an answer.' He paused and then smiled compassionately. 'I am presuming your new look was her influence, too?'
Morgana couldn't help but blush. 'The woman's like a trampling herd of Hippogriffs,' she muttered and discontentedly plucked at her dress. 'Won't take no for an answer.'
'Do not get me wrong,' Grindling said softly. 'You look enchanting. But something tells me it was not your idea to charm your hair and wear a dress for dinner.'
Enchanting? Morgana felt a little warmth deep inside herself. Grindling had noticed, and he liked what he saw. But she had never been good at accepting compliments.
'What?' she asked in a sarky tone. 'Don't you think I like being prettied up and then thrust in the arms of the first available wizard?'
'By the look on your face during the starter, I would hazard a guess and say no.'
Morgana gave a little laugh, and Grindling smiled a gentle smile before topping up her glass.
'I am sorry, Morgana,' he said once more, gingerly patting her hand. 'I like this as little as you do. But I can't see how to get out of it right now. I fear for tonight, we will have to play along.'
The door opened, and Morgana quickly withdrew her hand, thereby nearly knocking over her wine glass.
'Ah, I see you've been getting along nicely.' Narcissa looked positively delighted. 'Very good. And now it's time for dessert. I am sure you will love it. It's rather... special.'
She clapped her hands and into the room came the ancient elf, carrying three glasses of white wine, and behind it walked a younger elf, carrying a tray with three pudding dishes filled with white...
Morgana paled with shock.
'The Malfoy gu,' Narcissa explained, 'is the stuff of legend. It is passion personified in pudding. My dears, if the moon isn't shining a little brighter in your eyes after this, then you are as dead from the waist down as Hel herself. Bon appetit!'
Morgana made a dive for the wine. There was no way she was going to touch the gu! She knew what that pudding could do! Grindling, however, was blissfully ignorant.
'Sweet Circe, this is amazing!' he exclaimed after the first spoon, and Narcissa smiled ever so smugly.
The second spoonful elicited a tiny moan from Grindling, and Narcissa directed her focus onto Morgana, hoping Grindling would follow her gaze. She needed him to look at the girl.
'Come now, eat up. I know you have a secret sweet tooth. And every girl likes chocolate.'
Morgana felt like crying, and her hand was shaking badly when she brought the first spoon to her mouth. She was terrified what the gu would do to her, but under Narcissa's watchful gaze, she had no other choice than to eat.
The reaction was instantaneous. Her breathing quickened; she felt hot and bothered; and her mind was flooded with memories of her being spoon fed by Lucius, of her sitting in his lap, moaning into his mouth as he slid deep inside her...
'Whatever have you put in this, Cissy?' Grindling groaned, uncomfortably crossing and uncrossing his legs. He, too, felt the magic of the gu.
'Oh, it's nothing illegal, I assure you,' Narcissa chirped, pretending to eat some of the gu herself. But the spoon she was using was charmed, and by the time it reached her mouth, it was always empty.
It was the most agonising dessert Morgana had ever sat through, and by the time the elves removed the empty dishes, she found herself quivering and squirming in her seat. And she did not dare look at Grindling whose eyes she felt boring into her hairline. If the gu had a similar effect on him, if he looked at her with even the slightest trace of desire in his eyes, she would not know what to do.
'Is it just me, or is it a little warm in here?' Narcissa asked in a cheerful voice. 'Why don't we retire to the balcony? It's been such a sunny day. I'm sure it's lovely out there.'
Morgana got up from her chair so quickly that it almost fell over. But she did not care. She just wanted to get outside, into the fresh air, away from Grindling's gaze. But her plans were thwarted by their hostess, who guided Grindling towards her young guest ever so smoothly. And as the gentleman that he was, Grindling took Morgana's arm and walked her outside, where they were greeted by gentle light and soft music.
'I thought maybe you'd like a little dance,' Cissy suggested innocently and lingered by the door. 'It's such a lovely evening, after all.'
Dutifully, Grindling immediately bowed and offered Morgana his hand.
'I hate dancing,' she protested, loud enough for Narcissa to hear and make the older woman frown disapprovingly. The girl was still terribly uncouth. They would have to work on her manners.
'If we don't dance, Morgana,' Grindling whispered, turning his back towards Narcissa so she wouldn't hear, 'Cissy will put a Permanent Sticking Charm on us.'
He pulled her towards him, gently but firmly, and Morgana shuddered as he placed his hand on the small of her back. It had been so long since she had been that close to a man. And now she was under the influence of both gu and wine, and Grindling smelled of musk and dark chocolate. And the bulge between his legs...
Grindling cleared his throat and held Morgana a few inches further away from him, noticing the same thing as she had.
'I am truly... mortified. That gu...'
Morgana forced herself to smile kindly. 'Don't apologise. I know that pudding. I know what it does to people. I can feel it, too.'
They began to sway together, slowly and gently, and soon they forgot about the awkwardness between them. They forgot about the gu, about Narcissa and Narcissa's plans...
'You suit those curls,' Grindling murmured after a while. 'Your hair is so vibrant, like flaming coals... Why on earth do you choose to wear it short?'
So nice guys like you won't notice me, Morgana thought, feeling tears sting her eyes. She didn't deserve nice guys like Grindling noticing her.
'It's a shame,' Grindling whispered. 'And that dress... You look adorable.'
Morgana squirmed. 'Grindling, please,' she started, finding her throat far too tight to speak properly. 'Don't say such things to me. Don't be nice to me.'
'Would you rather I said that your dress is like a dishrag and you look like you've been dragged through a hedge?' Grindling asked in a puzzled tone.
'I'd rather you said nothing at all.'
'As you wish, Morgana.'
Grindling did not understand. Morgana was indeed a charming young witch, and he would find her attractive even without being under the influence of the gu. But she seemed shamed by his compliments, terrified by his touch. Whatever had made this young witch so afraid of affection?
Carefully, he pulled her closer so her head came to rest on his shoulder, and he rested his own face against her. She stiffened at first, but Grindling held her close, hoping she would relax eventually. His nose filled with her intoxicating scent, and he closed his eyes, inhaling the familiar smell of jasmine and roses.
Morgana felt her heartbeat falter and treacherous tears welled up in her eyes. Being held by Grindling felt wonderful. His arms were strong; he smelled so nice, and she had not felt this safe in months. But it was wrong, so terribly wrong. Grindling belonged to Charis. Charis was in love with him, and surely, he was in love with Charis. He was only under the influence of the gu and the wine right now, just like herself.
As she felt his hand stroking her back, Morgana gasped.
'Grindling...'
'Hm?'
His face was buried in her hair now, and she could feel his lips on her hairline.
'You should... let go of me now...'
'What is it, Morgana?' he whispered and cupped her face as she tried to wriggle free from his embrace. 'Have I done something to upset you?'
Morgana gave a tiny shake of the head, biting her lip so hard that she could taste her own blood in her mouth.
'To use a clichéd phrase,' she said, 'it's not you, it's me.'
There were tears in her eyes now, and as they moved closer to each other, Grindling felt so unspeakably sorry for the young witch who was trembling in his arms. And he leant forward, and she got onto her toes as he tightened her grip around her.
And in the shadows, Narcissa Malfoy smiled triumphantly.
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Great start. Albums would really sacrifice anyone to win the war. I hope both of a star sisters find their happy ending and the war doesn't destroy their souls.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Now you reminded us of that we should wirte a Part 3. :)
well, what can I say? This was a blast from beginning to end. Loved your new characters and how the Malfoys once again play a big part in Morganna's love life. Severus what a naughty man coming up with the three mirrors and him being a bit of a peeping Tom lol. Least he kept his word and did ensure the star sisters safety and nice to see him hinting at them to both wear their star necklaces once more.
The scene where the girls on Christmas Eve made that special spell and vow was beautifully written. Also the Scenes on new years eve and after were tenderly done and not in a harsh way but in a loving one. Even Snapes watching was done with a special feel and not pervy at all. Shall look forward to read more in this series and see if Snape can loose his dark thoughts and become a man who can accept love in the end and be rid of the Lily Ghost.
Thanks for writing and creating this lovely series. Really enjoyed reading it and sorry I did not get time to review every chapter. Consider this worth a hundred reviews.
Congrats.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
The relationship between Charis and Morgana has become a beautiful thing, and I'm very happy for them and glad that Severus will continue to watch over his girls. One day I hope his heart will be healed and that he will remember how to love. And allow himself to be loved.I'm sad this story has come to an end (for now), but I'm so happy to know that you aren't done with these characters—I've grown quite fond of them. For now we will let them sleep. I want to let you know how much I've enjoyed Star Sisters and now Shooting Stars. You are very gifted writers, and I thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. I wish you both good days and much happiness. May real life calm down for you, and allow you the opportunity to once again weave this magic you do so well.I give you my thanks with much gratitude and lots of hugs,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Mmmm... I think I'd like a cup of tea and a biscuit after reading this chapter! Or perhaps a cigarette? Smoking hot writing, ladies. Thank you from the bottom of my... err... heart!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Gorgeous chapter, and I appreciated Snape leaving them be and also not taking himself in hand. As he realises the feeling blossoming in his chest, my heart ached for him a little bit. Then followed "A love he had no part of, a love he would never be able to share with anyone" which summed it all up and put a lump in my throat. Ah, Snape. Forever the tragic anti-hero. Lovely writing.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
I enjoyed your creation of Dumbledore's vow and its execution - gentle and manipulative - much like the man himself. I love that Dumbledore also set up their New Year's celebration with Snape, even though, so far at least, Snape hasn't got in on the action! The tenderness between Morgana and Charis is lovely. Reading on...
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
"The way Ravenclaws seemed to be fascinated by the stars was simply adorable" bahaha! Pity that I didn't realise the significance of the constellation Leo; I've let down team Ravenclaw! At least I'd managed to suss out the connection to Slytherin's locket via the house-elf, thus tracing it back to Black. This is a lovely chapter brimming with charm and intimacy between the Star Sisters, and their spell-casting was beautiful and poignant. I also enjoyed Morgana's metaphor for moving on at the end of the chapter. I must say, though, that you've plotted your story meticulously and have been wonderfully crafty with the prophecy; not just with its puzzle, but also making your story fit seamlessly into canon... After all, we were never told how Dumbledore came to discover the locket. I take my hat off to you, ladies!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Now it's time to turn fantasy into reality for Severus and his girls--can the teasing giggling be leading up to them beckoning him over to their side *hopeful look*--great menage-a-trois dynamics; I really like Morgana's sexuality being released and expressed, reinforcing her healing from the past and embracing the present and future; Charis' divine sub positions--yum! and as I said last chapter, Severus is one lucky wizard... *sighing* Lovely, dynamic, lemony chapter as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
As I began reading this chapter I was so surprised that I had to go back and read the end of the previous chapter to be sure I understood what had happened... which, of course, I didn't, but I didn't know that until Severus woke up that I realized it was his dream. You two ladies are masters of the twisty plot. Well done!
Dreaming as he had been, I was glad he allowed himself to carry his dream to fruition in the shower. Perhaps this "Sweet Release" will help him get through the coming storm. Soon he will have to kill Dumbledore and then endure his tenure as Headmaster until the entire house of cards comes falling down.
I was very happy for him when heard Charis and Morgana talking and giggling in their activated mirrors. It would be very sweet if his dream became a reality after all is said and done. But I'm not kidding myself one tiny bit that I can predict just what you two have in mind for these three dear people. The only thing I'm sure of right now is that I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update.
Thank you for a very nice chapter!!!
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
It's a relief for Morgana and Charis that they have finally and truly shared their love for each other. And not only a relief for the two of them, but for Severus as well, I think. He has such strong feelings for both of them, and I think knowing that they have declared their love and cemented their relationship has given him peace of mind that they will be all right no matter what happens.
He loved those two girls dearly in his own special way. They would never know, of course, but he hoped that every now and then, they would remember him with fondness.
This chapter has really touched my heart. I don't know what will happen to Severus, and it makes me sad to think of him being alone. I hope he can find something or someone to "hang onto" as future events unfold. Be kind to him, ladies. Be kind.Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Mmmn... beautiful! Love their love-making, giving and sharing to each other the way each one needs, and Severus witnessing it--some wizards have all the luck! What a lovely way to bring in the New Year!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
I love this story even more than the last one.
I have no idea how the two of you do it but I am grateful that you do.
Sorry for not leaving reviews before now, but it is often difficult to find words for my appreciation! Rest assured that I always eagerly await the next instalment.
Such a beautiful and unusual story... the pair of you need to create a universe of your own! I'm sure we could expect great things from such imaginations! Perhaps just as great as the universe that brought your two formidable minds together!
Thank you.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
‘When the rope dissolves and we let go of each other, neither of you will be able to convey what you have learnt here today,’ Dumbledore explained. ‘You will have a faint memory of our conversation with Kreacher, but trying to remember the details will be like trying to remember a dream. The harder you try, the further will it drift away. And unless we three stand here once more, with our hands entwined, you will never be able to remember.’Damn. I wish the girls had not had to agree to take that vow. But if they hadn't, then he would have Obliviated them. I hope they really will be safer not remembering the prophecy.I can't help but wish Severus didn't have to spend New Year's Eve with only a bottle of Ogden's to keep him company while he watches his girls coming to understand the depth of their feelings for each other. With Severus already upstairs and the girls on their way up the stairs, I wonder if they'll run into each other? I'm off to the next chapter to find out. :^)Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
With Grindling moving to Greece for good, I guess there's no way he will be a regular part of either of the girls' lives. Sometimes I think it's better just to move on and cut your losses, but I know Charis and Morgana will be sad when they realize he has left his position at the Ministry and packed up lock, stock, and barrel.
That was a lovely spell that Charis created to permanently join the girls' star necklaces together. It was pretty cool the way Morgana's star glowed Ravenclaw blue and Charis' glowed Slytherin green. I was tickled when Charis solved the riddle of the prophecy- all that time studying Astronomy really paid off! Now Dumbledore wants them to wait a week. Perhaps he does want to do some research of his own.
I'm glad Morgana has a new Patronus- a majestic black feline is much better than her old Peacock. It's very telling that they have such similar Patronuses, isn't it? It seems like their world is settling into something solid and stable, but with Grindling out of the picture (for now, anyway) I'm wondering what Severus will do? Poor man is damned if he does and damned if he doesn't. Speaking of Severus... what is he doing right now?
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
It seems that it has taken tonight's events and their outcomes to bring Severus to the point where he can relax enough to realize that Charis and Morgana love each other. But I'm not sure if they can be happy with only each other. Grindling loves Charis, and I think he has very strong feelings for Morgana as well. Charis loves Severus, and Morgana feels very safe with him. Severus loves Charis and Morgana. And I have absolutely no idea how this is going to work out. There are a number of permutations that come to mind, and one of them is that Severus, Charis, and Morgana become a threesome family. Or Grindling could make for a foursome family. Or Grindling could find himself with Narcissa when all hell breaks loose and Lucius ends up dead or in prison for the rest of his life. Or if Severus dies, then Grindling, Charis and Morgana could make a life together.This emotional awakening Severus has undergone, leaves me feeling very afraid for him. I fear he will go willingly to meet death so long as he thinks "his girls" are safe and happy. Is he falling into well of dark resignation?Thank you for this thought provoking chapter, ladies. I still don't have any idea how this will all turn out, and now I have an even longer list of possible outcomes. You are masters of mystery!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
The place where Ravenclaws always took comfort and solitude: the library.' This had e tearing up! And the delicious lemony, Snapey goodness-sene has me saying, Merlin's balls, sevs_starsisters, yes, yes, yes! and more, more, more! *taking a deep satisfied sigh* Thank you! (and Miss Charis needs to heed Sev's advice for her and Morgana--speaking of which, can't wait for Sev's jetsetting over to Malfoy manor, maybe Ms Morgana needs some *special* attention too from the Potions master--he is suppose to take care of both his girls *decadent cackle* Lovely, yummy chapter, as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Poor, dear Grindling--lovely moments and chemistry and trust between these two, only to be breathtakingly blown away with the scene between Morgana and Severus--yes, yes, yes! Could feel Morgana breaking through and liberating herself with Severus *perfect, bloody f------ perfect* Thank you!! xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Now I see what you meant when you told me that Severus would feel pretty guilty... but I have to wonder just how guilty he really felt. Still and all, Morgana is free from the weight of a millstone named Lucius Malfoy, and Severus has promised that Narcissa will not bother her again. Even crazy Bellatrix served a useful purpose. Thanks to her, Grindling has heard Narcissa say the words that set him free... at least I hope he is free from Narcissa's machinations. In the study, Severus told Morgana to ‘Enjoy a Malfoy-free life. Spend time with the ones who love you the most.’ He left before she could ask who he meant, and then I remembered that Grindling had told her that he wished things could have been different. Soooo... could it be that Grindling has a bit of a crush on Morgana, or is he still in love with the memory of Narcissa... or will he return to Charis? They will see each other because they're trying to solve the Prophesy, but what will they think about the things that have happened in the last few hours? Charis will be thinking about "her boss" and her former teacher. Morgana will be thinking about her former teacher. Narcissa will be thinking about wringing her sister's neck, and mourning the loss of perhaps the only opportunity to regain her husband's freedom and their lost stature in the ranks of the purebloods. Severus will be thinking about both Charis and Morgana... I wish I knew what was going through Severus' mind in regard to both of "his girls." I still can't shake the feeling that he really holds romantic thoughts about Charis, but I have to say you ladies really do keep the waters muddied up enough that I can't ever be sure. Maybe Morgana and Grindling will be attracted to each other, and... *sigh*What is going to go on at Malfoy Manor will all those Death Eaters still there? Oh what a tangled web we weave....Great chapter. As always!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Hot dayum! Hot DAYUM! I am so damned happy that Severus and Charis had their "alone time" in the library... and he was so tender and made sure she had the orgasm of her life before he had his.‘The stars,’ he said and pointed at his throat as if to indicate a necklace he was wearing. ‘Renew the charm. Wear them. The both of you.’He still cares for Charis. His kiss on her cheek and urgging her and Morganna to wear their star necklaces proves it beyond all doubt.Thanks, I needed that! *grinning*Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Of all the rooms for Narcissa to choose from... I wonder just what Narcissa knows and what she doesn't know about Morgana and Lucius? Could Narcissa have some other motive we don't yet know about? I don't think so, but I have learned not to underestimate you ladies, either.In the meantime, what are Snape and Charis doing in thier search for the meaning of the prophesy? Sooner or later one of them is bound to say or do something that comfirms for the other that there are still real and deep emotions involved between. I can't wait to see what you have in store for our lovely characters next? Hope to see the next chapter soon!!!Berh
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
I hope she opens up. It would be good for her to get it out. Grindling is a complex character; not quite sure what to make of him yet. I'm glad you're still writing this story, I love following it. 5 stars.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Well, Charis got the info she needed. She just needs to remember her astronomy now.I've known this pair of stories have been out there for some time but avoided reading them because they were not about canon-centric characters. But I took a chance and I've really enjoyed them. I look forward to finding out what happens. Keep up the good work!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for taking a chance on our stories, we're really thrilled you've enjoyed them and we hope you'll stick with the sequel. Thanks again for your support, it means a lot!
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
May I say I never expected you two to answer ALL my reviews since I left a ton of them at one time. But thank you. If I've put you behind on your writing, feel free to blame me.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We try to answer all our reviews. It's so nice to get feedback, and we like to show that we appreciate your thoughts. And no worries, you haven't slowed us down. Next chapter is being beta-read at the moment and we have done plenty of plotting. Lemons ahead ;-)
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
Ah lemon....one of my favorite flavors!
I think Charis is far too forgiving (maybe I just don't like Grindling).TeeHee, Severus is SOOOOO BAD. I love him.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He's a naughty boy! and that's why we love him, right?
Oooh the plot thickens. I think I've figured out most of the prophecy, now to watch as the characters figure it out.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Let's see if you're right :)
I am glad it was cleared up that Morgana is NOT the one Grindling was talking about. She has enough worries. And go her for standing up for her friend.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Yes, Morgana kicked ass :)