V: Friends Reunited
Chapter 5 of 37
sevs_starsisters*COMPLETED* The Star Sisters have left Hogwarts and are now facing a new world with new opportunities and new kinds of danger. And also for the Half-Blood Prince, times are changing. (This story is the sequel to Star Sisters.)
Chapter V: Friends Reunited
Snape narrowed his dark eyes, contemplating the liquid in his cut crystal glass by the dim light from the three candles that stood on the rickety table next to his armchair. Dark red, almost blood-like.
He swirled the glass for a solid ten seconds, helping the wine vaporise some of its alcohol and release its natural aromas. He watched as the legs from the wine tricked down the inside of the glass then took a quick whiff to sample the bouquet. Cherry, rum and raisins.
He brought the glass closer to his nose and inhaled deeply, detecting a note of sandalwood.
Once more, he swirled the glass, letting the aromas mix and mingle before sniffing once more. Vanilla, and just a hint of dark chocolate. This was promising to be an excellent wine indeed.
Finally, he took a taste. Just a small sip. He let it roll in his mouth. Not too heavy, not too sweet. Just right. He started noting dried fruit. And again, there was the sweetness of cherries.
He swallowed, closing his eyes for some moments. The aftertaste lingered on his palate, and he could taste the remnants of the wine on the back of his mouth and throat. It felt as if a delicious piece of chocolate were melting in his mouth.
Opening his eyes again, Snape once more contemplated the blood-red colour of the wine. There were many things that could be said about Lucius Malfoy, most of which weren't especially flattering, but he did have a fine taste in wine. This particular vintage had been a birthday gift from Lucius, and Snape had been waiting for the right time to open it.
The summer had been busy for Snape so far, pulled between the Order and the Dark Lord like never before, and so he'd not had much time to relax. Today, however, he'd finally had a chance to put his feet up and had decided to celebrate Lucius' incarceration with his own bottle of, no doubt, eye-wateringly expensive elf-made wine.
'To good health, my friend,' Snape toasted aloud to no one, raising the glass into the air. 'May you rot in hell for all the sins you have committed.'
Or in Azkaban prison, Snape did not really care. For the time being, he was just glad Lucius was locked up and out of the way. The blond wizard had been the cause of enough misery over the last year alone to be locked up forever, in Snape's opinion. But unfortunately, Lucius sitting in Azkaban didn't make his deeds undone. Nor did it bring any relief to the ones who were left behind, the ones who were still suffering, such as Lucius' wife and son.
Snape's eyes travelled across the room and came to rest on the very spot where he had made the Unbreakable Vow with Narcissa a fortnight ago. He would, as he had promised, do everything in his power to protect Draco from harm. But he doubted that it would be of any use. The Darkness would forever leave an imprint on the boy's soul, and even if he managed to keep him from committing a murder, Snape doubted that Draco's soul could ever be fully healed.
And all this because Lucius had messed up. All this because he had lost control.
All of a sudden, the wine tasted bitter in his mouth, and Snape put the glass down on the table beside his armchair, knocking over the small, delicate silver mirror that was propped up against two books. Carefully, he picked it up.
The mirror had been activated a week ago. The charm he had placed on it had informed Snape about that. And the same charm had told him that Charis and Morgana had used their mirrors on several occasions over the last seven days. But so far, Snape had failed in catching as much as a glimpse of either a pair of green or blue eyes in his mirror. It looked as if the girls had developed a liking for midnight conversations, a time during which Snape was either fast asleep or kissing the hem of the Dark Lord's robes. Hence, Snape had so far no idea how his two girls were getting along. But at least, they appeared to be talking.
He was just about to put the mirror back onto the table and give the wine another chance when the glass clouded. It seemed as if a mist were creeping under the mirror's frame, tinting the glass green and blue. His Alert Charm. His girls were using their mirrors at this very moment.
'Really, Charis. I'm standing about two feet away from you. We don't need the mirrors,' Snape heard Morgana say in an exasperated tone.
'I just want to see how I look to you when you're talking to me,' Charis insisted.
She produced her own mirror from the vanity case in her handbag and propped it up on the bedside cabinet, right beside Morgana's. Then she positioned herself on the bed so she was right in front of one of the mirrors. When she craned her neck, she could see her eyes peering at herself in the other one.
Snape held his own mirror up, surprised to see the girls together. This had to be a good sign. He peered forwards, watching the scene before him intently.
'Genius!' Charis exclaimed. 'Whoever came up with those mirrors should be awarded the Nobel Prize.'
'The what now?' Morgana asked and flopped down on the bed beside her friend.
'Never mind.'
Snape couldn't help but smile. Maybe, Morgana should not have dropped Muggle Studies after all.
Picking up his glass again, he reclined in his chair, making himself comfortable. He had missed listening to Charis and Morgana. They had always had such interesting discussions over their cauldrons in his class, and he'd always enjoyed hearing them laughing and joking together. They were unlikely to discuss potions now, Snape was aware of that, but he couldn't resist eavesdropping. Just for a while, he told himself, to assure himself that everything was alright between his girls.
'So, ready for some pampering?' Charis asked, looking expectantly at her friend with her lovely green eyes.
Morgana, however, wrinkled her pretty little nose. 'Do we have to?' she asked, sounding almost whiny. 'It's so... girly!'
Charis giggled. 'Last time I checked, we ARE girls. Unless you've done some weird gender charm...' Playfully, she plucked at Morgana's top as to check if she still had breasts.
'Oi! Those are mine!' the Slytherin exclaimed and slapped her friend's hand, which resulted in yet another giggle.
Snape sipped at his wine and unconsciously crossed his legs.
'Right, what to try first? Primpernelle's Pimple Popper? Or Squeaky-Clean Skin Potion?'
Charis' eyes were glittering with excitement as she surveyed all her beauty products. But Morgana seemed reluctant. She had retreated towards the head of the bed and was now leaning with her back against the headboard, with her arms crossed in front of her chest and a slight scowl on her face.
'Pimple Popper? Sounds disgusting.'
Charis took off the lid of a mauve lotion and inhaled deeply. 'Mmmm! Smell this one. It smells like Honeydukes!'
'I doubt you're supposed to eat it,' Morgana replied haughtily.
Snape snorted in amusement. So typical. Charis had always been to use Morgana's word the girly one of the two. Gentle, feminine, sensuous. She had always enjoyed sweet smells. Her favourite perfume at school had carried the scent of roses. Morgana, meanwhile, had always appeared affronted at anything explicitly feminine, preferring musky smells and trying to hide her femininity behind cropped hair and trousers. But she was still a young woman underneath all her bravado, Snape mused, and a striking one at that.
'Oh, look!' Charis exclaimed, ripping Snape out of his thoughts. She had obviously tested some lotion on her hand. 'It makes the skin glow, like a Veela!'
Still, Morgana seemed unimpressed. 'That can't be good,' she commented drily and snatched the lotion from her friend. 'For baby smooth skin,' she cited from the label. 'Now, who wants that?'
'Me!'
As if Charis needed a lotion for that, Snape thought. As far as he could remember, her skin was smooth as silk, soft and warm. Just like her lips. And her kisses had been warm and gentle.
Snape groaned. As much as the memory of his intimate encounters with Charis excited him, he still felt guilty about how he had treated her. He had toyed with her, used her and then pushed her away. For her own good, he'd tried to convince himself. He would never be able to give her the kind of love she wanted from him. And so he had advised her to stay away from him. But he couldn't help but wonder if he'd broken her heart that night.
In their room in London, the girls were unaware of their former Potions master's remorse. Morgana had smeared some of the lotion onto Charis' nose and was now grinning broadly.
'Glowey nosey,' she said in a baby voice. 'Rudolphus would be jealous of that nose!'
'Who?' Charis asked, a puzzled look on her face.
'Rudolphus. Isn't that the name of the reindeer that pulls Father Christmas' sleigh?'
Charis collapsed in a fit of giggles. 'It's Rudolph, silly! Really, you should not have dropped Muggle Studies!'
Morgana's aim was perfect. The pillow she threw at Charis hit the Ravenclaw right on the side of the head and made her topple off the bed, where she lay for quite a while, unable to get up because she was laughing so hard. When she finally clambered back up, after being given a helping hand by Morgana, her eye was caught by a dark red tin.
'Silky Skin For Saucy Sorceresses.' She raised an eyebrow. 'Now, that sounds interesting!'
'Saucy?' Morgana questioned, sounding insulted. 'Whatever are you implying, Miss Byrne?'
'That you and I are witches of the night, my dear,' Charis replied theatrically.
'Thought for a moment you said creatures of the night,' Morgana replied lazily, stretching out her hand for the tin. 'This stuff better not make us sparkle.'
Charis moved up the bed and made herself comfortable beside Morgana, trying a bit of the lotion. 'Wow, feel this!' she urged. 'It's so smooth!'
'Baby's bottom all over again, eh?' Morgana asked, rolling her eyes, but changed her mind once she had tried the lotion herself. 'Wow!' Then she looked at her friend. 'Shame to waste all that stuff on our hands, though, don't you think?'
Charis looked confused for a moment, but already Morgana had plan.
'Silvy!'
In a fraction of a second, the little elf appeared with a loud crack, at once bowing so deeply that her nose touched the floor.
Morgana ignored the ostentatious display of servility. 'Silvy, dear, do you think you could get hold of two bath robes and comfy slippers?'
'Yes, M-Miss Morgana,' the elf stuttered. 'Anything else M-Miss Morgana wishes for?'
'No, thank you, Silvy. That would be all.'
The elf disappeared with another crack, and Morgana huffed. 'I wonder if she'll ever learn.'
'Learn what?' Charis asked.
'Not wanting to call me mistress. She almost chokes when she calls me something else.'
'Naw, she can't help it,' Charis defended the elf, not noticing the dark look on her friend's face as she was distracted by Silvy returning with two satin robes, one green, one blue.
Snape, however, had noticed. And he could understand Morgana's sentiments. Mistress was an ambiguous word, especially for Morgana. It must be more than awkward for her to be called mistress by an elf which had once belonged to Lucius Malfoy.
Charis nipped off to the bathroom to get changed in privacy while Morgana stayed in the room. This was her home now, after all. Of course, she would get changed in her own bedroom. She had, naturally, no idea of the prying dark eyes on the other side of her mirror.
Just like Charis had earlier, Snape noticed that Morgana had lost weight. She had been exercising, alright. Her stomach was flat, her butt firm and her breasts perky. And as much Snape tried to, he was unable to look away. Just as he had been unable to look away that afternoon at Malfoy Manor, almost a year ago. And he had to admit that he was disappointed when Morgana pulled her robe around herself. Quite why she seemed so keen to quash her femininity was beyond Snape. She was a very nubile young woman, and he could feel his body beginning to respond to the sight of her flesh.
As Morgana once more settled on her bed to idly play with some of Charis' tins and phials, Snape buried his face in his hand. What was he doing? He had purchased the mirrors so the girls could keep in touch and so he could keep an eye on them and be able to step in should they be in any kind of danger. And now, when he was watching them for the first time, he was growing aroused at the sheer memory of their bodies. How deep could one sink? He would be frequenting Persephone's Palace with Avery in Knockturn Alley next if he kept going like this.
He was just about to do the decent thing and turn his mirror over when Charis entered the room, and her giggle made him look once more.
'I saw in your bathroom mirror that my nose is still glowing. It's just too cute.'
'It sure is,' Morgana agreed and patted the bed beside herself for Charis to sit down. 'What do you want to try next?'
'Well, when I mentioned that I am about to work at the Ministry, Madam Primpernelle recommended this,' Charis replied and pointed at a tiny, cream-coloured bottle. 'She said it releases muscle tension and makes the skin smooth and glowing at the same time.'
'A miracle potion,' Morgana pointed out, smirking, and uncorked the bottle. 'Now, where is Milady aching?'
'Now that you mention it, my shoulders are aching. I guess my shopping bags were too heavy. Would you mind?'
'Anything for you, my dear.'
Morgana gave a dramatic bow that rivalled Silvy's, and Charis giggled, shrugging her robe off her shoulders. She was sitting on the edge of the bed, right in front of the mirrors, and Morgana came to kneel behind her, already warming the potion between her hands. Snape couldn't believe his eyes. For seven years, he had watched Morgana avoid any kind of physical contact, and there she was now, offering to massage her friend's aching muscles.
'Mmm, this stuff smells yummy, too,' Charis commented after a while.
'So do you.'
Snape saw shy smiles appear on the girls' faces, and could see a tenderness in Morgana's touch which he hadn't expected. He watched as her hands glided almost effortlessly over her friends smooth skin, and saw how Charis' robe had lowered just enough for him to see the succulent pale orbs of her breasts peaking over the top.
He crossed his legs once more. The sight of Charis' soft skin combined with Morgana's lover-like touch was arousing him no end. He knew it was wrong, to be watching such a private moment like a voyeur, but he could not tear his eyes away from his two girls.
'You still use that rose shampoo, don't you?' Morgana asked quietly.
Charis nodded. 'It's a Muggle brand,' she explained. 'I'll give you a bottle if you like it.'
'No, that's alright,' Morgana replied. 'I don't really like the smell of roses. But it sure smells nice on you.'
Roses and dark chocolate. Snape's breath caught in his throat. Morgana's Amortentia smelled of roses and dark chocolate, she had told him once. Did that mean...?
Snape noticed that Charis had closed her eyes and that her head had dropped towards her chest. She was obviously fully relaxed and enjoying her friend's touch.
'You're good at this,' she whispered.
Snape's eyes wandered to Morgana's face now. She looked relaxed as well, but there was something in her blue eyes Snape didn't really like. She seemed confused. And he couldn't help but wonder if she was contemplating the smell of her Amortentia, too.
Now she was running her hands down and up the side of Charis' arms, making the girl shiver slightly. Then her hands came to rest on Charis' shoulders, and Snape could see her move a little closer and bend forwards slightly, breathing ever so softly on Charis' neck.
The blonde Ravenclaw and Snape gasped simultaneously, and Morgana shrank back. Her hands, however, didn't leave Charis' shoulders.
Charis' heart had started to race in her chest. What Morgana was doing felt good, and the breathing on her neck had sent shivers of pleasure down her spine. She didn't want Morgana to stop, but at the same time she was confused about her feelings. She looked over her shoulder at her best friend and was about to speak when a loud crashing noise outside followed by screaming broke the tension.
Morgana was off the bed in an instant and at the window, pulling back the curtains for a better view. Just when she had snatched up her wand, Charis didn't know.
'What the hell was that?' Charis asked fearfully, pulling her robe around her and joining Morgana at the window.
Morgana opened the window and craned her neck to get a view, but all she could see were people fleeing, and the flashes of light that were the tell-tale signs of spells being cast. There were more muffled cries and shouts. It sounded like chaos down there in the street.
Then, on the corner of Knockturn Alley, Morgana saw some figures Apparate. They were dressed in black robes and wearing terrifying, skull-like masks over their faces.
'Death Eaters,' Morgana whispered, pushing Charis away from the window and pulling the curtains shut again. But she herself didn't retreat. Instead, she kept peering out into the darkness from a gap between the curtains.
'Death Eaters?' Charis repeated, feeling her throat become tight, and her stomach swooped with the thrill of dread. 'For goodness' sake, Morgana, get away from the window!'
'It's not us they're after,' Morgana replied calmly and slowly turned towards her friend. 'I think they've just entered Fortescue's.'
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Great start. Albums would really sacrifice anyone to win the war. I hope both of a star sisters find their happy ending and the war doesn't destroy their souls.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Now you reminded us of that we should wirte a Part 3. :)
well, what can I say? This was a blast from beginning to end. Loved your new characters and how the Malfoys once again play a big part in Morganna's love life. Severus what a naughty man coming up with the three mirrors and him being a bit of a peeping Tom lol. Least he kept his word and did ensure the star sisters safety and nice to see him hinting at them to both wear their star necklaces once more.
The scene where the girls on Christmas Eve made that special spell and vow was beautifully written. Also the Scenes on new years eve and after were tenderly done and not in a harsh way but in a loving one. Even Snapes watching was done with a special feel and not pervy at all. Shall look forward to read more in this series and see if Snape can loose his dark thoughts and become a man who can accept love in the end and be rid of the Lily Ghost.
Thanks for writing and creating this lovely series. Really enjoyed reading it and sorry I did not get time to review every chapter. Consider this worth a hundred reviews.
Congrats.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
The relationship between Charis and Morgana has become a beautiful thing, and I'm very happy for them and glad that Severus will continue to watch over his girls. One day I hope his heart will be healed and that he will remember how to love. And allow himself to be loved.I'm sad this story has come to an end (for now), but I'm so happy to know that you aren't done with these characters—I've grown quite fond of them. For now we will let them sleep. I want to let you know how much I've enjoyed Star Sisters and now Shooting Stars. You are very gifted writers, and I thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. I wish you both good days and much happiness. May real life calm down for you, and allow you the opportunity to once again weave this magic you do so well.I give you my thanks with much gratitude and lots of hugs,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Mmmm... I think I'd like a cup of tea and a biscuit after reading this chapter! Or perhaps a cigarette? Smoking hot writing, ladies. Thank you from the bottom of my... err... heart!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Gorgeous chapter, and I appreciated Snape leaving them be and also not taking himself in hand. As he realises the feeling blossoming in his chest, my heart ached for him a little bit. Then followed "A love he had no part of, a love he would never be able to share with anyone" which summed it all up and put a lump in my throat. Ah, Snape. Forever the tragic anti-hero. Lovely writing.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
I enjoyed your creation of Dumbledore's vow and its execution - gentle and manipulative - much like the man himself. I love that Dumbledore also set up their New Year's celebration with Snape, even though, so far at least, Snape hasn't got in on the action! The tenderness between Morgana and Charis is lovely. Reading on...
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
"The way Ravenclaws seemed to be fascinated by the stars was simply adorable" bahaha! Pity that I didn't realise the significance of the constellation Leo; I've let down team Ravenclaw! At least I'd managed to suss out the connection to Slytherin's locket via the house-elf, thus tracing it back to Black. This is a lovely chapter brimming with charm and intimacy between the Star Sisters, and their spell-casting was beautiful and poignant. I also enjoyed Morgana's metaphor for moving on at the end of the chapter. I must say, though, that you've plotted your story meticulously and have been wonderfully crafty with the prophecy; not just with its puzzle, but also making your story fit seamlessly into canon... After all, we were never told how Dumbledore came to discover the locket. I take my hat off to you, ladies!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Now it's time to turn fantasy into reality for Severus and his girls--can the teasing giggling be leading up to them beckoning him over to their side *hopeful look*--great menage-a-trois dynamics; I really like Morgana's sexuality being released and expressed, reinforcing her healing from the past and embracing the present and future; Charis' divine sub positions--yum! and as I said last chapter, Severus is one lucky wizard... *sighing* Lovely, dynamic, lemony chapter as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
As I began reading this chapter I was so surprised that I had to go back and read the end of the previous chapter to be sure I understood what had happened... which, of course, I didn't, but I didn't know that until Severus woke up that I realized it was his dream. You two ladies are masters of the twisty plot. Well done!
Dreaming as he had been, I was glad he allowed himself to carry his dream to fruition in the shower. Perhaps this "Sweet Release" will help him get through the coming storm. Soon he will have to kill Dumbledore and then endure his tenure as Headmaster until the entire house of cards comes falling down.
I was very happy for him when heard Charis and Morgana talking and giggling in their activated mirrors. It would be very sweet if his dream became a reality after all is said and done. But I'm not kidding myself one tiny bit that I can predict just what you two have in mind for these three dear people. The only thing I'm sure of right now is that I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update.
Thank you for a very nice chapter!!!
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
It's a relief for Morgana and Charis that they have finally and truly shared their love for each other. And not only a relief for the two of them, but for Severus as well, I think. He has such strong feelings for both of them, and I think knowing that they have declared their love and cemented their relationship has given him peace of mind that they will be all right no matter what happens.
He loved those two girls dearly in his own special way. They would never know, of course, but he hoped that every now and then, they would remember him with fondness.
This chapter has really touched my heart. I don't know what will happen to Severus, and it makes me sad to think of him being alone. I hope he can find something or someone to "hang onto" as future events unfold. Be kind to him, ladies. Be kind.Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Mmmn... beautiful! Love their love-making, giving and sharing to each other the way each one needs, and Severus witnessing it--some wizards have all the luck! What a lovely way to bring in the New Year!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
I love this story even more than the last one.
I have no idea how the two of you do it but I am grateful that you do.
Sorry for not leaving reviews before now, but it is often difficult to find words for my appreciation! Rest assured that I always eagerly await the next instalment.
Such a beautiful and unusual story... the pair of you need to create a universe of your own! I'm sure we could expect great things from such imaginations! Perhaps just as great as the universe that brought your two formidable minds together!
Thank you.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
‘When the rope dissolves and we let go of each other, neither of you will be able to convey what you have learnt here today,’ Dumbledore explained. ‘You will have a faint memory of our conversation with Kreacher, but trying to remember the details will be like trying to remember a dream. The harder you try, the further will it drift away. And unless we three stand here once more, with our hands entwined, you will never be able to remember.’Damn. I wish the girls had not had to agree to take that vow. But if they hadn't, then he would have Obliviated them. I hope they really will be safer not remembering the prophecy.I can't help but wish Severus didn't have to spend New Year's Eve with only a bottle of Ogden's to keep him company while he watches his girls coming to understand the depth of their feelings for each other. With Severus already upstairs and the girls on their way up the stairs, I wonder if they'll run into each other? I'm off to the next chapter to find out. :^)Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
With Grindling moving to Greece for good, I guess there's no way he will be a regular part of either of the girls' lives. Sometimes I think it's better just to move on and cut your losses, but I know Charis and Morgana will be sad when they realize he has left his position at the Ministry and packed up lock, stock, and barrel.
That was a lovely spell that Charis created to permanently join the girls' star necklaces together. It was pretty cool the way Morgana's star glowed Ravenclaw blue and Charis' glowed Slytherin green. I was tickled when Charis solved the riddle of the prophecy- all that time studying Astronomy really paid off! Now Dumbledore wants them to wait a week. Perhaps he does want to do some research of his own.
I'm glad Morgana has a new Patronus- a majestic black feline is much better than her old Peacock. It's very telling that they have such similar Patronuses, isn't it? It seems like their world is settling into something solid and stable, but with Grindling out of the picture (for now, anyway) I'm wondering what Severus will do? Poor man is damned if he does and damned if he doesn't. Speaking of Severus... what is he doing right now?
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
It seems that it has taken tonight's events and their outcomes to bring Severus to the point where he can relax enough to realize that Charis and Morgana love each other. But I'm not sure if they can be happy with only each other. Grindling loves Charis, and I think he has very strong feelings for Morgana as well. Charis loves Severus, and Morgana feels very safe with him. Severus loves Charis and Morgana. And I have absolutely no idea how this is going to work out. There are a number of permutations that come to mind, and one of them is that Severus, Charis, and Morgana become a threesome family. Or Grindling could make for a foursome family. Or Grindling could find himself with Narcissa when all hell breaks loose and Lucius ends up dead or in prison for the rest of his life. Or if Severus dies, then Grindling, Charis and Morgana could make a life together.This emotional awakening Severus has undergone, leaves me feeling very afraid for him. I fear he will go willingly to meet death so long as he thinks "his girls" are safe and happy. Is he falling into well of dark resignation?Thank you for this thought provoking chapter, ladies. I still don't have any idea how this will all turn out, and now I have an even longer list of possible outcomes. You are masters of mystery!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
The place where Ravenclaws always took comfort and solitude: the library.' This had e tearing up! And the delicious lemony, Snapey goodness-sene has me saying, Merlin's balls, sevs_starsisters, yes, yes, yes! and more, more, more! *taking a deep satisfied sigh* Thank you! (and Miss Charis needs to heed Sev's advice for her and Morgana--speaking of which, can't wait for Sev's jetsetting over to Malfoy manor, maybe Ms Morgana needs some *special* attention too from the Potions master--he is suppose to take care of both his girls *decadent cackle* Lovely, yummy chapter, as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Poor, dear Grindling--lovely moments and chemistry and trust between these two, only to be breathtakingly blown away with the scene between Morgana and Severus--yes, yes, yes! Could feel Morgana breaking through and liberating herself with Severus *perfect, bloody f------ perfect* Thank you!! xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Now I see what you meant when you told me that Severus would feel pretty guilty... but I have to wonder just how guilty he really felt. Still and all, Morgana is free from the weight of a millstone named Lucius Malfoy, and Severus has promised that Narcissa will not bother her again. Even crazy Bellatrix served a useful purpose. Thanks to her, Grindling has heard Narcissa say the words that set him free... at least I hope he is free from Narcissa's machinations. In the study, Severus told Morgana to ‘Enjoy a Malfoy-free life. Spend time with the ones who love you the most.’ He left before she could ask who he meant, and then I remembered that Grindling had told her that he wished things could have been different. Soooo... could it be that Grindling has a bit of a crush on Morgana, or is he still in love with the memory of Narcissa... or will he return to Charis? They will see each other because they're trying to solve the Prophesy, but what will they think about the things that have happened in the last few hours? Charis will be thinking about "her boss" and her former teacher. Morgana will be thinking about her former teacher. Narcissa will be thinking about wringing her sister's neck, and mourning the loss of perhaps the only opportunity to regain her husband's freedom and their lost stature in the ranks of the purebloods. Severus will be thinking about both Charis and Morgana... I wish I knew what was going through Severus' mind in regard to both of "his girls." I still can't shake the feeling that he really holds romantic thoughts about Charis, but I have to say you ladies really do keep the waters muddied up enough that I can't ever be sure. Maybe Morgana and Grindling will be attracted to each other, and... *sigh*What is going to go on at Malfoy Manor will all those Death Eaters still there? Oh what a tangled web we weave....Great chapter. As always!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Hot dayum! Hot DAYUM! I am so damned happy that Severus and Charis had their "alone time" in the library... and he was so tender and made sure she had the orgasm of her life before he had his.‘The stars,’ he said and pointed at his throat as if to indicate a necklace he was wearing. ‘Renew the charm. Wear them. The both of you.’He still cares for Charis. His kiss on her cheek and urgging her and Morganna to wear their star necklaces proves it beyond all doubt.Thanks, I needed that! *grinning*Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Of all the rooms for Narcissa to choose from... I wonder just what Narcissa knows and what she doesn't know about Morgana and Lucius? Could Narcissa have some other motive we don't yet know about? I don't think so, but I have learned not to underestimate you ladies, either.In the meantime, what are Snape and Charis doing in thier search for the meaning of the prophesy? Sooner or later one of them is bound to say or do something that comfirms for the other that there are still real and deep emotions involved between. I can't wait to see what you have in store for our lovely characters next? Hope to see the next chapter soon!!!Berh
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
I hope she opens up. It would be good for her to get it out. Grindling is a complex character; not quite sure what to make of him yet. I'm glad you're still writing this story, I love following it. 5 stars.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Well, Charis got the info she needed. She just needs to remember her astronomy now.I've known this pair of stories have been out there for some time but avoided reading them because they were not about canon-centric characters. But I took a chance and I've really enjoyed them. I look forward to finding out what happens. Keep up the good work!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for taking a chance on our stories, we're really thrilled you've enjoyed them and we hope you'll stick with the sequel. Thanks again for your support, it means a lot!
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
May I say I never expected you two to answer ALL my reviews since I left a ton of them at one time. But thank you. If I've put you behind on your writing, feel free to blame me.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We try to answer all our reviews. It's so nice to get feedback, and we like to show that we appreciate your thoughts. And no worries, you haven't slowed us down. Next chapter is being beta-read at the moment and we have done plenty of plotting. Lemons ahead ;-)
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
Ah lemon....one of my favorite flavors!
I think Charis is far too forgiving (maybe I just don't like Grindling).TeeHee, Severus is SOOOOO BAD. I love him.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He's a naughty boy! and that's why we love him, right?
Oooh the plot thickens. I think I've figured out most of the prophecy, now to watch as the characters figure it out.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Let's see if you're right :)
I am glad it was cleared up that Morgana is NOT the one Grindling was talking about. She has enough worries. And go her for standing up for her friend.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Yes, Morgana kicked ass :)