XX: All the Fun of the Fair
Chapter 20 of 37
sevs_starsisters*COMPLETED* The Star Sisters have left Hogwarts and are now facing a new world with new opportunities and new kinds of danger. And also for the Half-Blood Prince, times are changing. (This story is the sequel to Star Sisters.)
Chapter XX: All the Fun of the Fair
It was a sunny, late September day. The month had started foggy and gloomy, and the sunlight was now very much appreciated, especially after the dreadful, rainy summer.
Charis, feeling indebted to Grindling for the wonderful date they'd shared at the restaurant, had insisted on paying for their next date, and after having tried to come up with a zillion reasons why a lady should not be paying for anything, Grindling had replied that he would allow her to take him for fish and chips. And so Charis had told him to dress Muggle-style and taken him to a seaside town, where they had spent the morning walking idly across the beach and taking in the sea air. They talked and joked, and Charis could not help but admire the wizard beside her, who was looking rather sexy, if somewhat uncomfortable, in tight jeans and an impeccable black shirt. He had not tied back his hair today, and every time a strand blew into his face, Charis had to fight the urge to tuck it behind his ear and then kiss his cheek.
'It's lovely here,' Grindling pointed out for the umpteenth time in the early afternoon. 'It's been years since I just strolled along the beach.'
Charis smiled happily, delighted that Grindling was enjoying himself. Yet he had no idea that she was saving the pièce de résistance until last: The Grand Pier. It was out to sea, full of flashing lights and bleeping noises from the arcades, and Grindling looked rather wide-eyed at it all; being a pureblood, he'd never experienced these kinds of Muggle leisure pursuits.
'Noisy bunch, those Muggles,' he said jokingly and craned his neck to get a better look around. 'What is all that racket?'
'It's the games machines in the arcade. There are all kinds of machines in there,' Charis explained.
'Machines?' Grindling looked confused.
'Some, you can win money from. Some, you play games on. And some test your skill or strength.'
Grindling looked delighted at this, like a boy under the Christmas tree.
'Come on,' Charis said. 'Let's have a look!' And with that, she dragged him inside by the hand. She couldn't help but notice that his hand felt big in hers, warm and strong.
Grindling abruptly stopped at a machine with lots of stuffed toys in.
'I assume one is supposed to get one of those out?'
Charis nodded. 'That's right. By moving the mechanical arm. Look.' She put some money into the machine, and it whirred into life with lights and a little tune.
Grindling stood closely behind her, looking over her shoulder. 'Wingardium Leviosa would do the trick as well,' he whispered.
'Forgotten the Statute of Secrecy already, have you?' Charis joked as she manoeuvred the mechanical arm into position. She managed to grab hold of one toy, only for it to slip out of the claw as it moved back to the opening.
'Balls!' she exclaimed with frustration. 'Would you like a go?'
'Sure. Which one do you want?'
'The bunny is quite cute,' Charis admitted.
'The light blue one?'
'Yeah, that's the one.' Charis hastily put some coins in the machine.
'You know, you do not have to pay for me,' Grindling said cautiously.
'It's my turn,' Charis replied firmly. 'And anyway, they don't take Galleons here.' She smiled.
Grindling smiled back and turned to the machine. His face was screwed up in concentration.
'Bunny. Light blue bunny. Come to papa, now,' he muttered.
Charis could not help but giggle, which caused Grindling to lose concentration, and the bunny fell back down. Grindling's shoulders slumped dejectedly.
'I'm sorry. Did I put you off?' Charis asked innocently.
Grindling shrugged, but Charis was already distracted by another machine. 'Ooh, Whac-A-Mole! I love that!'
She ran over, Grindling following in her wake.
'Whac-A-Mole?' he asked, looking puzzled.
'Here.' Charis handed him a club. 'When I put the coins in, the aim is to hit as many moles as possible. Ready?'
Grindling looked at the club as if it were a two-headed snake. 'O...kay?' he answered unsurely.
Charis inserted the coins.
'Go!'
They embarked on a frenzied attack, giggling at the absurdity as they whacked frantically, and Grindling had either very bad reflexes or was distracted by Charis' bouncing breasts, as he didn't manage to hit too many moles. After a minute, the machine made a fanfare noise, announcing Charis as the winner.
'Yay! I am the mole slayer!
Grindling mock-pouted at the defeat.
'Naww, come on,' Charis said, linking her arm in his. 'I'm sure you'll beat me at something.'
'I am not aiming to beat you in anything,' he pointed out. 'But this game was too violent for my taste, I must admit.'
Charis leaned in and whispered, 'They aren't real moles.'
Grindling smirked and whispered back, 'I know that.'
Charis giggled, and as they looked into each other's eyes, an unspoken warmth passed between them, awakening butterflies in their stomachs.
'Would you excuse me for a moment?' Grindling said eventually, reluctantly pulling his gaze from Charis. 'Little wizards' room.'
Charis smiled. 'Of course. I'll just be over there, playing on Pac-Man.'
'Pac-Man. Okay. Right.' Grindling looked confused. 'I'll just be... yeah...' And with that incoherent sentence hanging in the air, he wandered off, looking around him at all the machines in awe.
Charis happily played on Pac-Man, getting as far the peach level before Grindling returned, but she was so absorbed in the game that she didn't notice him come back. She jumped as she suddenly felt something fluffy brush her cheek. It was a little light blue bunny.
'Can I come home with you?' Grindling asked in bunny voice.
Charis looked up, abandoning her game. 'Aww! You got it! Thank you.'
She gave him a hug of gratitude, and Grindling closed his arms around her, holding her far too tight than was necessary for a "You're welcome" hug. It felt nice, however, and Charis didn't want to let go, either.
'I'll have to think of a name for him,' she murmured, feeling almost a bit forlorn as they broke apart. 'How about Mr Gibbs?'
Grindling grinned. 'That's cute.' He kept his left arm around her shoulder as he looked around the arcade. 'What now?'
'There is a fairground outside,' Charis replied. 'Can we go on the dodgems?'
'I'm scared to say yes.' He laughed nervously.
'They're fun, I promise!' Charis tried to reassure him. 'They are little cars... automobiles. They have pedals on the floor: one to go forward, one to go back. And a steering wheel,' she explained. 'You drive around and try and dodge people, or if you are mean, bang into them.'
'Bang into them?' Grindling looked horrified. 'Muggles are violent.'
But Charis swatted his arm lightly. 'It's fun, you'll see!'
'I'm scared,' he confessed. And he wasn't even joking.
Charis ignored him, pulling him on to the ride. 'What colour car are you having? I'm going for purple!'
Grindling looked terrified. 'Um, yellow?' he suggested, truly feeling like a Hufflepuff.
'Come on, then!'
They each climbed into their respective cars, and loud music began to play as they started driving around.
Grindling was the worst driver ever, too much of a gentleman to bang into people he didn't know. Charis, however, knew the ride well and sneaked around and bumped into him. To Grindling's surprise and delight, it didn't hurt, and he laughed.
'Catch me if you can!' Charis called, and she drove off with a laugh.
Grindling set off in hot pursuit, eventually cornering her and bumping into her.
'Gotcha!' he yelled triumphantly. 'Revenge!'
'I knew you'd enjoy that,' Charis told him as they climbed out and made their way down from the ride.
'I thought I would be worse. But actually, I don't mind bumping into you.' He bumped into her lightly with his shoulder.
'Is that euphemism?' Charis replied, looking up at him through her eyelashes.
'Would you like it to be one?' Grindling asked in response, looking steadily at her.
Charis felt her knees go weak. 'It depends on what part of you wants to bump me...,' she answered in a low voice.
Grindling blushed at the insinuation.
'Are you hungry?' Charis asked quickly, wary of making him uncomfortable. The last thing she wanted was for him to find her uncouth.
Grindling nodded, clearly glad of the change of subject.
'Me too. Come on, then. They do the best fish and chips here. You have to have them overlooking the sea, with the fresh sea air around, though. I don't know why, but they always taste nicer by the sea.'
She took Grindling by the hand, and he trotted after her, looking for all the world like a lovesick puppy.
Charis bought them both a huge portion of fish and chips to share from a nearby stall, and they sat overlooking the sea, munching away.
'Do you like them?' she asked cautiously. It certainly wasn't haute cuisine, but it was one of Charis' favourite meals.
'They're lovely!' Grindling replied, making a humming noise as he sank his teeth into the fish.
Charis grinned with delight. 'They always taste better out of the paper too.'
'I think this is the best thing I have ever eaten,' Grindling pointed out, licking his fingers. 'I think, however, that this might be due to the company.'
He smiled endearingly at her, and now it was Charis' turn to blush. Grindling was such a sweetheart. He was charming, courteous and funny, good looking and the perfect gentleman. And he was going out with her! It was almost too good to be true.
Trying to hide her red cheeks, Charis busied herself by feeding chips to the sparrows and seagulls that had gathered not far away from their bench. And Grindling was glad that Charis was looking away for the moment. What he was about to do demanded a lot of courage from his side, courage which he needed to gather first. Charis was so sweet, so adorable, and she had captured his heart in a way no one else had for many years. He didn't want to make a mistake now.
As she looked back at him, her cheeks still slightly pink and a broad smile on her lips, Grindling put his food down on the bench behind him and opened his mouth to speak. But words failed him.
'What is it?' Charis asked as he had opened his mouth for the third time.
'I...' He cleared his throat. 'I would like to...'
He broke off once again. His hands were sweaty, and he could feel them tremble.
'Charis, may I kiss you?' he finally managed to ask, speaking so quickly that he feared she might not have heard what he'd said.
Charis' eyes widened in surprise. Had Grindling just asked for her permission to kiss her? She was rather used to men who just took whatever they desired.
'O-of course,' she breathed.
Grindling's heart leapt with joy, and he quickly dried off his hand on his jeans before carefully cupping Charis' chin and leaning in.
It was the softest kiss Charis had ever received, and it was over in a heartbeat. But when Grindling pulled back, looking deep into her eyes, Charis felt as dizzy as if they had shared a long, passionate French kiss.
'You taste of chips,' Grindling whispered and smiled. 'The best chips I have ever eaten.'
He leaned in once more, still cupping Charis' chin, and this time, he was a little bit braver, pressing his lips firmly against hers. And as he felt her returning his kiss, he grew bolder, sneaked a hand around her waist and pulled her closer. Oh, it felt wonderful to hold her in his arms.
Charis, too, enjoyed the sensation. Grindling's kiss was so different from any other kiss she had experienced so far: not as slobbering as Zabini's, not as demanding as Snape's. And she relished it immensely.
Resting her hands on his chest, only now noticing the expensive feel of the fabric, Charis leaned into the kiss, letting her head fall slightly backwards to gain a better angle, and flickered her tongue across Grindling's soft lips, delighted to find them parting at her touch.
She moaned softly as their tongues entwined, and Grindling pulled her even closer, burying one of his hands in her hair. He didn't want to let go of her, and he found his body respond to the newfound closeness in the most positive way.
'Charis,' he managed to bring forth between kisses. 'How serious... do you take... the Statute of Secrecy?'
Charis froze, puzzled, not sure why Grindling would ask her such a question in the middle of a passionate snog.
But Grindling carried on, covering her lips with kisses, her cheek, her neck...
'If it were up to me,' he breathed, 'I'd respectfully screw the Statute and...' He detached his lips from her skin and looked deeply into her eyes, '...and Apparate with you to my flat right now.'
Charis gasped. 'I... I want you too, Grindling,' she confessed. His kisses had sent waves of pleasure through her body, and as he had pulled her close, she had been able to feel his arousal. She had, however, neither dared make a move nor hoped he would. He was such a gentleman, after all.
Encouraged by her positive reaction, Grindling once more pressed his lips onto Charis', pushing his tongue into her mouth and kissing her boldly. And as he pulled her into a standing position, his arousal became very obvious to them both. Muggle jeans were not as forgiving as wizard robes.
They staggered into the shadows behind the fish and chips shop, and Grindling pressed Charis up against the wall, kissing her and grinding himself against her, and Charis could barely resist the urge to reach out for him and cup his growing erection through his jeans. She would not have minded him taking her roughly right there against the wall, but she had the distinct feeling that her making any bold move would spoil the mood. Grindling didn't seem the type who would appreciate being groped in public or having an outdoor quickie behind a fish and chips shop.
'Are you sure you want to come to my place?' Grindling panted. His voice was quite hoarse, and he didn't know what he would do if Charis said no now. Have the wank of the century, no doubt. He was too aroused to be able to just ignore it. But to his utter relief, Charis nodded, and he grabbed her firmly around the waist and Apparated right into his bedroom.
Charis had a quick look around. The room was minimal but tasteful, with a deep, cream shagpile carpet and various objets d'art dotted around the place. And the bed they were now staggering towards was big and covered with crisp white linen sheets.
Grindling pushed her down softly, and Charis fell willingly, and as he straddled her legs, leaning forward to kiss her face and neck and caress her breasts through her clothes, Charis tugged at his shirt, tearing off a couple of buttons in the process. Momentarily, she felt a need to apologise for ruining his shirt, but when she laid eyes on his bare upper body, she couldn't care less about the shirt. His skin was smooth and pale, and his abs bore witness of a healthy diet and plenty of exercise. Charis traced his chest with her hands, let them run upwards over his shoulders and down onto his impressive biceps. But as she was about to slide off his shirt, Grindling shrugged her hands away and instead engaged her into a deep, passionate kiss, and Charis forgot all about undressing him. Instead, she became acutely aware of his very evident bulge. She ran her hands down over his chest again, over his stomach, but as she ran her fingers inside the waistband of his jeans, Grindling took hold of her wrist.
'Let's take this slow, sweet one. Please?'
Charis looked up at him, slightly confused. They were both ready. She sure was! And judging from the straining buttons at his crotch, Grindling was more than ready himself. Why wait? Why take it slow?
She didn't say anything, of course, but still, Grindling seemed to understand her silent question.
'It... has been a while since I made love to a woman,' he confessed, a blush creeping over his cheeks. 'I fear I am out of practice.'
Charis smiled sympathetically. It had been a while for her, too.
'I am sure it is like riding a broom,' she said and giggled, and as Grindling laughed, the tension seemed to lessen for some moments.
Once more, they kissed. Once more Grindling tenderly caressed her breasts through her top, and Charis tried hard not to moan too much, not to seem too eager. She didn't want to put any pressure on him, didn't want him to be uncomfortable, but she could not deny that she was longing for him to touch her properly. She wished he'd be a bit rougher, that he'd tug at her top and her trousers, that he'd pin her hands over her head and have his way with her. Oh, if she could only tell him...
She let her hands once more slide under his shirt, ran her nails down his back and then took a firm hold on his butt cheeks, pulling him closer and at the same time lifting up her hips to meet him. Oh, that was no tiny wand he had.
Then finally, Grindling made a move. He grabbed Charis firmly around the waist and made them roll around so Charis came to straddle him. And as he looked up at her, his blue eyes were glittering, and he looked as if he had never gazed upon anything more beautiful. Carefully, he sneaked his hands under her top and cupped her breasts, and Charis pulled off her top and bra, letting her full breasts spill into Grindling's hands.
He was gentle, fondled her breasts as if they were made out of glass, massaged them and caressed them. And every time he let his thumbs rub against her nipples, Chris moaned and ground herself against his crotch and licked her lips appreciatively.
'You're beautiful,' Grinding breathed, and when Charis slid backwards and once more teased the waistband of his jeans, he did not resist.
His cock sprung from the confinement of his jeans and pants, and as Charis wrapped her hand around his length, Grindling gave a low moan. This felt so good!
'Merlin,' he managed to articulate as she started stroking him gently, and he bucked his hips. But as Charis shifted and leant forwards, her lips only inches away from the large, sculpted head, Grindling stiffened.
'Charis,' he panted. 'This is not a good idea...'
But she ignored him, lowered her head and took him into her mouth.
Grindling groaned.
'... been... a while...,' he managed to croak, but his hand, which he had extended to pull Charis away, instead grabbed hold of her hair and guided her into the correct rhythm. Oh, this was bliss.
And Charis enjoyed it, too. She enjoyed the feel of Grindling's warm member in her mouth and the sounds he was making. And encouraged by his hand in her hair, she started to suck hard, all the while cupping his balls.
Then Grindling withdrew his hand.
'Charis... I'm... begging you.'
He didn't really know what he was begging for. Part of him wanted her to continue, wanted her to suck him until he spilled himself in her mouth. But another part feared that everything would end too quickly. He had meant to make love to her, not have her blow him like one of the tarts at Persephone's Palace.
But Charis didn't mind Grindling coming. In fact, she wanted him to. She had never made a man come. She and Zabini had been interrupted before Zabini had even been close, and Snape... Snape had held back for some inexplicable reason.
Fighting hard to banish every thought of other men, especially of Snape from her mind, Charis closed her lips tightly around the very tip of Grindling's cock and pumped his shaft deftly with her hand, and after a few moments, he came undone with a grunt and a shudder that went through his whole body, ejaculating deep into Charis' mouth.
She was shocked at the amount for a moment. Also, she had not been prepared for the taste. It tasted strangely bitter, yet sweet at the same time. And she bravely swallowed all of it down, hoping it would please Grindling.
'Merlin's balls!'
Grindling swore quite passionately, and Charis looked up at him, somewhat fearful. Had she done anything wrong? But then his hand was once more in her hair, and he took hold of her, gentling pulling her up towards him. He was smiling when he wrapped his arms around her.
'Was I okay?' Charis inquired bashfully.
'Okay?' Grindling sounded flabbergasted. 'Were you okay? Circe's tits, Charis! I'm seeing stars!'
Charis giggled nervously. 'I've never done that before,' she confessed.
Grindling gave a short laugh. 'You seem to have talent.'
Then he exhaled slowly and wrapped his arms tighter around Charis, who snuggled into his chest.
'This is not how I meant for this to happen,' Grindling pointed out. He sounded less than pleased. Not angry, far from it. If Charis would have to venture a guess, she would have opted for sad.
'I enjoyed it,' she quickly reassured him. She had! And the last thing she wanted was Grindling to think that he had used her in any way.
'So did I, Charis. By Merlin, I enjoyed this! But... I had meant to bed you on roses. I had meant to make love to you.'
Charis felt herself grow all warm and fuzzy inside. 'There is plenty of time for that,' she whispered and planted a row of soft kisses of his chest. As far as she was concerned, they had all the time in the world.
But Grindling shook his head. 'I am afraid I am too old for a second round.'
He sounded truly mortified, and Charis wrapped her arms tightly around his chest.
'It is okay,' she whispered. 'Really.'
Of course, if she were honest, she would admit that she was disappointed. She was still very much aroused herself and longing for release. But then again, Grindling had warned her, and she could have stopped her ministrations. But making him climax had felt so good! And for that alone she could live with not getting any herself that afternoon. But when Grindling's hand wandered down her back and came to squeeze her butt cheek, she changed her mind. And when he gently pushed her onto her back and lowered his head to her breasts, she sincerely prayed that he would be able to perform once more this afternoon.
He lay down beside her, his lips alternately exploring her breasts and the soft skin on the side of her neck, and when his hand wandered south, caressing the inside of her thighs through her jeans, Charis squirmed. It seemed almost cruel that Grindling wanted to be so caring and gentle while she was longing to be taken hard and roughly.
When he finally asked permission to unbutton her jeans, Charis nodded eagerly; she knew she must be scorching hot between her legs by now. In return, she moved her hand tentatively towards Grindling's mid-section. He, however, denied her access by positioning his upper leg strategically. It seemed that he wasn't ready yet.
'It's your turn now, sweet Charis,' he whispered into her ear, tantalisingly tracing the edge of her knickers with her fingertips.
Charis wriggled and sighed. Grindling was so sweet, so caring. But didn't he realise that she didn't need to be seduced, that she was ready and just waiting for him to make his move?
She moaned loudly as his fingers finally made contact with her hot flesh, and Grindling looked delightedly surprised. It almost seemed as if he had never touched a woman in such a fashion. But he was curious and sensitive, and after some delicate probing, he found the very special spot that made Charis squeal with delight as he touched it.
'Are you enjoying this?' he whispered and once more started nibbling at her ear, all the while applying pressure to her nub.
'Hm, yes.' Charis moaned. 'Harder.'
'What?'
Grindling sounded puzzled, and Charis quickly caught his mouth in a passionate kiss in order to distract him. She did not want him to think that she was a wanton trollop. But his tender ministrations were driving her to the edge of insanity, and Charis yearned for him being rougher with her.
Thankfully, Grindling didn't repeat his question and even intensified his caresses, placing once finger on each side of Charis' clit and rubbing it deftly while his tongue explored her mouth. And Charis moaned and ground herself against his fingers. He seemed to have understood what she needed now, and he rubbed her harder and faster, thrusting his tongue into her mouth in the same quick pace. And Charis moaned frantically, flushing as her orgasm crept closer. If Grindling stopped now, she would surely die.
But he did not stop. His fingers moved quickly and firmly over her pulsating clit, and Charis peaked with an outcry that would surely alarm all of Grindling's neighbours. But she did not care. And she arched her back and jolted as if electrocuted, moaning and panting and calling out Grindling's name.
He made her come twice, and as he stroked her gently as to ease her down from her peak, he smiled fondly at her.
'Are you alright?' he asked, receiving a content hum in return. 'Looks like we both have undreamt-of talents.'
Charis looked at him in surprise. Surely, a man like Grindling must have bedded hundreds of witches. But the way he spoke made her think that he was quite... inexperienced. And he had mentioned that it had been a while...
He hugged her close and softly stroked her hair, and Charis was just about to doze off in his strong arms when his voice made her become wide awake.
'I am truly sorry, Charis,' he said. 'This did really not turn out the way I hoped for it.'
Charis opened her mouth to speak, but Grindling hushed her with a soft kiss.
'You were a dream, Charis,' he assured her, smiling a genuine smile. 'It's just... I'd really hoped to be... better.'
He looked truly mortified once more, but instead of saying something, Charis just hugged him tightly. She had the feeling that he had more to say.
'When I said it had been a while...' he continued. 'It's been a really long time...'
'Since you had sex?' Charis butted in.
'Oh, I've had sex,' Grindling assured her, sounding almost defensive. 'But those were quick, meaningless encounters. They weren't worth the effort, and although they quelled my hunger for flesh, they left me rather... unsatisfied.'
He moved his hand to his chest, and Charis understood that he was not talking about orgasms. He was talking about that warm and fuzzy feeling Charis felt in her chest right now. The feeling of having shared something special with a lover.
'It has been almost two decades since I made love,' Grindling carried on. 'There were times when I feared it would never happen again.'
Charis felt her heart go out to the wizard in her arms. She knew how it felt to be without love, but the poor man had suffered for twenty years. What a fate.
'May I... may I ask why?' Charis asked carefully, brushing a strand of stray hair out of Grindling's face. She truly hoped he trusted her enough to share his story.
'I was about your age when I realised I was in love,' Grindling started. 'Truly, deeply in love. We'd been out a couple of times during my last year at Hogwarts, but it wasn't until I had left school and had not seen her for a couple of months that I realised how much I missed her, how much I ached for her.'
'Couldn't you meet?' Charis asked.
'She was still at Hogwarts. Then I went to Greece to study, and when I saw her the next time it was at a friend's house. He presented her to me as his fiancée.' Grindling gave a deep sigh. 'She had to marry him. They'd been betrothed for years. But we had an affair before their wedding. It lasted three months. And during all that time, I was foolish enough to believe that she would run away with me. It broke my heart when she didn't.'
'Oh, Grindling.'
It might not have been the most romantic of pillow talk, and many women would have hated to hear the man in their arms talk about his long-lost love. But Charis felt touched and proud. Grindling had said he had not made love to any woman since the love of his life had married another. And he had also told her that he wanted to make love to her.
'I am so, so sorry, Grindling. I shouldn't have asked...'
'By Merlin, Charis, don't be sorry,' Grindling exclaimed and took her face into both his hands. 'I'm glad you asked. I'm glad you're still here.'
He kissed her tenderly, and Charis didn't know if she felt happy or if she wanted to burst into tears over the sadness of Grindling's fate. But when he continued kissing and caressing her, she kissed him back, letting her hands explore his smooth chest once more, and she hoped she would be able to heal this wizard's wounds. Eventually, they both fell into slumber, Charis nestled into the crook of Grindling's left arm.
It was him jerking away said arm an hour later that awoke her.
'What is it?' she asked in alarm.
'Nothing,' Grindling assured her, rubbing his forearm. 'Must have tried to turn with you still lying in my arms and pulled a muscle or something.'
Then the big grandfather clock in the hall chimed six times, and Grindling shot off the bed.
'Shit! There is this dinner I have to attend at six-thirty. I forgot all about it. And I'd much rather stay here with you and do this properly but...'
'It's okay, I understand,' Charis said truthfully. She'd had a wonderful time, and maybe breaking off this date now was for the better. They both had a lot to think about.
'I... I'll take you home, of course... I'll get changed right away. I'll still be able to make it in time if I take you home... Oh, Charis, I am so unspeakably sorry.'
'What on earth for?' Charis exclaimed.
'Many things.' Grindling laughed uneasily. It was clear that he was very uncomfortable.
'Go get changed, and I'll try to find my bra,' Charis said jokingly in order to defuse the tension. Her bra was lying right beside her on the bed. She didn't have to look for it.
Grindling disappeared into the en suite bathroom and re-emerged less than ten minutes later, wearing exquisite dove grey robes. He looked to die for, and Charis suddenly regretted breaking the day off so abruptly. She would not have minded looking at this dashing wizard for a while longer.
'I am truly sorry, Charis,' he repeated once more as he offered her his arm for Side-Along Apparition. 'I meant it when I said that I would want to bed you on roses. I hope that you will give me a second chance.'
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Great start. Albums would really sacrifice anyone to win the war. I hope both of a star sisters find their happy ending and the war doesn't destroy their souls.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Now you reminded us of that we should wirte a Part 3. :)
well, what can I say? This was a blast from beginning to end. Loved your new characters and how the Malfoys once again play a big part in Morganna's love life. Severus what a naughty man coming up with the three mirrors and him being a bit of a peeping Tom lol. Least he kept his word and did ensure the star sisters safety and nice to see him hinting at them to both wear their star necklaces once more.
The scene where the girls on Christmas Eve made that special spell and vow was beautifully written. Also the Scenes on new years eve and after were tenderly done and not in a harsh way but in a loving one. Even Snapes watching was done with a special feel and not pervy at all. Shall look forward to read more in this series and see if Snape can loose his dark thoughts and become a man who can accept love in the end and be rid of the Lily Ghost.
Thanks for writing and creating this lovely series. Really enjoyed reading it and sorry I did not get time to review every chapter. Consider this worth a hundred reviews.
Congrats.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
The relationship between Charis and Morgana has become a beautiful thing, and I'm very happy for them and glad that Severus will continue to watch over his girls. One day I hope his heart will be healed and that he will remember how to love. And allow himself to be loved.I'm sad this story has come to an end (for now), but I'm so happy to know that you aren't done with these characters—I've grown quite fond of them. For now we will let them sleep. I want to let you know how much I've enjoyed Star Sisters and now Shooting Stars. You are very gifted writers, and I thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. I wish you both good days and much happiness. May real life calm down for you, and allow you the opportunity to once again weave this magic you do so well.I give you my thanks with much gratitude and lots of hugs,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Mmmm... I think I'd like a cup of tea and a biscuit after reading this chapter! Or perhaps a cigarette? Smoking hot writing, ladies. Thank you from the bottom of my... err... heart!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Gorgeous chapter, and I appreciated Snape leaving them be and also not taking himself in hand. As he realises the feeling blossoming in his chest, my heart ached for him a little bit. Then followed "A love he had no part of, a love he would never be able to share with anyone" which summed it all up and put a lump in my throat. Ah, Snape. Forever the tragic anti-hero. Lovely writing.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
I enjoyed your creation of Dumbledore's vow and its execution - gentle and manipulative - much like the man himself. I love that Dumbledore also set up their New Year's celebration with Snape, even though, so far at least, Snape hasn't got in on the action! The tenderness between Morgana and Charis is lovely. Reading on...
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
"The way Ravenclaws seemed to be fascinated by the stars was simply adorable" bahaha! Pity that I didn't realise the significance of the constellation Leo; I've let down team Ravenclaw! At least I'd managed to suss out the connection to Slytherin's locket via the house-elf, thus tracing it back to Black. This is a lovely chapter brimming with charm and intimacy between the Star Sisters, and their spell-casting was beautiful and poignant. I also enjoyed Morgana's metaphor for moving on at the end of the chapter. I must say, though, that you've plotted your story meticulously and have been wonderfully crafty with the prophecy; not just with its puzzle, but also making your story fit seamlessly into canon... After all, we were never told how Dumbledore came to discover the locket. I take my hat off to you, ladies!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Now it's time to turn fantasy into reality for Severus and his girls--can the teasing giggling be leading up to them beckoning him over to their side *hopeful look*--great menage-a-trois dynamics; I really like Morgana's sexuality being released and expressed, reinforcing her healing from the past and embracing the present and future; Charis' divine sub positions--yum! and as I said last chapter, Severus is one lucky wizard... *sighing* Lovely, dynamic, lemony chapter as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
As I began reading this chapter I was so surprised that I had to go back and read the end of the previous chapter to be sure I understood what had happened... which, of course, I didn't, but I didn't know that until Severus woke up that I realized it was his dream. You two ladies are masters of the twisty plot. Well done!
Dreaming as he had been, I was glad he allowed himself to carry his dream to fruition in the shower. Perhaps this "Sweet Release" will help him get through the coming storm. Soon he will have to kill Dumbledore and then endure his tenure as Headmaster until the entire house of cards comes falling down.
I was very happy for him when heard Charis and Morgana talking and giggling in their activated mirrors. It would be very sweet if his dream became a reality after all is said and done. But I'm not kidding myself one tiny bit that I can predict just what you two have in mind for these three dear people. The only thing I'm sure of right now is that I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update.
Thank you for a very nice chapter!!!
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
It's a relief for Morgana and Charis that they have finally and truly shared their love for each other. And not only a relief for the two of them, but for Severus as well, I think. He has such strong feelings for both of them, and I think knowing that they have declared their love and cemented their relationship has given him peace of mind that they will be all right no matter what happens.
He loved those two girls dearly in his own special way. They would never know, of course, but he hoped that every now and then, they would remember him with fondness.
This chapter has really touched my heart. I don't know what will happen to Severus, and it makes me sad to think of him being alone. I hope he can find something or someone to "hang onto" as future events unfold. Be kind to him, ladies. Be kind.Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Mmmn... beautiful! Love their love-making, giving and sharing to each other the way each one needs, and Severus witnessing it--some wizards have all the luck! What a lovely way to bring in the New Year!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
I love this story even more than the last one.
I have no idea how the two of you do it but I am grateful that you do.
Sorry for not leaving reviews before now, but it is often difficult to find words for my appreciation! Rest assured that I always eagerly await the next instalment.
Such a beautiful and unusual story... the pair of you need to create a universe of your own! I'm sure we could expect great things from such imaginations! Perhaps just as great as the universe that brought your two formidable minds together!
Thank you.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
‘When the rope dissolves and we let go of each other, neither of you will be able to convey what you have learnt here today,’ Dumbledore explained. ‘You will have a faint memory of our conversation with Kreacher, but trying to remember the details will be like trying to remember a dream. The harder you try, the further will it drift away. And unless we three stand here once more, with our hands entwined, you will never be able to remember.’Damn. I wish the girls had not had to agree to take that vow. But if they hadn't, then he would have Obliviated them. I hope they really will be safer not remembering the prophecy.I can't help but wish Severus didn't have to spend New Year's Eve with only a bottle of Ogden's to keep him company while he watches his girls coming to understand the depth of their feelings for each other. With Severus already upstairs and the girls on their way up the stairs, I wonder if they'll run into each other? I'm off to the next chapter to find out. :^)Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
With Grindling moving to Greece for good, I guess there's no way he will be a regular part of either of the girls' lives. Sometimes I think it's better just to move on and cut your losses, but I know Charis and Morgana will be sad when they realize he has left his position at the Ministry and packed up lock, stock, and barrel.
That was a lovely spell that Charis created to permanently join the girls' star necklaces together. It was pretty cool the way Morgana's star glowed Ravenclaw blue and Charis' glowed Slytherin green. I was tickled when Charis solved the riddle of the prophecy- all that time studying Astronomy really paid off! Now Dumbledore wants them to wait a week. Perhaps he does want to do some research of his own.
I'm glad Morgana has a new Patronus- a majestic black feline is much better than her old Peacock. It's very telling that they have such similar Patronuses, isn't it? It seems like their world is settling into something solid and stable, but with Grindling out of the picture (for now, anyway) I'm wondering what Severus will do? Poor man is damned if he does and damned if he doesn't. Speaking of Severus... what is he doing right now?
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
It seems that it has taken tonight's events and their outcomes to bring Severus to the point where he can relax enough to realize that Charis and Morgana love each other. But I'm not sure if they can be happy with only each other. Grindling loves Charis, and I think he has very strong feelings for Morgana as well. Charis loves Severus, and Morgana feels very safe with him. Severus loves Charis and Morgana. And I have absolutely no idea how this is going to work out. There are a number of permutations that come to mind, and one of them is that Severus, Charis, and Morgana become a threesome family. Or Grindling could make for a foursome family. Or Grindling could find himself with Narcissa when all hell breaks loose and Lucius ends up dead or in prison for the rest of his life. Or if Severus dies, then Grindling, Charis and Morgana could make a life together.This emotional awakening Severus has undergone, leaves me feeling very afraid for him. I fear he will go willingly to meet death so long as he thinks "his girls" are safe and happy. Is he falling into well of dark resignation?Thank you for this thought provoking chapter, ladies. I still don't have any idea how this will all turn out, and now I have an even longer list of possible outcomes. You are masters of mystery!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
The place where Ravenclaws always took comfort and solitude: the library.' This had e tearing up! And the delicious lemony, Snapey goodness-sene has me saying, Merlin's balls, sevs_starsisters, yes, yes, yes! and more, more, more! *taking a deep satisfied sigh* Thank you! (and Miss Charis needs to heed Sev's advice for her and Morgana--speaking of which, can't wait for Sev's jetsetting over to Malfoy manor, maybe Ms Morgana needs some *special* attention too from the Potions master--he is suppose to take care of both his girls *decadent cackle* Lovely, yummy chapter, as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Poor, dear Grindling--lovely moments and chemistry and trust between these two, only to be breathtakingly blown away with the scene between Morgana and Severus--yes, yes, yes! Could feel Morgana breaking through and liberating herself with Severus *perfect, bloody f------ perfect* Thank you!! xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Now I see what you meant when you told me that Severus would feel pretty guilty... but I have to wonder just how guilty he really felt. Still and all, Morgana is free from the weight of a millstone named Lucius Malfoy, and Severus has promised that Narcissa will not bother her again. Even crazy Bellatrix served a useful purpose. Thanks to her, Grindling has heard Narcissa say the words that set him free... at least I hope he is free from Narcissa's machinations. In the study, Severus told Morgana to ‘Enjoy a Malfoy-free life. Spend time with the ones who love you the most.’ He left before she could ask who he meant, and then I remembered that Grindling had told her that he wished things could have been different. Soooo... could it be that Grindling has a bit of a crush on Morgana, or is he still in love with the memory of Narcissa... or will he return to Charis? They will see each other because they're trying to solve the Prophesy, but what will they think about the things that have happened in the last few hours? Charis will be thinking about "her boss" and her former teacher. Morgana will be thinking about her former teacher. Narcissa will be thinking about wringing her sister's neck, and mourning the loss of perhaps the only opportunity to regain her husband's freedom and their lost stature in the ranks of the purebloods. Severus will be thinking about both Charis and Morgana... I wish I knew what was going through Severus' mind in regard to both of "his girls." I still can't shake the feeling that he really holds romantic thoughts about Charis, but I have to say you ladies really do keep the waters muddied up enough that I can't ever be sure. Maybe Morgana and Grindling will be attracted to each other, and... *sigh*What is going to go on at Malfoy Manor will all those Death Eaters still there? Oh what a tangled web we weave....Great chapter. As always!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Hot dayum! Hot DAYUM! I am so damned happy that Severus and Charis had their "alone time" in the library... and he was so tender and made sure she had the orgasm of her life before he had his.‘The stars,’ he said and pointed at his throat as if to indicate a necklace he was wearing. ‘Renew the charm. Wear them. The both of you.’He still cares for Charis. His kiss on her cheek and urgging her and Morganna to wear their star necklaces proves it beyond all doubt.Thanks, I needed that! *grinning*Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Of all the rooms for Narcissa to choose from... I wonder just what Narcissa knows and what she doesn't know about Morgana and Lucius? Could Narcissa have some other motive we don't yet know about? I don't think so, but I have learned not to underestimate you ladies, either.In the meantime, what are Snape and Charis doing in thier search for the meaning of the prophesy? Sooner or later one of them is bound to say or do something that comfirms for the other that there are still real and deep emotions involved between. I can't wait to see what you have in store for our lovely characters next? Hope to see the next chapter soon!!!Berh
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
I hope she opens up. It would be good for her to get it out. Grindling is a complex character; not quite sure what to make of him yet. I'm glad you're still writing this story, I love following it. 5 stars.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Well, Charis got the info she needed. She just needs to remember her astronomy now.I've known this pair of stories have been out there for some time but avoided reading them because they were not about canon-centric characters. But I took a chance and I've really enjoyed them. I look forward to finding out what happens. Keep up the good work!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for taking a chance on our stories, we're really thrilled you've enjoyed them and we hope you'll stick with the sequel. Thanks again for your support, it means a lot!
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
May I say I never expected you two to answer ALL my reviews since I left a ton of them at one time. But thank you. If I've put you behind on your writing, feel free to blame me.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We try to answer all our reviews. It's so nice to get feedback, and we like to show that we appreciate your thoughts. And no worries, you haven't slowed us down. Next chapter is being beta-read at the moment and we have done plenty of plotting. Lemons ahead ;-)
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
Ah lemon....one of my favorite flavors!
I think Charis is far too forgiving (maybe I just don't like Grindling).TeeHee, Severus is SOOOOO BAD. I love him.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He's a naughty boy! and that's why we love him, right?
Oooh the plot thickens. I think I've figured out most of the prophecy, now to watch as the characters figure it out.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Let's see if you're right :)
I am glad it was cleared up that Morgana is NOT the one Grindling was talking about. She has enough worries. And go her for standing up for her friend.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Yes, Morgana kicked ass :)