XXIX: Advent Events
Chapter 29 of 37
sevs_starsisters*COMPLETED* The Star Sisters have left Hogwarts and are now facing a new world with new opportunities and new kinds of danger. And also for the Half-Blood Prince, times are changing. (This story is the sequel to Star Sisters.)
Chapter XXIX: Advent Events
It was a bitterly cold Wednesday evening in early December when Argus Filch, the ugly sneering caretaker of Hogwarts, unexpectedly interrupted Snape working his way through marking a pile of essays on Hinkypunks and how to avoid them. Snape wasn't impressed by the disruption, but he knew that the craggy old caretaker wouldn't dare disturb him unless he had a very good reason.
'I know Professor Slughorn is the Potions master now, sir, but he won't look at these no matter how many times I've asked,' the caretaker complained, placing his latest haul of confiscated items onto Snape's desk: illicit potions from sources unknown.
'Thinks I'm being paranoid,' he went on. 'But I always know when students are up to no good! I'd bet my last Knut this lot comes from Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes, but I can't prove it. My Secrecy Sensors can detect jinxes and concealment charms, but they won't tell me what's inside a bottle of potion.'
'I am quite aware how Secrecy Sensors work, thank you, Mr Filch,' Snape interrupted the caretaker's lament and suspiciously eyed the phials, small bottles and jars that were now standing on his desk. They were labelled as perfumes, cough potions and body lotions and looked innocuous enough. Surely, whoever had ordered them was now sulking in their dormitory for having their parcels intercepted. But Snape had to admire the caretaker's resolve. There were indeed rumours going around that love potions had made their way into the castle. Maybe Filch was on to something after all.
'I will have a look at the contents. Later tonight,' he added, as he noticed the older man's crestfallen expression. Obviously, Filch had expected to be given an answer in a blink of an eye. The poor Squib must have spent too much time around McGonagall and Flitwick. He truly believed that magic was all about foolish wand-waving. He had no idea about the subtle art of potion making.
'Knew I could count on you, Professor Snape, sir,' Filch muttered before he made his way back to the door and almost took a bow before he exited.
Snape sneered. It didn't surprise him that Slughorn had shown no interest in aiding Filch. Slughorn had always been the type of person to do the bare minimum to get by in any situation, and if he could get others to do it for him, even better. He was very skilled in the art of subtly manipulating people to his own end and surrounding himself with the most influential people, or at least, people who may be beneficial to him in some way.
The door opened once more, and Snape fully expected Filch to return with yet another armful of phials and jars, but to his surprise and utter annoyance the door frame was filled with the corpulent figure of Horace Slughorn himself. Talking of the devil!
'Oh, Severus, I'm so glad I found you,' the cheery old wizard smiled, his cheeks shining like polished apples. ‛Not busy, I hope?'
Snape raised an eyebrow. No, of course not. A desk cluttered with stacks of essays and potion phials most certainly meant that he was not busy.
'I see you can't tear yourself away from potions,' Slughorn continued in his booming voice, pointing at the phials. Then he frowned. 'So Filch came running to you. You must learn how to say no, dear lad. The caretaker is overreacting.' He picked up on of the phials and chuckled. 'I mean, it clearly says that this is a cough potion.'
'We will see about that,' Snape replied curtly and picked up his quill again. If Slughorn had come to make small talk, Snape would ignore him. He was, after all, busy.
'Put that quill down, Severus dear boy. I didn't come here to watch you work.'
'Then, pray tell, what you did come for?' Snape asked, marking the essay in front of him with a big T.
'I came to invite you to my Christmas party.'
Slughorn beamed in a way that suggested he'd just given Severus a big, fat bag of Galleons and was waiting for eternal thanks. Snape, however, merely put down his quill.
'I beg your pardon.'
'My Christmas party,' Slughorn repeated. 'You must remember them. I used to have them when you were a student here.'
Snape sneered. Oh, he remembered Slughorn's parties all too well. Not that he had ever been invited to one. Those gatherings had been Slughorn's way of filtering out the brightest and best, not to mention well-connected, students. Snape had been a gifted potioneer as a student, yet Slughorn had refused to give him the credit he'd deserved. He had been too busy fussing over Lily, who had been his favourite from the very first day. And when he had handed out invitations to the so-called "Slug Club" to his most gifted students, Slughorn had blatantly ignored Snape. Obviously, he had felt that Snape lacked the popularity or connections to warrant an invite.
'Friday the twentieth,' Slughorn carried on, oblivious to Snape's bitterness. 'Eight o'clock. Dress robes. I assume you own a set nowadays.'
With his arms crossed in front of his chest and a triumphant smile on his face, Snape leant back in his chair.
'I am afraid I will not be able to make it,' he informed Slughorn. 'I am otherwise engaged.'
'Oh. You are?' Slughorn asked incredulously. Curiosity was etched into every line of his face, but Snape had no intention of telling the Potions professor about his plans. It was none of Slughorn's business that he had been invited to Malfoy Manor the very same evening, where Narcissa would be holding an intimate dinner for "close friends who have stuck by me in these troubled times". Snape felt obliged to go, even if he wasn't especially looking forward to it. Fancy dinners at Malfoy manor far too often left behind a bitter aftertaste in his mouth. But the disappointed look on Slughorn's face was priceless and would most certainly make up for anything that could happen at the manor.
'Well, ahem, if you change your mind, the invitation stands,' Slughorn declared in what was, for him, a very uncharacteristic low tone. He was labouring under the impression that an invitation to the Slug Club was a supreme honour and it was clear the old man was not used to people saying no. That Snape had turned him down was a hard blow to Slughorn's ego. For Snape, it was small vengeance, but it made him feel good, nonetheless, and when Slughorn had bid him goodnight, Snape decided to celebrate his victory with a nice glass of Ogden's. The essays could wait, and so could Flich's so-called love potions. Most probably, neither of them were really worth the while.
Glass in hand, Snape meandered around his office, every now and then picking up a book or journal to casually leaf through it. But nothing seemed to catch his interest, not even the latest issue of Potions Monthly or the article in the Prophet about the latest Death Eater activities. In the end, he left everything where it was, essays and love potions on his desk and books and journals wherever they were lying, and retired to his quarters, where he made a beeline for the little silver mirror that was propped up on the mantel piece. It had been far too long since he had heard anything from his girls. All he knew was that Charis was busy deciphering the prophecy. As for Morgana, he knew even less. He didn't even know if she was still frequenting Malfoy manor.
Snape felt a stab of guilt. The day his girls had left Hogwarts, he had promised himself that he would keep an eye on them. But with the Dark Lord demanding his presence ever more frequently, Dumbledore yanking his chain and Draco Malfoy sneaking around the castle at night, Snape simply had not had the time. Tonight, however, he would take the time, and should anyone dare come knocking at his door, they would find themselves in the hospital wing for the rest of the year after he'd slipped some laxative into their morning pumpkin juice. He was, after all, a gifted potioneer. Madam Pomfrey would never find as much as a trace.
Settling back in his favourite armchair with his refilled glass on the table beside him, Snape put up his feet and took the mirror in his hands. To his disappointment, however, he caught sight of nothing more than his own reflection: sallow skin, greasy black hair that hung in curtains around his face and black, bottomless eyes that defied the theory that a person's eyes were a window to their soul. Because no one would ever be able to read anything in those eyes, neither joy nor sorrow. There was, however, the tiniest spark of excitement in them when Snape's reflection became foggy and the image in the mirror split in two, revealing two young witches, one blonde, one red-haired. They were both wearing their nightgowns, Charis a light blue one and Morgana one of the darkest green. They were both holding a steaming mug, most probably containing hot chocolate. It almost seemed as if they were having a virtual sleepover.
'Sorry we had to change our plans,' Morgana apologised to her friend. 'Merlin knows why Moody insists on a training session at four thirty in the morning. How getting up ridiculously early helps build one's character is beyond me. But hey, this is nice, too. And I can go to work without waking you.'
Charis nodded. 'Those mirrors are ingenious! What would we do without them?'
'Sulk and drink this fabulous hot chocolate for comfort?' Morgana suggested.
Charis giggled. 'Any excuse to drink hot chocolate, eh?' She took a sip and made the most unladylike noise. 'Merlin's balls, this is fabulous! Do you think Remus will give us the recipe for this blend?'
'No way. He'll take that to his grave,' Morgana replied, and Snape took a healthy gulp of Ogden's.
As if there would ever be a grave wide enough to bury Lupin's fat arse, he thought viciously. He very much disliked the fact that his girls had taken such a liking to the werewolf.
Charis put down her mug and contemplated her friend for a few moments. 'You look tired, sweetie,' she said finally. 'Moody seems to be working you hard. You must be exhausted.'
Morgana shrugged. 'At least, he has stopped throwing hexes at us,' she said, which caused Snape to huff. The burn on the girl's left hand had healed nicely, but Snape had still not forgiven Moody for putting one of his trainees into danger. Not only once, but twice.
'How are things in your part of the Ministry?' Morgana asked.
'Not great, if I'm honest,' Charis replied, her shoulders slumping. 'Work is... just work. But Grindling and I are just having no luck deciphering the prophecy at all. I can tell he's getting frustrated by it. I mean, he's the one who made the prophecy in the first place, and now he can't figure out what it means. Feels like everywhere we turn, it's a dead end.'
'I see.'
There was a slight tremble in Morgana's voice, but Snape doubted that Charis had picked up on it. He didn't think that she had seen the minuscule twitch of a muscle right under the Slytherin's left eye, either. But he had noticed, and it annoyed him that the mention of Grindling Gibbons would have such an effect on Morgana.
'Has Gri... Have you talked to any another Seers?' she asked.
Charis shook her head. 'It's a matter of pride for Grindling... and for me too, I admit. We Ravenclaws like to try every avenue on our own before we ask others. But if we have no answers by Christmas, I was going to suggest we ask one of his old friends in Greece for advice.'
'Do you know anything about his friends?' Morgana wondered.
'No, not really,' Charis admitted. 'I know he has some relatives in Greece and some friends in France, Italy and Luxembourg. But he doesn't talk about them much.'
Once more, Morgana nodded. 'He seems very private.'
She didn't know much about Grindling either, even though they had spent a few very private moments together. The biggest secret of his that she knew about was his love for Narcissa. And that was the only secret Charis mustn't know about.
'Yes, he is very private,' Charis confirmed. And I'm glad we've been able to move forward after what happened...'
She trailed off, and Morgana chewed on her lower lip.
'Move forward?' she started hesitantly. 'Are you... you and Grindling... What are you? Colleagues, friends?'
'Just friends,' Charis replied. 'It would not be fair on either of us to pursue anything more than that. Let's just say, Grindling is a complex man who has things from his past he needs to work through.'
You have no idea just how much he has to work through, Morgana thought, desperately wishing that she weren't a part of Grindling's dilemma. He was a good man, there was no doubt about that, and he deserved a sweet and loving woman like Charis. And Charis deserved a man who had the means to bed her on roses. They would be good for each other, Morgana was quite certain of that. Hopefully, when the whole mess with Narcissa was over, Grindling would be brave enough to ask Charis for a second chance. And hopefully, she would find it in her heart to grant him his wish. Where it would leave her, Morgana didn't care about.
'How about you, sweetie? Isn't there a beau in your life?' Charis wondered. She had seen her friend change over the last few months. Her hairstyle had changed and so had her clothes. She finally seemed to have dropped the tomboy attitude she had adopted during their last year at Hogwarts.
Morgana blinked and looked at her friend in confusion. 'Sorry, what?'
Charis giggled. 'Your new look. Your hair, those lovely red curls. I was wondering if there was a wizard hiding in the shadows you haven't been telling me about.'
Morgana snorted. 'Most certainly not,' she exclaimed.
Charis groaned. 'What is it with wizards? Are they all blind or something? Hello? Two gorgeous, single witches here! Ready to be taken!'
'Speak for yourself,' Morgana replied. 'I don't want to have a man, wizard, Muggle or troll. They're trouble. I'm glad if they keep their distance.'
There we go again, Snape thought with a sigh. He had overheard a conversation like this before. That time, Morgana had declared that she was planning on becoming a lesbian. Heaven forbid! What a waste it would be. But Charis was right, in his opinion. What was it with wizards? Why weren't they lining up in front of those girls' doors, offering their very souls to be allowed to take them out? And why did the girls insist on falling for men who only broke their hearts? Snape sighed for a second time. Maybe Morgana had a point. Maybe men weren't worth the heartache after all.
'Hey, I don't suppose you had a letter from Hogwarts this week, did you?' Charis suddenly asked.
Morgana shook her head. 'Did they offer you a job?' she asked jokingly. 'Divination? Astronomy?'
Charis giggled. 'Not exactly! It's a bit strange, really. They have a new Potions master this year. Horace Slughorn. Apparently, he was Potions master at Hogwarts years ago and has returned, and Snape is now teaching Defence Against the Dark Arts.'
'Snape teaches DADA?' Morgana interrupted her friend. 'And we got Umbridge for our last year? Now, that's not fair!'
'Tell me about it!' Charis agreed. 'It would have been so nice to see Snape casting spells instead of stirring potions.'
Morgana grinned. 'You'd watch Snape clean up owl droppings and enjoy it. Merlin, so would I!'
Both girls laughed, and Snape allowed himself the tiniest of smiles. They hadn't forgotten him then, his girls.
'Anyway,' Charis continued. 'As I was saying, this Horace Slughorn apparently used to have little gatherings for selected pupils when he was a teacher. Now he has decided to resurrect the tradition and has invited me!'
'Guess he wants to use you as a good example,' Morgana concluded. 'With your grades!'
Charis blushed slightly. 'Well, he mentioned something about "mingling with the brightest and best at Hogwarts and advising on your career path and making some new connections for the future". I have no idea what to expect, really, and I think it's a bit weird that he has invited me, seeing as I have never even met Professor Slughorn, but I guess it's rude to say no. I'm allowed to bring a plus one. Would you like to come with me?'
'And serve as a bad example?' Morgana asked sardonically but then grinned. 'Sure! When is it?'
'Twentieth of December,' Charis informed her, and Morgana's face fell.
'Oh, I'm sorry. I don't think I can make it. I, um, I think I'll be working.'
Again, there was that tiny muscle twitching under her left eye, and Snape had a bad premonition about the twentieth of December. He would have to check with Narcissa just who had been invited to her little gathering.
'What a shame,' Charis said, sounding truly disappointed. 'Grindling can't come either. He was invited, but he had something else planned already.'
'So I am your second choice?' Morgana asked in a mock-offended tone. 'So much for friendship.'
'Oh, don't be silly!' Charis said. 'Grindling and I both got our invitations at work. Naturally, I asked if he was going.'
Naturally. Snape downed his Ogden's with a sour expression on his face, suddenly putting two and two together. Suddenly, it seemed superfluous to talk to Narcissa. He could figure out the guest list and the purpose of her little party by himself. Surely, she wanted to show off the little match she had made: Grindling Gibbons, old friend of the family, and Morgana Belakane, the last member of an ancient Wizarding family. Snape sneered. After all, it had been he himself who had given Narcissa the idea of making a lady out of Morgana and introducing her to pureblood society. He had, however, not imagined that she would go so far as to set the girl up with another pureblood, least of all Grindling Gibbons. Snape screwed up his face. He'd witnessed matchmaking at Malfoy manor before. He had no desire to go through that once more. He might just have to make his excuses to Narcissa. Slughorn's little gathering, however, seemed most appealing all of a sudden.
'Never mind,' Charis continued, obviously unaware of her former teacher's musings. 'Guess I'll have to brave it on my own then. It's going to be seriously weird going back to Hogwarts. Seeing all those people again...'
'Just don't go down to the dungeons,' Morgana gave a word of warning. 'You never know who you'll bump into. Draco and his cronies are still around. Then again, I bet that little ferret has been invited to the party as well.'
'Or maybe not,' said Charis. 'Remember what Professor Slughorn said in his letter? The party is about "mingling with the brightest and best at Hogwarts". Surely, that definition excludes Draco Malfoy.'
They laughed, and then Charis addressed another, somewhat more trivial dilemma. 'What do I wear, though? It'd be wrong to wear something Muggle, wouldn't it?'
'As long as it isn't your "Muggle-born and proud of it" T-shirt, I guess you'll be fine,' Morgana pointed out. 'Seriously, though, Muggles do make nice clothes, no?
'Of course,' Charis confirmed, proud as always to be able to show her friend something nice from the Muggle world. 'I do have my LBD.'
'Your what?' Morgana asked.
'Little black dress,' Charis explained. 'I could always wear it with a cloak. Shall I put it on, and you can tell me what you think?'
'Sure, go ahead,' Morgana said rather unenthusiastically. She'd never been one to enjoy fashion. Snape, however, grew interested. He hadn't eaten much that day, and the two glasses of Ogden's he had downed had somewhat shifted his sense of decency. He would very much enjoy seeing Charis in the aforementioned little black dress.
Charis riffled through her wardrobe, sending clothes flying to the left and right, wriggled out of her pyjamas and finally squeezed into the dress.
'How do I look?' she asked, giving a little twirl in front of the mirror.
'Sssmoking!' Morgana commented, making a purring noise which almost made Snape drop his glass. He had to get a grip on himself. Those two girls in combination with Firewhisky had an effect on him which he barely dared admit to himself.
As the girls continued to chat and laugh, Snape mulled over his options regarding the twentieth of December. He was obliged to see Narcissa, but more than that, as her friend he wanted the evening to be a success and wanted to look out for her. The fact that Morgana seemed to be a guest of honour meant he definitely had to be there. He needed to look out for the red-haired witch, too.
But hearing that Charis was going to the Slug Club on the very same night made him feel torn. He wanted to go there, too. He wanted to see Charis in her little black dress and make sure that Draco Malfoy couldn't somehow gatecrash the party and start slinging hexes at her.
He supposed it wouldn't be impossible to show his face at one event for a time and then go to the other later. That way, Slughorn would be placated, and he, Snape, would have fulfilled his promise to look out for both his girls at the same time.
By the time the girls settled down to sleep, the decision had been made. December the twentieth looked like it would be a very interesting night indeed.
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112 Reviews | 6.64/10 Average
Great start. Albums would really sacrifice anyone to win the war. I hope both of a star sisters find their happy ending and the war doesn't destroy their souls.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Now you reminded us of that we should wirte a Part 3. :)
well, what can I say? This was a blast from beginning to end. Loved your new characters and how the Malfoys once again play a big part in Morganna's love life. Severus what a naughty man coming up with the three mirrors and him being a bit of a peeping Tom lol. Least he kept his word and did ensure the star sisters safety and nice to see him hinting at them to both wear their star necklaces once more.
The scene where the girls on Christmas Eve made that special spell and vow was beautifully written. Also the Scenes on new years eve and after were tenderly done and not in a harsh way but in a loving one. Even Snapes watching was done with a special feel and not pervy at all. Shall look forward to read more in this series and see if Snape can loose his dark thoughts and become a man who can accept love in the end and be rid of the Lily Ghost.
Thanks for writing and creating this lovely series. Really enjoyed reading it and sorry I did not get time to review every chapter. Consider this worth a hundred reviews.
Congrats.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
The relationship between Charis and Morgana has become a beautiful thing, and I'm very happy for them and glad that Severus will continue to watch over his girls. One day I hope his heart will be healed and that he will remember how to love. And allow himself to be loved.I'm sad this story has come to an end (for now), but I'm so happy to know that you aren't done with these characters—I've grown quite fond of them. For now we will let them sleep. I want to let you know how much I've enjoyed Star Sisters and now Shooting Stars. You are very gifted writers, and I thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. I wish you both good days and much happiness. May real life calm down for you, and allow you the opportunity to once again weave this magic you do so well.I give you my thanks with much gratitude and lots of hugs,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Mmmm... I think I'd like a cup of tea and a biscuit after reading this chapter! Or perhaps a cigarette? Smoking hot writing, ladies. Thank you from the bottom of my... err... heart!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Gorgeous chapter, and I appreciated Snape leaving them be and also not taking himself in hand. As he realises the feeling blossoming in his chest, my heart ached for him a little bit. Then followed "A love he had no part of, a love he would never be able to share with anyone" which summed it all up and put a lump in my throat. Ah, Snape. Forever the tragic anti-hero. Lovely writing.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
I enjoyed your creation of Dumbledore's vow and its execution - gentle and manipulative - much like the man himself. I love that Dumbledore also set up their New Year's celebration with Snape, even though, so far at least, Snape hasn't got in on the action! The tenderness between Morgana and Charis is lovely. Reading on...
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
"The way Ravenclaws seemed to be fascinated by the stars was simply adorable" bahaha! Pity that I didn't realise the significance of the constellation Leo; I've let down team Ravenclaw! At least I'd managed to suss out the connection to Slytherin's locket via the house-elf, thus tracing it back to Black. This is a lovely chapter brimming with charm and intimacy between the Star Sisters, and their spell-casting was beautiful and poignant. I also enjoyed Morgana's metaphor for moving on at the end of the chapter. I must say, though, that you've plotted your story meticulously and have been wonderfully crafty with the prophecy; not just with its puzzle, but also making your story fit seamlessly into canon... After all, we were never told how Dumbledore came to discover the locket. I take my hat off to you, ladies!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Now it's time to turn fantasy into reality for Severus and his girls--can the teasing giggling be leading up to them beckoning him over to their side *hopeful look*--great menage-a-trois dynamics; I really like Morgana's sexuality being released and expressed, reinforcing her healing from the past and embracing the present and future; Charis' divine sub positions--yum! and as I said last chapter, Severus is one lucky wizard... *sighing* Lovely, dynamic, lemony chapter as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
As I began reading this chapter I was so surprised that I had to go back and read the end of the previous chapter to be sure I understood what had happened... which, of course, I didn't, but I didn't know that until Severus woke up that I realized it was his dream. You two ladies are masters of the twisty plot. Well done!
Dreaming as he had been, I was glad he allowed himself to carry his dream to fruition in the shower. Perhaps this "Sweet Release" will help him get through the coming storm. Soon he will have to kill Dumbledore and then endure his tenure as Headmaster until the entire house of cards comes falling down.
I was very happy for him when heard Charis and Morgana talking and giggling in their activated mirrors. It would be very sweet if his dream became a reality after all is said and done. But I'm not kidding myself one tiny bit that I can predict just what you two have in mind for these three dear people. The only thing I'm sure of right now is that I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update.
Thank you for a very nice chapter!!!
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
It's a relief for Morgana and Charis that they have finally and truly shared their love for each other. And not only a relief for the two of them, but for Severus as well, I think. He has such strong feelings for both of them, and I think knowing that they have declared their love and cemented their relationship has given him peace of mind that they will be all right no matter what happens.
He loved those two girls dearly in his own special way. They would never know, of course, but he hoped that every now and then, they would remember him with fondness.
This chapter has really touched my heart. I don't know what will happen to Severus, and it makes me sad to think of him being alone. I hope he can find something or someone to "hang onto" as future events unfold. Be kind to him, ladies. Be kind.Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Mmmn... beautiful! Love their love-making, giving and sharing to each other the way each one needs, and Severus witnessing it--some wizards have all the luck! What a lovely way to bring in the New Year!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
I love this story even more than the last one.
I have no idea how the two of you do it but I am grateful that you do.
Sorry for not leaving reviews before now, but it is often difficult to find words for my appreciation! Rest assured that I always eagerly await the next instalment.
Such a beautiful and unusual story... the pair of you need to create a universe of your own! I'm sure we could expect great things from such imaginations! Perhaps just as great as the universe that brought your two formidable minds together!
Thank you.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
‘When the rope dissolves and we let go of each other, neither of you will be able to convey what you have learnt here today,’ Dumbledore explained. ‘You will have a faint memory of our conversation with Kreacher, but trying to remember the details will be like trying to remember a dream. The harder you try, the further will it drift away. And unless we three stand here once more, with our hands entwined, you will never be able to remember.’Damn. I wish the girls had not had to agree to take that vow. But if they hadn't, then he would have Obliviated them. I hope they really will be safer not remembering the prophecy.I can't help but wish Severus didn't have to spend New Year's Eve with only a bottle of Ogden's to keep him company while he watches his girls coming to understand the depth of their feelings for each other. With Severus already upstairs and the girls on their way up the stairs, I wonder if they'll run into each other? I'm off to the next chapter to find out. :^)Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
With Grindling moving to Greece for good, I guess there's no way he will be a regular part of either of the girls' lives. Sometimes I think it's better just to move on and cut your losses, but I know Charis and Morgana will be sad when they realize he has left his position at the Ministry and packed up lock, stock, and barrel.
That was a lovely spell that Charis created to permanently join the girls' star necklaces together. It was pretty cool the way Morgana's star glowed Ravenclaw blue and Charis' glowed Slytherin green. I was tickled when Charis solved the riddle of the prophecy- all that time studying Astronomy really paid off! Now Dumbledore wants them to wait a week. Perhaps he does want to do some research of his own.
I'm glad Morgana has a new Patronus- a majestic black feline is much better than her old Peacock. It's very telling that they have such similar Patronuses, isn't it? It seems like their world is settling into something solid and stable, but with Grindling out of the picture (for now, anyway) I'm wondering what Severus will do? Poor man is damned if he does and damned if he doesn't. Speaking of Severus... what is he doing right now?
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
It seems that it has taken tonight's events and their outcomes to bring Severus to the point where he can relax enough to realize that Charis and Morgana love each other. But I'm not sure if they can be happy with only each other. Grindling loves Charis, and I think he has very strong feelings for Morgana as well. Charis loves Severus, and Morgana feels very safe with him. Severus loves Charis and Morgana. And I have absolutely no idea how this is going to work out. There are a number of permutations that come to mind, and one of them is that Severus, Charis, and Morgana become a threesome family. Or Grindling could make for a foursome family. Or Grindling could find himself with Narcissa when all hell breaks loose and Lucius ends up dead or in prison for the rest of his life. Or if Severus dies, then Grindling, Charis and Morgana could make a life together.This emotional awakening Severus has undergone, leaves me feeling very afraid for him. I fear he will go willingly to meet death so long as he thinks "his girls" are safe and happy. Is he falling into well of dark resignation?Thank you for this thought provoking chapter, ladies. I still don't have any idea how this will all turn out, and now I have an even longer list of possible outcomes. You are masters of mystery!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
The place where Ravenclaws always took comfort and solitude: the library.' This had e tearing up! And the delicious lemony, Snapey goodness-sene has me saying, Merlin's balls, sevs_starsisters, yes, yes, yes! and more, more, more! *taking a deep satisfied sigh* Thank you! (and Miss Charis needs to heed Sev's advice for her and Morgana--speaking of which, can't wait for Sev's jetsetting over to Malfoy manor, maybe Ms Morgana needs some *special* attention too from the Potions master--he is suppose to take care of both his girls *decadent cackle* Lovely, yummy chapter, as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Poor, dear Grindling--lovely moments and chemistry and trust between these two, only to be breathtakingly blown away with the scene between Morgana and Severus--yes, yes, yes! Could feel Morgana breaking through and liberating herself with Severus *perfect, bloody f------ perfect* Thank you!! xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Now I see what you meant when you told me that Severus would feel pretty guilty... but I have to wonder just how guilty he really felt. Still and all, Morgana is free from the weight of a millstone named Lucius Malfoy, and Severus has promised that Narcissa will not bother her again. Even crazy Bellatrix served a useful purpose. Thanks to her, Grindling has heard Narcissa say the words that set him free... at least I hope he is free from Narcissa's machinations. In the study, Severus told Morgana to ‘Enjoy a Malfoy-free life. Spend time with the ones who love you the most.’ He left before she could ask who he meant, and then I remembered that Grindling had told her that he wished things could have been different. Soooo... could it be that Grindling has a bit of a crush on Morgana, or is he still in love with the memory of Narcissa... or will he return to Charis? They will see each other because they're trying to solve the Prophesy, but what will they think about the things that have happened in the last few hours? Charis will be thinking about "her boss" and her former teacher. Morgana will be thinking about her former teacher. Narcissa will be thinking about wringing her sister's neck, and mourning the loss of perhaps the only opportunity to regain her husband's freedom and their lost stature in the ranks of the purebloods. Severus will be thinking about both Charis and Morgana... I wish I knew what was going through Severus' mind in regard to both of "his girls." I still can't shake the feeling that he really holds romantic thoughts about Charis, but I have to say you ladies really do keep the waters muddied up enough that I can't ever be sure. Maybe Morgana and Grindling will be attracted to each other, and... *sigh*What is going to go on at Malfoy Manor will all those Death Eaters still there? Oh what a tangled web we weave....Great chapter. As always!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Hot dayum! Hot DAYUM! I am so damned happy that Severus and Charis had their "alone time" in the library... and he was so tender and made sure she had the orgasm of her life before he had his.‘The stars,’ he said and pointed at his throat as if to indicate a necklace he was wearing. ‘Renew the charm. Wear them. The both of you.’He still cares for Charis. His kiss on her cheek and urgging her and Morganna to wear their star necklaces proves it beyond all doubt.Thanks, I needed that! *grinning*Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Of all the rooms for Narcissa to choose from... I wonder just what Narcissa knows and what she doesn't know about Morgana and Lucius? Could Narcissa have some other motive we don't yet know about? I don't think so, but I have learned not to underestimate you ladies, either.In the meantime, what are Snape and Charis doing in thier search for the meaning of the prophesy? Sooner or later one of them is bound to say or do something that comfirms for the other that there are still real and deep emotions involved between. I can't wait to see what you have in store for our lovely characters next? Hope to see the next chapter soon!!!Berh
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
I hope she opens up. It would be good for her to get it out. Grindling is a complex character; not quite sure what to make of him yet. I'm glad you're still writing this story, I love following it. 5 stars.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Well, Charis got the info she needed. She just needs to remember her astronomy now.I've known this pair of stories have been out there for some time but avoided reading them because they were not about canon-centric characters. But I took a chance and I've really enjoyed them. I look forward to finding out what happens. Keep up the good work!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for taking a chance on our stories, we're really thrilled you've enjoyed them and we hope you'll stick with the sequel. Thanks again for your support, it means a lot!
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
May I say I never expected you two to answer ALL my reviews since I left a ton of them at one time. But thank you. If I've put you behind on your writing, feel free to blame me.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We try to answer all our reviews. It's so nice to get feedback, and we like to show that we appreciate your thoughts. And no worries, you haven't slowed us down. Next chapter is being beta-read at the moment and we have done plenty of plotting. Lemons ahead ;-)
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
Ah lemon....one of my favorite flavors!
I think Charis is far too forgiving (maybe I just don't like Grindling).TeeHee, Severus is SOOOOO BAD. I love him.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He's a naughty boy! and that's why we love him, right?
Oooh the plot thickens. I think I've figured out most of the prophecy, now to watch as the characters figure it out.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Let's see if you're right :)
I am glad it was cleared up that Morgana is NOT the one Grindling was talking about. She has enough worries. And go her for standing up for her friend.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Yes, Morgana kicked ass :)