XXXIV: New Year’s Solution
Chapter 34 of 37
sevs_starsisters*COMPLETED* The Star Sisters have left Hogwarts and are now facing a new world with new opportunities and new kinds of danger. And also for the Half-Blood Prince, times are changing. (This story is the sequel to Star Sisters.)
Chapter XXXIV: New Year's Solution
The lights were dimmed in the kitchen of Grimmauld Place. Dumbledore, Charis and Morgana were sitting at the table, each holding onto a cup of tea, each absorbed in their own thoughts. They had learned a lot over the last couple of hours, yet very little seemed to make sense. Kreacher, the house elf, was in his cupboard, muttering and sniffling.
The clock struck nine.
'What a way to spend New Year's Eve,' Morgana sighed. She and Charis had been at Grimmauld place since three o'clock, and as far as she was concerned, the whole afternoon had been a complete waste of time. After all their expectations, Kreacher had mumbled incoherently about things which, as far as she was concerned, had no relevance whatsoever.
Dumbledore's lips quirked, and his blue eyes twinkled over his half-moon glasses. 'This has been a very valuable few hours. I don't think either of you can appreciate just how valuable.'
'What have we learnt, really?' Morgana retorted, somewhat impatiently. 'The elf didn't make much sense. I think he really has lost his mind.'
'I don't understand why Regulus would have a locket, or why that is so important,' Charis added. 'And why would he hide it in a cave?'
'And how can a locket be the key to bring down The Da... You-Know-Who?'
Dumbledore put down his cup and looked intently at the two young witches. Of course, they would have questions. Sadly, they were not questions he was able to answer just yet.
'These questions are nothing that you two need to worry about. You have cracked the code of the prophecy, you have understood that it is Kreacher who held the answers to the questions only Charis could ask. Leave it to me to put together the pieces of the puzzle. After all, I am not only much more experienced but also much older and, I daresay, wiser than the both of you together.'
Morgana raised a characteristic eyebrow. 'So, that's it, is it? We solve the prophecy, and you're not going to tell us what it even means?'
Charis shot her friend a "shut up!" kind of look, but Dumbledore merely smiled benignly.
'My dear Morgana, there are some things that are too dangerous for either of you to know. You have both been through enough. Let me worry about the prophecy now.'
Morgana felt disgruntled at this and scowled. Meanwhile, Charis, who had been pondering thoughtfully, tried a different approach.
'Kreacher said that Regulus died trying to obtain You-Know-Who's locket from the cave,' she started carefully. 'Lockets usually have something inside them... Maybe there is something inside the locket which is the key to bringing him down?'
Dumbledore's lips quirked once again.
'Of course, it would take a Ravenclaw to make that kind of deductive leap. Yes, one could infer that. However, I will ask you once again not to spend any more time thinking about this.'
Morgana watched the old wizard closely, and Dumbledore could see wariness in her icy blue eyes.
'It is not that I do not trust you, far from it,' he tried to appease her. 'Your services to the Order have been immeasurable in such a short time. And that goes for both of you. But now, I am afraid, you are once more in danger.'
He gave both girls meaningful looks, steepling his fingers as his elbows rested on the old oak table.
'You are now keepers of invaluable information. Information that may very well decide on the outcome of the war. Should the other side become aware of that, they will stop at nothing to make you talk. Therefore, the safest thing would be for you to not remember what you've learnt here today.'
Morgana defiantly crossed her arms. 'Are you planning to Obliviate us?'
Dumbledore shook his head.
'If I did not trust or respect you, then Obliviation would be a natural response,' he answered mildly. 'But I do trust and respect you. Which is why I am seeking your permission to take a certain, special vow with me.'
Morgana had to stop herself from snorting. As if the old wizard ever sought permission to do anything. He was manipulative enough to make Salazar Slytherin proud. When he was done talking, Charis and herself would be convinced that they willingly took the vow he proposed to them. Dumbledore went on.
'Let me reiterate again,' Dumbledore went on. 'What we have discovered tonight is crucial. It would be very damaging if anyone else knew what we know and let it slip to the other side. You are in grave danger. So, please, I beg of you: take a vow with me to keep this information safe. And I swear Regulus' death will not be in vain.'
Charis was the first to speak.
'I trust you, Albus. And if you think that this vow is best for everyone involved, I am willing to take it.'
Dumbledore looked expectantly at Morgana.
'As if there really were a choice,' she muttered.
'Do you not trust me, Morgana?' Dumbledore's tone was still light, but there was a steely edge to it this time. Their eyes met, and just like so many times before, Morgana had the uncanny feeling that Dumbledore could read her every thought.
'I trust you to have the means to bring the Dark Lord down,' she replied in the end, weighing her words carefully.
Dumbledore inclined his head. 'And that is good enough for me.'
Dumbledore was the one in charge, grabbing hold of Morgana's right wrist and instructing her to hold on to Charis', who in her turn was to hold on to Dumbledore's. Now they were all three linked, equal and part of a whole, and when Dumbledore spoke the ancient words, a fiery rope bound their hands, preventing them from letting go.
'When the rope dissolves and we let go of each other, neither of you will be able to convey what you have learnt here today,' Dumbledore explained. 'You will have a faint memory of our conversation with Kreacher, but trying to remember the details will be like trying to remember a dream. The harder you try, the further will it drift away. And unless we three stand here once more, with our hands entwined, you will never be able to remember.'
He turned his head and focused on the blonde witch on his right.
'Are you, Charis Byrne, willing to take this vow that will keep our secret safe as well as yourself?' he asked sombrely.
'I am,' Charis replied, her voice not more than a whisper yet still perfectly clear.
'And are you, Morgana Belakane, willing to do the same?' Dumbledore asked the redhead to his left. He knew she would agree now that Charis had made vow. She wouldn't do it for him, not the Order, not even for her own sake. But she would do it for Charis.
'I am willing,' Morgana replied.
'So mote it be.'
Dumbledore was the first to let go when the rope had dissolved, leaving the girls standing with their hands still linked and slightly puzzled looks on their faces. The charm had worked. They didn't remember anything, not even the ritual itself. And down the hall, the clock struck ten.
'Still enough time to celebrate the New Year,' he said lightly after glancing at the old clock on the mantel piece. 'You know, I heard Rosmerta was holding her annual party at the Three Broomsticks this evening...'
Morgana rubbed her wrist and gave Dumbledore a questioning look. She was trying to remember the events of the afternoon, Dumbledore could see that clearly. But the more she tried, the harder it became, just as he had intended.
'I think both of you deserve to celebrate solving the prophecy and advancing the war against Voldemort,' he said. There was no harm in assuring the girls that they had helped him a great deal this afternoon. On the contrary. Unless he wanted them to ruminate all night, he had to make sure they understood that they had told him all they knew about the meaning of the prophecy.
'Yes, the Three Broomsticks is the place to be tonight. Who knows, maybe you will catch up with an old acquaintance or two.'
He stroked his beard and hummed.
'But you will need something nice to wear. May I?'
He pulled out his wand and after a moment of careful consideration, he gifted the girls with the finest of gowns, one sapphire blue and the other emerald green, both flattering the girls' shapes.
Charis spun around, admiring the fabric. 'Wow, this is beautiful! Thank you, Albus!'
Morgana plucked at her dress, but however sick she was of getting her dresses chosen by others, even she had to agree that Dumbledore had great taste and had chosen each dress perfectly.
'Off you go, now,' he said cheerfully. 'I would love to lead you to the dance floor, but I am afraid my old bones are craving nothing more than a nice warm bath and bed. And I think the last dance of the year should be shared with someone close to your heart. Don't you think?'
Once again, his blue eyes twinkled behind the crescent-shaped spectacles, and Charis smiled at him. 'Goodnight, Albus. And Happy New Year!'
'Happy New Year to you both,' Dumbledore replied, watching the two young witches leave the room, hoping that, by the end of the night, they would both see what he had seen all along.
* * *
'Odgen's. Make it a double.'
Rosmerta poured the drink and handed it to the dark wizard, but her blazing smile didn't seem to do anything to enhance his mood. In fact, his features seemed to darken.
'Why are you doing this to yourself, Severus?' she asked bravely. 'You don't like the music, you don't seem to be in a festive mood, and still you're here. Certainly, a man like you has more enjoyable things to do on New Year's Eve.'
Snape raised a sardonic eyebrow and sipped at his whisky before replying.
'I am not here for pleasure, Rosmerta. However, quite a few Hogwarts students are, and the headmaster thought it wise for someone to keep an eye on them.'
'Well, you are certainly the man for the job,' Rosmerta pointed out. Hooch and Flitwick had been on chaperone duty for the first half of the evening, and everyone had been enjoying themselves just fine. But since Snape had arrived, the students seemed to be more wary. No wonder, really. A year ago, he had blasted apart a snogging couple with a flick of his wand. He had never even given them a warning.
'Now, I'll leave the bottle out for you,' Rosmerta informed Snape. 'Help yourself while I see to that there is still enough food to go around.'
She bustled off, suspending overhead with her wand a huge tray filled with pigs in blankets and other tasty treats, and Snape returned his attention to the glass he was holding in his hand. If he were honest, he'd rather be having a cup of tea by the fireplace in his study, but as he was forced to attend this odious party, Odgen's seemed to be the better choice. He had no desire to talk to anyone, and him holding on to a glass of whisky was certainly to hold anyone at bay. No one in their right mind would want to approach the grumpy Defence Against the Dark Arts teacher when he was intoxicated. What Snape at this point didn't know, however, that his behaviour was even repelling two young witches whom he would not have minded talking to at all.
'Classical Snape behaviour, isn't it? Standing at the bar, scowling at a bottle of booze and threatening to bite the head off anyone who comes too close.'
At her friend's comment, Charis craned her neck to get a better look. She had seen Snape enter the pub a few minutes ago but then lost sight of him. The pub was crowded this New Year's Eve, and Snape had certainly not seen either her or Morgana. In fact, very few people had so far taken notice of them, as they were sitting in a secluded booth as far away from the dance floor as one could get. They had lots to talk about before they could even consider engaging in any kind of frivolities.
'It's a bit sad, don't you think? Him standing there all alone with no one to talk to,' Charis pointed out. 'Wonder if he spent Christmas on his own as well.'
She knew that Snape was not of the social kind, but the thought of him having spent the holidays alone made her sad, nevertheless.
'He wasn't here, anyway,' Morgana informed her.
'How do you know?' Charis wondered.
'I met Tonks for drinks here before she and Remus went to celebrate Christmas with the Weasleys. And then I stayed here and enjoyed Rosmerta's turkey.'
'Next year, you're coming to Somerset with me!' Charis announced. 'Mum's not famous for her cooking, but at least you won't have to be alone.'
Morgana smiled. She didn't mind spending the holidays on her own, but the thought of spending the next with Charis made her feel all warm inside.
'I sure would have liked to have you around this year,' Charis continued, dropping her voice to a whisper. 'Having solved the prophecy and having to wait for a whole week before we could tell Dumbledore... Gah! I feared I'd go crazy! Seriously, if I would have had to wait one more day...'
'Hope it was worth the wait,' Morgana said, absentmindedly rubbing her wrist. 'Hope Dumbledore will be able to put to use everything we've told him.'
'Feels strange not to remember anything from this afternoon, doesn't it?' Charis pointed out. 'I guess that's yet another thing that will do my head in in due time!'
The girls laughed heartily, and Charis emptied her glass of wine.
'Now, at the risk of being hexed into the next year just for asking... Would you like to dance with me? It's New Year's Eve, after all, and the music is great.'
She started grooving to the beat, and Morgana put down her glass of pumpkin juice, leaning back in her chair. She hated dancing, always had and always would, but for Charis, she'd make an exception.
'No shape throwing,' she demanded, however, and Charis promised with a smile. Yet when they had chosen a spot on the dance floor, the rhythms changed, and the song that was playing now was more suitable for loving couples than a pair of best friends. But to Charis' surprise, Morgana didn't withdraw. Instead, she pulled the blonde witch closer, ignoring the wolf whistles and lewd comments from some of the teenage boys and young men in the pub. Charis had asked her to dance, and now she would dance, no matter which song that was playing.
'Look at those two,' Rosmerta exclaimed in a delighted tone as she returned to the bar, putting down the now empty tray. 'They are adorable! Best friends forever, I'm sure.'
But Snape didn't need to turn around to see. He had caught sight of his girls in the mirror above the bar the moment they had stepped onto the dance floor, and now he was watching their every move, secretly and furtively, almost hoping that the song would never end. He enjoyed watching them, moving in harmony and seemingly so comfortable in each other's arms. But the song did end eventually, and as the DJ announced that midnight was only a few minutes away and that everyone should go outside to see the fireworks, the girls broke apart, Charis with flushed cheeks and Morgana with her eyes firmly on the tip of her shoes.
'Shall we go outside to see the fireworks as well?' Charis asked after a few moments of awkward silence. 'It's getting quite hot in here anyway.'
Without waiting for an answer, she took Morgana by the hand, and the two witches made their way outside along with everyone else, neither realising that Snape was watching them intently from his place at the bar, nor that he had sneaked up the stairs when everyone else was filing out the door. He had no desire to stand in the cold among the crowd, pretending that he liked the fireworks or the free champagne Rosmerta was offering. He'd much rather watch his girls from one of the windows on the upper floor. They needn't know that he was there.
'Five, four, three, two, one. Happy New Year!'
Nineteen ninety-seven was greeted with cheerful shouts, clinking glasses and kisses on the cheeks, but while everyone else showed their admiration for the fireworks with loud ooohs and aaahs, Morgana and Charis stood quite still, not caring about the fiery sparkles at all. For they, too, had shared a kiss, a timid kiss on the lips of which neither of them knew who had initiated it. And now they stood gazing into each other's eyes, more or less unaware of the world around them.
'Happy New Year, Star Sister,' Charis breathed.
'Happy New Year to you, too.'
Charis smiled shyly and brushed a strand of hair from Morgana's face. Her fingers lingered on her cheek, and Morgana turned her head slightly, placing a tender kiss on her friend's wrist.
'Your lips are trembling,' Charis whispered. 'Are you cold?'
'No, I'm not.'
Morgana's blue eyes sparkled as she took hold of Charis' hand and brought it to her mouth, lovingly kissing each of her tiny fingers, and as she pulled the blonde witch closer, Charis was trembling as much as Morgana's lips had moments earlier.
'Let me warm you,' Morgana suggested, wrapping her arms around her friend, even though she was fully aware that Charis wasn't freezing. For when she kissed Charis' neck, her skin was just as hot as the breath that tickled her ear.
Snape watched, mesmerised. He had watched his girls exchanging caresses before, in the privacy of their own bedroom. But this was different. Here they were, standing amongst the crowd outside the Three Broomsticks yet seemingly unaware of the people around them. Or maybe they chose not to care. All that mattered were themselves.
'Let's go back inside,' Morgana whispered as the crowd started singing "Auld Lang Syne" and pulled Charis by the hand. 'I think I owe you a dance.'
On the abandoned dance floor, they started swaying to a tune only they could hear. Eyes fluttered shut, fingers entwined in long hair, and lips carefully caressed soft white skin. And by the time the crowd returned to the pub, the girls had made their way upstairs, to celebrate the start of the new year with the ones they truly loved.
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Great start. Albums would really sacrifice anyone to win the war. I hope both of a star sisters find their happy ending and the war doesn't destroy their souls.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Now you reminded us of that we should wirte a Part 3. :)
well, what can I say? This was a blast from beginning to end. Loved your new characters and how the Malfoys once again play a big part in Morganna's love life. Severus what a naughty man coming up with the three mirrors and him being a bit of a peeping Tom lol. Least he kept his word and did ensure the star sisters safety and nice to see him hinting at them to both wear their star necklaces once more.
The scene where the girls on Christmas Eve made that special spell and vow was beautifully written. Also the Scenes on new years eve and after were tenderly done and not in a harsh way but in a loving one. Even Snapes watching was done with a special feel and not pervy at all. Shall look forward to read more in this series and see if Snape can loose his dark thoughts and become a man who can accept love in the end and be rid of the Lily Ghost.
Thanks for writing and creating this lovely series. Really enjoyed reading it and sorry I did not get time to review every chapter. Consider this worth a hundred reviews.
Congrats.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
The relationship between Charis and Morgana has become a beautiful thing, and I'm very happy for them and glad that Severus will continue to watch over his girls. One day I hope his heart will be healed and that he will remember how to love. And allow himself to be loved.I'm sad this story has come to an end (for now), but I'm so happy to know that you aren't done with these characters—I've grown quite fond of them. For now we will let them sleep. I want to let you know how much I've enjoyed Star Sisters and now Shooting Stars. You are very gifted writers, and I thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. I wish you both good days and much happiness. May real life calm down for you, and allow you the opportunity to once again weave this magic you do so well.I give you my thanks with much gratitude and lots of hugs,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Mmmm... I think I'd like a cup of tea and a biscuit after reading this chapter! Or perhaps a cigarette? Smoking hot writing, ladies. Thank you from the bottom of my... err... heart!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Gorgeous chapter, and I appreciated Snape leaving them be and also not taking himself in hand. As he realises the feeling blossoming in his chest, my heart ached for him a little bit. Then followed "A love he had no part of, a love he would never be able to share with anyone" which summed it all up and put a lump in my throat. Ah, Snape. Forever the tragic anti-hero. Lovely writing.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
I enjoyed your creation of Dumbledore's vow and its execution - gentle and manipulative - much like the man himself. I love that Dumbledore also set up their New Year's celebration with Snape, even though, so far at least, Snape hasn't got in on the action! The tenderness between Morgana and Charis is lovely. Reading on...
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
"The way Ravenclaws seemed to be fascinated by the stars was simply adorable" bahaha! Pity that I didn't realise the significance of the constellation Leo; I've let down team Ravenclaw! At least I'd managed to suss out the connection to Slytherin's locket via the house-elf, thus tracing it back to Black. This is a lovely chapter brimming with charm and intimacy between the Star Sisters, and their spell-casting was beautiful and poignant. I also enjoyed Morgana's metaphor for moving on at the end of the chapter. I must say, though, that you've plotted your story meticulously and have been wonderfully crafty with the prophecy; not just with its puzzle, but also making your story fit seamlessly into canon... After all, we were never told how Dumbledore came to discover the locket. I take my hat off to you, ladies!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Now it's time to turn fantasy into reality for Severus and his girls--can the teasing giggling be leading up to them beckoning him over to their side *hopeful look*--great menage-a-trois dynamics; I really like Morgana's sexuality being released and expressed, reinforcing her healing from the past and embracing the present and future; Charis' divine sub positions--yum! and as I said last chapter, Severus is one lucky wizard... *sighing* Lovely, dynamic, lemony chapter as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
As I began reading this chapter I was so surprised that I had to go back and read the end of the previous chapter to be sure I understood what had happened... which, of course, I didn't, but I didn't know that until Severus woke up that I realized it was his dream. You two ladies are masters of the twisty plot. Well done!
Dreaming as he had been, I was glad he allowed himself to carry his dream to fruition in the shower. Perhaps this "Sweet Release" will help him get through the coming storm. Soon he will have to kill Dumbledore and then endure his tenure as Headmaster until the entire house of cards comes falling down.
I was very happy for him when heard Charis and Morgana talking and giggling in their activated mirrors. It would be very sweet if his dream became a reality after all is said and done. But I'm not kidding myself one tiny bit that I can predict just what you two have in mind for these three dear people. The only thing I'm sure of right now is that I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update.
Thank you for a very nice chapter!!!
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
It's a relief for Morgana and Charis that they have finally and truly shared their love for each other. And not only a relief for the two of them, but for Severus as well, I think. He has such strong feelings for both of them, and I think knowing that they have declared their love and cemented their relationship has given him peace of mind that they will be all right no matter what happens.
He loved those two girls dearly in his own special way. They would never know, of course, but he hoped that every now and then, they would remember him with fondness.
This chapter has really touched my heart. I don't know what will happen to Severus, and it makes me sad to think of him being alone. I hope he can find something or someone to "hang onto" as future events unfold. Be kind to him, ladies. Be kind.Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Mmmn... beautiful! Love their love-making, giving and sharing to each other the way each one needs, and Severus witnessing it--some wizards have all the luck! What a lovely way to bring in the New Year!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
I love this story even more than the last one.
I have no idea how the two of you do it but I am grateful that you do.
Sorry for not leaving reviews before now, but it is often difficult to find words for my appreciation! Rest assured that I always eagerly await the next instalment.
Such a beautiful and unusual story... the pair of you need to create a universe of your own! I'm sure we could expect great things from such imaginations! Perhaps just as great as the universe that brought your two formidable minds together!
Thank you.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
‘When the rope dissolves and we let go of each other, neither of you will be able to convey what you have learnt here today,’ Dumbledore explained. ‘You will have a faint memory of our conversation with Kreacher, but trying to remember the details will be like trying to remember a dream. The harder you try, the further will it drift away. And unless we three stand here once more, with our hands entwined, you will never be able to remember.’Damn. I wish the girls had not had to agree to take that vow. But if they hadn't, then he would have Obliviated them. I hope they really will be safer not remembering the prophecy.I can't help but wish Severus didn't have to spend New Year's Eve with only a bottle of Ogden's to keep him company while he watches his girls coming to understand the depth of their feelings for each other. With Severus already upstairs and the girls on their way up the stairs, I wonder if they'll run into each other? I'm off to the next chapter to find out. :^)Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
With Grindling moving to Greece for good, I guess there's no way he will be a regular part of either of the girls' lives. Sometimes I think it's better just to move on and cut your losses, but I know Charis and Morgana will be sad when they realize he has left his position at the Ministry and packed up lock, stock, and barrel.
That was a lovely spell that Charis created to permanently join the girls' star necklaces together. It was pretty cool the way Morgana's star glowed Ravenclaw blue and Charis' glowed Slytherin green. I was tickled when Charis solved the riddle of the prophecy- all that time studying Astronomy really paid off! Now Dumbledore wants them to wait a week. Perhaps he does want to do some research of his own.
I'm glad Morgana has a new Patronus- a majestic black feline is much better than her old Peacock. It's very telling that they have such similar Patronuses, isn't it? It seems like their world is settling into something solid and stable, but with Grindling out of the picture (for now, anyway) I'm wondering what Severus will do? Poor man is damned if he does and damned if he doesn't. Speaking of Severus... what is he doing right now?
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
It seems that it has taken tonight's events and their outcomes to bring Severus to the point where he can relax enough to realize that Charis and Morgana love each other. But I'm not sure if they can be happy with only each other. Grindling loves Charis, and I think he has very strong feelings for Morgana as well. Charis loves Severus, and Morgana feels very safe with him. Severus loves Charis and Morgana. And I have absolutely no idea how this is going to work out. There are a number of permutations that come to mind, and one of them is that Severus, Charis, and Morgana become a threesome family. Or Grindling could make for a foursome family. Or Grindling could find himself with Narcissa when all hell breaks loose and Lucius ends up dead or in prison for the rest of his life. Or if Severus dies, then Grindling, Charis and Morgana could make a life together.This emotional awakening Severus has undergone, leaves me feeling very afraid for him. I fear he will go willingly to meet death so long as he thinks "his girls" are safe and happy. Is he falling into well of dark resignation?Thank you for this thought provoking chapter, ladies. I still don't have any idea how this will all turn out, and now I have an even longer list of possible outcomes. You are masters of mystery!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
The place where Ravenclaws always took comfort and solitude: the library.' This had e tearing up! And the delicious lemony, Snapey goodness-sene has me saying, Merlin's balls, sevs_starsisters, yes, yes, yes! and more, more, more! *taking a deep satisfied sigh* Thank you! (and Miss Charis needs to heed Sev's advice for her and Morgana--speaking of which, can't wait for Sev's jetsetting over to Malfoy manor, maybe Ms Morgana needs some *special* attention too from the Potions master--he is suppose to take care of both his girls *decadent cackle* Lovely, yummy chapter, as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Poor, dear Grindling--lovely moments and chemistry and trust between these two, only to be breathtakingly blown away with the scene between Morgana and Severus--yes, yes, yes! Could feel Morgana breaking through and liberating herself with Severus *perfect, bloody f------ perfect* Thank you!! xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Now I see what you meant when you told me that Severus would feel pretty guilty... but I have to wonder just how guilty he really felt. Still and all, Morgana is free from the weight of a millstone named Lucius Malfoy, and Severus has promised that Narcissa will not bother her again. Even crazy Bellatrix served a useful purpose. Thanks to her, Grindling has heard Narcissa say the words that set him free... at least I hope he is free from Narcissa's machinations. In the study, Severus told Morgana to ‘Enjoy a Malfoy-free life. Spend time with the ones who love you the most.’ He left before she could ask who he meant, and then I remembered that Grindling had told her that he wished things could have been different. Soooo... could it be that Grindling has a bit of a crush on Morgana, or is he still in love with the memory of Narcissa... or will he return to Charis? They will see each other because they're trying to solve the Prophesy, but what will they think about the things that have happened in the last few hours? Charis will be thinking about "her boss" and her former teacher. Morgana will be thinking about her former teacher. Narcissa will be thinking about wringing her sister's neck, and mourning the loss of perhaps the only opportunity to regain her husband's freedom and their lost stature in the ranks of the purebloods. Severus will be thinking about both Charis and Morgana... I wish I knew what was going through Severus' mind in regard to both of "his girls." I still can't shake the feeling that he really holds romantic thoughts about Charis, but I have to say you ladies really do keep the waters muddied up enough that I can't ever be sure. Maybe Morgana and Grindling will be attracted to each other, and... *sigh*What is going to go on at Malfoy Manor will all those Death Eaters still there? Oh what a tangled web we weave....Great chapter. As always!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Hot dayum! Hot DAYUM! I am so damned happy that Severus and Charis had their "alone time" in the library... and he was so tender and made sure she had the orgasm of her life before he had his.‘The stars,’ he said and pointed at his throat as if to indicate a necklace he was wearing. ‘Renew the charm. Wear them. The both of you.’He still cares for Charis. His kiss on her cheek and urgging her and Morganna to wear their star necklaces proves it beyond all doubt.Thanks, I needed that! *grinning*Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Of all the rooms for Narcissa to choose from... I wonder just what Narcissa knows and what she doesn't know about Morgana and Lucius? Could Narcissa have some other motive we don't yet know about? I don't think so, but I have learned not to underestimate you ladies, either.In the meantime, what are Snape and Charis doing in thier search for the meaning of the prophesy? Sooner or later one of them is bound to say or do something that comfirms for the other that there are still real and deep emotions involved between. I can't wait to see what you have in store for our lovely characters next? Hope to see the next chapter soon!!!Berh
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
I hope she opens up. It would be good for her to get it out. Grindling is a complex character; not quite sure what to make of him yet. I'm glad you're still writing this story, I love following it. 5 stars.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Well, Charis got the info she needed. She just needs to remember her astronomy now.I've known this pair of stories have been out there for some time but avoided reading them because they were not about canon-centric characters. But I took a chance and I've really enjoyed them. I look forward to finding out what happens. Keep up the good work!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for taking a chance on our stories, we're really thrilled you've enjoyed them and we hope you'll stick with the sequel. Thanks again for your support, it means a lot!
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
May I say I never expected you two to answer ALL my reviews since I left a ton of them at one time. But thank you. If I've put you behind on your writing, feel free to blame me.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We try to answer all our reviews. It's so nice to get feedback, and we like to show that we appreciate your thoughts. And no worries, you haven't slowed us down. Next chapter is being beta-read at the moment and we have done plenty of plotting. Lemons ahead ;-)
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
Ah lemon....one of my favorite flavors!
I think Charis is far too forgiving (maybe I just don't like Grindling).TeeHee, Severus is SOOOOO BAD. I love him.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He's a naughty boy! and that's why we love him, right?
Oooh the plot thickens. I think I've figured out most of the prophecy, now to watch as the characters figure it out.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Let's see if you're right :)
I am glad it was cleared up that Morgana is NOT the one Grindling was talking about. She has enough worries. And go her for standing up for her friend.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Yes, Morgana kicked ass :)