XI: An Orderly Tea – Part One
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sevs_starsisters*COMPLETED* The Star Sisters have left Hogwarts and are now facing a new world with new opportunities and new kinds of danger. And also for the Half-Blood Prince, times are changing. (This story is the sequel to Star Sisters.)
Chapter XI: An Orderly Tea Part One
Whilst Snape toasted with Narcissa for the second time, there was a knock on the door of a little flat not far from Diagon Alley, which Charis answered hurriedly. She had been waiting all morning. In fact, she had been up since eight a very ungodly hour in her book and ready to leave since about nine-thirty, pampered with Madam Primpernelle's best products and wearing her new royal blue robes. Now her handbag stood beside the door, her travelling cloak lay neatly folded on top of it, and her shoes stood ready to be slipped into. Yes, Charis would be ready to leave in a heartbeat. She thought it best to be prepared. Dumbledore had forgotten to mention what time exactly her escort would be arriving, and as Charis was still hoping that Severus Snape would be the one picking her up, she knew that dawdling on her part would not be acceptable. Severus was not a patient man. Surely, her being ready would impress him. Maybe he would even notice her new robes.
However, when Charis opened her door, there was no sign of the Head of Slytherin, no billowing black robes and no enchanting onyx eyes. Instead, there was a man in shabby grey robes, thinning light brown hair and kind eyes.
'Charis Byrne,' the man said in a soft tone, 'my favourite Ravenclaw.'
'Professor Lupin! I wasn't expecting to see you!'
To her own surprise, Charis' smile was genuine. Yes, she was disappointed not to be greeted by the Potions master but by her former Defence teacher instead, but she had always liked Professor Lupin, and he had awarded her a fair amount of points during his year at Hogwarts. In fact, Charis thought that she had not learned more from any other Defence teacher than she had learned from Lupin.
'Professor?' he smiled. 'I don't even want to think about how many years it has been since I taught you. It's Remus. And I am your escort.'
Charis could not help but grin as her former teacher gave a mock-bow. 'It's good to see you, Remus.'
They shook hands cordially, and once more Remus smiled. 'Sorry, I didn't bring any flowers,' he said apologetically. 'I was asked to pick you up on rather short notice. I do, however, have some chocolate. Rumour has it you prefer that to flowers anyway.'
He winked, and Charis blushed. If she hadn't known better, she'd say that her former Professor was flirting with her.
'Then again,' Remus carried on, 'we should not spoil our appetites. I am prepared to bet my wand that Molly is baking her famous carrot cake as we speak.'
Charis' stomach gave a rumble. She had been too nervous to eat a proper breakfast. And carrot cake had always been one of her favourites.
'Shall we, then?' Remus asked and offered her his arm. 'We will have to travel by Side-Along Apparition, as the place we are visiting is not exactly, um, public. I hope you do not mind.'
'No, no! Not at all,' Charis answered and took his arm. It felt muscular under her hand, and for a moment, Charis was surprised. She had never thought of her Defence professor as a physical, male being. He had just been her professor. Nothing more and nothing less. But now...
He pulled her a bit closer. Not surprisingly, he smelled of chocolate. But there was also the smell of pipe smoke and a slight hit of something sweet which Charis couldn't really define.
'On three, then,' Remus announced, and Charis tightened her grip around his arm. 'One. Two. Three.'
* * *
The entrance hall of number twelve, Grimmauld Place, was just as gloomy and unwelcoming as Charis remembered it from her first visit, but the feeling in the pit of her stomach couldn't have been more different. The last time she had walked down the dark corridor that led to the drawing room, she had been excited, curious and dying to know why Dumbledore had summoned her and her best friend to the home of Sirius Black, one of the most wanted wizards in Britain. At the start of the evening, she had not yet known that Sirius was her cousin, and that she like him belonged to the noble and ancient house of Black. Now she knew, and she also knew that she would never see her cousin again. Her stomach clenched, and she found her sight clouded with tears.
Remus was striding on down the corridor. Obviously, the drawing room was not his goal, but Charis couldn't make herself walk past the door. It stood ajar, and she could just about make out the tapestry on the wall. There wasn't enough light in the room to see it clearly, but Charis remembered certain details very well: where Sirius' name had once been, there was now a big, scorched hole. He had been blasted off the family tree years ago. As had his great-uncle, Marius Black, Charis' great-grandfather.
'Charis?'
Charis turned her head. She had not heard Remus come back. But now he was standing right beside her, his hand resting lightly on her shoulder.
'It's a shame you didn't get to know Sirius,' Remus said, his voice low and consoling. He seemed to know exactly what was going through Charis' mind. 'He was a great man.'
'It seems a bit silly,' Charis confessed. 'I only met him once. I didn't know him. And still I miss him.'
Remus nodded. 'I know. I miss him, too. He was quite a pain at times: stubborn, moody, and a bit arrogant. But still, he was one of my best friends.'
Charis looked into the wizard's eyes. He looked truly sad, and Charis felt a stab of guilt. She had not meant to tear open his wounds.
'I wish I had known him better,' she said quietly.
Remus nodded again. If Charis had hoped he'd offer to tell her more about her cousin, she had hoped in vain. But somehow, she understood. It was too early.
Then Remus removed his hand from her shoulder and straightened up. 'We better get our acts together,' he stated. 'If we show up in the kitchen with blurry eyes, we will have to answer a lot of questions.'
He produced a slab of chocolate from his pocket and held it out towards Charis. 'For medicinal purposes only,' he declared as she broke off a piece. 'Molly must never know.'
Charis smiled feebly and nibbled at the chocolate. It was sweet and creamy, and to her surprise, it really did her good. Her tears dried, and the odd sensation in her stomach dissolved. And after some moments, she was ready to follow Remus into the kitchen, where they were met by the delicious smell of freshly baked cake and a beaming Molly Weasley.
'Charis, how lovely to see you again,' she said, her chestnut eyes twinkling with welcome as she ushered Charis through to be seated. 'And look at you in those lovely blue robes. You must be making a great impression at the Ministry. Do you like Grindling? Arthur tells me he saw you two having lunch together. Oh, he is such a lovely man, Grindling. Is he being nice to you? I hope he is not giving you dull tasks like getting coffee and such things.'
Molly chattered on, and Charis answered her questions gladly. Molly had such a warm and gentle personality and seemed so joyful that Charis almost forgot that she had been at the verge of tears only a couple of minutes ago. However, she saw another side of Molly a few moments later, namely when Remus tried to steal a piece of cake.
'Don't you dare touch that cake, Remus Lupin!' she screeched. 'It hasn't cooled yet, and it's meant for tea. You'll have to wait like everyone else!'
For a moment, Remus looked like a beaten dog, and that was apparently enough to soften Molly's heart. 'I'll make you a cup of tea and a sandwich,' she announced. 'Merlin knows you need feeding. And you, Charis, you can have your tea in the sitting room. Dumbledore is waiting for you there. Second to last door on the left. I'll be bringing some cake, soon.'
It was with certain reluctance that Charis left the kitchen. She liked Molly, and she liked Remus, and somehow she would have liked to stay with them. But of course, she was here on Dumbledore's invitation. Letting him wait would be rude.
Second to last door on the left, Charis reminded herself as she walked down yet another dark corridor. There were no portraits on the walls, but still she had the uncanny feeling that someone something was watching her. She frequently looked back over her shoulder and did therefore not notice the tall man exiting the sitting room and bumped right into him.
'Oh, my god, I am so sorry,' she spluttered, but the man just smiled down at her.
'No harm done, Charis,' he said in a deep and booming voice.
Surprised that the man knew her name, Charis took a step backwards and looked up at him. 'Oh, Mr Shacklebolt!' she exclaimed.
'When was the last time you have been called Mr Shacklebolt, Kingsley? At school?'
Albus Dumbledore appeared in the door, smiling and his blue eyes twinkling behind his spectacles.
Kingsley laughed. 'Probably when Minerva put me in detention. It's Kingsley, dear,' he said, turning back to Charis and extending a huge hand. 'We're all on a first name basis here. Makes things easier.'
They shook hands, and Charis couldn't help but feel a little bit proud. Kingsley Shacklebolt was well known at the Ministry. He was an important and awe-inspiring wizard. Calling him by his first name was a big thing and would take just as much getting used to as calling Professor Dumbledore Albus.
'I hate to be leaving before Molly serves the cake,' Kingsley announced, 'but I fear I have no choice. Work calls. Albus, I'll see you on Wednesday. And you, Charis, I assume I'll see you around the Ministry. Good day to you.'
Charis and Dumbledore bade Kingsley goodbye, and as he disappeared into the darkness of the corridor, Dumbledore guided Charis into the sitting room where he pointed towards a squashy old armchair opposite.
'Do have a seat, Charis,' he offered and settled on the sofa himself where, judging by the way the pillows seemed to fit perfectly around his backside, he had been sitting earlier.
'How have you been?' he asked.
'Really well, thanks, sir. I mean, Albus! I love living in London, even though I haven't had the chance to really go sightseeing. And the Ministry is such a fascinating place. Everyone has been so nice to me, and there is so much to learn!'
Dumbledore smiled. 'Grindling tells me you are doing a very good job. Ah, no need to worry. I am not spying on you. Grindling and I are old friends. We meet for tea now and then. Talking of which...'
He raised his hand, and pot and two cups appeared seemingly out of thin air.
'Milk?'
Charis accepted her cup with a smile and settled back in her chair. It was every bit as comfortable as it looked.
They talked for a while, about the weather, the tea and Charis' new robes, and when the door opened and Molly came bustling in, carrying a tray and tightly followed by Remus, Charis could for the life of her not tell how long she had been there. It could have been just twenty minutes or maybe three hours. She really didn't know.
'Cake, anyone?' Molly asked as she put the tray down, placing herself strategically between the cake and Remus, who could easily have been mistaken for a little boy on Christmas morning. Most probably, it would not have surprised anyone if he had started jumping up and down with anticipation.
'Oh, yes please!' Charis replied. The cake looked lush, and the smell emitting from it was just divine.
'You will have to fight Remus.' Dumbledore chuckled. 'I don't know where he puts it.'
'Hollow legs,' Remus explained. He had by now outsmarted Molly and was already happily munching away on a huge piece of cake.
Molly handed Charis a plate and Dumbledore put a generous slice onto it, and moments later they were once again sitting comfortably in their chairs, enjoying what according to Charis was the most delicious carrot cake ever made.
Then the door opened once more, a little less gently than before, and stomping in came no other than Alastor Moody.
'Thought I smelled cake,' he growled and approached the table, only acknowledging the people in the room with a curt nod.
'You have to forgive Alastor's lack of manners,' Dumbledore commented, his eyes twinkling mischievously. 'It's hard to resist Molly's cake.'
'They're like Veelas in baked form,' Moody muttered and let himself fall onto a chair with a slice of cake in his hand.
'Ah, Charis Byrne. Nice seeing you again,' he said, his eyes boring into Charis. 'Heard quite a bit about you lately.'
Charis swallowed. She was now starting to wonder if the senior staff at the Ministry got together in the pub in the evenings and discussed the new employees.
'Only good things,' Moody added gruffly, as if he had sensed her growing uncomfortable. 'And from reliable sources only.'
'Talking of your sources, Alastor,' Dumbledore butted in. 'Weren't you supposed to be arriving with company?'
'Aye,' Moody replied. 'The chits are in the kitchen. Tonks is attempting to play nurse.'
'Nurse?' Molly looked alarmed. 'What happened?'
'A little accident, nothing serious.'
'Coming from you, this could as well mean that the girl has had her leg ripped off by a Chimaera. I better go and check.'
'Trust Molly to behave like a mother hen,' Moody grumbled as Molly had left.
'Does she have reason to worry?' Dumbledore enquired, sounding quite concerned himself.
Moody shook his head dismissively. 'Just a little burn. Tonks took care of it. She might be the clumsiest witch alive, but she does know how to cast proper healing spells. And I think the girl likes her.'
'It's not hard to like Tonks,' Dumbledore commented. 'I think you will like her, too, Charis. Oh, you have already met, of course.'
'Yes, we have,' Charis agreed. 'During my last visit here. She's a good laugh.'
'I would advise you to keep far away from Tonks. She is rather accident prone.'
The low, slightly growling voice that came from the door sent a shiver down Charis' spine, but it was nothing compared to the iciness that engulfed her when she looked up and locked eyes with Severus Snape, who had entered so silently that no one had noticed. There was a dark scowl etched into his face, and his eyes reminded Charis of dark tunnels that led to a place no one wanted to go.
'Pro... Professor Snape,' she stuttered. 'Nice... nice to see you.'
'Miss Byrne.'
Charis managed to keep a gasp from escaping her. Oh, how she loved to hear him say her name. And how she longed for him to call her Charis.
'Cake, Severus?' Remus offered.
'I think not,' Snape replied and strode across the room, positioning himself beside the fireplace where he folded his arms in front of his chest and looked generally sour.
'Molly will get into a huff if you don't take a piece, Severus,' Dumbledore pointed out. 'Just humour her, please, for all our sakes?'
If possible, Snape's scowl turned even darker. 'I do not see why I should start eating cake today of all days, Dumbledore.'
'Well, it's a special occasion,' Dumbledore pointed out. 'You know why Charis is here, don't you?'
Snape sneered. 'Yes, I do know why Miss Byrne is here. And I am still advising against her admission to the Order, just as I advised against the admission of Miss Belakane.'
Charis almost dropped her plate. 'Morgana is in the Order?' she blurted out. 'She didn't say a word.'
'Of course not, Charis,' Dumbledore said kindly. 'Like you, Morgana has been asked not to speak of the Order.'
Charis nodded. She understood the need for secrecy, of course, but still it bugged her that Morgana had not said anything. How long had her friend been a member of the Order, she wondered. Had she already been given a task? Had she been meeting and working with Severus? And why had Morgana been the first to be asked to join?
Hundreds of questions started to pop up in Charis' mind, but she didn't get around to thinking about them as there was the sound of breaking china and the upset voice of Molly Weasley coming from the other side of the door.
Remus grimaced. 'I hope Tonks only dropped the tea set and not the second cake.'
As if on cue, the door opened.
'Wotcher, everyone,' Tonks greeted them all. 'Hope we won't need more than three more cups. Happened to drop one. Saved the cake though.'
Remus quickly rose to take the cake off the tray and carry it to safety. And sure enough, when Tonks turned away from the table where she had put down the tray, she managed to bump against the table, and not even Alastor's lighting fast reaction could stop the three remaining cups from falling to the floor.
'We better fix this before Molly comes back,' Remus suggested and pulled his wand, but he didn't have the time to cast Reparo before the door opened again. To his and Tonks' relief, however, Molly's glare was directed towards Moody.
'Nothing serious? Just a little burn? The poor girl could have lost her hand!'
She scolded Moody like a little school boy, and everyone except Snape recoiled slightly, busying themselves with the shattered cups. Snape, however, seemed to enjoy the show.
'Molly has sent Morgana upstairs to have a lie-down before dinner,' Tonks whispered to Charis. 'Up the stairs and the first door to the right. I'm sure she'll be glad to see you. And here, take some cake with you.'
And without anyone noticing, Charis slunk out of the room, carrying a plate with two pieces of cake and heading for the upper floor. She and Morgana certainly had a lot to talk about.
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Great start. Albums would really sacrifice anyone to win the war. I hope both of a star sisters find their happy ending and the war doesn't destroy their souls.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Now you reminded us of that we should wirte a Part 3. :)
well, what can I say? This was a blast from beginning to end. Loved your new characters and how the Malfoys once again play a big part in Morganna's love life. Severus what a naughty man coming up with the three mirrors and him being a bit of a peeping Tom lol. Least he kept his word and did ensure the star sisters safety and nice to see him hinting at them to both wear their star necklaces once more.
The scene where the girls on Christmas Eve made that special spell and vow was beautifully written. Also the Scenes on new years eve and after were tenderly done and not in a harsh way but in a loving one. Even Snapes watching was done with a special feel and not pervy at all. Shall look forward to read more in this series and see if Snape can loose his dark thoughts and become a man who can accept love in the end and be rid of the Lily Ghost.
Thanks for writing and creating this lovely series. Really enjoyed reading it and sorry I did not get time to review every chapter. Consider this worth a hundred reviews.
Congrats.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Every review we get is special, and one like this that conveys the depth of appreciation and affection for our characters is extra special. We're delighted that you enjoyed the series enough to read it all and tell us how much you enjoyed it.Wildcard's response: I do hope you write more in this wonderful series. Good fanfic is hard to find and this is a jewel and worth reading again. Shall look forward to more when you get time to be creative. Thanks again.
The relationship between Charis and Morgana has become a beautiful thing, and I'm very happy for them and glad that Severus will continue to watch over his girls. One day I hope his heart will be healed and that he will remember how to love. And allow himself to be loved.I'm sad this story has come to an end (for now), but I'm so happy to know that you aren't done with these characters—I've grown quite fond of them. For now we will let them sleep. I want to let you know how much I've enjoyed Star Sisters and now Shooting Stars. You are very gifted writers, and I thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. I wish you both good days and much happiness. May real life calm down for you, and allow you the opportunity to once again weave this magic you do so well.I give you my thanks with much gratitude and lots of hugs,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Dearest Beth, receiving your reviews was like a gift to us. To have a reader invest so much emotionally and intellectually into our stories and craft such detailed, thoughtful reviews is a wonderful thing and really kept us going, even when the story was not always easy to write.
You were there every step of the way and we cannot express enough gratitude for that.
Mmmm... I think I'd like a cup of tea and a biscuit after reading this chapter! Or perhaps a cigarette? Smoking hot writing, ladies. Thank you from the bottom of my... err... heart!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
*passes cigarette, chocolate and clean underwear*
Gorgeous chapter, and I appreciated Snape leaving them be and also not taking himself in hand. As he realises the feeling blossoming in his chest, my heart ached for him a little bit. Then followed "A love he had no part of, a love he would never be able to share with anyone" which summed it all up and put a lump in my throat. Ah, Snape. Forever the tragic anti-hero. Lovely writing.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're honoured that our writing got such an emotional response from you and that we got Snape right in this scene - it was important to get it right and from your reaction, we did :-)
I enjoyed your creation of Dumbledore's vow and its execution - gentle and manipulative - much like the man himself. I love that Dumbledore also set up their New Year's celebration with Snape, even though, so far at least, Snape hasn't got in on the action! The tenderness between Morgana and Charis is lovely. Reading on...
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Gentle and manipulative works for us! And maybe your exquisite patience will be rewarded if you read on :-)
"The way Ravenclaws seemed to be fascinated by the stars was simply adorable" bahaha! Pity that I didn't realise the significance of the constellation Leo; I've let down team Ravenclaw! At least I'd managed to suss out the connection to Slytherin's locket via the house-elf, thus tracing it back to Black. This is a lovely chapter brimming with charm and intimacy between the Star Sisters, and their spell-casting was beautiful and poignant. I also enjoyed Morgana's metaphor for moving on at the end of the chapter. I must say, though, that you've plotted your story meticulously and have been wonderfully crafty with the prophecy; not just with its puzzle, but also making your story fit seamlessly into canon... After all, we were never told how Dumbledore came to discover the locket. I take my hat off to you, ladies!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We've managed to hoodwink a Ravenclaw, that's something to be proud of! But full marks for realising the locket connection. We're so thrilled you enjoyed the prophecy and think it blends into canon seamlessly - we tried really hard to make it work and it caused our brains to hurt on several occassions!
Now it's time to turn fantasy into reality for Severus and his girls--can the teasing giggling be leading up to them beckoning him over to their side *hopeful look*--great menage-a-trois dynamics; I really like Morgana's sexuality being released and expressed, reinforcing her healing from the past and embracing the present and future; Charis' divine sub positions--yum! and as I said last chapter, Severus is one lucky wizard... *sighing* Lovely, dynamic, lemony chapter as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for your kind words, as always :-) We're hoping to be able to wrap everything up nicely in the next chapter.
As I began reading this chapter I was so surprised that I had to go back and read the end of the previous chapter to be sure I understood what had happened... which, of course, I didn't, but I didn't know that until Severus woke up that I realized it was his dream. You two ladies are masters of the twisty plot. Well done!
Dreaming as he had been, I was glad he allowed himself to carry his dream to fruition in the shower. Perhaps this "Sweet Release" will help him get through the coming storm. Soon he will have to kill Dumbledore and then endure his tenure as Headmaster until the entire house of cards comes falling down.
I was very happy for him when heard Charis and Morgana talking and giggling in their activated mirrors. It would be very sweet if his dream became a reality after all is said and done. But I'm not kidding myself one tiny bit that I can predict just what you two have in mind for these three dear people. The only thing I'm sure of right now is that I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update.
Thank you for a very nice chapter!!!
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Ah, dreams ... They can be rather wonderful :-) Earlier this week, the next chapter has finally been written and is now awaiting embellishing and polishing. Shouldn't be long, hopefully :-)
It's a relief for Morgana and Charis that they have finally and truly shared their love for each other. And not only a relief for the two of them, but for Severus as well, I think. He has such strong feelings for both of them, and I think knowing that they have declared their love and cemented their relationship has given him peace of mind that they will be all right no matter what happens.
He loved those two girls dearly in his own special way. They would never know, of course, but he hoped that every now and then, they would remember him with fondness.
This chapter has really touched my heart. I don't know what will happen to Severus, and it makes me sad to think of him being alone. I hope he can find something or someone to "hang onto" as future events unfold. Be kind to him, ladies. Be kind.Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Beth! We are so sorry for having let you wait so long for a resposnse! We really hate the fact that real life is not letting us play around in the sandbox that is fan fic as much as we would like to! Grrr! As always, we thank you for your kind words and we will try to fulfill your wish about Severus.
Mmmn... beautiful! Love their love-making, giving and sharing to each other the way each one needs, and Severus witnessing it--some wizards have all the luck! What a lovely way to bring in the New Year!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Mmmmm, just re-read the chapter. It was indeed lovely :-)
I love this story even more than the last one.
I have no idea how the two of you do it but I am grateful that you do.
Sorry for not leaving reviews before now, but it is often difficult to find words for my appreciation! Rest assured that I always eagerly await the next instalment.
Such a beautiful and unusual story... the pair of you need to create a universe of your own! I'm sure we could expect great things from such imaginations! Perhaps just as great as the universe that brought your two formidable minds together!
Thank you.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
First of all, our sincerest apologies for taking so much time to answer your lovely review. We normally don't let our readers wait that long, but real life has no sense for good timing. We want you to know that your kind words made our day! :-) The dream to create something original is certainly there, and one of us is already trying hard to make it happen. Hopefully, the dream will soon come true.
‘When the rope dissolves and we let go of each other, neither of you will be able to convey what you have learnt here today,’ Dumbledore explained. ‘You will have a faint memory of our conversation with Kreacher, but trying to remember the details will be like trying to remember a dream. The harder you try, the further will it drift away. And unless we three stand here once more, with our hands entwined, you will never be able to remember.’Damn. I wish the girls had not had to agree to take that vow. But if they hadn't, then he would have Obliviated them. I hope they really will be safer not remembering the prophecy.I can't help but wish Severus didn't have to spend New Year's Eve with only a bottle of Ogden's to keep him company while he watches his girls coming to understand the depth of their feelings for each other. With Severus already upstairs and the girls on their way up the stairs, I wonder if they'll run into each other? I'm off to the next chapter to find out. :^)Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Our sincerest apologies for taking so long to reply! Real Life is demanding far too much attention at the moment! We hate to let our readers hanging!
With Grindling moving to Greece for good, I guess there's no way he will be a regular part of either of the girls' lives. Sometimes I think it's better just to move on and cut your losses, but I know Charis and Morgana will be sad when they realize he has left his position at the Ministry and packed up lock, stock, and barrel.
That was a lovely spell that Charis created to permanently join the girls' star necklaces together. It was pretty cool the way Morgana's star glowed Ravenclaw blue and Charis' glowed Slytherin green. I was tickled when Charis solved the riddle of the prophecy- all that time studying Astronomy really paid off! Now Dumbledore wants them to wait a week. Perhaps he does want to do some research of his own.
I'm glad Morgana has a new Patronus- a majestic black feline is much better than her old Peacock. It's very telling that they have such similar Patronuses, isn't it? It seems like their world is settling into something solid and stable, but with Grindling out of the picture (for now, anyway) I'm wondering what Severus will do? Poor man is damned if he does and damned if he doesn't. Speaking of Severus... what is he doing right now?
Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We're getting very close to the end now, and we have been so honoured to have you along for the ride. Having your thoughtful reviews has encouraged and delighted us in equal measure.
We hope we won't have to keep you very long for the next chapter and we once again thank you for all your unwavering support.
It seems that it has taken tonight's events and their outcomes to bring Severus to the point where he can relax enough to realize that Charis and Morgana love each other. But I'm not sure if they can be happy with only each other. Grindling loves Charis, and I think he has very strong feelings for Morgana as well. Charis loves Severus, and Morgana feels very safe with him. Severus loves Charis and Morgana. And I have absolutely no idea how this is going to work out. There are a number of permutations that come to mind, and one of them is that Severus, Charis, and Morgana become a threesome family. Or Grindling could make for a foursome family. Or Grindling could find himself with Narcissa when all hell breaks loose and Lucius ends up dead or in prison for the rest of his life. Or if Severus dies, then Grindling, Charis and Morgana could make a life together.This emotional awakening Severus has undergone, leaves me feeling very afraid for him. I fear he will go willingly to meet death so long as he thinks "his girls" are safe and happy. Is he falling into well of dark resignation?Thank you for this thought provoking chapter, ladies. I still don't have any idea how this will all turn out, and now I have an even longer list of possible outcomes. You are masters of mystery!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We have created a huge mess, haven't we? We're working on a couple of chapters that will hopefully untangle and tie up loose ends. Hopefully... Thank you, as always, for your support!!
The place where Ravenclaws always took comfort and solitude: the library.' This had e tearing up! And the delicious lemony, Snapey goodness-sene has me saying, Merlin's balls, sevs_starsisters, yes, yes, yes! and more, more, more! *taking a deep satisfied sigh* Thank you! (and Miss Charis needs to heed Sev's advice for her and Morgana--speaking of which, can't wait for Sev's jetsetting over to Malfoy manor, maybe Ms Morgana needs some *special* attention too from the Potions master--he is suppose to take care of both his girls *decadent cackle* Lovely, yummy chapter, as always!xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Got to love you decadent cackle!! :-)
Poor, dear Grindling--lovely moments and chemistry and trust between these two, only to be breathtakingly blown away with the scene between Morgana and Severus--yes, yes, yes! Could feel Morgana breaking through and liberating herself with Severus *perfect, bloody f------ perfect* Thank you!! xxx
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
So chuffed you're reading and reviewing on two archives. Thank you so much!!
Now I see what you meant when you told me that Severus would feel pretty guilty... but I have to wonder just how guilty he really felt. Still and all, Morgana is free from the weight of a millstone named Lucius Malfoy, and Severus has promised that Narcissa will not bother her again. Even crazy Bellatrix served a useful purpose. Thanks to her, Grindling has heard Narcissa say the words that set him free... at least I hope he is free from Narcissa's machinations. In the study, Severus told Morgana to ‘Enjoy a Malfoy-free life. Spend time with the ones who love you the most.’ He left before she could ask who he meant, and then I remembered that Grindling had told her that he wished things could have been different. Soooo... could it be that Grindling has a bit of a crush on Morgana, or is he still in love with the memory of Narcissa... or will he return to Charis? They will see each other because they're trying to solve the Prophesy, but what will they think about the things that have happened in the last few hours? Charis will be thinking about "her boss" and her former teacher. Morgana will be thinking about her former teacher. Narcissa will be thinking about wringing her sister's neck, and mourning the loss of perhaps the only opportunity to regain her husband's freedom and their lost stature in the ranks of the purebloods. Severus will be thinking about both Charis and Morgana... I wish I knew what was going through Severus' mind in regard to both of "his girls." I still can't shake the feeling that he really holds romantic thoughts about Charis, but I have to say you ladies really do keep the waters muddied up enough that I can't ever be sure. Maybe Morgana and Grindling will be attracted to each other, and... *sigh*What is going to go on at Malfoy Manor will all those Death Eaters still there? Oh what a tangled web we weave....Great chapter. As always!Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Braye - let me start by saying thank you. Your review was just what we needed today - feeling a bit wobbly to say the least and your words of support mean so much. It's good to hear that we can still keep you guessing, even as the story itself is finally turning a corner. We hope all the answers to your questions will be revealed over the next few chapters. Until then - huge hugs! And eternal thanks! xx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I can't understand why more readers haven't checked this out. Or maybe they have and just don't leave reviews. Either way, this is one of my all time favorite Snape stories that isn't SSHG. Your writing, the way you structure your story - chapter by chapter, clue by clue - is among the best I've EVER read. It's not all PWP. It's not cookie-cutter. It gives me something to get my teeth into. It makes me go back to earlier chapters to "scratch that little itch in the back of my brain" when I read something that I recognize but can't place. I know it's important, and I can't help myself. I have to go back and try to put the clues together. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this story and its predecessor. Thank you for not giving up. Thank you for making it so very nice to come home after a long day at work and being able to find a new chapter. You ROCK! A Thousand Points to Your House!Hugs you back,Beth
Hot dayum! Hot DAYUM! I am so damned happy that Severus and Charis had their "alone time" in the library... and he was so tender and made sure she had the orgasm of her life before he had his.‘The stars,’ he said and pointed at his throat as if to indicate a necklace he was wearing. ‘Renew the charm. Wear them. The both of you.’He still cares for Charis. His kiss on her cheek and urgging her and Morganna to wear their star necklaces proves it beyond all doubt.Thanks, I needed that! *grinning*Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He does indeed care for both his girls, and he swore he'd look out for them both. However, he's going to be feeling pretty guilty after this encounter... that's all we can say for now! Thanks, as ever, for your support x
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
He's going to be feeling guilty?!?!?! Ohnoes. What are you two up to this time? I can't wait to see what you've cooked up this time.You iz
Of all the rooms for Narcissa to choose from... I wonder just what Narcissa knows and what she doesn't know about Morgana and Lucius? Could Narcissa have some other motive we don't yet know about? I don't think so, but I have learned not to underestimate you ladies, either.In the meantime, what are Snape and Charis doing in thier search for the meaning of the prophesy? Sooner or later one of them is bound to say or do something that comfirms for the other that there are still real and deep emotions involved between. I can't wait to see what you have in store for our lovely characters next? Hope to see the next chapter soon!!!Berh
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Hm, interesting question you had there about Narcissa. Just how much DOES she know? ... We have the next three or four chapters outlined, and we can promise you that there WILL be some, um, actions that will show exactly what our beloved characters feel for each other. We're hoping that our RLs calm down soon, so we can write out fingers off. Thank you for your patience and support.
I hope she opens up. It would be good for her to get it out. Grindling is a complex character; not quite sure what to make of him yet. I'm glad you're still writing this story, I love following it. 5 stars.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Morgana is Slytherin. When it comes to burying her emotions deep inside her heart, she has learnt from the best. It's not healthy, but it's what Slytherins seem to do best. We apologize for the long wait, but life has been very busy. But with summer and long evening approaching, we hope to soon be able to post a new chapter. Thank you for your support!
Well, Charis got the info she needed. She just needs to remember her astronomy now.I've known this pair of stories have been out there for some time but avoided reading them because they were not about canon-centric characters. But I took a chance and I've really enjoyed them. I look forward to finding out what happens. Keep up the good work!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Thank you for taking a chance on our stories, we're really thrilled you've enjoyed them and we hope you'll stick with the sequel. Thanks again for your support, it means a lot!
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
May I say I never expected you two to answer ALL my reviews since I left a ton of them at one time. But thank you. If I've put you behind on your writing, feel free to blame me.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
We try to answer all our reviews. It's so nice to get feedback, and we like to show that we appreciate your thoughts. And no worries, you haven't slowed us down. Next chapter is being beta-read at the moment and we have done plenty of plotting. Lemons ahead ;-)
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
Ah lemon....one of my favorite flavors!
I think Charis is far too forgiving (maybe I just don't like Grindling).TeeHee, Severus is SOOOOO BAD. I love him.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
He's a naughty boy! and that's why we love him, right?
Oooh the plot thickens. I think I've figured out most of the prophecy, now to watch as the characters figure it out.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Let's see if you're right :)
I am glad it was cleared up that Morgana is NOT the one Grindling was talking about. She has enough worries. And go her for standing up for her friend.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Shooting Stars)
Yes, Morgana kicked ass :)