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Potions Under Duress Polyandry and Other Problems
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Polyandry and Other Problems

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

29: Chapter 29

30: Chapter 30

31: Chapter 31

32: Chapter 32

33: Chapter 33

34: Chapter 34

35: Chapter 35

36: Chapter 36

37: Epilogue

Polyandry and Other Problems

ayerf

862 Reviews   |   862 Ratings, 0 Likes, 500 Favorites )

Drama Romance Epilogue compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 141,862 Words 47 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape

A magical plague strikes the wizarding world, decimating the female population. The Wizengamot sees a revolutionary new marriage law as the only way to repopulate their dying world. Hermione, Severus and Lucius Malfoy get caught up in the consequences.

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Chapters (37)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Chapter 37: Epilogue


About ayerf

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ayerf

Member Since 2006  |  30 Stories  |  Favorited by 277  |  151 Reviews Written  |  1,977 Review Responses

Jumped on the Harry Potter bandwagon in 2000 (when Goblet of Fire was out in hardback). Prisoner of Azkaban is my favourite in the series, followed by Order of the Phoenix. I read and write in the SS/HG corner of the Potterverse.

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10/10

beaweasley2

Oh, Severus' reaction toward Lucius are getting stronger. He is really jealous. But all I can see is this truning into a SS/HG/LM three-somes story. I don't see Severus allowing a LM/HG night two times a week happening? Or Hermione bouncing between wizards. Hmmm I'm so glad that both got to see her walk all over Fudge, ALthough Lucius' reactions to the memories was amusing!

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

History really isn't on Severus's side - that can't be helping matters.SS/HG/LM is eventually the goal, but that rather depends on the plot bunny not scuppering it with a few too many obstacles.Indeed Severus would not allow that - and Hermione wouldn't want to do it either.Glad you liked Lucius's reaction!Thanks for reviewing.

10/10

beaweasley2

This was by for the most enjoyable FUdge walking I have ever read! Even better - Fudge is stuck having sex with Umbridge!  You married Fudge to Umbridge! Oh, gotta love that! No wonder he's a sour puss.

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

Thank you! It was fun to write, too. Poor Fudge! I'm delighted that you liked that bit.Thanks for reviewing!

Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)

 Oh, gods! It just hit me!  Unbridge a mom!  Noooooooooooo!

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

It is a very scary thought. I just hope the plot bunny responsible will be merciful and it'll turn out that she and Fudge are past it! Poor kid, otherwise!

10/10

beaweasley2

Lucius - demanning. LOL right. It still works  only it doesn't spit out viable seeds. I'm crossing my fingers for Sverus though.

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

Quite! Lucius's pride shouldn't be too damaged.I'm sure Hermione was too.Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

beaweasley2

Yeah!  Trust Severus to find a way to stick it to them! But that doesn't help Ginny. Or any of the other broodmares?Hmmm.

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

Indeed not. Unfortunately the powers that be would definitely notice something if everyone turned out to be sterile. That and most wizards and witches will want to start families, if only to follow tradition.Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh, how sad. Infertile - or worse, miscarriages. Poor girl. Will the problems never end?

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

Poor Hermione indeed.If they are lucky, they will by the end of the story. I'm really not terribly nice to these poor characters, am I?Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

beaweasley2

Enjoyed the sufring trough the records - adn you portraid the feeling of 'trapped' very well. I'd be livid too. So Hermione is pregers! Whoot! One down - no wait - girl or boy?

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

Thank you! I did my best to get the feeling right.My lips are sealed!Thanks for reviewing.

10/10

beaweasley2

It was only a matter of time!  Is that 2 girls per witch - or 2 girls per husband?  Gads, if Ginny follows the Weasley tradition - she and Harry will have 14 kids!

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

Two girls per witch. It could be worse! Like 14 kids... I'm fairly sure Ginny will want to break that tradition!Thanks for reviewing.

10/10

beaweasley2

Matchmaker Hermione! Not. Well, we'll see how this all goes! At least Ginny is keeping an open mind.

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

Heh! Hermione's really not matchmaker material. Definitely good that Ginny's doing that.Thanks for reviewing!

0/10

Clairvoyant

Bad idea to trust Lucius in the first place.  Hope Severus will see the ruse, forgive his wife and hex Lucius' nads off.  Tricksy needs to spend time in the dungeons. Heh,heh, heh.

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

Very bad idea! Hopefully he will, although I suspect Lucius might object with the last two!Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

beaweasley2

I'm glad that Severus was able to help Hermione sort out her thoughts, and that she was livid that he had. The eavesdropping on her and Draco was uncouth, but Severus' reaction was. I was probably as touched as Lucius by their thoughtful gift.

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

Heh! If Lucius stopped to consider that, he might change his voyeuristic habits... Severus definitely values his (and Hermione's) privacy.Glad you liked the gift!Thanks for reviewing.

10/10

beaweasley2

Her wanting a shower is so typical of rape victims - although what happened wasn't rape. To scrub herself raw... Lucius' avary is terrific. But why shuch a strong reaction to Fawkes?

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

Not rape, no, but she definitely didn't want it.Thank you! It was quite fun to come up with. The next chapter should answer why she had such a strong reaction to Fawkes. Let me know if you still have any questions and I'll do my best to answer them.Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

snitchette

OMG !! So much happened in this chapter.  But I just can't believe Severus diesn't trust her more than that. I know he has a heavy past but still. I would feel betrayed at ther place and maybe turned to Lucius.

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

There was a lot to pack in to this chapter!He should trust her more, yes, but seeing her apparently kissing Lucius was too much for his self control.Perhaps if Lucius hadn't caused the betrayal, she might have turned to him.Thanks for reviewing!

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beaweasley2

LOL Viktor challenging for a duel! I'm rahter glad that he backed down. So if both Hermione's and Severus' signatures trun silver, is gold for a virgin?

Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)

And that elf - Tricksy? What the - Hermione should be really careful of that creature! Her hatred of Hermione. Thst doesn't bode well at all!  No wonder Crooks wanted to attack the lf. She should have let him!

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

Just as well for Viktor that he did!Yes, gold is for a virgin.Tricksy is definitely up to no good. The problem with letting Crooks pounce is that she hasn't done anything. Yet.Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

keske

wooo! go mione go!  ~accidentally sets her dog after tricksy....accidentally~

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

Hee! Glad you liked Hermione unleashed....I pity the dog. Tricksy is vicious!Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

June W

hmm, I wonder if Tricksy somehow caused Hermione's problems -- or even Cissa, perhaps cursing the next Mrs Malfoy.  I am very glad Hermione realized it was Lucius causing problems, and hope Severus will listen.  they could even use Lucius' Pensieve to view the memory -- and oops, discover Lucius' "library" of memories!  what a git the blond is....   bad Lucius!  thank you for the new chapter!

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

Interesting ideas! Both are innocent in this case, as Hermione inherited the problems from her mother.Hopefully Severus will...Heh! That would work if Lucius hadn't warded his library of memories so that only he can access them. Very bad Lucius!Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh good lord! Is there no bounds to how low the Ministry will go? I fully thought that Severus and Hermione had... well Oh.So, just  get upsatirs and get it over with!

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

I'm sure that there's some lines this Ministry won't cross, if only because it has Kingsley in charge.Indeed they should!

10/10

beaweasley2

Quite an interesting wedding. The use of the Blood-quill was disgusting, but I can see the symbolism in it. Yuck, though.I was amused by the guys reaction to the kisses, Lucius' reaction mostly, although Severus' was to be expected. Boy, Severus is going to have kittens over the consumations part!

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

Thanks! Glad to hear it.I'm sure Hermione would agree with you about the blood quill. Come to that, I would too - I'm squeamish!He's certainly not going to be happy about Lucius's...

10/10

beaweasley2

Hermione's ending up on the roof was great! I loved Severus' reaction and his concern for her, even though he berated her fro her foolishness. Man I didn't begrudge him being the brunt of a mum's ideal wedding even if it was only a justice of the peace. Lucius' impressions on the room and ceremony was fabulous. I was amased that he felt a twinge of jealousy so soon though. He's not shown any caring toward Hermione at all except in what marrying her will do for him and his standing. I hope Hermione has common sence and keeps her marriage to Lucius jsut as small and civil.

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

It was irresistable!No actual caring, but he has registered that she's pretty. It's a start.I'm sure that's what Hermione would prefer.Thank you for reviewing!

10/10

neelix

Oh my goodness... he HAS to listen to her... or use Legillimency... in fact, thats probably a better idea... then hex old Lucius in the nads! That would be Fun!!!

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

Hopefully he'll listen or be persuaded to use Legilimency!Lucius would certainly deserve it.Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

beaweasley2

So Severus helped Will and Helen come to terms with what happened because of the war. I would have loved to read the 'dinner conversations' but the snippets you gave really made the events come out well. LOLSeverus' tender moment was sweet, but Harry's interuption was great!  I especially loved Lucius' reaction to the telephone! That was brilliant! I love the banter between Severus and Lucius.

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

Thank you! I'm glad the snippets worked.Couldn't resist Harry interruptus! Or Lucius encountering a telephone for the first time... glad you liked those bits!

10/10

blue artemis

 I think they need to be rid of Lucius soon.

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

Unless he turns over a new leaf and means it...Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

beaweasley2

I could really applaud Draco for his speach to his dad. Too bad it fell on such cold ears. Lucius is a right prick in this story. HIs actions alone would make me reconsider the arrangement. Even one night with him seems distateful. It is very interesting, Hermione's reaction to the house. I have a hundred questions about that, but I'll read on and hope you answer them. Loveing this story btw!

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

Draco does really seem to have turned over a new leaf. There's certainly room for improvement with Lucius, but to be fair he's changed a little too.At the moment there are two theories to explain Hermione's reaction: either Hermione's spell under the Cruciatus left her sensitive to places with Dark atmospheres, or that sensitivity is a lingering side effect of the plague.Thank you, I'm delighted to hear it!

10/10

SeleneDianara

This so unfair to Lucius (can't believe I'm saying this..) why should he stay in a sexless marriage!! It's just not right ! Surely, Hermione knows how unfair it is she does nonthing for Lucius. It's almost like he not there. The two of them Severus and Hermione are a bunch of users. I think Lucius should threaten to leave and let the consequences visit those selfish iggiots! I love your story as a result I really feel badly for Lucius.

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

I seem to have made Lucius a little too sympathetic if my story has made you feel so badly for him!He knew what he was getting into. There's not really any fair way to do it, as for Hermione to allow Lucius into her bed would not be fair to either her or Severus. Lucius would be using her if she did - he doesn't love her, just lusts after her at present.As for leaving, that would damage his reputation, which is the reason he wanted to marry Hermione in the first place. That and I don't think he'd really want to leave Malfoy Manor to them!Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad that you like the story so much. I hope you enjoy the rest of it.

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh as if Ron had a chance against Lucius! Insolent whelp. Did he call for the duel or did Lucius? Either way, the prat hadn't a chance in a 'lush garden hell.'Hermione's reaction was brilliant, and so like her. Lucius' demeanor needs a serious adjustment if he thinks he's going to woo her at all. His faux pas only shows how little he regards her. and his trapping her in his estate was cold.

Oh, boy, and now you've added Draco into this mess! LOL  Okay, this is going to be good - or get really ugly.

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

Poor Ron didn't stand a chance... and Lucius challenged Ron, who then used his influence with the Ministry as Harry's sidekick to get the 'best' spot for the duel.Lucius definitely does need to adjust...Thank you!

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh, Ron is such a prat. She's just woken up and he comes skidding in with ring in hand? well almost in hand, the fumbling with the ring was hilarious!Interesting how you added the two-wizard to every witch senario. and that witches cannot marry Muggles, only wizards. That will sit right with all the witches that wake up. But why did Hermione lose so much of her memory? Surely she wasn't in this coma for six months, since she'd fromed a friendship with Severus. Why did her memory loss go so far back? It's a shame really.I hope that she recalls some of the missing months. Is Crooks going to be all right in this?Was it Severu that was 'terrorizing the house-elf?'

I really hope Lucius isn't all that serious about dueling for Hermione. With her reputation, she's going to be primeAwitch for the desperate wizards!  Surely, she will know that!

sorry. good story!

Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)

Thank you! I just couldn't resist having Ron fumble.As mentioned in Chapter 1, Hermione's memory loss is a side effect of the cure. She fell ill about six months after Voldy's death (so became friendly with Severus in those months), and was ill for about the same length of time. During most of that, she was kept in a magically induced coma to buy time for the cure to be developed. The length of memory loss was determined by how long she was ill for, resulting in almost a year's memories being lost. Hope that makes sense!Yes, it was Severus, although the 'terrorising' would probably have been limited to 'fetch your Master and no you can't take my cloak'.Hopefully two ex-Death Eaters' reputation will be enough to scare off most wizards...Thank you for reviewing!

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