Chapter 4
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Chapter 4
Draco shot to his feet as soon as he realised who Severus was carrying. Disregarding the tortured screech of the antique chair against the floor, he drew his wand. When Lucius found himself the target, Draco only smirked slightly at the gobsmacked look on his father's face.
Severus gave Lucius a chilly smile. "I'll leave you to explain." At Lucius's splutters he chuckled darkly. "No, no, I cannot get in the way of a father-son reunion." He turned away from the open doorway and carried Granger away.
When he heard Severus's footsteps recede upstairs, Draco slowly lowered his wand and sat down.
He lazily flicked his wand at the other chair, pushing it out. "Have a seat, Father."
Just as Lucius gingerly lowered himself down, Draco flicked his wand again. To his disappointment, though not to his surprise, Lucius stayed seated on an invisible cushion of air.
"Such juvenile behaviour." His father shook his head, lip curling as he pulled the chair underneath himself. "I thought better of you."
"Likewise," Draco spat, and thrust his wand back into his robes, shifting his hands to the chair arms.
Lucius blinked and raised his eyebrows. "When have I ever behaved like an adolescent?"
"You know what I mean! Seems I was right all those months ago, after your precious Dark Lord fell and almost brought us down with him. You're back up to your old tricks."
"Now, Draco, I have nothing to do with the formation of this new law..."
Draco jerkily raised a hand to interrupt him. "I know that! It's hardly as if you have the influence anymore. What I want to know is why you're jumping at the first chance you get to replace Mother."
"Replace?" Lucius was on his feet, his face blotching an angry mottled red. "Your mother is irreplaceable."
"Then why duel Weasley for Granger?" Draco demanded.
"Because Severus wants her. She will be his wife, and mine too although mine in name only. Still, I expect you to offer her all due respect, as she will be your step-mother too. If in name only."
"Really?" Draco sneered, "And what did Granger say about that?"
"Nothing yet, she had a bad reaction to the drawing room before we could discuss it."
'That explains what was up with Granger; she fainted.' Draco's jaw dropped. "You took Granger into the drawing room? Where Aunt Bellatrix tortured her?"
"I forgot," Lucius muttered, flicking his fingers as if the matter was of no concern to him.
'Prick.' Draco snorted contemptuously. "You haven't changed at all. All those atrocities you witnessed in our own home meant nothing to you. Oh, but I forgot: you participated in many of them."
His father paled, his skin acquiring a sickly hue that almost rivalled his pale blond hair. "You know nothing, boy. I did what I had to in order to keep us alive. Had you access to the transactions of my vault, you would know that I have donated to many worthy causes since the end of the war. Like funding war orphans through Hogwarts, regardless of their blood status."
Draco lurched to his feet. "If not for your following a madman in the first place, none of that would have been necessary!" He breathed deeply following his outburst. "You still believe pure-bloods are better than half-bloods or Muggle-borns. Don't try to tell me different, you only see the worth in Granger as what marrying her will do for your precious influence."
Lucius stared at Draco as if he'd never seen him before, an expression Draco had only seen once before, on that night after the Dark Lord fell for the final time. The night when Draco had been free to voice thoughts that would have got himself and his family killed were the Dark Lord still alive. The night when he argued with his father, ignored his mother's pleas and left the family home.
"I might not like Granger much, but I do respect her. In fact, I daresay I'll treat her with more respect than you will. I don't like the concept, but she will be my step-mother, and not in name only. Speaking of Granger, before I leave I want to know that she is really all right."
Dragging a hand across his face, Lucius looked haggard and weary. "If you don't trust me, surely you can trust Severus?"
He ignored the hurt in his father's voice, turning away. "I suppose so." He stalked over to the door, and tried the handle. When it refused to open, he turned to look at Lucius and spoke between clenched teeth, "Release the wards, father."
"No. Draco, we haven't talked in far too long. Even at Narcissa's funeral, you didn't speak a word to me. And we need to talk now."
"Presuming that you manage to persuade Granger to marry you which, by the way, is unlikely, as in my experience she can't be manipulated I'll attend the wedding."
"Your confidence in me is so reassuring," Lucius drawled. "But what I wanted to talk about is your own nuptials."
Draco spun around, backing against the door. He contemplated drawing his wand, before he remembered something from his mother's last letter before she fell ill. '...please give your father a chance...'
"Fine. Talk."
"I know you blame me for the current state of the Malfoy reputation, but I am doing all I can to restore it. You could help with that by marrying a witch of sufficiently high status. Perhaps Ginny Weasley? I hear that she survived the plague. Yes, she would be perfect. A pure-blood, perfect for continuing the Malfoy line."
"You think the Malfoy name and lineage is all that I care about?" Draco laughed derisively. "It's high time that the Malfoy line had fresh blood in it." He laughed harder at the gormless expression on Lucius's face. Stunned disbelief suited him.
He turned the doorknob, satisfied to see it was mobile again. "I'll be sure to send you an invitation. Goodbye, father." He Disapparated, slipping through the open wards before Lucius could close them against him.
* * *
Once upstairs, Severus made his way to his usual guestroom. The door-elf briefly appeared to open it, although Severus could have easily managed the small amount of wandless magic necessary.
Instead, he wandlessly drew back the covers on the bed as he walked over to it. He laid Hermione down and straightened up, rubbing the ache from his arms and stretched his spine, feeling it click. While it had felt good to hold her close in his arms, it seemed that it did no favours for his body. Perhaps he needed to put on some weight before attempting to lift her again.
He looked down at Hermione, tapping his finger against his lower lip. Surely he could do better to make her comfortable ... Although tempting to use his hands, this was one instance where it was better to use otherwise foolish wand waving. A few swishes and flicks of his wand, together with accompanying non-verbal incantations, had her coat and boots off in seconds.
Severus frowned. Earlier, while in his arms, Hermione had been breathing shallowly, but more deeply than she was now; he could barely make out the rise and fall of her chest. He knelt down beside the bed, returned his wand to his pocket, and took hold of one of her hands with both of his. As he suspected, her breathing eased.
But what he didn't understand was the cause of this fainting attack. Clearly something had happened that Lucius had failed to tell him about, something that Hermione had also neglected to mention.
He moved one of his hands to brush a stray lock of hair away from her face, brushing his fingers across the soft, smooth skin of her cheek in the process. Intrigued, Severus brought his fingers back to gently stroke that velvety surface. What would it feel like for his lips to take the same path? The thought startled him, and he inhaled sharply, suddenly aware that he'd stopped breathing.
There was nothing to stop him. No one watching. Hermione wouldn't know. He leant down, his lips almost touching her skin when he stopped. He would know that he'd taken advantage of her vulnerable state, and that was enough.
Straightening up, he took his wand out once more. "Rennervate," he murmured, watching as Hermione's eyes opened before they screwed up, unaccustomed to the light.
He waited until she could keep her eyes open before he asked the questions he felt a burning need to have answered. "What happened?"
"I was about to ask that," Hermione groaned, and covered her face with her hands, slipping hers off his in the process. Within moments she flinched, hugging her arms around herself, her breathing uneven.
"Give me your hand," Severus said, holding his hand out to her.
She didn't hesitate, and gripped his hand tightly as her breathing eased. She sighed in relief. "That's better. I don't know what caused that attack right now, it's not as if I was tortured in this room."
It was only the need to stay in skin contact with her that kept Severus from leaping to his feet and pacing in his agitation. "You were tortured in the drawing room," he stated, a thin veneer of calm in his tone. "When did that happen?"
"Oh. You didn't know?" Hermione smiled sheepishly. "About two months before the war ended maybe a little less, my memory's a little foggy Harry managed to get us caught by Snatchers, who took us to Malfoy Manor. Bellatrix was there."
"And she decided to play with a Muggle-born?"
"No, she noticed the sword. Gryffindor's Sword. She wanted to know how we got it. Bitch hoped that the Cruciatus Curse and a little knife play would persuade me to talk."
Witness of many terrible things during his Death Eater days, Severus had seen and heard worse, but this sickened him, made his stomach churn with nausea. That Potter had Gryffindor's Sword at the time had been down to him, which made him at least partially responsible for Hermione's torture.
"Anyway, when I stepped foot into the drawing room, did you say?" At his nod, she continued, "into the drawing room today, something took me back to the last time I was there. Not just to the memory either, it was as if I was being cursed again. But doesn't that happen with the Cruciatus Curse, feeling pain long afterwards?"
"It can, but only as muscular aches, and never triggered by revisiting the location where the curse was cast. You also seem affected by Malfoy Manor as a whole, not just the drawing room."
"Maybe the curse left me sensitive to places with a Dark atmosphere. Is there a spell to detect Dark magic?" she asked.
"Yes," Severus affirmed, and cast it, a red glow similar to the light cast by the Lumos charm hovering over his wand. "A non-verbal spell, and not one that I want you ever to be able to use, as it requires the caster to have used Dark magic." He moved his wand around, watching the steady glow for any flickering. "As can expected with the usage of the Manor in recent years, it is reeking of Dark magic."
He cancelled the spell. "But being the victim of the Cruciatus curse once does not result in sensitivity of the kind you clearly feel, even if the caster was Bellatrix Lestrange."
"Could it be a side-effect of the plague?" Hermione voiced the thought that had also occurred to Severus.
"Quite possibly. I hope not; apart from anything else, it has implications for the efficacy of the cure."
Severus was lost in thought for a while, staring into space as he absently stroked Hermione's hand with his thumb. He focussed on her when she spoke, and dragged his thoughts back to the present.
"Was Malfoy telling the truth when he told me that you're the reason he challenged Ron, because you want to marry me?" She was just resting her hand on his now, as if she would snatch it away despite the resulting discomfort if he said the wrong thing.
"He was, although I didn't ask him to do so. In fact I..."
"Advised him against it. He said that, too. He also said that you want to marry me because you... care for me."
"I do," Severus breathed, sure that to speak louder would somehow make her reject him.
"I don't know you very well. But I do trust you, and I certainly like you. Due to this harebrained law, I need to get married. Twice.
"But I owe my life to you," Hermione stated, looking steadily at Severus. "Gratitude is not a healthy foundation for a marital relationship."
At first, Severus didn't understand what she meant. Then he realised: she meant the cure. "I helped to develop the cure. Also, although you do not remember it, you helped Fawkes save my life. Neither of us have a debt to the other," he said, and squeezed her hand. She squeezed back, beaming at him.
"So that's how you survived!"
Severus peeled back his collar with his wand tip, showing her the unblemished skin where Nagini had bitten him. Hermione tentatively reached up to touch it, and paused as if for permission. Severus raised his head slightly, granting her access.
Just before she touched him, there was a knock at the door.
* * *
Hermione felt Severus's hand jerk, and had to hold on to it to prevent him from moving out of her reach as he stood and turned to face the door. As it was, Hermione had to sit up, bracing her free hand behind her to balance herself when she felt dizzy at the sudden movement.
The door swung open, Malfoy not waiting for an answer before he entered. He seemed to be leering, watching Severus and Hermione with a voyeuristic glint in his eyes, almost as if he had been expecting them to be snogging. He raised an eyebrow at their clasped hands.
"How touching," he murmured, just within audible range for Hermione.
Severus apparently heard him too, no surprise for a former spy and school teacher. "As a matter of fact, Lucius, if I do not touch her, she suffers from the Dark atmosphere of your home. Might I suggest that you get a curse breaker in?" To prove his point, he repeated his Dark-detecting spell, bathing Malfoy in the sick red light given off by his wand, which made the man look even more devilish than usual.
"Very well," Lucius murmured. "Now that we will not be interrupted, shall we discuss the matter at hand? Perhaps not here, it might be a little," a definite leer spread across his face, "cozy. Follow me."
It was a little awkward struggling into her shoes and coat with the need to keep hold of Severus, until he sighed and used magic.
Hermione looked up at him. He was smiling slightly, and shaking his head. Half-amused, half-exasperated, if she was any judge of Severus's moods.
"Thanks," Hermione murmured. She walked hand in hand with Severus after Malfoy, who led them down a richly carpeted corridor with portraits glaring out of their frames, and even the odd tapestry adorning the walls.
Malfoy stopped in front of a richly carved door. He opened it and stepped aside for his guests to enter first. Out of the corner of her eye, she observed Severus move his head toward Malfoy, although the only clue to his expression was the slight snort he made.
Any further contemplation on what Malfoy could be up to for Severus to react like that was wiped from Hermione's mind when she stepped inside. It seemed Draco hadn't been exaggerating much when boasting of the size of his family library. It was at least the size of Hogwarts' library, yet more spacious perhaps due to the lack of desks and chairs to clutter the place up. It was also better lit, at least during the day, by the ceiling being made entirely of glass.
She took an involuntary step forwards when she took in the neatly arranged, almost overflowing bookshelves almost forming corridors and lining the walls. If she'd noticed them first, the rest of this beautiful room would have been overlooked. Whoever the architect had been had planned this room well.
Hermione stepped closer to the nearest bookshelf, itching to see the titles, and even keener to read them. In doing so, she lost her hold on Severus's hand.
A strangled gasp escaped her as an icy hand seemed to reach inside and grasp her lungs, squeezing the air out of her. Although the sun shone through the crystalline ceiling overheard, her surroundings seemed to darken. The only thing missing from her experience in the drawing room earlier on was the echo of the Cruciatus Curse.
Two large hands gripped hers, and the chill faded. She inhaled deeply, relieved that she could breathe properly again. One of the hands clutching her own was smoother than the other, and felt colder ... no, it was warm, but her hand could gain no heat from it. Hermione glanced down, puzzled, and found that Malfoy had taken one of her hands, while Severus had the other.
"Severus, let go for a moment." When he did so, Hermione hissed between her teeth as that intangible chilly hand returned, and wrenched herself out of Malfoy's grip, lunging for Severus and grabbed hold of him as if he were a lifeline.
"So it's not just the touch of another person you need," Malfoy mused. "It's Severus in particular. Interesting."
"Very," Hermione spat, and glared at Malfoy. Yes, it had been an experiment, but he'd just cavalierly ignored her obvious pain. She kept hold of Severus with one hand as she tugged him over to one of the sofas scattered around the room and sat down. "You wanted me to stay in order to listen to your spiel about why I should marry you. I'm here; I'm listening, so talk."
Malfoy settled into an armchair across from them, and smoothed the creases from his trousers. "Provided that you like the idea of marrying Severus, I do believe that I am your best choice of the required second husband. Assuming, of course, that you, like Severus don't like sharing."
Hermione frowned. What was Malfoy driving at? "Get to the point."
"Believe me, I am." Malfoy bared his teeth, the smile not reaching his eyes. "After the recent loss of my wife, I have no wish to be married. Yet by law I must. Beyond the necessary consummation, if you marry me, it would be a marriage in name only."
"I see," she said. She couldn't read Malfoy the way she could read Severus, but it did sound like the truth. A glance at Severus reinforced that notion, as he nodded slightly at her. 'Nothing whatsoever to do with my status as a war heroine, huh?'
Malfoy cleared his throat, probably readying himself to pile on a few incentives.
Hermione held up her free hand. "Save it. You want to marry me, Mr Malfoy? Fine. While it must be said that I'd marry you for your library alone, I have other requirements."
"Such as?" Malfoy asked cagily.
"Nothing too onerous." She looked again at Severus. "I want to help Severus with his research and development into a cure for this memory loss. As it's highly doubtful that the Ministry will cough up the funds, you can."
"Very well," he muttered, flicking his fingers dismissively. If he was as filthy stinking rich as reported, it was no wonder that he didn't bat an eyelash.
"Good, because I also want you to fund my campaign against the powers that be to restore equal rights to witches. This law bans them from marrying Muggles, so banning them from marrying whomever they please. While it never even crossed my mind to marry a Muggle, I find it outrageous that the Wizengamot dictates in this way."
This time Malfoy actually blanched, much to Hermione's satisfaction. "Narcissa probably spent more on clothes and shoes during the time we were married," he said under his breath, right on the edge of Hermione's hearing. "As you wish," he continued, raising his voice into more audible levels. "If that's all, is my word sufficient, or do you require a vow? Or a prenuptial agreement?"
"A prenuptial agreement might draw undue attention from the Ministry," Severus murmured.
"Good point." Out of sight of Malfoy, shielded by Severus's hand, she stroked him with her thumb. Hermione turned her attention back to Malfoy. "I should insist on a vow, but that wouldn't be a very auspicious start to this marriage."
Tugging on Severus's hand, she climbed to her feet. "It's time for me to leave. Harry knows I came here, he'll be storming the place soon if I don't hunt him down for his lecture on his part in the damn duel." She gave both men a dark look. "I haven't forgotten your parts in it either. Let me assure you, you'll regret it." She gave them a chilly smile.
Malfoy stood, and walked over to her. He gave her an indulgent smile and bent over her free hand, planting a kiss on the back of it with warm, dry lips. "Of course. I shall look forward to it."
Hermione was vaguely surprised that she had no urge to wipe her hand on her clothes. For all his good looks, the man had a repulsive personality, or had possessed one before her illness as far as she knew.
"I'm glad to hear it." She looked down at the still-seated Severus. "Would you mind escorting me to the gates?"
He got to his feet. "It's time I left, too. I'll see you anon, Lucius."
They got as far as the library door when Hermione called back over her shoulder: "You can start by meeting my parents." Severus flinched slightly beside her, but the dismayed expression on Malfoy's face more than made up for the twinge of guilt she felt at her friend's no, fiancé's reaction. After all, he'd have to meet them too.
AN: Many thanks to septentrion and JunoMagic for betaing.
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What a story, I feel as if I have been pulled every which way and back again as if through a wringer lol. Lucious with hte help from his dead wife saved the day in the end lol. So sad with all the deaths and miscarriages.
Congrats on a well written piece of writing a superb job that should be applauded. Many thanks .
Poor Ron. They were a couple. However, she still prefers Severus. What are we going to do about Tricksy?
Oh well, I guess Hermione has to lose her virginity to two veril wizards. Poor thing gets to live in wealth and be admired by the same said viril wizards. She only has to contend with a bitter and bigoted house elf. It must be hard to have her mistress replaced but she is being a bad elf. You would think Hermione would pay attention to Crook's warning. She may need to watch her back. I think she should ask for a replacement or else have a talk with Tricksy. Not a comforting name for one's personal house elf is you ask me. Being too nice may actually get her more trouble than a clear understanding that while she knows she isn't Narcissa, she is now the Mistress. It's only pragmatic. Whether she likes it or not she is the proud owner of several house elves. If she doesn't treat them like they expect they will be shamed and you don't want to piss off a house elf. It would serve her well to think about how Harry won over Creature. It would also be a good idea for the three of them to discuss their expectations. Severus can't read her mind. It would get mighty tiresome to have someone pissed off at you all the time and you don't kow why. He's a man! What does she expect? She'll have to train him.
I hope Hermione and Draco become good friends and that she can find him a bride. I also hope you get around to telling us about the wedding night in detail soon. I've noticed you've told us little about what goes on inside Severus' head. We know he is in love with Hermione and that is all. Hermione is handling this marriage thing quite well. I would have expected more emotional resistance to the marrige law. She did the best possible thing however, and took the problem head on in a proactive move that kept as many of her choices in tact as possibe. She could have done much worse. She's very lucky Severus is the first person she saw when she woke up.
Good for the Grangers. Keep those snobbish wizards in line!
Good for Draco!!! Hermione, you should have thought longer in regard to your requirements. His future bad behavior will reflect on you. You also have to have sex with him at least once and I'm sure he wants to watch you and Severus. It is unwise to be so impulsive. You should have conferred with Severus on what to request, and there should be a cooling off period in case of buyer's remorse.
While I'm sure that Hermione will eventually enjoy sex with Lucius Malfoy, she doesn't know that yet. She should think this through better. She sure as hell should have made them both work harder at getting her to agree to marry them. She's given in too easy without knowing enough about either one of them.
I hope she lives up to Draco's faith in her judgement. So far she isn't impressing me except for the paper wack on Malfoy's face. Don't let me down, Hermione.
And Severus, what will you do if Hermione feels attracted to Lucius eventually? What if she decides she liked her wedding night with Lucius? He won't mind servicing her even if they are married only in name. Will you ask either of them to promise to be faithful to your feelings for her before the wedding night?
I can't believe that Hermione agreed to go back inside. She flinched! Never flinch when dealing with a Malfoy! This is a bad start if she ends up marrying them. She needs to establish the fact that she is the queen and never bluffs! He called her bluff and she just showed her weakness because of a little rain. She was stupid to let him take her back into the house after imprisoning her on his property. If she keeps up this stupid behavior she'll deserve what ever she gets.
Marriage is not truely a deal between equals. Men and women don't think the same way. For it to be equal you both need to have the same world view. She needs to establish the perameters of the relationship immediately. I've been married for 33 years and my views on marriage and men haven't improved much since I grew up watching my mom with 2 husbands and my dad with 3 wives by the time I was 18. He's on his fourth wife now. He is too old to get laid and doesn't want to be alone. This is the first woman he has ever even let decorate the house let alone put her name on it. She has the advantage this time. In his situation he obviously see's he is better off this way so it is worth the trade off in power. He knew his other choice was the rest home.
There is a price for being married to a man who can protect you and a different price to be paid to be married to an easy going guy. Easy going guys don't take care of business. Alpha males are controllig.
OMG! To be the step mother of Draco Malfoy! Severus is an idiot. If he really loves her he will get away from the Malfoys. They will always have the upper hand because they don't care if anyone likes them. It doesn't matter to them if they are right or wrong. The only way to keep from being controlled by them is constant vigilance and brute force or imperio. Not the way I want to live my daily life, how about you? He and Hermione alone could share power, trade power back and forth and compromise.
Another thing about Severus making this deal with Lucius, does he really think Hermione would be willing to have one of her husbands cheat on her? It isn't in her nature to understand any possible advantage to being married but not not in a committed relationship with husband number 2 under the circumstances she is presently given. She isn't smart enough to be able to enter into a business agreement with him as a condition of a marrige of convenience. Severus should be able to read his Griffindor better than this. It's a wonder he survived the war at this rate. Sheesh! He's thinkling with his dick.
And let me tell you, Hermione, Severus Snape isn't worth taking on Malfoy just to be with him. Severus Snape is his own peice of work. In this case, he isn't even totally on your side. He's made a deal regarding you with Lucius Malfoy, forgodssake! And by all that is holy, do not agree to live at Malfoy Manor! Please tell me Severus is at least smart enough not to do this on Lucius' turf.
If Severus really cares for Hermione, I would think he would try to protect her from someone like Lucius. Does he think he has a better chance with her if Lucius and he are presented as a package? I think she made it clear how she feels about Malfoys when she was yelling at Ron. If Hermione finds out Severus made a deal with Lucus, she will hex them both. Hermione will not willingly be manipulated. Severus Snape better think about the consequences that Hermione might find out that he already told Lucius he could marry her without her say in the matter. So far he doesn't show much hope of being any smarter than the average adult male, just not as stupid as Ron. Use your brain man! If she marries more than one man will she be required to get knocked up by all of them? If I was Hermione I would go back to the muggle world and hide. At the very least she better come out of that hospital, wand at the ready.
I enjoy this original premise for the marriage law plot. Will Severus be able to fix the memory problem with the cure? I am surprised he was not informed of this side effect. Amazing how Lucius never stops his plotting. I wonder if Severus has given him an answer yet. I wonder how much time the wizards have to comply. Surely not untill the living witches are all well. I assume at this point, that is why Severus is still not married. He and Hermione apparently have a past that is at least cordial, perhaps a bit more. I can't imagine Lucius being able to seduce this incarnation of Hermione. But I may underestimate him. I'm sure he will be as charming and repentant as a cross between Don Jaun and Saint Peter to Hermione's face. I wonder how much say the witches have over who they choose to marry. I would hope that since there are so many wizards they will be allowed to be courted. Hmmmm. More than one husband sounds like a lot of man-children to manage. Training just one is hard enough. If the woman is weak willed I can't imagine how they would work out the pack order. Two or more alpha males to one woman will take some thinking about. Who would fare the worst, the woman or the men? Being an alpha female myself, alpha males don't usually even ask us on a date. Thinking of the ones I know, we would kill each other soon into the marriage. I do not obey. I've decided the weak female would fare the worst. A couple of house elves will be helpful. I can't imagine the women who have to take care of more than one man. Multiple men would blame all of their problems on her, rather than themselves or each other. This will not be a problem for Hermione, I think. If she has enough money and a couple of house elves, would it be worth it to have separate homes for each husband? I'm sure the purpose of this law is to keep the witches perpetually pregnant. Just kill me now. Gods, how I hate being pregnant. I wonder what the penalty would be for using black market birth control potions or spells.
I never thought I would say "poor Lucius" in my life. But, poor Lucius. I bet the magical wedding will be even more difficult.
well we couldn't leave poor Lucius to his hand for the rest of his life now, could we? By another month he should be pretty well done.
Hooray for Fawkes! He wrapped his arms around her, lips by her ear. “Kinky.” heehee. I'm glad Lucius liked his present, it was a lovely idea.
Will he strew sugar on that bottled spider?
Severus wasn’t sure what was worse: imagining what was happening or witnessing it. Regardless, she needed him. That was all that mattered. my heart, it is going pittapat.
mmm nice morning they had there, and I like how Luc is starting to warm up. I should be going to sleep already, but can't stop...
I love Hermiones thoughts about her two husbands while Ginny is casting the spell. I can almost feel sorry for Lucius, looking at his bare left hand, can forgive him being quite suck a prat. Nice that Draco's trying. Granger’s gaze felt as if it could see into his soul. Much like Severus’s could, Draco realised. He shuddered to think what she’d pick up from his father. ooh, shiver.
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Thanks! Poor Lucius - still a prat, but a forgivable one, at least sometimes. Glad that you like how Draco is trying to be decent.
“I keep white peacocks. What do you think?” :-)
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Glad you like that line! Lucius was fun to write.
Pity Lucius is being such the prat, I love the house - and the library :-)
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Thanks! He does come with a very big bonus, doesn't he? Even if he is a prat, at least there's his library.
Mmm, have to admit to having a tendre for duellist!Lucius. Pity Herms doesn't see it that way.She strode away, refusing to look back even when Severus called her name desperately ... sniffle.
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Thanks! Glad to hear it. Too bad for Lucius, yes... and almost too bad for poor Severus, caught in the crossfire.
Now there is a marriage law I could get to like ;-)
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Thank you! So long as the men involved were like Severus (and maybe Lucius if he behaves himself) I'd be inclined to agree with you.
Eeeeheehee! I'm dying to see Lucius duel Ron over Hermione :o)
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Poor Ron - he really doesn't stand a chance!Thank you!
Congrats on fufilling your new years resolution! It was close but you did it. I really liked the way you let magic itself balance out the birth rations. Very cool. Thank you for giving us a happy ending with out making me puke. In otherwords enough angst with a surviving child ! Wheeee! You done good Ayerf. Thank you!!
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Too close for comfort, but a relief!Glad magic balancing things out worked for you, I hoped it would.Thank you very much! I wasn't sure if it would count as a happy ending, but I guess the surviving child made it one.
What I liked best besides ridding the world of Voldy's remains and final curse is Lucius' POV. Even in the midst of a horrible time crunch he still manages to be amusing. Love that man!
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Thank you! I hoped Lucius's POV would be funny and lighten the tone a bit in that tense time.
I cannot beleive this story ends in 2 more chapters! How have you wrapped it up? What the hell was Narcissa talking about? and OMG Lucius is in major trouble.
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Glad to keep you guessing this close to the end! Definitely in trouble... but he's sure to manage to wriggle his way out of it somehow.
Is there a major character death warning on this story?? You have me all kinds of worried my friend!
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Nope, no character death warning. It was awfully tempting to have one, though... Still, sorry to worry you, but glad you were worried, even if it does make me sound rather evil!
Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)
Who else were you considering killing off? Your plague did a great job of most of the characters! LOL! Ginny?
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Oh, just Hermione. Then Severus would kill Lucius, then himself. And then I guess without them, Ginny would die too. And lots of other witches. Unless someone else could get the message out. That was my rocks-fall-and-everyone-dies scenario, but... I resisted the temptation. Somehow.True, the plague did do a pretty good job!