Chapter 24
Chapter 24 of 37
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Chapter 24
Hermione slumped against the door, her throat dry and raw. Either Severus wasn't in his room, or he had an Imperturbable up ... or he was ignoring her. She tried the door once more. Still locked, and far beyond what a simple Alohomora would open. If that was the case with this adjoining door, chances were that the other door was still locked, too.
She gently rubbed her aching knuckles. Backhanding Lucius hard enough to make him bleed hadn't done her any good. Pounding the same hand against the door only made matters worse.
If Severus wasn't in his room, where was he? His lab? With Fawkes in the aviary? A quick Apparition or two would answer that ...
Nothing happened. There was no squeeze of Apparition. Hermione tried again, this time focusing inside Severus's bedroom. Again, nothing.
'Bastard!' Lucius. It had to be. He must have blocked her passage through the manor's anti-Apparition wards.
She could make one more quick check. Hermione pulled out her wand and laid it flat on her palm. "Point me," she whispered, keeping her thoughts focused on Severus. Ordinarily it would point north, but it could be put to other uses if the caster had the necessary strength of mind.
The tip of her wand turned slightly to point at Severus's bedroom door. It didn't stay still, instead following his movements, shifting to and fro. He was pacing.
So he was licking his perceived wounds in his bedroom. What now? Wait until he cooled off enough to let her in? Send a Patronus message to make him listen to her? No, that wouldn't work. She didn't know how. If she'd ever found out, it was among the memories she'd lost.
Hermione pulled up her sleeve to check her watch. There were still most of the five hours left before the deadline Severus had imposed.
Plenty of time to have dinner and attempt to wash away the bad luck clinging to her with a nice long shower. After that, she could try the door again, and if the stupid man still didn't respond, she'd break the fucking door down.
Hermione called Tricksy. For once, the house-elf didn't glare at her. That was strange, especially considering that she'd struck precious Master. Maybe Tricksy didn't know about that, or she knew and didn't approve of Lucius's actions. Whatever the case, this was hardly the time to look a gift horse in the mouth.
Tricksy brought up a plate of lasagne, with a tray to balance it on Hermione's knees where she sat on the end of her bed. After coming back with a glass of wine and a bowl of fruit salad, Tricksy cracked away again.
Hermione wasn't in the mood for wine. A quick spell changed it into water, and she gulped it down. She'd be able to speak to Severus now, at least, rather than croak at him.
Hungry as Hermione was she'd managed to forget about lunch she could only pick at her food. Her eyes remained on the locked adjoining door. She forced herself to eat. She'd need her wits about her if Severus was going to listen. The lasagne was cold long before she finished. A Warming Charm didn't even cross her mind.
She pushed aside the tray and resisted the urge to try the door again. Instead she undressed and pulled on her dressing gown, before wandering into the bathroom.
The hot water felt good, but she couldn't enjoy it. Not when she was mentally pacing in front of the locked door like a caged tiger. The pads of her fingers had pruned by the time she gave up. The water still ran hot where any Muggle shower she'd been in would have long ago run cold, although that was magic for you. Despite the heat, her muscles were just as tense as before she'd set foot in the bathroom.
Hermione dried herself off and dressed for bed. When Severus let her in, he expected her to hop into bed with him. Wearing pyjamas instead of nothing under her dressing gown should make it clear that she wanted to talk first.
She stalked over to his door. It was unsurprisingly still locked. Surely two hours was long enough to hide away? It better be ... Hermione drew her wand.
'Reduc...Stupid! Check that the idiot I happen to love isn't in the way first ... Point me.' Good. Severus must be in his bathroom.
'Reducto!' All that happened was that the door glowed slightly red. Hermione tried it on the wall instead, only for the same thing to happen. Wait ... it wasn't the door or the wall. It was the wards.
Hermione hesitated, a more powerful spell on the tip of her tongue. Better check that Severus was still out of the way ... He was. If this worked, there wouldn't be much of his bedroom left.
'Defodio!' The glow was brighter, but both door and wall were unaffected.
Severus must really want to be alone if he'd thrown up wards like that. They must be stronger than Gringotts, or at least stronger than the ones Gringotts had before she, Harry and Ron had broken out on the back of a dragon.
What now? Try to break the wards? She could try, but it would only mean working herself into magical exhaustion. Wards that could repel that sort of magic were beyond her skills.
That left one thing to do: wait. Hermione levelled her wand at the door and concentrated. There. Now it would open as soon as it unlocked.
There were three more hours until midnight. Three hours until the deadline Severus set. Hopefully he'd see fit to let her in before then, but if he was angry enough to lock himself away, he might let her worry until the last minute.
Hermione sat down on the edge of her bed. Where was Crookshanks when she needed a purring furball to cuddle? She hadn't seen him since that morning.
She flopped back on the bed and reached for the book she was reading, one of Severus's detective novels: Strong Poison. After reading the same page twice, she gave up. Unsurprisingly, her thoughts were on the owner of the book, not on the story.
What could she do to make him listen to her? Take Veritaserum? She didn't know for sure if Severus had any. Legilimency? That depended on him, he might refuse. Shove him into a Pensieve memory? For that to work, she'd need to get her hands on a Pensieve. They were expensive; it was unlikely Severus had one. Lucius might, but he'd hardly let them use it.
Hermione dropped off into a restless sleep. She dreamed of running after Severus, only by the time she caught up he was behind a locked door. There were a hundred keys to try, and when she found the right one, there was another locked door. And another. And another. The last key broke in the lock with a loud click.
She jerked awake. The door had finally opened. It was almost midnight. Hermione sprang to her feet and dashed inside Severus's room. It was empty.
Hermione laid her wand flat on her palm once more. 'Point me.' It almost rolled off her hand as it spun anticlockwise. No, no, no ... He was out of range. Gone.
A glint of silver caught her eye from the bedside table. No. Not silver. Platinum. His wedding ring.
Her knees felt weak. She sat down on his their bed before she fell down. She hesitantly reached out to touch the cooling metal, her sight blurred by tears. Hermione angrily scrubbed at her eyes. Crying wouldn't help.
Something clinked nearby. Hermione sat bolt upright and pulled her hands away.
Tricksy stood in front of her and had set down a cup on the bedside table next to...
'Come on, Hermione, it won't ... won't kill you to think it: Severus's ring.'
"Tricksy helps Missy. When poor Mistress was upset, Tricksy gives her tea."
The universal panacea. It was what her mother would do, after hugging her. She definitely wasn't about to ask that of Tricksy, friendly as she was being at the moment.
"Thank you." She took the cup and cooled it to perfect drinking temperature with a murmured Cooling Charm.
She took a sip of the tea and swallowed. She blinked. 'What?!' The clock on Severus's bedside table, a Muggle style clock with Roman numerals. The short hand pointed at 'XII', as could be expected, but the long hand rested on 'I'. Five minutes past twelve. Yet her clock hadn't struck midnight ...
"Accio watch!" Hermione deftly caught her watch and set it down on the bedside table. She'd enchanted it herself so that it could never be wrong, and a quick spell assured her that it hadn't been tampered with.
It was two minutes shy of midnight.
Something was wrong.
Of course ... Those wards weren't Severus's doing. They were the manor's wards. Lucius's work. His fault! She stood up and stalked towards the door. The interfering bastard would soon learn his lesson ... And why was she still holding the teacup? So much for cutting a dramatic figure. Well, most heroines didn't have something like this land on them when they'd only just started a cup of tea.
Hermione raised the cup to her lips and paused. Something was very wrong. She put a hand to her throat. It burned.
The cup fell from her hands. Hermione clutched at her chest, more white-hot pain swelling with each breath behind her sternum...no, with each heartbeat. She fell to her knees, her scrambled thoughts only registering the sound of the shattering cup when shards of fine bone china drew blood.
"Help," Hermione called out, or rather tried to. Nothing happened, not even a whisper. There was only a rush of air, accompanied by a fresh wave of agony.
"Missy needs help?" Tricksy asked, appearing in front of her. The elf who'd brought the tea. Poisoned tea. Through the pain, her blood felt like ice.
'Innocent until proven guilty.' Hermione reminded herself. But if Tricksy was innocent, then ... The chill deepened. "Bezoar," she mouthed.
"Missy wants bezoar? Missy Mudblood can't have one." If Tricksy's words didn't confirm who the culprit was, the way the elf started to dance gleefully proved it.
Hermione closed her eyes as her sight blurred, at least two elves dancing in front of her. It didn't help; if anything her sight was even worse when she opened them again.
"You bad elf." She drew her wand. It felt heavy; she could barely lift it, her hand trembling. How was she supposed to Summon a bezoar?
"Bad Tricksy! Bad Tricksy!" Tricksy cackled, arms jerking as she struggled with the impulse to punish herself. She had something in her hand, easily as long as Hermione's hand span.
Before Hermione could try to focus on whatever Tricksy held, the deranged elf turned it on herself. As if from far away, Hermione heard a bubbling, raspy choke.
'Punctured her lung. Must have been something sharp.'
Tricksy would have to wait; while Hermione was no Potions Mistress, she knew she'd be a goner if she didn't get a bezoar or antidote down within a minute of swallowing poison. That left her mere seconds now.
"Accio bezoar." Nothing. Hermione clenched her teeth, forcing past the weariness weighing down her thoughts.
"Acc..." She doubled over, coughing and choking. The metallic tang of blood filled her mouth.
'Oh no ...' Where was her wand? She couldn't see it, her vision a swirling blur. She felt around for it, her movements sluggish. Her fingers knocked it. She dimly heard it roll away.
More choking coughs shook her, the pain searing her throat. She collapsed to the floor, the silver carpet filling her vision. Crimson pooled across it, trickling from her mouth.
Her mouth ached, everything stung from her tongue to her teeth. But it paled next to the burn of her throat and knees, and the blazing of her chest. The fire spread further with every beat of her heart.
The blur of silver and blood red was fading. No, not just that, it was her sight. Everything was dimming.
There was something she was forgetting. Something she was looking for. What?
So much pain. All she wanted was to close her eyes and let the darkness take it all away.
She shook her head weakly. No. Severus. Where was he?
"Help," she mouthed, blood trickling out of her mouth with the futile rush of air.
No one came, of course; Severus had gone.
Darkness claimed her.
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AN: Many thanks to Kribu, JunoMagic and Septentrion for betaing.
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What a story, I feel as if I have been pulled every which way and back again as if through a wringer lol. Lucious with hte help from his dead wife saved the day in the end lol. So sad with all the deaths and miscarriages.
Congrats on a well written piece of writing a superb job that should be applauded. Many thanks .
Poor Ron. They were a couple. However, she still prefers Severus. What are we going to do about Tricksy?
Oh well, I guess Hermione has to lose her virginity to two veril wizards. Poor thing gets to live in wealth and be admired by the same said viril wizards. She only has to contend with a bitter and bigoted house elf. It must be hard to have her mistress replaced but she is being a bad elf. You would think Hermione would pay attention to Crook's warning. She may need to watch her back. I think she should ask for a replacement or else have a talk with Tricksy. Not a comforting name for one's personal house elf is you ask me. Being too nice may actually get her more trouble than a clear understanding that while she knows she isn't Narcissa, she is now the Mistress. It's only pragmatic. Whether she likes it or not she is the proud owner of several house elves. If she doesn't treat them like they expect they will be shamed and you don't want to piss off a house elf. It would serve her well to think about how Harry won over Creature. It would also be a good idea for the three of them to discuss their expectations. Severus can't read her mind. It would get mighty tiresome to have someone pissed off at you all the time and you don't kow why. He's a man! What does she expect? She'll have to train him.
I hope Hermione and Draco become good friends and that she can find him a bride. I also hope you get around to telling us about the wedding night in detail soon. I've noticed you've told us little about what goes on inside Severus' head. We know he is in love with Hermione and that is all. Hermione is handling this marriage thing quite well. I would have expected more emotional resistance to the marrige law. She did the best possible thing however, and took the problem head on in a proactive move that kept as many of her choices in tact as possibe. She could have done much worse. She's very lucky Severus is the first person she saw when she woke up.
Good for the Grangers. Keep those snobbish wizards in line!
Good for Draco!!! Hermione, you should have thought longer in regard to your requirements. His future bad behavior will reflect on you. You also have to have sex with him at least once and I'm sure he wants to watch you and Severus. It is unwise to be so impulsive. You should have conferred with Severus on what to request, and there should be a cooling off period in case of buyer's remorse.
While I'm sure that Hermione will eventually enjoy sex with Lucius Malfoy, she doesn't know that yet. She should think this through better. She sure as hell should have made them both work harder at getting her to agree to marry them. She's given in too easy without knowing enough about either one of them.
I hope she lives up to Draco's faith in her judgement. So far she isn't impressing me except for the paper wack on Malfoy's face. Don't let me down, Hermione.
And Severus, what will you do if Hermione feels attracted to Lucius eventually? What if she decides she liked her wedding night with Lucius? He won't mind servicing her even if they are married only in name. Will you ask either of them to promise to be faithful to your feelings for her before the wedding night?
I can't believe that Hermione agreed to go back inside. She flinched! Never flinch when dealing with a Malfoy! This is a bad start if she ends up marrying them. She needs to establish the fact that she is the queen and never bluffs! He called her bluff and she just showed her weakness because of a little rain. She was stupid to let him take her back into the house after imprisoning her on his property. If she keeps up this stupid behavior she'll deserve what ever she gets.
Marriage is not truely a deal between equals. Men and women don't think the same way. For it to be equal you both need to have the same world view. She needs to establish the perameters of the relationship immediately. I've been married for 33 years and my views on marriage and men haven't improved much since I grew up watching my mom with 2 husbands and my dad with 3 wives by the time I was 18. He's on his fourth wife now. He is too old to get laid and doesn't want to be alone. This is the first woman he has ever even let decorate the house let alone put her name on it. She has the advantage this time. In his situation he obviously see's he is better off this way so it is worth the trade off in power. He knew his other choice was the rest home.
There is a price for being married to a man who can protect you and a different price to be paid to be married to an easy going guy. Easy going guys don't take care of business. Alpha males are controllig.
OMG! To be the step mother of Draco Malfoy! Severus is an idiot. If he really loves her he will get away from the Malfoys. They will always have the upper hand because they don't care if anyone likes them. It doesn't matter to them if they are right or wrong. The only way to keep from being controlled by them is constant vigilance and brute force or imperio. Not the way I want to live my daily life, how about you? He and Hermione alone could share power, trade power back and forth and compromise.
Another thing about Severus making this deal with Lucius, does he really think Hermione would be willing to have one of her husbands cheat on her? It isn't in her nature to understand any possible advantage to being married but not not in a committed relationship with husband number 2 under the circumstances she is presently given. She isn't smart enough to be able to enter into a business agreement with him as a condition of a marrige of convenience. Severus should be able to read his Griffindor better than this. It's a wonder he survived the war at this rate. Sheesh! He's thinkling with his dick.
And let me tell you, Hermione, Severus Snape isn't worth taking on Malfoy just to be with him. Severus Snape is his own peice of work. In this case, he isn't even totally on your side. He's made a deal regarding you with Lucius Malfoy, forgodssake! And by all that is holy, do not agree to live at Malfoy Manor! Please tell me Severus is at least smart enough not to do this on Lucius' turf.
If Severus really cares for Hermione, I would think he would try to protect her from someone like Lucius. Does he think he has a better chance with her if Lucius and he are presented as a package? I think she made it clear how she feels about Malfoys when she was yelling at Ron. If Hermione finds out Severus made a deal with Lucus, she will hex them both. Hermione will not willingly be manipulated. Severus Snape better think about the consequences that Hermione might find out that he already told Lucius he could marry her without her say in the matter. So far he doesn't show much hope of being any smarter than the average adult male, just not as stupid as Ron. Use your brain man! If she marries more than one man will she be required to get knocked up by all of them? If I was Hermione I would go back to the muggle world and hide. At the very least she better come out of that hospital, wand at the ready.
I enjoy this original premise for the marriage law plot. Will Severus be able to fix the memory problem with the cure? I am surprised he was not informed of this side effect. Amazing how Lucius never stops his plotting. I wonder if Severus has given him an answer yet. I wonder how much time the wizards have to comply. Surely not untill the living witches are all well. I assume at this point, that is why Severus is still not married. He and Hermione apparently have a past that is at least cordial, perhaps a bit more. I can't imagine Lucius being able to seduce this incarnation of Hermione. But I may underestimate him. I'm sure he will be as charming and repentant as a cross between Don Jaun and Saint Peter to Hermione's face. I wonder how much say the witches have over who they choose to marry. I would hope that since there are so many wizards they will be allowed to be courted. Hmmmm. More than one husband sounds like a lot of man-children to manage. Training just one is hard enough. If the woman is weak willed I can't imagine how they would work out the pack order. Two or more alpha males to one woman will take some thinking about. Who would fare the worst, the woman or the men? Being an alpha female myself, alpha males don't usually even ask us on a date. Thinking of the ones I know, we would kill each other soon into the marriage. I do not obey. I've decided the weak female would fare the worst. A couple of house elves will be helpful. I can't imagine the women who have to take care of more than one man. Multiple men would blame all of their problems on her, rather than themselves or each other. This will not be a problem for Hermione, I think. If she has enough money and a couple of house elves, would it be worth it to have separate homes for each husband? I'm sure the purpose of this law is to keep the witches perpetually pregnant. Just kill me now. Gods, how I hate being pregnant. I wonder what the penalty would be for using black market birth control potions or spells.
I never thought I would say "poor Lucius" in my life. But, poor Lucius. I bet the magical wedding will be even more difficult.
well we couldn't leave poor Lucius to his hand for the rest of his life now, could we? By another month he should be pretty well done.
Hooray for Fawkes! He wrapped his arms around her, lips by her ear. “Kinky.” heehee. I'm glad Lucius liked his present, it was a lovely idea.
Will he strew sugar on that bottled spider?
Severus wasn’t sure what was worse: imagining what was happening or witnessing it. Regardless, she needed him. That was all that mattered. my heart, it is going pittapat.
mmm nice morning they had there, and I like how Luc is starting to warm up. I should be going to sleep already, but can't stop...
I love Hermiones thoughts about her two husbands while Ginny is casting the spell. I can almost feel sorry for Lucius, looking at his bare left hand, can forgive him being quite suck a prat. Nice that Draco's trying. Granger’s gaze felt as if it could see into his soul. Much like Severus’s could, Draco realised. He shuddered to think what she’d pick up from his father. ooh, shiver.
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Thanks! Poor Lucius - still a prat, but a forgivable one, at least sometimes. Glad that you like how Draco is trying to be decent.
“I keep white peacocks. What do you think?” :-)
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Glad you like that line! Lucius was fun to write.
Pity Lucius is being such the prat, I love the house - and the library :-)
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Thanks! He does come with a very big bonus, doesn't he? Even if he is a prat, at least there's his library.
Mmm, have to admit to having a tendre for duellist!Lucius. Pity Herms doesn't see it that way.She strode away, refusing to look back even when Severus called her name desperately ... sniffle.
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Thanks! Glad to hear it. Too bad for Lucius, yes... and almost too bad for poor Severus, caught in the crossfire.
Now there is a marriage law I could get to like ;-)
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Thank you! So long as the men involved were like Severus (and maybe Lucius if he behaves himself) I'd be inclined to agree with you.
Eeeeheehee! I'm dying to see Lucius duel Ron over Hermione :o)
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Poor Ron - he really doesn't stand a chance!Thank you!
Congrats on fufilling your new years resolution! It was close but you did it. I really liked the way you let magic itself balance out the birth rations. Very cool. Thank you for giving us a happy ending with out making me puke. In otherwords enough angst with a surviving child ! Wheeee! You done good Ayerf. Thank you!!
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Too close for comfort, but a relief!Glad magic balancing things out worked for you, I hoped it would.Thank you very much! I wasn't sure if it would count as a happy ending, but I guess the surviving child made it one.
What I liked best besides ridding the world of Voldy's remains and final curse is Lucius' POV. Even in the midst of a horrible time crunch he still manages to be amusing. Love that man!
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Thank you! I hoped Lucius's POV would be funny and lighten the tone a bit in that tense time.
I cannot beleive this story ends in 2 more chapters! How have you wrapped it up? What the hell was Narcissa talking about? and OMG Lucius is in major trouble.
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Glad to keep you guessing this close to the end! Definitely in trouble... but he's sure to manage to wriggle his way out of it somehow.
Is there a major character death warning on this story?? You have me all kinds of worried my friend!
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Nope, no character death warning. It was awfully tempting to have one, though... Still, sorry to worry you, but glad you were worried, even if it does make me sound rather evil!
Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)
Who else were you considering killing off? Your plague did a great job of most of the characters! LOL! Ginny?
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Oh, just Hermione. Then Severus would kill Lucius, then himself. And then I guess without them, Ginny would die too. And lots of other witches. Unless someone else could get the message out. That was my rocks-fall-and-everyone-dies scenario, but... I resisted the temptation. Somehow.True, the plague did do a pretty good job!