Chapter 20
Chapter 20 of 37
ayerfOne more straw on the camel's back.
Chapter 20
Severus paced the blank white confines of his cell. Every time he sat down on the barely padded pallet, he soon sprang up again. At least it gave him something to do, even if it made him look like a caged tiger to those doubtless monitoring the cell...it wouldn't surprise him if the walls were transparent from outside.
They had confiscated his watch as well as his wand, so his only idea of the passage of time was the growing hollow pang of hunger. A refilling cup of water was provided, but no food. Severus drank his fill after he ascertained that it wasn't tainted by anything. Of course, that meant that he'd needed to use the ever-emptying bucket sooner rather than later.
For him to feel so hungry, it must be long past dinner time. If only there was some way to let Hermione know!
He dragged a hand through his hair distractedly, his thoughts on Hermione as he'd left her that morning. Distraught. Helpless.
The door to the cell abruptly appeared, a dark outline against the white. Severus staggered to a halt in his pacing as it was flung open by none other than Hermione.
Not so helpless, then.
Then she was in his arms, standing on tiptoe to slant her lips across his own. He pulled her closer, his lips parting to allow her tongue to slide across his.
Someone cleared their throat. For an insane moment, Severus thought that Lucius was acting the voyeur again... but he wouldn't have announced his presence. Whoever it was watching, Severus refused to give them a show of what was sacred to him.
Or would do, if Hermione would let him draw away. When he tried to lower her back to the floor, she lifted one of her legs to wrap around him. Severus groaned at the increased contact that brought warmth and friction right where he didn't need it. His cock twitched in disagreement, and his hand...now on her knee...held her leg in place rather than gently lower it as he'd intended.
Her hands had shifted to hold his head, which he no longer tried to pull away. His hips seemed to move of their own accord, grinding his growing hardness into her softness.
"Unless you want to spend a night in this cosy establishment, save it for when you're at home, okay?" a familiar voice, deeper than his own, spoke up.
Hermione reluctantly drew away from their kiss, an act that only served to cantilever her more firmly against his erection. He stifled a whimper, his eyes slightly crossed as she shifted her leg, rubbing against him even more.
"Severus, let go," she hissed, her cheeks stained scarlet.
He blinked. She was the one rubbing herself against...oh. Severus glanced down at his hand, still grasping her knee. He let go as if it was red hot. Hermione stepped back, leaving him thankful for his robes concealing the bulge in his trousers. Especially when he caught sight of who stood in the doorway.
It was Kingsley, the sheepish look on his face at odds with the amused glint in his eyes. He beckoned to them. "Come on, let's leave before we're locked in for the night."
* * *
"Oh, you should have seen her, Severus. She barged into my office and a closed session of the Wizengamot in order to spring you." Kingsley paused, groaned and slapped his forehead. "I'm an idiot. You can." He Conjured a flask, raised his wand to his temple and removed two glowing silver strands of memory.
Kingsley sealed the flask and held it out for Severus to take. "Here. A belated wedding present. Show it to Malfoy, too. It's about time he realised what he's got himself into...ow!"
"Hermione, it's not advisable to attack the Minister in the Ministry," Severus murmured, slipping between Kingsley and Hermione. "Particularly not in the Atrium when it's this crowded." He glared at the dumbstruck onlookers.
"No, it's okay. Andromeda's slapped me on the back of the head before without a demotion, so I'm not about to have your lovely wife arrested for elbowing me. She got off scot free for blasting her way into my office, after all."
"She what?"
Severus stared at Hermione, who shrugged nonchalantly. As if it was no big deal. He'd been under the impression that Potter had been responsible for most of their school and wartime escapades. Either she'd picked up some very bad habits from the boy, or she was the real culprit. Whichever was the case, the next time he was incarcerated, he'd be sure to worry more about Hermione doing something to end up in a cell right next to his.
"You'll see," Kingsley chuckled, indicating the flask of his memories, and stepped aside to let them go through the Floo first.
"Thank you, Kingsley," Hermione said, while Severus shook his hand.
"Anytime. I look forward to seeing you in action again." Kingsley's ear-to-ear grin accompanying those words made Severus eye the flask in his hand apprehensively. What had Hermione done to amuse an adrenaline junky like Kingsley?
* * *
Lucius shoved his plate away, the half-eaten steak and kidney pie stone cold. A Warming Charm would take care of that, but it would ruin the tender meat. Besides, he'd never been one for comfort eating.
For every step of progress made with reconciling with Draco, at least two steps back followed, if not a tumble down an entire flight of them. A slight exaggeration, perhaps, but his hopes had been so cruelly dashed. Hopes that when Draco pursued marriage, he would feel the familial bonds that tied father and son. Apparently not. At this rate, Lucius would be a grandfather before Draco decided to act as a son should.
It was enough to turn any self-respecting man to drink. But even that comfort was taken from him as Severus had not replenished the supply of Sober-Up and had the cheek to cloister himself away so that more could not be begged, borrowed or stolen. While Lucius could have gone to Diagon Alley and bought some more, the thought of that leaking out into the Prophet and the resulting public disgrace was enough to keep him sober.
What really added insult to injury was that on top of their avoidance of him, neither Severus nor Hermione had had the courtesy to let him know when they were leaving Malfoy Manor. That they had done so separately and after an interval of some hours did not soften the blow. If not for the wards notifying him, Lucius would have been left in the dark. And that was not done.
As St Mungo's seemed to cover one alphabetical group of surnames per day, Lucius would be a fool not to be able to hazard a guess where Severus might have gone six days after Lucius's own appointment. And for Severus to be this delayed, he must have been arrested.
'He'd better have been...' The thought of Severus in a cell was far more soothing for Lucius than the thought of him sending for Hermione and celebrating with a romantic meal out. Of course, that was hardly likely. Hermione had left an hour or two before dinner time.
On second thoughts, it was cause for concern if Severus was under arrest. Lucius would be next, and far worse, he had yet to extract the antidote for the sterility potion from his slippery friend. How embarrassing; he was losing his touch... A true Slytherin would have obtained such vital knowledge before even taking the potion. Now it might be too late, and he would be emasculated for the remainder of his miserable life.
"Master not liking his dinner? Should Tricksy tell Hotty and Toddy to boil their feet?" The house-elf's squeaks took a while to penetrate the gloomy cloud clinging to Lucius.
"Hmm?" She was on the verge of clicking her fingers to vanish off to oversee the punishment of the kitchen elves by the time Lucius focused on her. "No, the food was fine."
"Master wanted company? Bad Master Snape and Missy Mu...new Mistress, deserting my poor Master."
'Missy Mudblood?' Lucius gave Tricksy a sharp glance. Perhaps it had been a mistake to assign Narcissa's personal elf to Hermione... Where had the elf picked up that sort of language, anyway? Narcissa had never used such uncouth language, even if Lucius did himself...oh. Well, at least the elf apparently did know better than to actually say the word.
"Master wants pudding?" At Lucius's distracted shake of the head, Tricksy cleared the table and cracked away, with a last mutter of 'poor Master'.
How much lower could he go? Lucius Malfoy, reduced to being the object of pity from a deranged, grieving house-elf. The humiliation! He dropped his head into his hands and dragged a hand through his hair. A horrified gasp escaped him as he fingered his pride and joy. Split ends!
An estranged son, a Muggle-born bride he was far too attracted to for his own good, a jealous fellow husband, all of whom saw fit to ignore him, leave him in the dark when he might be about to lose them and now this?! It was the absolute limit.
The wards twinged as a wizard and a witch Apparated just inside the front door. So, Severus and Hermione thought they could nonchalantly return for a late dinner? They had another thing coming...
Lucius spelled the dining room door open with a resounding bang as they reached it. "Finally back, are you? You have a lot of nerve swanning back as if you owed me no explanations. I am the master of this house, how dare you..." He was just getting into his stride when the hairs on the back of his neck stood on end, prickling at some unconsciously perceived threat.
Severus had his arm around Hermione's waist and was poised to shield her. As if Lucius would do anything to hurt her! What sort of monster did Severus think he was? Both of them were glaring at Lucius. If looks could kill...
Severus took a threatening step forwards, face twisted with rage. Lucius braced himself for the oncoming clash of horns, only to have the wind cut out of his sails when Hermione darted between them.
"Who do you think you are?" Her shrill outburst was almost drowned out by the tortured scream of shattering glass. Lucius winced; those priceless family silver cabinets would resist a simple Reparo.
Hermione clenched her fists, breathing raggedly, her jaw tight as she clamped down on her uncontrolled outburst of wandless magic. She spoke with forced calm between clenched teeth. "I admit it might have been polite to let you know I was leaving, even why, obvious as that reason was. But that you had a right to know?"
Lucius opened his mouth to object at the implied insult in her words and tone: that he should have known, that he was a fool not to have known.
Before he could say a word, she cut him off. "I couldn't care less after this last week. Courtesy be hanged. You need to remember that you're only bound to me in name only, by your own word, before you demand anything. Or is a Malfoy's word really worth nothing after all?"
Lucius closed his mouth at the realisation that he was gaping at her. The cheek! How dare she?! Although it had to be said that her anger had really brought out some fetching colour on her cheeks. And the way those deep, unsteady breaths moved her breasts... Spitfire did not do her justice. Imagine that unleashed in the bedroom...
Lucius looked over at Severus, who stood next to Hermione, a smug smirk on his ugly mug. 'Lucky bastard.'
"Oh, I see. Because I 'avoided' you in the run up to Severus's check up, you're ignoring me now. How very mature of you," Hermione snarled.
Lucius blinked, and shifted his gaze back to goggle at her. He'd only taken his eyes off her for a moment, and she accused him of ignoring her? Women!
"I wasn't...I...you..." he spluttered.
"Is it really any surprise that I spent every minute I could with Severus? For all I knew, the Ministry were going to tear us apart."
Lucius opened his mouth to protest that she would have been torn asunder from him too, but after her reminder of his established place in their marriage, he suspected that saying as much would result in a hex.
"I was worried too, you know. You might be my wife in name only..." Severus snorted, a disbelieving sneer on his face. At least that had wiped off that infuriating smug smirk... "...but I'd like to think we are friends."
"Stellar job of showing it over the past few days," Hermione retorted, her tone so chilly that Lucius swore his breath misted the air. Her eyes shifted away, though, a tell-tale guilty twitch. Before Lucius could pursue this advantage, she carried on, the ice gone from her voice. "I suppose if this is a friendship, I haven't done too well in being true to that either."
"That goes for all of us," Severus agreed, his eyes fixed on Lucius. He was undoubtedly referring to Lucius's attempts to encroach on his territory, but Lucius didn't even twitch. It would take far more than that for his guilty conscience to stir.
"The proverbial werewolf was howling at the door," Lucius allowed, as magnanimous as only a Malfoy could be. "Now that whole nasty business is over, things can be different, perhaps?"
Severus opened his mouth, his eyes narrowed suspiciously. Concerned about what Lucius meant by 'different', no doubt. Lucius suppressed a smile. Severus was much too fun to bait to stop doing that, even if due to Hermione's request he would have to be more subtle about it. Only... Lucius swallowed hard. Any urge to smile was obliterated by the bitter realisation that toying with Severus would have to be halted until that blasted antidote for the sterility potion was safely in Lucius's keeping.
Unless he could indirectly appeal to Hermione by requesting it in her presence? The smile tugged again at the corners of Lucius's mouth. That would have the added bonus of infuriating Severus...
"That reminds me, I would appreciate it if you could provide the antidote to that potion of yours, Severus."
Severus's jaw dropped. The comical slack expression didn't last long, though, and a deep scowl replaced it. "No. There are sure to be other check ups. You need to remain sterile until the law is repealed."
"Obviously!" Lucius spat before he could rein in his temper. He shot a glance at Hermione. A slight disapproving frown creased her forehead, but hopefully he hadn't scuppered his chances of gaining her sympathy. "I meant for me to have it available in the event that something happens to you. I don't want to be stuck like this forever!"
'Oops.' Judging by her pained grimace, it had not been a good idea to remind Hermione of however close she had come to losing Severus. And, indirectly, of her own infertility. That made his guilty conscience twinge. A married man should be more sensitive than that, after all.
Severus's glare was incendiary as he stepped up next to Hermione and wrapped his arm around her. "Then it would be in your best interests to stay in my good books, as the antidote has a limited shelf life and can only be brewed by someone with sufficient potions skills: not you. I'm not about to provide instructions for you to get someone else to make it for security reasons. A few hours in Ministry custody was enough; I have no desire to end up in Azkaban."
"But what if something happens to you?" Lucius winced as he saw Hermione blanch at his words. Again, insensitive of him, but that couldn't be helped. He had to get his point across!
"Tough luck," Severus sneered.
Lucius grimaced at the finality in Severus's voice. Oh yes, it had definitely been a bad idea to alienate his pet potions Master. 'But...' He looked wistfully at Hermione. 'But worth it.'
Severus grunted. Lucius's eyes were drawn to the movement of Hermione's arm as she retracted her elbow from his ribs. Lucius gave her a quizzical look. Much as he thought Severus deserved it, he was under the impression that was the minority opinion in their household.
"Behave," she muttered on the edge of Lucius's hearing, before raising her voice to a more audible level. "Just in case anything..." Hermione paused, finding Severus's hand and gripping it tightly. "In case anything happened to you, perhaps you could teach me. I know it's not ideal...something could just as easily happen to me, but it would give Lucius some peace of mind."
"Perhaps. Unlike Lucius, you had some aptitude for Potions at Hogwarts."
Well, that was better than nothing. His eggs were still in one basket, but now there was actually a chance that he'd be able to charm the information out of Hermione. And on the bright side, he would be at liberty to antagonise Severus... so long as Hermione was unaware. Hufflepuff tendencies Severus was developing aside, he wouldn't snitch: it would upset her.
'Win-win.'
* * *
Severus levered himself up out of the Pensieve, Lucius close behind him. Potter was definitely more innocent in their absurd escapades than Severus had thought.
Sitting down to a late dinner, the bottled memory in his pocket had poked him. An uncomfortable reminder, but it had served to ensure that he didn't forget Kingsley's gift. Hermione ducked their questions about it and ate her meal in silence before she escaped to wash her hair. The flush in her cheeks made him eye the glowing silver bottle with even more apprehension. With good reason, as it turned out.
Scratch worrying about her ending up under arrest next time. After seeing her literally breaking into Kingsley's office and threatening Fudge, she might be safer if she was locked up. It'd keep her out of making more trouble for herself, that was for sure. True, other than his place in the Wizengamot, Fudge was not much of a power these days. His recent marriage to the disgraced Umbridge only cemented that. But some of his friends were more dangerous: Hermione had made some powerful enemies that she'd really be better off without.
"Magnificent." Lucius's whisper drew Severus's attention.
'Fuck.' Severus's mood darkened further at witnessing the all-too-familiar expression on Lucius's face: lust-struck admiration. The same expression as when Narcissa had been playing hard-to-get at Hogwarts so long ago, and in more recent years when Lucius pursued his latest flavour of the month.
Kingsley had done Severus no favours with this 'gift'. Now that Lucius knew more of what Hermione was capable of, he would only want her even more: she was more of a challenge to him now. The only bonus was that Lucius should respect her more, perhaps finally as an equal.
And to think that he'd hoped that he would have less on his mind after his release from the Ministry cells. Now the fear that the powers that be would tear them apart was gone, he had Lucius-the-lusty to worry about more. There was also Hermione's reaction to Andromeda in the first Pensieve memory.
On second thoughts, perhaps that was actually a weight off his mind. While Hermione fainting was hardly something he liked to see, at least it allayed his unease. Those horrible suspicions he'd had...that Hermione had voice...after what the Dark atmosphere of Malfoy Manor had done to her, that it was something to do with the plague. That it was a sign that the plague was merely dormant, not cured. Jumping to conclusions, perhaps, but Hermione had been in places with Dark auras before the plague with no consequences. After the fall of the Dark L...Voldemort, it had taken curse breakers weeks to remove the taint of his malevolent presence from the great hall at Hogwarts.
That the sight of Andromeda was enough to trigger a flashback to Hermione's torture at the hands of Bellatrix, in the same way that the Dark atmosphere of Malfoy Manor had before the curse breaking, was a reassuring thing. It gave Severus hope that her reaction to the Dark atmosphere was merely a rare quirk accompanying the more usual post-Cruciatus trauma.
The door to Lucius's study creaked open, pulling Severus from his thoughts. Hermione padded inside, her fingers fiddling nervously with the tie of her dressing gown.
Severus drew breath to give her the admonishment she was undoubtedly expecting, that she needed to be more careful, that she'd made enemies and harmed her cause to overturn the law.
Only for him to nick his tongue as he ground his teeth in frustration at Lucius's flamboyant bow, and at the flattering words that followed.
"Most impressive, my dear. Your handling of Fudge was simply delightful."
Hermione grimaced. "I may have overreacted." Well, at least she seemed to know better, that she had messed up her future negotiations with at least Fudge's clique in the Wizengamot.
"Perhaps, but there are two ways to gain cooperation. To be loved and to be feared. All is not lost."
Surprisingly sage advice from Lucius. Fear had given Severus control over a classroom of incompetent children for twenty years, so it might also give Hermione a similar hold over certain overgrown children among the Wizengamot.
"Ron always did say I was scary," Hermione muttered.
Severus eyed the swirling silver memories in Lucius's Pensieve. 'For once, Weasley, I'm inclined to agree.' Yet what scared Severus more was Hermione's talent for getting into serious trouble. If he went prematurely grey, he would know why.
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AN: Thanks to Kribu and Septentrion for betaing, and to JunoMagic for naming the kitchen elves.
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What a story, I feel as if I have been pulled every which way and back again as if through a wringer lol. Lucious with hte help from his dead wife saved the day in the end lol. So sad with all the deaths and miscarriages.
Congrats on a well written piece of writing a superb job that should be applauded. Many thanks .
Poor Ron. They were a couple. However, she still prefers Severus. What are we going to do about Tricksy?
Oh well, I guess Hermione has to lose her virginity to two veril wizards. Poor thing gets to live in wealth and be admired by the same said viril wizards. She only has to contend with a bitter and bigoted house elf. It must be hard to have her mistress replaced but she is being a bad elf. You would think Hermione would pay attention to Crook's warning. She may need to watch her back. I think she should ask for a replacement or else have a talk with Tricksy. Not a comforting name for one's personal house elf is you ask me. Being too nice may actually get her more trouble than a clear understanding that while she knows she isn't Narcissa, she is now the Mistress. It's only pragmatic. Whether she likes it or not she is the proud owner of several house elves. If she doesn't treat them like they expect they will be shamed and you don't want to piss off a house elf. It would serve her well to think about how Harry won over Creature. It would also be a good idea for the three of them to discuss their expectations. Severus can't read her mind. It would get mighty tiresome to have someone pissed off at you all the time and you don't kow why. He's a man! What does she expect? She'll have to train him.
I hope Hermione and Draco become good friends and that she can find him a bride. I also hope you get around to telling us about the wedding night in detail soon. I've noticed you've told us little about what goes on inside Severus' head. We know he is in love with Hermione and that is all. Hermione is handling this marriage thing quite well. I would have expected more emotional resistance to the marrige law. She did the best possible thing however, and took the problem head on in a proactive move that kept as many of her choices in tact as possibe. She could have done much worse. She's very lucky Severus is the first person she saw when she woke up.
Good for the Grangers. Keep those snobbish wizards in line!
Good for Draco!!! Hermione, you should have thought longer in regard to your requirements. His future bad behavior will reflect on you. You also have to have sex with him at least once and I'm sure he wants to watch you and Severus. It is unwise to be so impulsive. You should have conferred with Severus on what to request, and there should be a cooling off period in case of buyer's remorse.
While I'm sure that Hermione will eventually enjoy sex with Lucius Malfoy, she doesn't know that yet. She should think this through better. She sure as hell should have made them both work harder at getting her to agree to marry them. She's given in too easy without knowing enough about either one of them.
I hope she lives up to Draco's faith in her judgement. So far she isn't impressing me except for the paper wack on Malfoy's face. Don't let me down, Hermione.
And Severus, what will you do if Hermione feels attracted to Lucius eventually? What if she decides she liked her wedding night with Lucius? He won't mind servicing her even if they are married only in name. Will you ask either of them to promise to be faithful to your feelings for her before the wedding night?
I can't believe that Hermione agreed to go back inside. She flinched! Never flinch when dealing with a Malfoy! This is a bad start if she ends up marrying them. She needs to establish the fact that she is the queen and never bluffs! He called her bluff and she just showed her weakness because of a little rain. She was stupid to let him take her back into the house after imprisoning her on his property. If she keeps up this stupid behavior she'll deserve what ever she gets.
Marriage is not truely a deal between equals. Men and women don't think the same way. For it to be equal you both need to have the same world view. She needs to establish the perameters of the relationship immediately. I've been married for 33 years and my views on marriage and men haven't improved much since I grew up watching my mom with 2 husbands and my dad with 3 wives by the time I was 18. He's on his fourth wife now. He is too old to get laid and doesn't want to be alone. This is the first woman he has ever even let decorate the house let alone put her name on it. She has the advantage this time. In his situation he obviously see's he is better off this way so it is worth the trade off in power. He knew his other choice was the rest home.
There is a price for being married to a man who can protect you and a different price to be paid to be married to an easy going guy. Easy going guys don't take care of business. Alpha males are controllig.
OMG! To be the step mother of Draco Malfoy! Severus is an idiot. If he really loves her he will get away from the Malfoys. They will always have the upper hand because they don't care if anyone likes them. It doesn't matter to them if they are right or wrong. The only way to keep from being controlled by them is constant vigilance and brute force or imperio. Not the way I want to live my daily life, how about you? He and Hermione alone could share power, trade power back and forth and compromise.
Another thing about Severus making this deal with Lucius, does he really think Hermione would be willing to have one of her husbands cheat on her? It isn't in her nature to understand any possible advantage to being married but not not in a committed relationship with husband number 2 under the circumstances she is presently given. She isn't smart enough to be able to enter into a business agreement with him as a condition of a marrige of convenience. Severus should be able to read his Griffindor better than this. It's a wonder he survived the war at this rate. Sheesh! He's thinkling with his dick.
And let me tell you, Hermione, Severus Snape isn't worth taking on Malfoy just to be with him. Severus Snape is his own peice of work. In this case, he isn't even totally on your side. He's made a deal regarding you with Lucius Malfoy, forgodssake! And by all that is holy, do not agree to live at Malfoy Manor! Please tell me Severus is at least smart enough not to do this on Lucius' turf.
If Severus really cares for Hermione, I would think he would try to protect her from someone like Lucius. Does he think he has a better chance with her if Lucius and he are presented as a package? I think she made it clear how she feels about Malfoys when she was yelling at Ron. If Hermione finds out Severus made a deal with Lucus, she will hex them both. Hermione will not willingly be manipulated. Severus Snape better think about the consequences that Hermione might find out that he already told Lucius he could marry her without her say in the matter. So far he doesn't show much hope of being any smarter than the average adult male, just not as stupid as Ron. Use your brain man! If she marries more than one man will she be required to get knocked up by all of them? If I was Hermione I would go back to the muggle world and hide. At the very least she better come out of that hospital, wand at the ready.
I enjoy this original premise for the marriage law plot. Will Severus be able to fix the memory problem with the cure? I am surprised he was not informed of this side effect. Amazing how Lucius never stops his plotting. I wonder if Severus has given him an answer yet. I wonder how much time the wizards have to comply. Surely not untill the living witches are all well. I assume at this point, that is why Severus is still not married. He and Hermione apparently have a past that is at least cordial, perhaps a bit more. I can't imagine Lucius being able to seduce this incarnation of Hermione. But I may underestimate him. I'm sure he will be as charming and repentant as a cross between Don Jaun and Saint Peter to Hermione's face. I wonder how much say the witches have over who they choose to marry. I would hope that since there are so many wizards they will be allowed to be courted. Hmmmm. More than one husband sounds like a lot of man-children to manage. Training just one is hard enough. If the woman is weak willed I can't imagine how they would work out the pack order. Two or more alpha males to one woman will take some thinking about. Who would fare the worst, the woman or the men? Being an alpha female myself, alpha males don't usually even ask us on a date. Thinking of the ones I know, we would kill each other soon into the marriage. I do not obey. I've decided the weak female would fare the worst. A couple of house elves will be helpful. I can't imagine the women who have to take care of more than one man. Multiple men would blame all of their problems on her, rather than themselves or each other. This will not be a problem for Hermione, I think. If she has enough money and a couple of house elves, would it be worth it to have separate homes for each husband? I'm sure the purpose of this law is to keep the witches perpetually pregnant. Just kill me now. Gods, how I hate being pregnant. I wonder what the penalty would be for using black market birth control potions or spells.
I never thought I would say "poor Lucius" in my life. But, poor Lucius. I bet the magical wedding will be even more difficult.
well we couldn't leave poor Lucius to his hand for the rest of his life now, could we? By another month he should be pretty well done.
Hooray for Fawkes! He wrapped his arms around her, lips by her ear. “Kinky.” heehee. I'm glad Lucius liked his present, it was a lovely idea.
Will he strew sugar on that bottled spider?
Severus wasn’t sure what was worse: imagining what was happening or witnessing it. Regardless, she needed him. That was all that mattered. my heart, it is going pittapat.
mmm nice morning they had there, and I like how Luc is starting to warm up. I should be going to sleep already, but can't stop...
I love Hermiones thoughts about her two husbands while Ginny is casting the spell. I can almost feel sorry for Lucius, looking at his bare left hand, can forgive him being quite suck a prat. Nice that Draco's trying. Granger’s gaze felt as if it could see into his soul. Much like Severus’s could, Draco realised. He shuddered to think what she’d pick up from his father. ooh, shiver.
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Thanks! Poor Lucius - still a prat, but a forgivable one, at least sometimes. Glad that you like how Draco is trying to be decent.
“I keep white peacocks. What do you think?” :-)
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Glad you like that line! Lucius was fun to write.
Pity Lucius is being such the prat, I love the house - and the library :-)
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Thanks! He does come with a very big bonus, doesn't he? Even if he is a prat, at least there's his library.
Mmm, have to admit to having a tendre for duellist!Lucius. Pity Herms doesn't see it that way.She strode away, refusing to look back even when Severus called her name desperately ... sniffle.
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Thanks! Glad to hear it. Too bad for Lucius, yes... and almost too bad for poor Severus, caught in the crossfire.
Now there is a marriage law I could get to like ;-)
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Thank you! So long as the men involved were like Severus (and maybe Lucius if he behaves himself) I'd be inclined to agree with you.
Eeeeheehee! I'm dying to see Lucius duel Ron over Hermione :o)
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Poor Ron - he really doesn't stand a chance!Thank you!
Congrats on fufilling your new years resolution! It was close but you did it. I really liked the way you let magic itself balance out the birth rations. Very cool. Thank you for giving us a happy ending with out making me puke. In otherwords enough angst with a surviving child ! Wheeee! You done good Ayerf. Thank you!!
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Too close for comfort, but a relief!Glad magic balancing things out worked for you, I hoped it would.Thank you very much! I wasn't sure if it would count as a happy ending, but I guess the surviving child made it one.
What I liked best besides ridding the world of Voldy's remains and final curse is Lucius' POV. Even in the midst of a horrible time crunch he still manages to be amusing. Love that man!
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Thank you! I hoped Lucius's POV would be funny and lighten the tone a bit in that tense time.
I cannot beleive this story ends in 2 more chapters! How have you wrapped it up? What the hell was Narcissa talking about? and OMG Lucius is in major trouble.
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Glad to keep you guessing this close to the end! Definitely in trouble... but he's sure to manage to wriggle his way out of it somehow.
Is there a major character death warning on this story?? You have me all kinds of worried my friend!
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Nope, no character death warning. It was awfully tempting to have one, though... Still, sorry to worry you, but glad you were worried, even if it does make me sound rather evil!
Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)
Who else were you considering killing off? Your plague did a great job of most of the characters! LOL! Ginny?
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Oh, just Hermione. Then Severus would kill Lucius, then himself. And then I guess without them, Ginny would die too. And lots of other witches. Unless someone else could get the message out. That was my rocks-fall-and-everyone-dies scenario, but... I resisted the temptation. Somehow.True, the plague did do a pretty good job!