Chapter 8
Chapter 8 of 37
ayerfA wedding night and the morning after.
Chapter 8
Hermione yawned widely. It had been a long day, made all the longer by her repressed anger. Tempting as it had been to burst into the men's toilets to set Ronald and Severus straight, that only would have caused a scene. Not something she wanted on her wedding day. The way it had been taken over as a Ministry propaganda tool was bad enough.
No, Ron was someone else's problem now whoever he found as a wife. As for Severus ... he could learn his lesson in private.
Malfoy Manor was a welcome respite from the crowded Ministry hall. By the time they had thanked the most important guests for coming, it was so late that it was early.
Lucius had produced a Portkey to spirit them away before the rabble of parasitic paparazzi could descend. 'I could have kissed him.'
The Portkey deposited them in the entrance hall. Lucius tossed the chipped champagne flute that had served as their escape route to Dilly the door-elf.
"First of all we should check if the curse breaking worked." Lucius nodded at where Hermione's hand was still intertwined with Severus's to touch the Portkey.
Severus let go of her, but kept his hand hovering near hers. While it was endearing for him to be so protective, Hermione also experienced a fresh surge of irritation. But she suppressed that, too. Her poor pillow would end up deaf by the time she was free to scream into it tonight.
"Well?" Lucius asked. His voice drawled expectantly.
Right. She closed her eyes in an effort to heighten her other senses, but there was nothing to detect. No icy hand clutched her insides this time.
"It seems to have worked, although you'll forgive me if I don't want to set foot into the drawing room to truly test it out right now."
"Excellent." Lucius had to stifle a yawn. "I suppose it's high time I showed you to your rooms."
Severus took her hand again, and they followed Lucius upstairs through a maze of dimly lit corridors. Soft snores came from ancestral Malfoy portraits, any disapproval of her presence masked by painted sleep.
Luckily her dress was no longer glowing, otherwise the portraits would complain about the light. But the fabric had dimmed as soon as they'd arrived at Malfoy Manor. Hermione suspected that the illumination spell Ginny had used required proximity to the caster to remain active.
Lucius turned into yet another corridor, but stopped beside the first door. "Here we are." He gestured to the door, and to the next one. "Adjoining rooms. If you're sure that you don't want your own wings?"
Hermione nodded slightly at Severus's querying glance. "Absolutely certain," he said. "That wouldn't be married life as either of us expect it to be."
At that, Hermione had to force down another flicker of anger. What did Severus know of her expectations? They'd never been discussed.
"I suppose it would be a jarring change from cosy Spinner's End," Lucius murmured. He covered his mouth delicately as he yawned again. "I'll bid you good night." He made as if to step towards Hermione, but flinched. Watching closely, Hermione was unsurprised to see his eyes flicker towards his ring, rather than at Severus. His gaze only lingered for a second, before he turned on his heel and disappeared down the corridor.
She exchanged a look with Severus, a small smile quirking the corners of her lips when they both raised an eyebrow at the same time. Her smile faded as quickly as it had appeared, as she remembered that she was angry with him. This time it was no use trying to suppress her anger, as it simmered past boiling point. She let go of his hand and glared up at him.
"Hermione?" Severus looked utterly baffled, almost as clueless as Ron at his worst. That just fanned the flames of her annoyance all the more.
"If you expect us not to share rooms during our married life, I might as well go to bed now. See you in the morning." Then she yanked the door open, flounced inside and closed the door in his face before he could say a word.
The room was spacious without overwhelming her, the walls pale green while the carpet was predictably silvery. Hermione thought that she wouldn't be surprised if that was the colour scheme for most of the rooms.
There were no bags cluttering up the floor, presumably because the house-elves had unpacked as well as transported their belongings. But there was also no Crookshanks. A sinking feeling in her stomach, Hermione opened the nearest cupboard. As she suspected, it was full of Severus's clothes. She made a mental note to drag him out on a clothes shopping expedition at some point: he definitely needed a bit more variety in his wardrobe.
She turned away from the cupboard when there was a knock at the adjoining door.
"Hermione, either your cat is in my room, or you made your dramatic exit into the wrong one." His voice was muffled by the door, but she could all-too-clearly hear the laughter that followed the clatter of wardrobe doors opening. "I'm not really into cross-dressing, dear."
Red-cheeked, she walked across the thick carpet to open the adjoining door. At least Severus had the sense not to smirk, although his eyes shone with suppressed mirth.
Before Hermione could go through the adjoining door, Severus deftly caught hold of her. He dipped her in his arms, bent over and kissed her. She let him, even kissed back, although her anger lent a bruising force to them on her part.
He set her back on her feet. Hermione was breathing hard, her heart pounding.
"I'm still angry with you."
"I know," he said, and had the nerve to smirk at her. He bent to kiss her again.
She reluctantly pushed him away. "I'm not in the mood," she stated, and stepped towards the door.
Severus frowned, then nodded. "I suppose we're too tired for that step." He put his hands on her shoulders. "And you're too angry," he murmured, fingers working on her tense muscles. "But the point of having separate rooms is so that we have our own space. Notice that they are adjoining rooms? We won't be living separate lives."
"I know. But you should have talked to me about it first." She shrugged him off. "Good night," she said firmly, and stepped through into her room. She turned to close the door.
"Allow me." Severus shut the door before she could. Not that she could blame him. It had to hurt his feelings to have a door closed in his face, and for her to attempt to do so twice in one night ... She winced. 'I'll make it up to him tomorrow.'
She turned to her new room, lit by candles on wall sconces. The décor was much the same as Severus's, from the green walls to the silver carpet. One wall was taken up by a window, currently blocked from view by curtains of deep green velvet. Looking at the room, it seemed to be a mirror of the one she'd just been in, although she hadn't noticed the door next to the bed, across the room from the adjoining door. A peek through it revealed an en suite bathroom, with a bath more than big enough for two people.
Hermione turned to the bed. A king size four-poster (with velvet curtains of the same shade as those on the window) for one person ... typically extravagant for this house. Although, she supposed that it was intended for two occasionally, as that was the whole point of adjoining rooms for a married couple.
Crookshanks had made himself at home, curled up on the green and silver chequered quilt. Hermione yawned again at the sight of him. She ached to join him in slumber.
But first she needed to get out of her increasingly uncomfortable wedding finery. For a moment, she struggled to reach for the zip on the back before her tired brain recalled that it wasn't a Muggle dress. No zip. No buttons, either. Ginny had dealt with it that morning. 'Perhaps I should have paid a little more attention to how she did it. She didn't say anything, though. Maybe she assumed that I knew how to take it off? Argh! Even if I crawl back to Severus for help, he'd likely be just as clueless as me.'
A muttered 'Finite Incantatem' had no effect whatsoever. As good as she was with charms, she didn't want to try to cut it off herself unless she had no other choice.
"Oh, help," she muttered, along with a few choice swear words.
"Missy wants help?" a voice squeaked from behind her.
Hermione spun around, automatically looking down it did sound like a house-elf, after all. It was, with a pointy nose and matching ears. Hermione thought that it looked rather similar to poor Dobby, but different, somehow. A female, maybe? It was always so difficult to tell with house-elves.
Large green eyes blinked up at her. "Master sends Tricksy to new Mistress."
"Lucius sent you? How ... kind ... of him." Much as Hermione didn't want the service slavery! of a house-elf, she really did need help to undress if she wanted to keep her wedding dress intact.
"Master always kind to Mistress." The elf sounded insulted at the implication that her precious master could be anything other than kind, at least to the Mistress of the house. "What can Tricksy do for Missy?"
"Could you help me out of this dress, please?"
The elf snapped her fingers, and the closure at the back of the bodice finally opened.
"Thank you. Oh, you don't need to..."
"Tricksy is a good personal house-elf." The elf was using her magic to peel the dress and underclothes off Hermione, a nightie floating out of a cupboard, ready to slide on to her.
"Missy is pretty," Tricksy commented, before snapping her fingers again. The nightie slid over Hermione's head, muffling the elf's squeaking voice. Hermione thought that it added something like 'Although not as pretty as my poor Mistress', but couldn't be sure. She said nothing more by the time Hermione's head was free of the clingy cotton.
Crookshanks hissed from the bed. His yellow eyes were fixed on Tricksy, narrowed into a baleful glare. He tensed as if to pounce, his tail flicking from side to side.
"Crooks, no!" Hermione grabbed hold of his collar. He growled and swatted at her, but kept his claws retracted. "What's got into you? House-elves are not prey."
She turned back to the elf, most of her concentration on restraining her struggling cat. "Sorry, he's usually very well behaved."
"Tricksy will leave Missy to sleep now." Tricksy turned away, but didn't vanish immediately. She was muttering something under her breath. The only word Hermione could catch was 'Mudblood'. She felt her heart sink. Just like Kreacher ....
There was a crack and the house-elf was gone. Hermione crawled into bed and put out the candles with a wave of her wand. Crookshanks snuggled up to her, his warm weight and purrs reassuring.
Hermione sighed. She needed to put her thoughts aside in order to sleep. Severus being overprotective and her guilt over her reaction to that could wait. Harry ... well, that would be dealt with soon enough. He knew she wanted to talk to him, she'd told him at the reception in no uncertain terms. He might even have an inkling about why she wanted a word, although this being Harry, maybe not. Did he know how difficult it had been for her to look the remaining Weasleys in the eye?
She took several deep breaths and determinedly pushed Harry out of her mind. Sleep was still a while in coming.
* * *
It was still dark when some inconsiderate person knocking on the door awoke Severus. He rolled out of bed, his wand levelled at the door, his heart hammering. Then his mind caught up with his reflexes, thankfully before he hexed anything. That was the adjoining door. 'Hermione. She needs me. Why?'
"Lumos." He squinted in the light cast by his wand, but at least it lit less of the room than relighting the candles would.
He swiftly crossed the room and opened the door. Hermione had her own wand, also lit, but her hand was trembling so much that the light wavered.
Had the Dark atmosphere somehow returned? That would explain why she trembled like a leaf. Severus pulled her into his arms, but his touch didn't stop her shivers.
"What's wrong?"
"Nightmare." Her voice was muffled against his chest.
He stroked her back with his free hand. "Come to bed."
The adjoining door closed Severus had no wish to be clawed by a cat misguidedly trying to defend the honour of its mistress they curled up together, nested like spoons, Hermione in the curve of his body.
"What was the nightmare about?"
She just shook her head, her hair brushing against his chest.
"It might help to talk about it," he suggested.
"I ... can't actually remember. It's stupid, I should go."
In answer, Severus tightened his arms around her waist. "I have nightmares like that. But the feeling stays with you, even if the specifics of the dream do not."
"It still makes me feel ridiculous," she grumbled, but laid her hands on top of his.
After a while, just as Severus was about to drop off to sleep, she spoke up again. "While I can't remember what it was about, it felt familiar, somehow. As if I'd dreamt it before. I woke up suddenly, quite, um, upset ... but I felt exhausted, as if I'd been running."
"Hmm," he grunted. "Why didn't your cat comfort you? Not that I'm complaining, just wondering."
"I literally jerked awake. Crooks vanished under the bed and wouldn't come out. He sulks when his sleep is disturbed."
'Understandable.'
Oops. Judging by the way Hermione had just stiffened, he'd managed to say that thought aloud.
She tugged at his hands. "If you want me to go..."
"No. It's just been a very long day. Sleep?"
"If I can," she muttered.
"Shall I get you a dose of Dreamless Sleep?"
"Please."
By the time Severus got back from his hunt through the medicine cupboard in the bathroom, Hermione was snoring softly. 'Typical.'
He set the vial of Dreamless Sleep down on the bedside table, just in case it would be useful again. Then he climbed into bed next to his bride and pulled her close.
* * *
It was light when Severus's sleep was disturbed again. This time, the door to his room from the corridor clicked open. Severus did two things on snapping awake. He pulled the quilt up to Hermione's throat, and grabbed his wand from the bedside table. Only a fool would sleep with a wand under a pillow, due to the potential of sparks.
Lucius stood in the doorway, his eyebrows raised at the sight before him. Did he expect them to sleep in separate beds, or did he not expect to have a wand aimed at him? No matter.
"Go away. Knock next time, too. Just because you are the master of this house does not give you the right to barge in like this."
"Apologies," Lucius sneered. "Come down when you want breakfast. I won't send an elf with food today, since there are things we need to talk about." He closed the door with exaggerated care.
Quite why they couldn't talk after eating breakfast separately was beyond Severus. Perhaps Lucius wanted to be sociable over meals? He shuddered at the recollection of his parents arguing over meals. No, meals were for eating, not for discussing serious matters.
He replaced his wand on the bedside table, noting the time as he did so. It was high time for breakfast. The pangs of hunger he felt made that quite clear. It was time to wake the young woman drooling on his pillow.
It was only when he leant close to her in order to wake her up with an embrace that Severus noticed Hermione's state of undress. Thankfully under the covers, where Lucius hadn't been able to see, but Severus could certainly feel it. He was most ... interested to discover that her nightgown had ridden up to her waist.
The only thing between them where she still lay spooned against him was his new silk pyjama bottoms, his sole concession so far to married life, and a wedding present from Hermione's parents. During their week living in close proximity in Spinner's End, Hermione had informed him that the pyjamas were far more attractive than his old nightshirts.
Nuzzling his nose against her hair, he inhaled deeply. Yes, she was a bit sweaty after her disturbed night, but she still smelled good to him. Very natural, very feminine, very ... very Hermione.
Severus explored the warm, smooth skin exposed under Hermione's nightgown. The soft, slight curve of her stomach. One hand went beneath the nightgown, drawn to explore higher up, while the other one found the coarse curls. And slipped even lower.
'Merlin.'
He found the nub of her clitoris, circled it ... pressed lightly. His fingers slid down, bent on exploring further.
'So soft. So wet.'
Severus removed his hand to smell and then taste the moisture on his fingers. 'Mmm.'
He went back, dipped his fingers into her wetness and spread it.
It was wrong, she was asleep, couldn't give consent ... he should stop. But he couldn't, not when her breath hitched like that, not when she moaned, even in her sleep.
But then he realised that he was grinding his erection into her arse, the flimsy fabric of his pyjamas no protection from the spot of moisture on the tip of his cock, particularly not if he carried on like that. He pulled back, guiltily removing his hand too, only for her to grab hold of his wrist. And brought his hand back between her legs.
"You might as well finish what you start," she said, her voice breathy with sleep and ... arousal, if he wasn't mistaken.
She guided his hand, until he picked up enough of her preferred movements and rhythm. Back and forth, quick flicks of his fingers, a gradual circling motion. Her hips shifting, pressing herself against his hardness, then against his fingers and back again.
Her heavy breathing, almost in synchronisation with his own.
Gasps, moans, groans ... pleas to 'finish, dammit!'.
He cupped a breast in one hand, squeezed it gently, rolling the nipple between finger and thumb.
But still not enough, according to her drawn out hiss of his name.
He kept up his attentions on her breast, and shifted his hand to plunge a finger, then another inside her, his thumb busy on her clitoris.
Nearly enough ... he could feel her inner muscles contract around his fingers. He curved them upwards and beckoned in a come-hither motion. The way she arched upwards let him know that he had the right spot. He kept up the movements.
At last Hermione gasped, her head fell back against his shoulder. If he hadn't moved his head in time, she might have hit his nose.
Severus could feel her vaginal muscles twitch around his fingers, faster than the dull throb in his penis. He winced, removing his hand from her breast and withdrawing it from her nightgown in order to pull his pyjamas down to free himself. As well as bring himself off.
He was getting close, his own head thrown back, when he almost choked.
Hermione's hand had joined his own on his cock.
He looked down at her, wide-eyed. She'd pulled his other arm away from and out of herself, and had twisted around to face him.
"You don't have to do this," he tried to say, but only managed to gurgle incoherently.
"I want to," she whispered, somehow understanding him. She leant forwards to kiss him, even as she replaced his hand with her other one.
Her movements were a little hesitant, but she repeated the same moves of his hand with growing confidence.
He flung his head back again, his eyes rolling back in his head. And then...
"Oh God!"
The touch of her lips on his glans, and the flicker of her tongue.
After he caught his breath, and cast a rather embarrassed Cleansing Charm on her face, he embraced her.
"I can last longer," Severus assured her. "It's just been quite some time since I've had any touch but my own."
* * *
Lucius sipped his tea. He had half a mind to order the house-elf serving his breakfast to fetch the Firewhisky, but it was far too early for that. Unless he resisted whenever the urge to drink struck him, he'd end up as a pathetic alcoholic. Well, apart from a couple of fingers of Ogden's Best at night. That was perfectly safe, even beneficial to the upkeep of a healthy body.
But these ... feelings were not. His sleep was disturbed, and not just due to the void Narcissa's death had left in his life. No, this was something else. Jealousy, gnawing at his insides, even when he couldn't see Severus and Hermione.
At least he'd managed to keep either of them from noticing. Although for how much longer? They had both seen through the cracks in his mask when grief overwhelmed him. Lucius grimaced, his fingers twisting his new ring. The humiliation of his feelings bared, even if Severus and his bride were the only ones to see.
That mortification would be nothing compared to what he would feel if they discovered his jealousy. Bad enough if they thought that he was jealous of their happiness; their pity would be a bitter pill to swallow. Even worse if they thought that he was jealous of Severus, that he desired a Mudblood. 'Never.' Yes, she'd looked radiant in her wedding dress, even beautiful, but of course still not a patch on Narcissa.
'Liar,' a treacherous voice in his head declared. 'The moment you saw her, your heart leapt. Whatever would Narcissa think?'
"Shut up," he hissed, before his cheeks burnt with the realisation that he was arguing with himself. Then the cup in his hand shattered, spilling hot tea over his lap. Further embarrassment mingled with pain, but at least it distracted him from his internal squabble.
The elf cleared up the mess and repaired the cup. "I is sorry, Master, and I is going to iron my hands because I is a bad elf."
"Don't bother," Lucius ordered, after he cast a Cooling Charm on his lap. "Just bring me more tea."
It was an hour since he'd mentioned to Severus that they needed to talk. An hour since he'd caught them in bed together. He really should have expected it, but the sight of them like that was like a blow to the gut. It didn't take much to imagine what was delaying them. Lucius closed his eyes and dragged a hand over his face.
"What was it that you wanted to talk about?"
Lucius looked up. Severus stood in the doorway, his arm around Hermione's shoulders.
"We can talk after you've eaten. You must be hungry," he murmured and offered them a tight smile. It was either that or wince.
* * *
"Is that today's Prophet?" Severus asked when he had washed down his full English breakfast with coffee. He pointed at the paper folded on the table in front of Lucius.
"Yes. It's part of why I need to talk to you." Lucius turned to Hermione, careful not to look at Severus. "I apologise in advance for my lack of tact, but there's no particularly delicate way to say this. When will you be ready to consummate this 'marriage' of ours?"
Hermione bristled despite his apology. "Wait your turn," she said tartly.
Lucius dropped his teacup. It smashed on the floor, broken for the second time that morning. He gaped, eyes flicking between Hermione and Severus.
"What? You haven't ... I knew you hadn't last night, it was rather late ... I have no idea why you didn't do it after the Muggle ceremony a week ago, but I know you didn't. But, this morning, surely you did ..." He made some rather obscene motions with his hands, words failing him.
Severus glared at him. Well, Lucius supposed he had been rather crude.
"But ... but ... What in Merlin's name were you doing before you came down for breakfast?" Lucius spluttered.
"None of your business," Severus snapped.
Hermione was frowning at him. "What do you mean by that?"
"By what?" Lucius asked, slumped in his chair.
"You said you 'knew' we hadn't done anything else last night or before it. How?"
"Read this." He passed her the Prophet.
Severus leant over to read it with her. Lucius knew by the way their faces darkened that they'd found the pertinent part.
"How the hell do they know that we haven't consummated our unions?" Hermione demanded. Lucius just motioned for her to read on.
"I see. From the marriage certificate. But how?"
Lucius gave her a puzzled look. How did she not know? "They are a matter of public record."
"No, I meant how do they know about the lack of consummation from the certificate? It's just a piece of parchment!"
"A piece of enchanted parchment signed in blood," stated Severus. "I imagine that has something to do with it."
"Indeed." Lucius nodded. "When consummated, the signatures change colour. I don't know the specifics of the magic involved, but it will be all too obvious to any prying eyes that our names are still signed in blood, not silver or gold."
Hermione blinked. "Why silver or gold?"
Ah. She had to ask that question. Lucius got the distinct feeling that she would not like the answer. "It's better than the alternative. In the old days, the sheets would be checked."
"For bloodstains? You mean that the colour ink changes to reveals whether or not the bride was a virgin?"
Lucius nodded again. She was definitely angry, he could feel the magic pouring off her, almost taste it as an electric tang in the air.
"That's outrageous! Things like that shouldn't be a matter of public record. Nor should whether or not the marriage was consummated."
The remaining crockery smashed, pelting them with shards if not for the timely intervention of Severus's Shielding Charm.
'Like mother, like daughter. Heaven help me.'
"Sorry," Hermione muttered. "Not your fault."
'Maybe not quite the same. The Harridan didn't apologise.'
"The fact of the matter is that if we don't consummate soon, it leaves the way open for other wizards to challenge these unions. To challenge Severus and me to duels. If we lose, then the marriages are annulled, and you will have no choice but to marry the victors."
"No," Hermione gasped. Severus drew her close, lips to her ear, whispering some sort of comfort to her.
"But we have some time. It's been a while since the Prophet spread the news. If anyone was going to challenge us immediately, Owls would have started to arrive by now."
There was a tap at the window. An owl seemed to glare inside, and rapped again on the window.
It seemed that he had spoken too soon.
AN: Many thanks to septentrion and JunoMagic for betaing, and to Kribu for alpha reading.
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What a story, I feel as if I have been pulled every which way and back again as if through a wringer lol. Lucious with hte help from his dead wife saved the day in the end lol. So sad with all the deaths and miscarriages.
Congrats on a well written piece of writing a superb job that should be applauded. Many thanks .
Poor Ron. They were a couple. However, she still prefers Severus. What are we going to do about Tricksy?
Oh well, I guess Hermione has to lose her virginity to two veril wizards. Poor thing gets to live in wealth and be admired by the same said viril wizards. She only has to contend with a bitter and bigoted house elf. It must be hard to have her mistress replaced but she is being a bad elf. You would think Hermione would pay attention to Crook's warning. She may need to watch her back. I think she should ask for a replacement or else have a talk with Tricksy. Not a comforting name for one's personal house elf is you ask me. Being too nice may actually get her more trouble than a clear understanding that while she knows she isn't Narcissa, she is now the Mistress. It's only pragmatic. Whether she likes it or not she is the proud owner of several house elves. If she doesn't treat them like they expect they will be shamed and you don't want to piss off a house elf. It would serve her well to think about how Harry won over Creature. It would also be a good idea for the three of them to discuss their expectations. Severus can't read her mind. It would get mighty tiresome to have someone pissed off at you all the time and you don't kow why. He's a man! What does she expect? She'll have to train him.
I hope Hermione and Draco become good friends and that she can find him a bride. I also hope you get around to telling us about the wedding night in detail soon. I've noticed you've told us little about what goes on inside Severus' head. We know he is in love with Hermione and that is all. Hermione is handling this marriage thing quite well. I would have expected more emotional resistance to the marrige law. She did the best possible thing however, and took the problem head on in a proactive move that kept as many of her choices in tact as possibe. She could have done much worse. She's very lucky Severus is the first person she saw when she woke up.
Good for the Grangers. Keep those snobbish wizards in line!
Good for Draco!!! Hermione, you should have thought longer in regard to your requirements. His future bad behavior will reflect on you. You also have to have sex with him at least once and I'm sure he wants to watch you and Severus. It is unwise to be so impulsive. You should have conferred with Severus on what to request, and there should be a cooling off period in case of buyer's remorse.
While I'm sure that Hermione will eventually enjoy sex with Lucius Malfoy, she doesn't know that yet. She should think this through better. She sure as hell should have made them both work harder at getting her to agree to marry them. She's given in too easy without knowing enough about either one of them.
I hope she lives up to Draco's faith in her judgement. So far she isn't impressing me except for the paper wack on Malfoy's face. Don't let me down, Hermione.
And Severus, what will you do if Hermione feels attracted to Lucius eventually? What if she decides she liked her wedding night with Lucius? He won't mind servicing her even if they are married only in name. Will you ask either of them to promise to be faithful to your feelings for her before the wedding night?
I can't believe that Hermione agreed to go back inside. She flinched! Never flinch when dealing with a Malfoy! This is a bad start if she ends up marrying them. She needs to establish the fact that she is the queen and never bluffs! He called her bluff and she just showed her weakness because of a little rain. She was stupid to let him take her back into the house after imprisoning her on his property. If she keeps up this stupid behavior she'll deserve what ever she gets.
Marriage is not truely a deal between equals. Men and women don't think the same way. For it to be equal you both need to have the same world view. She needs to establish the perameters of the relationship immediately. I've been married for 33 years and my views on marriage and men haven't improved much since I grew up watching my mom with 2 husbands and my dad with 3 wives by the time I was 18. He's on his fourth wife now. He is too old to get laid and doesn't want to be alone. This is the first woman he has ever even let decorate the house let alone put her name on it. She has the advantage this time. In his situation he obviously see's he is better off this way so it is worth the trade off in power. He knew his other choice was the rest home.
There is a price for being married to a man who can protect you and a different price to be paid to be married to an easy going guy. Easy going guys don't take care of business. Alpha males are controllig.
OMG! To be the step mother of Draco Malfoy! Severus is an idiot. If he really loves her he will get away from the Malfoys. They will always have the upper hand because they don't care if anyone likes them. It doesn't matter to them if they are right or wrong. The only way to keep from being controlled by them is constant vigilance and brute force or imperio. Not the way I want to live my daily life, how about you? He and Hermione alone could share power, trade power back and forth and compromise.
Another thing about Severus making this deal with Lucius, does he really think Hermione would be willing to have one of her husbands cheat on her? It isn't in her nature to understand any possible advantage to being married but not not in a committed relationship with husband number 2 under the circumstances she is presently given. She isn't smart enough to be able to enter into a business agreement with him as a condition of a marrige of convenience. Severus should be able to read his Griffindor better than this. It's a wonder he survived the war at this rate. Sheesh! He's thinkling with his dick.
And let me tell you, Hermione, Severus Snape isn't worth taking on Malfoy just to be with him. Severus Snape is his own peice of work. In this case, he isn't even totally on your side. He's made a deal regarding you with Lucius Malfoy, forgodssake! And by all that is holy, do not agree to live at Malfoy Manor! Please tell me Severus is at least smart enough not to do this on Lucius' turf.
If Severus really cares for Hermione, I would think he would try to protect her from someone like Lucius. Does he think he has a better chance with her if Lucius and he are presented as a package? I think she made it clear how she feels about Malfoys when she was yelling at Ron. If Hermione finds out Severus made a deal with Lucus, she will hex them both. Hermione will not willingly be manipulated. Severus Snape better think about the consequences that Hermione might find out that he already told Lucius he could marry her without her say in the matter. So far he doesn't show much hope of being any smarter than the average adult male, just not as stupid as Ron. Use your brain man! If she marries more than one man will she be required to get knocked up by all of them? If I was Hermione I would go back to the muggle world and hide. At the very least she better come out of that hospital, wand at the ready.
I enjoy this original premise for the marriage law plot. Will Severus be able to fix the memory problem with the cure? I am surprised he was not informed of this side effect. Amazing how Lucius never stops his plotting. I wonder if Severus has given him an answer yet. I wonder how much time the wizards have to comply. Surely not untill the living witches are all well. I assume at this point, that is why Severus is still not married. He and Hermione apparently have a past that is at least cordial, perhaps a bit more. I can't imagine Lucius being able to seduce this incarnation of Hermione. But I may underestimate him. I'm sure he will be as charming and repentant as a cross between Don Jaun and Saint Peter to Hermione's face. I wonder how much say the witches have over who they choose to marry. I would hope that since there are so many wizards they will be allowed to be courted. Hmmmm. More than one husband sounds like a lot of man-children to manage. Training just one is hard enough. If the woman is weak willed I can't imagine how they would work out the pack order. Two or more alpha males to one woman will take some thinking about. Who would fare the worst, the woman or the men? Being an alpha female myself, alpha males don't usually even ask us on a date. Thinking of the ones I know, we would kill each other soon into the marriage. I do not obey. I've decided the weak female would fare the worst. A couple of house elves will be helpful. I can't imagine the women who have to take care of more than one man. Multiple men would blame all of their problems on her, rather than themselves or each other. This will not be a problem for Hermione, I think. If she has enough money and a couple of house elves, would it be worth it to have separate homes for each husband? I'm sure the purpose of this law is to keep the witches perpetually pregnant. Just kill me now. Gods, how I hate being pregnant. I wonder what the penalty would be for using black market birth control potions or spells.
I never thought I would say "poor Lucius" in my life. But, poor Lucius. I bet the magical wedding will be even more difficult.
well we couldn't leave poor Lucius to his hand for the rest of his life now, could we? By another month he should be pretty well done.
Hooray for Fawkes! He wrapped his arms around her, lips by her ear. “Kinky.” heehee. I'm glad Lucius liked his present, it was a lovely idea.
Will he strew sugar on that bottled spider?
Severus wasn’t sure what was worse: imagining what was happening or witnessing it. Regardless, she needed him. That was all that mattered. my heart, it is going pittapat.
mmm nice morning they had there, and I like how Luc is starting to warm up. I should be going to sleep already, but can't stop...
I love Hermiones thoughts about her two husbands while Ginny is casting the spell. I can almost feel sorry for Lucius, looking at his bare left hand, can forgive him being quite suck a prat. Nice that Draco's trying. Granger’s gaze felt as if it could see into his soul. Much like Severus’s could, Draco realised. He shuddered to think what she’d pick up from his father. ooh, shiver.
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Thanks! Poor Lucius - still a prat, but a forgivable one, at least sometimes. Glad that you like how Draco is trying to be decent.
“I keep white peacocks. What do you think?” :-)
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Glad you like that line! Lucius was fun to write.
Pity Lucius is being such the prat, I love the house - and the library :-)
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Thanks! He does come with a very big bonus, doesn't he? Even if he is a prat, at least there's his library.
Mmm, have to admit to having a tendre for duellist!Lucius. Pity Herms doesn't see it that way.She strode away, refusing to look back even when Severus called her name desperately ... sniffle.
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Thanks! Glad to hear it. Too bad for Lucius, yes... and almost too bad for poor Severus, caught in the crossfire.
Now there is a marriage law I could get to like ;-)
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Thank you! So long as the men involved were like Severus (and maybe Lucius if he behaves himself) I'd be inclined to agree with you.
Eeeeheehee! I'm dying to see Lucius duel Ron over Hermione :o)
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Poor Ron - he really doesn't stand a chance!Thank you!
Congrats on fufilling your new years resolution! It was close but you did it. I really liked the way you let magic itself balance out the birth rations. Very cool. Thank you for giving us a happy ending with out making me puke. In otherwords enough angst with a surviving child ! Wheeee! You done good Ayerf. Thank you!!
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Too close for comfort, but a relief!Glad magic balancing things out worked for you, I hoped it would.Thank you very much! I wasn't sure if it would count as a happy ending, but I guess the surviving child made it one.
What I liked best besides ridding the world of Voldy's remains and final curse is Lucius' POV. Even in the midst of a horrible time crunch he still manages to be amusing. Love that man!
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Thank you! I hoped Lucius's POV would be funny and lighten the tone a bit in that tense time.
I cannot beleive this story ends in 2 more chapters! How have you wrapped it up? What the hell was Narcissa talking about? and OMG Lucius is in major trouble.
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Glad to keep you guessing this close to the end! Definitely in trouble... but he's sure to manage to wriggle his way out of it somehow.
Is there a major character death warning on this story?? You have me all kinds of worried my friend!
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Nope, no character death warning. It was awfully tempting to have one, though... Still, sorry to worry you, but glad you were worried, even if it does make me sound rather evil!
Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)
Who else were you considering killing off? Your plague did a great job of most of the characters! LOL! Ginny?
Response from ayerf (Author of Polyandry and Other Problems)
Oh, just Hermione. Then Severus would kill Lucius, then himself. And then I guess without them, Ginny would die too. And lots of other witches. Unless someone else could get the message out. That was my rocks-fall-and-everyone-dies scenario, but... I resisted the temptation. Somehow.True, the plague did do a pretty good job!