Oh, so sad. very interesting and different kind of story!

How sad!!! I know it's going to get worse, but please tell me that it will get better soon!!! Very intense chapter, great work!

How sad.  I'm very interested in this plague though.  Is it a natural occurring phenomena, or is it man made in some way?  Have you ever read The White Plague?  I'm wondering if that story is influencing this one?

What a phenomenal twist to this story. I have no clue what can be done for the plague, which I love because that means you've written a great plot. Thanks for the update.

Greeeeat as if the other stuff goin' on wasn't enough! I liked that Hermione didn't really connect the clues together all that well. I kinda thought she was sick with the plague again when she started feeling off. ^^; But I'm good at predicting stuff anyways. Thanks for the chapter, lookin' forward to more! =)

You are giving me angst, ayerf.  I love it!

oh no.  after all she's been thru.  i can't wait for the next chapter.  this is really getting even more intense.  thanks so much

You're evil. How could you do that to her, to him, to them??? After what she's been through, her infertility, the imprisonment Severus, and now she has to be ill again and on the verge on death. Really that is not kind of you. I fully expect a sappy ending. *stomp foot and sulk*

Eeep!  O_O

Perhaps seeing Hermione in mortal danger will change Lucius's behaviour for the better. :)

Whew, that's heavy duty stuff. Both Hermione falling ill and Lucius' desire for her. Severus and Hermione's feelings for him would have to change drastically for him to be accepted into their bed. Is that really all he's interested in? Time will tell, hmmm? Enjoyed the unexpected turns in the chapter, well done.

You have managed to set up a rather nasty scenario here, dear author.In real life, almost all of the pregnant witches would survive the pregnancy, only to succumb to the plague within a year of delivery. And the temporary 'cure' would not work for them a second time because pregnancy would have allowed it to mutate further.I am hoping that the second onset of the plague will restore Hermione's memories and allow her to focus on developing a permanent solution to the plague.Can you tell that I am getting overly invested here?It looks like Lucius is about to finally find something bigger than himself and his idle boredom to focus on. Which is good.Looking forward to more soon. Happy writing.

OMG!

Oh my.  This is one scary story.

OMG WOW!!  I've been following your story for a while and I love how you weave it together!

Oh wow the plague is backand mutated. And if the witches have to wait until the third symptom are they going to loose their babies?  Frightning. I really hope Hermione doens't lose her memory again. And that Severus finds a cure - a real cure.

Oh my, oh my. This complicates things considerably. Will another dose of the cure wipe away Hermione's memories of their love and marriage? As horrible as some of the recent incidents have been, I'm sure she would not want to lose the many good ones that have also accumulated.

Good God, what a horrifying development! Even though every fertile witch in wizarding Britain is now pregnant, a second round with a more virulent plague is likely to cause a flood of miscarriages. Thank goodness Severus had some of the "cure" left to dose Hermione and hopefully protect the Weasley wives, but how many more might die while Severus busts tail to produce more? So the nightmare continues...

Well, you certainly haven't killed Hermione, but you are giving her a great many life-threatening experiences...;-)Makes the story great, always on the edge of one's seat.  Just when you thought it might be smooth sailing for a bit, the plague returns quicker and deadlier. Looks like Severus is going to have to set aside the memory-restorer potion and find a cure for the plague instead.And I find your logic for omnioscopes sound =)Looking forward to the next chapter.

oh! lucius does have a use! ~sends her gremlin in to happily destroy the penseive porn...and blames it on a well-placed white peacock~hermione will be just fine!right?

Wow, I certainly hadn't expected that! But still a great chapter. More soon, please??

Wow, will all the women die?  Frightening thought.

Aha, knew Snape's emotions were going to overload sometime.  Too bad that it almost came at the cost of Hermione's life.  I'm glad that one of the elves was good enough to get Snape to come back so he could save Hermione, despite the fact that Fawkes might not have been able to help and then there'd be no more story...:_(Looking forward to the next chapter.

Evil Evil houself, manipulating the wards and then poisoning Hermione.  I hope that something happens, Snape has a change of heart or something, don't want Hermione to die.

Looks like Snape found his breaking point.  Interesting ultimatium, wonder whether he'll actually listen to Hermione at all if she shows up.  Glad that Hermione hit/hexed Lucius, he deserved it.