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Breaching the Otherworld

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

Breaching the Otherworld

Southern_Witch_69

850 Reviews   |   850 Ratings, 0 Likes, 412 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance Epilogue compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge 142,839 Words 46 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape

Dreams and a magical book draw Hermione to seek the help of Lucius Malfoy, who has a secret of his own: Severus Snape can be brought back from the Otherworld. Will she help?

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Chapters (28)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28


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Reviews for Breaching the Otherworld

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Cerydden M_Layne

I'm dying to know what happens next!  Please update soon.  Thanks for your work!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

More up tomorrow. thank you

10/10

faula_tara

eeeek i cnat wait to see what happens now that i am hooked on this one i am going to go look for more of your woorks happy writting

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you! :)

9/10

faula_tara

ok so cissy must have been in on this the whole tiem too but would snape really abandon hermione

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

We shall see! :)

10/10

faula_tara

yeah serveus is back and look out lucius it should be intresting

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

yes indeed

10/10

StormySkize

Oh, wow! I love the way this story starts. It's a great premise and promises to be an engrossing tale. Thanks for sharing.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

thank you

10/10

zauza

WOW!!! I have to say that Lucius was not a surprise but ...Severus???? wow!! You made me wonder with him being so nasty in Hermione dreams, but then I thought, it could be Lucius manipulating her mind and her dreams, but now you scared me!! What are Severus's reasons to agree with all this? Is he doing all this to became the new DL? I don't think so, Lucius would never be n#2( I really hope you will write another story with him( Lucius) being the good guy, I love him and the way you wrote him was just amazing),hehe,But..... I don't see Severus being this evil, not the way you are writing him, but this is getting so complex... I don't know nothing anymore!What an amazing story, you made a great job at twisting everything and at keeping us wondering!!! And that is great!!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I'll definitely have more on this. Thank you very much fo reading and commenting. I appreciate it

10/10

faula_tara

cool a visit from snape just what we all needed i am so loving this i will have to look for more of your works

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks!!

9/10

Delayed Poet

Everything's coming together, but there're still so many things I don't understand! Please do update this again soon!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

More up tomorrow! Thanks for reading! :)

10/10

faula_tara

ok kind of breezed over the whole lucius and hermione bed fellows thing did ya grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrbut p well i guess lemons are always to be had thanl you fo a wonderful chapter

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

hehe sorry bout that :)

10/10

faula_tara

ok so ill tell ya what i dont wnat to read about clumsy ron and her at least lucius has experience and how very clever of you to get rid of cissy but did dracop have to come back o well shit happens i am enjoying this emenselythank you

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I agree on that!

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kimjo2

i hope the rl snare has loosened.  wow...what an update!  this story is so yummily angsty.  thanks and i look forward to the next chapter.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

It definitely has. I hope you like what's coming next. It should be up soon. My betas have it.

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faula_tara

ok so serveus and hermione wont be togtehr in this one but lucius is ok it better than ron and having a partner in france will keep him busy you are brilliant

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Well.... you'll see

0/10

faula_tara

yippie another one of your stories i was getting bored and i found this one i just love the way your imagination works thank you for another great chapter here i go agin to get lost in another one of your stories 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

thank you!!!!!!

10/10

faula_tara

ok this is just twisted but i am loving it as i have said i just wnat hermione to have a happily ever after hell id like for everyone to have one but i know thta isnt possible 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I'm so glad you are enjoying it. :)

10/10

emmeline33

*kicking self for not reading this fic earlier* This is such a unique and tantalizing story.  I love the way you've had us going back and forth with Hermione about Lucius every step of the way.  You really know how to make a bad wizard even badder! I will definitely be staying current with this story from now on.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Welcome aboard! I hope you continue to like it. I have more up soon and will answer some questions.

0/10

tinytexans

EEk! 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Uhhuh :)

10/10

Sampdoria

Thank you for the update! I am not sure what to think about Severus at the moment. I am pretty, almost, nearly, sure that he is still on the rigth side and that he is working on stopping Lucius from becomming the next dark lord. But, he did chose Hermione before this whole thing started, and though he somehow is unable to harm Lucius, he is awfully cooperative, ain't he? And if he is scheeming to stop Lucius from becomming the next dark lord, is he just going to hang around waiting for others to do the job while he just observes who gets hurt while figthing? Or, will he do something actively to stop him before Lucius get to powerful?Draco got several stars in my book though, I am impressed by him. Update again soon, I want to know what is going on.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

You have good instincts. I hope to answer some of these questions for you in the next chapter. thank you so very much for reading and reviewing for me. I appreciate the commentary and questions.

10/10

Shadow

Well, it seems Severus was more involved than he seemed to be at first. At least Harry is finally getting some information on whats going on.And I just knew Malfoy had something to do with her dad's accident.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Harry has a big role in the next chapter. :) Yeah, that damn Malfoy. What else has he been doing though?

10/10

amsev

I was deeeeeee-lighted to see more of this story.  And just WTF is going on here? (Another evil cliffhanger, that's  part of what!)  Update soonest, pretty please?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you. more up soooooon

0/10

septentrion

What a way to start the day: a new chapter of this story! The plot thickens so much here; Severus isn't as innocent as he seemed to be. Hermione and Harry will have revenge on their minds. Ron: were the photos true? And what were Severus's goals while plotting with Malfoy? Did he really want to be the next Dark Lord? So many questions.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks for enjoying. The next is with my betas now.I will have a little more on Ron in the next chapter ,but that won't fully be answered until the one after that. I hope things clear up soon! :)

10/10

Maddie

Oh no, now Severus is looking like he isn't quite the white hat we thought. I am so confused. Of course, it is easily believable that Lucius was pretending to have seen the Light. If Severus is to be the new Dark Lord, as the one who is the most powerful, why is Lucius ordering him around?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

He's definitely not the good boy we thought, but he's not all that bad either. :) more up soon! :)

10/10

June W

poor Draco!  I hope Harry can figure things out quickly, since Draco can't talk too much.  but Hermione and Severus can talk, as long as they don't (directly?) harm Lucius - and no promise was made to not harm Cissa, if my leaky memory is right.  I am so hoping that Lucius gets knocked down for this!  oh, and I'm curious about Severus' reasoning to participate in this whole thing.  he may have even done it to make sure he'd be alive to tell Harry what Harry needed to know to kill Voldy? eh, will have to wait for your next chapter.  thank you for updating, and I hope that RL cooperates for you!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

More up soon and some answers will be forthcoming finally. There's some twisting going on, but i hope you enjoy

0/10

nightshift

Somehow, I don't think Lucius is going to get what he planned on when he had Hermione cure Snape.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I'm thinking not, too. :)

10/10

Hedgehog33

Fantastic story. Love the twists and turns!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

thanks!

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MollysSister

Severus as the next dark lord? That is a curious thought, even more strange is Lucius agreeing to a #2 position. I cant wait for the next chapter. Will HErmione remember everything she has discovered?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

She will remember it all. :)Who says Lucius would be number two? Bwahahaha

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