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Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge Breaching the Otherworld
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Breaching the Otherworld

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

Breaching the Otherworld

Southern_Witch_69

850 Reviews   |   850 Ratings, 0 Likes, 412 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance Epilogue compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge 142,839 Words 46 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape

Dreams and a magical book draw Hermione to seek the help of Lucius Malfoy, who has a secret of his own: Severus Snape can be brought back from the Otherworld. Will she help?

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Chapters (28)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28


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Reviews for Breaching the Otherworld

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10/10

Phoenix Fire

oh dear lord... no more cliff hangers pleeease!!! uhgh i seriously feel like banging my head on a desk! Cant wait for more chaps Southern!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Sorry about that! :) More up now though. Hope you like it

10/10

debjunk

Oh, you can't just leave it there!  I'm quite angry and disappointed in her right now.  How can you blame Severus for being bitter?  Hopefully with the return of her memories, she can sort herself out, and then her marriage. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

She's got a lot to think about, hasn't she? I don't blame Snape either, but what he did wasn't right either. I hope things can work out... teehee

10/10

kittylefish

argh! evil cliffie! i hope you mean it when you say, more soon! this chapter made me ache for poor severus. when i see all that anger on the surface, it just makes the pain underneath so clear. and - still wondering what's in the bloody trunk!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

sorry about the cliffie! :) I'm plotting out the next now! The trunk... will make an appearance. Hehe

10/10

sinbad

Evil cliffie Southern!  Very enjoyable chapter.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks! More up soon

0/10

kimjo2

finally she remembers!  yay!  but will severus forgive her?  i hope he makes he suffer a bit...but just a bit.  thanks so much for the wonderful update.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I think he's just trying to give her what she wanted (and I think he's feeling guilty about his part in things). Fear not. I think things will be well...bwaahahhaha

0/10

rhiannon113

AAAARRRRRGGGGGG! I both love and hate cliff hangers. Really nice scene with Ron, sad. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

LOL thanks!  I feel sorry for Ron at this point. :(

10/10

mikimoto

Well, now that she has all of the data, and hopefully an improved perspective, perhaps she can make better decisions.It's not as if Severus is so lily-white and guilt-free.  They both need to be honest about what they feel and what they want.  Self/Other -protection has gotten them into this mess and they won't get out if they don't give it up and be vulnerable to one another.Thanks for the bit about the blanket.  I was hoping that would happen.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I think they have a lot to work through and both have things to answer for. :) We shall get to some of that in the next chapter or so! :) thanks for reading

10/10

Sampdoria

Thank you so much for the update! I am trilled that she finally seems to remember how much she loves Severus, hopefully she can now get her life on the rigth track? I did not like how Ginny and Ron set her up for a dinner alone with Ron. Though I am glad she didn't cave in to Ron's romantic interest, I would have liked to see her stronger in her lack of romantic interest for him, also a bit of anger for being set up like this, and probably because I simply don't like Ron, especially when he tries to persuade her to be involved with him, I would have liked her rejection of him to be stronger. While I guess I migth be inflicted with my dislike for him, I just can't see why she should be so considerate with him, even more so than with Severus? Keeping friendship I can understand, but if that is what she wants she must deal with the fact that Ron wants more and make him understand that it would never happen instead of letting him keep a iota of hope that he can persuade her at some point. Update again soon!!!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I think she was trying to treat Ron delicately, knowing how hurt he's been and having experienced some of that herself. While he is still hopeful, he did get the message and won't impose again like this. She is indignant that they (Harry/Ginny) tried to set her up, but she knows that they are just trying to help (meddlesome mates).  I'm working on the next so far! :) thank you

10/10

Muggline

Oooh, one of the most evil cliffs I ever read!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

whoops!

0/10

June W

yay!!!  Hermione finally remembers!!  and she didn't cave in over dinner with Ron.  hurry, Herms - go get Severus!!  and don't let Izzy beat herself up.  thanks for the new chapter!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks!! More up soon

0/10

CharmedForce

Oh, the realization that she would give up everything for him to live was her trigger for the rest of the memories! Brilliant. I just love that she is so empathetic to Severus. but it bugs me to no end that she is overly-empathetic to Ron. What makes Ron more important? Hmph...

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

You got it. :) I guess she feels sorry for him because he hasn't done anything wrong. Snape's not innocent in things, and that's still in her mind, but she'll lighten up much now that she knows everything.

10/10

pyjamapants

Oh, my heart is absolutely breaking for Hermione. I hope the sudden recollection of all her memories will bring her clarity and help her sort through this tangled mess.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

They should! :)

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh great NOW SHE REMEMBERS!  But what? What does she rememeber?   I liked the flash backs. Ron's attempt at romantic was sweet, but so Ronald.Now you have me hanging on to a ----

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

What are you hanging onto? Hahaha If it's a cliff, be careful up there!!! lol xoxox

10/10

Maddie

She needs time? [Bitch slap]  She needs to focus and get Severus to believe she wants him back or she will lose him. I feel sorry for him. She has been an idiot IMHO. Just because everyone expected her and Ron to marry is not a good reason to do so. Aaarrrggg.Great chapter. Needs more Severus, though.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

~grin~ He'll be in the next one. Bwahahahaha I hope you will like it

10/10

makaem

That was a cruel place to leave us. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Sorry about that. :)

10/10

Past

I proclaim you Queen of Evil, what a horrible place to leave us at! Please, please, please don't make us wait to long for the update!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I promise to not wait too long! :)

0/10

timestep

Not that it makes it right, but it makes it more understandable. And you managed to express everyone's emotions is a way thatelicited a very strong reaction from me. Thanks for another wonderful chapter.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you very much. :)

10/10

OnlyMoonLight

Gods!  The frustration!  I read this entire story today and it is fabulous!  Please update soon!  I am right there with Heromine about wanting to know what is going on!  I keep thinking that there is something else hidden in all of this...but what?!?!?!?!Dun, dun, duuuuuun...

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Hope you continue to enjoy it! :)

0/10

sigrangersnape

Ai, Meu Deus! This story is becoming each time better. When I see that it has a new chapter, I stop everything what I am doing, catch a snack and  I don't leave the front of the computer until I have read everything. You are a wonderful writer. I'm a huge fan of yours. One question? Where is Snape?kisses

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Glad you are liking it. More Snape up soon! :)

0/10

kimjo2

love this story!  her memories are coming back but i can't wait for the good one!  thanks so much and i look forward to where we're going.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks! Hope you like what's to come!

10/10

sinbad

Good chapter, I'm wondering how long it will be before Hermione connects the dots and figures things out.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Not too long! :)

0/10

WriterMerrin

Oh, more puzzle pieces!  It's painfully beautiful to see Hermione finding herself in different ways in this chapter, finding that she has happy memories of the home they shared.  I hope Severus finds out about her visits somehow.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks for the lovely review. More up soon! :)

10/10

Muggline

Oh dear, of course we'll stick with you... it gets more and more intriguing the farther you get, so why shouldn't we?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Yay! thanks!

10/10

jade2099

Of course we'll stick with you!  This is a fantastic story and I can't wait to see where you take it!  At first I thought things would be simple - but holy cow!  They've taken quite the twist and turn.  My hat's off to you! :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks! I always try to do something twisty. Hopefully. LOL

10/10

debjunk

Her returning memories are almost more confusing than not knowing!  Her reasons for choosing Ron over Severus at this point seem rather... well... lame.  Especially when she recognizes that Ron will not be half the man that Severus is.I do hope that as he search progresses, there will be better reasons for what she's done.  Of course, maybe I'm being too judgemental.  I'm sure it's difficult to decide what to do when you love two men.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I have been in this boat before (loving two men), and it's very hard to make a decision in that case. Looking back now, I think that putting someone else's happiness above my own is definitely lame, and now it feels I haven't much to look forward to for the rest of my life. Sad, isn't it? Hopefully, though, things will get better. As for Hermione, I do hope that you feel other reasons playing a part in things helped her along in her decision. Otherwise, well, yeah, it is kind of lame. Sometimes the heart fucks with our heads. hahaha

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