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Breaching the Otherworld
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Dreams and a magical book draw Hermione to seek the help of Lucius Malfoy, who has a secret of his own: Severus Snape can be brought back from the Otherworld. Will she help?
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on RL! I really hate Lucius right now! He's a scummy muck. Severus has some major work on his hands to help Hermione.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Lucius is definitely a right git, isn't he? :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Lucius is definitely a right git, isn't he? :)
I loved that huge heaping helping of back story.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Thanks! I often enjoy backstory, too. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Thanks! I often enjoy backstory, too. :)
I agree with that setiment whole heartedly! Nice touch with the nightmares.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
thanks!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
thanks!
Hmm, is Lucius having an attack of conscience? Perhaps he is feeling a little guilty?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Not feeling guilty... not yet anyway (if ever)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Not feeling guilty... not yet anyway (if ever)
Very interesting that Draco searched them out. First you make me think that Lucius is 'good' then now he's 'bad' again. I think I'm gonna go to bed, sleep, then go to work, then come back and reread this chapter with a slightly fresher brain. Right now it is to complex for me, sadly. Since even while causing confusion, it is great.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
LOL Thanks! :) Hope you enjoy and are less confused. ;0
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
LOL Thanks! :) Hope you enjoy and are less confused. ;0
I knew Lucius would help her. It is the sort of assistance I think he would be glad to give. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Uh huh :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Uh huh :)
For the opportunity to learn, I think she would get into an even bigger mess. I keep thinking that Ron isn't as "confused" as he seems to be claiming to be. I don't think Lucius would object to assisting her in obtaining her blood.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
I agree. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
I agree. :)
*dances happily* Yay, smut!! :PWonderful update (and bonus points for the smut)! So now more and more people know what Lucius had done, but they cannot do anything about it. But I suppose they needed for Lucius to get out of his protected house to do something to him... hmm.Say, the anointment he put on his forehead, it doesn't has expiry date, does it? Lol.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
I thought of you after I wrote the smut scene. I said, "Ah, Zyra will be pleased." It was unplanned, but it seemed to work there. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
The annointment doesn't have an expiration date, but that's not to say he can't still suffer at Snape's hands in other ways. :)
Response from zyra (Reviewer)
I printed the chapter out (had been for the last three chapters, I seem to find out about your update minutes before I go out somewhere) and skimmed it through ... :PYou should see the way I squee'd when I saw the smut scene, rather inappropriate I should say ... LOL. I ended up reading the chapter later when I got back. It's not fun reading smut scene in public, haha! Thank you for the scene, anyway. :P
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
I thought of you after I wrote the smut scene. I said, "Ah, Zyra will be pleased." It was unplanned, but it seemed to work there. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
The annointment doesn't have an expiration date, but that's not to say he can't still suffer at Snape's hands in other ways. :)
Response from zyra (Reviewer)
I printed the chapter out (had been for the last three chapters, I seem to find out about your update minutes before I go out somewhere) and skimmed it through ... :PYou should see the way I squee'd when I saw the smut scene, rather inappropriate I should say ... LOL. I ended up reading the chapter later when I got back. It's not fun reading smut scene in public, haha! Thank you for the scene, anyway. :P
Lovely. This chapter is so nice as a whole, I can't pinpoint a favorite part to comment on!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Thank you
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Thank you
Very interesting that a seer saw Severus. I think Ron is probably getting overly friendly with the French girl, and that's why he "had to stay."
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Right on.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Right on.
Nifty! I can't wait to find out what comes in the next chapter. (So I'm glad I can go right to it!)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Glad you are enjoying
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Glad you are enjoying
This is an amazing story, I'm loving it so far! Thank you so much for sharing this story, I can't wait to read more! Ugh, my review-phobia is showing in the fact that I can't form coherrent thoughts so I'ma shut up now and leave off with a Thank you again for the amazing story!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
I'm just happy to know that you are enjoying it! :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
I'm just happy to know that you are enjoying it! :)
when i first started reading it i wasn't sure about this story but by the time i got to the second chapter i was trapped! i had to finish it! you are a gifted writer congrats on a good tale! i eagerly await the coming chapters and hope Lucius gets his in the end!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
I'm glad you continued on with it. Hope you like the next one, which will be up soon.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
I'm glad you continued on with it. Hope you like the next one, which will be up soon.
So Severus is letting Lily fade a bit into the background and is making a real effort with Hermione? He seems to be jealous. He certainly is possessive, but he does not have to love to feel that emotion. I think it was good Hermione was honest about her feelings for Ron, although her constant lack of desire for intimacy in her relationship with him was very telling that something was not right. You can love someone but not be in love with them. It seems the bond helps to bring Severus and Hermione closer, one of which is being able to feel the other's emotions.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
He is a bit jealous, isn't he? Lily is definitely fading for him, and luckily for us, Hermione is settling in. It will take some time, but there will be love. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
He is a bit jealous, isn't he? Lily is definitely fading for him, and luckily for us, Hermione is settling in. It will take some time, but there will be love. :)
Another brilliant chapter that goes just in the direction I like very much. Maybe, now that everything is out in the open, Ron can try to accept the situation and give his marriage a go, too. And I love Lucius' punishment!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Thanks! :) More up soon.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Thanks! :) More up soon.
Lucius have numbered days? That seems like an abbreviated form of justice to me; much better to terrify and torture him intermittently and without warning over and over and over again. jmho. Giving him these nightmares is brilliant, really.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Oh, badly used expression maybe. :) I'll make sure he regrets what he's done. Bwahaha Thanks!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Oh, badly used expression maybe. :) I'll make sure he regrets what he's done. Bwahaha Thanks!
Great fic! Sounds like Hermione and Severus could be having a twisted game of one-up-manship, seeing who could come up with the worst nightmare to give Lucius and making sure each one is worse than the last...
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Hahahah! indeed they are. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Hahahah! indeed they are. :)
that was fantastic! i was reading it on the bus and almost missed my stop! all in all, i think harry and ron - and for that matter, severus - all handled things better than i might have expected, all things considered. i liked the bit of sweetness between hermione and severus. i almost felt sorry for lucius in the midst of that dream - almost, until i remembered everything he had done to deserve it, the bastard. i hope they get draco away from him.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
LOL Whoops! :) Yeah, it's easy to feel sorry for someone, isn't it? He's definitely getting back what he sent out.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
LOL Whoops! :) Yeah, it's easy to feel sorry for someone, isn't it? He's definitely getting back what he sent out.
Hm... it gets twisty. Is it just a dream or is Lucius having a bit of foreshadowing?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Definitely a dream.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Definitely a dream.
I really am enjoying this story! I am glad that Hermione and Serverus are going to make a go of it! Ron did have a point about having more faith in him, but I think anyone would have thought the same, and it seems Ron and Hermione are not suited anyway,( why didn't JKR see this!) so Lucius sort of did them a favor! It would kill Lucious to know he did something right after all, and I think his punishment is spot on! Can'twait for the next installment!Grace
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
i wish JKR would have seen that, too. hahaa! ;) more up soon. Ron will be all right.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
i wish JKR would have seen that, too. hahaa! ;) more up soon. Ron will be all right.
muahaha!!! so Lucius will somehow kill himself, and Severus, Hermione, and the others still keep their vow to not try to send Lucius to prison. maybe Lucius can kill Cissa too, since both parents were doping poor Draco. I'm glad Harry's visit went relatively calmly. thanks for the new chapter!!!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
LOL Good theory. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
LOL Good theory. :)
Wow! Another action packed chapter! I actually feel bad for Hermione and Ron while feeling happy for her and Snape at the same time. Although, I did notice that Severus never admitted anything while Hermione did admit how she felt. I feel really bad for Ron's wife too. And, I think Lucius is getting what he deserves! I hope they get Draco out.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Thanks. :) Good catch on Severus. ~nod~
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Thanks. :) Good catch on Severus. ~nod~
oh i hope so...if anyone can creatively stick it to lucius it's hermione and severus. thanks and i look forward to further developements
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Thanks! more up soon
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
Thanks! more up soon
Run away Lucius! Run away! Great chapter, I loved the way Harry interacted with Severus and Hermione.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
hahaha! :) thanks
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
hahaha! :) thanks
First of all--educing? I just learned a new word. LOL
Very nice chapter. I love how the story gets passed from one to another, along with the vow that stops anybody from doing anything about it.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
LOL Probably not the best word choice. haha But hey, ya know how that goes. :) Glad you liked this. It's such a cheesy type of vow, but luckily, payback is still to be had.
Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)
Nope, it's a good word. I just didn't know it!Now they just need to NOT tell somebody who can figure it out w/o being told.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)
LOL Probably not the best word choice. haha But hey, ya know how that goes. :) Glad you liked this. It's such a cheesy type of vow, but luckily, payback is still to be had.
Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)
Nope, it's a good word. I just didn't know it!Now they just need to NOT tell somebody who can figure it out w/o being told.