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Breaching the Otherworld

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

Breaching the Otherworld

Southern_Witch_69

850 Reviews   |   850 Ratings, 0 Likes, 412 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance Epilogue compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge 142,839 Words 46 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape

Dreams and a magical book draw Hermione to seek the help of Lucius Malfoy, who has a secret of his own: Severus Snape can be brought back from the Otherworld. Will she help?

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Chapters (28)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28


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I adore the world of HP.



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Reviews for Breaching the Otherworld

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10/10

beaweasley2

I'm in this one to the end. I loved the flashbacks and the clues in teh books. Looking forward to more.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks, mate

10/10

Maddie

Damn, now I think Hermione has been an idiot. Basically making a vow on a shooting star. And between Ron and Severus--no contest, Severus wins hands down. Has anyone broken the picture over her head yet? Severus's letter to her was so moving; I was in tears. I believe he does love her and he has been manipulative, but I understand why. I still don't understand why he appeared to be so cool/cold towards her, when he wasn't being passionate, at the beginning of their bonding. It was weird, either hot or cold never warm. Hermione needs to get that man back. To hell with Ron. I can't stand him. He is too weak. I have spoken.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Basically that's what she did, with other things weighing on her mind. More up soon though. And more Snape. :)

9/10

Mazzy

I like the way Hermione's memories are coming back in snippets. It allows the reader to be right there with her in her frustration, trying to patch everything together and figure it all out. I wonder if we'll get to see what's in that trunk soon too. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you. That's what I'd hoped for.

0/10

timestep

Please update soon - the suspense is killing me!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

thanks for reading!

10/10

kittylefish

another great chapter. i want her to snoop in the chest and find something that either a) helps her remember or b) shows how much he loves her. and i want her to take a nap and wake up to find him there. okay, so i'm an incurable romantic. i'm sure you have all sorts of exciting things planned. so, the main thing i want is the next chapter sooooon! :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you! :) The chest will be back. Haha

10/10

mikimoto

It would be so nice if he came home and found her there...

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

It would indeed. :)

10/10

June W

glad that poor Izzy isn't totally abandoned, but where is Severus??  surely he's not going to pull a runner like Ron!  I hope Hermione remembers to send Severus an owl.  thanks for the new chapter - it answers some questions, but still keep me on the edge of my seat wondering how you're going to pull off a happy S&H ending!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

He'll appear soon! :)

10/10

Past

I love your writing, you do such a wonerful job of building the emotions around the charactors! As always looking forward to the next update! I hope Sev and Hermione find happiness soon. I really hope this story has a happy ending, but most of your stories do. Lets be honest, if I was not looking for a happy ending for Severus, I could always go read book 7 again (or pays my bills, which is equally depressing!).

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

LOL Thank you so much for reading and letting me know how you feel. ~grin~

0/10

sunny33

Wonder what is in the trunk.  Would it help her remember?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

We shall see.... :)

10/10

makaem

Did she store her memories someplace? When will Severus come back?  I'm really looking foward to the rest of this story.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

No, she didn't store them, but they'll be back. :)

0/10

Past

hmmm, why wasn't this story on the Holiday wish list. I love this story and hope to see an update soon

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I guess it was forgot about! :) Hahaha By everyone and me. LOL Nah, I just finished the chapter and sent it to my beta last night. I should have it up by this evening or tomorrow. Thank you very much.

0/10

firefairy2006

I absolutely love this story and will continue to read it as long as you keep posting :)

10/10

mikimoto

It's about time the rose-colored glasses came off.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I agree.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I agree.

0/10

Delayed Poet

*grin* I absolutely adored this chapter. It was very clever of you to push the plot forward by using news article snippits.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you! :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you! :)

10/10

FlittterKat

This is a great story. Too bad for Malfoy. Paybacks are something else. I'm glad Hermione and Severus are starting to work things out. Look forward to the rest of the story. Great job!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks. Hope you like what's next

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks. Hope you like what's next

0/10

AmyLouise

I lost track of this story for a while, but I'm glad I've found it again.  Looks as if Severus is already getting his own back on Lucius;I'm sure that dream didn't happen by chance. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I'm glad you found it again. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I'm glad you found it again. :)

0/10

klschmidt

I'm taking the cop-out.  Ditto what I said in chapter 14.  No seriously, I am still loving this story and can't wait to see how it plays out in the long run.  :-D

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

LOL Thanks! :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

LOL Thanks! :)

0/10

klschmidt

I had totally missed that this had been updated - glad you pointed out two chappies.  Lovin' it.  Lucius deserves everything he gets.  Also glad that Harry is keeping an open mind - and we all know that Ron's a git.  :-)  (Am I reviewing both chapters here?  I read this yesterday afternoon and now everything is a blur....

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I can't believe I forgot to pimp the story. Ah well. I'm glad you're enjoying. :) Whoot

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I can't believe I forgot to pimp the story. Ah well. I'm glad you're enjoying. :) Whoot

10/10

Shadow

Yay, I am so glad Severus and Hermione were able to open up to each other like that. It seems they are well on the road to a good and healthy relationship.An at last Lucius is getting his just desserts!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Definitely on the road to the right place. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Definitely on the road to the right place. :)

0/10

elsolel

I LIKE the idea of Lucius having numbered days.  Probably 'cause he's a lying scum. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Definitely scum. :( Blah

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Definitely scum. :( Blah

0/10

elsolel

Any dream induced panic for Lucius is well deserved.  ha!  I wonder what's in the box?  Will Harry figure out how to get to the Prince house?  All these and more. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Teehee... :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Teehee... :)

0/10

elsolel

So exciting!  So many people doing unexpected things. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

~nod~

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

~nod~

0/10

elsolel

So much neat stuff.  I just have to read on!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks! :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks! :)

10/10

ladyluv

Well - they are giving it a go - the feelings though are not quite there for a long and happy marriage. Ron and Harry both know what happened. Lucius is suffering from what Severus did to him - I cannot wait to see what happens next.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I'm working on the next now. Shouldn't be too long. :) Thank you!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I'm working on the next now. Shouldn't be too long. :) Thank you!

0/10

elsolel

So he did marry the French woman.  I think Harry is overreacting, though.  Oh, that's right!  They don't know that Hermione is married to Snape, do they?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Nope, not yet!~ :) Soon. hehe

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Nope, not yet!~ :) Soon. hehe

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