Hero!Snape

saves the night! for a little bit at least

ok. i have no idea how the font got like that.

anyways, hero might be pressing it, but im glad snape stepped in a bit. 

I like the new chapter,but I wish I knew what Severus is thinkinga little bit more.

Ewwwwwwwwwwwww.Sorry.  I have no other words.  You continue to transfix and disgust me all at the same time.

I've never written a review before but I have to say I am so obsessed with this story that I just have to tell you how great it is (in a horrifying, sickening, skin crawling way). I'm constantly checking back for updates. You have created Hermione's situation so well that it's frightening. A question though: what about her parents? if she is still unsure what has happened to them wouldn't she be focused on them also? Great writing.

I love this,I can't wait for more.This story is so different than the usual SS/HG stories,it has a nice twist to how it propaply really would be for Hermione if she was held captive by Snape,not all just the love stories thats out there.Can't wait for more.

I.m glad Hermiones all right,yhe end of the last chapter was kind of scary.Keep up the good work!

Poor Hermione!
that was really really gross. I can only imagine how horrible it would be copulating with such a person who is so much like a rat!
I honestly think I might throw up.
Of course other then that I do enjoy this story and the calculated coldness in your Snape. Update soon!
-KarlaMarie

poor hermione, I am off to lose my lunch now. I love the story and really can't wait for snapes reaction to this.

Omg, having sex with wormtail..*shudder*. Another great chapter, love the fast updates :)

*gags* *pokes my eyes out* *gags again* and i already felt nauseas before reading this...

Severus needs to save her from "Peter" god.. i cant call him that, thats my brother's name. Wormtail. *shudder* oh god...

however, i dont want this to be a flame, so now, i praise it: Other than the whole disgusting ugh icky *gag once more* wormtail sex, god can you even call it that?!, i am enjoying this story. I would give anything *flashes a few galleons and chocolate frogs your way* to sneak some SS/HG in there. i know its not happening, i know, i know. *sigh* still,*shudders* that whole....just...ugh...

anyways, the plot itself is very good, and the writing is excellent. I just hope Sev doesnt leave those two alone anymore. And even through this, i will still follow the story, just cuz its so well done. Altho you prolly dont want me to anymore after this comment. sorry. lol. just had to get it off my chest. lol. *shuddergag*

<3 

Poor poor Hermione.  Have I told you lately that I love your story, because if I haven't, I just want you to know that I love it.  :)

Yikes, yikes, yikes!  I think she did the right thing.  Even the sniffling beforehand--it seems like Peter is developing whatever passes for fondness in his world, and he probably thinks himself quite the romantic hero for allowing her to cry out all her frustrations with Snape onto his shoulder.  Nonetheless, what a pig.

Yea, a new chapter! And Ew, rat sex! I'm very anxious to see Snape's involvement in this and if he actually cares that Wormtail is attempting to "woo" her.

AHHHHHHH! OMG that was so gross!!!! Lol, I'm not insulting your writing, though. Actually, I'm complimenting it for being so realistic. Wow, Peter is making me so disgusted right now. You are really good at making Hermione's feelings believable. Great (and terrible) chapter!!! :)

Ewww! That'll be good for a few nightmares. Even though she had been thinking about using her body to get to Peter anyhow, it's a whole different story to go through with it. Wondering what Hermione thinks and feels about herself now? Frankly, I don't know how I feel about this.

ICK! I wonder what happens when Snape finds out (and he will.) Will she need a contraceptive?

God.  *shudders*  That was horrible.

Poor, poor Hermione.  I'm squicked for sure!  

I need to go read something else to get that out of my head now.  Blech.

(All that said, very well done on the chapter though.  It may have been horrible, but it was well written, and portrayed exactly what you wanted it to I think, and I am looking forward to the next update.)

*hugs* 

Ick...ick...ICK.  Poor Hermione -- I hope for her sake that she can figure out a way to escape soon.

I actually got the notice another site first I said it deserved a 10 +.  Keep me posted!                           ~Carla~

Rolls eyes at Pettigrew!

Utterly disgusting, and that's meant as a compliment. This is  gritty and really hard to read in places, which is exactly right for stories of survival (or at least the attempt to survive, I'm trying not to get my hopes up too much here). And because Hermione's will to survive is so strong the story remains completely readable, squick and all.

loved this story thanks

Ok, this chapter scared me! I'm not sure about this supense thing....But I love it!!!

Really creepy head games. Not knowing the reasoning behind Snape's actions (OK, the potion, anyway) ratchets up the tension. At least Hermione hasn't completely gone crackers yet, and I hope her resourcefulness gets a chance to develop futher!

Great story.  It really keeps you guessing.  I really liked the evil part of the hand.  Wormtail is so creepy.