Damn you and your little bitty chapters!!! LOL! I'm really enjoying this and can't wait to find out where it goes.

Oh!! Oh!!! Yeaaaaahhh.... "Hhhmmm whose bed indeed." Great!!

Wormtail is so gross.  You seem to have captured his...slimey-ness.  Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

I hope Hermione isn't going to get herself into more trouble.  Great update.

Wonderful, yet again.My only complaint is that you don't update fast enough!!! :)

I'm proud of Hermione in here. Her cunning is back, and hopefully, Wormtail will be too stupid to notice she's playing him. However, Snape seems to see through her game. Well, it's something he'd probably do himself, were he in her position, but what will he do about it? I'm glad you don't wait too much between updates. To do otherwise would be uncharitable for my poor nerves (too much of Pride and Prejudice lately.)

I wonder what Snape would do to Wormtail if he got a little too fresh with Hermione? Would he see if she could extract herself? Looking forward for updates.

My favorite line: “I'm guessing the Dark Lord didn't choose you as the Secret-Keeper.”  Apparently Wormtail mistook her sarcasm for teasing.  He will always give me the heebeegeebies for what he did in GoF.  I think she is playing a dangerous game even if Snape thinks she is being clever.

*glares at the greasy git*Here's an idea:  a sandwich, you big jerk...Personally I hope Herms pulls a "Survivor" move and has Rat Kabobs later.  But that's just me.  Actually, Snape probably hopes so too.

i love the lil snape thoughts at the end. i think ive said this, but im saying it again. i love the quick updates too. <3

Oh me next or even better me instead! How bout with very explict examples. ;-} I know I'm very naughty. Hopefully someone will give me a detention! By the way this story rocks!

I love the tension. I also like the contrast between Snape and Wormtail (he's so gross:) ) Update PLEASE!!!

ooooooh, you mean, mean, meanie... *stomps foot and waggles accusing finger at the greasy git*If you'd bother to buy some decent ingredients, Mr. Potions Master Who Ought To Understand That Concept Totally, you might even end up enjoying life for a change.*sigh*  How I love Prick!Snape.  I just can't seem to write him--he always turns into Softie!Snape no matter what.Faithfully awaiting the next chapter.

“Your bed will be in my room.” He still didn't say if it was an individual bed or his own. With that stunt about food, he's clearly pushing her to her breaking point.  You're right, being a hostage sucks, especially when your "guardian" is so good at psychological torture. This story is like a horror movie: you know some very indelicate things will happen, yet you watch (or read in this case). Always so dreadful, and dreadfully well written.

poor hermione... well, at least she knows that they're keeping her alive, so she'll get food sometime.

I really hate this. In a good way, I hasten to add. It makes me uncomfortable and worry about Hermione and nibble at my fingers with the sheer horror of what's happening to her.

And, mostly, people who touch on this theme don't manage that because they don't get across the horror/terror/pain of the victim.

 So, yeah, hate it.  ~wriggles uncomfortably~

Snape is unfair: what is she supposed to think? It's good to know, though, tha the still has a modicum of honour with him. And I like how she adapts her phrasing not to ask direct questions.

I really like this story and cant wait to read what happens next! Just wish the chapters werent so short! :(

Why you... you were the one that told her she would have to pick whose bed to share!  What do you expect her to thinK!Ooooooh, you bad old man.

Where's the rest?  This resembles chinese water torture.  Then again chinese water torture succeeds by regularity.  So, short really frequent updates may be a winner.   You left me suspicious that this story is harboring kinky!Snape.  Of course, if he did it really well and titillated her natural curiousity, he might actually teach her to like it. (But why would he want to?)  On the other hand, he may intend to teach her something else entirely.   I'm unsure what he's about at this point, I've probably got it all wrong again.  But a few more updates might correct my perceptions.  (You caught that broad hint, right?)

i liked snape's lil line at the end...

just thot id share something chilling on that effect: i saw a guy with a shirt that said: "dead girls never say no". FREAKY! 

Aaaaagh!!! What's with the short chapters???

I just get started and have to come to a screeching [literally] halt 2 minutes later.

This is a good story, but there's no flow, can't get your teeth into it. It starts and in a blink it's gone. It's not listed as a 'drabble', so what? I've read your stories before and the ones I read weren't short and choppy like this. 

I don't know why other's are not commenting, but I'm left so flat by such short chapters, that I couldn't come up with much to say either. 

Whoa, what a terrible situation.  Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Snape has really presented Hermione with Hobson's choice regarding sleeping arrangements.  I wonder if she'll really think on it all day (sounds like mental cruelty) or banish the thought and make a quick decision later.  Ugh! The mere thought of Wormtail makes my skin crawl.  But this Snape has no allure either. 

This is a very intriquing story.  It's cleverly written, and has just the right amount of tension to make me want to check often for updates.  I am very curious to see where this goes.  Nicely done!