Part II, chapter 6
Chapter 19 of 28
averygoodunThe need to survive is ingrained within the human psyche, but where does self-preservation end and self-destruction begin? Hermione is captured by Death Eaters and is held hostage by Snape and Pettigrew, but she comes up with a plan to escape. Not a romance.
ReviewedAN: Thank you, Southern!
“Granger, wake up!”
She sat up, immediately awake and aware of the man standing above her. Something was different about him, and it took her a moment to realize that he wasn't wearing a shirt, although one was in his hand. It took her another moment to realize that the light in the room was from the moon. That explained why everything seemed distorted and off.
It took her yet another moment to realize that she'd had another of those disturbing dreams featuring Snape, featuring him in a way she was not at all comfortable with.
“Get up, Granger. The Dark Lord is waiting.”
Hermione froze in the middle of her attempt to get off the bed.
He couldn't be taking her to Voldemort. Voldemort would find out about the plan and then...
“Get up now!” Snape barked, prompting her back into action. She quickly got up and put on her shoes – there was nothing else for her to put on – and watched Snape.
He looked tense. His mouth was pinched, and that line between his eyebrows was deeper than she remembered, even accounting for the eerie shadows. She wondered what this was about.
She saw him wince before he stalked over to her, grabbed her arm in a merciless grip and practically dragged her to the door. He led her down the hallway to Wormtail's room and pounded on the door.
Wormtail was obviously not quick enough in answering because Snape took out his wand and blasted the door open. He shoved Hermione ahead of him so hard that she lost her balance as she tried to stagger to the bed and fell hard onto her knees.
By this time, Wormtail was alert to the invasion.
“What's going on, Severus?” he asked with a nervous twinge in his voice. Hermione could see him glancing at her every few seconds as she slowly picked herself off the floor.
“He's in a bad mood tonight.” He winced again and snapped, “Don't let her out of your sight," before donning his Death Eater robes and disappearing.
Hermione heard Wormtail mutter, “Better you than me,” as he stared at the empty hallway for a moment and absently scratched his arm. He then turned to her and smiled. She smiled back, genuinely relieved that Snape had not been planning to take her with him. However, it did remind her that she'd been their prisoner for almost a month, and she needed to move the plan forward. Fast.
Wormtail had been screwing her every opportunity he got, which seemed to be happening more and more often lately. Snape had been called away very frequently the last few days. It made her antsy, wondering what was so urgent.
It also, supposedly, gave her more time to enact her plan, but it didn't seem to be advancing. Although her contact with Wormtail had increased, it hadn't noticeably affected his regard for her. It seemed that she was just his own personal whore and bitching post as far as he was concerned. That was not what she wanted.
“So, how long do you think he'll be?” she asked, lacing her words with promise.
His smile turned into a smirk. “Oh, if it's a night-time summons, it's usually a few hours at the very least.”
“Good,” she said, as she slipped off her shoes and started unbuttoning the robe. “Because I've been thinking of you.”
For a moment he looked surprised, but then his smirk was back in place.
“Have you now?” he asked, shedding his nightshirt as quickly as possible.
“Yes,” Hermione whispered, getting onto the bed and crawling toward him. “You seem to be on my mind an awful lot lately.” She hoped her attempt at a husky voice was working. She thought it might be, judging by the sheen developing on Wormtail's brow.
“Funny, that. You've been on my mind as well.”
Hermione just smiled and pushed him down onto his back. He looked up at her, surprise definitely outweighing every other emotion. She'd always been passive before. But passive wasn't getting her anywhere.
“Yes, that is funny, isn't it?” she asked and lowered herself onto him, making him gasp.
“Oh, God, Hermione. You feel so good!” he moaned, and she could tell he was on the verge of coming already. That would not do. She had to distract him.
“I've been wondering, Peter,” she said while grabbing a few of his chest hairs and pulling just hard enough to distract him, “why you saved me.”
She had been wondering that. Had it been lust, pure and simple? Was he just a sad, pathetic man who perved after a girl young enough to be his daughter? Or was there more to it?
Wormtail was panting, trying to control himself, but she could feel the tremble of his hips.
“You were just...” he said, his voice breathy with excitement. “Just so pretty and innocent. I remembered you from... from before...” The shiver faded to nothing. It seemed a nerve had been struck there.
“And that was all?” she asked, experimentally moving her hips. He seemed to be lost in memories, though, and wasn't showing any signs of becoming overexcited. She started moving a little more earnestly, wondering if she might be able to use him for her pleasure this time. It was getting very frustrating as her dreams became raunchier, but his performance stayed woefully poor.
“Yes. Well... no, not really,” he said. He looked up at her so earnestly that she stopped moving, realizing this might be a pivotal moment.
“You reminded me of my time at the Burrow, and not just because I remember you from there. You radiate kindness, Hermione. You remind me an awful lot of Molly. She took such good care of everyone. She loved them all so much, and she took care to make their small, pitiful home... home. I was a part of that home, even if I was a rat at the time, but I was included in it, and it reminded me of my... I... Well, you remind me of that.”
A lot of snide comments about the appropriateness of screwing her if that was the case popped into her head, but she refrained from saying them. Instead, she leaned down and gave him a gentle kiss.
“Thank you,” she said, smiling softly at him.
He looked at her intently for a few moments before wrapping his arms around her and kissing her back just as gently. When the kisses started becoming too invasive, she started moving again, giving her an excuse to break away.
She continued to move over him until he came, crying out her name for the first time. He then drew her into his arms, hugging her fiercely for a few asphyxiating moments, before letting her slide over to his side, but no further.
She nearly gagged on his scent, but remained where she was, knowing that she was back on the path out.
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God, she's amazing. She didn't laugh at me; she just... just loved me – I could feel it.
Oh, Merlin, what is she doing to me?
End Part II
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307 Reviews | 7.44/10 Average
this is such a brave and daring story! i had read it before but i couldn't remember where it was posted so i searched through various sites and finally got lucky. this time i will add it to favourites without delay. thanks again for that jewell!
This was GRIPPING.
Wow! I am utterly and deeply moved. It took me quite a while to figure out what you were aiming at and that was a pleasant surprise in itself. There are not many stories out, where the end is not obvious from the beginning.I also liked to have Wormtail described as a human being and actually getting more than a few crucios out of his actions.Thank you for the wonderful story!
Holy mother of gods. That was just the best story I have read in a long time. I have stayed up till 2am reading this because I could NOT put it down... Your torture of her. The food. The sadistic/masochist tones... my god. Just brilliant. BRILLIANT.I have never read a story with wormtail in this character. I was almost sympathitic toward him.And when Snape finally had her! Why was that sOOOO hot to me? Shell
Wow. Brilliant I would rate this much more than 5...
Like a punch in the guts. Wow. I am breathless, horrified, amazed, marveled, disgusted, touched, numb, exhilarated. Thank you for believing in yourself and sharing your story with us!
How hard for Hermione, to feel that she is using Wormtail. You really depicted that so well. Sigh.
*melted to a puddle on the floor"*GASP!*Oh, Severus, you naughty boy!
Catching up with the story after a loooooong time (RL sucks!). Nice "intermission' chapter!
I don't know if I like thinking of Hermione being genuinely upset about Wormtail or Snape's letter acting like he tried to save Wormtail for her.... I jsut don't know what to think of it all... but regardless, the writing was good :)
It really is quite squicky to think of Peter and Hermione. I keep reminding myself that it is to ensure her escape but she seems to actually have concern for Peter at this point. Not caring but concern. And the fact that Snape doesn't seem to care is icky as well. Peter is so gross I'm surprised Snape didn't rip her off of him jsut out of disgust LOL
ugh... wormtail is soooo creepy. And knowing that HErmione is doing him often is just sickening. I hope she either gains what she's after or comes to her senses and ... I don't even know... jsut stops sleeping with Wormtail LOL
I was recced this... I like dark fics.. but that's a brutal way to start out. Well written and I can't say I'm looking forward to what's to come but I'm... interested??
I ended up reading this whole story in one piece, I just couldn't stop reading! :P I just love the way you writes Snape, he is completely believable in this story and so is the other characters. I think you should be very proud of this story, it was a joy reading it (except from the icky wormtail/hermione parts)!
Wow. I thought I wouldn't be able to go past the squicky parts, but... you got me reading for one hour non-stop. Excellent writing.
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I'm wondering if she's pregnant . . .
Wonderful story. I read it in about two hours. Just gobbled it up, really. I especially loved your portrayal of Pettigrew, and the way you ended the whole piece.
Long story short: this is amazing. Short story long: anything by Dickens.
Response from averygoodun (Author of Traitor)
Thank you!
This was a wonderful story - but I might be just dim here when I ask you this question, but my Snape-fangirl-love wants to know who sent the letter? Did Snape truly defect from the Order, or was he happy that she escaped, wanting her to get away all along? Sorry if my Snape-love kept me blinded from any obvious hints you might have left in the story...
Response from averygoodun (Author of Traitor)
Thank you. Snape sent the letter. For answers to the rest, I suggest you read "Closure." It's a little less vague. ;-)
It was the only way what? He wanted her to use Wormtail to escape?
Response from averygoodun (Author of Traitor)
That is the question. What was the only way? How? Why? And, most of all, who?
Response from KarenDetroit (Reviewer)
ARRRGGG!Don't you repect the Geneva Convetions on Torture????
Response from averygoodun (Author of Traitor)
*giggle* Is there such a thing in fiction?
That said, there will be a companion piece called, very appropriately, "Closure" coming up pretty soon. A lot of questions will be answered in there (though it's still vague-ish on that one).
Yowza. The sex with Peter/Wormtail was just so icky. And you got the ick factor just right - along with the reality that it wasn't, of all the things Hermione had to endure, really so awful in the grand scheme of things. And then when Snape watched -well, that was wrong and right and actually quite hot. And through it all you never lost the complexity of the emotions involved, the grey-ness of all the protagonists. Thanks so much for a thought-provoking and entertaining read.
Response from averygoodun (Author of Traitor)
Thank you!!! I... Thank you.
Very well written story the whole way through. I really enjoyed it and was thankfull for the quick updates. The way you ended it was very exciting. Well done job all the way around.
Response from averygoodun (Author of Traitor)
Thank you!
Hi Avery. Now that I have completed Shades (at least on SH and FF), I finally got the courage to read this story from start to finish. Actually, I started reading when you first began posting chapters, but I only got to chapter 5 before I stopped. To be honest, I found it extremely difficult reading. The words painful and profoundly distrubing come to mind. But I suppose that was the effect you were looking for. Don't get me wrong--your writing itself is excellent. Very descriptive, good characterization and not too wordy (unlike me...). I also applaud your emphasis on a strong theme as I think too many fanfiction writers just want to write something fluffy that will be 'popular'. It takes courage to do something like this. What I found most amazing is that my story could inspire such a piece. It is ironic that your Hermione essentilly makes the polar opposite choice from mine. She compromises nearly all her morals and principles in order to survive, making her a traitor not to Harry or the Light, but to herself. It was a weighty piece of work. Good job.Cheers and best wishes,
Response from averygoodun (Author of Traitor)
Response from averygoodun (Author of Traitor)
Hey. Well, thank you for reading it! You're right, I was attempting to write something very painful and disturbing. I've read Stockholm Syndrome stories that really, really romanticize the situation and don't take into account that it is a disorder; the victim is ILL, and it is not a healthy, romantic situation.
What I wanted to explore as much as that, though, is that survival really can outweigh morals when it comes right down to it, and Hermione has not proven herself to be as strong as Harry is under pressure. Hermione will have a hard time of it because she knows she did betray herself, even if the trip to the betrayal was almost invisible.
Thank you both for the inspiration (amazing story, btw!), and for your thoughts!