Part II, chapter 5
Chapter 18 of 28
averygoodunThe need to survive is ingrained within the human psyche, but where does self-preservation end and self-destruction begin? Hermione is captured by Death Eaters and is held hostage by Snape and Pettigrew, but she comes up with a plan to escape. Not a romance.
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“Granger, it's bedtime.”
Hermione looked over at Snape warily before risking a quick glance at the clock on the mantle. It was an hour before he usually went to bed. Her concern must have shown on her face, as he added, “Now come!” rather forcefully.
Meekly, she got up and followed him to the stairs, resolutely not looking over at Wormtail. She suspected he would behave in some suspicious manner, so she didn't want to compound it with her own. Snape was volatile enough without provocation.
“Awfully early for bed, isn't it, Severus?” Wormtail called out just before Snape took the first step up.
Snape paused and looked over at Wormtail, his expression completely shuttered. “Perhaps,” was all he said before motioning for Hermione to precede him up the stairs. Silently, she complied, still not risking a glance at Wormtail.
She entered the bedroom and heard Snape quietly shut the door. She turned to find him staring at her thoughtfully. After a moment, he shifted into his normal domineering pose.
“Strip.”
Swallowing the lump of fear that was rising, she did as he ordered. When the robe had fallen to the floor, she straightened her shoulders and looked at him resolutely. She was expecting the same expressionless mask he always wore when he looked at her nude form, but was surprised to find his mouth tightening in anger. It was gone quickly, but it had been there. She wondered what he was angry about.
She had thoroughly washed herself before Snape had come back, so there wasn't any hint of her copulation with Wormtail. She'd even wiped down the inside of the robe, just in case Snape's sense of smell corresponded with his nose size.
He hadn't made any indication that he knew what they'd done, but that was the only thing she could think of that might make him angry.
She was startled out of her thoughts when Snape took three large strides, coming up just short of touching her. He towered over her for a moment, peering intently into her eyes. She'd been no match for Voldemort, but she thought her Occlumency was good enough to keep Snape out, so she looked back nervously.
His mouth tightened just slightly as he glared at her, but then he stepped back and gazed at her indifferently.
“Where did you get the new bruises on your shoulders and left hip?”
Hermione frowned and looked down at her hip. Sure enough, there were six nasty bruises developing right where Wormtail had grabbed her with his silver hand. She supposed her shoulder bruises were from the massage, or the floor.
She wasn't sure what to do. Snape had viciously hexed her the last time she'd defended Wormtail, but it wasn't obviously a handprint at this point. Still, it would probably develop into a handprint by the next morning if he didn't offer her some bruise-healing paste or another dose of healing potion.
She looked down and chewed her lip. “Wormtail grabbed me, sir.”
“He's been molesting you?”
She continued to nibble her lip and look at her bare toes, still not sure how to best answer him. Obviously not happy with her demeanor, he grabbed her chin and jerked her face up to look at him. “Answer me.” His voice was as hard as his grip.
“No, sir.”
He raised his eyebrow in obvious skepticism. “Really? It's been blatantly obvious since he got you placed here that he's been lusting after you,” he gave her body another dismissive glance, “for whatever reason. He's an opportunistic little rat. I would have thought he would take every opportunity given to him to avail himself of you.”
She bit her lip nervously and shook her head in denial.
“I know you're lying, Granger. Tell me now what the rat is up to, and I won't practice my new hexes on you tonight.”
What Wormtail was up to? She did some very quick thinking.
“He thinks that you are... that you and I are... He believes you feel possessive about me, sir. I think he's trying to ingratiate himself to me in hopes that it will annoy you, although I don't follow his reasoning, and his logic is based upon a premise that is questionable at be--”
He held up a hand to cut her off. She was surprised to see a speculative look on his face instead of anger. He stared at her for a long moment.
“What have you told him?”
“I... not much of anything, sir.”
His lips thinned at that. “What have you told him?”
“I...” She didn't know what he wanted. He sighed in impatience. “I haven't really had much of a chance to talk to him, sir. If there's conversation, he's the one contributing the most. I really haven't said much at all.”
Snape raised his eyebrow again, but it was more an expression of amusement than disbelief. He then crossed his arms and raised a finger to tap on his lips. After a moment, he lowered his arms and took one step back from her.
“Granger, who do you think wields the power in this house?”
“Er, you do, sir,” she answered tentatively, not sure where he was going.
“Correct. Have you also determined that your health or lack thereof is at my discretion?”
She nodded her head, uttering a very faint, “Yes, sir.”
“Good.” He paused, then smirked. “I trust you to keep that in mind when you interact with Wormtail.”
She furrowed her brow unsure of what he meant, but said, “Yes, sir.”
“Now use the toilet and get to bed.”
As she relieved herself, she smiled. Not only had he not hexed or molested her, but for the first time since she'd been taken hostage, he wasn't standing there watching her pee. Relief and gratitude overwhelmed her, and she thought that maybe Snape wasn't so bad after all.
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What is Snape doing to her? Does he suspect? He didn't seem suspicious at all, but what if he does suspect? Is he making her talk?
It doesn't matter if he finds out, though. Yes, he may be upset, but the point of her being held hostage is to torture Harry, and I doubt Harry would like it if he knew I was fucking her.
Yes, the Master will be on my side. I don't need to worry.
But what is he doing to her?
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this is such a brave and daring story! i had read it before but i couldn't remember where it was posted so i searched through various sites and finally got lucky. this time i will add it to favourites without delay. thanks again for that jewell!
This was GRIPPING.
Wow! I am utterly and deeply moved. It took me quite a while to figure out what you were aiming at and that was a pleasant surprise in itself. There are not many stories out, where the end is not obvious from the beginning.I also liked to have Wormtail described as a human being and actually getting more than a few crucios out of his actions.Thank you for the wonderful story!
Holy mother of gods. That was just the best story I have read in a long time. I have stayed up till 2am reading this because I could NOT put it down... Your torture of her. The food. The sadistic/masochist tones... my god. Just brilliant. BRILLIANT.I have never read a story with wormtail in this character. I was almost sympathitic toward him.And when Snape finally had her! Why was that sOOOO hot to me? Shell
Wow. Brilliant I would rate this much more than 5...
Like a punch in the guts. Wow. I am breathless, horrified, amazed, marveled, disgusted, touched, numb, exhilarated. Thank you for believing in yourself and sharing your story with us!
How hard for Hermione, to feel that she is using Wormtail. You really depicted that so well. Sigh.
*melted to a puddle on the floor"*GASP!*Oh, Severus, you naughty boy!
Catching up with the story after a loooooong time (RL sucks!). Nice "intermission' chapter!
I don't know if I like thinking of Hermione being genuinely upset about Wormtail or Snape's letter acting like he tried to save Wormtail for her.... I jsut don't know what to think of it all... but regardless, the writing was good :)
It really is quite squicky to think of Peter and Hermione. I keep reminding myself that it is to ensure her escape but she seems to actually have concern for Peter at this point. Not caring but concern. And the fact that Snape doesn't seem to care is icky as well. Peter is so gross I'm surprised Snape didn't rip her off of him jsut out of disgust LOL
ugh... wormtail is soooo creepy. And knowing that HErmione is doing him often is just sickening. I hope she either gains what she's after or comes to her senses and ... I don't even know... jsut stops sleeping with Wormtail LOL
I was recced this... I like dark fics.. but that's a brutal way to start out. Well written and I can't say I'm looking forward to what's to come but I'm... interested??
I ended up reading this whole story in one piece, I just couldn't stop reading! :P I just love the way you writes Snape, he is completely believable in this story and so is the other characters. I think you should be very proud of this story, it was a joy reading it (except from the icky wormtail/hermione parts)!
Wow. I thought I wouldn't be able to go past the squicky parts, but... you got me reading for one hour non-stop. Excellent writing.
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I'm wondering if she's pregnant . . .
Wonderful story. I read it in about two hours. Just gobbled it up, really. I especially loved your portrayal of Pettigrew, and the way you ended the whole piece.
Long story short: this is amazing. Short story long: anything by Dickens.
Response from averygoodun (Author of Traitor)
Thank you!
This was a wonderful story - but I might be just dim here when I ask you this question, but my Snape-fangirl-love wants to know who sent the letter? Did Snape truly defect from the Order, or was he happy that she escaped, wanting her to get away all along? Sorry if my Snape-love kept me blinded from any obvious hints you might have left in the story...
Response from averygoodun (Author of Traitor)
Thank you. Snape sent the letter. For answers to the rest, I suggest you read "Closure." It's a little less vague. ;-)
It was the only way what? He wanted her to use Wormtail to escape?
Response from averygoodun (Author of Traitor)
That is the question. What was the only way? How? Why? And, most of all, who?
Response from KarenDetroit (Reviewer)
ARRRGGG!Don't you repect the Geneva Convetions on Torture????
Response from averygoodun (Author of Traitor)
*giggle* Is there such a thing in fiction?
That said, there will be a companion piece called, very appropriately, "Closure" coming up pretty soon. A lot of questions will be answered in there (though it's still vague-ish on that one).
Yowza. The sex with Peter/Wormtail was just so icky. And you got the ick factor just right - along with the reality that it wasn't, of all the things Hermione had to endure, really so awful in the grand scheme of things. And then when Snape watched -well, that was wrong and right and actually quite hot. And through it all you never lost the complexity of the emotions involved, the grey-ness of all the protagonists. Thanks so much for a thought-provoking and entertaining read.
Response from averygoodun (Author of Traitor)
Thank you!!! I... Thank you.
Very well written story the whole way through. I really enjoyed it and was thankfull for the quick updates. The way you ended it was very exciting. Well done job all the way around.
Response from averygoodun (Author of Traitor)
Thank you!
Hi Avery. Now that I have completed Shades (at least on SH and FF), I finally got the courage to read this story from start to finish. Actually, I started reading when you first began posting chapters, but I only got to chapter 5 before I stopped. To be honest, I found it extremely difficult reading. The words painful and profoundly distrubing come to mind. But I suppose that was the effect you were looking for. Don't get me wrong--your writing itself is excellent. Very descriptive, good characterization and not too wordy (unlike me...). I also applaud your emphasis on a strong theme as I think too many fanfiction writers just want to write something fluffy that will be 'popular'. It takes courage to do something like this. What I found most amazing is that my story could inspire such a piece. It is ironic that your Hermione essentilly makes the polar opposite choice from mine. She compromises nearly all her morals and principles in order to survive, making her a traitor not to Harry or the Light, but to herself. It was a weighty piece of work. Good job.Cheers and best wishes,
Response from averygoodun (Author of Traitor)
Response from averygoodun (Author of Traitor)
Hey. Well, thank you for reading it! You're right, I was attempting to write something very painful and disturbing. I've read Stockholm Syndrome stories that really, really romanticize the situation and don't take into account that it is a disorder; the victim is ILL, and it is not a healthy, romantic situation.
What I wanted to explore as much as that, though, is that survival really can outweigh morals when it comes right down to it, and Hermione has not proven herself to be as strong as Harry is under pressure. Hermione will have a hard time of it because she knows she did betray herself, even if the trip to the betrayal was almost invisible.
Thank you both for the inspiration (amazing story, btw!), and for your thoughts!