As I first started reading this I thought that I'd have to stop because of certain *ahem* parts, but you managed to write it so well from Hermione's POV that I continued till the very end.I also liked the small sections of introspection from Snape and Wormtail, they added that little extra.It's just what I was looking for to feed the not-so-light side of me very nicely. Thanks.~lux~

Aw, that's it? I loved your Snape, but that ending was so sad. Great story.

Excellent!

Fantastic job. I?d written a review for you before but it seems to have gone away...it was all about Snape being the anti-Dumbledore...or something like that. I just wanted to leave a review for the records. You have written a story that takes three characters who seem so black and white, and managed to evolve them into complicated shades of gray. Thank you so very much.

I really liked this story.  Your writing is concise and still carries a punch.  Wonderful.

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Go Hermione! I'm so glad she learned how to intimidate him. Congrats on part one too.

I see Hermione is finally starting to use her head in this situation.  I hope it doesn't backfire on her. 

I'm worried about Snape and how he is going to react when he awakens. 

You really do an amazing job with the characters.  They are each distinct from each other, and exactly in the right ways.  I've always been extremely impressed with your ability to write Snape, and I see you are doing an equally good job with Wormtail as well.  

I look forward to the next update, although I'm a little scared about what's going to be in it!

Ew... I wonder if he thinks she is one of his "belongings"?

Yeaaa a longer chapter! I'm so enjoying this and love that we get a new update every other day or so! (and if you wanna know looonnng chapters, you should see what I write and what poor Southern Witch has to wade through, LOL!) Can't wait for more from you!

EEEEWWWWWW!

Well now I feel bad for my review of the last chapter complaining about the length, how exciting it was to come back and find a new chapter. Can't wait for more.

Wow two chapters in one day.  I feel so much better.  I see Hermione is starting to take control, of course she's only warming up with Pettigrue.  As usual you chapters entrance me.  Keep up the great work!                                        ~Carla~

Interesting shift of perspective, though the part about Snape being a light sleeper have me worried.

Hmmmmm.  Now we get to see a bit of Peter's true colors.  I hope he's as fun to hate as Snape, but somehow I don't think so.  I like the way you've portrayed him--very different from Snape, and it seems really accurate.  He lacks the subtlety and finesse that Snape drips with.  But that untamed bluntness (Gryffindorishness?) makes him even more scary--a loose cannon if I ever saw one.  Yikes, yikes, yikes.

*rubs hands gleefully*  I hope that nice dollop of insight gives you some serious heartburn, you big fink! 

Very well done!  So, will we see part 2 start tomorrow?

Yay for quick updates.  Another great chapter.  Goodbye part one, hello part two.

Keep the chapters coming.  I think the suspense is almost as bad as the tension you create with every new installment.

Ok, now THAT was a short chapter!

Well, Hermione had a lapse in judgement.  Hmm, I wonder what will happen when when she comes to. 

AAAAHHHHH! How could you stop it there! SOBS! SHUDDERS, CRIES & KICKES FEET AND POUNDS ON FLOOR! Are you sure you aren't a sadist?  I love your story even if its an evil Snape.  Ok I'm in for the long haul since this chapter was short can I beg a quick update?  Lots of love & I hope you get lots of reviews.                                       Carla

Aaaargh! It is so way too short have mercy on us you give us these snippits you call chapters and we are left desperate for more......have pity on us and upload faster!

Well, I'm rotten at suspense and since you've made it clear this is "not a romance", I've been very twitchy reading this.? You've made your characters with a lot of depth so it's not so simple to predict what they'll do next.? I do think Hermione would be smart enough to back Snape over Wormtail, though, and I can't quite see her actually believing that consorting with Wormtail would actually get her anywhere good.? Perhaps that realization occurs in Part II.? I appreciate the regular updates (did I mention I'm poor at suspense? ;)) and am still hoping for a relatively happy ending.? [As in, free Snape and dead Wormtail.]? ?But, I'll enjoy the ride you're providing here.? Thanks for your work!

The plot thinckens! hehe

Love the updates! Great chapters (Snape is a bit more kind - if you can say that!) with lots of snark and tension. I look forward to more (I sure hope Harmione doesn't have to actually let Wormtail touch her....ugh...I might not eat all day after reading it!)