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Quantum Mechanics

1: Introductory Mechanics

2: Mechanics of Wool-Gathering

3: Mechanics of Admiration

4: Mechanical Courtship

5: Mechanical Conversation

6: A Quantum of Romance

7: Mechanical Morning

8: A Quantum of Doubt

9: A Quantum of Merriment

10: A Quantum of News

11: Mechanical Reflection

12: Mechanical Failure

13: Unquantifiable Pain

14: Quantum Mistakes

15: A Quantum of Disaster

16: A Quantum of Fury

17: A Quantum of Grief

18: Mechanical Interactions

19: A Quantum of Professional Disappointment

20: Quantifiably Banished

21: The Mechanics of Surprise

22: Absolute Zero

23: Mechanics of Intimidation

24: Mechanical Aftermath

25: A Quantum of Understanding

26: A Stolen Quantum of Time

27: The Mechanics of Making Plans

28: A Quantum of Distance

29: Quantum Improvements

30: A Quantum of Confusion

31: A Quantum of Fear

32: Mechanical Snooping

33: A Quantum of Springtime

34: The Mechanics of Misdirection

35: The Mechanics of Annoyance

36: A Quantum of Meddling

37: Mechanical Complications

38: The Mechanics of Winemaking

39: A Quantum of Normalcy

40: A Missing Quantum of Control

41: A Quantum of Clarity

42: The Mechanics of Infuriating a Witch

43: A Quantum of Rationality

44: A Quantum of Overconfidence

45: The Mechanics of Whiplash

46: The Mechanics of Heartbreak

47: A Quantum of Peaceful Life

48: A Quantum of Memory

49: The Mechanics of Watching and Waiting

50: A Quantum of Compulsion

51: A Quantum Change

52: A Quantum of the Past

53: A Quantum of Tranquility

54: The Mechanics of Second Guesses

55: The Mechanics of Prevarication

56: A Quantum of Shaky Ground

57: The Mechanics of Protection

58: The Mechanics of Adjusting Plans

59: Family Mechanics

60: A Quantum of Summertime

61: A Quantum of Warning

62: The Mechanics of a School Year

63: A Quantum of Truth

64: A Quantum of Recall

65: The Mechanics of Facing Facts

66: A Quantum of Proof

67: The Mechanics of Fatherhood

68: The Mechanics of Motherhood

69: A Quantum of Reassurance

70: A Quantum of Life

71: A Quantum of Awkwardness

72: The Mechanics of Resting

73: A Quantum of Additional Awkwardness

74: The Mechanics of Overcoming Awkwardness

75: The Mechanics of Announcements

76: A Quantum of Surprise

77: The Mechanics of Rug Pulling

78: A Quantum of Emotion

79: The Mechanics of Married with Kids

80: The Mechanics of Romance

81: A Quantum of Passion

82: A Quantum of Confusion

83: A Quantum of Retribution

84: The Mechanics of Returning to Normal

85: A Quantum of Plain Speaking

86: A Quantum of Terror

87: The Mechanics of Recovery

88: A Quantum of Determination

89: A Quantum of Compromise

90: A Quantum of Order

91: The Mechanics of Espionage

92: A Quantum of Preparation

93: The Mechanics of Value

94: A Quantum of Something

95: The Mechanics of Dealing with Women

96: A Quantum of Enlightenment

97: The Mechanics of Disclosure

98: A Quantum of Discord

99: A Quantum of True Intimacy

100: A Quantum of Family for the Holiday

101: A Quantum of Holiday

Quantum Mechanics

Rose of the West

328 Reviews   |   328 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )

Romance Hogwarts Castle 101,817 Words 101 Chapters WIP
Other Canon Witch/Wizard Severus Snape Original Character Albus Dumbledore Hermione Granger Professor Sinistra Remus Lupin Professor Vector Poppy Pomfrey Eileen (Prince) Snape Igor Karkaroff Barty Crouch Jr. Sirius Black Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Nymphadora Tonks

Much can happen in that place where Potions and Arithmancy meet. Snape & Vector

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Chapters (101)

Chapter 1: Introductory Mechanics

Chapter 2: Mechanics of Wool-Gathering

Chapter 3: Mechanics of Admiration

Chapter 4: Mechanical Courtship

Chapter 5: Mechanical Conversation

Chapter 6: A Quantum of Romance

Chapter 7: Mechanical Morning

Chapter 8: A Quantum of Doubt

Chapter 9: A Quantum of Merriment

Chapter 10: A Quantum of News

Chapter 11: Mechanical Reflection

Chapter 12: Mechanical Failure

Chapter 13: Unquantifiable Pain

Chapter 14: Quantum Mistakes

Chapter 15: A Quantum of Disaster

Chapter 16: A Quantum of Fury

Chapter 17: A Quantum of Grief

Chapter 18: Mechanical Interactions

Chapter 19: A Quantum of Professional Disappointment

Chapter 20: Quantifiably Banished

Chapter 21: The Mechanics of Surprise

Chapter 22: Absolute Zero

Chapter 23: Mechanics of Intimidation

Chapter 24: Mechanical Aftermath

Chapter 25: A Quantum of Understanding

Chapter 26: A Stolen Quantum of Time

Chapter 27: The Mechanics of Making Plans

Chapter 28: A Quantum of Distance

Chapter 29: Quantum Improvements

Chapter 30: A Quantum of Confusion

Chapter 31: A Quantum of Fear

Chapter 32: Mechanical Snooping

Chapter 33: A Quantum of Springtime

Chapter 34: The Mechanics of Misdirection

Chapter 35: The Mechanics of Annoyance

Chapter 36: A Quantum of Meddling

Chapter 37: Mechanical Complications

Chapter 38: The Mechanics of Winemaking

Chapter 39: A Quantum of Normalcy

Chapter 40: A Missing Quantum of Control

Chapter 41: A Quantum of Clarity

Chapter 42: The Mechanics of Infuriating a Witch

Chapter 43: A Quantum of Rationality

Chapter 44: A Quantum of Overconfidence

Chapter 45: The Mechanics of Whiplash

Chapter 46: The Mechanics of Heartbreak

Chapter 47: A Quantum of Peaceful Life

Chapter 48: A Quantum of Memory

Chapter 49: The Mechanics of Watching and Waiting

Chapter 50: A Quantum of Compulsion

Chapter 51: A Quantum Change

Chapter 52: A Quantum of the Past

Chapter 53: A Quantum of Tranquility

Chapter 54: The Mechanics of Second Guesses

Chapter 55: The Mechanics of Prevarication

Chapter 56: A Quantum of Shaky Ground

Chapter 57: The Mechanics of Protection

Chapter 58: The Mechanics of Adjusting Plans

Chapter 59: Family Mechanics

Chapter 60: A Quantum of Summertime

Chapter 61: A Quantum of Warning

Chapter 62: The Mechanics of a School Year

Chapter 63: A Quantum of Truth

Chapter 64: A Quantum of Recall

Chapter 65: The Mechanics of Facing Facts

Chapter 66: A Quantum of Proof

Chapter 67: The Mechanics of Fatherhood

Chapter 68: The Mechanics of Motherhood

Chapter 69: A Quantum of Reassurance

Chapter 70: A Quantum of Life

Chapter 71: A Quantum of Awkwardness

Chapter 72: The Mechanics of Resting

Chapter 73: A Quantum of Additional Awkwardness

Chapter 74: The Mechanics of Overcoming Awkwardness

Chapter 75: The Mechanics of Announcements

Chapter 76: A Quantum of Surprise

Chapter 77: The Mechanics of Rug Pulling

Chapter 78: A Quantum of Emotion

Chapter 79: The Mechanics of Married with Kids

Chapter 80: The Mechanics of Romance

Chapter 81: A Quantum of Passion

Chapter 82: A Quantum of Confusion

Chapter 83: A Quantum of Retribution

Chapter 84: The Mechanics of Returning to Normal

Chapter 85: A Quantum of Plain Speaking

Chapter 86: A Quantum of Terror

Chapter 87: The Mechanics of Recovery

Chapter 88: A Quantum of Determination

Chapter 89: A Quantum of Compromise

Chapter 90: A Quantum of Order

Chapter 91: The Mechanics of Espionage

Chapter 92: A Quantum of Preparation

Chapter 93: The Mechanics of Value

Chapter 94: A Quantum of Something

Chapter 95: The Mechanics of Dealing with Women

Chapter 96: A Quantum of Enlightenment

Chapter 97: The Mechanics of Disclosure

Chapter 98: A Quantum of Discord

Chapter 99: A Quantum of True Intimacy

Chapter 100: A Quantum of Family for the Holiday

Chapter 101: A Quantum of Holiday


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10/10

sunny33

Uh oh, what has happened now? :)

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Well, it's the night everything goes to heck in the canon... Thank you for the review!

Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)

LOL.  I forgot all about canon! :)

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

<3

10/10

MollysSister

I am all sorts of curious about Hermione and Renee. You will throw more hints this way wont you?

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Oh, yes. There is more coming on that situation.  I'm not entirely sure how soon, but more is coming. Thank you for the review!

10/10

Bettina

A splendid narration and no confusion here that isn't Septima's. The poor woman! Severus is nice again, and he really treads carefully around the Hermione/Renée issue--he does love Septima. Now, let's send A.D. for a nice, long holiday.. Hm, we're in book 3, and Umbridge isn't coming for a while. Goodness the irony if they owed THAT hyena their love. I'm still totally angry about Remus, how little character does that Gryffindor have, pushing a woman who's so obviously not his? Of course he'd like to be cured, but is it even possible? Did he check that A.D. wasn't lying?

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Remus knows better than to be pushy; he's letting Dumbledore be pushy for him.  Actually, I think he's getting swept up in Dumbledore's enthusiasm just as he used to get swept up in James and Sirius's schemes.  He didnt' think of it himself, but he's willing to play along.I do have plans for dear Dolores (she's so deliciously evil), but not for a while... I think.Thank you for reading and reviewing!

10/10

sunny33

Some more progress.  When will she realise Hermione IS Renee? :)

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

She's really stuck until something can be found to reverse the damage, and Severus doesn't know how to do that until he can dig far enough down to see what happened.  Eventually they'll get there.Thank you for the review!

10/10

debjunk

They're still all tangled up, but at least they've gotten this far, on both counts, the Hermione memories, and their relationship.  I hope things resolve themselves.  I'm not going to say soon, because I think this will probably endure until the war, but hopefully Severus will come to his real senses, and Septima will accept some of hers.  Fabulous job, dear.  This one just gets better and better.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Oh, thank you!  That's high praise from you.I don't think Severus has completely shaken free, but he sees more clearly than he has in a while. Septima's a bit more tricky, but she's getting closer to the truth.

0/10

MollysSister

My fingers are crossed this time they figure it out.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Severus has figured something out, anyway. Thank you for the lovely reviews!

10/10

MollysSister

I still say Severus has been cursed. Not that Remus cares....

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Everybody's hoping to get something, here, aren't they?  Thank you!

0/10

MollysSister

ZOMG did Albus put some sort of curse on Severus?? I am outraged on Severus and Septimia's behalf.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

I think it's more accurate to say that Albus put something *in* Severus, via the brandy.  Thanks, again!

Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)

You are going to kill off Dumbledore at some point right? RIGHT?

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Well, of course, but it doesn't feel like it's going to be soon enough.

0/10

MollysSister

Wow I can hardly beleive the conversation turned out that way. Who woulda thunk it?

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Once in a while, Septima uses her mind and summons the confidence to say what she's thinking.  ;)  Thank you, again!

10/10

MollysSister

Excellent! I want to be well shot of Lupin now. Just you back off Dumbledore!! I shall give him my stern look.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

LOL! Dumbledore will press his agenda, but maybe we can keep that agenda from messing things up too much.  Thank you for the review!

10/10

debjunk

At least he realized what's up, but how to counteract it without Dumbly knowing.  And as for the Legilimens, I hope that works too.  Poor Septima.  She has no idea what's going on.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

It took him a while to recognize what was going on, didn't it? Septima's memories still have a bit to go, but she'll get closer to understanding it.  Thank you for the review!

10/10

sunny33

Dumbledore DID dose the brandy.  I suspected as much! :)

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Dumbledore doses everything, at least in this story. Thank you for the review!

10/10

HBAR

Oh, Septima.  Don't fall prey to a man just because he says something nice to you. I see a pattern here. She is really in need of some honest, good-intentioned loving.  I don't see it coming her way soon :(

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

She's decided that everyone has an angle, so she's going to develop one of her own.  Thank you for the review!

10/10

HBAR

Well that was not a nice place to leave things!  Never in a fic have I looked so forward to the death of Dumbledore.  I know Septima stays and endures abuse from all sides because she wants to be near Severus, and despite all that's gone on, I think she believes that she will win him over eventually, but I would have packed my bags long ago.  I really hope she gets a happy ending.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

It can be so difficult... we put ourselves in situations and endure so much because we're not willing to see what else is out there. As for Dumbledore's death, it can't come soon enough for me.Thank you for the review!

9/10

Bettina

MEN!!! Dunno which of the three I'd kick first here!Albus? Severus? Remus?

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

I think Remus is just sort of along for the ride, like he was when Sirius and James got into trouble. Severus was a little dumb not to catch on, and Dumbledore is causing most of the trouble here, right now.Thank you for the review!

10/10

debjunk

You're ticking me off.  I don't like Imperiused Severus, and you can just stop it now.  Is sixth year here yet?  Can he kill Dumbles more than once, do you think?  Maybe an infinity spell, where Dumbles just hangs in the moment the Avada hits him and he spends eternity there, in misery and pain.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

I hope you're ticked off the right way! Severus is about to get hit by another clue brick of sorts, if that helps, any.  Thank you for the review!

10/10

sunny33

Hmm, I'm not sure I like Remus's motives here. :)

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

I'm going with a mental picture of Remus as someone who gets caught up in other people's enthusiasms, here. Of course there's something in it for him, too...Thank you for the review!

10/10

sunny33

Ooh, Albus is playing really dirty.  Can I wring his neck? :)

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

I think there's a line. ;)  Thank you for the review!

0/10

Fishy

ahhh, he grew a concious, or was it a Gryffindor heart? I guess we'll just hav eto speculate.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

He feels responsible, and now that they're starting to get along again, he wants to help her out.  Thank you so much for the reviews!

0/10

Fishy

Dumbledore and his hot cocoa! THE NERVE! That was pretty neat.

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

I do have a hard time wrapping my head around Dumbledore knwoing that Erwin was abusive, and allowing something like that to continue - the Dumbledore I know and love wouldn't allow anything of the sort - manipulative as he is - but I am anxious to see how you work this.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Thank you!  Yes, this Dumbledore is particularly evil.  Usually when I write him as meddling, he's trying to get Snape together with someone. It's a bit OOC, but there's some reasoning behind it.  Thanks for the review!

8/10

Fishy

That was intense...I like intense.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Thank you!  ;)

8/10

Fishy

Yuck

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Yeah, definitely.  Thank you for the review!

0/10

Fishy

I'm a bit confused - is Erwin blind? Who is Oiler? Is that a company and, is Erwin asking Severus for her hand so he can court her? This whole chapter was confusing to me. But I've been known to be daft.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Oiler is Septima's university advisor, and he's going blind.  Erwin is leaving Hogwarts and going on to the university.  Severus thinks his interest is professional, but you seem to be on to something.Thank you again for the review!

0/10

Fishy

I'm about ready to chuck Severus into the nearest alligator filled canal - oh wait, they don't have alligators in England... well... he's being a total #&@! - but I suppose you know that.Kudos to you for writing a very realistic story - must be difficult to write something about folks who are making so many mistakes - not the happy, fluffy ending we hope for.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

This was a horrible chapter to write.  Severus is being his age and all. Both these kids were too young to get themselves into this sort of situation, and they're not going to react beautifully.  They'll both grow out of it eventually.Thank you for the lovely reviews today!

8/10

Fishy

Awwwww. I very much feel Septima's anquish.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Yes, she was pretty upset about everything, and she expected so much from Severus.  It's one of those situations that stinks for everyone.  Thank you for the review!

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