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Quantum Mechanics

1: Introductory Mechanics

2: Mechanics of Wool-Gathering

3: Mechanics of Admiration

4: Mechanical Courtship

5: Mechanical Conversation

6: A Quantum of Romance

7: Mechanical Morning

8: A Quantum of Doubt

9: A Quantum of Merriment

10: A Quantum of News

11: Mechanical Reflection

12: Mechanical Failure

13: Unquantifiable Pain

14: Quantum Mistakes

15: A Quantum of Disaster

16: A Quantum of Fury

17: A Quantum of Grief

18: Mechanical Interactions

19: A Quantum of Professional Disappointment

20: Quantifiably Banished

21: The Mechanics of Surprise

22: Absolute Zero

23: Mechanics of Intimidation

24: Mechanical Aftermath

25: A Quantum of Understanding

26: A Stolen Quantum of Time

27: The Mechanics of Making Plans

28: A Quantum of Distance

29: Quantum Improvements

30: A Quantum of Confusion

31: A Quantum of Fear

32: Mechanical Snooping

33: A Quantum of Springtime

34: The Mechanics of Misdirection

35: The Mechanics of Annoyance

36: A Quantum of Meddling

37: Mechanical Complications

38: The Mechanics of Winemaking

39: A Quantum of Normalcy

40: A Missing Quantum of Control

41: A Quantum of Clarity

42: The Mechanics of Infuriating a Witch

43: A Quantum of Rationality

44: A Quantum of Overconfidence

45: The Mechanics of Whiplash

46: The Mechanics of Heartbreak

47: A Quantum of Peaceful Life

48: A Quantum of Memory

49: The Mechanics of Watching and Waiting

50: A Quantum of Compulsion

51: A Quantum Change

52: A Quantum of the Past

53: A Quantum of Tranquility

54: The Mechanics of Second Guesses

55: The Mechanics of Prevarication

56: A Quantum of Shaky Ground

57: The Mechanics of Protection

58: The Mechanics of Adjusting Plans

59: Family Mechanics

60: A Quantum of Summertime

61: A Quantum of Warning

62: The Mechanics of a School Year

63: A Quantum of Truth

64: A Quantum of Recall

65: The Mechanics of Facing Facts

66: A Quantum of Proof

67: The Mechanics of Fatherhood

68: The Mechanics of Motherhood

69: A Quantum of Reassurance

70: A Quantum of Life

71: A Quantum of Awkwardness

72: The Mechanics of Resting

73: A Quantum of Additional Awkwardness

74: The Mechanics of Overcoming Awkwardness

75: The Mechanics of Announcements

76: A Quantum of Surprise

77: The Mechanics of Rug Pulling

78: A Quantum of Emotion

79: The Mechanics of Married with Kids

80: The Mechanics of Romance

81: A Quantum of Passion

82: A Quantum of Confusion

83: A Quantum of Retribution

84: The Mechanics of Returning to Normal

85: A Quantum of Plain Speaking

86: A Quantum of Terror

87: The Mechanics of Recovery

88: A Quantum of Determination

89: A Quantum of Compromise

90: A Quantum of Order

91: The Mechanics of Espionage

92: A Quantum of Preparation

93: The Mechanics of Value

94: A Quantum of Something

95: The Mechanics of Dealing with Women

96: A Quantum of Enlightenment

97: The Mechanics of Disclosure

98: A Quantum of Discord

99: A Quantum of True Intimacy

100: A Quantum of Family for the Holiday

101: A Quantum of Holiday

Quantum Mechanics

Rose of the West

328 Reviews   |   328 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )

Romance Hogwarts Castle 101,817 Words 101 Chapters WIP
Other Canon Witch/Wizard Severus Snape Original Character Albus Dumbledore Hermione Granger Professor Sinistra Remus Lupin Professor Vector Poppy Pomfrey Eileen (Prince) Snape Igor Karkaroff Barty Crouch Jr. Sirius Black Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Nymphadora Tonks

Much can happen in that place where Potions and Arithmancy meet. Snape & Vector

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Chapters (101)

Chapter 1: Introductory Mechanics

Chapter 2: Mechanics of Wool-Gathering

Chapter 3: Mechanics of Admiration

Chapter 4: Mechanical Courtship

Chapter 5: Mechanical Conversation

Chapter 6: A Quantum of Romance

Chapter 7: Mechanical Morning

Chapter 8: A Quantum of Doubt

Chapter 9: A Quantum of Merriment

Chapter 10: A Quantum of News

Chapter 11: Mechanical Reflection

Chapter 12: Mechanical Failure

Chapter 13: Unquantifiable Pain

Chapter 14: Quantum Mistakes

Chapter 15: A Quantum of Disaster

Chapter 16: A Quantum of Fury

Chapter 17: A Quantum of Grief

Chapter 18: Mechanical Interactions

Chapter 19: A Quantum of Professional Disappointment

Chapter 20: Quantifiably Banished

Chapter 21: The Mechanics of Surprise

Chapter 22: Absolute Zero

Chapter 23: Mechanics of Intimidation

Chapter 24: Mechanical Aftermath

Chapter 25: A Quantum of Understanding

Chapter 26: A Stolen Quantum of Time

Chapter 27: The Mechanics of Making Plans

Chapter 28: A Quantum of Distance

Chapter 29: Quantum Improvements

Chapter 30: A Quantum of Confusion

Chapter 31: A Quantum of Fear

Chapter 32: Mechanical Snooping

Chapter 33: A Quantum of Springtime

Chapter 34: The Mechanics of Misdirection

Chapter 35: The Mechanics of Annoyance

Chapter 36: A Quantum of Meddling

Chapter 37: Mechanical Complications

Chapter 38: The Mechanics of Winemaking

Chapter 39: A Quantum of Normalcy

Chapter 40: A Missing Quantum of Control

Chapter 41: A Quantum of Clarity

Chapter 42: The Mechanics of Infuriating a Witch

Chapter 43: A Quantum of Rationality

Chapter 44: A Quantum of Overconfidence

Chapter 45: The Mechanics of Whiplash

Chapter 46: The Mechanics of Heartbreak

Chapter 47: A Quantum of Peaceful Life

Chapter 48: A Quantum of Memory

Chapter 49: The Mechanics of Watching and Waiting

Chapter 50: A Quantum of Compulsion

Chapter 51: A Quantum Change

Chapter 52: A Quantum of the Past

Chapter 53: A Quantum of Tranquility

Chapter 54: The Mechanics of Second Guesses

Chapter 55: The Mechanics of Prevarication

Chapter 56: A Quantum of Shaky Ground

Chapter 57: The Mechanics of Protection

Chapter 58: The Mechanics of Adjusting Plans

Chapter 59: Family Mechanics

Chapter 60: A Quantum of Summertime

Chapter 61: A Quantum of Warning

Chapter 62: The Mechanics of a School Year

Chapter 63: A Quantum of Truth

Chapter 64: A Quantum of Recall

Chapter 65: The Mechanics of Facing Facts

Chapter 66: A Quantum of Proof

Chapter 67: The Mechanics of Fatherhood

Chapter 68: The Mechanics of Motherhood

Chapter 69: A Quantum of Reassurance

Chapter 70: A Quantum of Life

Chapter 71: A Quantum of Awkwardness

Chapter 72: The Mechanics of Resting

Chapter 73: A Quantum of Additional Awkwardness

Chapter 74: The Mechanics of Overcoming Awkwardness

Chapter 75: The Mechanics of Announcements

Chapter 76: A Quantum of Surprise

Chapter 77: The Mechanics of Rug Pulling

Chapter 78: A Quantum of Emotion

Chapter 79: The Mechanics of Married with Kids

Chapter 80: The Mechanics of Romance

Chapter 81: A Quantum of Passion

Chapter 82: A Quantum of Confusion

Chapter 83: A Quantum of Retribution

Chapter 84: The Mechanics of Returning to Normal

Chapter 85: A Quantum of Plain Speaking

Chapter 86: A Quantum of Terror

Chapter 87: The Mechanics of Recovery

Chapter 88: A Quantum of Determination

Chapter 89: A Quantum of Compromise

Chapter 90: A Quantum of Order

Chapter 91: The Mechanics of Espionage

Chapter 92: A Quantum of Preparation

Chapter 93: The Mechanics of Value

Chapter 94: A Quantum of Something

Chapter 95: The Mechanics of Dealing with Women

Chapter 96: A Quantum of Enlightenment

Chapter 97: The Mechanics of Disclosure

Chapter 98: A Quantum of Discord

Chapter 99: A Quantum of True Intimacy

Chapter 100: A Quantum of Family for the Holiday

Chapter 101: A Quantum of Holiday


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10/10

HBAR

Where's Arthur's car when you need it?  I feel like accidentally backing over Dumbledore.  But, I love your Poppy.  She is a good ally for them.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Hmmm... that car's just out in the forest... I have some backstory on Poppy and her attitude toward Dumbledore that I'm going to have to figure out how to include.  If not, then there's going to be a one-shot.  ;)

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Oh, and thank you so much for the review!

Response from HBAR (Reviewer)

The car is not in the forest quite yet.  I suspect it is still at his house with Molly in the backseat ready for some baby making ;)  No wonder they have so many kids!I'm glad to hear there will be more on Poppy either in this story or as a companion piece!

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Damn, damn, damn! Stupid Dark Lord. So worried about Septima, and for pete's sake, she needs to know about Renee/Hermione! GAH!

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

It's kind of a pain, having to write some parts of canon into this, LOL, but Septima is going to have to face the Death Eater thing that she avoided before. Maybe it will help her face the other things, too.  Thanks for the review!

10/10

debjunk

Yes, perfect last line.  I'm so glad he finally admitted his feeling to her.  I think it took him a long time to realize them himself, but this is really good for them.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Yes. He doesn't know for sure what he feels, but he at least knows he has some. They can work together on what that means, now.  Thank you for the review!

10/10

HBAR

Fair enough, indeed.  I'm not really sure anyone should trust anyone here.  Well, I think Severus and Septima have come to a place where they are committed and mean only good things for one another.  Still, they have some room to grow and I can see one or the other bumbling things up several more times.  I just want to strangle your Dumbledore!

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Yes, for all that they have this long history, Severus and Septima have never really lived together, and there are still some other issues.  It's not going to be that easy.  Thank you for the review!

10/10

Owlbait

Finally, Severus is getting smart. Don't touch the lemon drops.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Oh, yes. He's always going to have one eye on Dumbledore when he's in the room from now on. ;)  Thank you, again, and thank you for all the help!

10/10

Owlbait

Lupin's a pretty good guy, can't blame him for wanting a cure. Dumbledore is another story.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

I think the Lupin of the Marauders lets his friends overpower his conscience, and he's fallen into the same pattern here.  Thanks for the review!

10/10

Owlbait

“Congratulate Remus, Severus. The witch is with child.”  -- have I mentioned how much I absolutely despise Dumbledore in this story?

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

I've never written a Dumbledore quite this evil.  Usually he's just like any other normal person who tries to be good but has conflicts. This one has it out for Septima. Thank you, again!

10/10

Owlbait

“You're wearing the face of a woman in love, a woman who loves me, a woman who's just found bliss in my arms. I've never seen anything to compare to it.”  -- awwwwww :D

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

He can be romantic when he digs deep.  He somehow knows it's on him to reassure her right now.  Thank you for the review!

10/10

Owlbait

mmm shower!Snape :o)The Lily/Severus/Septima dynamic is so difficult. It's good that they can talk about it and finally understand each other a bit more.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Yes.  He's still not mentioning her name, but he's starting to let go of Lily enough to honestly size up the situation and discuss it this much.  Thank you!

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Yes.  He's still not mentioning her name, but he's starting to let go of Lily enough to honestly size up the situation and discuss it this much.  Thank you!

10/10

HBAR

Severus is such a fussy little patient, isn't he?  Good thing Septima didn't notice him slipping up and almost calling Hermione their daughter.It seems funny to hear Severus speak kindly about Hermione since in canon and other fic, we are used to her being abused by him as a student.  I'm really anxious for Septima to find out about their daughter!

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

LOL, admitting he was hurt would be admitting that he hadn't come out of the skirmish very well. He doesn't always know what to think about her as his daughter all the time.  He's proud of her, but he doesn't have the first idea about how to behave toward her. He's pretty anxious for Septima to learn about Hermionie, too, but he's worried that if he just tells her she'll have problems from it.Thanks, again!

10/10

HBAR

Well it's about time Severus.  Not that I think their relationship will be smooth sailing from here, but at least he has laid the groundwork for it.So, if Septima had gone to Remus, would he not have made it out to the Shrieking Shack?  That would have changed things in so many ways.Off to read more ...

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

If Septima had gotten to Remus when she was "supposed to," it might have made a bit difference.  He wouldn't have been twiddling his thumbs and looking at the map to kill time, LOL.There will be better and worse days ahead for Severus and Septima, but he's made a firm decision, at least.Thanks for the review!

10/10

sunny33

Ooh, good canon tie-in. LIke the way he keeps almost slipping and referring to Hermione as their daughter. :)

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Thank you! LOL, one of these days he's going to slip, she's not going to notice it at all and they're both going to say, "Hey, wait a minute..."Or something like that.

10/10

debjunk

Glad he didn't go back to being distant after the issue with Black bringing back the memories of Lily to him.  I love his pride in his daughter.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

I suppose that's a kind of weak point in my story, that he's letting Septima be part of his grief at all, although she's the one he went to back when everything happened before, and he's just made that decision about the future and Septima. He's still being a bit choosy with the truth, never mentioning who Lily is. He's very proud of his daughter, isn't he?  ;)

Response from debjunk (Reviewer)

I don't think that's a weak point.  I think it shows some growth on his part.  And with what he let free tonight, I would think Septima now knows who that mystery lady is.

10/10

Owlbait

With the Dumbledore you've got, and that last line, I'm almost wondering if Peter won't turn out to be a saint and Sirius a secret Death Eater.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Oh, my goodness, or even Remus. ~ponders what exactly I could do during next three books worth of canon~  Bwa ha ha. ;)Thank you so much for all your help and support!

0/10

Bettina

brilliant!

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Thank you so much!

10/10

debjunk

Yes, well, he's a little mistaken on that part.  Glad he did get some common sense and realizations with Septima.  Also glad he kept her from a terrible fate.  And, will she conceive? 

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Ooo... good question. He's definitely turned a corner and decided to turn it for good.  Thank you for the review!

10/10

Owlbait

I always loved the image of Sev racing for the Shack, potentially into the teeth of the werewolf, to save the kids. Little did I know, one of them was his ;-)

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Do you think he would have dragged his feet a little if it had just been about Harry?  LOL! Thank you, as always, for all your help!

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Oooh, this doesn't bode well. I hope Dumbledore improves, I really feel unconfortable with evil!Dumbledore fics. It's a testament to your good writing that I keep reading regardless. Well done!

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

I've never written such an evil Dumbledore.  Usually he's well meaning if a bit flawed from time to time.  It's kind of fun. Thank you so much for the review!

10/10

Bettina

What a tight web you've woven! Absolutely fascinating!Is it going to be Lupin who discovers Dumbledore's newest machination? Or will they all just assume Snape's being his unpleasant self again? I'm suspecting the old meddler has also altered Septima's memory at the child's birth. Has Severus yet thought about WHO did it?

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Thank you so much!  Given the way things have gone the past several years, let's just say that Septima's going to be able to narrow it down.Did Dumbledore alter Septima's memory?  I'll have to consider that.Thanks, again, for reading and reviewing!

Response from Bettina (Reviewer)

I forgot: I burn to see how it happens that Severus hurts his daughter in the scene with Hermione's long teeth.

10/10

Owlbait

Septima really should have gone straight to Sev. ~poisons Dumbles cocoa~

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Ooo.. off Dumbledore using a potion, after all that he's done with potions... hm...Thank you for all your help!

0/10

debjunk

What the?

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Yeah, Dumbledore found another trick up his sleeve... and some brandy.  Thank you for the review!

10/10

HBAR

He's a manipulative old so-and-so, isn't he?

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Oh, yes he is.  He's perfectly awful and he's willing to pull some nasty tricks to get his way.  Thank you for the review!

10/10

HBAR

Yes, it is best to check ones company prior to dropping ones towel :)Bravo to Septima for a hard-earned win, but I fear she has won the battle, not the war.  Your Dumbledore is a real piece of work.  We'll leave it at that.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

I've really enjoyed writing this Dumbledore, who's pretty hard on his staff and has his own agenda and wishes.  Thank you for the review!

10/10

debjunk

I hope her last thought is correct.  Geez, Dumbles is an evil you-know-what.  I wonder if there's something more to his fury and ugliness about Severus and Septima, especially in the child department? 

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

He's definitely got an ulterior motive or two, and it does seem as though he was choosing between lesser evils there, doesn't it?  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

0/10

feisanna

oooo ... tricky tricky Septima

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

She's capable of using her head once in a while!  ;)Thank you for the review!

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