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Quantum Mechanics

1: Introductory Mechanics

2: Mechanics of Wool-Gathering

3: Mechanics of Admiration

4: Mechanical Courtship

5: Mechanical Conversation

6: A Quantum of Romance

7: Mechanical Morning

8: A Quantum of Doubt

9: A Quantum of Merriment

10: A Quantum of News

11: Mechanical Reflection

12: Mechanical Failure

13: Unquantifiable Pain

14: Quantum Mistakes

15: A Quantum of Disaster

16: A Quantum of Fury

17: A Quantum of Grief

18: Mechanical Interactions

19: A Quantum of Professional Disappointment

20: Quantifiably Banished

21: The Mechanics of Surprise

22: Absolute Zero

23: Mechanics of Intimidation

24: Mechanical Aftermath

25: A Quantum of Understanding

26: A Stolen Quantum of Time

27: The Mechanics of Making Plans

28: A Quantum of Distance

29: Quantum Improvements

30: A Quantum of Confusion

31: A Quantum of Fear

32: Mechanical Snooping

33: A Quantum of Springtime

34: The Mechanics of Misdirection

35: The Mechanics of Annoyance

36: A Quantum of Meddling

37: Mechanical Complications

38: The Mechanics of Winemaking

39: A Quantum of Normalcy

40: A Missing Quantum of Control

41: A Quantum of Clarity

42: The Mechanics of Infuriating a Witch

43: A Quantum of Rationality

44: A Quantum of Overconfidence

45: The Mechanics of Whiplash

46: The Mechanics of Heartbreak

47: A Quantum of Peaceful Life

48: A Quantum of Memory

49: The Mechanics of Watching and Waiting

50: A Quantum of Compulsion

51: A Quantum Change

52: A Quantum of the Past

53: A Quantum of Tranquility

54: The Mechanics of Second Guesses

55: The Mechanics of Prevarication

56: A Quantum of Shaky Ground

57: The Mechanics of Protection

58: The Mechanics of Adjusting Plans

59: Family Mechanics

60: A Quantum of Summertime

61: A Quantum of Warning

62: The Mechanics of a School Year

63: A Quantum of Truth

64: A Quantum of Recall

65: The Mechanics of Facing Facts

66: A Quantum of Proof

67: The Mechanics of Fatherhood

68: The Mechanics of Motherhood

69: A Quantum of Reassurance

70: A Quantum of Life

71: A Quantum of Awkwardness

72: The Mechanics of Resting

73: A Quantum of Additional Awkwardness

74: The Mechanics of Overcoming Awkwardness

75: The Mechanics of Announcements

76: A Quantum of Surprise

77: The Mechanics of Rug Pulling

78: A Quantum of Emotion

79: The Mechanics of Married with Kids

80: The Mechanics of Romance

81: A Quantum of Passion

82: A Quantum of Confusion

83: A Quantum of Retribution

84: The Mechanics of Returning to Normal

85: A Quantum of Plain Speaking

86: A Quantum of Terror

87: The Mechanics of Recovery

88: A Quantum of Determination

89: A Quantum of Compromise

90: A Quantum of Order

91: The Mechanics of Espionage

92: A Quantum of Preparation

93: The Mechanics of Value

94: A Quantum of Something

95: The Mechanics of Dealing with Women

96: A Quantum of Enlightenment

97: The Mechanics of Disclosure

98: A Quantum of Discord

99: A Quantum of True Intimacy

100: A Quantum of Family for the Holiday

101: A Quantum of Holiday

Quantum Mechanics

Rose of the West

328 Reviews   |   328 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )

Romance Hogwarts Castle 101,817 Words 101 Chapters WIP
Other Canon Witch/Wizard Severus Snape Original Character Albus Dumbledore Hermione Granger Professor Sinistra Remus Lupin Professor Vector Poppy Pomfrey Eileen (Prince) Snape Igor Karkaroff Barty Crouch Jr. Sirius Black Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Nymphadora Tonks

Much can happen in that place where Potions and Arithmancy meet. Snape & Vector

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Chapters (101)

Chapter 1: Introductory Mechanics

Chapter 2: Mechanics of Wool-Gathering

Chapter 3: Mechanics of Admiration

Chapter 4: Mechanical Courtship

Chapter 5: Mechanical Conversation

Chapter 6: A Quantum of Romance

Chapter 7: Mechanical Morning

Chapter 8: A Quantum of Doubt

Chapter 9: A Quantum of Merriment

Chapter 10: A Quantum of News

Chapter 11: Mechanical Reflection

Chapter 12: Mechanical Failure

Chapter 13: Unquantifiable Pain

Chapter 14: Quantum Mistakes

Chapter 15: A Quantum of Disaster

Chapter 16: A Quantum of Fury

Chapter 17: A Quantum of Grief

Chapter 18: Mechanical Interactions

Chapter 19: A Quantum of Professional Disappointment

Chapter 20: Quantifiably Banished

Chapter 21: The Mechanics of Surprise

Chapter 22: Absolute Zero

Chapter 23: Mechanics of Intimidation

Chapter 24: Mechanical Aftermath

Chapter 25: A Quantum of Understanding

Chapter 26: A Stolen Quantum of Time

Chapter 27: The Mechanics of Making Plans

Chapter 28: A Quantum of Distance

Chapter 29: Quantum Improvements

Chapter 30: A Quantum of Confusion

Chapter 31: A Quantum of Fear

Chapter 32: Mechanical Snooping

Chapter 33: A Quantum of Springtime

Chapter 34: The Mechanics of Misdirection

Chapter 35: The Mechanics of Annoyance

Chapter 36: A Quantum of Meddling

Chapter 37: Mechanical Complications

Chapter 38: The Mechanics of Winemaking

Chapter 39: A Quantum of Normalcy

Chapter 40: A Missing Quantum of Control

Chapter 41: A Quantum of Clarity

Chapter 42: The Mechanics of Infuriating a Witch

Chapter 43: A Quantum of Rationality

Chapter 44: A Quantum of Overconfidence

Chapter 45: The Mechanics of Whiplash

Chapter 46: The Mechanics of Heartbreak

Chapter 47: A Quantum of Peaceful Life

Chapter 48: A Quantum of Memory

Chapter 49: The Mechanics of Watching and Waiting

Chapter 50: A Quantum of Compulsion

Chapter 51: A Quantum Change

Chapter 52: A Quantum of the Past

Chapter 53: A Quantum of Tranquility

Chapter 54: The Mechanics of Second Guesses

Chapter 55: The Mechanics of Prevarication

Chapter 56: A Quantum of Shaky Ground

Chapter 57: The Mechanics of Protection

Chapter 58: The Mechanics of Adjusting Plans

Chapter 59: Family Mechanics

Chapter 60: A Quantum of Summertime

Chapter 61: A Quantum of Warning

Chapter 62: The Mechanics of a School Year

Chapter 63: A Quantum of Truth

Chapter 64: A Quantum of Recall

Chapter 65: The Mechanics of Facing Facts

Chapter 66: A Quantum of Proof

Chapter 67: The Mechanics of Fatherhood

Chapter 68: The Mechanics of Motherhood

Chapter 69: A Quantum of Reassurance

Chapter 70: A Quantum of Life

Chapter 71: A Quantum of Awkwardness

Chapter 72: The Mechanics of Resting

Chapter 73: A Quantum of Additional Awkwardness

Chapter 74: The Mechanics of Overcoming Awkwardness

Chapter 75: The Mechanics of Announcements

Chapter 76: A Quantum of Surprise

Chapter 77: The Mechanics of Rug Pulling

Chapter 78: A Quantum of Emotion

Chapter 79: The Mechanics of Married with Kids

Chapter 80: The Mechanics of Romance

Chapter 81: A Quantum of Passion

Chapter 82: A Quantum of Confusion

Chapter 83: A Quantum of Retribution

Chapter 84: The Mechanics of Returning to Normal

Chapter 85: A Quantum of Plain Speaking

Chapter 86: A Quantum of Terror

Chapter 87: The Mechanics of Recovery

Chapter 88: A Quantum of Determination

Chapter 89: A Quantum of Compromise

Chapter 90: A Quantum of Order

Chapter 91: The Mechanics of Espionage

Chapter 92: A Quantum of Preparation

Chapter 93: The Mechanics of Value

Chapter 94: A Quantum of Something

Chapter 95: The Mechanics of Dealing with Women

Chapter 96: A Quantum of Enlightenment

Chapter 97: The Mechanics of Disclosure

Chapter 98: A Quantum of Discord

Chapter 99: A Quantum of True Intimacy

Chapter 100: A Quantum of Family for the Holiday

Chapter 101: A Quantum of Holiday


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10/10

debjunk

That went rather well.  I hope Hermione accepts her new family and Septima can deal with everything.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Yes, it's a lot for everyone to figure out, and the situation isn't ideal, is it? Thank you so much for the review!

10/10

Bettina

wow, Septima is doing great here!

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Thank you! I hope she's not just shellshocked from everything that's happened, LOL.

10/10

HBAR

This is a very important chapter in that Hermione finally has confronted Vector, and they both came out unscathed.  And other than the point where she shouted at Severus in Hermione's presence, this is the first time they have actually been together as a family.  Even though they don't have all of the answers for her, they both have been very open to Hermione asking questions, and that will go a long way with her, I think.  I thought the part where she starts to feed the baby, and it is awkward for Hermione was very realistic for her age.Actually, they did so very many things right.”What a nice thing to say.  And also, it occurs to me how wonderful it is for a Muggleborn to have not only a set of parents in the Muggle world, but also a set of wizarding parents.  There are so many things that she can get from one that she can't from the other.  Once all of the confusion clears, she is actually a lucky little girl.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Septima's been sitting in a stew of wondering how stupid she could have been not to recognize her own child while knowing that another woman raised her daughter to be the amazing young woman Hermione is. Looking at the situation analytically, she has to accept that the Grangers did a fantastic job of raising her daughter, even if she hates the situation that made that happen. Meanwhile, this is going to be one wierd family as they figure out what's up and what they want to share with the outside world. I'm not sure all the right questions have been asked or answered, yet, but I agree that the willingness of all three to be honest with it all will carry them far. Fortunately, they all respected each other to start out with.  Thank you again, for the great review!

10/10

HBAR

Part of me feels like Hermione is a little whiny and ungrateful.  But on the other hand, she is young and this is a lot to take in.  And sometimes just because someone is book smart, doesn't mean they are smart about all things, especially when they are clouded by emotion.I love how Severus is being fatherlyish, without seeming over-the-top.  I think he is making a good choice by taking Miss Vector-Snape to see her brother and mother.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

You may be right about her reaction. It's an awful lot to realize and accept all at once, and it's not something she should have to deal with, but there it is in the middle of her life when she's trying to help Harry with the second task. Severus isn't exactly a fatherly type, but he's got a lot of experience in dealing with kids this age as well as the girl's mother. Hopefully he'll continue to act with restraint and understanding. Thank you so much for the review!

10/10

debjunk

Wowie, of course Hermione wouldn't just let things be.  I'm glad he's bringing her to see the baby.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

She's got to pick at things until she understands them, I think.  This is going to take a lot of work.  Thank you for the review!

10/10

HBAR

I love the dynamic that Poppy has set between her and Dumbledore.  Serves him right, after all.  And so sad that Septima doesn't think that Severus loves her.  I mean, you can't blame her for feeling unloved, because he has all but spelled it out for her, but I think he will have to realize it and believe it for himself before he can convey it to her.  It is a good sign, at least, that others can see it.  I wish Severus the best of luck ...

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Thank you! I was trying to figure out how a health care worker could maintain any patient confidentiality around an expert Legilimens who likes to arrange things to suit himself, and here's where I ended up, LOL.Septima's reached a point where she knows she's respected and valued by Snape, so she's going to content herself with that, at least for now.

9/10

Bettina

Beautiful scenes. Can't Severus now forget Lili? And tell Septima so? Voldemort needs the next gneration of D.E.s and Dumbledore needs Remus' child. That protects they little guy for a while at least. What's his name, btw? Severus could scan through the minds of the Granger parents to find how that adoption went. Maybe someone contacted them specifically? Now, with a newborn, is maybe not the best time, but it confuses me that he doesn't take more actions in this regard.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

That's an interesting idea about Severus visiting the Grangers and seeing what information they have. Severus mentioned naming him after Flammel a while back.Thank you for the lovely review!

10/10

sunny33

I suppose the baby would be well protected if it was known to be Severus's, but could also be used as leverage.  A double-edged sword. :)

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

A double-edged sword indeed. I think the Snape family will figure out how to minimize the risk, though.  Thank you, once again!

10/10

sunny33

What's Poppy up to? :)

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

She's getting Septima off site without rousing too much suspicion... hopefully.  Thank you!

10/10

sunny33

Oops, did Karkaroff dance a little too close? ;)

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Maybe he did, or maybe he's got one of those radars.  Thank you!

10/10

sunny33

Aww, he drew sketches! :)

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

I don't know if he's still got a secret notebook he fills with more Lily, but fatherhood gives him many sketch-worthy moments, LOL.  Thanks, again!

10/10

sunny33

Finally! :D

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

I know!  Thank you so much for your review and all your support!

10/10

sunny33

Beats drugs anytime! :)

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

That it does, ;) Thank you, once again!

10/10

debjunk

Glad all went well.  Too bad she can't remember the first time she did this.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Thank you!  Yes, it would be helpful to recall what she'd done before, wouldn't it?

10/10

debjunk

Wonder what their plan is?  I wish Severus could realize what he has with Septima is so much better than anything What's-her-name could have given him.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

I think part of him does, but it would mean admitting he was fundamentally wrong, LOL.  Thank you for the review!

Response from debjunk (Reviewer)

Yes, that's true.  And he would hate that, wouldn't he?  Although chalking things up to youth covers a lot of mistakes... like that snake on his arm.  LOL

10/10

debjunk

Hope it's relaxing. Anything that makes Dumbles cringe is ok with me.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

LOL... Dumbles is going to have his knickers well-twisted in a few chapters.  Thank you for the review!

10/10

Bettina

what a pleasant final scene. I wonder if the first question should really be "who is "they"?" or shouldn't they just enjoy their knowledge adn observe their daughter? They might discuss a bit if Renée's fate has been all that bad, if her upbringing (albeit Muggle) hadn't served her quite to her advantage.. It could lift sone guilt from them to come to this conclusion. 

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Thank you!

10/10

Bettina

what a pleasant final scene. I wonder if the first question should really be "who is "they"?" or shouldn't they just enjoy their knowledge adn observe their daughter? They might discuss a bit if Renée's fate has been all that bad, if her upbringing (albeit Muggle) hadn't served her quite to her advantage.. It could lift sone guilt from them to come to this conclusion. 

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Severus is sure that he has to find more answers so that he can ultimately undo the magic that affected Septima's memory. That may well finding out who did it and why. He's already decided, to some extent, that she may have been as well off away from the wizarding world as a child. Septima is still going to have some lingering issues due to the way her mind was altered.Thank you for the lovely review!

10/10

debjunk

Lovely that she knows almost everything now.  She knows the most important part; her daughter is alive and she is her friend.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Yes, it would be terrible if she discovered her daughter were someone who didn't really like her, wouldn't it? Thank you for the review!

10/10

HBAR

This must be so difficult for both Septima and Severus, each in their own way.  I do hope that all of this coming to light serves to bring them closer rather than causing a rift between them.  Time will tell ...  Then there is the matter of what, if anything, to tell Hermione.  We could be in for a long ride.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

They do need to be careful about what they say to their daughter. How will they explain it? We'll see.  Thank you for the review!

10/10

debjunk

Wow, now that's a breakthrough.  Was it Dumbledore back there in that memory?  huh?  Huh?  the man really deserves death.  Is it sixth year yet?

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Hee hee... sixth year can't come fast enough, can it? Dumbledore seems have his finger in a lot of pies, doesn't he?Thank you for the review!

10/10

debjunk

Awww, is that Hermione?  It's nice to see she's made some progress (Septima), but there's a ways to go.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

Spoilers! Yes, Septima is moving forward, one way or another. Thank you, again!

10/10

debjunk

Lovely chapter of understandings here.  I always admire Septima's willingness to take less than she gives, although I'm not sure that's a good thing.  :)

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

I guess it's a matter of getting less of what she wants versus getting nothing she wants. Things have a way of evening out eventually, though.  Thank you for the lovely review!

9/10

Bettina

Excellent update--as always! Is it Hermione/Renée or are you integrating a side plot? I'm looking forward also to hearing the reasoning why someone wants to leave the magical world at this point!Severus is being almost un-Snapeishly kind. doesn't it colour off on his teachign style by now?

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

In the back of my mind is a Snape who hates teaching, or perhaps takes a hateful approach to teaching, but is still loving to certain people. I look at the way he healed Draco in HBP.  There's such a tenderness in that moment that it's clear he's capable of being a different person when he chooses.By way of a non-spoiler, I'll say the person in the doorway arrives there directly from the canon.Thank you so much for the review!

10/10

sunny33

Oh noes! :0

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Quantum Mechanics)

It'll be ok, I promise!  Thank you!

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