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Ladder
ubiquirk912 Reviews | 7.45/10 (912 Ratings, 0 Likes, 311 Favorites )
Victory did not make life perfect, and two years on, the shock of surviving the war is finally starting to wear off. Waking to everyday realities, Hermione and Severus discover the delights and pains of living - all prompted by a ladder. HG/SS eventually, but HG/RW and SS/NT for the first bit. Multiple award winner.
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ubiquirk
Member Since 2006 | 10 Stories | Favorited by 212 | 89 Reviews Written | 1,629 Review Responses
I am a longtime fanfic fanatic, having entered the realm via Buffydom. One day I read a Willow/Severus crossover and I was hooked – on Snape that is! He's been in every HP story I've done so far.
I write in multiple fandoms on LJ, esp. BtVS and Firefly. If you're interested in reading my fic for other/crossover fandoms, it can be found at:
http://community.livejournal.com/ubific/
Reviews for Ladder
I just love the way you write Snape's POV. Not in the least bit sappy or OOC. Lovely chapter (though I think you mistyped 'signifier' instead of 'signified' for the object in Snape's language dialogue. It doesn't really detract from the chapter in any way, but little things like that always bother me when I write, so I thought I'd let you know). Anyway, very much looking forward to more!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! And thanks for the catch - I thought I'd fixed it everywhere but had only sorted the previous chapter!
I'm really glad that you liked the chapter and this characterization of Severus!
Why do I feel like this is the calm before the storm...Great as always!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! Ooo, I want to comment, but I also don't want to spoil anything! I'm really glad you liked it!
Oooh, the tension! It's killing me! ::waits eagerly for more::And yes, we can tell you are of the 'claw variety. ;)
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! The claw just comes out! I can't seem to help it.
I'm glad you're enjoying the story and the UST!
Naughty Severus and his even naughtier... wand. (whichever wand you wish to contemplate. lol)How is he able to control himself? Ok, the slytherin way can do so much, but the body can have a mind of its own at times. Cold shower time? hehehe!Great chapter... great writing, as usual. Cheers!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! You're right about his control, though I'm picturing lots of autoeroticism. (grins)
I'm really glad you enjoyed it - thanks for the comment on my writing!
I can't get enough either! I need more!!!
"The coloring of her skin indicates that she understands at least part of my intended implications, but possibly not all. After all, it is only recently that I have been able to admit to myself that I would, in fact, bind myself to her in more than a merely sexual way."
WOW! Oh yes, he's changed directions completely, hasn't he? Well, maybe not completely, but definitely a different direction than he was heading originally.
And now I must wait again? *whines* ... *pouts*
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! You've picked a key line - now, I only hope that the changes I had him going through in chapter 14, which covered a large amount of time in a short space, came through.
More soon!
Response from sshg316 (Reviewer)
Oh, I think the changes in him are definitely coming through. No worries there! :)
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
I'm worried that they might seem to just come out of nowhere! Sometimes I'm too subtle with things.
Response from sshg316 (Reviewer)
I think you're being just subtle enough. Perfect.
I love this chapter. What patience he has. What passion. It has been a year since the incident and he has continued to present her with intellectual enticements and inviting body language. What has she been doing with her personal relationship with Ron? Not that I care about Ron--actually he is one of the characters I love to hate. However, there must be some pulling away.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! Things with Ron do happen, but they're off-stage - you can see how much she thinks of him when around SS!
I'm glad you like it and find SS interesting!
Very enjoyable, I can't wait until Severus makes his move! Sorry for the delay for some reason I've been caught in a 'loop' and my updates led to blank pages. The Headmistress has been wonderful, hopefully it is solved. See you next chapter!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's great that you review whenever it is that you get to! I'm really glad that you enjoyed the chapter. The next one should be up soon!
Ooops, I had to come back to rate this the 5 stars it deserves. LOL Forgot on my previous review.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks again!!!
I love it. The UST is great. And I'm thrilled he's actually having feelings other than lust for HG . Of course I love his lustful thoughts about her too. Sexy and erotic. Great job.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you like the developing emotions - I think they're important for a real relationship. But he's not going to stop thinking about sex! (grins)
This is a great storie. And unlike other writers u update yours often. Thanks.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story and the update schedule!
Ooh, they're going to have a 'breakthrough'...Excellent as always. Severus is so subtle and sexy here.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! A 'breakthough' - (laughs) - that's a great way of putting it!
I'm really glad you liked it and that you're enjoying this depiction of Severus!
Their?scientific discussions are very genuine. Your background shows nicely in them and it is very satisfying to see a real, working discussion between a Potion Master and his former Know-It-All. Moreover, Snape's decision to bewitch her mind in order to ensnare her senses is so very Snape. I love it to the core...
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's so good to hear that the science is believable and comprehensible! As a scientist, I think I have a good feel for the former but I always wonder about the latter.
Yes, SS has picked a very clever approach. I'm so glad you like it!
Well, Professors Granger and Snape are certainly making progress on um, various fronts. (The bit of business with the rope was amazingly effective!) So I'll ask (and probably be the hundredth person to do so): How's that engagement going? Has she fended off ten attempts to do a bridal gown fitting, or what?
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad that you liked the part with the rope! I'm trying to put in symbolism where I can, and it's good to know that it resonates with readers.
As for the engagement - a lot of things are happening off-stage, but she certainly doesn't think about it when she's with SS - hmmm.
I want more!! hahahaYou're evil to make me wait!*wink*I'm hooked on this fic... you know that, right?
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! (laughs evilly) I have you just where I want you!
Seriously, I'm really glad you like it!
Response from DeeMichelle (Reviewer)
hahawell... I'll stay until it's over!!Suffering from beta!envy... she gets to read it before the rest of us.
It's been a while since I last reviewed, I suspect, but this is the story I look to be updated every time I come to this site. More please!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I love to hear from you whenever you get the chance. I'm really glad you're enjoying the story and look forward to it that much!
Aww! What a horrible place to leave us! Grrr....I am gonna go crazy until the next chapter, lol. Great job!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you like it so much you can't wait for the next chapter!
oh my, oh my, this is a wonderful story!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you find it wonderful!
I have never had so much fun climbing a "ladder" !!!Now if Hermione can just throw Ron off whatever rung he is holding desperately onto...
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad I've made climbing fun for you!
(laughing) As for Ron, keep reading!
Yowza.
Saturday's update cannot come soon enough.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and found it meltingly hot! Updates should be back to normal next week.
Response from Keladry Lupin (Reviewer)
I'm still concerned, mind you, but between the rope and the something new in his eyes ....
Yup. Yowza.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
The rope - I'm trying for symbolism w/o it meaning bondage (hopefully!).
That rope, and her control of it, is an amazingly compelling image. ::nudges Hermione to continue with that thought about conversations with Ron::
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! Yes, now I'm guilty of purposefully trying to put in symbolism - and you thought dramatic irony was all you'd have to deal with (evil laugh)!
I wonder if Severus realizes the change in him...I'm looking forward to his POV.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! What he's thinking is coming up next - let me know if you can see him changing!
I try really hard to avoid WIPS...because if they are good I crave updates like a drug. And this is good. I kept seeing the update notices on the hg_ssdigest, and I finally had to give in. It's a wonderfully well-written story and I find myself completely caught up in the 'verse that you have created. I will bravely endeavor not to bug you for updates...but I won't make any promises.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! Welcome to the climb! Thank you for commenting on my writing and where I've taken this post-HBP world. I'm really glad you're enjoying the story!
Who is reeling who in now? Much like me, you seem to have both Severus and Hermione caught hook, line and sinker.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! Ah, you may be on to me! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story!
Clearly, Hermione's so attracted to Snape that I'm astonished that she remembers having a fiancé. I like how you raise the tension between Snape and Hermione with each chapter.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! (looks up from tightening the screws some more) What - me? (innocent look)
Yes, SS can be very distracting! (grins)
So happy to be back and have an update! This is the story I missed most. It seems Hermione is finally glimpsing a bit of truth, no? Looking forward to the next installment! Thanks for your work.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you like my story that much! I'm very flattered. She does seem to be twigging! More soon.