16: Rung Seven - Him
Chapter 16 of 27
ubiquirkVictory did not make life perfect, and two years on, the shock of surviving the war is finally starting to wear off. Waking to everyday realities, Hermione and Severus discover the delights and pains of living - all prompted by a ladder. HG/SS eventually, but HG/RW and SS/NT for the first bit.
ReviewedDisclaimer: Not mine. No money. Special thanks go to JKR for sanctioning HP fanfic.
Gobs of thanks go to my beta Southern Witch 69 and to my Brit-picker the amazing Saracen77.
16: Rung Seven – Him
June 30th, 3:05 pm
I glance at my clock, wondering where Hermione could be. Having specifically requested this meeting time in order to remind her of our dalliance a year ago, I can only hope her Gryffindor bravado does not fail her.
I want her to remember that occasion. I want her to dwell upon it. As I do.
The sounds she makes – breathy little gasps that send blood straight to my cock.
Every week of our summer separation, I have extracted that episode and viewed it in my Pensieve. Yet doing so is hardly adequate. I may be able to review how she sounds, but there is minimal visual stimulation due to the skirt of the red dress. Indeed, all of my other senses are decidedly shortchanged.
Her taste – Merlin, her smell.
They linger as a faint remembrance – too faint.
A knock sounds at the door, and I adjust my robes to hide my erection before I open it.
“Professor Granger.”
“Professor Snape. I apologize for keeping you waiting.”
Her formal robes part to show a hint of red fabric, and my breathing fluctuates. It is not the same garment as last year, but the color is amazingly similar in hue and tone. With hair twisted into a complicated chignon, she is lovely.
“It is of no matter.” I struggle to prevent ardor from coloring my voice. “I merely spent the time reviewing the notes of our last meeting.”
Once she has taken her seat, I move into the one beside her, making sure to graze her knee with my own. Her robes fall further apart, and I contemplate her dress while pondering my cock’s seemingly conditioned response to her in that color.
My erection’s plight only worsens as the combined scents of her skin and petitgrain surround me.
She smells divine.
Her words recall me to the meeting’s obvious purpose. “Since we last met, I have run a variety of equation sets to determine if adding moonstone for its calming properties would be beneficial.”
“And?”
“Short answer – yes. Long answer – the best results were obtained when three powdered pieces are added between steps five and six of the traditional brewing process. Does that make sense?”
I ponder the Arithmantic results in light of what occurs during that stage of brewing, making sure to adopt my new-found, finger-tapping tic before replying. “Yes. It is early enough in the process that the moonstone can exert a stabilizing influence on the later, more volatile ingredients, yet after the aconite has finished reacting with the scarab beetles. It makes perfect sense.”
Capturing her eyes, I find myself reacting to her pleased smile with one of my own.
How very lovely.
Her eyes appear transfixed as we continue to regard one another for a stretched period of time; eventually, she glances away. “Well, good. That’s sorted then.”
“Indeed. I will factor in your latest finding and brew the necessary batches by next month’s full moon. The arrangements with Healer Shoredom at St. Mungo’s are fully in place – eight victims of Greyback are willing to test our potion’s efficacy. How fares the design of the questionnaire they will make use of?”
“I’ve added in your two suggestions, so it’s ready. We should have them fill it out this month when they take their regular Wolfsbane in order to have a base-line reading to compare our potion against.”
Such intelligence, as always.
“Precisely.”
“Any ideas as to what you’d like for us to do next?”
Why, yes, my dear. I do have quite a few ideas as to what I would prefer for us to do next.
My erection, which had subsided somewhat, twitches with renewed interest.
Refocusing on the immediate task at hand, however, I answer, “I posit that we have gone as far as possible at this juncture with alterations affecting the ingredients alone. It is now time to switch our focus to the incantations involved.”
“That sounds reasonable. Are there any specific areas you’d like to look at adjusting?”
“I had something rather more ambitious in mind, if you will indulge me.”
“Go on.”
“It is a well known fact that all language is metaphorical with every word representing something that it is not.”
Her response comes more quickly than might be expected upon being confronted with such a drastic change of topic. “Oh, yes! That’s why we can have different languages. A rose by any other name actually does smell as sweet whether we label it using the English word or the French, Japanese, Russian, etc.”
She is truly brilliant.
“Precisely. In the Muggle world, that is the extent of the relationship between the word, the signifier, and the object it is meant to indicate, the signified. Magic, however, utilizes a person’s association of the metaphorical word with a concrete object to manifest said object. It cements the formerly tenuous and arbitrary bond between signified and signifier. Therefore, I cast Incarcerous,” I pause to wave my wand, “and rope, i.e., incarceration, manifests.”
Said rope grips my left wrist. And not just any form of rope – I visualized a very specific silken variation, which is highly pleasing to the touch. A tiny flick of my wand and the other end slithers into her right hand.
She unconsciously caresses the braided silk resting across her palm for a few moments. Then, flushes slightly when her eyes dart its length.
The coloring of her skin indicates that she understands at least part of my intended implications, but possibly not all. After all, it is only recently that I have been able to admit to myself that I would, in fact, bind myself to her in more than a merely sexual way.
Time appears to elongate anomalously as we continue to observe one another. I count her every breath, every blink, every caress of the rope – seven, five, eleven.
My observation is disrupted by a look of bewilderment flickering across her face.
I continue my proposal in an attempt to forestall any awkwardness. “I am propounding, if feasible, that we use the Arithmatical system you have developed to aid in creating entirely new incantations for brewing Wolfsbane.”
The contemplatively inwards turn of her gaze is quickly followed by an assault upon her lower lip.
To taste her!
Suddenly, the expression she turns upon me is once more intent. Eagerness graces her features.
She continues to hold me bound.
AN: Did I mention that I’m a Ravenclaw?
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I love FireFly!!! and this story
I really liked this story. I usually don't like having to read multiple perspectives of the same event, but I really liked it in this story and there wasn't a lot of repetitive dialogue to shift through.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the fic, even with it's repeating perspectives!
You are a very well-read author.I think endeavoring outside of fan-fiction would be greatly beneficial for you. As far as most readers only wanting one person's POV, I think the chapter's (In between rungs # and #) were the most interesting, as it culminated with a sense of togetherness. It was a little off-putting at times to re-live the same scene twice when it could have been accomplished by putting both characters perspectives in the same scene, but you're the author- and a good one at that. I am glad this story ranks in the tens, it deserves it and otherwise I may not have found it. Might I suggest an addendum or epilogue?/ While the low-level angst was not of the adolscent variety it would be wonderful to have just a little more completion with their relationship and finding the eventual outcome of the Wolfsbane project. I also appreciated Severus not being labeled a 'disgusting pariah-git' that no one would respect or want. I think it was wonderful that people for the most part accepted him and that he had an intimate physical relationship with Tonks- showing he was not at all repulsive. I enjoyed the Relaxed Severus. :-D You may have him back now, I've showered him and wiped him clean. *smirks* Kudos on an excellent story.
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Thanks! It's wonderful to hear you enjoyed the story! Since the form was experimental, I don't plan on writing another story like this with repeating scenes. I'm sorry to say that I don't beleive in epilogues or having things tied up too neatly. This way, readers get to do some of the work, imagining what they think follows from here. I'm so glad you liked this SS noetheless!
Good. He's good and he knows it, BUT he's not taking everything for granted.
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Thanks! It's wonderful to hear you're enjoying the story and the way SS is pulling out his Slytherin cunning!
Oh I do like Snape's new wicked, wicked ways. Such a man one can certainly learn to love. Delicious! ^_^Weasley who?
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Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it the chapter and SS's wicked ways!
I found this story a couple days ago on OWL.tauri. Supposedly complete, but really only a few chapters. I'm so glad I tried googling it, and so found its complete version. Excellent. I hope you're still reading reviews. I see you wrote this over a year ago. I'll be sure to read your other creations. Thankyou.
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Thanks! I just saw your review there, so I'm glad you're no longer frustrated with not finding the end of it. I'm very glad you enjoyed!
I loved your story....so very hot, passionate and tender at the same time!You are a gifted writer!
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Thanks! It's been so wonderful to read your reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and found it hot, passionate and tender!
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Thanks! It's been so wonderful to read your reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and found it hot, passionate and tender!
So very poignant!
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Thanks! It's lovely to hear that you found this chapter moving!
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Thanks! It's lovely to hear that you found this chapter moving!
I like the characterization of Snape very much! Well done!
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Thanks! I'm so happy that you like this characterization of him!
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Thanks! I'm so happy that you like this characterization of him!
This chapter was so touching. You are a very good writer and I'm glad I found this story well after it was finished because I really don't think I'd be able to wait for chapter updates!
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Thanks! I'm so glad you said that, because I did write it with about 2 chapters coming out a week, so I don't know what it's like to read it all at once!
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Thanks! I'm so glad you said that, because I did write it with about 2 chapters coming out a week, so I don't know what it's like to read it all at once!
So well written and so witty!
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Thanks! It's great to hear that you like the writing and the humor!
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Thanks! It's great to hear that you like the writing and the humor!
Just stumbled upon this juicy story this afternoon! I laughed so hard...Can't write much more as Chapter 2 is calling me!
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Thanks! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!
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Thanks! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!
A very hot and delicious story. I enjoyed it immensely. :)
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Thanks! It's wonderful to hear that you liked the story and found it hot!
I want more science !!! But otherwise great...
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Thanks! I'm really glad you liked the chapter! (And you're the only person who's said that about the science - thanks!)
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... Now THAT was worth waiting all those rungs for!
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Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and found it worth the wait!
Oh my! I really want to be her. Lucky girl. Lovely story well done. Hugs
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Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter!
I gave your story a five, I loved the way you gave her point of view and his from the same scene. This was a really hot story from the first moment on the ladder to when they finally consumated their burgeoning relationship. Can't wait to see how this progresses and hope to read your next chapter soon.
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Thanks! I'm really glad you''re enjoying the story and the use of the alternating POVs! The next chapter soon!
AHHH. Ahem.
That was amazing. Well worth the wait :)
I love this line: He smirks. “And priced accordingly. You were so convinced of this evening’s outcome?” That hopeful.
Mmm, I must admit, the smut is not at all disappointing. In fact, the very opposite :) Very sensual and well written.
So, well done! I await the next chapter! :) Severus' POV, hmm.
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Thanks! I'm so very glad you liked the chapter and that line! It's also good to hear that you found it worth the wait and well written!
Wow, just wow...
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Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
I loved it!! That was the perfect scene after all the build-up. I can't wait for Severus' view.
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Thanks! I'm glad you lliked the it! SS up next!
So good!!!
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Thanks! I'm so very glad you lliked the it!
Well, if that wasn't the perfect climax of the story. Beautifully done. It's so much more satisfying (bad word choice, I know) when the tension slowly rises and finally explodes.
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Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! And you're right - the story does follow the pattern of foreplay followed by orgasm-inducing sex hopefully!
Well worth the 25 chapters of foreplay. I don't even smoke, but I need a cigarette. That was intense, passionate, and extremely intimate.
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Thanks! I'm glad you liked the chapter and though it ample pay off for all the foreplay!
Gods, is it hot in here or what *fans self*....(I've got to stop reading this stuff at work)! Excellent, excellent, excellent!
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Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and found it hot! (yeah - smut at work induces squirming)
Love it! Love it! Love it!!!
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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!