5: Rung Three - Her
Chapter 5 of 27
ubiquirkVictory did not make life perfect, and two years on, the shock of surviving the war is finally starting to wear off. Waking to everyday realities, Hermione and Severus discover the delights and pains of living - all prompted by a ladder. HG/SS eventually, but HG/RW and SS/NT for the first bit.
ReviewedDisclaimer: Not mine. No money. Special thanks go to JKR for sanctioning HP fanfic.
Gobs of thanks go to my beta Southern Witch 69 and to my Brit-picker the amazing Saracen77.
5: Rung Three – Her
June 30th, 8:05 pm
He doesn’t see me, and I’m glad.
I am glad, right?
Making up for my missed chance from earlier, I look at him. It’s been a while since I’ve seen him. I may be friends with Tonks, but she doesn’t exactly bring him ‘round the pub. He looks better than he ever did at Hogwarts, but that could be because he no longer wears body-obscuring robes. He’s even lost the frock coat for the night, donning a silver and green fronted waistcoat over starched white cotton. I can finally appreciate his lean build.
No – it’s more than that. His face appears more relaxed, the lines of care he’d worn so harshly during the war look softer, his eyes and mouth less pinched.
The change extends to his body – the shoulders don’t ride so high, his movements appear even more fluid. In fact, when Tonks runs at him to hug him, he catches her and spins her lightly, twirling her laughter throughout the room. He even smiles.
Their physicality makes me uncomfortable.
Uncomfortable or jealous? Am I jealous? And if so, jealous over what? We had a … an encounter of mistaken identity. That’s all.
Ron chooses this moment to grab my wrist and drag me into the room proper.
“Snape,” he’s calling, and I wonder when he decided they were on such friendly terms. Whatever’s in the punch must really be something.
Snape appears puzzled by it as well and decorates his reply with a half sneer. “Mr. Weasley, to what do I owe the pleasure?”
If I weren’t so mortified, I’d laugh – he makes pleasure sound like the direst torture.
Why shouldn’t he – he’s good at combining the two, or have you forgotten already?
I blush fiercely, feeling the heat engulf not only my face, but my neck and décolletage as well.
He turns to me, and the sneer changes to a smirk, a smirk with eyebrow.
Ron continues. “See, it’s like this: Hermione has a headache, and it’s not only the Victory Celebration tonight, it’s also our anniversary. So help a bloke out, will you, and give us a spot of headache potion.”
The look on Snape’s face turns thoughtful, and even as he answers Ron, he keeps his eyes on me. “Ah, a headache – we all know how infamous those can be.” His tone is sardonic, and the eyebrow arches higher.
I blush even hotter, darker.
“I will see what I have.” He disengages from Tonks and moves towards a front hall crowded with overflowing coat racks borrowed from Grimmauld Place, the Burrow, and my flat. Their restless shuffles can barely be heard above the noise from the next room.
I only know all of this because Ron continues to pull me by my left arm as he trots after Snape.
Turning abruptly, Snape puts a stop to Ron’s forward momentum by raising a hand. “Mr. Weasley, undoubtedly, you have a plethora of family members to attend to. If you would leave Ms. Granger in my hands, I promise I will strive to return her to you shortly pain free.”
Ron breaks into a smile and raises an arm to cuff Snape’s shoulder, but it waivers without making contact as some part of his brain belatedly realizes that might be taking things a bit too far. “Thanks, Snape. Now that the war’s over, you’re an alright sort of bloke.”
Another eyebrow. “Why, Mr. Weasley, such high praise from you wipes the slate clean of the condemnations of my life.”
I fight to stifle my snort of laughter, turning it into a cough.
Pounding my back, Ron smiles again, this time a little unsurely, before turning to kiss my lips gently. “I hope you feel better soon, Mione,” he whispers.
I sigh a bit as he walks away – how can he move so quickly from oaf-like to sweet? It’s one of his most endearing qualities and one of the first things I loved about him.
Then I turn to face the intensity that is Severus Snape.
I meet the sneer on his face with a glare of my own, and we stand deadlocked like this for what seems ages, but must only be a few minutes.
I have no bloody clue what to say.
He breaks the silence. “Let us discontinue this farce. Unless, that is, Weasley’s inane Quidditch babble has truly given you a headache.”
“You leave Ron out of this. He’s a good man and doesn’t deserve such derision.”
“A good man, you say?” He moves closer, and his voice drops to a husky whisper. “Just how good is he?”
Of all the nerve. As if he were so wonderful.
Oh, but he is – at least at that.
I give myself a mental shake and purposefully respond only to the surface meaning of his words to more fully reject the dampness growing between my thighs. “He’s kind. He’s caring. He’s loyal. He’s –”
He interrupts, “You mistake the connotation of my words, Ms. Granger. The, shall we say, double entendre as it were.”
I’m gritting my teeth to keep from replying. If there’s one thing I’ve learned in the competitive world of magical graduate studies, it’s if you want the ruddy bastard you’re fighting to drown himself, you have to give him time to cook up a large enough cauldron.
He takes the bait and steps closer to continue. “I must admit I am curious. During our little bout of mistaken identity this afternoon, you reacted like a woman in dire need of my attentions. If Weasley were as good –”
This time I stop the conversation – with the crack my hand makes connecting with his cheek.
He backs slightly away and stands at his full height. His eyes flash dangerously, but a small smile pulls at his lips. “Touché, Ms. Granger.”
Brushing past me, he leaves the front hall, and I stand, waiting to get my breathing under control, trying to organize my chaotic thoughts.
All I feel is the stinging of my hand.
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I love FireFly!!! and this story
I really liked this story. I usually don't like having to read multiple perspectives of the same event, but I really liked it in this story and there wasn't a lot of repetitive dialogue to shift through.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the fic, even with it's repeating perspectives!
You are a very well-read author.I think endeavoring outside of fan-fiction would be greatly beneficial for you. As far as most readers only wanting one person's POV, I think the chapter's (In between rungs # and #) were the most interesting, as it culminated with a sense of togetherness. It was a little off-putting at times to re-live the same scene twice when it could have been accomplished by putting both characters perspectives in the same scene, but you're the author- and a good one at that. I am glad this story ranks in the tens, it deserves it and otherwise I may not have found it. Might I suggest an addendum or epilogue?/ While the low-level angst was not of the adolscent variety it would be wonderful to have just a little more completion with their relationship and finding the eventual outcome of the Wolfsbane project. I also appreciated Severus not being labeled a 'disgusting pariah-git' that no one would respect or want. I think it was wonderful that people for the most part accepted him and that he had an intimate physical relationship with Tonks- showing he was not at all repulsive. I enjoyed the Relaxed Severus. :-D You may have him back now, I've showered him and wiped him clean. *smirks* Kudos on an excellent story.
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Thanks! It's wonderful to hear you enjoyed the story! Since the form was experimental, I don't plan on writing another story like this with repeating scenes. I'm sorry to say that I don't beleive in epilogues or having things tied up too neatly. This way, readers get to do some of the work, imagining what they think follows from here. I'm so glad you liked this SS noetheless!
Good. He's good and he knows it, BUT he's not taking everything for granted.
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Thanks! It's wonderful to hear you're enjoying the story and the way SS is pulling out his Slytherin cunning!
Oh I do like Snape's new wicked, wicked ways. Such a man one can certainly learn to love. Delicious! ^_^Weasley who?
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Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it the chapter and SS's wicked ways!
I found this story a couple days ago on OWL.tauri. Supposedly complete, but really only a few chapters. I'm so glad I tried googling it, and so found its complete version. Excellent. I hope you're still reading reviews. I see you wrote this over a year ago. I'll be sure to read your other creations. Thankyou.
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Thanks! I just saw your review there, so I'm glad you're no longer frustrated with not finding the end of it. I'm very glad you enjoyed!
I loved your story....so very hot, passionate and tender at the same time!You are a gifted writer!
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Thanks! It's been so wonderful to read your reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and found it hot, passionate and tender!
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Thanks! It's been so wonderful to read your reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and found it hot, passionate and tender!
So very poignant!
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Thanks! It's lovely to hear that you found this chapter moving!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's lovely to hear that you found this chapter moving!
I like the characterization of Snape very much! Well done!
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Thanks! I'm so happy that you like this characterization of him!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so happy that you like this characterization of him!
This chapter was so touching. You are a very good writer and I'm glad I found this story well after it was finished because I really don't think I'd be able to wait for chapter updates!
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Thanks! I'm so glad you said that, because I did write it with about 2 chapters coming out a week, so I don't know what it's like to read it all at once!
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Thanks! I'm so glad you said that, because I did write it with about 2 chapters coming out a week, so I don't know what it's like to read it all at once!
So well written and so witty!
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Thanks! It's great to hear that you like the writing and the humor!
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Thanks! It's great to hear that you like the writing and the humor!
Just stumbled upon this juicy story this afternoon! I laughed so hard...Can't write much more as Chapter 2 is calling me!
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Thanks! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!
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Thanks! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!
A very hot and delicious story. I enjoyed it immensely. :)
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Thanks! It's wonderful to hear that you liked the story and found it hot!
I want more science !!! But otherwise great...
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Thanks! I'm really glad you liked the chapter! (And you're the only person who's said that about the science - thanks!)
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... Now THAT was worth waiting all those rungs for!
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Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and found it worth the wait!
Oh my! I really want to be her. Lucky girl. Lovely story well done. Hugs
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Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter!
I gave your story a five, I loved the way you gave her point of view and his from the same scene. This was a really hot story from the first moment on the ladder to when they finally consumated their burgeoning relationship. Can't wait to see how this progresses and hope to read your next chapter soon.
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Thanks! I'm really glad you''re enjoying the story and the use of the alternating POVs! The next chapter soon!
AHHH. Ahem.
That was amazing. Well worth the wait :)
I love this line: He smirks. “And priced accordingly. You were so convinced of this evening’s outcome?” That hopeful.
Mmm, I must admit, the smut is not at all disappointing. In fact, the very opposite :) Very sensual and well written.
So, well done! I await the next chapter! :) Severus' POV, hmm.
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Thanks! I'm so very glad you liked the chapter and that line! It's also good to hear that you found it worth the wait and well written!
Wow, just wow...
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Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
I loved it!! That was the perfect scene after all the build-up. I can't wait for Severus' view.
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Thanks! I'm glad you lliked the it! SS up next!
So good!!!
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Thanks! I'm so very glad you lliked the it!
Well, if that wasn't the perfect climax of the story. Beautifully done. It's so much more satisfying (bad word choice, I know) when the tension slowly rises and finally explodes.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! And you're right - the story does follow the pattern of foreplay followed by orgasm-inducing sex hopefully!
Well worth the 25 chapters of foreplay. I don't even smoke, but I need a cigarette. That was intense, passionate, and extremely intimate.
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Thanks! I'm glad you liked the chapter and though it ample pay off for all the foreplay!
Gods, is it hot in here or what *fans self*....(I've got to stop reading this stuff at work)! Excellent, excellent, excellent!
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Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and found it hot! (yeah - smut at work induces squirming)
Love it! Love it! Love it!!!
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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!