11: Rung Five - Him
Chapter 11 of 27
ubiquirkVictory did not make life perfect, and two years on, the shock of surviving the war is finally starting to wear off. Waking to everyday realities, Hermione and Severus discover the delights and pains of living - all prompted by a ladder. HG/SS eventually, but HG/RW and SS/NT for the first bit.
ReviewedDisclaimer: Not mine. No money. Special thanks go to JKR for sanctioning HP fanfic.
Gobs of thanks go to my beta Southern Witch 69 and to my Brit-picker the amazing Saracen77.
11: Rung Five – Him
August 31st, 7:55 am
I have waited until the very last possible moment to return. If I could have arranged to make it even later, I would have, but there is the staff meeting. It is also inescapable that Slughorn will have left the potions stores in a state of disarray.
The castle taunts me by appearing much as it always has – as if the past three years never occurred and Albus stands waiting to greet me at the entrance as he did so many times before.
This time, there is no one.
Perhaps Minerva is cognizant that a substitute would only exacerbate my mourning for Albus. Perhaps she realizes that different, in this case, is preferable, better.
Walking the stone corridors, I see no one – even the ghosts are absent.
I enter the staff room a few minutes early and am assailed by an enthusiastic Minerva, who captures my arm.
“Severus! Oh, Severus, you don’t know what it means to have you back.”
I should be gracious. After all, it is her good will that keeps me from a pauper’s existence. But the pain runs deep, and walking these halls reminds me of Albus at every turn. “No, Minerva. It is I who am sure you have no idea what it means for me to be back.”
Her smile fades and her eyes turn to something beyond this room. “Just so. Just so.”
To buffer the effect of my words, I briefly touch her hand where it rests upon my forearm, and her awareness snaps back to the present just as her smile snaps back into place.
Eyes flickering to the doorway behind me, she gives me one last pat before disengaging and turning to greet the newest arrival. “Dorta! You don’t know how pleased I am to have someone with your reputation teaching DADA this year. Why Durmstrang ever let such a fine catch go is beyond me.”
Her voice fades from my notice as I enter further into the room and note that Granger has not yet arrived. She was either going to be here early to make a bold statement of fearless indifference, or she was going to avoid me for as long as possible. It appears the latter scenario is the case.
Having planned for both, I react accordingly and move to the far end of the table and lay claim to a seat. I cast a subtle Deterrence Charm on the chair beside me – it is similar to those used to keep Muggles away from magical places. This one, however, is tuned to discourage anyone not Granger.
Colleagues continue to filter into the room with Minerva greeting each individually. Finally, with one last glance towards an empty doorway, Minerva begins the meeting. All chairs are occupied but the magicked one to my left at the end of the table. Perfect.
“I would like to welcome you all to Hogwarts. We’re very proud to be opening this term with such a fine lot of teaching staff as I see here before me. Let me begin by introducing …” Minerva’s speech fades into the background – I have heard similar for the last twenty years and could recite one extemporaneously if ever called upon to do so.
I ponder how excessively tardy Granger is proving. Her perfectionism must truly be warring with her desire to avoid me. Excellent. A flustered opponent is one fully caught up in the game.
Eventually, she enters in a rush while Minerva is still seeing to the introductions. Her cheeks are flushed, her breathing quick, her hair rather wild. Her pace barely falters when she sees that the only available seat is beside me, and she settles into it swiftly.
Once she has prepared her writing implements, she worries her lower lip, seemingly lost in thought. A look of realization crosses her face, and her return to awareness leads immediately to her attention affixing upon my hands as I add milk to my tea. I slow my actions, drawing out the slow swirl of the spoon, wrapping my fingers around the cup, threading my middle finger through the handle.
The finger that was in her.
Her eyes are rather glazed when they first meet mine, but awareness soon flares, and she looks quickly away and shifts in her seat.
Interesting – is she excited?
She looks towards me again. I quirk one eyebrow as both reply and query. Flush intensified, her next restless movements cause her knee to brush mine. My cock hardens.
Indeed, she is interested.
My lips twitch, and I do nothing to hide my grin. It is time to intensify matters.
The first bite of éclair is perfectly normal. Her shoulders relax slightly. The second bite is more calculated – I ensure that an adequate amount of chocolate coats my lower lip as I maneuver the confection away from my mouth. Slowly, ever so slowly – seduction never being served by haste – I lap at the sauce and am rewarded by dual delights: its rich taste on my tongue and her reaction. The dilation of her pupils, the quickening of her breath, the flush staining her cheeks.
She is beautiful when aroused. What would she look like while riding my cock, while spread under me, while climaxing?
She touches her cheek, and my erection twitches against the soft cotton of my pants. I do nothing to hide my pleasure.
Perhaps it will not be so long before I have another bed partner.
Her eyes jerk away, and my attention follows hers to refocus on Minerva. “… will be our new Arithmancy Master. She is a Hogwarts alumnus and a distinguished war hero.” Minerva pauses to bestow a smile of approval on Granger. “But on an even happier note, allow me to lead us all in congratulating Professor Granger on her engagement to another of our young war heroes, Ronald Weasley.”
Bloody, fucking hell! How could she even conceive of such a thing?
She busies herself with accepting the congratulations of the other staff members.
My molars ache in protest, but I find myself unable to relax my jaw.
By the time she turns to me, I am able to school my features somewhat. I am not, however, able to keep my tone from displaying trenchant sardonicism. “Congratulations, Professor Granger. Although it is a pity that after having endeavored for so long to obtain this specific appellation that you would relinquish it so quickly.”
It is Minerva who answers. “Why, Severus, whoever said she was going to change her last name?”
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I love FireFly!!! and this story
I really liked this story. I usually don't like having to read multiple perspectives of the same event, but I really liked it in this story and there wasn't a lot of repetitive dialogue to shift through.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the fic, even with it's repeating perspectives!
You are a very well-read author.I think endeavoring outside of fan-fiction would be greatly beneficial for you. As far as most readers only wanting one person's POV, I think the chapter's (In between rungs # and #) were the most interesting, as it culminated with a sense of togetherness. It was a little off-putting at times to re-live the same scene twice when it could have been accomplished by putting both characters perspectives in the same scene, but you're the author- and a good one at that. I am glad this story ranks in the tens, it deserves it and otherwise I may not have found it. Might I suggest an addendum or epilogue?/ While the low-level angst was not of the adolscent variety it would be wonderful to have just a little more completion with their relationship and finding the eventual outcome of the Wolfsbane project. I also appreciated Severus not being labeled a 'disgusting pariah-git' that no one would respect or want. I think it was wonderful that people for the most part accepted him and that he had an intimate physical relationship with Tonks- showing he was not at all repulsive. I enjoyed the Relaxed Severus. :-D You may have him back now, I've showered him and wiped him clean. *smirks* Kudos on an excellent story.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's wonderful to hear you enjoyed the story! Since the form was experimental, I don't plan on writing another story like this with repeating scenes. I'm sorry to say that I don't beleive in epilogues or having things tied up too neatly. This way, readers get to do some of the work, imagining what they think follows from here. I'm so glad you liked this SS noetheless!
Good. He's good and he knows it, BUT he's not taking everything for granted.
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Thanks! It's wonderful to hear you're enjoying the story and the way SS is pulling out his Slytherin cunning!
Oh I do like Snape's new wicked, wicked ways. Such a man one can certainly learn to love. Delicious! ^_^Weasley who?
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Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it the chapter and SS's wicked ways!
I found this story a couple days ago on OWL.tauri. Supposedly complete, but really only a few chapters. I'm so glad I tried googling it, and so found its complete version. Excellent. I hope you're still reading reviews. I see you wrote this over a year ago. I'll be sure to read your other creations. Thankyou.
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Thanks! I just saw your review there, so I'm glad you're no longer frustrated with not finding the end of it. I'm very glad you enjoyed!
I loved your story....so very hot, passionate and tender at the same time!You are a gifted writer!
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Thanks! It's been so wonderful to read your reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and found it hot, passionate and tender!
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Thanks! It's been so wonderful to read your reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and found it hot, passionate and tender!
So very poignant!
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Thanks! It's lovely to hear that you found this chapter moving!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's lovely to hear that you found this chapter moving!
I like the characterization of Snape very much! Well done!
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Thanks! I'm so happy that you like this characterization of him!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so happy that you like this characterization of him!
This chapter was so touching. You are a very good writer and I'm glad I found this story well after it was finished because I really don't think I'd be able to wait for chapter updates!
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Thanks! I'm so glad you said that, because I did write it with about 2 chapters coming out a week, so I don't know what it's like to read it all at once!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you said that, because I did write it with about 2 chapters coming out a week, so I don't know what it's like to read it all at once!
So well written and so witty!
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Thanks! It's great to hear that you like the writing and the humor!
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Thanks! It's great to hear that you like the writing and the humor!
Just stumbled upon this juicy story this afternoon! I laughed so hard...Can't write much more as Chapter 2 is calling me!
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Thanks! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!
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Thanks! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!
A very hot and delicious story. I enjoyed it immensely. :)
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Thanks! It's wonderful to hear that you liked the story and found it hot!
I want more science !!! But otherwise great...
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Thanks! I'm really glad you liked the chapter! (And you're the only person who's said that about the science - thanks!)
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... Now THAT was worth waiting all those rungs for!
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Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and found it worth the wait!
Oh my! I really want to be her. Lucky girl. Lovely story well done. Hugs
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Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter!
I gave your story a five, I loved the way you gave her point of view and his from the same scene. This was a really hot story from the first moment on the ladder to when they finally consumated their burgeoning relationship. Can't wait to see how this progresses and hope to read your next chapter soon.
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Thanks! I'm really glad you''re enjoying the story and the use of the alternating POVs! The next chapter soon!
AHHH. Ahem.
That was amazing. Well worth the wait :)
I love this line: He smirks. “And priced accordingly. You were so convinced of this evening’s outcome?” That hopeful.
Mmm, I must admit, the smut is not at all disappointing. In fact, the very opposite :) Very sensual and well written.
So, well done! I await the next chapter! :) Severus' POV, hmm.
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Thanks! I'm so very glad you liked the chapter and that line! It's also good to hear that you found it worth the wait and well written!
Wow, just wow...
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Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
I loved it!! That was the perfect scene after all the build-up. I can't wait for Severus' view.
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Thanks! I'm glad you lliked the it! SS up next!
So good!!!
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Thanks! I'm so very glad you lliked the it!
Well, if that wasn't the perfect climax of the story. Beautifully done. It's so much more satisfying (bad word choice, I know) when the tension slowly rises and finally explodes.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! And you're right - the story does follow the pattern of foreplay followed by orgasm-inducing sex hopefully!
Well worth the 25 chapters of foreplay. I don't even smoke, but I need a cigarette. That was intense, passionate, and extremely intimate.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the chapter and though it ample pay off for all the foreplay!
Gods, is it hot in here or what *fans self*....(I've got to stop reading this stuff at work)! Excellent, excellent, excellent!
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Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and found it hot! (yeah - smut at work induces squirming)
Love it! Love it! Love it!!!
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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!