2: Rung One - Him
Chapter 2 of 27
ubiquirkVictory did not make life perfect, and two years on, the shock of surviving the war is finally starting to wear off. Waking to everyday realities, Hermione and Severus discover the delights and pains of living - all prompted by a ladder. HG/SS eventually, but HG/RW and SS/NT for the first bit.
ReviewedDisclaimer: Not mine. No money. Special thanks go to JKR for sanctioning HP fanfic.
Gobs of thanks go to my beta Southern Witch 69 and to my Brit-picker the amazing Saracen77.
More thanks go to alienor77310 for painting this incredible piece of art for the story! It's wonderful - the colors, the shading, the composition. She's titled it 'Don't Move,' and it's just lovely. Thank you so much, alienor 77310!
2: Rung One – Him
June 30th, 3:05 pm
Being in a relationship – even one merely existing at the level of ‘fuck buddies,’ as Tonks so delightfully puts it – takes more work and consideration than I am accustomed to.
I, therefore, attempt to aid her in throwing the Order’s 2nd Annual Victory Celebration. My arguments that she allow Molly to once again throw the celebration at the Burrow have fallen on deaf ears. Fleur’s pregnancy and George’s wedding appear to be time consuming affairs. Similarly, my idea that if she is going to take responsibility for said monstrosity, she should consider Grimmauld Place as the venue was ignored. The pain of losing Potter makes his rather gloomy house an even more inappropriate location for the event even if the Order continues to use it as headquarters.
Since my brain seems to be unappreciated, I choose to don the role of supportive paramour for the evening and aid her preparations in a physical manner. Apparating to her flat, I decide I will surprise her – she has repeatedly said she wants me to be more playful, and it is our so-called ‘anniversary.’
I find her trying to enter her attic; although, if it is anything like her cupboards, it is a hopeless endeavor.
Tonks wears the red dress she showed me last week – one of five she was considering for the event. A pity – I was, of course, partial to the green.
Nonetheless, I can see up this one as well as the other and quickly recognize the potential of the ladder. I slide a hand up her left calf. She jumps a little and tenses to move.
“No, no – stay there,” I say quietly. “I have thought of you all day, and this position offers a delightful amount of access.”
As my hand drifts further up her leg, I begin to kiss my way to her core – hot, open-mouthed kisses that allow my tongue to swirl. Her skin is soft underneath my flesh, and she smells somehow different, as if she has used a new scent of shower gel; it is light and clean and strangely arousing. The ladder creaks with each step I take and almost drowns out the sound of her soft gasps.
Interesting – usually she is more vocal, almost annoyingly so.
My cock stirs to awareness.
As I duck my head under her dress, I smirk at the rather demure underwear she sports this evening. My typically g-string clad darling models hipster shorts of soft, red silk that cup her bottom enticingly. I am almost sad to make them disappear, but I will buy her more. Envisioning exactly what I want whisked away, I murmur, “Evanesco”– a personal variation of wandless magic I perfected years ago.
And to what benefit! Her center is spread bare before me, and I cannot resist kissing her clitoris repeatedly and ever so lightly. As her legs spread, I begin to lick instead while burying my nose in her entrance. Pausing momentarily to breathe in her scent, I revel in her reaction.
Never has she been so wet or smelled so divine.
She has also rather demurely crafted hair of a normal brown – a first, and hopefully done to please me, as I once mentioned my preference for a more natural look than chartreuse.
A small laugh of delight escapes me, and I reward her by inserting my middle finger into her and angling it until I can feel the nubbily textured area of her G-spot. I stroke in and out of her repeatedly, always catching this bundle of nerves, and my tongue lashes more firmly at her clitoris in exact time with my finger. Her gasps and pants are wonderful to hear, and my erection pulses in time with her exhalations, rubbing against the fabric of my boxers.
As she nears her crescendo, I reduce my attentions to her complaint – she is always a bit impatient. Holding my finger still on her G-spot and only licking her clitoris lightly, I take a few minutes to stroke myself through my clothing with my other hand. The mewl she gives when I will not allow her to force herself down onto my face is exquisite.
Merlin, I am harder than ever. Perhaps there is something to this spontaneity thing after all.
I begin to lick and stroke her strongly again and am rewarded by feeling her muscles clench my finger as she begins to move above me.
Damn, since when is she this tight? Perhaps it is a special indulgence she has created with this body.
It is not long before she once again reaches her edge, and I choose to hold her from completion one further time. Her groaned complaint causes me to laugh – as if she has not learned by now that such patience will be amply rewarded. Besides, this gives me the opportunity to lick her repeatedly from front to back, lapping at her nectar greedily as I pass its fount.
Even her taste differs in this form – somehow sweeter, more intoxicating.
I catch myself unconsciously grinding against a rung of the ladder and desist before I finish in my pants like an uncontrolled teenager.
Having held her at this plateau long enough that her next climb will be to a higher peak, I begin to move my finger and tongue more intensely again – over and over stroking her clitoris and G-spot with a relentless rhythm. Her wetness grows impossibly greater, her breath comes fast and shallow, and her legs begin to shake, followed by the walls of her vagina. Her body freezes at the pinnacle of a long spasm that leaves her arched, not even breathing. I ride it out with her, never decreasing the pressure on either nerve bundle until she sags above me.
Quickly, I climb the ladder until my body supports hers. As I nuzzle her neck and hold her close, I am reminded of my erection. Her weak-kneed movement against me is enough to consider moving this to the bed after all – party be damned.
“There now,” I soothe against her ear, “you should feel a bit more relaxed about throwing your first party after that.”
She tenses. Reminding her of the party may have been a poor decision on my part. She remains quiet. I wish the attic were not so dark so that I could see her facial expression.
I am just about to speak again, to reassure her of my aid, when the front door closes loudly.
“I’m back,” Tonks calls, her salutation echoed by the little plunks packages make impacting the front hall’s wood floor.
My muscles go rigid.
If that is Tonks, then …?
“I forgot to mention, Mione,” she continues, “Severus might drop in early to help, though he’ll complain about it if he does.”
Granger.
Although exclusivity plays no part in my relationship with Tonks, even I have to admit the gaucheness of performing cunnilingus on another woman in her flat. Cunnilingus on Granger.
And she loved it and I loved it.
I move down the ladder as quickly as I can and Disapparate.
My stumble upon appearing in the Leaky Cauldron causes Tom to look at me quizzically. “Moving from a spot of danger, were you?”
“Something like that,” I say.
Danger indeed.
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912 Reviews | 7.45/10 Average
I love FireFly!!! and this story
I really liked this story. I usually don't like having to read multiple perspectives of the same event, but I really liked it in this story and there wasn't a lot of repetitive dialogue to shift through.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the fic, even with it's repeating perspectives!
You are a very well-read author.I think endeavoring outside of fan-fiction would be greatly beneficial for you. As far as most readers only wanting one person's POV, I think the chapter's (In between rungs # and #) were the most interesting, as it culminated with a sense of togetherness. It was a little off-putting at times to re-live the same scene twice when it could have been accomplished by putting both characters perspectives in the same scene, but you're the author- and a good one at that. I am glad this story ranks in the tens, it deserves it and otherwise I may not have found it. Might I suggest an addendum or epilogue?/ While the low-level angst was not of the adolscent variety it would be wonderful to have just a little more completion with their relationship and finding the eventual outcome of the Wolfsbane project. I also appreciated Severus not being labeled a 'disgusting pariah-git' that no one would respect or want. I think it was wonderful that people for the most part accepted him and that he had an intimate physical relationship with Tonks- showing he was not at all repulsive. I enjoyed the Relaxed Severus. :-D You may have him back now, I've showered him and wiped him clean. *smirks* Kudos on an excellent story.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's wonderful to hear you enjoyed the story! Since the form was experimental, I don't plan on writing another story like this with repeating scenes. I'm sorry to say that I don't beleive in epilogues or having things tied up too neatly. This way, readers get to do some of the work, imagining what they think follows from here. I'm so glad you liked this SS noetheless!
Good. He's good and he knows it, BUT he's not taking everything for granted.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's wonderful to hear you're enjoying the story and the way SS is pulling out his Slytherin cunning!
Oh I do like Snape's new wicked, wicked ways. Such a man one can certainly learn to love. Delicious! ^_^Weasley who?
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it the chapter and SS's wicked ways!
I found this story a couple days ago on OWL.tauri. Supposedly complete, but really only a few chapters. I'm so glad I tried googling it, and so found its complete version. Excellent. I hope you're still reading reviews. I see you wrote this over a year ago. I'll be sure to read your other creations. Thankyou.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I just saw your review there, so I'm glad you're no longer frustrated with not finding the end of it. I'm very glad you enjoyed!
I loved your story....so very hot, passionate and tender at the same time!You are a gifted writer!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's been so wonderful to read your reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and found it hot, passionate and tender!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's been so wonderful to read your reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and found it hot, passionate and tender!
So very poignant!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's lovely to hear that you found this chapter moving!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's lovely to hear that you found this chapter moving!
I like the characterization of Snape very much! Well done!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so happy that you like this characterization of him!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so happy that you like this characterization of him!
This chapter was so touching. You are a very good writer and I'm glad I found this story well after it was finished because I really don't think I'd be able to wait for chapter updates!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you said that, because I did write it with about 2 chapters coming out a week, so I don't know what it's like to read it all at once!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you said that, because I did write it with about 2 chapters coming out a week, so I don't know what it's like to read it all at once!
So well written and so witty!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's great to hear that you like the writing and the humor!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's great to hear that you like the writing and the humor!
Just stumbled upon this juicy story this afternoon! I laughed so hard...Can't write much more as Chapter 2 is calling me!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!
A very hot and delicious story. I enjoyed it immensely. :)
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's wonderful to hear that you liked the story and found it hot!
I want more science !!! But otherwise great...
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you liked the chapter! (And you're the only person who's said that about the science - thanks!)
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... Now THAT was worth waiting all those rungs for!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and found it worth the wait!
Oh my! I really want to be her. Lucky girl. Lovely story well done. Hugs
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter!
I gave your story a five, I loved the way you gave her point of view and his from the same scene. This was a really hot story from the first moment on the ladder to when they finally consumated their burgeoning relationship. Can't wait to see how this progresses and hope to read your next chapter soon.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you''re enjoying the story and the use of the alternating POVs! The next chapter soon!
AHHH. Ahem.
That was amazing. Well worth the wait :)
I love this line: He smirks. “And priced accordingly. You were so convinced of this evening’s outcome?” That hopeful.
Mmm, I must admit, the smut is not at all disappointing. In fact, the very opposite :) Very sensual and well written.
So, well done! I await the next chapter! :) Severus' POV, hmm.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so very glad you liked the chapter and that line! It's also good to hear that you found it worth the wait and well written!
Wow, just wow...
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
I loved it!! That was the perfect scene after all the build-up. I can't wait for Severus' view.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you lliked the it! SS up next!
So good!!!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so very glad you lliked the it!
Well, if that wasn't the perfect climax of the story. Beautifully done. It's so much more satisfying (bad word choice, I know) when the tension slowly rises and finally explodes.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! And you're right - the story does follow the pattern of foreplay followed by orgasm-inducing sex hopefully!
Well worth the 25 chapters of foreplay. I don't even smoke, but I need a cigarette. That was intense, passionate, and extremely intimate.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the chapter and though it ample pay off for all the foreplay!
Gods, is it hot in here or what *fans self*....(I've got to stop reading this stuff at work)! Excellent, excellent, excellent!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and found it hot! (yeah - smut at work induces squirming)
Love it! Love it! Love it!!!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!