13: Rung Six - Him
Chapter 13 of 27
ubiquirkVictory did not make life perfect, and two years on, the shock of surviving the war is finally starting to wear off. Waking to everyday realities, Hermione and Severus discover the delights and pains of living - all prompted by a ladder. HG/SS eventually, but HG/RW and SS/NT for the first bit.
ReviewedDisclaimer: Not mine. No money. Special thanks go to JKR for sanctioning HP fanfic.
Gobs of thanks go to my beta Southern Witch 69 and to my Brit-picker the amazing Saracen77.
13: Rung Six – Him
August 31st, 8:35 pm
I am not quite certain as to what business I have in this particular corridor at this time of day. Its location is nowhere in the vicinity of my rooms or the potions stores I should be cataloging and organizing.
Please, I should at least do myself the courtesy of truthfulness.
I have been walking for hours, attempting to defuse an excess of rage-fueled energy.
I am no calmer than before.
Casting hexes as I go, I have succeeded in clearing the hallways of pesky ghosts and the portraits of annoying spectators.
Then, Nearly Headless Nick appears before me.
Gryffindor.
I prepare an especially nasty hex, which should raise the equivalent of phantasmal boils of a painful sort, but he darts around a corner.
My steps hasten, but I am halted in my endeavor by a collision with a smaller body. A subtle scent wafts over me that my mind can finally place – petitgrain. It is a scent I also recognize on some primal level.
Granger.
I pocket my wand hastily, suddenly anxious to have my hands unencumbered. As she stumbles slightly from the impact, my initial instinct is to steady her, and I grip her biceps. Within the matter of a second, the anger I have wrestled with for most of the day overwhelms me, and my fingers tighten in reflex.
I want to shake her until she leaves that twit, Weasley.
I want to fuck her until I am the only thing she sees, feels, knows.
A wince of pain crosses her features, and I thrust her away in disgust. But it is a disgust directed towards myself, and I turn away from her in an attempt to regain composure.
How charming. Hurt her as if she were some Death Eater groupie in love with pain and humiliation. She will be sure to fly from Weasley’s arms to mine.
Idiot.
Her voice infringes upon my dark reverie. “How dare you physically assault me?”
My response is both automatic and automatically sarcastic. “If I remember correctly, the last time I was physical with you was hardly an interlude that could be referred to as assault.”
“I didn’t mean the se…. I didn’t mean the ladder incident, you git. I meant just now!”
“I apologize, Professor Granger. I had no idea that a mere five seconds of my hands on a fully-clothed, nonsexual area of your person qualified as assault.”
“It bloody well hurt, you bastard!”
My defensive sarcasm abandons me at her confirmation of my concerns. “Then I truly do apologize, Professor Granger.”
“Look at me. Say it while looking at me.”
I struggle for the control I will need to evince and turn with the appearance of unhurriedness, securing extra moments of such preparation.
As always during our recent encounters, her face is flushed, her breathing quick. My erection stirs.
Damn, I want this woman.
While my face manifests composure, my desire nonetheless finds a way to escape through speech. “You want me to speak to you, you want me to look at you, but you will not have me touch you. I find you painfully hypocritical, Professor Granger.”
“Hypocritical? How dare you say that asking to converse in a civilized fashion without being mauled is hypocritical? It’s nothing more than the respectful behavior due a colleague.”
“And is that all we are, Professor Granger, colleagues?” I begin my advance upon her.
“Of course that’s all we are. You’re with Tonks; I’m with Ron. What more could there be between us?”
What, indeed?
“Ms. Tonks and I are no longer a matter of concern.” I pause – the most interesting expression just crossed her face, but I find it too transitory to analyze. “As for you and Weasley, that remains to be seen. One could have doubts, as it were, as to the amount of satisfaction you derive from your relationship with him.”
“Will you stop bringing up the sodding ladder! It was an accident, a … a mistake.”
“A mistake?” Another step forwards.
“Yes, a mistake. And one I don’t plan on ever making again.”
I drop my voice in reply. “Really?”
She trembles slightly and answers quietly, all earlier anger missing from her voice. “Yes, really.”
Bending towards her, I pause a few moments to partake of her scent before breathing across her ear, “I do not believe you.”
The shiver of her body tells me everything I need to know of her desire, and I press forwards into her.
Slowly. Remember how wet she became from going slowly.
I allow only the slightest of contacts for my initial assault. Skimming my lips from her ear to her mouth, I taste her briefly thrice. My cock throbs against the confinement of my trousers.
As I pull away, I notice her eyes have closed, and a perverse part of me wants them open. I want there to be no doubt that it is I who kisses her. Once her eyes flutter open, pupils dilated, I arch forward, holding her gaze with mine. As our lips join again, I rein in my rampant desire in order to continue kissing her lightly – a play of friction on blood-rich skin.
Her slight exaltation as I slide my tongue over her causes me to laugh quietly. As before, her responsiveness is delightful. Another swipe, and her mouth opens for me as her tongue begins to dance with mine.
I am careful to keep the pressure teasingly light, and my control lasts up until the point when she fists my robes and hauls me tightly against her body. Her leg rises, and I place my hand under it to wrap it more firmly around me.
Merlin, how I want her wrapped around me.
The little whimpering noises that escape her urge me to greater activity, and I find myself moaning and thrusting into her – my thigh at her crux, my erection straining against her stomach.
The pressure and friction against my cock cause me to throw all caution to the wind. I attack her mouth, biting her lower lip and sucking away the sting. She joins the assault and thrusts her tongue firmly across mine. We rock together in a building rhythm that has me close to orgasming as my senses are overwhelmed.
The smell of her, the sound of her, the feel of her, the taste of her …
My climbing spiral is brought crashing to an abrupt halt when she tears her lips from mine, and the hands that had just held me close force me away instead. I quirk an eyebrow, but she says nothing – she simply stands there, panting through kiss-reddened lips with wide eyes locked on mine.
I suppose I am not the only one who is overwhelmed.
My lips twitch in a grin, and I move to press them to her once more.
Another shove and she flees down the corridor.
Fucking hell! What is the cause of such a reaction?
I stare at the point where she disappeared for untold moments, fists clenched in anger.
Slowly bringing my breathing under control, I attempt to approach the problem rationally. It appears that a change of tactics is in order. I will have to observe her to determine precisely what my new course will be.
Because one thing is certain – I will have her, mistake or no.
AN: While there are wonderful, hot BDSM stories out there, it doesn’t work with the psyches of this Severus and Hermione. It doesn’t mean that I, the author, dislike that genre.
Petitgrain is made from the leaves of the bitter orange tree, which also gives us neroli (flowers) and bergamot (fruit peel). It’s less floral than neroli, less citrusy than bergamot, and greener smelling than either. Like vetiver, it’s unfortunately hard to find.
Thus ends the second act – next, an interlude chapter.
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912 Reviews | 7.45/10 Average
I love FireFly!!! and this story
I really liked this story. I usually don't like having to read multiple perspectives of the same event, but I really liked it in this story and there wasn't a lot of repetitive dialogue to shift through.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the fic, even with it's repeating perspectives!
You are a very well-read author.I think endeavoring outside of fan-fiction would be greatly beneficial for you. As far as most readers only wanting one person's POV, I think the chapter's (In between rungs # and #) were the most interesting, as it culminated with a sense of togetherness. It was a little off-putting at times to re-live the same scene twice when it could have been accomplished by putting both characters perspectives in the same scene, but you're the author- and a good one at that. I am glad this story ranks in the tens, it deserves it and otherwise I may not have found it. Might I suggest an addendum or epilogue?/ While the low-level angst was not of the adolscent variety it would be wonderful to have just a little more completion with their relationship and finding the eventual outcome of the Wolfsbane project. I also appreciated Severus not being labeled a 'disgusting pariah-git' that no one would respect or want. I think it was wonderful that people for the most part accepted him and that he had an intimate physical relationship with Tonks- showing he was not at all repulsive. I enjoyed the Relaxed Severus. :-D You may have him back now, I've showered him and wiped him clean. *smirks* Kudos on an excellent story.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's wonderful to hear you enjoyed the story! Since the form was experimental, I don't plan on writing another story like this with repeating scenes. I'm sorry to say that I don't beleive in epilogues or having things tied up too neatly. This way, readers get to do some of the work, imagining what they think follows from here. I'm so glad you liked this SS noetheless!
Good. He's good and he knows it, BUT he's not taking everything for granted.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's wonderful to hear you're enjoying the story and the way SS is pulling out his Slytherin cunning!
Oh I do like Snape's new wicked, wicked ways. Such a man one can certainly learn to love. Delicious! ^_^Weasley who?
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it the chapter and SS's wicked ways!
I found this story a couple days ago on OWL.tauri. Supposedly complete, but really only a few chapters. I'm so glad I tried googling it, and so found its complete version. Excellent. I hope you're still reading reviews. I see you wrote this over a year ago. I'll be sure to read your other creations. Thankyou.
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Thanks! I just saw your review there, so I'm glad you're no longer frustrated with not finding the end of it. I'm very glad you enjoyed!
I loved your story....so very hot, passionate and tender at the same time!You are a gifted writer!
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Thanks! It's been so wonderful to read your reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and found it hot, passionate and tender!
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Thanks! It's been so wonderful to read your reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and found it hot, passionate and tender!
So very poignant!
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Thanks! It's lovely to hear that you found this chapter moving!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's lovely to hear that you found this chapter moving!
I like the characterization of Snape very much! Well done!
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Thanks! I'm so happy that you like this characterization of him!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so happy that you like this characterization of him!
This chapter was so touching. You are a very good writer and I'm glad I found this story well after it was finished because I really don't think I'd be able to wait for chapter updates!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you said that, because I did write it with about 2 chapters coming out a week, so I don't know what it's like to read it all at once!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you said that, because I did write it with about 2 chapters coming out a week, so I don't know what it's like to read it all at once!
So well written and so witty!
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Thanks! It's great to hear that you like the writing and the humor!
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Thanks! It's great to hear that you like the writing and the humor!
Just stumbled upon this juicy story this afternoon! I laughed so hard...Can't write much more as Chapter 2 is calling me!
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Thanks! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!
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Thanks! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!
A very hot and delicious story. I enjoyed it immensely. :)
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Thanks! It's wonderful to hear that you liked the story and found it hot!
I want more science !!! But otherwise great...
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Thanks! I'm really glad you liked the chapter! (And you're the only person who's said that about the science - thanks!)
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... Now THAT was worth waiting all those rungs for!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and found it worth the wait!
Oh my! I really want to be her. Lucky girl. Lovely story well done. Hugs
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Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter!
I gave your story a five, I loved the way you gave her point of view and his from the same scene. This was a really hot story from the first moment on the ladder to when they finally consumated their burgeoning relationship. Can't wait to see how this progresses and hope to read your next chapter soon.
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Thanks! I'm really glad you''re enjoying the story and the use of the alternating POVs! The next chapter soon!
AHHH. Ahem.
That was amazing. Well worth the wait :)
I love this line: He smirks. “And priced accordingly. You were so convinced of this evening’s outcome?” That hopeful.
Mmm, I must admit, the smut is not at all disappointing. In fact, the very opposite :) Very sensual and well written.
So, well done! I await the next chapter! :) Severus' POV, hmm.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so very glad you liked the chapter and that line! It's also good to hear that you found it worth the wait and well written!
Wow, just wow...
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Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
I loved it!! That was the perfect scene after all the build-up. I can't wait for Severus' view.
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Thanks! I'm glad you lliked the it! SS up next!
So good!!!
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Thanks! I'm so very glad you lliked the it!
Well, if that wasn't the perfect climax of the story. Beautifully done. It's so much more satisfying (bad word choice, I know) when the tension slowly rises and finally explodes.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! And you're right - the story does follow the pattern of foreplay followed by orgasm-inducing sex hopefully!
Well worth the 25 chapters of foreplay. I don't even smoke, but I need a cigarette. That was intense, passionate, and extremely intimate.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the chapter and though it ample pay off for all the foreplay!
Gods, is it hot in here or what *fans self*....(I've got to stop reading this stuff at work)! Excellent, excellent, excellent!
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Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and found it hot! (yeah - smut at work induces squirming)
Love it! Love it! Love it!!!
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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!