10: Rung Five - Her
Chapter 10 of 27
ubiquirkVictory did not make life perfect, and two years on, the shock of surviving the war is finally starting to wear off. Waking to everyday realities, Hermione and Severus discover the delights and pains of living - all prompted by a ladder. HG/SS eventually, but HG/RW and SS/NT for the first bit.
ReviewedDisclaimer: Not mine. No money. Special thanks go to JKR for sanctioning HP fanfic.
Gobs of thanks go to my beta Southern Witch 69 and to my Brit-picker the amazing Saracen77.
10: Rung Five – Her
August 31st, 7:55 am
“Accio briefcase!” I put as much power behind the spell as I can but don’t stop moving.
I’m late, I’m late. It’s the first day, and I’m bloody well late!
I’m running through the halls, hopping as I go because one of my shoes wants to come off, and I don’t want to stop to fix it. The stodgier portraits tut-tut and shake disapproving heads as I pass.
Sleeping at Ron’s after the engagement party was a bad decision – I should have known. Well, all right, I did know. I just chose not to act on it. I mean, how would it sound for me to say: “Yes, I’ll marry you. Got to run!”
I slide to a halt a couple of meters outside of the staff room door and attempt to compose myself. A quick Scourgify and the sheen of perspiration disappears; a swipe of hand over hair – well, there’s only so much I can do with no time.
Fluttering sounds to my left, and I turn in time to catch the briefcase with my torso, but it nonetheless knocks me back half a step, and my loose shoe causes me to stumble slightly.
Taking another swipe at my hair, I square my shoulders and enter the room. Minerva continues to speak but gives me an indulgent nod. I exhale in relief.
It seems every chair is taken by witches and wizards, who are all watching me.
Impressive first impression, Granger.
My momentum carries me forward, and it takes a few seconds for me to notice that there is one seat available at the end of the table.
A seat beside Snape.
I sit and ignore him while rummaging in my briefcase for a piece of parchment and a quill.
“And we are most excited to be welcoming so many new faces to the teaching staff this year. Next, I would like to introduce Resaldo Giomanti.” Minerva seems to still be in the opening part of her speech, and perhaps because I read the full dossier on each staff member a week ago, my attention wanders.
Trying to sit beside him calmly, professionally, I notice his scent for the first time. No, that’s not true. I detected it two months ago in Tonks’s foyer but was too angry at the time to process the input. Now I have the enforced leisure of an entire staff meeting to do so.
Smoky. Less offensive than patchouli and darker than sandalwood. There aren’t many base-note essential oils left.
Hmm. What could it be?
Then, it comes to me. Vetiver – he smells of a complex combination of vetiver and his skin.
It’s perfect.
Reining in my thoughts, I find my eyes watching his hands as he prepares his tea. I don’t realize how intently I’ve been staring until he wraps his fingers around the cup to raise it to his mouth; following his motion, my gaze meets his. Jerking my eyes back to the parchment in front of me, I squirm slightly, trying to relieve the faint tingling of my center.
I look over at him and find him still watching me intently.
Circe, it’s as if he knows what I’m thinking. There goes the eyebrow.
Flushing, I squirm again, and this time our knees brush – I’m rewarded with the mild discomfort of tickling wetness seeping across my labia.
He positively smirks.
Smug bastard.
Those long fingers reach for an éclair from the platter at our end of the table and raise it to his mouth. His bite is almost dainty it’s so precise. He takes a sip of tea.
I relax. He’s just eating – why would he do anything else?
The second bite isn’t so neat – he twists the pastry while moving it away so that a smear of chocolate covers his bottom lip, and I watch transfixed as he slowly swipes his tongue across it. My clit pulses.
Ah, bastard, bastard, bastard! Smug bastard with those fingers and that … that tongue.
If a rather observant, blond woman weren’t sitting directly on my left, I’d be tempted to surreptitiously adjust my knickers, which are now thoroughly soaked and clinging to my folds.
Instead, I raise my right hand to my cheek and feel its warmth – I’m flushed. Looking over, I see Snape smirking widely – it would be a smile if it weren’t so predatory. And I swear the man could write an entire eyebrow-code dictionary – he’s certainly mastered the vocabulary.
Suddenly, hearing my name captures my attention. “… Granger, who will be our new Arithmancy Master. She is a Hogwarts alumnus and a distinguished war hero.” Minerva pauses to positively beam at me. “But on an even happier note, allow me to lead us all in congratulating Professor Granger on her engagement to another of our young war heroes, Ronald Weasley.”
That explains why she accepted my tardiness, but how did she know? Of course – Molly must have Flooed her.
I smile and thank my well wishers, going clockwise around the table so that the last person I look at is Snape. His eyebrows say nothing; in fact, his entire face resembles an inflexible mask. Then, a muscle jumps in his clenched jaw, and he grits out, “Congratulations, Professor Granger. Although it is a pity that after having endeavored for so long to obtain this specific appellation that you would relinquish it so quickly.”
“Why, Severus,” Minerva cuts in, “whoever said she was going to change her last name?”
AN: It may be evil, but I love Minerva as a hard-core feminist – she never does things by halves!
Vetiver is as Hermione describes it – smoky, rich, and deep – but it’s difficult to find, as it’s not as popular as sandalwood or patchouli.
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I love FireFly!!! and this story
I really liked this story. I usually don't like having to read multiple perspectives of the same event, but I really liked it in this story and there wasn't a lot of repetitive dialogue to shift through.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the fic, even with it's repeating perspectives!
You are a very well-read author.I think endeavoring outside of fan-fiction would be greatly beneficial for you. As far as most readers only wanting one person's POV, I think the chapter's (In between rungs # and #) were the most interesting, as it culminated with a sense of togetherness. It was a little off-putting at times to re-live the same scene twice when it could have been accomplished by putting both characters perspectives in the same scene, but you're the author- and a good one at that. I am glad this story ranks in the tens, it deserves it and otherwise I may not have found it. Might I suggest an addendum or epilogue?/ While the low-level angst was not of the adolscent variety it would be wonderful to have just a little more completion with their relationship and finding the eventual outcome of the Wolfsbane project. I also appreciated Severus not being labeled a 'disgusting pariah-git' that no one would respect or want. I think it was wonderful that people for the most part accepted him and that he had an intimate physical relationship with Tonks- showing he was not at all repulsive. I enjoyed the Relaxed Severus. :-D You may have him back now, I've showered him and wiped him clean. *smirks* Kudos on an excellent story.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's wonderful to hear you enjoyed the story! Since the form was experimental, I don't plan on writing another story like this with repeating scenes. I'm sorry to say that I don't beleive in epilogues or having things tied up too neatly. This way, readers get to do some of the work, imagining what they think follows from here. I'm so glad you liked this SS noetheless!
Good. He's good and he knows it, BUT he's not taking everything for granted.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's wonderful to hear you're enjoying the story and the way SS is pulling out his Slytherin cunning!
Oh I do like Snape's new wicked, wicked ways. Such a man one can certainly learn to love. Delicious! ^_^Weasley who?
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Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it the chapter and SS's wicked ways!
I found this story a couple days ago on OWL.tauri. Supposedly complete, but really only a few chapters. I'm so glad I tried googling it, and so found its complete version. Excellent. I hope you're still reading reviews. I see you wrote this over a year ago. I'll be sure to read your other creations. Thankyou.
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Thanks! I just saw your review there, so I'm glad you're no longer frustrated with not finding the end of it. I'm very glad you enjoyed!
I loved your story....so very hot, passionate and tender at the same time!You are a gifted writer!
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Thanks! It's been so wonderful to read your reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and found it hot, passionate and tender!
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Thanks! It's been so wonderful to read your reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and found it hot, passionate and tender!
So very poignant!
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Thanks! It's lovely to hear that you found this chapter moving!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's lovely to hear that you found this chapter moving!
I like the characterization of Snape very much! Well done!
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Thanks! I'm so happy that you like this characterization of him!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so happy that you like this characterization of him!
This chapter was so touching. You are a very good writer and I'm glad I found this story well after it was finished because I really don't think I'd be able to wait for chapter updates!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you said that, because I did write it with about 2 chapters coming out a week, so I don't know what it's like to read it all at once!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you said that, because I did write it with about 2 chapters coming out a week, so I don't know what it's like to read it all at once!
So well written and so witty!
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Thanks! It's great to hear that you like the writing and the humor!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's great to hear that you like the writing and the humor!
Just stumbled upon this juicy story this afternoon! I laughed so hard...Can't write much more as Chapter 2 is calling me!
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Thanks! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!
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Thanks! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!
A very hot and delicious story. I enjoyed it immensely. :)
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Thanks! It's wonderful to hear that you liked the story and found it hot!
I want more science !!! But otherwise great...
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Thanks! I'm really glad you liked the chapter! (And you're the only person who's said that about the science - thanks!)
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... Now THAT was worth waiting all those rungs for!
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Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and found it worth the wait!
Oh my! I really want to be her. Lucky girl. Lovely story well done. Hugs
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Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter!
I gave your story a five, I loved the way you gave her point of view and his from the same scene. This was a really hot story from the first moment on the ladder to when they finally consumated their burgeoning relationship. Can't wait to see how this progresses and hope to read your next chapter soon.
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Thanks! I'm really glad you''re enjoying the story and the use of the alternating POVs! The next chapter soon!
AHHH. Ahem.
That was amazing. Well worth the wait :)
I love this line: He smirks. “And priced accordingly. You were so convinced of this evening’s outcome?” That hopeful.
Mmm, I must admit, the smut is not at all disappointing. In fact, the very opposite :) Very sensual and well written.
So, well done! I await the next chapter! :) Severus' POV, hmm.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so very glad you liked the chapter and that line! It's also good to hear that you found it worth the wait and well written!
Wow, just wow...
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Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
I loved it!! That was the perfect scene after all the build-up. I can't wait for Severus' view.
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Thanks! I'm glad you lliked the it! SS up next!
So good!!!
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Thanks! I'm so very glad you lliked the it!
Well, if that wasn't the perfect climax of the story. Beautifully done. It's so much more satisfying (bad word choice, I know) when the tension slowly rises and finally explodes.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! And you're right - the story does follow the pattern of foreplay followed by orgasm-inducing sex hopefully!
Well worth the 25 chapters of foreplay. I don't even smoke, but I need a cigarette. That was intense, passionate, and extremely intimate.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the chapter and though it ample pay off for all the foreplay!
Gods, is it hot in here or what *fans self*....(I've got to stop reading this stuff at work)! Excellent, excellent, excellent!
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Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and found it hot! (yeah - smut at work induces squirming)
Love it! Love it! Love it!!!
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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!