27: Rung Twelve – Him
Chapter 27 of 27
ubiquirkVictory did not make life perfect, and two years on, the shock of surviving the war is finally starting to wear off. Waking to everyday realities, Hermione and Severus discover the delights and pains of living - all prompted by a ladder. HG/SS eventually, but HG/RW and SS/NT for the first bit.
ReviewedDisclaimer: Not mine. No money. Special thanks go to JKR for sanctioning HP fanfic.
Gobs of thanks go to my beta Southern Witch 69 and to my Brit-picker the amazing Saracen77.
JoyCrux made me a last beautiful banner for the story! I love the way the ladder climbs into the sky! Thank you, JoyCrux!
27: Rung Twelve Him
September 30th, 7:35 pm
In order to spare the distraction of mundanities at a more crucial moment, I query, "Contraception?"
"I took a dose of Strigo Conceptus Potion an hour ago. It should be effective for an entire month."
"And priced accordingly. You were so convinced of this evening's outcome?" My smirk may be somewhat smug.
Perfect.
Her return smile seems more sardonic than usual. "Yes."
"Then I suppose we should endeavor to get your money's worth." My mouth meets hers.
The dance to the bedroom is a flurry of lips, tongues, and hands complete with a half-twirl that changes who leads whom midway, though my erection, dousing rod that it is, remains fully fixed in its focus upon her.
It is not until our momentum is halted by my impact with the bed that we break apart enough to begin the suddenly serious task of disrobing.
Yet her face forms a moue of frustration before her hands are able to venture any lower than the region of my neck.
Laughing, I relieve her of the tedious task of unbuttoning my frock coat a matter I have ample practice with and similarly dispense with opening the front of my shirt.
The time for dalliance ends.
Especially once her hands are upon my skin, her lips brushing over my chest. Such simple actions, yet already I find my pulse speeding, my breath quickening, my cock growing insistent.
Even more quickly than I divested myself, I remove her robes, slipping them from her form and following their path with my hands until I encounter her silk-clad buttocks, which I clasp almost involuntarily.
It is of little consequence who pulls whom in for this kiss. Its import comes from its fervency the sheer hunger of bathing in heat and wetness and striving effort. The warmth building in my erection begins to expand to encompass my bollocks, and my cock twitches as she gently bites my lower lip.
Steady, old man. Remember the reward of patience.
When she attempts to rid herself of her brassiere, I glide my hands up her back, slip the clasp, and continue forward. Soft so soft, her skin brushed silk beneath my fingertips, her breasts a pleasant weight in my hands, her nipples hardened to sensitivity as I squeeze.
Her tremor prefaces a quick movement to fully discard the garment before she moves into me to rub breasts across me, nipples tracing paths of fire.
Merlin, how exquisite.
A moan escapes me, and I pull her closer, ever closer, relishing the pressure against my cock, the intensified tingling sensation along its length.
She breaks the kiss to step back, but only with the best of intentions. Her fingers caress my straining erection as she slowly unbuttons my trousers, and even through the fabric of my pants, I feel the heat of her fingers. Each brush sends a rush of warmth sparking along my cock as I find my breathing somewhat labored.
It is almost as titillating to observe her hands doing so, and adrenaline incites a vibration that oscillates through the long muscles of my body.
Once the rather bulky woolen garment has been disposed of, she retreats a step farther.
In unspoken accord, we remove our own remaining undergarments, eyes fixed upon the other, staring as we both bend to stand upright again.
Finally free, my erection hangs with the familiar feeling of heaviness my body associates with incipient gratification.
Yet my physical pleasure fades for a moment always present, but no longer in my forethoughts for Hermione stands before me fully unclothed.
Her breasts are modestly sized yet pert, nipples erect; her hips flare nicely, framing a trimmed triangle I have not yet seen from this angle; her skin is pale yet flushed across cheeks and décolletage.
She is beautiful. Beautiful in her arousal. Beautiful in her response to me.
And let there be no doubt that I will have her respond.
Before I can set any such plans in motion, she steps close to slide one deliciously wet palm across the very tip of my cock.
Bloody hell!
My body bucks to her repeated touch as the bursts of energy flash from the head of my cock across bollocks and upwards along my spine, and I feel a responding tightening in my sac.
The intensity of my arousal barely lessens as she ceases touching me in order to rewet her palm with swipes from her tongue. My eyes track every motion of the wet, red appendage as it dances across her flesh as it could dance across mine. My cock leaps.
This will be over somewhat less than impressively if we continue on this exact course.
Halting her next reach for me, I croak out, "Hermione," before clearing my throat to begin again. "Hermione, I am afraid that I will not be able to withstand a great deal of preliminary stimulation this evening."
A flash of comprehension chases the confusion from her face, followed by a genuine smile instead of amusement or derision.
Thank Merlin.
Facing, reclined upon the bed, we meet in a flurry of tongues, lips, and hands. I cradle one breast, caressing the curve of it before fingers move to pinch and stroke the nipple. Her hand grasps my cock, sliding up and down its length, inciting another involuntary spasm of pleasure to run through my body. In order to reciprocate, I relocate my hand to her center, finding her wet and trembling. Her responsiveness ever delightful, she whimpers into our kiss as my fingers tease her clitoris, causing me to moan as well. It is as if we find ourselves caught in a delicious feedback loop of hands and genitalia, lips and sounds.
Yet I break the circuit to venture into new territory, licking my way from lips to breast with a swirl of tongue and a nip of teeth.
She still smells faintly of petitgrain, but it is overwhelmed by the scent of her skin, and I find I prefer this new ratio instead ever more Hermione.
As my tongue first courses across one tightened nipple, she emits a low-pitched sound of want and strains up from the bed, her back a bow. My fingers slide firmly over the slick nub of nerves I have been heretofore teasing, and she arches even higher.
Utterly delightful!
Just as I am about to chuckle in smugness, she clutches my erection in a firmer grip, causing me to hold my breath while the sensation of added pressure washes through me.
Deciding to increase her pleasure to bring it closer to the level I feel my own has obtained, I lave both of her breasts alternately while stroking across the wet flesh of labia, teasing her entrance. She shifts impatiently, attempting to make my finger penetrate, and I laugh lightly. "Not tonight, my dear. Tonight nothing shall be inside of you until my cock has had the privilege."
I am afraid I smirk somewhat as I observe her flush of arousal, her biting of lower lip, her hitched breathing.
Her hand continues to play over me, and my cock is finally moving past its initial extreme sensitivity and into the state where endurance becomes somewhat less of an issue.
As I return attention to her breasts, she says, "Severus."
Continuing my ministrations, I amplify a finger swirl so as to cause her to arch off of the bed again.
"Severus." Her voice sounds pleasantly strained and wanting, so I pause to offer her the chance to speak.
"Don't hold me to this in the future, but you're not the only one who doesn't need a lot of foreplay tonight." Her other hand shifts to cradle my bollocks, rolling them in the heat of her palm and fingers.
The sensation of added tingling combines with the warmth of her hand, and I groan as the feelings merge with those from my cock.
Bloody hell, I want her.
I lower my voice, smirking as I say, "I do hope this does not indicate that I will have to provide another eighteen months worth of such in order to be inside of you again."
"Circe, no!"
"Good."
For I want her for more than this once.
"Because I do not think myself capable of such forbearance a second time." Seriousness gravels my tone.
I retreat from her grasp to shift down the bed as she rearranges herself to rest in a supine position. Elevating her bottom upon a cushion so that I will be certain to stimulate her G-spot more fully, I come to kneel between her parted thighs, delighting in the display she makes: the glistening wetness, the dark pink of blood-swollen flesh. I breathe deeply to take in her scent a scent I have missed these long months, a scent never captured in the Pensieve.
Cock in hand, I run its tip along the crease of her, circling her clitoris before teasing her entrance. Simultaneously, I glory in the feel of her wetness and the warmth I can already feel radiating from her.
"Severus." Her fingers play across my nipples, streaks of sensation adding to that already emanating from the head of my erection.
And I can wait no longer, no matter the build of pleasure such patience brings.
Catching her eyes for I want there to be no doubt of who is with her I push forwards with my hips, head breaching her.
Damn, how exquisite!
I freeze, held by the searing heat of her around my tip contrasting with the relative coolness of the room air on the remainder of my cock.
The differentiation is glorious.
Then she clenches her muscles around me, and I am brought back to the immediacy of the act. Seeing the look of frustrated pleasure on her face, I lower myself to rest upon her, sucking on her tooth-tortured lip, reveling in the feel of her breasts against me, nipples hard and insistent.
My shallow advance forwards is purposefully leisurely, as is the withdrawal. Continuing this routine, I find the extreme tingling focuses entirely on the sensitive head of my cock.
Her legs enfold me, heels pressed into lower back, as her fingers dig into the flesh between my shoulder blades.
Bloody hell!
Feeling her with me, around me, accepting me is heady. Voice rough, I groan her name into her mouth. "Hermione."
I continue this torturous pace for long, timeless moments, pushing ever more deeply into her body with each thrust. Then her hips give a small jerk simultaneously with her cunny clenching tightly around me.
Ah, her G-spot.
Our lips part, allowing me to hear her mewls of pleasure as I continue to stroke across the sensitive flesh. Yet her needy sounds are only part of my reward the increased tightness of her the remainder: she pulses her muscles around me, easing as I move in, clasping as I draw out.
The slowed speed of this rhythm also serves to enhance my pleasure each withdrawal extremely intense, amplifying the drag of the ridge of my head, sending bolts of sensation shooting back to tighten my already tingling sac.
Burying my head in her hair, I breathe her in for a time before turning my attention to placing little kisses across the shell of her ear, the arch of her neck. She turns to me and we kiss, licking and nipping, building urgency.
Merlin, I need more!
I pull back from her enough that she unwraps from me, allowing me to kneel again. Watching the slide of my cock in and out of her cunny, I realize I will not be able to maintain this level of arousal for long. The tingling of my bollocks has expanded past my perineum the feeling of tightening pulling the skin around my anus, adding to the delightful sensations.
Drawing her right hand to my mouth, I suck in her three middle fingers, swirling tongue-drawn dampness across them until they positively drip. I lower her hand towards her center, whispering, "Touch yourself."
At that first swipe of finger across clitoris, she spasms around me, muscles working at my cock until the increase in pressure is almost too titillating.
I groan in tune with her throaty exhalation.
Slowly, old man, ever slowly.
Yet she does not unclench the tightness almost maddening no matter how many times I attempt to school myself to patience.
Hands at her knees, I spread her wide and back, opening her more fully, and she moans approval. The combined sight of her fingers working her nub and my cock sliding in and out of her, disappearing and reappearing in synch with the pressure and heat of her wrapping around me, shoots fire through up my spine.
I am unable to determine who pants more quickly or loudly at this juncture.
As I work myself ever more deeply into her, the pause between withdrawal and penetration becomes ever more exquisite. That small amount of time allows the air to slightly cool my cock so that pushing back in is the heady sensation of diving into heat.
Over and over again, I dive.
Until she shakes under me, legs trembling, cunny clenching in the flutter of orgasmic harbinger.
I look to her face again, capturing her eyes for the length of this slow slide. Finally, I am fully seated within her, my head tapping against a firmness.
Cervix.
Her muscles clasp me so firmly that I feel I can come from that pressure alone, pleasure shooting through my cock and bollocks to linger up my spine.
But she is not quite ready.
Gritting my teeth, I pull back only an inch I can bear no more before returning to the full heat of her. Her grip on my cock sparking energy across the head.
And again I withdraw a short distance before pressing forwards, into her, pressing with a force that I maintain as she crescendos, her cunny spasming rapidly around me, her body arching, voice high and drawn tight, her mouth open in a surprised O, her eyes on mine.
Hermione ...
Beautiful...
I can withhold my own orgasm no longer.
My sac tightens to the point that the pressure of it merges with that of her tightness surrounding my cock, the head adding the most intense tingling sensation. My hips snap forwards one, two, three more times, implanting myself as deeply as possible into her hot wetness. The charge stored in my spine uncoils to shoot energy from my bollocks through my cock in a seemingly timeless, ongoing flow. I groan involuntarily as the rush of sensation crests to leave my entire body tingling, toes and fingers curling, breath stopped, back and legs straining, heart pounding, vision blurring.
All as I strive to maintain eye contact with her.
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My entire body aches pleasantly from exertion, even my cock feeling slightly sore after the night's activities.
I remember waking periodically throughout the early morning unused to the presence of another in the same bed to find us sometimes pressed tightly together, sometimes sprawled further apart, yet always touching, even if only the contact of knee brushing knee, hand against torso.
We now lie with legs entangled, facing, yet upper bodies removed enough that I can observe her countenance in the faint light making its way around the edges of the curtains.
She is lovely, her swollen lips parted in relaxation, her eyelashes fluttering across the tops of her cheeks in dream, her hair a veritable lion's mane around her.
For once, even an internal sneer at the Gryffindor imagery fails me.
Beautiful. Beautiful and brilliant, and I ...
Stirring, she gives a faint moue of discomfort as a lock of hair falls across her face.
I reach out and brush it aside, the skin of her cheek soft beneath my fingertips.
Her smile upon waking to see me is glorious, and my heart trips its timing momentarily.
Thank Merlin, she has no regrets.
Reaching out to place a hand on my chest, she says a bright, "Good morning."
Lingering remnants of long-held tension uncoil, and I cover her hand with mine. "Yes. Yes, it is."
AN: A swot to the end, I did research to write this chapter! My thanks go to K, a truly delightful ex-lover who willingly answered my questions about what sex feels like for a man. I hope I did his impressions justice, even though I claim poetic license for the final result.
Thank you, everyone, for making this climb with me! I have truly appreciated all of the feedback and will continue to do so. Thanks as well for humoring my experimentation with POV and form.
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I love FireFly!!! and this story
I really liked this story. I usually don't like having to read multiple perspectives of the same event, but I really liked it in this story and there wasn't a lot of repetitive dialogue to shift through.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the fic, even with it's repeating perspectives!
You are a very well-read author.I think endeavoring outside of fan-fiction would be greatly beneficial for you. As far as most readers only wanting one person's POV, I think the chapter's (In between rungs # and #) were the most interesting, as it culminated with a sense of togetherness. It was a little off-putting at times to re-live the same scene twice when it could have been accomplished by putting both characters perspectives in the same scene, but you're the author- and a good one at that. I am glad this story ranks in the tens, it deserves it and otherwise I may not have found it. Might I suggest an addendum or epilogue?/ While the low-level angst was not of the adolscent variety it would be wonderful to have just a little more completion with their relationship and finding the eventual outcome of the Wolfsbane project. I also appreciated Severus not being labeled a 'disgusting pariah-git' that no one would respect or want. I think it was wonderful that people for the most part accepted him and that he had an intimate physical relationship with Tonks- showing he was not at all repulsive. I enjoyed the Relaxed Severus. :-D You may have him back now, I've showered him and wiped him clean. *smirks* Kudos on an excellent story.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's wonderful to hear you enjoyed the story! Since the form was experimental, I don't plan on writing another story like this with repeating scenes. I'm sorry to say that I don't beleive in epilogues or having things tied up too neatly. This way, readers get to do some of the work, imagining what they think follows from here. I'm so glad you liked this SS noetheless!
Good. He's good and he knows it, BUT he's not taking everything for granted.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's wonderful to hear you're enjoying the story and the way SS is pulling out his Slytherin cunning!
Oh I do like Snape's new wicked, wicked ways. Such a man one can certainly learn to love. Delicious! ^_^Weasley who?
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Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it the chapter and SS's wicked ways!
I found this story a couple days ago on OWL.tauri. Supposedly complete, but really only a few chapters. I'm so glad I tried googling it, and so found its complete version. Excellent. I hope you're still reading reviews. I see you wrote this over a year ago. I'll be sure to read your other creations. Thankyou.
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Thanks! I just saw your review there, so I'm glad you're no longer frustrated with not finding the end of it. I'm very glad you enjoyed!
I loved your story....so very hot, passionate and tender at the same time!You are a gifted writer!
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Thanks! It's been so wonderful to read your reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and found it hot, passionate and tender!
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Thanks! It's been so wonderful to read your reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and found it hot, passionate and tender!
So very poignant!
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Thanks! It's lovely to hear that you found this chapter moving!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's lovely to hear that you found this chapter moving!
I like the characterization of Snape very much! Well done!
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Thanks! I'm so happy that you like this characterization of him!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so happy that you like this characterization of him!
This chapter was so touching. You are a very good writer and I'm glad I found this story well after it was finished because I really don't think I'd be able to wait for chapter updates!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you said that, because I did write it with about 2 chapters coming out a week, so I don't know what it's like to read it all at once!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you said that, because I did write it with about 2 chapters coming out a week, so I don't know what it's like to read it all at once!
So well written and so witty!
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Thanks! It's great to hear that you like the writing and the humor!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's great to hear that you like the writing and the humor!
Just stumbled upon this juicy story this afternoon! I laughed so hard...Can't write much more as Chapter 2 is calling me!
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Thanks! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!
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Thanks! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!
A very hot and delicious story. I enjoyed it immensely. :)
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Thanks! It's wonderful to hear that you liked the story and found it hot!
I want more science !!! But otherwise great...
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Thanks! I'm really glad you liked the chapter! (And you're the only person who's said that about the science - thanks!)
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... Now THAT was worth waiting all those rungs for!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and found it worth the wait!
Oh my! I really want to be her. Lucky girl. Lovely story well done. Hugs
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter!
I gave your story a five, I loved the way you gave her point of view and his from the same scene. This was a really hot story from the first moment on the ladder to when they finally consumated their burgeoning relationship. Can't wait to see how this progresses and hope to read your next chapter soon.
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Thanks! I'm really glad you''re enjoying the story and the use of the alternating POVs! The next chapter soon!
AHHH. Ahem.
That was amazing. Well worth the wait :)
I love this line: He smirks. “And priced accordingly. You were so convinced of this evening’s outcome?” That hopeful.
Mmm, I must admit, the smut is not at all disappointing. In fact, the very opposite :) Very sensual and well written.
So, well done! I await the next chapter! :) Severus' POV, hmm.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so very glad you liked the chapter and that line! It's also good to hear that you found it worth the wait and well written!
Wow, just wow...
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Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
I loved it!! That was the perfect scene after all the build-up. I can't wait for Severus' view.
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Thanks! I'm glad you lliked the it! SS up next!
So good!!!
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Thanks! I'm so very glad you lliked the it!
Well, if that wasn't the perfect climax of the story. Beautifully done. It's so much more satisfying (bad word choice, I know) when the tension slowly rises and finally explodes.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! And you're right - the story does follow the pattern of foreplay followed by orgasm-inducing sex hopefully!
Well worth the 25 chapters of foreplay. I don't even smoke, but I need a cigarette. That was intense, passionate, and extremely intimate.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the chapter and though it ample pay off for all the foreplay!
Gods, is it hot in here or what *fans self*....(I've got to stop reading this stuff at work)! Excellent, excellent, excellent!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and found it hot! (yeah - smut at work induces squirming)
Love it! Love it! Love it!!!
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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!